Horror Haunted ~~ " Game Of Rings " {Trilogy End}

[harshit1890]

This is the story i wish to finish, with so many things left to write when things ended in XP. Due to shortage of time i couldn't able to keep up with this one. But i would love to write and finish this one, though i don't have any backup of this one and i tried a lot but couldn't get so i decided to write again. The update will not be regular but i will try my best.

Ye kahani un viewers aur readers ke liye hai jinhone is part ki pehli 2 kahani padi hai.

Part 1 - Haunted (Tujhe Pyar karun to kaise ??) (PDF LINK - https://mega.nz/file/SxNR1SgS#rDb3cJET5V3XapK2VoGsZJ_nqOKc22BqG2yVcxEX3JY)
Part 2 - Haunted ~~ Dead Evil Returns (PDF LINK - https://mega.nz/file/K9UBhCYS#_lHNwaPCUcbgCk9RkcFH3ZvykGzv1HPk2x3CvjiKhVc)

This time this one for all the old friends which i met and they are doing well in their life. Cheers, enjoy the story everyone.

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[chintu222]

Ok bhai
8 saal beet chuke hai time ka pata nahi chala

Egjactly...samay bahaut jaldi beet gaya

 

[Naina]

Bhoot tharki hai ya phir insan



khwaishein aur hakikat ki dastan alag hoti hai
fanha hokar bhi tanhai hamesha reh jati hai

Insaan bhi hote hai par yahan ish Story mein bhoot bhi hai..aur iski aisi ki taisi

 

[Naina]

Egjactly...abhi toh bahaut kuch likhna hai inn bhaisaab ko...aur hume rebu dene hain

waise ush hawali 2 ki heroine tharki hai

 

[chintu222]

waise ush hawali 2 ki heroine tharki hai

Dekh lenge usko bhi

 

[Naina]

Dekh lenge usko bhi

 

[Angel96]

Aise kaise time beet gya pata hi nhi chla...8 saal bht lamba time hota hai....2014 m story padhna shuru kiya tha maine as a silent reader....lekin apki writing skills ne mazbur kr diya apki tarif karne k liye....I really appreciate your work....Bht hi shandaar storyline....the way of your writing or explaining any scene is great...Hope ki bahut jaldi ek nayi story padhne ko milegi?

 

[GuptAbhishek]

Mene sbse pehle padha tha akhiri updates but rebu nahi diya me pehle sbka rebu padhna chahta tha ab me v apna dil khol kr rakhunga ache se kyuki meko v 7 year ho chuke hai padhte hue or ye kahani meri jindagi ki tarah thi kash aesa ho ki part 4 b bnao aap

Real rebu me kal dunga abi dunga to so nahi paunga bechaini se

 

[harshit1890]

Akhir Kar woh dhinkachika bhoot ka astitva ka naash hua.... Usike ke sath woh kaufnaak khel ka bhi Khatma hua joh woh khel raha tha ya phir aage aur bhi isse zyada dardnaak aur khaufnaak hota shayad... Actually woh shreyas pe kabza karna chahta tha pure tarike se apne ghinoni khel ke tahat, samproon shakti hasil karne ki tahat kyunki woh usse juda hua tha... Shayad woh kamyaab bhi ho jata...... par ahankar aur overconfidence ke chalte woh ek baat bhul gaya ki woh likhi huyi baatein padh nahi sakta.... joh uske ant ka kaaran bana....
dairy se leke trilul tak yeh kahani ke akhiri panno mein turning points the.... aur yeh teeno waqt se jude huye the... aur inhi ki badoulat shreyas ush dhinkachika bhoot ka Khatma kar paya par samul astitva ko khatam karne ke liye khud ka balidaan de diya ......kyunki dhinkachika bhoot aur shreyas dono hi ek dushre se jude huye the .... apne pariwar aur apne pyar ko kabhi taklif na ho aage chalke khud kurbaan ho gaya .
ek dukh ek taklif hamesha dil mein rahegi ki writer ne aisa kyun kiya... Kya shreyas ka ant jaruri tha... writer sahab bolenge "haan"... par kyun... kahani ki akhir mein ek twist de ke shreyas ko bacha bhi sakte the jiske chalte aaj shreyas, anshika aur apni beti ke sath hota.... ( chaya banke nahin.. joh kahani ki ant apne dikha rahe hai)

kahani achhi thi.. dilchasp bhi. har ek shabd joh dil ko chu jaye.. aise mod aaye jab kabhi khushi mili, kabhi dard toh kabhi dil ki dhadkan bar jaye... ek aakarshan kahani mein joh ishe baar baar padhne ko dil kare aur sirf ishi kahani isse jude do kahaniyo ko bhi... sukh, dukh, dard, pyaar, pratigya, nafrat, jalan, badla aur sabse badi baat apne pyar ke liye kurbaan ho jana,,, yeh sari baatein nihit hai teeno kahaniyo mein .. par kahani ke antim kshanon mein woh bachha joh shreyas ko dekh paa raha tha usko clear kar dete toh achha hota....
So harshit1890 Brilliant story line with awesome writing skill

Thank you so much naina ji not only for this reply but stay connected here with this story
Apne apne first parah jo kahani mei likha use sahi se samajh kar sab de diya
Apne writer par sawal uthaya to vo jarur jawab dega Mera ye manna hai ki shreyas ko scnd part mei zinda chhodne ka reason yahi tha uske baad uska theek hona aur phir kahani mei vapis lautna, ye uske ant ko step by step aage badha raha tha. Lekin ek character ko sirf do hi reason se hi marna pdta hai, pehla jab uska role fika padh jaye aur dusra kahani usi par depend hai. Agar shreyas nai marta to aisa lagta koi superhero movie hai ki mrta hi nahi, infact ab to usme bhi mar dia jata hai that way story connects the more, matlab hi usi ka tha.

Apko kahani achi lagi jaan kar acha laga Har bar kahani usi par ghumti rahi, kahin over drama raha to kahin par thrill to kahin bich bich mein pyar... Jaan kar acha laga ki hamara lagaya waqt kamyab hua. Apne sawal uthaya akhri ka to vo mere liye nahi balki aap logon ke liye tha ki shreyas maujud kaise hai aur koi bacha use kaise dekh raha hai kauun hai? Mene to sawal par kahani chhodi aap logon ko dimag lagana tha ki vo kaun hai

Naina ji Keep reading in XF, you are the wonderful supporter for the writers, Keep doing this

 

[harshit1890]

Last reply here ...aaj bhi yaad aata hai vo pehla reply H1 par
Part 1:-
Kamal ka tha pura screenplay...saare scenes aisa laga ki kisi movie ka climax chal raha ho
Sabse pehle toh shiatan ka yun haavi hona jo ki lag hee raha tha
Shreyas ke saath jo kuch bhi hua...sab kuch shiatan ki marzi se hee ho raha tha...ya fir shreyas ke khud ki marzi se
Guruji ka yahan itna bada role hoga...ye nahi laga tha
Jis tarah se rudraksh ko apne tak nahi aane diya...usi se ye baat sabit hoti hai


Ye vala pura scene kamal ka tha...jis tarah se ek ke bbad teen deform sakshiyat bahar nikli aur saath hi anghutiyan...aisa laga ki ye kya ho raha hai ....lekin fir tabhi.......

Laga ki ho gaya sab khatam..anghuthiyan mil gayi matlab ho gaya...lekin nahi

Uske baad toh alag hee mode mein chali gayi kahani...present aur past ke beech ghatnayein hoti gayi...aur kahani ke kuch adhure raaz par se bhi parda uthta gaya jaise ki......

Kaafi gehri baat kahi hai
Sab mayajaal ka khel hai

Last mein jo dikhaya gaya hai ki Bhabhuti ki vajah se Shaitan kamjor padd gaya...ye suruat mein thoda ajeeb laga ki kyunki ye vahi shaitan tha jispar kisi bhi pavitra chej ka koi asar hee nahi hota


Part 2-

Suruat kaafi khatarnaak....jis tarah se Shreays ko ghasit kar le gaya tha vo...thoda bura bhi laga lekin saath he kahani ke liye kaafi kamal ka scene tha
Yahan par uss Shaitan ke saath saath waqt se bhi ladayi lad raha tha shreyas
Bhabhuthi toh kamal hee kar rahi hai yahan....lekin

Shaitan toh shaitan hee hai...pura climax kaafi bhadiaa laga..khaskar ye vala pura scene ....sab kuch pyar hee hai...pyar ke liye hee ye sab ho raha hai
Shaitan ka jo roop iss part mein dekhne ki mila hai vo kaafi alag aur bhayanak hai


Jaise jaise ant najdeek aa raha tha...aisa lag raha tha ki Sheyas hara dega
Abb samay tha uski takat ke baare mein jaane ka...aur jo pata laga usne toh rom rom hila dala

Wahi trishul ek baar fir ....ye thoda nahii kaafi unpredictable tha..laga nahi tha ki iss trishul ka ek baar fir se istemaal hoga ?

Thoda thoda ye lag raha tha ki iss sab ko khatam karne ke liye anghuthi ko hee khatam karna hoga...aur hua bhi kuch aisa he...lekin jo tarika tha...vo kaafi bhadiaa aur out of the box tha

Sach mein shabd hee nahi hain mere pass...jab ye lines padhi toh rona saa aa gaya ....one of the most touching part of the whole trilogy ...kamal ka tha Shreyas ka pyar..shayad sabse alag aur sabse dard bhara
Jahan ek taraf bahaut hee jada dukh hua ki Shreyas chala gaya (hona hee tha ye toh )...vahin ye bhi tha ki finally iss puri kahani ko anjaam dekar gaya vo...aur sabse badi chej Anshika

Song vaale part ke liye koi shabd hee nahi hai
End kaafi emotional ho gaya aur naa chahte hue bhi halke bahaut ansun aa hee gaye ...aisa aakhri baar 22nd vali story ke end mein hua tha ....bada dukh hota hai ye sab padh kar

Kya kahun mein..kamal ki baat kahi hai...bas itna hee kahunga

Anshika ko bhale hee Shreyas ka saath na mila ho lekin uski nishani, uska ek ansh uske saath hai "Aashya"
Ummed hai tera ye sapna jarur pura ho...aur book likhi jaye iss kahani par...mein tere saath hu
Trilogy toh end ho gayi...lekin last para mein jo hua usse lagta nahi ki ye end hai
Bhale hee aane vale kuch saalon mein kuch naa ho...lekin aisa lagta hai ki aane vaale time mein hume fir se kuch padhne ki milega ...shayad iss forum mein nahi....ek book mein

8 saal se jis din ka intzaar tha vo aa hee gaya....Haunted end ..time ka pata hee nahi chala
Thanks for this Amazing journey of Horror...waiting for another story

Thank you so much chintu , Bhai tune jab bhi kahani padi dil aur dimag dono lagaya aur uske baad apna pura time dekar reply diya vo such meinn commandable job hai
Han vo past present se kahani aage piche ho rahi thi. Kuch batein tabhi batani thi jab uska sahi time tha isliye akhri mein past present aur present mein hi past chalta raha
Bhabhuti se vo sirf waqt le sakta tha uska to kuch nahi jaa raha tha vaise bhi. Aur us time vo kafi limitation se juda tha, ise to sabse bada sawal juda tha ki vo shreyas ko kyun sidhe nahi maar raha tha bhale hi takatwar tha vo, but that explains the end aur agar kahani ko shuru se dekho to harsh kabhi shreyas ko chot nahi pahuncha paya, rember the scnd part jab harsh dhakka deta hai par shreyas ko kuch nahi hota And than neha kehti hai anshikapar kabza karne ke baad ki 'is kahani ka asli hero koi aur hai' uska ishara sam par tha, kyun ki vo bhi jaan chuki thi. To kahani thdi-thdi wahin se judi hui thi.
Trishul se hi iski kahani ki shuruwat hui thi aur akhir ant bhi usi se hua isliye vo hi ek matr tarika tha. Mera climax scene pehle se decide nahi tha isliye waqt jada lag gaya, i want shreyas to loose ya phir vo itna tut jaye ki haar jaye aur jeet ke liye use sab kuch dena padh jaye aur shayad kuch had tak likh paya.
Emotional tha mere bhi likhne mein jaise jaise aage badh raha tha vaise vaise hi emotional tha. Itne lamba pehle socha tha ab jakar likha tha use.
Nahi yar kuch sapne adhure rehte hain kuch apki kismat se jude hote hain, yahin tak simat hai to yahi tak sahi..
Nahi is kahani mein nahi, akhir parah aap logon ke liye hai samjhne ke liye.. Ya fir ek sawal ban kar chhod dijeye.. Sahi kaha bhai time ka pata nahi chala..

Thank you so much chintu, for being such a wonderful person, log to bahut hote hain jo kahani padhte hain par kahani padh kar uske bare mein batane wala har koi nahi hota. Keep reading always nd be the supporter like this

 

[harshit1890]

Mujhe bhi kabhi nahi laga tha ki mein iss kahani ki suruat yani 2012 se abb tak iss kahani se juda rahunga...lekin shayad ye kahani dur hone hee nahi deti...ek waqt tha jab H2 chal rahi thi aur mein time nahi de paa raha tha...aur uss waqt ek silent reader ban kar reh gaya tha...lekin kahani se jo lagav tha vo kam nahi hua...lagatar har updates padhe bhale hee rebu naa diyen ho
Sabse pehle Thank you soo much bhai mujhe bhi iss kahani ka ek hissa banane ke liye...aur useke baad sabse bada thanks ye kahani puri karne ke liye .
Bahaut hee jada bura bhi lag raha hai aur khushi bhi hai...bura isliye ki kahani khatam ho gayi abb kya padhenge...aur khushi ye ki Finally khatam ho gayi
Aur rahi baat Goodbye ki...toh abhi nahi ...ye toh bas ek kahani thi abhi toh bahaut kuch likhna hai tujhe ...toh bas ye Kalam fir se utha...aur jald hee ho jaa suru

Han yaar yaad hai mujhe vo waqt jab start hui thi kahani ki.. H2 ka time aisa hi tha samajh sakte hain bhai bsy ho hi jata hai banda apni life mein vvo bhi to hai, mei khud bsy raha tha to kitne mahine latak gayi thi yaad hai mujhe kaahni lagbhag 1 sal se uppar mei khatam hui thi lambi bhi kitni thi
Han yaar finally khatam hui jaisa socha tha ki iska ant karna hai kar dala...
Dekho in future kya hoga kya pata