Horror Haunted ~~ " Game Of Rings " {Trilogy End}

[harshit1890]

This is the story i wish to finish, with so many things left to write when things ended in XP. Due to shortage of time i couldn't able to keep up with this one. But i would love to write and finish this one, though i don't have any backup of this one and i tried a lot but couldn't get so i decided to write again. The update will not be regular but i will try my best.

Ye kahani un viewers aur readers ke liye hai jinhone is part ki pehli 2 kahani padi hai.

Part 1 - Haunted (Tujhe Pyar karun to kaise ??) (PDF LINK - https://mega.nz/file/SxNR1SgS#rDb3cJET5V3XapK2VoGsZJ_nqOKc22BqG2yVcxEX3JY)
Part 2 - Haunted ~~ Dead Evil Returns (PDF LINK - https://mega.nz/file/K9UBhCYS#_lHNwaPCUcbgCk9RkcFH3ZvykGzv1HPk2x3CvjiKhVc)

This time this one for all the old friends which i met and they are doing well in their life. Cheers, enjoy the story everyone.

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[harshit1890]

Read both the updates ...finally kamal ki kahani ka end hua after 8 years
Detailed Rebu in process

Ok bhai
8 saal beet chuke hai time ka pata nahi chala

aise kaise goodbye... abhi Haweli ~~ " The Night Is Dark "
baki hai, baat baki hai
aise thode naa aapko jane denge hum..

Hanji madam vo hai dekhte hain kya hota hai uska

 

[Naina]

Akhir Kar woh dhinkachika bhoot ka astitva ka naash hua.... Usike ke sath woh kaufnaak khel ka bhi Khatma hua joh woh khel raha tha ya phir aage aur bhi isse zyada dardnaak aur khaufnaak hota shayad... Actually woh shreyas pe kabza karna chahta tha pure tarike se apne ghinoni khel ke tahat, samproon shakti hasil karne ki tahat kyunki woh usse juda hua tha... Shayad woh kamyaab bhi ho jata...... par ahankar aur overconfidence ke chalte woh ek baat bhul gaya ki woh likhi huyi baatein padh nahi sakta.... joh uske ant ka kaaran bana....
dairy se leke trilul tak yeh kahani ke akhiri panno mein turning points the.... aur yeh teeno waqt se jude huye the... aur inhi ki badoulat shreyas ush dhinkachika bhoot ka Khatma kar paya par samul astitva ko khatam karne ke liye khud ka balidaan de diya ......kyunki dhinkachika bhoot aur shreyas dono hi ek dushre se jude huye the .... apne pariwar aur apne pyar ko kabhi taklif na ho aage chalke khud kurbaan ho gaya .
ek dukh ek taklif hamesha dil mein rahegi ki writer ne aisa kyun kiya... Kya shreyas ka ant jaruri tha... writer sahab bolenge "haan"... par kyun... kahani ki akhir mein ek twist de ke shreyas ko bacha bhi sakte the jiske chalte aaj shreyas, anshika aur apni beti ke sath hota.... ( chaya banke nahin.. joh kahani ki ant apne dikha rahe hai)

kahani achhi thi.. dilchasp bhi. har ek shabd joh dil ko chu jaye.. aise mod aaye jab kabhi khushi mili, kabhi dard toh kabhi dil ki dhadkan bar jaye... ek aakarshan kahani mein joh ishe baar baar padhne ko dil kare aur sirf ishi kahani isse jude do kahaniyo ko bhi... sukh, dukh, dard, pyaar, pratigya, nafrat, jalan, badla aur sabse badi baat apne pyar ke liye kurbaan ho jana,,, yeh sari baatein nihit hai teeno kahaniyo mein .. par kahani ke antim kshanon mein woh bachha joh shreyas ko dekh paa raha tha usko clear kar dete toh achha hota....
So harshit1890 Brilliant story line with awesome writing skill

 

[Naina]

Ok bhai
8 saal beet chuke hai time ka pata nahi chala



Hanji madam vo hai dekhte hain kya hota hai uska

Intezaar

bichara shreyas
aaj khush toh bahot honge aap

 

[harshit1890]

Intezaar

bichara shreyas
aaj khush toh bahot honge aap

Apke us adbhut reply ka jawab mei thodi fursat mei dunga. Filal ye kehna chahunga khush to mei 4 sal pehle hi ho gaya tha kyun ki kahani ka ant to tabhi ban gaya tha bas likha kal hai Vaise bhi aisi halat mei vo survive nai kar sakta tha. Agar aap dhayan denge to pehle bhag mein harshit ne sonia se madad lekar khud ki kurbani di thi aur ab jab kahani ke akhri bhag ke ant ko pdenge to guruji ne ek bahut jaruri line kahi thi, ki shreyas ko us shaitan ko apne andar lena hi padega jaruri hai, jiske piche ka matlab hi khud ka balidan dena tha.

I don't think ki shreyas zinda reh kar kahani ko justify kar sakta tha

 

[Naina]

Apke us adbhut reply ka jawab mei thodi fursat mei dunga. Filal ye kehna chahunga khush to mei 4 sal pehle hi ho gaya tha kyun ki kahani ka ant to tabhi ban gaya tha bas likha kal hai Vaise bhi aisi halat mei vo survive nai kar sakta tha. Agar aap dhayan denge to pehle bhag mein harshit ne sonia se madad lekar khud ki kurbani di thi aur ab jab kahani ke akhri bhag ke ant ko pdenge to guruji ne ek bahut jaruri line kahi thi, ki shreyas ko us shaitan ko apne andar lena hi padega jaruri hai, jiske piche ka matlab hi khud ka balidan dena tha.

I don't think ki shreyas zinda reh kar kahani ko justify kar sakta tha

sab us bhoot k wajah se hua hai.. us tharki bhoot ki aisi ki taisi

 

[Naina]

Uski Maya - Meri Chaya​

Finale - Part 2

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Note - Lyrics Has been used for Entertainment Purpose. The used Lyrics is not mine or neither have any copyright.

Song Name - Meharma

Movie - Love Aaj Kal 2020

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Chaahiye kisi saaye mein jagah , Chaaha bahut baar hai Na kahin kabhi mera dil lagaa Kaisa samajhdaar hai Main na pohchun kyun wahaan pe Jaana chaahun main jahaan Main kahaan kho gaya Aisa kya ho gaya O mehrama, kya mila Yun juda hoke bata O mehrama, kya mila Yun juda hoke bata Na khabar apni rahi Na khabar apni rahi Na raha tera pata O mehrma, kya mila Yun juda hoke bata Jo shor ka hissa hooni Woh aawaz hoon Logon mein hoon Par tanha hoon main Haan tanha hoon main Duniya mujhe mujhse juda hi karti rahe Bolo magar na baatein karun Ye kya hoon main Sab hai lekin main nahi hoon Woh jo thoda tha kami Woh hawa ho gaya Kyu khafa ho gaya O mehrma, kya mila Yun juda hoke bata O mehrama, kya mila Yun juda hoke bata Na khabar apni rahi Na khabar apni rahi Na raha tera pata O meherma, kya mila Yun juda hoke bata

" shreyas " behad halki awaz mein uske muh se nikla aur vo aage badh gayi bina ye yaad rakhe ki wahan koi adrishye deewar hua karti thi jo ki ab mitt chuki thi. Anshika ne pehla kadam dhime liya tha jiske baad vo tezi se shreyas ki aaur badhi aur ghutno ke bal wahin uske najdeek baith gayi ya fir peron ne khud ba khud jawab de diya. " shreyas " usne awaz lagai lekin jawab nahi mila " shreyas " usne uska hath pakda aur phir awaz di " utho shreyas, utho " ansu behte hue niche ane lage ek ke baad ek. Ankhein dard mei thi aur dil tadapta hua us dard mein shamil ho chuka tha. " shreyassssss..... " is baar anshika puri takat se chillai, jisne uski atma tak jhanjhod di " aaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn " ankh michte hue vo phir chillai aur ansu shreyas ke uppar gir pada. Usne apna sar niche kiya aur shreyas ke hath par rakh liya aur zor-zor se rone lagi. Nidhi bhi uske bagal mein aa baithi, ansu uski ankhon mein bhi the. Usne anshika ke kandhe par hath rakh kar use uthaya. " nidhi roo kyun rahi hai kuch nahi hua hai shreyas ko, vo uthega " anshika ne nidhi ko danta aur phir khud shreyas ki taraf dekhte hue rone lagi. Nidhi chup hone ki jagah aur ro padi. Anshika ne ankh se nikal aye ansu ke sath hi shreyas ko awaz lagai. " shreyas.. utho.. utho.. " vo cheekh rahi thi lekin jab samne se awaz nahi ayi to uski awaz dhime hoti gayi " utho, utho, utho " aur bolte hue usne ankhein mich li aur phir subakte hue rone lagi. Tuti hui vo ladki apne pyar ko kho chuki thi is baat ko dil to janta tha lekin maan nahi raha tha. Vo awaz jise vo sunna chahta tha wahi use tanha kar gayi thi. " shreyassssssss.... aannnnnnnnn " apne dard ko cheekh mein tabdeel karke shreyas se jawab mang rahi thi ki kyun kiya usne aisa. Ankhein phir bhari aur halki hui jiske sath hi usne shreyas ke chehre par apna hath rakha aur use sehlane lagi aur phir sar utha kar apne sine mein daba liya aur ankhein michte hue rone lagi. Ankhon ki galti nahi thi vo to bas is dil ki tadap ko baha raha tha jise ab koi theek nahi kar sakta tha. Vo pyar jo shuru hone se pehle hi mit gaya tha uska dard tha jo anshika ki ankhon se beh raha tha. Anshika ne kuch hi pal baad apni ankhein kholi aur jo usne dekha use vo aur tut gayi. Usne Shreyas ka chehra pakad rakha tha par vo ab mitti mein tabdeel ho chuka tha jiski chaap uske kapdon mein maujud thi. Usne shreyas ke sharir ki taraf nazar ki aur uske dekhte hi pura sharir mitti mein tabdeel hokar farsh par bikhar gaya. " naaahiiiiiiiiiiii " anshika mitti mein shreyas ko tatolne lagi lekin wahan mitti ke alawa ab kuch nahi tha. Usne uske kapde uthaye aur apne chehre se laga liye " shreyass.. " rote hue vo kuch der aise hi baithi rahi aur phir usi miti ke uppar lait gayi. Kahani mit jati hai, sharir mit jatte hain par tanhai vo dil se kabhi nahi mitti, vo hamesha sine mein dhadakti rehti hai. Wajud ke sahare zindagi chalti hai par dil hamesha un yadon mein, us waqt mei dhadkhta reh jata hai.

Anshika ki dil mein shreyas ke saanson ko panaah mil jaye … Anshika ki ishq mein uski jaan fanaa ho jaye” ?

 

[harshit1890]

sab us bhoot k wajah se hua hai.. us tharki bhoot ki aisi ki taisi

Bhoot tharki hai ya phir insan

Anshika ki dil mein shreyas ke saanson ko panaah mil jaye … Anshika ki ishq mein uski jaan fanaa ho jaye” ?

khwaishein aur hakikat ki dastan alag hoti hai
fanha hokar bhi tanhai hamesha reh jati hai

 

[chintu222]

Last reply here ...aaj bhi yaad aata hai vo pehla reply H1 par
Part 1:-
Kamal ka tha pura screenplay...saare scenes aisa laga ki kisi movie ka climax chal raha ho
Sabse pehle toh shiatan ka yun haavi hona jo ki lag hee raha tha
Shreyas ke saath jo kuch bhi hua...sab kuch shiatan ki marzi se hee ho raha tha...ya fir shreyas ke khud ki marzi se
Guruji ka yahan itna bada role hoga...ye nahi laga tha
Jis tarah se rudraksh ko apne tak nahi aane diya...usi se ye baat sabit hoti hai

" aaarrgggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh " jaise dard bahar hi khinch liya ho, ankh, kaan se khoon rista hua bahar ane laga aur sharir aise sidhe akad gaya jaise kisi ne rok diya ho. Ungliyun puri khul chuki thi aur unme itni takat jaa rahi thi mano jism se alag ho jayegi aur phir aisa hi mehsus hua jaise jism se ek hissa nikal kar bahar gir gaya ho.

Ye vala pura scene kamal ka tha...jis tarah se ek ke bbad teen deform sakshiyat bahar nikli aur saath hi anghutiyan...aisa laga ki ye kya ho raha hai ....lekin fir tabhi.......

" usne kar diya " guruji behad dhimi awaz mein bole aur phir shreyas ke sharir ko dekhne lage.

Laga ki ho gaya sab khatam..anghuthiyan mil gayi matlab ho gaya...lekin nahi

Uske baad toh alag hee mode mein chali gayi kahani...present aur past ke beech ghatnayein hoti gayi...aur kahani ke kuch adhure raaz par se bhi parda uthta gaya jaise ki......

" iska matlab ki mei sahi tha, usne jaan kar anshika ko chuna kyun ki vo janta tha ki mei aisa hone nahi dunga jiske baad vo anshika ke sath mujhe bhi kaid kar lega "

Kaafi gehri baat kahi hai
Sab mayajaal ka khel hai

Last mein jo dikhaya gaya hai ki Bhabhuti ki vajah se Shaitan kamjor padd gaya...ye suruat mein thoda ajeeb laga ki kyunki ye vahi shaitan tha jispar kisi bhi pavitra chej ka koi asar hee nahi hota


Part 2-

Suruat kaafi khatarnaak....jis tarah se Shreays ko ghasit kar le gaya tha vo...thoda bura bhi laga lekin saath he kahani ke liye kaafi kamal ka scene tha
Yahan par uss Shaitan ke saath saath waqt se bhi ladayi lad raha tha shreyas
Bhabhuthi toh kamal hee kar rahi hai yahan....lekin

aaaaaaaarghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh " usne apni takat mujhpar dubara ajmai jiska asar mujhpar is baar bhi usi tarag hua aur mei ek baar phir piche usi tuti hui almari mein jaa ghusa ' bhummmmm '

Shaitan toh shaitan hee hai...pura climax kaafi bhadiaa laga..khaskar ye vala pura scene ....sab kuch pyar hee hai...pyar ke liye hee ye sab ho raha hai
Shaitan ka jo roop iss part mein dekhne ki mila hai vo kaafi alag aur bhayanak hai

Reh-reh kar nakamyabi ko soch kar ankh se ansu nikal aate " madad kar maa "

Jaise jaise ant najdeek aa raha tha...aisa lag raha tha ki Sheyas hara dega
Abb samay tha uski takat ke baare mein jaane ka...aur jo pata laga usne toh rom rom hila dala

Mene apni ankhein kholi aur usi dauran mene paya mere hath mein vo chamak raha hai jise mene us raat kho diya tha wahi trishul jise papa ne khan ki ruh ko kaid kiya tha aur mene uski madad se khan ke sharir ko khatam kiya tha. Wahi shakti jo is dono waqt se taluk rakhti thi aur wahi shakti aaj is khel ka ant banne mein meri madad karne wali thi.

Wahi trishul ek baar fir ....ye thoda nahii kaafi unpredictable tha..laga nahi tha ki iss trishul ka ek baar fir se istemaal hoga ?

Thoda thoda ye lag raha tha ki iss sab ko khatam karne ke liye anghuthi ko hee khatam karna hoga...aur hua bhi kuch aisa he...lekin jo tarika tha...vo kaafi bhadiaa aur out of the box tha

Mene trishul ko apne sine ke uppar rakha aur phir dabab dete hue use apne sine mein ghusane laga.
Mera akhri kaam usko khatam karna tha, rok to mei chuka tha par sirf rokna mera maksad nahi tha balki is baar use hamesha ke liye khatam karne ka tha aur uska khatma sirf tab hota jab mei na hota. Mei use juda hua tha bhool gaye? Aur ab use khatam karne ke liye khud ko khatam karna jaruri tha isliye uski takat ko apne sath liye khud ka ant karna tha taki uska wajud khatam ho jaye.

Sach mein shabd hee nahi hain mere pass...jab ye lines padhi toh rona saa aa gaya ....one of the most touching part of the whole trilogy ...kamal ka tha Shreyas ka pyar..shayad sabse alag aur sabse dard bhara
Jahan ek taraf bahaut hee jada dukh hua ki Shreyas chala gaya (hona hee tha ye toh )...vahin ye bhi tha ki finally iss puri kahani ko anjaam dekar gaya vo...aur sabse badi chej Anshika

Song vaale part ke liye koi shabd hee nahi hai
End kaafi emotional ho gaya aur naa chahte hue bhi halke bahaut ansun aa hee gaye ...aisa aakhri baar 22nd vali story ke end mein hua tha ....bada dukh hota hai ye sab padh kar

Kahani mit jati hai, sharir mit jatte hain par tanhai vo dil se kabhi nahi mitti, vo hamesha sine mein dhadakti rehti hai. Wajud ke sahare zindagi chalti hai par dil hamesha un yadon mein, us waqt mei dhadkhta reh jata hai.

Kya kahun mein..kamal ki baat kahi hai...bas itna hee kahunga

Anshika ko bhale hee Shreyas ka saath na mila ho lekin uski nishani, uska ek ansh uske saath hai "Aashya"
Ummed hai tera ye sapna jarur pura ho...aur book likhi jaye iss kahani par...mein tere saath hu
Trilogy toh end ho gayi...lekin last para mein jo hua usse lagta nahi ki ye end hai
Bhale hee aane vale kuch saalon mein kuch naa ho...lekin aisa lagta hai ki aane vaale time mein hume fir se kuch padhne ki milega ...shayad iss forum mein nahi....ek book mein

8 saal se jis din ka intzaar tha vo aa hee gaya....Haunted end ..time ka pata hee nahi chala
Thanks for this Amazing journey of Horror...waiting for another story

 

[chintu222]

After 8 years giving to this story, aaj finally iska ant ho gaya. 2012 mein jab shuruwat hui to socha nahi tha ki itne saal tak is kahani se juda rahunga. Hai to sirf ek virtual world lekin phir bhi mei is kahani se kafi hadh tak juda hua hun kyun kaise nahi janta na pehchanta bas juda hun. Man thoda bhari hai aaj, tata karne ke liye dil nahi hai lekin jab bhi kisi chiz ki shuruwat hoti hai to uska ant bhi hota hai aur aaj takreeban 8 saal baad iska ant ho hi gaya. Shukriya bahut logon ko kehna chahta hun lekin naam lekar nahi keh paunga kyun ki uski sankhya bahut jada hai. Bhale hi is naye platform par vo sankhya kam rahi lekin ye kahani tahe dil se likh kar aapne ko tassali dena chahta tha aur akhir mene vo kar hi liya. Shukriya is lockdown ka jisne mauka diya varna kahani adhuri reh jati aur mere man ki icha bhi. Ab aap sabhi se vida leta hun, Bhavuk ho gaya bas ek kahani ke piche pata nahi kyun isliye izazt chahunga aur is mushkil samay mein aap sab bhi apna dhayan rakhe aur apne pariwar aur pyar karne wale logon ka bhi.

I drop my pen For haunted today, goodbye doston

Mujhe bhi kabhi nahi laga tha ki mein iss kahani ki suruat yani 2012 se abb tak iss kahani se juda rahunga...lekin shayad ye kahani dur hone hee nahi deti...ek waqt tha jab H2 chal rahi thi aur mein time nahi de paa raha tha...aur uss waqt ek silent reader ban kar reh gaya tha...lekin kahani se jo lagav tha vo kam nahi hua...lagatar har updates padhe bhale hee rebu naa diyen ho
Sabse pehle Thank you soo much bhai mujhe bhi iss kahani ka ek hissa banane ke liye...aur useke baad sabse bada thanks ye kahani puri karne ke liye .
Bahaut hee jada bura bhi lag raha hai aur khushi bhi hai...bura isliye ki kahani khatam ho gayi abb kya padhenge...aur khushi ye ki Finally khatam ho gayi
Aur rahi baat Goodbye ki...toh abhi nahi ...ye toh bas ek kahani thi abhi toh bahaut kuch likhna hai tujhe ...toh bas ye Kalam fir se utha...aur jald hee ho jaa suru

 

[chintu222]

aise kaise goodbye... abhi Haweli ~~ " The Night Is Dark "
baki hai, baat baki hai
aise thode naa aapko jane denge hum..

Egjactly...abhi toh bahaut kuch likhna hai inn bhaisaab ko...aur hume rebu dene hain