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Naughtyrishabh

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# UPDATE 56

usne socha iss baar bhi wah pani ki shakti se bavandar ko vifal kar dega, lekin iss baar ramika ne bavandar me hawa ke sath vidhyut ki shakti se bijli bhi samil kar diya, jaise hi senpati ne pani ki shakti ka istemal kiya usko bahut jor ka jhatka laga or bilji uske upar geerne se wah jaal kar maar gaya.

Ab Aage.....................

Main jail ke paas gaya or jaise hi usko chhne wala tha, tabhi prashtuti ki aawaz aai.

Prashtuti:- Naahi sawami aap usse maat chhuna nahi to aapko jhatka lag sakta hai, aapka ye roop bhi isko nahi tod sakta, aapko ise todne ke liye apne talwar ka istemal karna hoga.

Jaise hi maine ye suna main apne asli roop me aa gaya or apne talwar ko yaad kiya wo mere hath me aa gai or maine uska ek tagda prahar uss jailkhane pat kiya, talwar ke chhote hi wo ret ke ghar ki tarah bikhar gaya, andar dekha to wahan rinoma the.

Jab maine jail toda tab lio or miru ramika ke sath wahi aa gaye, ramika apne pita ke liye ab bhi dukhi thi, kintu andar dekhte hi wah khush ho gai kyoki uske pita uske samne the.

Unko dekhte hi jaise hi ramika ne unki taraf apne kadam badhaye waise hi...... " hahahahhaha naa naa naa maharani ramika naa aisa sochna bhi maat anyatha tumhare pita abhi to jeevit hai lekin mrityu jyada door nahi unse, or iss baar koi maya yaa koi chhal nahi hoga.

Humne dekha to jokram unke pichhe se nikla or sath hi usne rinoma ki gardan par katarr rakhi thi.

Main:- tum aisa kuchh nahi karoge, ab tumhara khel khatam ho chuka hai, tumhare sare sainik gulam mare gaye hain, isliye apni haar man lo.

Jokram:- hahahahahaa haar maan lu, wo bhi tum jaise insaani kide se kadapi nahi, Khel khatam nahi abhi suru hua hai, isliye maharani ramika ko idhar bhejo or wo pushtak bhi mujhe abhi chahiye.

Ramika:- Mere pita ko chhod do main nahi janti kisi pushtak ke vishay me or naa hi koi pushtak hai mere paas.

Jokram Ohh to thik hai main tumhare pita ko maar deta hun.

Main:- Nahi unko tum kuchh nahi karna, main deta hun pushtak, wo pushtak mere paas hai.

Jokram:- Kya ? achha to lao wo pushtak hahhaha lao jaldi do.

Maine ankhe band kar ke kuchh mantra padha or wahan prakash fail gaya, itna ki kisi ko kuchh dikhna band ho gaya.

Iska fayda utha ramika jokram ki taraf chali gai, or apni jagah apni ek pratibimb ko chhod diya. dheere dheere prakash kaam hua to waha par ek pushtak hawa me thi.

Jokram:- hahhahah ab mujhe koi nahi rok sakta, lao lao wo pushtak do mujhe.

Maine apne hatho se ishara ki to pushtak usko taraf chali gai, jaise hi usne pushtak ko chhua wo gayab ho gai.

Jokram:- Dhokkha mere sang chhal kiya ab ye nahi bachega.

Ramika:- Naa aaj aisa nahi hoga dusht, aaj har uss chiz ka hisab dega jo bhi tune mujhse chhina hai.

jaise hi rinoma ko marne ke liye jokram ne hath uthaya, waise hi ramika ne uske hath bandh diye apni jadi tarango se, or humne rinoma ko khinch liya( aap log soch rahe honge rinoma bole nahi kuchh to aisa hai ki iss baaar unke muh band the)

Jokram:- tu mujhe kaid nahi kar sakti ramika ye tere bas ka nahi.

or jokram ne apni kali shaktiyon ka prayog kar chhut gaya, phir unse ramika ke upar kai prahar kiye jiska jawab ramika bhi apni shaktiyon se de rahi thi.

Hum rinoma ko le kar bahar aa gaye jail se, phir rinoma ka muh bhi khol diya.

Rinoma:- Chandra tum pahle ramika ko bachao wo uske kabu me nahi aayega, main janta hun wo meri beti ko maar dega.

Main:- Thik hai main jata hun aap in dono ke sath jao, lio inko leke bahar nikalo hum aate hain.

Main jab wapas gaya to wahan ramika ki halat kharab ho gai thi jokra uske upar havi tha, usko apni shaktiyon se bandh diya tha or apni talwar se uske upar prahar karne wala tha ki maine apne talwar se uske waar ko rok diya.

Main:- Ek nihathe par waar karte hue tumko lajja nahi aati, agar itne hi taqat ka ghamand hai to mujhse lado.

Jokram:- Haaaaaaaaaaa,,,,, Tu insaani kide main tujhe bahut badi galti ki tujhko kaamzor samajh kar lekin ab nahi, tera antim samay aa gaya hai, teri mrityu yaha or mere hatho se likhi hai.

Main:-(Maine usko pichhe dhakela) Kiski mrityu kiske hath likhi hai ye to prabhu ke alawa to koi nahi janta, lekin itna to mujhe yakeen hai ki meri mrityu prabhu ne tere hatho nahi likhi.

Jokram:-(Mere upar talwar se prahar karte) Uska jawab abhi mil jayeg, shaitan ki jai h.

Main:- Har har mahadev.

Hum lagatar ladte hue ek dusre par talwar se waar kar rahe the, tahkhane me ab sirf hamre talwaro ke takrane ki aawaze aa rahi thi, itne me ramika ne khud ko sambhal liya tha or wah apne ko chhuda li thi.

Jab jokram par main waar karta to usko kuchh bhi nahi hota ek bhi waar se koi bhi ghav nahi hota tha usko, aisa lag raha tha ki main sirf hawa me waar kar raha hun, or sath hi uske sath bhi kuchh kuchh aisa hi tha, jab wah mere upar waar karta to, mere sharir par ghav to hote the kintu kuchh hi der me bhar jate the.

jab usne dekhaki aise kaam nahi hoga tab usne apni maya or chhal karna prarambh kar diya, Mujhse yuddh karte karte hi wah gayab hone laga or agle hi pal dusri jagah pragat hota or mujh par samla kar deta.

mujhe ab bahut hi jyada gussa aane laga tha uski ye chhal se, or guuse me mera takshak wala roop bekabu hone lagta hai, maine gusse me apna roop badal liya or jokram ko pakad ke door fenk diya .

wooooohahahhaaaaaaaa wooooohahahhaaaaaaaa"

Usne mujhe aise dekh kar apna sharir bada kar liya or mujhe apne pairo se kuchane ki koshish karne laga, main bhi koun saa usse kam tha, usi tang ko pakad ke maine khich liya wo zameen pe geer gaya, maine uska par pakad ke ghuma ke door fenk diya wp diwaar ko tod kar dusri taraf geera.

wooooohaaaaaaaaa woooooohhaahhaaaaaaa"

Maine bhi daud lagaya or usko phir pakad liya lekin wp phir uth gaya or iss baar usne mujhe utha kar patak diya, main phir khada hua or iss baar maine patak mara, usne dekha ki mujhse paar nahi paa payega to usne phir apne asli roop me aa gayaor apne talwar se marne laga,

Meri dahad sun ke nagar ke sabhi log jutne lage the or ramika bhi hawa me khadi hamari fight dekh rahi thi, uske pita or lio or miru bhi aa gaye the wahi.

Jokraam ne phir se apne gulamo ka nirmaan kiya but iss baar pahle ke taraf nahi the ye ye ek kutte or bhediyo ki tarah the lekin bahut hi gande bhayanak, sab mere taraf kood pade, kisi ne mere hatho me apne dant gada diye kisi ne mere paro me.

Mujhe bahut dard ho raha tha meri sirf chikhne ki hi aawaze aa rahi thi, waha sara nagar zama tha, apne purane maharaj ko dekh or maharani ko dekh sab achambhit the ye sab ho kya raha hai.

Lio:- Maharaj mharani hame kuchh karna chahiye nahi to chandra bhai ko kuchh bhi ho sakta hai.

Maharaj:- hum kuchh nahi kar payege beta, uski taqat ke aage hum sab kuchh nahi hain.

Ramika:- magar pitaji chandra ko bachana to padega na, usne hamare liye apni jaan daav par laga di hai.

Jokram:- Hahahahahha bada masiha banne aaya tha, aaj tu yahi marega, or uske baad main in saabko khatam kar dunga hahahahahha, magar main teri jaan ab bhi baksh sakta hun agar tu mujhe wo pushtak de de.

Tabhi maine dahad mara or sabko ek jhatke ke sath door fenk diya baki jo mere hath lage sabko chir diya, woooohaaaahahahahaaaaaa"

Maine apni talwar ko yaad kiya or normal roop me aa gaya, apni talwar se un kutto ko katta main jokraam ki taraf badhne laga, ye dekh usne mere pe apni shakti ka prahar kiya.

Maine apni takwar se uski shakti ko rok diya, tabhi ramika waha aa gai or usne bhi jokram par shakti ka prahar kiya, lio ne bhi apni talwar se un kutto ko katne laga.

Maine dekha ki maharaj or miru bhi ab maidan me the, sabne un gulamo par hamla kar diya tha.

Jokram:- Haaaa amaharani tu ... ab tu nahi bachegi.

Ramika:- Aaj tera or tere paap ke samrajya ka ant hai dusht.

Jokram:- Koun mujhe maarega hahahahhahaha main ajay hun, mujhe koi chhu bhi nahi sakta hahahha.

Lio:- Main tujhe nahi chhodunga shaitan mere pita ke hatyare.

jaise hi liyo ne uske upar war kiya usko kuch hua hi nahi, ye dekh lio achambhit ho gaya.

Jokram:- tujh jaisa tuchh prani mujhe kya marega haaaaatttt

usne lio ko ek laat mari lio door geera, uski ek laat me halat kharab ho gai, ye dekh miru bhi uske taraf bhagi.

Miru:- Mere bhai ko mara main tujhe nahi chhodungi kameene aahaahhhhhh.

Bwchari miru jaise hi wo paas gai jokram ne ek hath mara usko wo bhi door jaa geeri, mujhe ye dekh kar bahut tez gussa aaya.

Prashtuti:- Swami yahi sahi waqt hai iss khel ko khatam karne ka aap usko aise nahi maar sakte. o maine aapko bataya tha, waise hi wah marega.

Main:- tumne thik kaha waisa hi karna hoga hame.

(Prashtuti ne mujhe dhayan awastha me bataya tha ki, jokram ko mara hai to pahle uski takwar uske hath se chudani hogi, phir uske sar ko uske dhad se alag karna hoga, tat pashchat uske hriday me apne talwar se war karna hoga)

Jokram:- Ab bolo ramika ab tumhara kya hoga hahahhaha.

Ramikane usko baato me lagaya hua tha tabhi maine apni talwar se uske hath par war kiya jisse uski talwar chhut gai, or maine samay nasht naa karte hue uski gardan dhad se alag kar di.

Maine jaise hi uska sar kata or ramika ki taraf dekha wo chakit thi ki ye maine kaise kiya, itna jaldi ki usko samajh nahi aaya, jab maine jokram ki taraf dekha to uska sar apne dhad ki taraf badh raha tha phir se judne ke liye.

Prashtuti:- Swami vilamb maat kijiye nahi to wah phir jud jayega, uska sar kat-te hi uska kawach nasht ho gaya hai, jaldi se uske hriday par war kijiye.

Itna sunte hi maine jaldi se uske hriday par apne talwar ka parahar kiya, or talwar ko uske seene me utar diya.

Jokram:- Naaahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii............

Aaj ke liye tna hi.

Thank you.
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamal ki ladai thi.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar
 
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