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Bhai Mai bhi inhi sb ko bolne vala tha gajab ka update hai jabarjast sandarnice update ..to madhu aur prateek me dushmani hai..
aur rupal ko kulhadi mil gayi jo uski hi thi ...par pichhale janam me uska pati kaun tha jisne rupal aur uske baap ko berahami se maar daala tha ..
prateek immortal hai to uska kuch naam to hoga hi
To rupal ke andar bats observe ho gye leader bhi vapas aa gya DB bhi apne purvajo ki bate sun kr hatoutsahit Ho gya hai nix samuday ke log 2 guto me parivartit Ho gye hai jo vha ruke hai Vo villan ki taraf se aayenge ab Ye kya baat hui ke slyer main villain nhi hai are Bhai jb story ka name immortal hai to koi Bahut bda villan hi hoga Jo Ye sb apni kathputlio ko ncha rha hai slyer bhi Lagta hai uska hi koi pyada hai...
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Kafi wakt ke baad aapka msg dekh rha hu kya baad hai story padhna kam kr diya hai kya aapne Saand ke complete hone ke baad se to najre taras gyi dekhne ko...For completing 300 pages on your thread.
Ho sakta hai saand story me anand bhai ne aapko black army ne mar diya tha Firefox bhai or raghuhakal bhai ke sath isliye padhna kam kr diya ho
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Hahahaha aisa kuch nahi hai bhai, darasal personal life mein thoda busy ho gaya tha isliye time nahi mila..Kafi wakt ke baad aapka msg dekh rha hu kya baad hai story padhna kam kr diya hai kya aapne Saand ke complete hone ke baad se to najre taras gyi dekhne ko...
Ho sakta hai saand story me anand bhai ne aapko black army ne mar diya tha Firefox bhai or raghuhakal bhai ke sath isliye padhna kam kr diya ho
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Nice update bhai waiting for next updateUPDATE -90
Nikita aur Pankaj ne bahar jaake sabhi ko Pujari ji ki baat batayi ki wo chahte the ki sab waha se nikal jaaye aur Earth pe jaane ke liye taiyaar ho jaaye.......
Kuch ne unki baat manni aur kuch nahi nahi......yaha pe maamla vishwas ka tha.......ab kaun aisa hoga jo apne uss devta ko chod ke chala jaayega jiski puja wo kya uske bade bujurg bhi kar rahe ho......
Jo kuch log unki bat ko maan gaye wo sab apne apne ghar chale gaye aur apna apna samman ikkatha karne lag gaye......
Yaha pe mahaul kharab hone wala tha.......
Nikita aur Pankaj wapas se ander aa gaye......
Pujari ji - tumne unse kah diya......
Pankaj - hmm....
Pujari ji - ab hume taiyaari karni hogi.....
Madhu - ek baat batao main yaha aayi kaise......ye baat mujhe yaad kyun nahi aa rahi.....au.....
Pankaj - tum jyada socho mat Madhu dekho tumhare logo ko jarurat hai tumhari......
Madhu ko pata tha wo log kuch nahi sunne wale waise bhi wo kaha koi unki Rajkumari thi ye to bas kahne ki baat thi......to wo thodi der chup rahi.......
Pujari ji -Tum sab mere picche aaoge......iss mandir mein bahut se aise cheezin hai jo humko leke jaani hai.......wo aamant hai kuch logo ki......unko milni hi chahiye........Madhu tum unn darwajo ko khol dena jinki taraf main ishara karu.....
Pankaj - Darwaje acche se kholne aate hai isko......
Madhu - kya matlab......
Pujari ji - chalo mere picche aao.....waqt kam hai hamare pass.......
kuch kamro ke taraf Pujari ji ne ishara kiya aur wo saare kamre Madhu ne khol diye......aur unke ander Pujari ji akele gaye aur unko jo karna tha kar ke bahar aa gaye aur sab band kar diya......par unn kamro mein se ek kamra khali milla unko......
Wo kamra bhi important tha......jab unhone dhyaan se dekha to kamre mein pahle hi koi aaya tha aisa nishan milla unko........unhone apna sar peet liya......par abhi rukna sahi nahi tha......wo waha se bahar nikale......jin jin darwajo ko band karna tha wo saare band kar diye gaye......aur wo chal diye waha Mandir ke mukha dwar ke pass.......
Bahut saare log nahi aaye hue the waha pe........thoda rukne ke baare mein socha unn sab ne.......
Tabhi Old Owl aur Jwala waha pe aa gaye......Prateek ka pata unko chal gaya tha aur unko usne aadesh bhi de diya tha ki wo ab waha apne logo ka dhyaan rakhe jab tak Prateek khud unko naa bulata.......
Ye dono yaha pe bas ye batane ko aaye the ki wo mil gaya hai aur kaha par hai wo.......
Prateek ki khabar di inn dono ne ki wo Earth pe hi hai par thoda ajjeb laga usko dekh ke iss baar.......Ispe Pujari ji ne kaha.....
Pujari ji - ye ab aisa hi rahega.......kuch chizzen badal gayi hai......ab tum sabko bhi thoda badalna hoga.....Madhu tum kya uss darwaje ko band kar aaogi.....
Madhu ne ek baar to ajeeb sa muh banate hue unko dekha......abhi aisa lag raha tha jaise kitni important baat kar rahe the......aur abWo waha se chali gayi darwaja band karne ko.....
Pujari ji - tum sab se bas ek hi baat kahunga......inn dono ki iss kahani mein inke bich deewar mat ban jaana......
Kisi ko ye baat saaf saaf samajh mein hi nahi aayi......sabhi ke aankhen bade ho gaye the.......Pujari ji ne aisa bomb hi phoda tha.....unhone sidha kah diya ki Prateek aur Madhu ki kahani mein wo bich mein naa jaaye.....kahne ko bahut se matlab ho sakte hai iske......par waha sabhi ke dimmag mein bas ek hi matlab aaya.....aur wo sare ke saare chauk gaye the.....
Nikita - par wo to Pankaj ke saa......
Pankaj jo bas aankhen badi karke dekh raha tha Pujari ji ko ki kaise unhone kah diya Madhu aur Prateek ki kahani......aur jab Nikita ke muh se apna naam sunna to aur uska matlab samjha to aankhen aur badi ho gayi.....thodi aur badi kar leta to aankhen nicche aa jaati.......
Pankaj - aee pagal ho kya.......Madhu aur main bas dost hai aur kuch nahi......dimmag hai yaa nahi tumme vampire.....
Nikita ko bhi bolte waqt laga tha wo jyada bol rahi hai par uske ander kuch aur hi chal raha tha wo bas confirm hona chahti thi.......par usne ye nahi socha hoga ye itna bhadak jaayega......
Nikita - Main to bas wo......ye vampire kya hai........naam hai mera......Nikita......wapas se aisa bola to....to....
Bua - chup raho dono.......Pujari ji.....aap kya wahi kah rahe hai jo main soch rahi hu.......
Pujari ji - hmm.....ye sab bahut purani baatein hai bas kuch logo ko hi iska pata hai.......Main sab bataunga tumko.....par naa ye jagah sahi hai aur naa hi waqt.....bas itna dhyaan rakhna unn dono ke bicch mein mat aa jaana....agar aaye to kya hoga ye main bhi nahi bata sakta......
Bua isko leke soch mein pad gayi aakhir aisa kya hai......
Thodi der mein jinko bhi jaana tha Earth pe wo sab Mandir ke pass aa gaye aur jo nahi jaana chahte the wo wahi pe rah gaye.......
Pujari ji ne unhi gufaon ka use kiya......waha se Earth pe jaane ke liye.......wahi Old Owl aur Jwala bhi madad kar rahe the uski.....
Unko pata nahi tha wo jaa kaha raahe hai......bas Guffa mein Pujari ji ke picche picche jaa rahe the wo sab......aur aisa karte karte wo seedha Leemi ke pass pahuch gaye......
Leemi ko uske guruji ne ek jagah pe rukne ko kaha tha.........bas rukne ko hi kaha tha wo bhi jaake uss jagah pe bas khadui thi.....saamne ek talab tha ussi ko dekh rahi thi ki aachanak se taalab ka thoda paani upar jaane laga......
Leemi ne jab ye dekha wo picche ho gayi......aur uske baad jo hua wo to aur bhi chaukane wala tha uske liye........upar aasmaan mein ek guffa ka darwaja khul gaya aur waha se kuch log nicche aane lage.......
Leemi bas wahi dekhe jaa rahi thi....samajh nahi aa raha tha kaise ye log yaha aa gaye....aur wo aa kaha se rahe hai......
Pujari ji aur baaki sab ke baad Bua , Nikita aur Pankaj aaye Old Owl aur Jwala apne jagah pe chale gaye the........
Leemi ne jab dekha ki waha pe Bua aur Nikita hai to unke pass chali gayi......wo unse baat karne hi wali thi ki Pujari ji ne usko dekha aur kaha......
Pujari ji - Humme apne aashram pe le chalo.....
Leemi - aapko kaise pata aashram hai hamara......
Pujari ji - Mujhe bas uske baare mein hi nahi balki tumhare baare mein bhi bahut kuch pata hai.......
Wo kuch bolta usse pahle waha oe khud Guru ji aa gaye aur uske saath hi K.Bua aur DB bhi aa gaye waha pe.......
K.Bua ne jab Bua aur Nikita ko dekha to wo thoda chauk gayi wo yaha kya kar rahi thi fir Madhu aur Pankaj bhi the waha......upar se ye to saare Nix the.....wo bhi saaman ke saath.......
K.Bua kuch bolti usse pahle Guruji bole.....
Guruji - dost.....tum yaha aaye ye dekh ke bahut khussi hui......
Pujari ji - waqt aa gaya tha uss jagah se palayan karne ka.....par dukh iss baat ka haiu sabhi ko nahi baccha paaya main......kuch log wahi rah gaye.....
DB - wo unki kismat hai......aur jo yaha aa gaye hai unki kismat alag hai......
Pujari ji ne jab DB ki baat sunni to usko gaur se dekhne lag gaye......
Guruji - ye Elf rajkumar hai.........
DB - Main tha......par mujhe mere Pita ji ne waha se nikal diya......
K.Bua - DB tum har baar aise kyun bolte ho.....Rajkumar tum hi ho.....aur aage jaake tumko hi waha sab dekhna hai to ye sab sochna band kar do.....
Pujari ji - hmm to ye hai wo Rajkumar......milke accha laga aapse......Dost maine kaha tha mere logo ke rahne ke liye ek jagah......
Guruji - ek jagah hai.....waha pe ek chota sa talab bhi hai jisse tum sab ko koi pareshani nahi hogi......par...
Pujari ji - Par kya.....waha pe koi dikkat hai kya......
Madhu - (Pankaj se) ye Rajkumar hai......lagta to nahi.....
Guruji - Wo jagah hamare hi aashram mein hai......aur yaha pe sirf jaaduyi jeev hi nahi balki insan bhi hote hai.....tumhare log kya ye......
Pujari ji - iski chinta mat karo.....hum sab dekh lenge....aur manage bhi kar lenge.....chalo ab dikhao kaha hai wo jagah.....
DB - Guru ji main chalta hu Mujhe kuch aur kaam hai....aap karo ye sab.....
Guruji ek baar usko akele mein Pujari ji se milwana chahte the.....taaki wo confirm kar sakke aakhir maajra kya hai...par ye jaa raha tha......Pahle Guru ji ne socha rok le par phir laga abhi to ye sab aye hai abhi ye sab karana sahi nahi hoga to unhone bhi jaane ko kah diya......
Pujari ji ne bhi baaki sab ko waha se jaane ko kah diya......Madhu rukna chahti thi par usko bhi jaane ko kah diya.....iss dauran K.Bua k ek ped ke pass ek parchayi dikhi thi.....K.Bua uski oor dekh rahi thi......aisa lag raha tha wo waha pe chipne aaya tha.....
K.Bua ne Bua ko bhi bataya aur Bua ne bhi usko dekha....par kuch soch ke K.Bua ko shant rahne ko kaha......
Madhu aur baaki sab jab school jaa rahe the uss waqt bhi bus pe wo tha.....piccha kar raha tha sabhi ka......K.Bua ne jab ye dekha to unse raha nahi gaya.....
K.Bua - Prateek ye chup chup ke kya dekh rahe ho......yaha nahi aa sakte kya.....
Prateek Bus pe tha....wo bas Madhu ko dekh raha tha....baaki kisi se koi khass matlab tha nahi usko.....haa wo ye jaan gaya tha ki ye sab uske dost hai relatives hai par abhi unse koi kaam nahi hai usko.....
K.Bua ke uska naam bulane se wo waha se unke pass chala gaya.....aakhir isse wo Madhu ko aur paas se jo dekh sakta tha......
K.Bua - Ye kya choro ki tarah piccha kar rahe ho.....kuch bolna hai......
Bua - Kavita.....chup raho......Prateek tum yaha kaise.....
Madhu ne bhi usko dekha.....par wo Pujari ji ke dwara waha se bhej diye jaane se thodi chiddi hui thi pahle se hi aur jab usne dekha ki Prateek bas usko hi dekh raha hai to gusse mein badbadate hue wo dusri taraf dekhne lag gayi...
(Hero ke respect mein)
Sab yaad aa gaya tha mujhko.....Main to waha se school mein jaana chahta tha dekhne ko ki aakhir iss duniya mein kya kya padhate hai....kya yaha bhi wahi sab padhaya jaata hai jo main apne shishyon ko padhaya karta tha yaa kuch aur.....par tabhi mujhe laga ki Madhu mere pass aa gayi hai.....isko kya kahu....Madhu aur mera jo connection tha bada hi ajeeb tha.......Jab bhi hum dono ek dusre se dur hote humme pata hota tha aur jab bhi kisi tarah pass aaa jaate to humko pata chal jaata tha......iss baar bhi wahi tha sayad wo iss jagah pe aa gayi thi.....Maine apni aakhen band kari aur uss jagah ko dekhne laga jaha pe wo thi abhi.....aur wo mujh mil gayi kuch logo ki bheed ke pass.......
Main wahi se chup ke usko dekhne laga......mann kar raha tha uske pass jaaun par......kaise jaata.....to bas dekhta raha usko......uske baad wo sab waha se nikle....aaj bhi jab uddas hoti hai ye to iske gaal ekdum gol jaise ho jate hai.....kaun kahega ye Golden power wali hai.....
Uss waqt Dhruv se ek sawal kiya maine......
Main - mujhe sab yaad aa gaya hai kya isko bhi sab yaad hai.....agar aisa hua tab to.......
Dhruv - Nahi......mujhe to aisa nahi lagta agar aisa hota to kya wo waha pe hoti abhi......wo aapko dhundh rahi hoti aapko maarne ke liye....
Dhruv ju baat sahi thi......agar usko pata hota to abhi main iss sharir mein to nahi hota.....par main phir bhi confirm karna chahta tha issi wajah se jab wo sab bus mein gaye to main bhi chala gaya.......saath hi usko bas dekhte rahna chahta tha......
Main to wahi kar bhi raha tha par pata nahi ye.......haa.....ye to K.Bua thi.....inhone mujhe dekha aur mujhe bula liya apne pass.......ab waha jaa raha tha main aur thodi ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi kahi usko sab yaad hua to wo kaise react karegi.....par jab main usko dekhte hue aage jaa raha tha to usne apni aankhen chotti karke mujhe dekha aur aise dekha jaise abhi ke abhi khaa jaayegi.....par uske baad aage dekhne lagi....matlab ye saaf hai usko kuch yaad nahi hai.....par phir bhi main uske ekdum se pass nahi jaa sakta......Main usse utna dur tha jitna mujhe hona chahiye tha aur wahi se K.Bua ko dekha.....aur kaha....
Main - Wo main bhi jaa raha tha yaha se to aap sab mil gaye......
Bua - Kavita usko wahi rahne do.....tum ye batao DB ka kya hua....
K.Bua - kya hua......ye saare namune hai......usne pata nahi Guruji se kya bol diya hai wo pareshan ho gaye hai.....Main soch rahi thi usk apne dost ke yaha se nikal ke kahi aur kara du.....
Bua - par hua kya.....
K.Bua - pahle khana nahi khaa raha tha baatein nahi kar raha tha.....ab pata nahi kya hua hai usko......wo din bhar badbad karte rahtaa hai waha pe.....
Mere kaano mein unko aawajein to aa rahi thi par koi khaas asar nahi ho raha tha uska.....main to bas Madhu ko dekh raha tha.....tabhi bus rukkki......aur bus mein ek ajeeb sa banda aa gaya.....isko bhi dekha tha maine pahle.....ye to wahi tha jo Pankaj ke saath rahta tha.....
Wo Bus pe Pankaj ko hi dhundhte hue aaya tha....aur yaha waha dekh raha tha......tabhi uski nazar Pankaj pe padi.....aur wo uske taraf jaane laga.....
Par wo mera dhyaan khinch raha tha apni tarf......wo baakiyon ki tarah aam sa to nahi lag raha tha......
Leader - Pankaj tum yaha ghum rahe ho.....main tumhare ghar pe gaya tha waha talla laga hua tha tumhari padosi ne bataya tum theek ho gaye hi......
Madhu jo Pankaj ke bagal mein baithi hui thi....wo usko dekhne lagi.....Nikita Pankaj ke picche wali seat pe thi.....
Pankaj - arre aap......aap wapas aa gaye....aapse mujhe baat karni thi.....
Leader ne aas pass dekha....wo thoda sa chauk gaya ki pichle baar banda ek dum se akela tha aur iss baar toli mein wapas aa gaya.....
Wo Madhu ki taraf bhi dekh raha tha.....thoda gaur se.....jaise pahchanne ki koshish kar raha ho......
Pankaj - Ye ye meri dost hai Nix rajkumari Madhu......aur ye hai leader......fum......
Pankaj bas bol hi deta agar uss waqt Leader ne baat naa badli hoti.....
Leader - Nix......to aap Nix rajkumari hai.....
Itna bolne ke baad Pankaj ko dekhne lage wo.....jisse Pankaj ko apni galti samajh aa gayi.....
Abhi bus jaa hi rahi thi ke kuch aawajein mere kaano mein aayi.....ye koi aam aawaj nahi thi.......ye ek khass kisam ka kidda hai.....jo hamare yaha hi milta tha bas.....inn insano ke duniya mein ye kida.....ye kaise mumkin hai....yaha pe to isne tabahi macha rakhi hogi......
Main uss kidde ke baare mein sochne laga......wo bahut khatarnaak tha iss jagah ke liye....yaha ye sab aapas mein jaan pahchan bana rahe the......
Raat ke waqt.....
Hum sab school mein the.....Leader ko Pankaj se baat karni thi par Pankaj ne kaha ki wo kal hi ho paayegi Leader ne bhi aas pass ke logo ko dekha aur issi mein bhalayi samjhi aur wo chala gaya.....par kal aayega ye bhi kah gaya......
Raat mein ghar ke pass aaj bhi wahi saaya mandra raha tha.....wo bats.......aaj bhi DIdi ke room ke pass chal rahe the wo......Chachi aur Dadi inse pareshan the......unhone iss baare mein Chacha aur Dada ji ko bhi bataya par unki samajh mein bhi kuch nahi aaya.....upar se jab tak suraksha kawach thi tab tak to wo aa nahi sakte the ander....to unhone isko abhi bas aise hi rahne dene ko kaha......
Lekin aaj raat sab waisa hi nahi rahne wala tha......
Bahut waqt pahle ki baat hai......ek lootera hua karta tha.....uski bas ek beti hi thi.......usne usko apne saare paitre sikhaye the taaki uske baad wo sab sambhal sake......
uss Lootere ko kisi ne bahut berahmi se maar diya tha......aur uske baad uski beti ko bhi chod diya tha......ye wo tha jisse uski beti ek waqt pyar kiya karti thi.....bahut jyada pyaar....itna ki puccho mat.....par milla kya dhokha.......par yaha pe bahut si aur bhi cheezein hui thi....iss kahani ko vistar se janna hoga ......
Kahani Khooni ghudsawaron ki raani ki.......
ye kahani iss jagah ki nahi th....yaha se bahut dur ek planet hua karta tha wo pramukh planets mein to nahi aaya karta tha par uska bahut asar tha inn pramukh planets pe......ussi planet pe ek ladki thi......kuch din pahle hi uske Pita ko maar diya gaya tha jo ki ek lootera tha......
Ladki ko ab pata lagana tha ki kisne uske pita ko maara hai aur usse badla bhi lena tha....aur uske liye wo apne pyaar ki madad leti hai........par usko kaha pata tha jisse wo pyaar karti hai wahi tha wo kamina jisne uske pita ko maara tha.....
Aur wo ye bhi nahi jaanti thi ki wo usko bhi maar dega........
Wo banda jaanta tha agar aise hi usne uss ladki ko maar diya to pura samuh bikhar jaayega.....aur phir kabhi ek nahi ho paayega.....upar se usko maar denge wo alag......par agar usne usse shadi kar li aur phir usko maar ke isko kisi durghatna ka naam de diya to sab uske saath ho jaayenge......
Usne wahi kiya........1 saal ka intezr kiya aur usse shadi kar li.....shadi karne ke bad jab khooni ghudsawaron ki raani pregnent ho gayi.....to usne apne bache ke liye loot paat ka kaam thoda kam kar diya....usne apni kulhadi ko kahi rakh diya tha.....ye sab dekh ke uske pati ne uskoo maar diya....aur bahut berahmi se maara.....aur usko ek khayi mein fhen diya......
Par unn dino uss planet pe Orion ka ek jaadugar bhi maujood tha......wo ladki ussi ke pass aake girri thi......thodi hi to jaan bacchi hui thi usme.....
Ladki ne bas ek madad maangi usse.....ki usko badla lena hai......
Jadugar ne ladki ko dekha...aur uski madad karne ka wadda kiya par saath mein kuch maang bhi liya.....usne uska garbh maang liya.....jisme uska baccha pal raha tha.......
Ladki ne kaa kar diya....aur Jaadugar ne uske khooni ko badi berahmi se maar diya....par wapas aake uska garbh bhi usse nikal liya.....aur jaate jaate kah gaya........ye apni Maa ko khud dhundh hi lenge......
ek bahut purana tarika hai......kisi cheez ko sadda do aur usme kidde ugao.....haa kidde ugao.....jab wo cheez sadd jaayega to usse kidde nikalne lag jaayenge.....aur wo kidde bade ho jaayenge....
Uss Jadugar ne wahi tarika apnaya tha.....usne uss garbh ko ek bartan mein rakha aur sadne ke liye chod diya.....ussi se bahut se kidde nikle aur wo kidde bade hoke bats ban gaye.......uss jadugar ne khud ki sari shaktiyan unn bats mein se ek ko de di thi.....pata nahi kaun tha ye jaadugar aur kya chahta tha par issi se wo bats ki raani ka janam hua tha....aur phir wo unn sab ko uss jungle mein leke gayi thi jaha pe Jwala rahta tha......
Wo bat to mar gayi......par usne wo powers Rupal ko de diye the.....Rupal jo ki uski Maa thi.....
Aaj raaat ko jab Rupal didi so rahi thi to unko acchanak se pyaas lagne lagi....wo apne room se bahar gayi kyunki room mein paani nahi tha......aur wo kitchen ke pass gayi.....kitchen mein ek khidki thi jaha se unko baahar ka nazara dikha......ek saaya tha....wo ussi khidki ke bahar tha......Didi ko iss baare mein kuch nahi bataya gaya tha....wo usko dekh ke bahar ki oor chali gayi.....darwaja khola aur bahar.....aur to aur uss suraksha kawach se bhi bahar chali gayi....jab ye hua to wo saare bats......wo sab ke sab Didi ko gher liye.........Yaha Jwala jo abhi apne jagah pe tha usko pata chal gaya ki wo musibat mein hai.....usne turant Mujhe bataya aur saath hi wo bhi nikal gaya waha se jaane ko.......
Main jaana nahi chahta tha par iss waqt wo meri Didi thi aur mujhe dekhna to hoga hi.....to maine aankhen band kari aur seedha pahuch gaya ussi jagah pe.....
Saamne ka nazara bahut ajeeb tha.......ek ladki....uske charo taraf bats......wo sab ke sab apne muh khol ke chilla rahe the.......Isse pahle Main kuch karta.....wo bats......wo dhool ban gaye....aur Didi ke sareer pe jake lag gaye.....
Main - kya ye wahi hai jo main soch raha hu......yaha pe bhi ye sab hota hai......
Ye 2 shaktiyon ke milne ka sabse aasan tarika tha.....ek khud ko itna kamzor banna leta hai ki dusra usko apne ander lele.....aur phir wo dono ek ho jaate hai aur dono ki powers bahut badh jaati hai......
Main ye dekh hi raha tha ki wo waha se gaayab ho gayi......
Main yaha waha dekhne laga ki wo kaha gayi hai........par thodi hi der mein wo wahi par thi.....apne haathon mein 2 purane se kulhadi liye hue......
Ye aam kulhadi nahi the.......
Dhruv - ye khooni ghudsawaron ki raani hai.......aapne hi inko ye kulhadi bheji thi....
Main yahi soch raha tha,,,,,,,,hum immortals ko ye sab karne ki anumati nahi thi......par main inn niyamon ko nahi manta tha......mujhe jo accha lagta main wahi karta......uss waqt maine bahut se hatiyaar bahut se logo ko bheje the......kuch Orion pe.....kuch Titan pe.....aur kuch aise hrah jaha pe mujhe nazar rakhne mein mazzza aata tha.......ye unhi mein se ek tha......
wo Mere saamne wo kulhadi liye khadi thi.....
Main - Hmm maine hi diya tha isko......par uske baad se iskke saath sab galat hi hua tha.......tumhe yaad hai iske Pita ke saath.......niyam sahi the....hum immortals ko kabhi bhi tum jaise logo ki jindgi mein nahi aana chahiye tha......Maine niyam tode main to gaya hi tum sab bhi dekho khud ko......tumhare pass sharir nahi hai.....isne apna sab kuch kho diya tha......
Dhruv kuch nahi bola wo bas shant raha.....
Main unn purane dinno ke baare mein soch raha tha......
Rupal didi haathon mein kulhadi liye bas unko dekh rahi thi.......
Main - isko abhi tak shiddhi nahi milli hai Dhruv.......Mainn iski madad kar deta hu.....isse ye apni powers ko ache se samajh paayegi.....
Maine apna haath upar kiya.....aur uske sar pe rakhne hi waala tha ki waha pe darwaja khula aur ander se sab bahar aa gaye......inn sab mein aawaj hone lag gaya tha aur uske wajah se sab jaag gaye the aur jaise hi unhone dekha hum bahar hai wo bahar aa gaye......iss waqt unhone wo nahi dekha tha jo maine dekha tha......wo saaya Didi ke ander chala gaya tha usko nahi dekha unhone......
Next update......ek shaitan aur maara jaayega....par Nix kabile ke wo log jo abhhi bhi Strange world mein the......wo villains banke aane wale hai.......sab uske picche padenge
Next update kal sham tak post karta hu agar ye baarish ruk jaate to
Ayush2017
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I understand bro. To Ab yha aa hi gye hai to aaiye nain11ster bhai ke thread too young too old me
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ye barish khatam hi naa hui to thoda yaha waha hona pad gaya update kal tak aa jaayega
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for completing 300 pages on your thread brother