Fantasy Immortals

Ristrcted · Sep 12, 2020

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Ristrcted · Oct 16, 2021

UPDATE - 109

Sayad abhi bhi.....Dhruv uske ander se meri madad kar raha tha.......

Waise bhi kuch ho ho uska sarir chahe kitne hi insano ke sarir ke tukdo se milke banaya hua ho......par Dhruv ki asal kshamta ko khud mein kaid kar paana wo bhi tab jab pahle se hi ander naa jaane kitni hi aatmayein hai aasan nahi hone wala tha......

Par ye sab jo kuch bhi tha......wo sab bas mere khayal hi to the.....abhi tak Main confirm nahi hua tha......sayad ye jo bhi uske chahre se nikal raha tha wo kuch aur hi ho....

Wo iss waqt wahi jamin pe baitha hua tha aur haanf raha tha.....Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha.....Main ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki uske sharir ko jyada nuksan pahuchaya jaaye......wo apne tarah ka iss jagah pe eklauta tha......usko kam se kam nuksan pahuchana ye meri soch thi.....haa par tabhi tak jab tak wo mujhe yaa kisi aur ko chot naa pahuchaye....

Main inn baaton pe gaur kar raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mehsoos hua.....Mujhe aisa laga jaise koi mujhe kah raha ho.....bas ek baar aur......

Maine aas pass dekha.....par koi bhi nahi tha waha pe.....Main yaha pe jab se aaya hu tab se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par....iss feeling se jyada important chizz mere saamne thi to ispe dhyaan naa ke barabar de raha tha Main.....isse pahle bhi ek baar mujhe ek aawaj sunai di thi.....aur abhi ye jo hua wo.....

Jab Maine kuch nahi kiya.....to mujhe mere kaano mein aawaj aayi wahi aawaj jo iske pahle aayi thi.....

" Maine kaha naa bas ek baar aur....."

Iss awaj ke baad jaise Mujpe mera koi control hi nahi raha......aur Maine....Apna haath aage kiya aur sidha.....ek bada sa black fire ball banaya aur iss baar uske aas pass nahi theek uske upar de maara......

Slayer jo baitha hua tha jamin pe abhi wo iss baar chatpatane lag gaya......wo aag aur dark power iss baar....iss baar wo uspe asar kar rahi thi.....aisa nahi tha pahle nahi kar rahi thi.....lekin iss baar uska asar mujhe dikhai de raha tha.....

Wo aag bas badhti hi jaa rahi thi shuru mein to usne hilne ki koshish kari thi aur wo hilla bhi tha.....par uske kuch der baad.....wo bas chilla hi raha tha aur apne jagah pe thoda bahut hill raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise wo bandha hua ho kisi chizz se......aur tabhi achanak se.....

"Band kardo ab...."

Wapas se mujhe ye aawaj sunai di....aur maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur iss baar bas Dark power hi tha.....usne uss aag ko khatam kar diya.....

Yaha uss aag ki laptein khatam hui hi thi ki aachanak se Slayer ka sarir akadne sa laga.....uska chahra ekdum se upar ki taraf ho gaya aur haath sarir se bilkul durr jaise kissi ne rassi se bandh rakhe ho aur ab unko khinch raha tha.....par baat yahi pe khatam nahi hui.....

Upar ki oor dekhte hue hi uski aankhon se aur muh se dher saari roshani nikalne lag gayi......roshani ki matra bahut hi adheek thi....

Wo roshani nahi thi......wo saare wahi aatmaein thi jo uske ander fanse hue the.....wo itni raftaar se bahar aa rahe the iss wajah se unko dekhna muskil tha......

Main unhi sab ko dekh raha tha...alag alag chahre.....kuch insani to kuch dusre jeev....wo bas bahar aate jaa rahe the.....maine dekha unme se kuch wo uss tarah ke bhi dikh rahe the jaise Dark world se aaye log dikh rahe the.....

Wo sab bas uske ander se bahar aate aur upar ki taraf jaa rahe the.....upar jitne bhi log iss waqt lad rahe the.....wo sab isko dekh ke shant ho chukke the......Khud Lucifer to yaha pe nahi aaya tha par agar hota to iss waqt wo bhi bas rukka hua hi hota.....

Maine iss dauran kuch aur bhi dekha.....unn aatmaon ke upar jaane ke karan jo roshani chahro taraf phaili hui thi uske karaan hi mujhe ek parchai dikhai di thi.....par sayad usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha aur issi wajah se wo turant hi waha se gayab ho gayi....

Maine yaha waha dekha.....uss parchai ko dhundhne ki koshish kari.....par Mujhe wo kahi bhi nahi dikhe...

Jab Meri nazar wapas se Slayer ki taraf gayi to ab uske haath uske chahre pe the aur wo koshish kar raha tha apne haathon se apne muh ko aur aankhon ko dhakne ki par usse nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Wo aatmainn bas nikalti hi jaa rahi thi theek usi taraf se jaise sode ke bottle ka dakkan kholne pe uske ander ka gan bahar aane lag jaata hai.....

Ye bas hota hi chala gaya......Main usko dekhta raha uski cheekhen sunn raha tha.....

Jwala jo abhi bhi mere ander tha......wo bhi mujhse alag ho gaya......aur abhi bas wo ek chote se cheel ke roop mein tha......mere kandhe pe baitha hua.....Hum dono bas usko dekh rahe the.....

Main - Jwala tum yaha pe kaise.....

Jwala ne meri taraf dekha.....aur bas phir waha se udd gaya wo....

Main kuch samajh nahi paaya.....ye aise kaise chala gaya.....

Main usko bulata raha par wo wapas aaya hi nahi bas uss jagah se udd kar gayab ho gaya jaise......aur mujhe wahi chod gaya DB ke sath jo abhi bhi apne kaam mein laga hua tha aur Slayer ke saath jiska kaam syad khatam hone wala tha......

Meri aawaj se Jwala to nahi aaya par haa Old Owl waha pe jarur aa gaya tha.....

Usne bhi dekha tha sab kuch ekdum se rukk gaya hai koi bhi abhi lad nahi raha tha bas saare ke saare log uss Slayer ko hi dekh rahe the....haa wo DB ko chod ke.....to wo mere pass aa gaya.....

Old Owl - Kya hua Prateek waha kya dekh rahe ho.....ye iske saath aisa tumne kiya kya....

Main - Hmm....sayad....Old Owl ye batao kya Jwala yaha pe aa sakta hai abhi.....

Old Owl - Haa kyun nahi Main usko abhi yaha pe le aata hu.....

Usne bola aur Portal kholne lag gaya......ki Maine usko rokka....

Main - Wo khud se nahi aa sakta kya....

Meri iss baat pe wo mujhe apni gardan tedhi karke dekhne laga.....

Old Owl - Kaisi baat kar rahe ho.....iss jagah pe tum bhi khud se nahi aa sakte the.....Main leke aaya hu tumhe.....Jwala khud se kaise aayega yaha pe.....

Main - par ye....kya tumne mujhe Slayer se ladte hue dekha tha....

Old owl - Nahi Main tumhari hi sunke yaha se waha gaya tha....aur waise bhi yaha jamin pe bahut dhool udd rahi thi upar jyada kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha wo to ab sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai.....

Main - Tumhe pakka yakkin hai naa Jwala yaha nahi aa sakta.....

Old Owl - Tumhe yakkin nahi to tum usko yaha bulla ke dekho.....wo nahi aa paayega yaha pe.....ye jagah hi kuch aisi hai....

Mujhe abhi bhi yakkin nahi hua iss wajah se Maine pukara usko aur koi jawab nahi aaya.....

Main - Old Owl wo yaha tha.....hum dono ek saath milke lade Slayer se....aur uske baad wo chote se cheel mein badal ke mere.....yaha issi kandhe pe baitha hua tha.....phir wo udd ke chala gaya.....Main usko pukarta raha.....par usne koi jawab nahi diya.....bas chala gaya....

Old Owl - Aisa kaise ho sakta....ye kya hai.....

Wo abhi kuch aur hi bol raha tha par usko kuch dikha aur usne apni baat ko badal diya.....Maine uss jagah dekha jaha pe wo ishara kar raha tha.....waha pe 2 roshani ke golle the.....ek thoda pinkish tha aur dusre wala bluish....dono hi yaha waha hill rahe the.....

Maine Slayer ki taraf dekha to ab uske ander se roshani ke saath saath kuch gole bhi bahar aa rahe the jaise mere pass the ussi ke tarah ke.....aur wo bahar aake uske upar ek chakkar lagate aur phir....phir waha se chale jaa rahe thebahut tezz speed mein......par ek gola tha jo uske ander se bahar to aa gaya tha lekin wapas ander jaana chah raha tha halke kale rang ka tha wo gola......par bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi wo ander nahi jaa paa raha tha kyunki ander se bas golle bahar hi aate jaa rahe the aur sayad usme utni takat nahi thi ki wo rokk paaye unn sab ko aur ander chali jaaye.....Maine dekha jo do gole mere pass the wo dono uss kaale golle ke pass gaye....aur ek pal ko to aisa laga jaise wo tinno hi ek ho gaye.....aur phir unme se chingari nikli aur thoda sa dhuwan nikla...aur phir wo alag ho gaye.....Uss kaale rang ke gole ka kalapan pahle se aur kam ho gaya tha wahi baaki ke dono golo ka rang kuch kuch gadha sa ho chukka tha.....aur phir wo mere pass aa gaye....aur wo kaale rang ka gola usne 3-4 aur chakkar lagaye Slayer ke uske baad wo bhi aasman ki taraf chala gaya......aur wahi pe kahi gum ho gaya baaki sabhi ke jaise.....

Main jaanta tha ye do gole kya hai....yaa ye kahu ki kaun hai.....Mujhe inse milna tha....aur naa sirf milna tha balki kuch logo ko inse milwana bhi tha.......

Main - Old Owl Bua ke pass jaao.....aur unse kaho ki wo sabhi gharwalo ko ikkatha kare.....Daksh Mama aur Pankaj ko bhi....

Old Owl - Main tumhe yaha pe akela chod ke.....

Main - iss baare mein hum pahle baat kar chukke hai aur tumhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baat manni hi hogi to jaao aur Bua se kaho jo Maine kaha hai.....agar sawal pucche to bas wahi baat wapas se kah dena...aur uske baad mere pass wapas aa jaana....

Old Owl jaane ke liye taiyaar tha par usse pahle wo piche mudda aur isse pahle wo wapas se mere charo taraf wo ghera banata.....Maine usko rokk diya.....aur jaldi se jaane ko kaha......

Main - Kya wo Sofia thi......

Mere itna kahne se wo dono golle mere charo taraf ghumne lag gaye....Matlab wo Sofia hi thi......

Main - Kya Slayer ke ander abhi bhi Dhruv theek hai.....

Wo dono golle abhi bhi mere charo taraf ghumte rahe......matlab wo theek tha ander.....ye acchi baat thi....

Main - Main aap dono ko baaki sab se milwana chahta hu.....sayad aap bhi yahi chahte hai.....

Wo dono waise hi ghumte rahe.....gol gol mere charo taraf....

Slayer abhi bhi ussi tarah baitha apne chahre ko dhakne ki koshish kar raha tha par ab uska sarir jaise kamzzor hota jaa raha tha.....uski haddiyan dikhne lag gayi thi......sareer sukh chukka tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte.....wo nicche ki taraf gir gaya......par wo roshaniya abhi bhi....waise hi nikal rahi thi.....kuch deer ke baad wo band ho gayi....aur Slayer abhi bas ek haddiyon ka dhancha jaisa dikhai de raha tha saamne......

Thodi der tak jab uska sarir waise hi waha raha uske baad wapas se uska sarir pahle jaisa hone lag gaya.....jo abhi haddiyon ka dhancha dikhai de raha tha wo wapas se apne pahle jaise roop mein aane lag gaya tha.....haa psr aankhon ka rang badal gaya tha......Slayer ko banane ke liye Sofia ne dono tarah ke jaadu ka use kiya tha....par ab.......ab uske ander Dhruv tha to dark magic naa ke barabar hone lag gayi thi....kahte hai aankhon mein sarir ka haal dikhai deta hai bas wahi baat thi.....wo uske nader maujood saari energies ko dikha raha tha.....par abhi usne koi ek colour choose nahi kiya tha....wo bas badalta jaa raha tha.....

Main apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha uske sarir ko bante hue....

Abhi yaha pe ye ho hi raha tha ki DB apne jagah se khada hua.....matlab uska kaam pura ho chukka tha usne Fumos ke energy source ko kaabu mein kar liya tha.....aur shant bhi kar diya tha....yaa ye kaha jaaye usne usko sulla diya....

Agar aisa nahi hota to sayad abhi main aur wo khud aur baaki ke sab jo yaha Fumos pe the....wo sab ke sab yaha waha antariksh mein tairti hui patheron pe hote......naa ki iss pure planet pe.....

Uske aisa karne ke baad waha aas pass jo bhi pathrili jameen thi unke pass bhi chote chote paudhe dikhai dene lag gaye the......

Upar jo aasmaan mein Fumos ke log the.....wo sab ke sab baarish ki bundon ki tarah jameen pe girne lag gaye the....Maine jab wo dekha to meri nazarein Leader ko dhundhne lag gayi.....agar baaki sabhi ki powers jaa rahi thi to uski bhi jaane wali thi....aur wo bhi upar aasman se girne wala tha.....par Maine dekha pass ka hi ped achanak se bada hone lag gaya aur uncha hota jaa raha tha...upar dekha to waha pe Leader tha....aur isse pahle wo nicche girta usne uss ped ko pakad liya tha.....

Ye DB kar raha tha uss ped ke saath......aur jab Leader ne ped ko pakad liya to DB ne usko nicche uttar diya....wo nicche aaya par sath mein Demos wale bhi aa rahe the uspe hamla karne ko aakhir wo abhi tak unke hisab se iss jagah ka leader tha aur jung mein jab tak aap yaa to mar nahi jaate yaa haar kabl nahi karte tab tak aap nahi haarte ho.....to wo to yaha pe isko maarne aa rahe the....

Main kuch karta isse pahle waha pe lage pedon ne wapas se apna kamal dikhaya.....wo jhoom rahe the.....unki pattiyan unke tanne kisi hathiyar ki tarah kaam kar rahi thi......kabhi koi ped kisi Demos wale ko apne pattiyon mein samma leta to kabhi kisi ko apne tanne se maar ke dusre taraf pahucha deta.....

Demos ki aadhi sena inhi sab ke chappet mein aa chukki thi.....aur kyunki unhone aisa kuch pahle dekha nahi tha....iss wajah se unhone waha se bhag jaane mein hi apni salamati samjhi aur bas.....saare ke saare ho gaye 9....2....11...

Iss baat se bekhabar ki jab Lucifer unko binna jeet hasil kiye hue paayega....to wo unka kya haal karega.....

DB abhi bhi uss Suraksha dhere ke ander hi tha.....aur wahi se ye sab kar raha tha.....usne wo ghera toda.....aur usme se bahar aaya.....usne ek nazar Slayer pe daali phir mujhe dekha.....

DB - Tum dono kahi lad to nahi rahe the naa.....

Main - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....usne bhi mere pass unn do gollon ko dekha....aur bas dekhta raha....phir apni gardan hilate hue aage badha.....

DB - Maine iske baare mein nahi socha tha.....

Mujhe nahi pata ye kya soch raha tha par kuch baatein sirf aur sirf immortals ko hi pata hoti hai.....aur ye baat bhi unhi mein se ek thi.....mujhe yaad nahi kisi bhi Immortal ne iss baare mein kisi dusre ko koi baat batai thi.....

Leader - DB.....Kya ab sab theek hai.....kya Main aazad hu....aur Fumos ka kya hua....

DB - Aap bataiye.....kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aapko......

Leader - Main.....main theek hu.....haa thodi kamzori si lag rahi hai mujhe.....

DB - wo iss wajah se kyunki ab aapko Fumos ki taraf se milne wali powers nahi mil rahi hai......ab wo saari powers uss ped ko mil rahi hai....aur wo ped.....unn sabhi powers ko aas pass bikher de raha hai....

Leader - To kya Fumos abhi bhi......

DB - Wo gahri neend mein so raha hai....aur abhi usko bahut waqt lagne wala hai......

Abhi hum baatein kar rahe the ki Slayer ka sarir wapas se hilne lag gaya aur wo khada ho gaya......

Leader ne bhi dekha usko.....

Leader - To ab iska kya....

Main - Iski chinta mat kariye ye hamare saath hi hai....

Dhruv(Slayer) - Ha Main aapke saath hi hu....

Yaha ka kaam mere hisab se pura ho chukka tha.....Main bas uss Old owl ka wait kar raha tha.....pata nahi usko kya hua......ek kaam diya tha usko aur usme bhi wo itna waqt laga raha tha.....

Wahi yaha se durr.....

Bahar se jitne bhi log Fumos pe nazrein gadayein hue the......unko ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....Fumos bilkul se badal gaya tha.......har jagah pe ped hi ped the ab.....pura planet hi jungle jaisa dikhai de raha tha bahar se.....ander kya chal raha tha aur kya nahi ye sab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kisi ko....

Kuch ko lagne laga sayad Lucifer ne jeet liya iss planet ko wahi kuch logo ko lag raha tha ki Fumos ne apna roop badal liya unn sab ko harane ke baad......

To upar to bahut halchal thi.....har koi janna chah raha tha par kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha......

Lekin ek banda tha.....asal mein do the.....ek to Lucifer aur dusra koi aur.......

Lucifer to gusse se pagal ho gaya tha aur apne logo ko maar raha tha.....wahi dusra abhi jo hua wo dekh ke pagal hua jaa raha tha......

Uske hisab se waqt aa gaya tha iss jagah ko tabah kar dene ka.....nahi to Fumos baaki planets pe kabza kar leta.....lekin usne dekha Fumos shant ho gaya tha.....so gaya tha.....aur ye baat usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi.......

Par wo wapas se waha aana nahi chahta tha......usko iss baat ki phikar thi ki kahi usko dekh naa liya jaaye......

Next update mein ek baar Demos ka nazara dekhne chalenge aur Fumos pe kuch kaam bacche hai wo bhi dekh lenge.....saath mein kya Prateek apne Maa Baap ke khooni ke sarir ko apne ghar pe le jaa paayega.....

Raja maurya · Oct 17, 2021

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UPDATE - 109

Sayad abhi bhi.....Dhruv uske ander se meri madad kar raha tha.......

Waise bhi kuch ho ho uska sarir chahe kitne hi insano ke sarir ke tukdo se milke banaya hua ho......par Dhruv ki asal kshamta ko khud mein kaid kar paana wo bhi tab jab pahle se hi ander naa jaane kitni hi aatmayein hai aasan nahi hone wala tha......

Par ye sab jo kuch bhi tha......wo sab bas mere khayal hi to the.....abhi tak Main confirm nahi hua tha......sayad ye jo bhi uske chahre se nikal raha tha wo kuch aur hi ho....

Wo iss waqt wahi jamin pe baitha hua tha aur haanf raha tha.....Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha.....Main ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki uske sharir ko jyada nuksan pahuchaya jaaye......wo apne tarah ka iss jagah pe eklauta tha......usko kam se kam nuksan pahuchana ye meri soch thi.....haa par tabhi tak jab tak wo mujhe yaa kisi aur ko chot naa pahuchaye....

Main inn baaton pe gaur kar raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mehsoos hua.....Mujhe aisa laga jaise koi mujhe kah raha ho.....bas ek baar aur......

Maine aas pass dekha.....par koi bhi nahi tha waha pe.....Main yaha pe jab se aaya hu tab se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par....iss feeling se jyada important chizz mere saamne thi to ispe dhyaan naa ke barabar de raha tha Main.....isse pahle bhi ek baar mujhe ek aawaj sunai di thi.....aur abhi ye jo hua wo.....

Jab Maine kuch nahi kiya.....to mujhe mere kaano mein aawaj aayi wahi aawaj jo iske pahle aayi thi.....

" Maine kaha naa bas ek baar aur....."

Iss awaj ke baad jaise Mujpe mera koi control hi nahi raha......aur Maine....Apna haath aage kiya aur sidha.....ek bada sa black fire ball banaya aur iss baar uske aas pass nahi theek uske upar de maara......

Slayer jo baitha hua tha jamin pe abhi wo iss baar chatpatane lag gaya......wo aag aur dark power iss baar....iss baar wo uspe asar kar rahi thi.....aisa nahi tha pahle nahi kar rahi thi.....lekin iss baar uska asar mujhe dikhai de raha tha.....

Wo aag bas badhti hi jaa rahi thi shuru mein to usne hilne ki koshish kari thi aur wo hilla bhi tha.....par uske kuch der baad.....wo bas chilla hi raha tha aur apne jagah pe thoda bahut hill raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise wo bandha hua ho kisi chizz se......aur tabhi achanak se.....

"Band kardo ab...."

Wapas se mujhe ye aawaj sunai di....aur maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur iss baar bas Dark power hi tha.....usne uss aag ko khatam kar diya.....

Yaha uss aag ki laptein khatam hui hi thi ki aachanak se Slayer ka sarir akadne sa laga.....uska chahra ekdum se upar ki taraf ho gaya aur haath sarir se bilkul durr jaise kissi ne rassi se bandh rakhe ho aur ab unko khinch raha tha.....par baat yahi pe khatam nahi hui.....

Upar ki oor dekhte hue hi uski aankhon se aur muh se dher saari roshani nikalne lag gayi......roshani ki matra bahut hi adheek thi....

Wo roshani nahi thi......wo saare wahi aatmaein thi jo uske ander fanse hue the.....wo itni raftaar se bahar aa rahe the iss wajah se unko dekhna muskil tha......

Main unhi sab ko dekh raha tha...alag alag chahre.....kuch insani to kuch dusre jeev....wo bas bahar aate jaa rahe the.....maine dekha unme se kuch wo uss tarah ke bhi dikh rahe the jaise Dark world se aaye log dikh rahe the.....

Wo sab bas uske ander se bahar aate aur upar ki taraf jaa rahe the.....upar jitne bhi log iss waqt lad rahe the.....wo sab isko dekh ke shant ho chukke the......Khud Lucifer to yaha pe nahi aaya tha par agar hota to iss waqt wo bhi bas rukka hua hi hota.....

Maine iss dauran kuch aur bhi dekha.....unn aatmaon ke upar jaane ke karan jo roshani chahro taraf phaili hui thi uske karaan hi mujhe ek parchai dikhai di thi.....par sayad usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha aur issi wajah se wo turant hi waha se gayab ho gayi....

Maine yaha waha dekha.....uss parchai ko dhundhne ki koshish kari.....par Mujhe wo kahi bhi nahi dikhe...

Jab Meri nazar wapas se Slayer ki taraf gayi to ab uske haath uske chahre pe the aur wo koshish kar raha tha apne haathon se apne muh ko aur aankhon ko dhakne ki par usse nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Wo aatmainn bas nikalti hi jaa rahi thi theek usi taraf se jaise sode ke bottle ka dakkan kholne pe uske ander ka gan bahar aane lag jaata hai.....

Ye bas hota hi chala gaya......Main usko dekhta raha uski cheekhen sunn raha tha.....

Jwala jo abhi bhi mere ander tha......wo bhi mujhse alag ho gaya......aur abhi bas wo ek chote se cheel ke roop mein tha......mere kandhe pe baitha hua.....Hum dono bas usko dekh rahe the.....

Main - Jwala tum yaha pe kaise.....

Jwala ne meri taraf dekha.....aur bas phir waha se udd gaya wo....

Main kuch samajh nahi paaya.....ye aise kaise chala gaya.....

Main usko bulata raha par wo wapas aaya hi nahi bas uss jagah se udd kar gayab ho gaya jaise......aur mujhe wahi chod gaya DB ke sath jo abhi bhi apne kaam mein laga hua tha aur Slayer ke saath jiska kaam syad khatam hone wala tha......

Meri aawaj se Jwala to nahi aaya par haa Old Owl waha pe jarur aa gaya tha.....

Usne bhi dekha tha sab kuch ekdum se rukk gaya hai koi bhi abhi lad nahi raha tha bas saare ke saare log uss Slayer ko hi dekh rahe the....haa wo DB ko chod ke.....to wo mere pass aa gaya.....

Old Owl - Kya hua Prateek waha kya dekh rahe ho.....ye iske saath aisa tumne kiya kya....

Main - Hmm....sayad....Old Owl ye batao kya Jwala yaha pe aa sakta hai abhi.....

Old Owl - Haa kyun nahi Main usko abhi yaha pe le aata hu.....

Usne bola aur Portal kholne lag gaya......ki Maine usko rokka....

Main - Wo khud se nahi aa sakta kya....

Meri iss baat pe wo mujhe apni gardan tedhi karke dekhne laga.....

Old Owl - Kaisi baat kar rahe ho.....iss jagah pe tum bhi khud se nahi aa sakte the.....Main leke aaya hu tumhe.....Jwala khud se kaise aayega yaha pe.....

Main - par ye....kya tumne mujhe Slayer se ladte hue dekha tha....

Old owl - Nahi Main tumhari hi sunke yaha se waha gaya tha....aur waise bhi yaha jamin pe bahut dhool udd rahi thi upar jyada kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha wo to ab sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai.....

Main - Tumhe pakka yakkin hai naa Jwala yaha nahi aa sakta.....

Old Owl - Tumhe yakkin nahi to tum usko yaha bulla ke dekho.....wo nahi aa paayega yaha pe.....ye jagah hi kuch aisi hai....

Mujhe abhi bhi yakkin nahi hua iss wajah se Maine pukara usko aur koi jawab nahi aaya.....

Main - Old Owl wo yaha tha.....hum dono ek saath milke lade Slayer se....aur uske baad wo chote se cheel mein badal ke mere.....yaha issi kandhe pe baitha hua tha.....phir wo udd ke chala gaya.....Main usko pukarta raha.....par usne koi jawab nahi diya.....bas chala gaya....

Old Owl - Aisa kaise ho sakta....ye kya hai.....

Wo abhi kuch aur hi bol raha tha par usko kuch dikha aur usne apni baat ko badal diya.....Maine uss jagah dekha jaha pe wo ishara kar raha tha.....waha pe 2 roshani ke golle the.....ek thoda pinkish tha aur dusre wala bluish....dono hi yaha waha hill rahe the.....

Maine Slayer ki taraf dekha to ab uske ander se roshani ke saath saath kuch gole bhi bahar aa rahe the jaise mere pass the ussi ke tarah ke.....aur wo bahar aake uske upar ek chakkar lagate aur phir....phir waha se chale jaa rahe thebahut tezz speed mein......par ek gola tha jo uske ander se bahar to aa gaya tha lekin wapas ander jaana chah raha tha halke kale rang ka tha wo gola......par bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi wo ander nahi jaa paa raha tha kyunki ander se bas golle bahar hi aate jaa rahe the aur sayad usme utni takat nahi thi ki wo rokk paaye unn sab ko aur ander chali jaaye.....Maine dekha jo do gole mere pass the wo dono uss kaale golle ke pass gaye....aur ek pal ko to aisa laga jaise wo tinno hi ek ho gaye.....aur phir unme se chingari nikli aur thoda sa dhuwan nikla...aur phir wo alag ho gaye.....Uss kaale rang ke gole ka kalapan pahle se aur kam ho gaya tha wahi baaki ke dono golo ka rang kuch kuch gadha sa ho chukka tha.....aur phir wo mere pass aa gaye....aur wo kaale rang ka gola usne 3-4 aur chakkar lagaye Slayer ke uske baad wo bhi aasman ki taraf chala gaya......aur wahi pe kahi gum ho gaya baaki sabhi ke jaise.....

Main jaanta tha ye do gole kya hai....yaa ye kahu ki kaun hai.....Mujhe inse milna tha....aur naa sirf milna tha balki kuch logo ko inse milwana bhi tha.......

Main - Old Owl Bua ke pass jaao.....aur unse kaho ki wo sabhi gharwalo ko ikkatha kare.....Daksh Mama aur Pankaj ko bhi....

Old Owl - Main tumhe yaha pe akela chod ke.....

Main - iss baare mein hum pahle baat kar chukke hai aur tumhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baat manni hi hogi to jaao aur Bua se kaho jo Maine kaha hai.....agar sawal pucche to bas wahi baat wapas se kah dena...aur uske baad mere pass wapas aa jaana....

Old Owl jaane ke liye taiyaar tha par usse pahle wo piche mudda aur isse pahle wo wapas se mere charo taraf wo ghera banata.....Maine usko rokk diya.....aur jaldi se jaane ko kaha......

Main - Kya wo Sofia thi......

Mere itna kahne se wo dono golle mere charo taraf ghumne lag gaye....Matlab wo Sofia hi thi......

Main - Kya Slayer ke ander abhi bhi Dhruv theek hai.....

Wo dono golle abhi bhi mere charo taraf ghumte rahe......matlab wo theek tha ander.....ye acchi baat thi....

Main - Main aap dono ko baaki sab se milwana chahta hu.....sayad aap bhi yahi chahte hai.....

Wo dono waise hi ghumte rahe.....gol gol mere charo taraf....

Slayer abhi bhi ussi tarah baitha apne chahre ko dhakne ki koshish kar raha tha par ab uska sarir jaise kamzzor hota jaa raha tha.....uski haddiyan dikhne lag gayi thi......sareer sukh chukka tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte.....wo nicche ki taraf gir gaya......par wo roshaniya abhi bhi....waise hi nikal rahi thi.....kuch deer ke baad wo band ho gayi....aur Slayer abhi bas ek haddiyon ka dhancha jaisa dikhai de raha tha saamne......

Thodi der tak jab uska sarir waise hi waha raha uske baad wapas se uska sarir pahle jaisa hone lag gaya.....jo abhi haddiyon ka dhancha dikhai de raha tha wo wapas se apne pahle jaise roop mein aane lag gaya tha.....haa psr aankhon ka rang badal gaya tha......Slayer ko banane ke liye Sofia ne dono tarah ke jaadu ka use kiya tha....par ab.......ab uske ander Dhruv tha to dark magic naa ke barabar hone lag gayi thi....kahte hai aankhon mein sarir ka haal dikhai deta hai bas wahi baat thi.....wo uske nader maujood saari energies ko dikha raha tha.....par abhi usne koi ek colour choose nahi kiya tha....wo bas badalta jaa raha tha.....

Main apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha uske sarir ko bante hue....

Abhi yaha pe ye ho hi raha tha ki DB apne jagah se khada hua.....matlab uska kaam pura ho chukka tha usne Fumos ke energy source ko kaabu mein kar liya tha.....aur shant bhi kar diya tha....yaa ye kaha jaaye usne usko sulla diya....

Agar aisa nahi hota to sayad abhi main aur wo khud aur baaki ke sab jo yaha Fumos pe the....wo sab ke sab yaha waha antariksh mein tairti hui patheron pe hote......naa ki iss pure planet pe.....

Uske aisa karne ke baad waha aas pass jo bhi pathrili jameen thi unke pass bhi chote chote paudhe dikhai dene lag gaye the......

Upar jo aasmaan mein Fumos ke log the.....wo sab ke sab baarish ki bundon ki tarah jameen pe girne lag gaye the....Maine jab wo dekha to meri nazarein Leader ko dhundhne lag gayi.....agar baaki sabhi ki powers jaa rahi thi to uski bhi jaane wali thi....aur wo bhi upar aasman se girne wala tha.....par Maine dekha pass ka hi ped achanak se bada hone lag gaya aur uncha hota jaa raha tha...upar dekha to waha pe Leader tha....aur isse pahle wo nicche girta usne uss ped ko pakad liya tha.....

Ye DB kar raha tha uss ped ke saath......aur jab Leader ne ped ko pakad liya to DB ne usko nicche uttar diya....wo nicche aaya par sath mein Demos wale bhi aa rahe the uspe hamla karne ko aakhir wo abhi tak unke hisab se iss jagah ka leader tha aur jung mein jab tak aap yaa to mar nahi jaate yaa haar kabl nahi karte tab tak aap nahi haarte ho.....to wo to yaha pe isko maarne aa rahe the....

Main kuch karta isse pahle waha pe lage pedon ne wapas se apna kamal dikhaya.....wo jhoom rahe the.....unki pattiyan unke tanne kisi hathiyar ki tarah kaam kar rahi thi......kabhi koi ped kisi Demos wale ko apne pattiyon mein samma leta to kabhi kisi ko apne tanne se maar ke dusre taraf pahucha deta.....

Demos ki aadhi sena inhi sab ke chappet mein aa chukki thi.....aur kyunki unhone aisa kuch pahle dekha nahi tha....iss wajah se unhone waha se bhag jaane mein hi apni salamati samjhi aur bas.....saare ke saare ho gaye 9....2....11...

Iss baat se bekhabar ki jab Lucifer unko binna jeet hasil kiye hue paayega....to wo unka kya haal karega.....

DB abhi bhi uss Suraksha dhere ke ander hi tha.....aur wahi se ye sab kar raha tha.....usne wo ghera toda.....aur usme se bahar aaya.....usne ek nazar Slayer pe daali phir mujhe dekha.....

DB - Tum dono kahi lad to nahi rahe the naa.....

Main - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....usne bhi mere pass unn do gollon ko dekha....aur bas dekhta raha....phir apni gardan hilate hue aage badha.....

DB - Maine iske baare mein nahi socha tha.....

Mujhe nahi pata ye kya soch raha tha par kuch baatein sirf aur sirf immortals ko hi pata hoti hai.....aur ye baat bhi unhi mein se ek thi.....mujhe yaad nahi kisi bhi Immortal ne iss baare mein kisi dusre ko koi baat batai thi.....

Leader - DB.....Kya ab sab theek hai.....kya Main aazad hu....aur Fumos ka kya hua....

DB - Aap bataiye.....kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aapko......

Leader - Main.....main theek hu.....haa thodi kamzori si lag rahi hai mujhe.....

DB - wo iss wajah se kyunki ab aapko Fumos ki taraf se milne wali powers nahi mil rahi hai......ab wo saari powers uss ped ko mil rahi hai....aur wo ped.....unn sabhi powers ko aas pass bikher de raha hai....

Leader - To kya Fumos abhi bhi......

DB - Wo gahri neend mein so raha hai....aur abhi usko bahut waqt lagne wala hai......

Abhi hum baatein kar rahe the ki Slayer ka sarir wapas se hilne lag gaya aur wo khada ho gaya......

Leader ne bhi dekha usko.....

Leader - To ab iska kya....

Main - Iski chinta mat kariye ye hamare saath hi hai....

Dhruv(Slayer) - Ha Main aapke saath hi hu....

Yaha ka kaam mere hisab se pura ho chukka tha.....Main bas uss Old owl ka wait kar raha tha.....pata nahi usko kya hua......ek kaam diya tha usko aur usme bhi wo itna waqt laga raha tha.....

Wahi yaha se durr.....

Bahar se jitne bhi log Fumos pe nazrein gadayein hue the......unko ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....Fumos bilkul se badal gaya tha.......har jagah pe ped hi ped the ab.....pura planet hi jungle jaisa dikhai de raha tha bahar se.....ander kya chal raha tha aur kya nahi ye sab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kisi ko....

Kuch ko lagne laga sayad Lucifer ne jeet liya iss planet ko wahi kuch logo ko lag raha tha ki Fumos ne apna roop badal liya unn sab ko harane ke baad......

To upar to bahut halchal thi.....har koi janna chah raha tha par kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha......

Lekin ek banda tha.....asal mein do the.....ek to Lucifer aur dusra koi aur.......

Lucifer to gusse se pagal ho gaya tha aur apne logo ko maar raha tha.....wahi dusra abhi jo hua wo dekh ke pagal hua jaa raha tha......

Uske hisab se waqt aa gaya tha iss jagah ko tabah kar dene ka.....nahi to Fumos baaki planets pe kabza kar leta.....lekin usne dekha Fumos shant ho gaya tha.....so gaya tha.....aur ye baat usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi.......

Par wo wapas se waha aana nahi chahta tha......usko iss baat ki phikar thi ki kahi usko dekh naa liya jaaye......

Next update mein ek baar Demos ka nazara dekhne chalenge aur Fumos pe kuch kaam bacche hai wo bhi dekh lenge.....saath mein kya Prateek apne Maa Baap ke khooni ke sarir ko apne ghar pe le jaa paayega.....

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Sayad abhi bhi.....Dhruv uske ander se meri madad kar raha tha.......

Waise bhi kuch ho ho uska sarir chahe kitne hi insano ke sarir ke tukdo se milke banaya hua ho......par Dhruv ki asal kshamta ko khud mein kaid kar paana wo bhi tab jab pahle se hi ander naa jaane kitni hi aatmayein hai aasan nahi hone wala tha......

Par ye sab jo kuch bhi tha......wo sab bas mere khayal hi to the.....abhi tak Main confirm nahi hua tha......sayad ye jo bhi uske chahre se nikal raha tha wo kuch aur hi ho....

Wo iss waqt wahi jamin pe baitha hua tha aur haanf raha tha.....Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha.....Main ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki uske sharir ko jyada nuksan pahuchaya jaaye......wo apne tarah ka iss jagah pe eklauta tha......usko kam se kam nuksan pahuchana ye meri soch thi.....haa par tabhi tak jab tak wo mujhe yaa kisi aur ko chot naa pahuchaye....

Main inn baaton pe gaur kar raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mehsoos hua.....Mujhe aisa laga jaise koi mujhe kah raha ho.....bas ek baar aur......

Maine aas pass dekha.....par koi bhi nahi tha waha pe.....Main yaha pe jab se aaya hu tab se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par....iss feeling se jyada important chizz mere saamne thi to ispe dhyaan naa ke barabar de raha tha Main.....isse pahle bhi ek baar mujhe ek aawaj sunai di thi.....aur abhi ye jo hua wo.....

Jab Maine kuch nahi kiya.....to mujhe mere kaano mein aawaj aayi wahi aawaj jo iske pahle aayi thi.....

" Maine kaha naa bas ek baar aur....."

Iss awaj ke baad jaise Mujpe mera koi control hi nahi raha......aur Maine....Apna haath aage kiya aur sidha.....ek bada sa black fire ball banaya aur iss baar uske aas pass nahi theek uske upar de maara......

Slayer jo baitha hua tha jamin pe abhi wo iss baar chatpatane lag gaya......wo aag aur dark power iss baar....iss baar wo uspe asar kar rahi thi.....aisa nahi tha pahle nahi kar rahi thi.....lekin iss baar uska asar mujhe dikhai de raha tha.....

Wo aag bas badhti hi jaa rahi thi shuru mein to usne hilne ki koshish kari thi aur wo hilla bhi tha.....par uske kuch der baad.....wo bas chilla hi raha tha aur apne jagah pe thoda bahut hill raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise wo bandha hua ho kisi chizz se......aur tabhi achanak se.....

"Band kardo ab...."

Wapas se mujhe ye aawaj sunai di....aur maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur iss baar bas Dark power hi tha.....usne uss aag ko khatam kar diya.....

Yaha uss aag ki laptein khatam hui hi thi ki aachanak se Slayer ka sarir akadne sa laga.....uska chahra ekdum se upar ki taraf ho gaya aur haath sarir se bilkul durr jaise kissi ne rassi se bandh rakhe ho aur ab unko khinch raha tha.....par baat yahi pe khatam nahi hui.....

Upar ki oor dekhte hue hi uski aankhon se aur muh se dher saari roshani nikalne lag gayi......roshani ki matra bahut hi adheek thi....

Wo roshani nahi thi......wo saare wahi aatmaein thi jo uske ander fanse hue the.....wo itni raftaar se bahar aa rahe the iss wajah se unko dekhna muskil tha......

Main unhi sab ko dekh raha tha...alag alag chahre.....kuch insani to kuch dusre jeev....wo bas bahar aate jaa rahe the.....maine dekha unme se kuch wo uss tarah ke bhi dikh rahe the jaise Dark world se aaye log dikh rahe the.....

Wo sab bas uske ander se bahar aate aur upar ki taraf jaa rahe the.....upar jitne bhi log iss waqt lad rahe the.....wo sab isko dekh ke shant ho chukke the......Khud Lucifer to yaha pe nahi aaya tha par agar hota to iss waqt wo bhi bas rukka hua hi hota.....

Maine iss dauran kuch aur bhi dekha.....unn aatmaon ke upar jaane ke karan jo roshani chahro taraf phaili hui thi uske karaan hi mujhe ek parchai dikhai di thi.....par sayad usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha aur issi wajah se wo turant hi waha se gayab ho gayi....

Maine yaha waha dekha.....uss parchai ko dhundhne ki koshish kari.....par Mujhe wo kahi bhi nahi dikhe...

Jab Meri nazar wapas se Slayer ki taraf gayi to ab uske haath uske chahre pe the aur wo koshish kar raha tha apne haathon se apne muh ko aur aankhon ko dhakne ki par usse nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Wo aatmainn bas nikalti hi jaa rahi thi theek usi taraf se jaise sode ke bottle ka dakkan kholne pe uske ander ka gan bahar aane lag jaata hai.....

Ye bas hota hi chala gaya......Main usko dekhta raha uski cheekhen sunn raha tha.....

Jwala jo abhi bhi mere ander tha......wo bhi mujhse alag ho gaya......aur abhi bas wo ek chote se cheel ke roop mein tha......mere kandhe pe baitha hua.....Hum dono bas usko dekh rahe the.....

Main - Jwala tum yaha pe kaise.....

Jwala ne meri taraf dekha.....aur bas phir waha se udd gaya wo....

Main kuch samajh nahi paaya.....ye aise kaise chala gaya.....

Main usko bulata raha par wo wapas aaya hi nahi bas uss jagah se udd kar gayab ho gaya jaise......aur mujhe wahi chod gaya DB ke sath jo abhi bhi apne kaam mein laga hua tha aur Slayer ke saath jiska kaam syad khatam hone wala tha......

Meri aawaj se Jwala to nahi aaya par haa Old Owl waha pe jarur aa gaya tha.....

Usne bhi dekha tha sab kuch ekdum se rukk gaya hai koi bhi abhi lad nahi raha tha bas saare ke saare log uss Slayer ko hi dekh rahe the....haa wo DB ko chod ke.....to wo mere pass aa gaya.....

Old Owl - Kya hua Prateek waha kya dekh rahe ho.....ye iske saath aisa tumne kiya kya....

Main - Hmm....sayad....Old Owl ye batao kya Jwala yaha pe aa sakta hai abhi.....

Old Owl - Haa kyun nahi Main usko abhi yaha pe le aata hu.....

Usne bola aur Portal kholne lag gaya......ki Maine usko rokka....

Main - Wo khud se nahi aa sakta kya....

Meri iss baat pe wo mujhe apni gardan tedhi karke dekhne laga.....

Old Owl - Kaisi baat kar rahe ho.....iss jagah pe tum bhi khud se nahi aa sakte the.....Main leke aaya hu tumhe.....Jwala khud se kaise aayega yaha pe.....

Main - par ye....kya tumne mujhe Slayer se ladte hue dekha tha....

Old owl - Nahi Main tumhari hi sunke yaha se waha gaya tha....aur waise bhi yaha jamin pe bahut dhool udd rahi thi upar jyada kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha wo to ab sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai.....

Main - Tumhe pakka yakkin hai naa Jwala yaha nahi aa sakta.....

Old Owl - Tumhe yakkin nahi to tum usko yaha bulla ke dekho.....wo nahi aa paayega yaha pe.....ye jagah hi kuch aisi hai....

Mujhe abhi bhi yakkin nahi hua iss wajah se Maine pukara usko aur koi jawab nahi aaya.....

Main - Old Owl wo yaha tha.....hum dono ek saath milke lade Slayer se....aur uske baad wo chote se cheel mein badal ke mere.....yaha issi kandhe pe baitha hua tha.....phir wo udd ke chala gaya.....Main usko pukarta raha.....par usne koi jawab nahi diya.....bas chala gaya....

Old Owl - Aisa kaise ho sakta....ye kya hai.....

Wo abhi kuch aur hi bol raha tha par usko kuch dikha aur usne apni baat ko badal diya.....Maine uss jagah dekha jaha pe wo ishara kar raha tha.....waha pe 2 roshani ke golle the.....ek thoda pinkish tha aur dusre wala bluish....dono hi yaha waha hill rahe the.....

Maine Slayer ki taraf dekha to ab uske ander se roshani ke saath saath kuch gole bhi bahar aa rahe the jaise mere pass the ussi ke tarah ke.....aur wo bahar aake uske upar ek chakkar lagate aur phir....phir waha se chale jaa rahe thebahut tezz speed mein......par ek gola tha jo uske ander se bahar to aa gaya tha lekin wapas ander jaana chah raha tha halke kale rang ka tha wo gola......par bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi wo ander nahi jaa paa raha tha kyunki ander se bas golle bahar hi aate jaa rahe the aur sayad usme utni takat nahi thi ki wo rokk paaye unn sab ko aur ander chali jaaye.....Maine dekha jo do gole mere pass the wo dono uss kaale golle ke pass gaye....aur ek pal ko to aisa laga jaise wo tinno hi ek ho gaye.....aur phir unme se chingari nikli aur thoda sa dhuwan nikla...aur phir wo alag ho gaye.....Uss kaale rang ke gole ka kalapan pahle se aur kam ho gaya tha wahi baaki ke dono golo ka rang kuch kuch gadha sa ho chukka tha.....aur phir wo mere pass aa gaye....aur wo kaale rang ka gola usne 3-4 aur chakkar lagaye Slayer ke uske baad wo bhi aasman ki taraf chala gaya......aur wahi pe kahi gum ho gaya baaki sabhi ke jaise.....

Main jaanta tha ye do gole kya hai....yaa ye kahu ki kaun hai.....Mujhe inse milna tha....aur naa sirf milna tha balki kuch logo ko inse milwana bhi tha.......

Main - Old Owl Bua ke pass jaao.....aur unse kaho ki wo sabhi gharwalo ko ikkatha kare.....Daksh Mama aur Pankaj ko bhi....

Old Owl - Main tumhe yaha pe akela chod ke.....

Main - iss baare mein hum pahle baat kar chukke hai aur tumhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baat manni hi hogi to jaao aur Bua se kaho jo Maine kaha hai.....agar sawal pucche to bas wahi baat wapas se kah dena...aur uske baad mere pass wapas aa jaana....

Old Owl jaane ke liye taiyaar tha par usse pahle wo piche mudda aur isse pahle wo wapas se mere charo taraf wo ghera banata.....Maine usko rokk diya.....aur jaldi se jaane ko kaha......

Main - Kya wo Sofia thi......

Mere itna kahne se wo dono golle mere charo taraf ghumne lag gaye....Matlab wo Sofia hi thi......

Main - Kya Slayer ke ander abhi bhi Dhruv theek hai.....

Wo dono golle abhi bhi mere charo taraf ghumte rahe......matlab wo theek tha ander.....ye acchi baat thi....

Main - Main aap dono ko baaki sab se milwana chahta hu.....sayad aap bhi yahi chahte hai.....

Wo dono waise hi ghumte rahe.....gol gol mere charo taraf....

Slayer abhi bhi ussi tarah baitha apne chahre ko dhakne ki koshish kar raha tha par ab uska sarir jaise kamzzor hota jaa raha tha.....uski haddiyan dikhne lag gayi thi......sareer sukh chukka tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte.....wo nicche ki taraf gir gaya......par wo roshaniya abhi bhi....waise hi nikal rahi thi.....kuch deer ke baad wo band ho gayi....aur Slayer abhi bas ek haddiyon ka dhancha jaisa dikhai de raha tha saamne......

Thodi der tak jab uska sarir waise hi waha raha uske baad wapas se uska sarir pahle jaisa hone lag gaya.....jo abhi haddiyon ka dhancha dikhai de raha tha wo wapas se apne pahle jaise roop mein aane lag gaya tha.....haa psr aankhon ka rang badal gaya tha......Slayer ko banane ke liye Sofia ne dono tarah ke jaadu ka use kiya tha....par ab.......ab uske ander Dhruv tha to dark magic naa ke barabar hone lag gayi thi....kahte hai aankhon mein sarir ka haal dikhai deta hai bas wahi baat thi.....wo uske nader maujood saari energies ko dikha raha tha.....par abhi usne koi ek colour choose nahi kiya tha....wo bas badalta jaa raha tha.....

Main apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha uske sarir ko bante hue....

Abhi yaha pe ye ho hi raha tha ki DB apne jagah se khada hua.....matlab uska kaam pura ho chukka tha usne Fumos ke energy source ko kaabu mein kar liya tha.....aur shant bhi kar diya tha....yaa ye kaha jaaye usne usko sulla diya....

Agar aisa nahi hota to sayad abhi main aur wo khud aur baaki ke sab jo yaha Fumos pe the....wo sab ke sab yaha waha antariksh mein tairti hui patheron pe hote......naa ki iss pure planet pe.....

Uske aisa karne ke baad waha aas pass jo bhi pathrili jameen thi unke pass bhi chote chote paudhe dikhai dene lag gaye the......

Upar jo aasmaan mein Fumos ke log the.....wo sab ke sab baarish ki bundon ki tarah jameen pe girne lag gaye the....Maine jab wo dekha to meri nazarein Leader ko dhundhne lag gayi.....agar baaki sabhi ki powers jaa rahi thi to uski bhi jaane wali thi....aur wo bhi upar aasman se girne wala tha.....par Maine dekha pass ka hi ped achanak se bada hone lag gaya aur uncha hota jaa raha tha...upar dekha to waha pe Leader tha....aur isse pahle wo nicche girta usne uss ped ko pakad liya tha.....

Ye DB kar raha tha uss ped ke saath......aur jab Leader ne ped ko pakad liya to DB ne usko nicche uttar diya....wo nicche aaya par sath mein Demos wale bhi aa rahe the uspe hamla karne ko aakhir wo abhi tak unke hisab se iss jagah ka leader tha aur jung mein jab tak aap yaa to mar nahi jaate yaa haar kabl nahi karte tab tak aap nahi haarte ho.....to wo to yaha pe isko maarne aa rahe the....

Main kuch karta isse pahle waha pe lage pedon ne wapas se apna kamal dikhaya.....wo jhoom rahe the.....unki pattiyan unke tanne kisi hathiyar ki tarah kaam kar rahi thi......kabhi koi ped kisi Demos wale ko apne pattiyon mein samma leta to kabhi kisi ko apne tanne se maar ke dusre taraf pahucha deta.....

Demos ki aadhi sena inhi sab ke chappet mein aa chukki thi.....aur kyunki unhone aisa kuch pahle dekha nahi tha....iss wajah se unhone waha se bhag jaane mein hi apni salamati samjhi aur bas.....saare ke saare ho gaye 9....2....11...

Iss baat se bekhabar ki jab Lucifer unko binna jeet hasil kiye hue paayega....to wo unka kya haal karega.....

DB abhi bhi uss Suraksha dhere ke ander hi tha.....aur wahi se ye sab kar raha tha.....usne wo ghera toda.....aur usme se bahar aaya.....usne ek nazar Slayer pe daali phir mujhe dekha.....

DB - Tum dono kahi lad to nahi rahe the naa.....

Main - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....usne bhi mere pass unn do gollon ko dekha....aur bas dekhta raha....phir apni gardan hilate hue aage badha.....

DB - Maine iske baare mein nahi socha tha.....

Mujhe nahi pata ye kya soch raha tha par kuch baatein sirf aur sirf immortals ko hi pata hoti hai.....aur ye baat bhi unhi mein se ek thi.....mujhe yaad nahi kisi bhi Immortal ne iss baare mein kisi dusre ko koi baat batai thi.....

Leader - DB.....Kya ab sab theek hai.....kya Main aazad hu....aur Fumos ka kya hua....

DB - Aap bataiye.....kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aapko......

Leader - Main.....main theek hu.....haa thodi kamzori si lag rahi hai mujhe.....

DB - wo iss wajah se kyunki ab aapko Fumos ki taraf se milne wali powers nahi mil rahi hai......ab wo saari powers uss ped ko mil rahi hai....aur wo ped.....unn sabhi powers ko aas pass bikher de raha hai....

Leader - To kya Fumos abhi bhi......

DB - Wo gahri neend mein so raha hai....aur abhi usko bahut waqt lagne wala hai......

Abhi hum baatein kar rahe the ki Slayer ka sarir wapas se hilne lag gaya aur wo khada ho gaya......

Leader ne bhi dekha usko.....

Leader - To ab iska kya....

Main - Iski chinta mat kariye ye hamare saath hi hai....

Dhruv(Slayer) - Ha Main aapke saath hi hu....

Yaha ka kaam mere hisab se pura ho chukka tha.....Main bas uss Old owl ka wait kar raha tha.....pata nahi usko kya hua......ek kaam diya tha usko aur usme bhi wo itna waqt laga raha tha.....

Wahi yaha se durr.....

Bahar se jitne bhi log Fumos pe nazrein gadayein hue the......unko ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....Fumos bilkul se badal gaya tha.......har jagah pe ped hi ped the ab.....pura planet hi jungle jaisa dikhai de raha tha bahar se.....ander kya chal raha tha aur kya nahi ye sab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kisi ko....

Kuch ko lagne laga sayad Lucifer ne jeet liya iss planet ko wahi kuch logo ko lag raha tha ki Fumos ne apna roop badal liya unn sab ko harane ke baad......

To upar to bahut halchal thi.....har koi janna chah raha tha par kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha......

Lekin ek banda tha.....asal mein do the.....ek to Lucifer aur dusra koi aur.......

Lucifer to gusse se pagal ho gaya tha aur apne logo ko maar raha tha.....wahi dusra abhi jo hua wo dekh ke pagal hua jaa raha tha......

Uske hisab se waqt aa gaya tha iss jagah ko tabah kar dene ka.....nahi to Fumos baaki planets pe kabza kar leta.....lekin usne dekha Fumos shant ho gaya tha.....so gaya tha.....aur ye baat usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi.......

Par wo wapas se waha aana nahi chahta tha......usko iss baat ki phikar thi ki kahi usko dekh naa liya jaaye......

Next update mein ek baar Demos ka nazara dekhne chalenge aur Fumos pe kuch kaam bacche hai wo bhi dekh lenge.....saath mein kya Prateek apne Maa Baap ke khooni ke sarir ko apne ghar pe le jaa paayega.....

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Nevil singh · Oct 17, 2021

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Main Fumos ke liye nikal gaya tha.....par yaha pe bas Main akela hi nahi tha......

Yun to Earth , Demos . yaa iss jaise planets Immortals ke space mein ghoomne wali faltu ke planets mein se the......par Fumos ka ek alag mahatwa tha......Titan ka bhi alag mahatwa tha par Fumos wo Titan se bhi jyada mahatwa rakhta tha Immortals ke liye....Jaahir si baat hai Fumos ek alag hi tarah ka planet tha,.....wo jinda tha......sayad hi pure space mein aisa koi planet hoga jo jinda hoga.....

Main jab yaha pe pahucha to sidha DB ke pass aaya tha......wo wahi pe jameen pe baitha tha......apni hatheliyon ko jameen pe rakhe hue.....

Main waha aaya to mujhe thoda ajeeb sa laga.......par Main yaha pe kisi maksad se aaya tha aur usko pura karna meri pahli prathmikta thi.......Maine baaki chizzon ko ignore kar diya......

Yaha aaya to sabse pahle Maine aas pass ka jaayza liya......aur uske baad Old Owl ki taraf dekhne laga......wo bhi meri baat samajh gaya tha.....wo turant hi udd ke uchai pe gaya aur waha ek chakkar laga ke wapas mere pass aaya......

Old Owl - Wo abhi yaha se durr hai.......usko yaha aane mein thoda waqt lagega......

Main - Ye DB kya kar raha hai......

Old Owl - Usne yaha pe har jagah ped ugga diye hai ab yaha bhi wahi kar raha hai sayad......inn pedon ki wajah se ye planet ajeeb tarah se bartaaw kar raha hai......

Main - Matlab yaha......yahi nicche iss planet ki saari energy hai.....ek surkasha ghera banao yaha pe......koi bhi iske aas pass nahi aana chahiye......Isko abhi waqt lagne wala hai.....

Old owl ko mere bolne ki deri thi.....aur wo lag gaya uss kaam mein......

Main - Dhruv......waqt aa raha hai.....tum apni taraf se taiyaar raho......Main bhi taiyaari karta hu......

Dhruv - Aapko pata hai naa iska natija kya hoga wo abhi bhi anjaan hai.....

Main - Humne iss baare mein pahle bhi baat kar rakhi hai......tumhe bas uss sharir mein jaana hai aur uske baad jitni bhi aatmayein uss sarir se juddi hui hai unn sab ko bahar kar dena hai tumne......

Dhruv - Haa par phir bhi isme unn saari aatmaon ki bhi icchha honi jaruri hai.....agar wo nahi chahte bahar jaana to main kuch nahi kar paaunga.....

Main - wo sarir unn aatmaon ke liye kisi jail se kam nahi hoga......unko jaise hi mauka milega wo khud se bahar nikal jaayenge.....ek baar wo saari aatmaein nikal gayi to Slayer khud se hi khatam ho jaayega....aur wo sarir tumhara ho jaayega......

Dhruv - Haa......agar aisa hua to accha hoga.....sayad aap sahi kah rahe hai......aisa hi hoga.....aakhir kaun si aatma hogi jo uss sarir se bahar nahi nikalna chahegi.....Kya aap unn dono ke liye taiyaar hai.....

Main - Abhi to Mujhe bhi pata nahi hai......Maine iss baare mein jyada socha hi nahi.....par agar hamara andazza sahi hai.....to wo dono bhi wahi hone chahiye......

Dhruv - Haa aur unke saath saath wo bhi wahi pe hogi......aapko lagta hai wo uss jagah ko chod ke bahar aa jaayegi.....

Main - Dhruv hum ghum ke ussi baat ke shuruwat pe aa gaye hai......inn sab pe humne bahut baatein kari hui hai......sayad jab tak hum isko kar naa le humme jawab nahi milega.....

Dhruv - Agar kuch gadbad hui to uske baad humme aage kya karna hai uska bhi pata nahi hoga......par phir bhi Main aapka saath dunga.....mujhe aapke upar yakkin hai.....

Main - Mujhe pata hai.....aur main vadda karta hu.......ab kisi ka yakkin nahi tutne dunga khud ke upar se......Tum apni taraf se taiyaariyan shuru karo.....

Maine ye kaha aur wo apna kaam karne lag gaya.......iss waqt mujhe aisa lag raha tha koi chizz mujhe kaat rahi hai.....unn sab ke baad Main aur Dhruv ek dusre se judde hue the.....aur ab wo alag ho raha tha sayad issi wajah se......

Old Owl ne DB ke charo taraf wo suraksha gheera bana diya tha.....Main uss gheere se bahar tha.....aur wo khud bhi mere pass aa chukka tha ab......

Old owl - tum.....tum theek ho naa.....mujhe tumharee ander kuch halchal mehsoos ho rahi hai......

Main - Haa......Main theek hu.....Tum jaake dekho wo kitni durr hai yaha se.....

Jab Main bol raha tha to mere muh se gahre laal rang ka kuch nikal raha tha aur wo hawa mein jaake gayab ho raha tha......usne usko dekh liya......aur mujhe ghoorne laga.....

Main - Jaao aur dekho wo kaha hai.....

Wo mujhe dekhta raha aur uske baad waha se udd ke upar chala gaya......

DB ne usse Prateek ke pass jaane se pahle hi kaha tha wo nahi chahta ki Prateek aur Slayer ke bich ladai ho.....par abhi usne jo dekha uske baad Old owl thoda aur pareshan ho gaya tha......DB ke anusaar Slayer abhi bhi takatwar hoga......aur Prateek ki halat aur kharab ho rahi thi.....

Old owl ne socha sayad wo Prateek ko kuch waqt de paayega.....wo upar gaya aur usne Slayer ko dekha......wo ab Prateek aur DB ke taraf hi aa raha tha....Old Owl waha se turant Prateek ke pass gaya.....aur waha jaane ke baad......

Old owl - Wo aa raha hai......tum bhi iss ghere mein kyun nahi chale jaate......Main usko sambhal lunga......

Maine uski baat sunni to mujhe hassi aa gayi....par saath mein dard bhi badhne laga tha.....

Main - Iski koi jarurat nahi hai.....Tum ek kaam karo.....wo Leader yahi pe hai naa.....uski madad karo.....usko kuch naa ho iss baat ka dhyaan rakhna....

Old Owl - Nahi......wo khud ka dhyaan khud hi rakh lega....Mujhe tum sahi nahi lag rahe to Main yahi tumhare pass rukunga....

Main - Aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga.....tum mere pass nahi rah sakte......tumhe....yaha se.....ahhhh......yaha se jaana hoga.....

Old Owl - ye kya ho raha hai tumhe.....tumhare muh se ye kya nikal raha hai......

Main - Iske baare mein abhi tumhe nahi samjha paaunga......tum.....tumhe abhi yaha se jaana hoga.....Main nahi chahta tumhe kuch ho.....

Old owl - Par tum theek.......nahi Main nahi jaa raha kahi bhi.....

Main - Maine kaha yaha se jaao matlab jaao.....jaao Leader ke pass jab DB apna kaam pura kar lega to uski shaktiyan bhi jaa sakti hai.....uss waqt wo kamzor hoga......Tum uske pass jaao......

Wo jaana nahi chah raha tha par aakhir mein main uska maalik tha.....to wo chala gaya.....par wo dost bhi tha mera.....jaate jaate usne mere ass pass bhi ek kawach bana diya......Ab mujhe iss kawach ko bhi todna tha......kaam badha ke chala gaya ye.....

Main ander tha aur ander se kawach ko todna aasan hota hai.....ye accha tha......waise usne majboot kawach banana seekh liya tha.....

Maine usko toda aur waha se bahar aa gaya......

DB ki taraf mudd ke dekha to wo abhi bhi laga hua tha apne kaam mein......sayad usko abhi aur waqt lagne wala tha inn sab mein......

Maine bhi apni aakhen band kari.....aur dark power ki madad se khud ko Dhruv se alag karne lag gaya......isse mujhe aur dard ho raha tha......Dhruv ne apni taraf se kaam pura kar hi liya tha bas......thoda sa aur hissa baaki tha.....

"Ajeeb hai......"

Main apna kaam kar hi raha tha.....ki mere kaano mein ye aawaj aayi......Mujhe laga ye Dhruv hai.....sayad usko kuch ajeeb sa lag raha tha......

Main - Tum ab ek alag body mein jaane waale ho sayad iss wajah se ajeeb lag raha hoga......

Dhruv - haa ajeeb lag raha hai.....par aapko ye kaise pata chala......

Main - Ab tum bataoge to kaise pata nahi chalega......

Dhruv - par maine to nahi bataya.......

Main - Hum abhi bhi judde hue hai naa iss wajah se sayad.....

Main ye bol ke wapas se apne kaam mein laga raha.....aur apne hisse ka kaam karta raha.......inn sab mein Mujhe ye pata nahi chala ki Dark Power ne kab mere sarir ke aas pass ek bahut hi mazboot deewar bana rakhi thi.....waise iss baat ka andaza mujhe pahle se tha.......Dark power har mumkin koshish karega mujhe nuksaan naa pahuche iss baat ki.....aur wo wahi kar raha tha.....par Main ye khud kar raha tha aur wo bhi ander se......issi wajah se to Maine Old Owl se DB ke liye wo gheere wanwaya....aur saath mein usko bhi waha se jaane ko bola....agar wo yaha uss ghere ke bahar hota to Mere aur Dhruv ke alag hone ke baad jo hota usme usko bahut chotein aa sakti thi.....

Uss kawach ki wajah se ab mujhe bahar ki koi bhi baatein pata hi nahi chal rahi thi.....aankhen pahle se band thi aur aawaj ab uske ander koi aa nahi rahi thi......

Mujhe pata nahi chala kab waha pe Slayer aa chukka tha.....aur wo DB ke pass jaa raha tha......par bich mein wo ghera hone ke wajah se wo ustak pahuch nahi paaya tha.....aur usko todne ki koshish mein laga hua tha......

Wo apna kaam kar paata usse pahle hi Maine apna kaam pura kar liya tha......aur uske baad wo dark power ka ghera jo mere charo taraf tha.....wo tut gaya.....aur uske tootne se waha charo taraf Dark energy phailne lagi.......DB ghere mein tha to usko kuch nahi hua.....par Slayer.......wo apni jagah se bahu durr jaake girra tha.......

Main aur Dhruv alag hue hi the ki humme ye dikha.....Dark power ne apna kaam bakhubi kiya tha......Slayer jaise behosh hi ho gaya tha.....ye sabse sahi waqt tha Dhruv ke liye uske sarir mein jaane ka.....aur usne ye mauka gawana sahi nahi samjha....aur wo uske sarir mein chala gaya......par

Jaise hi wo uske sarir mein gaya Slayer uth gaya......Mujhe laga tha wo uske ander chala gaya....aur apna kaam karne laga hoga....par abhi jo dekh raha tha usse samajh nahi paa raha tha.....agar Slayer abhi puri tarah se hosh mein tha to......to Dhruv bhi uska khana ban gaya hoga.....

Main ekdum se darr gaya tha.......Slayer se nahi.......Dhruv ke liye......hum naa jaane kab se ek saath the.......aur aaj sayad wo meri wajah se.....

Slayer jo abhi uth chukka tha.....wo wapas se DB ke pass jaane laga.......wo gheera abhi bhi waha tha........usne uski taraf dekha.....aur uss gheere mein darar si aane lag gayi......ye dekh ke mujhe yakkin ho gaya ki.....ki Dhruv ab nahi raha........wo iss Slayer ka khana ban chukka tha.....

Par abhi Mere pass itna bhi waqt nahi tha ki Main Dhruv ke jaane ka shoq manna sakku kyunki agar maine waisa kiya to sayad.....sayad kuch der ke baad DB ke liye bhi mujhe......Main ye nahi hone de sakta tha.....Mujhe nahi pata wo DB ke picche kyun pada hai.....par Main usko use nuksaan pahuchane nahi dene wala tha.....

Maine apna haath aage kiya aur usse Dark energy bahut jyada matra mein Slayer ke upar chala gaya.......aur wo waha se durr jaake gira.....

Iss insani sarir mein ye pahli baar tha ki Maine itni jyada matra mein Dark power ko ek baar mein use kiya ho......par isse mujhe koi phark nahi pad raha tha.....aur sayad naa hi iss insani sarir ko.....

Main aage badha Slayer ki taraf......wo jaha pe girra tha waha pe abhi bas dhull hi udd rahi thi.....kuch saaf saaf dikhai nahi de raha tha.....

Main dekhne ki koshish kar raha tha.....par kuch dikh nahi raha tha.....lekin kuch hi der mein mujhe 2 aakhen dikhai di.....chamakti hui aankhen.......aur agle hi pal.....Main nicche jamin pe girra hua tha.....

Kuch samajhne ka waqt hi nahi milla bas wo chamkili aankhen dikhai di aur uske baad unme se kuch aaya mere pass aur Main nicche jamin pe tha.....

Main kisi tarah waha se utha.....aur wahi nicche ek pathar ka sahara leke baith gaya.....ye jo bhi tha.......bahut takatwar tha......mera ye sarir uske saamne muskil se kuch waqt tikne wala tha bas......

Dhruv ki shaktiyon se ye Slayer bahut jyada takatwar ho chukka tha......kisi Immortal ko wo takkar de sakta tha.....aur sayad jeet bhi sakta tha.....

Abhi inhi sab ke baare mein soch raha tha ki achanak se mujhe aisa laga jaise koi chizz thi jo mujhse judd rahi thi......meri ye insani sarir.....ekdum se majboot si lagne lag gayi.....Main jo abhi nicche baitha hua tha......wapas se khade hone ki koshish karne lag gaya.....aur dekhte hi dekhte Main khada ho bhi gaya.......

Ye Jwala tha......wo yaha pe aaya hua tha......par uska yaha aana ye ajeeb tha.......Old owl yaha pe aa sakta tha......kyunki usko Riyan ne taiyaar kiya tha iske liye.....par Jwala nahi.......haa uske pass dark power hai par wo aise yaha pe nahi aa sakta.......

Mujhe laga sayad DB apne kaam mein kamiyab ho chukka hai......sayad wo Fumos ke ander jaha uski saari energies hai waha pe pahuch chuka hai.......par agar aisa hua bhi tha.....to iska matlab ye tha ki abhi kuch hi der mein pura planet uthal puthal hone wala tha.......Maine upar dekha......waha pe abhi bhi Fumos ke creatures the......matlab abhi aisa kuch nahi hua tha.......

Abhi kuch aur ochta usse pahle meri nazar wapas se uss Slayer pe padi jo wapas se DB ke ass pass lage uss gheere ko todne mein laga hua tha.......

Maine apna haath aage kiya aur uske ander se kaali aag baharr aayi......Dark power aur Jwala ke aag ka milla hua roop......

Wo kisi golle ki tarah tha.....aur wo sidha jaake uss Slayer ko laga......jisse wo waha se kuch durr chala gaya par wo abhi bhi khada hi tha.....girra nahi tha.....uss aag ke golle ne jaise bas usko dhakka diya ho......par dark power ka kaam baaki tha......

Dark power ne uss aag ko uske pure sarir pe phaila diya......aur wo wahi khade khade jal raha tha......par tab bhi wo bas khada hi tha.......

Agar koi jal raha ho to wo yaha waha bhagega......par ye to bas khada tha....aur uski aankhen.....wo wapas se chamakne hi wali thi ki meri peeth se pankh nikle aur main apni jagah se udd ke waha se side chala gaya......

Jwala aur Main pahle bhi ek do baar sayad aise ek saath aaye the.....par ye unn sab se alag tha......iss baar hamara connection kuch jyada hi majboot lag raha tha.....

Maine abhi ek baat aur notice kari.....ye jab aakhen chamki thi iss Slayer ki to uske chahre se matlab uske muh se aur naak se kuch dhuwan jaisa bahar aaya tha......pata nahi ye kya tha......lekin ye usko ander se kamjor kar raha tha......

Iss baar usne ye cheez kuch der tak kari thi kyunki uska nishana sahi laga hi nahi tha......Main apni jagah se udd ke yaha waha ho raha tha.....aur uska nishana issi mein nahi lag paa raha tha.....

Aur phir wo ekdum se rukk gaya tha aur maine wo dhuwan wagera dekha......aur wo waha haanf raha tha......issi ko leke maine kaha ki wo sayad kamzoor ho raha tha.....

Mere saamne ek pareshani thi aur ab sayad mujhe uska hal dikh raha tha.....isko harane ke liye mujhe bas isko ussi power ko use karne ke liye uksana tha......par yaha pe mere liye bhi dikkat thi......main jyada uccha nahi jaa sakta tha.....waha jaaunga to waha pe jo log lad rahe hai unme se kisi na kisi ka nishana ban jaaunga.....aur abhi unko aur isko dono ko sambhalna wo bhi ek saath wo thoda muskil to tha.....aur Main jaan bujh ke muskilein nahi khadi karna chahta tha.....

Maine wapas se apni black fire ball banai......aur uske upar phenkne ke jagah uske aas pass ke jagahn pe phenka aur phir unse uske aaas pass mein hi aag ki ek unchi si diwwar bana di.....aise mein usko double mehnat karni padegi......pahle to aag ke iss deewar se bahar aana aur uske baad nishana lagana.......

Ander se nishana lagana aur muskil hoga uske liye.....aag hai to waha ki hawa bhi garam hogi....aur garam hawa ke karan bahut baar chizzen jaha hoti hai uss jagah pe nahi dikhai deti hai......to agar aapko nishana lagana haii to uss jagah se nikalna hi hoga.....

Ab bahar wo aag se hi aayega.....isse bhi uski kuch na kuch saktiyan to kam honi hi thi......

Jaisa maine socha tha waisa hi hua bhi.....wo waha se nikalne ke liye aage chala aur wapas se uske pure sharir pe aag hi aag thi......lekin iss baar bhi usko uss aag se kuch ho nahi raha tha sayad......wo aaram se hi bahar aaya aur phir se mujhe dekhte hue usne aakhen chamkai........Sukar ho inn pankhon ka.....ye sach mein bahut tezz thi.....Main turant hi ek jagah se dusre jagah pahuch gaya tha.....

Maine wapas se wahi kiya....uske ass pass aage ki deewar aur iss baar bhi wo waha se bahar aa gaya......par wo kamzor hota jaa raha tha.....aur iss baar kuch aur bhi dikha mujhe......iss baar dhuwein ki matra aur jyada thi......

Kya ye saab jo nikal raha tha wo uske ander fansi hui aatmayein thi.....Mujhe pakka pata nahi tha ye.....par.....wo jo bhi uske muh se yaa naak se nikal rahi thi.....wo thodi upar jaake kuch ban rahi thi.....jaise koi chahra ho......aur uske baad gayab ho jaa rahi thi.....

Sayad abhi bhi ander mein Dhruv ladd raha tha.....

Dekhte hai next update mein

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Nevil singh · Oct 17, 2021

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Sayad abhi bhi.....Dhruv uske ander se meri madad kar raha tha.......

Waise bhi kuch ho ho uska sarir chahe kitne hi insano ke sarir ke tukdo se milke banaya hua ho......par Dhruv ki asal kshamta ko khud mein kaid kar paana wo bhi tab jab pahle se hi ander naa jaane kitni hi aatmayein hai aasan nahi hone wala tha......

Par ye sab jo kuch bhi tha......wo sab bas mere khayal hi to the.....abhi tak Main confirm nahi hua tha......sayad ye jo bhi uske chahre se nikal raha tha wo kuch aur hi ho....

Wo iss waqt wahi jamin pe baitha hua tha aur haanf raha tha.....Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha.....Main ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki uske sharir ko jyada nuksan pahuchaya jaaye......wo apne tarah ka iss jagah pe eklauta tha......usko kam se kam nuksan pahuchana ye meri soch thi.....haa par tabhi tak jab tak wo mujhe yaa kisi aur ko chot naa pahuchaye....

Main inn baaton pe gaur kar raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mehsoos hua.....Mujhe aisa laga jaise koi mujhe kah raha ho.....bas ek baar aur......

Maine aas pass dekha.....par koi bhi nahi tha waha pe.....Main yaha pe jab se aaya hu tab se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par....iss feeling se jyada important chizz mere saamne thi to ispe dhyaan naa ke barabar de raha tha Main.....isse pahle bhi ek baar mujhe ek aawaj sunai di thi.....aur abhi ye jo hua wo.....

Jab Maine kuch nahi kiya.....to mujhe mere kaano mein aawaj aayi wahi aawaj jo iske pahle aayi thi.....

" Maine kaha naa bas ek baar aur....."

Iss awaj ke baad jaise Mujpe mera koi control hi nahi raha......aur Maine....Apna haath aage kiya aur sidha.....ek bada sa black fire ball banaya aur iss baar uske aas pass nahi theek uske upar de maara......

Slayer jo baitha hua tha jamin pe abhi wo iss baar chatpatane lag gaya......wo aag aur dark power iss baar....iss baar wo uspe asar kar rahi thi.....aisa nahi tha pahle nahi kar rahi thi.....lekin iss baar uska asar mujhe dikhai de raha tha.....

Wo aag bas badhti hi jaa rahi thi shuru mein to usne hilne ki koshish kari thi aur wo hilla bhi tha.....par uske kuch der baad.....wo bas chilla hi raha tha aur apne jagah pe thoda bahut hill raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise wo bandha hua ho kisi chizz se......aur tabhi achanak se.....

"Band kardo ab...."

Wapas se mujhe ye aawaj sunai di....aur maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur iss baar bas Dark power hi tha.....usne uss aag ko khatam kar diya.....

Yaha uss aag ki laptein khatam hui hi thi ki aachanak se Slayer ka sarir akadne sa laga.....uska chahra ekdum se upar ki taraf ho gaya aur haath sarir se bilkul durr jaise kissi ne rassi se bandh rakhe ho aur ab unko khinch raha tha.....par baat yahi pe khatam nahi hui.....

Upar ki oor dekhte hue hi uski aankhon se aur muh se dher saari roshani nikalne lag gayi......roshani ki matra bahut hi adheek thi....

Wo roshani nahi thi......wo saare wahi aatmaein thi jo uske ander fanse hue the.....wo itni raftaar se bahar aa rahe the iss wajah se unko dekhna muskil tha......

Main unhi sab ko dekh raha tha...alag alag chahre.....kuch insani to kuch dusre jeev....wo bas bahar aate jaa rahe the.....maine dekha unme se kuch wo uss tarah ke bhi dikh rahe the jaise Dark world se aaye log dikh rahe the.....

Wo sab bas uske ander se bahar aate aur upar ki taraf jaa rahe the.....upar jitne bhi log iss waqt lad rahe the.....wo sab isko dekh ke shant ho chukke the......Khud Lucifer to yaha pe nahi aaya tha par agar hota to iss waqt wo bhi bas rukka hua hi hota.....

Maine iss dauran kuch aur bhi dekha.....unn aatmaon ke upar jaane ke karan jo roshani chahro taraf phaili hui thi uske karaan hi mujhe ek parchai dikhai di thi.....par sayad usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha aur issi wajah se wo turant hi waha se gayab ho gayi....

Maine yaha waha dekha.....uss parchai ko dhundhne ki koshish kari.....par Mujhe wo kahi bhi nahi dikhe...

Jab Meri nazar wapas se Slayer ki taraf gayi to ab uske haath uske chahre pe the aur wo koshish kar raha tha apne haathon se apne muh ko aur aankhon ko dhakne ki par usse nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Wo aatmainn bas nikalti hi jaa rahi thi theek usi taraf se jaise sode ke bottle ka dakkan kholne pe uske ander ka gan bahar aane lag jaata hai.....

Ye bas hota hi chala gaya......Main usko dekhta raha uski cheekhen sunn raha tha.....

Jwala jo abhi bhi mere ander tha......wo bhi mujhse alag ho gaya......aur abhi bas wo ek chote se cheel ke roop mein tha......mere kandhe pe baitha hua.....Hum dono bas usko dekh rahe the.....

Main - Jwala tum yaha pe kaise.....

Jwala ne meri taraf dekha.....aur bas phir waha se udd gaya wo....

Main kuch samajh nahi paaya.....ye aise kaise chala gaya.....

Main usko bulata raha par wo wapas aaya hi nahi bas uss jagah se udd kar gayab ho gaya jaise......aur mujhe wahi chod gaya DB ke sath jo abhi bhi apne kaam mein laga hua tha aur Slayer ke saath jiska kaam syad khatam hone wala tha......

Meri aawaj se Jwala to nahi aaya par haa Old Owl waha pe jarur aa gaya tha.....

Usne bhi dekha tha sab kuch ekdum se rukk gaya hai koi bhi abhi lad nahi raha tha bas saare ke saare log uss Slayer ko hi dekh rahe the....haa wo DB ko chod ke.....to wo mere pass aa gaya.....

Old Owl - Kya hua Prateek waha kya dekh rahe ho.....ye iske saath aisa tumne kiya kya....

Main - Hmm....sayad....Old Owl ye batao kya Jwala yaha pe aa sakta hai abhi.....

Old Owl - Haa kyun nahi Main usko abhi yaha pe le aata hu.....

Usne bola aur Portal kholne lag gaya......ki Maine usko rokka....

Main - Wo khud se nahi aa sakta kya....

Meri iss baat pe wo mujhe apni gardan tedhi karke dekhne laga.....

Old Owl - Kaisi baat kar rahe ho.....iss jagah pe tum bhi khud se nahi aa sakte the.....Main leke aaya hu tumhe.....Jwala khud se kaise aayega yaha pe.....

Main - par ye....kya tumne mujhe Slayer se ladte hue dekha tha....

Old owl - Nahi Main tumhari hi sunke yaha se waha gaya tha....aur waise bhi yaha jamin pe bahut dhool udd rahi thi upar jyada kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha wo to ab sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai.....

Main - Tumhe pakka yakkin hai naa Jwala yaha nahi aa sakta.....

Old Owl - Tumhe yakkin nahi to tum usko yaha bulla ke dekho.....wo nahi aa paayega yaha pe.....ye jagah hi kuch aisi hai....

Mujhe abhi bhi yakkin nahi hua iss wajah se Maine pukara usko aur koi jawab nahi aaya.....

Main - Old Owl wo yaha tha.....hum dono ek saath milke lade Slayer se....aur uske baad wo chote se cheel mein badal ke mere.....yaha issi kandhe pe baitha hua tha.....phir wo udd ke chala gaya.....Main usko pukarta raha.....par usne koi jawab nahi diya.....bas chala gaya....

Old Owl - Aisa kaise ho sakta....ye kya hai.....

Wo abhi kuch aur hi bol raha tha par usko kuch dikha aur usne apni baat ko badal diya.....Maine uss jagah dekha jaha pe wo ishara kar raha tha.....waha pe 2 roshani ke golle the.....ek thoda pinkish tha aur dusre wala bluish....dono hi yaha waha hill rahe the.....

Maine Slayer ki taraf dekha to ab uske ander se roshani ke saath saath kuch gole bhi bahar aa rahe the jaise mere pass the ussi ke tarah ke.....aur wo bahar aake uske upar ek chakkar lagate aur phir....phir waha se chale jaa rahe thebahut tezz speed mein......par ek gola tha jo uske ander se bahar to aa gaya tha lekin wapas ander jaana chah raha tha halke kale rang ka tha wo gola......par bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi wo ander nahi jaa paa raha tha kyunki ander se bas golle bahar hi aate jaa rahe the aur sayad usme utni takat nahi thi ki wo rokk paaye unn sab ko aur ander chali jaaye.....Maine dekha jo do gole mere pass the wo dono uss kaale golle ke pass gaye....aur ek pal ko to aisa laga jaise wo tinno hi ek ho gaye.....aur phir unme se chingari nikli aur thoda sa dhuwan nikla...aur phir wo alag ho gaye.....Uss kaale rang ke gole ka kalapan pahle se aur kam ho gaya tha wahi baaki ke dono golo ka rang kuch kuch gadha sa ho chukka tha.....aur phir wo mere pass aa gaye....aur wo kaale rang ka gola usne 3-4 aur chakkar lagaye Slayer ke uske baad wo bhi aasman ki taraf chala gaya......aur wahi pe kahi gum ho gaya baaki sabhi ke jaise.....

Main jaanta tha ye do gole kya hai....yaa ye kahu ki kaun hai.....Mujhe inse milna tha....aur naa sirf milna tha balki kuch logo ko inse milwana bhi tha.......

Main - Old Owl Bua ke pass jaao.....aur unse kaho ki wo sabhi gharwalo ko ikkatha kare.....Daksh Mama aur Pankaj ko bhi....

Old Owl - Main tumhe yaha pe akela chod ke.....

Main - iss baare mein hum pahle baat kar chukke hai aur tumhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baat manni hi hogi to jaao aur Bua se kaho jo Maine kaha hai.....agar sawal pucche to bas wahi baat wapas se kah dena...aur uske baad mere pass wapas aa jaana....

Old Owl jaane ke liye taiyaar tha par usse pahle wo piche mudda aur isse pahle wo wapas se mere charo taraf wo ghera banata.....Maine usko rokk diya.....aur jaldi se jaane ko kaha......

Main - Kya wo Sofia thi......

Mere itna kahne se wo dono golle mere charo taraf ghumne lag gaye....Matlab wo Sofia hi thi......

Main - Kya Slayer ke ander abhi bhi Dhruv theek hai.....

Wo dono golle abhi bhi mere charo taraf ghumte rahe......matlab wo theek tha ander.....ye acchi baat thi....

Main - Main aap dono ko baaki sab se milwana chahta hu.....sayad aap bhi yahi chahte hai.....

Wo dono waise hi ghumte rahe.....gol gol mere charo taraf....

Slayer abhi bhi ussi tarah baitha apne chahre ko dhakne ki koshish kar raha tha par ab uska sarir jaise kamzzor hota jaa raha tha.....uski haddiyan dikhne lag gayi thi......sareer sukh chukka tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte.....wo nicche ki taraf gir gaya......par wo roshaniya abhi bhi....waise hi nikal rahi thi.....kuch deer ke baad wo band ho gayi....aur Slayer abhi bas ek haddiyon ka dhancha jaisa dikhai de raha tha saamne......

Thodi der tak jab uska sarir waise hi waha raha uske baad wapas se uska sarir pahle jaisa hone lag gaya.....jo abhi haddiyon ka dhancha dikhai de raha tha wo wapas se apne pahle jaise roop mein aane lag gaya tha.....haa psr aankhon ka rang badal gaya tha......Slayer ko banane ke liye Sofia ne dono tarah ke jaadu ka use kiya tha....par ab.......ab uske ander Dhruv tha to dark magic naa ke barabar hone lag gayi thi....kahte hai aankhon mein sarir ka haal dikhai deta hai bas wahi baat thi.....wo uske nader maujood saari energies ko dikha raha tha.....par abhi usne koi ek colour choose nahi kiya tha....wo bas badalta jaa raha tha.....

Main apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha uske sarir ko bante hue....

Abhi yaha pe ye ho hi raha tha ki DB apne jagah se khada hua.....matlab uska kaam pura ho chukka tha usne Fumos ke energy source ko kaabu mein kar liya tha.....aur shant bhi kar diya tha....yaa ye kaha jaaye usne usko sulla diya....

Agar aisa nahi hota to sayad abhi main aur wo khud aur baaki ke sab jo yaha Fumos pe the....wo sab ke sab yaha waha antariksh mein tairti hui patheron pe hote......naa ki iss pure planet pe.....

Uske aisa karne ke baad waha aas pass jo bhi pathrili jameen thi unke pass bhi chote chote paudhe dikhai dene lag gaye the......

Upar jo aasmaan mein Fumos ke log the.....wo sab ke sab baarish ki bundon ki tarah jameen pe girne lag gaye the....Maine jab wo dekha to meri nazarein Leader ko dhundhne lag gayi.....agar baaki sabhi ki powers jaa rahi thi to uski bhi jaane wali thi....aur wo bhi upar aasman se girne wala tha.....par Maine dekha pass ka hi ped achanak se bada hone lag gaya aur uncha hota jaa raha tha...upar dekha to waha pe Leader tha....aur isse pahle wo nicche girta usne uss ped ko pakad liya tha.....

Ye DB kar raha tha uss ped ke saath......aur jab Leader ne ped ko pakad liya to DB ne usko nicche uttar diya....wo nicche aaya par sath mein Demos wale bhi aa rahe the uspe hamla karne ko aakhir wo abhi tak unke hisab se iss jagah ka leader tha aur jung mein jab tak aap yaa to mar nahi jaate yaa haar kabl nahi karte tab tak aap nahi haarte ho.....to wo to yaha pe isko maarne aa rahe the....

Main kuch karta isse pahle waha pe lage pedon ne wapas se apna kamal dikhaya.....wo jhoom rahe the.....unki pattiyan unke tanne kisi hathiyar ki tarah kaam kar rahi thi......kabhi koi ped kisi Demos wale ko apne pattiyon mein samma leta to kabhi kisi ko apne tanne se maar ke dusre taraf pahucha deta.....

Demos ki aadhi sena inhi sab ke chappet mein aa chukki thi.....aur kyunki unhone aisa kuch pahle dekha nahi tha....iss wajah se unhone waha se bhag jaane mein hi apni salamati samjhi aur bas.....saare ke saare ho gaye 9....2....11...

Iss baat se bekhabar ki jab Lucifer unko binna jeet hasil kiye hue paayega....to wo unka kya haal karega.....

DB abhi bhi uss Suraksha dhere ke ander hi tha.....aur wahi se ye sab kar raha tha.....usne wo ghera toda.....aur usme se bahar aaya.....usne ek nazar Slayer pe daali phir mujhe dekha.....

DB - Tum dono kahi lad to nahi rahe the naa.....

Main - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....usne bhi mere pass unn do gollon ko dekha....aur bas dekhta raha....phir apni gardan hilate hue aage badha.....

DB - Maine iske baare mein nahi socha tha.....

Mujhe nahi pata ye kya soch raha tha par kuch baatein sirf aur sirf immortals ko hi pata hoti hai.....aur ye baat bhi unhi mein se ek thi.....mujhe yaad nahi kisi bhi Immortal ne iss baare mein kisi dusre ko koi baat batai thi.....

Leader - DB.....Kya ab sab theek hai.....kya Main aazad hu....aur Fumos ka kya hua....

DB - Aap bataiye.....kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aapko......

Leader - Main.....main theek hu.....haa thodi kamzori si lag rahi hai mujhe.....

DB - wo iss wajah se kyunki ab aapko Fumos ki taraf se milne wali powers nahi mil rahi hai......ab wo saari powers uss ped ko mil rahi hai....aur wo ped.....unn sabhi powers ko aas pass bikher de raha hai....

Leader - To kya Fumos abhi bhi......

DB - Wo gahri neend mein so raha hai....aur abhi usko bahut waqt lagne wala hai......

Abhi hum baatein kar rahe the ki Slayer ka sarir wapas se hilne lag gaya aur wo khada ho gaya......

Leader ne bhi dekha usko.....

Leader - To ab iska kya....

Main - Iski chinta mat kariye ye hamare saath hi hai....

Dhruv(Slayer) - Ha Main aapke saath hi hu....

Yaha ka kaam mere hisab se pura ho chukka tha.....Main bas uss Old owl ka wait kar raha tha.....pata nahi usko kya hua......ek kaam diya tha usko aur usme bhi wo itna waqt laga raha tha.....

Wahi yaha se durr.....

Bahar se jitne bhi log Fumos pe nazrein gadayein hue the......unko ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....Fumos bilkul se badal gaya tha.......har jagah pe ped hi ped the ab.....pura planet hi jungle jaisa dikhai de raha tha bahar se.....ander kya chal raha tha aur kya nahi ye sab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kisi ko....

Kuch ko lagne laga sayad Lucifer ne jeet liya iss planet ko wahi kuch logo ko lag raha tha ki Fumos ne apna roop badal liya unn sab ko harane ke baad......

To upar to bahut halchal thi.....har koi janna chah raha tha par kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha......

Lekin ek banda tha.....asal mein do the.....ek to Lucifer aur dusra koi aur.......

Lucifer to gusse se pagal ho gaya tha aur apne logo ko maar raha tha.....wahi dusra abhi jo hua wo dekh ke pagal hua jaa raha tha......

Uske hisab se waqt aa gaya tha iss jagah ko tabah kar dene ka.....nahi to Fumos baaki planets pe kabza kar leta.....lekin usne dekha Fumos shant ho gaya tha.....so gaya tha.....aur ye baat usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi.......

Par wo wapas se waha aana nahi chahta tha......usko iss baat ki phikar thi ki kahi usko dekh naa liya jaaye......

Next update mein ek baar Demos ka nazara dekhne chalenge aur Fumos pe kuch kaam bacche hai wo bhi dekh lenge.....saath mein kya Prateek apne Maa Baap ke khooni ke sarir ko apne ghar pe le jaa paayega.....

Beautifull update bhai

Mr.J55 · Oct 17, 2021

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UPDATE - 109

Sayad abhi bhi.....Dhruv uske ander se meri madad kar raha tha.......

Waise bhi kuch ho ho uska sarir chahe kitne hi insano ke sarir ke tukdo se milke banaya hua ho......par Dhruv ki asal kshamta ko khud mein kaid kar paana wo bhi tab jab pahle se hi ander naa jaane kitni hi aatmayein hai aasan nahi hone wala tha......

Par ye sab jo kuch bhi tha......wo sab bas mere khayal hi to the.....abhi tak Main confirm nahi hua tha......sayad ye jo bhi uske chahre se nikal raha tha wo kuch aur hi ho....

Wo iss waqt wahi jamin pe baitha hua tha aur haanf raha tha.....Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha.....Main ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki uske sharir ko jyada nuksan pahuchaya jaaye......wo apne tarah ka iss jagah pe eklauta tha......usko kam se kam nuksan pahuchana ye meri soch thi.....haa par tabhi tak jab tak wo mujhe yaa kisi aur ko chot naa pahuchaye....

Main inn baaton pe gaur kar raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mehsoos hua.....Mujhe aisa laga jaise koi mujhe kah raha ho.....bas ek baar aur......

Maine aas pass dekha.....par koi bhi nahi tha waha pe.....Main yaha pe jab se aaya hu tab se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par....iss feeling se jyada important chizz mere saamne thi to ispe dhyaan naa ke barabar de raha tha Main.....isse pahle bhi ek baar mujhe ek aawaj sunai di thi.....aur abhi ye jo hua wo.....

Jab Maine kuch nahi kiya.....to mujhe mere kaano mein aawaj aayi wahi aawaj jo iske pahle aayi thi.....

" Maine kaha naa bas ek baar aur....."

Iss awaj ke baad jaise Mujpe mera koi control hi nahi raha......aur Maine....Apna haath aage kiya aur sidha.....ek bada sa black fire ball banaya aur iss baar uske aas pass nahi theek uske upar de maara......

Slayer jo baitha hua tha jamin pe abhi wo iss baar chatpatane lag gaya......wo aag aur dark power iss baar....iss baar wo uspe asar kar rahi thi.....aisa nahi tha pahle nahi kar rahi thi.....lekin iss baar uska asar mujhe dikhai de raha tha.....

Wo aag bas badhti hi jaa rahi thi shuru mein to usne hilne ki koshish kari thi aur wo hilla bhi tha.....par uske kuch der baad.....wo bas chilla hi raha tha aur apne jagah pe thoda bahut hill raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise wo bandha hua ho kisi chizz se......aur tabhi achanak se.....

"Band kardo ab...."

Wapas se mujhe ye aawaj sunai di....aur maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur iss baar bas Dark power hi tha.....usne uss aag ko khatam kar diya.....

Yaha uss aag ki laptein khatam hui hi thi ki aachanak se Slayer ka sarir akadne sa laga.....uska chahra ekdum se upar ki taraf ho gaya aur haath sarir se bilkul durr jaise kissi ne rassi se bandh rakhe ho aur ab unko khinch raha tha.....par baat yahi pe khatam nahi hui.....

Upar ki oor dekhte hue hi uski aankhon se aur muh se dher saari roshani nikalne lag gayi......roshani ki matra bahut hi adheek thi....

Wo roshani nahi thi......wo saare wahi aatmaein thi jo uske ander fanse hue the.....wo itni raftaar se bahar aa rahe the iss wajah se unko dekhna muskil tha......

Main unhi sab ko dekh raha tha...alag alag chahre.....kuch insani to kuch dusre jeev....wo bas bahar aate jaa rahe the.....maine dekha unme se kuch wo uss tarah ke bhi dikh rahe the jaise Dark world se aaye log dikh rahe the.....

Wo sab bas uske ander se bahar aate aur upar ki taraf jaa rahe the.....upar jitne bhi log iss waqt lad rahe the.....wo sab isko dekh ke shant ho chukke the......Khud Lucifer to yaha pe nahi aaya tha par agar hota to iss waqt wo bhi bas rukka hua hi hota.....

Maine iss dauran kuch aur bhi dekha.....unn aatmaon ke upar jaane ke karan jo roshani chahro taraf phaili hui thi uske karaan hi mujhe ek parchai dikhai di thi.....par sayad usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha aur issi wajah se wo turant hi waha se gayab ho gayi....

Maine yaha waha dekha.....uss parchai ko dhundhne ki koshish kari.....par Mujhe wo kahi bhi nahi dikhe...

Jab Meri nazar wapas se Slayer ki taraf gayi to ab uske haath uske chahre pe the aur wo koshish kar raha tha apne haathon se apne muh ko aur aankhon ko dhakne ki par usse nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Wo aatmainn bas nikalti hi jaa rahi thi theek usi taraf se jaise sode ke bottle ka dakkan kholne pe uske ander ka gan bahar aane lag jaata hai.....

Ye bas hota hi chala gaya......Main usko dekhta raha uski cheekhen sunn raha tha.....

Jwala jo abhi bhi mere ander tha......wo bhi mujhse alag ho gaya......aur abhi bas wo ek chote se cheel ke roop mein tha......mere kandhe pe baitha hua.....Hum dono bas usko dekh rahe the.....

Main - Jwala tum yaha pe kaise.....

Jwala ne meri taraf dekha.....aur bas phir waha se udd gaya wo....

Main kuch samajh nahi paaya.....ye aise kaise chala gaya.....

Main usko bulata raha par wo wapas aaya hi nahi bas uss jagah se udd kar gayab ho gaya jaise......aur mujhe wahi chod gaya DB ke sath jo abhi bhi apne kaam mein laga hua tha aur Slayer ke saath jiska kaam syad khatam hone wala tha......

Meri aawaj se Jwala to nahi aaya par haa Old Owl waha pe jarur aa gaya tha.....

Usne bhi dekha tha sab kuch ekdum se rukk gaya hai koi bhi abhi lad nahi raha tha bas saare ke saare log uss Slayer ko hi dekh rahe the....haa wo DB ko chod ke.....to wo mere pass aa gaya.....

Old Owl - Kya hua Prateek waha kya dekh rahe ho.....ye iske saath aisa tumne kiya kya....

Main - Hmm....sayad....Old Owl ye batao kya Jwala yaha pe aa sakta hai abhi.....

Old Owl - Haa kyun nahi Main usko abhi yaha pe le aata hu.....

Usne bola aur Portal kholne lag gaya......ki Maine usko rokka....

Main - Wo khud se nahi aa sakta kya....

Meri iss baat pe wo mujhe apni gardan tedhi karke dekhne laga.....

Old Owl - Kaisi baat kar rahe ho.....iss jagah pe tum bhi khud se nahi aa sakte the.....Main leke aaya hu tumhe.....Jwala khud se kaise aayega yaha pe.....

Main - par ye....kya tumne mujhe Slayer se ladte hue dekha tha....

Old owl - Nahi Main tumhari hi sunke yaha se waha gaya tha....aur waise bhi yaha jamin pe bahut dhool udd rahi thi upar jyada kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha wo to ab sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai.....

Main - Tumhe pakka yakkin hai naa Jwala yaha nahi aa sakta.....

Old Owl - Tumhe yakkin nahi to tum usko yaha bulla ke dekho.....wo nahi aa paayega yaha pe.....ye jagah hi kuch aisi hai....

Mujhe abhi bhi yakkin nahi hua iss wajah se Maine pukara usko aur koi jawab nahi aaya.....

Main - Old Owl wo yaha tha.....hum dono ek saath milke lade Slayer se....aur uske baad wo chote se cheel mein badal ke mere.....yaha issi kandhe pe baitha hua tha.....phir wo udd ke chala gaya.....Main usko pukarta raha.....par usne koi jawab nahi diya.....bas chala gaya....

Old Owl - Aisa kaise ho sakta....ye kya hai.....

Wo abhi kuch aur hi bol raha tha par usko kuch dikha aur usne apni baat ko badal diya.....Maine uss jagah dekha jaha pe wo ishara kar raha tha.....waha pe 2 roshani ke golle the.....ek thoda pinkish tha aur dusre wala bluish....dono hi yaha waha hill rahe the.....

Maine Slayer ki taraf dekha to ab uske ander se roshani ke saath saath kuch gole bhi bahar aa rahe the jaise mere pass the ussi ke tarah ke.....aur wo bahar aake uske upar ek chakkar lagate aur phir....phir waha se chale jaa rahe thebahut tezz speed mein......par ek gola tha jo uske ander se bahar to aa gaya tha lekin wapas ander jaana chah raha tha halke kale rang ka tha wo gola......par bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi wo ander nahi jaa paa raha tha kyunki ander se bas golle bahar hi aate jaa rahe the aur sayad usme utni takat nahi thi ki wo rokk paaye unn sab ko aur ander chali jaaye.....Maine dekha jo do gole mere pass the wo dono uss kaale golle ke pass gaye....aur ek pal ko to aisa laga jaise wo tinno hi ek ho gaye.....aur phir unme se chingari nikli aur thoda sa dhuwan nikla...aur phir wo alag ho gaye.....Uss kaale rang ke gole ka kalapan pahle se aur kam ho gaya tha wahi baaki ke dono golo ka rang kuch kuch gadha sa ho chukka tha.....aur phir wo mere pass aa gaye....aur wo kaale rang ka gola usne 3-4 aur chakkar lagaye Slayer ke uske baad wo bhi aasman ki taraf chala gaya......aur wahi pe kahi gum ho gaya baaki sabhi ke jaise.....

Main jaanta tha ye do gole kya hai....yaa ye kahu ki kaun hai.....Mujhe inse milna tha....aur naa sirf milna tha balki kuch logo ko inse milwana bhi tha.......

Main - Old Owl Bua ke pass jaao.....aur unse kaho ki wo sabhi gharwalo ko ikkatha kare.....Daksh Mama aur Pankaj ko bhi....

Old Owl - Main tumhe yaha pe akela chod ke.....

Main - iss baare mein hum pahle baat kar chukke hai aur tumhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baat manni hi hogi to jaao aur Bua se kaho jo Maine kaha hai.....agar sawal pucche to bas wahi baat wapas se kah dena...aur uske baad mere pass wapas aa jaana....

Old Owl jaane ke liye taiyaar tha par usse pahle wo piche mudda aur isse pahle wo wapas se mere charo taraf wo ghera banata.....Maine usko rokk diya.....aur jaldi se jaane ko kaha......

Main - Kya wo Sofia thi......

Mere itna kahne se wo dono golle mere charo taraf ghumne lag gaye....Matlab wo Sofia hi thi......

Main - Kya Slayer ke ander abhi bhi Dhruv theek hai.....

Wo dono golle abhi bhi mere charo taraf ghumte rahe......matlab wo theek tha ander.....ye acchi baat thi....

Main - Main aap dono ko baaki sab se milwana chahta hu.....sayad aap bhi yahi chahte hai.....

Wo dono waise hi ghumte rahe.....gol gol mere charo taraf....

Slayer abhi bhi ussi tarah baitha apne chahre ko dhakne ki koshish kar raha tha par ab uska sarir jaise kamzzor hota jaa raha tha.....uski haddiyan dikhne lag gayi thi......sareer sukh chukka tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte.....wo nicche ki taraf gir gaya......par wo roshaniya abhi bhi....waise hi nikal rahi thi.....kuch deer ke baad wo band ho gayi....aur Slayer abhi bas ek haddiyon ka dhancha jaisa dikhai de raha tha saamne......

Thodi der tak jab uska sarir waise hi waha raha uske baad wapas se uska sarir pahle jaisa hone lag gaya.....jo abhi haddiyon ka dhancha dikhai de raha tha wo wapas se apne pahle jaise roop mein aane lag gaya tha.....haa psr aankhon ka rang badal gaya tha......Slayer ko banane ke liye Sofia ne dono tarah ke jaadu ka use kiya tha....par ab.......ab uske ander Dhruv tha to dark magic naa ke barabar hone lag gayi thi....kahte hai aankhon mein sarir ka haal dikhai deta hai bas wahi baat thi.....wo uske nader maujood saari energies ko dikha raha tha.....par abhi usne koi ek colour choose nahi kiya tha....wo bas badalta jaa raha tha.....

Main apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha uske sarir ko bante hue....

Abhi yaha pe ye ho hi raha tha ki DB apne jagah se khada hua.....matlab uska kaam pura ho chukka tha usne Fumos ke energy source ko kaabu mein kar liya tha.....aur shant bhi kar diya tha....yaa ye kaha jaaye usne usko sulla diya....

Agar aisa nahi hota to sayad abhi main aur wo khud aur baaki ke sab jo yaha Fumos pe the....wo sab ke sab yaha waha antariksh mein tairti hui patheron pe hote......naa ki iss pure planet pe.....

Uske aisa karne ke baad waha aas pass jo bhi pathrili jameen thi unke pass bhi chote chote paudhe dikhai dene lag gaye the......

Upar jo aasmaan mein Fumos ke log the.....wo sab ke sab baarish ki bundon ki tarah jameen pe girne lag gaye the....Maine jab wo dekha to meri nazarein Leader ko dhundhne lag gayi.....agar baaki sabhi ki powers jaa rahi thi to uski bhi jaane wali thi....aur wo bhi upar aasman se girne wala tha.....par Maine dekha pass ka hi ped achanak se bada hone lag gaya aur uncha hota jaa raha tha...upar dekha to waha pe Leader tha....aur isse pahle wo nicche girta usne uss ped ko pakad liya tha.....

Ye DB kar raha tha uss ped ke saath......aur jab Leader ne ped ko pakad liya to DB ne usko nicche uttar diya....wo nicche aaya par sath mein Demos wale bhi aa rahe the uspe hamla karne ko aakhir wo abhi tak unke hisab se iss jagah ka leader tha aur jung mein jab tak aap yaa to mar nahi jaate yaa haar kabl nahi karte tab tak aap nahi haarte ho.....to wo to yaha pe isko maarne aa rahe the....

Main kuch karta isse pahle waha pe lage pedon ne wapas se apna kamal dikhaya.....wo jhoom rahe the.....unki pattiyan unke tanne kisi hathiyar ki tarah kaam kar rahi thi......kabhi koi ped kisi Demos wale ko apne pattiyon mein samma leta to kabhi kisi ko apne tanne se maar ke dusre taraf pahucha deta.....

Demos ki aadhi sena inhi sab ke chappet mein aa chukki thi.....aur kyunki unhone aisa kuch pahle dekha nahi tha....iss wajah se unhone waha se bhag jaane mein hi apni salamati samjhi aur bas.....saare ke saare ho gaye 9....2....11...

Iss baat se bekhabar ki jab Lucifer unko binna jeet hasil kiye hue paayega....to wo unka kya haal karega.....

DB abhi bhi uss Suraksha dhere ke ander hi tha.....aur wahi se ye sab kar raha tha.....usne wo ghera toda.....aur usme se bahar aaya.....usne ek nazar Slayer pe daali phir mujhe dekha.....

DB - Tum dono kahi lad to nahi rahe the naa.....

Main - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....usne bhi mere pass unn do gollon ko dekha....aur bas dekhta raha....phir apni gardan hilate hue aage badha.....

DB - Maine iske baare mein nahi socha tha.....

Mujhe nahi pata ye kya soch raha tha par kuch baatein sirf aur sirf immortals ko hi pata hoti hai.....aur ye baat bhi unhi mein se ek thi.....mujhe yaad nahi kisi bhi Immortal ne iss baare mein kisi dusre ko koi baat batai thi.....

Leader - DB.....Kya ab sab theek hai.....kya Main aazad hu....aur Fumos ka kya hua....

DB - Aap bataiye.....kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aapko......

Leader - Main.....main theek hu.....haa thodi kamzori si lag rahi hai mujhe.....

DB - wo iss wajah se kyunki ab aapko Fumos ki taraf se milne wali powers nahi mil rahi hai......ab wo saari powers uss ped ko mil rahi hai....aur wo ped.....unn sabhi powers ko aas pass bikher de raha hai....

Leader - To kya Fumos abhi bhi......

DB - Wo gahri neend mein so raha hai....aur abhi usko bahut waqt lagne wala hai......

Abhi hum baatein kar rahe the ki Slayer ka sarir wapas se hilne lag gaya aur wo khada ho gaya......

Leader ne bhi dekha usko.....

Leader - To ab iska kya....

Main - Iski chinta mat kariye ye hamare saath hi hai....

Dhruv(Slayer) - Ha Main aapke saath hi hu....

Yaha ka kaam mere hisab se pura ho chukka tha.....Main bas uss Old owl ka wait kar raha tha.....pata nahi usko kya hua......ek kaam diya tha usko aur usme bhi wo itna waqt laga raha tha.....

Wahi yaha se durr.....

Bahar se jitne bhi log Fumos pe nazrein gadayein hue the......unko ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....Fumos bilkul se badal gaya tha.......har jagah pe ped hi ped the ab.....pura planet hi jungle jaisa dikhai de raha tha bahar se.....ander kya chal raha tha aur kya nahi ye sab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kisi ko....

Kuch ko lagne laga sayad Lucifer ne jeet liya iss planet ko wahi kuch logo ko lag raha tha ki Fumos ne apna roop badal liya unn sab ko harane ke baad......

To upar to bahut halchal thi.....har koi janna chah raha tha par kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha......

Lekin ek banda tha.....asal mein do the.....ek to Lucifer aur dusra koi aur.......

Lucifer to gusse se pagal ho gaya tha aur apne logo ko maar raha tha.....wahi dusra abhi jo hua wo dekh ke pagal hua jaa raha tha......

Uske hisab se waqt aa gaya tha iss jagah ko tabah kar dene ka.....nahi to Fumos baaki planets pe kabza kar leta.....lekin usne dekha Fumos shant ho gaya tha.....so gaya tha.....aur ye baat usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi.......

Par wo wapas se waha aana nahi chahta tha......usko iss baat ki phikar thi ki kahi usko dekh naa liya jaaye......

Next update mein ek baar Demos ka nazara dekhne chalenge aur Fumos pe kuch kaam bacche hai wo bhi dekh lenge.....saath mein kya Prateek apne Maa Baap ke khooni ke sarir ko apne ghar pe le jaa paayega.....

Toh kya slayer sach me khatam??

ashish_1982_in · Oct 17, 2021

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UPDATE - 109

Sayad abhi bhi.....Dhruv uske ander se meri madad kar raha tha.......

Waise bhi kuch ho ho uska sarir chahe kitne hi insano ke sarir ke tukdo se milke banaya hua ho......par Dhruv ki asal kshamta ko khud mein kaid kar paana wo bhi tab jab pahle se hi ander naa jaane kitni hi aatmayein hai aasan nahi hone wala tha......

Par ye sab jo kuch bhi tha......wo sab bas mere khayal hi to the.....abhi tak Main confirm nahi hua tha......sayad ye jo bhi uske chahre se nikal raha tha wo kuch aur hi ho....

Wo iss waqt wahi jamin pe baitha hua tha aur haanf raha tha.....Main bas usko dekhe jaa raha tha.....Main ye bhi nahi chahta tha ki uske sharir ko jyada nuksan pahuchaya jaaye......wo apne tarah ka iss jagah pe eklauta tha......usko kam se kam nuksan pahuchana ye meri soch thi.....haa par tabhi tak jab tak wo mujhe yaa kisi aur ko chot naa pahuchaye....

Main inn baaton pe gaur kar raha tha ki tabhi mujhe kuch mehsoos hua.....Mujhe aisa laga jaise koi mujhe kah raha ho.....bas ek baar aur......

Maine aas pass dekha.....par koi bhi nahi tha waha pe.....Main yaha pe jab se aaya hu tab se mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha tha par....iss feeling se jyada important chizz mere saamne thi to ispe dhyaan naa ke barabar de raha tha Main.....isse pahle bhi ek baar mujhe ek aawaj sunai di thi.....aur abhi ye jo hua wo.....

Jab Maine kuch nahi kiya.....to mujhe mere kaano mein aawaj aayi wahi aawaj jo iske pahle aayi thi.....

" Maine kaha naa bas ek baar aur....."

Iss awaj ke baad jaise Mujpe mera koi control hi nahi raha......aur Maine....Apna haath aage kiya aur sidha.....ek bada sa black fire ball banaya aur iss baar uske aas pass nahi theek uske upar de maara......

Slayer jo baitha hua tha jamin pe abhi wo iss baar chatpatane lag gaya......wo aag aur dark power iss baar....iss baar wo uspe asar kar rahi thi.....aisa nahi tha pahle nahi kar rahi thi.....lekin iss baar uska asar mujhe dikhai de raha tha.....

Wo aag bas badhti hi jaa rahi thi shuru mein to usne hilne ki koshish kari thi aur wo hilla bhi tha.....par uske kuch der baad.....wo bas chilla hi raha tha aur apne jagah pe thoda bahut hill raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise wo bandha hua ho kisi chizz se......aur tabhi achanak se.....

"Band kardo ab...."

Wapas se mujhe ye aawaj sunai di....aur maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur iss baar bas Dark power hi tha.....usne uss aag ko khatam kar diya.....

Yaha uss aag ki laptein khatam hui hi thi ki aachanak se Slayer ka sarir akadne sa laga.....uska chahra ekdum se upar ki taraf ho gaya aur haath sarir se bilkul durr jaise kissi ne rassi se bandh rakhe ho aur ab unko khinch raha tha.....par baat yahi pe khatam nahi hui.....

Upar ki oor dekhte hue hi uski aankhon se aur muh se dher saari roshani nikalne lag gayi......roshani ki matra bahut hi adheek thi....

Wo roshani nahi thi......wo saare wahi aatmaein thi jo uske ander fanse hue the.....wo itni raftaar se bahar aa rahe the iss wajah se unko dekhna muskil tha......

Main unhi sab ko dekh raha tha...alag alag chahre.....kuch insani to kuch dusre jeev....wo bas bahar aate jaa rahe the.....maine dekha unme se kuch wo uss tarah ke bhi dikh rahe the jaise Dark world se aaye log dikh rahe the.....

Wo sab bas uske ander se bahar aate aur upar ki taraf jaa rahe the.....upar jitne bhi log iss waqt lad rahe the.....wo sab isko dekh ke shant ho chukke the......Khud Lucifer to yaha pe nahi aaya tha par agar hota to iss waqt wo bhi bas rukka hua hi hota.....

Maine iss dauran kuch aur bhi dekha.....unn aatmaon ke upar jaane ke karan jo roshani chahro taraf phaili hui thi uske karaan hi mujhe ek parchai dikhai di thi.....par sayad usne bhi mujhe dekh liya tha aur issi wajah se wo turant hi waha se gayab ho gayi....

Maine yaha waha dekha.....uss parchai ko dhundhne ki koshish kari.....par Mujhe wo kahi bhi nahi dikhe...

Jab Meri nazar wapas se Slayer ki taraf gayi to ab uske haath uske chahre pe the aur wo koshish kar raha tha apne haathon se apne muh ko aur aankhon ko dhakne ki par usse nahi ho paa raha tha.....

Wo aatmainn bas nikalti hi jaa rahi thi theek usi taraf se jaise sode ke bottle ka dakkan kholne pe uske ander ka gan bahar aane lag jaata hai.....

Ye bas hota hi chala gaya......Main usko dekhta raha uski cheekhen sunn raha tha.....

Jwala jo abhi bhi mere ander tha......wo bhi mujhse alag ho gaya......aur abhi bas wo ek chote se cheel ke roop mein tha......mere kandhe pe baitha hua.....Hum dono bas usko dekh rahe the.....

Main - Jwala tum yaha pe kaise.....

Jwala ne meri taraf dekha.....aur bas phir waha se udd gaya wo....

Main kuch samajh nahi paaya.....ye aise kaise chala gaya.....

Main usko bulata raha par wo wapas aaya hi nahi bas uss jagah se udd kar gayab ho gaya jaise......aur mujhe wahi chod gaya DB ke sath jo abhi bhi apne kaam mein laga hua tha aur Slayer ke saath jiska kaam syad khatam hone wala tha......

Meri aawaj se Jwala to nahi aaya par haa Old Owl waha pe jarur aa gaya tha.....

Usne bhi dekha tha sab kuch ekdum se rukk gaya hai koi bhi abhi lad nahi raha tha bas saare ke saare log uss Slayer ko hi dekh rahe the....haa wo DB ko chod ke.....to wo mere pass aa gaya.....

Old Owl - Kya hua Prateek waha kya dekh rahe ho.....ye iske saath aisa tumne kiya kya....

Main - Hmm....sayad....Old Owl ye batao kya Jwala yaha pe aa sakta hai abhi.....

Old Owl - Haa kyun nahi Main usko abhi yaha pe le aata hu.....

Usne bola aur Portal kholne lag gaya......ki Maine usko rokka....

Main - Wo khud se nahi aa sakta kya....

Meri iss baat pe wo mujhe apni gardan tedhi karke dekhne laga.....

Old Owl - Kaisi baat kar rahe ho.....iss jagah pe tum bhi khud se nahi aa sakte the.....Main leke aaya hu tumhe.....Jwala khud se kaise aayega yaha pe.....

Main - par ye....kya tumne mujhe Slayer se ladte hue dekha tha....

Old owl - Nahi Main tumhari hi sunke yaha se waha gaya tha....aur waise bhi yaha jamin pe bahut dhool udd rahi thi upar jyada kuch nahi dikhai de raha tha wo to ab sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai.....

Main - Tumhe pakka yakkin hai naa Jwala yaha nahi aa sakta.....

Old Owl - Tumhe yakkin nahi to tum usko yaha bulla ke dekho.....wo nahi aa paayega yaha pe.....ye jagah hi kuch aisi hai....

Mujhe abhi bhi yakkin nahi hua iss wajah se Maine pukara usko aur koi jawab nahi aaya.....

Main - Old Owl wo yaha tha.....hum dono ek saath milke lade Slayer se....aur uske baad wo chote se cheel mein badal ke mere.....yaha issi kandhe pe baitha hua tha.....phir wo udd ke chala gaya.....Main usko pukarta raha.....par usne koi jawab nahi diya.....bas chala gaya....

Old Owl - Aisa kaise ho sakta....ye kya hai.....

Wo abhi kuch aur hi bol raha tha par usko kuch dikha aur usne apni baat ko badal diya.....Maine uss jagah dekha jaha pe wo ishara kar raha tha.....waha pe 2 roshani ke golle the.....ek thoda pinkish tha aur dusre wala bluish....dono hi yaha waha hill rahe the.....

Maine Slayer ki taraf dekha to ab uske ander se roshani ke saath saath kuch gole bhi bahar aa rahe the jaise mere pass the ussi ke tarah ke.....aur wo bahar aake uske upar ek chakkar lagate aur phir....phir waha se chale jaa rahe thebahut tezz speed mein......par ek gola tha jo uske ander se bahar to aa gaya tha lekin wapas ander jaana chah raha tha halke kale rang ka tha wo gola......par bahut koshish karne ke baad bhi wo ander nahi jaa paa raha tha kyunki ander se bas golle bahar hi aate jaa rahe the aur sayad usme utni takat nahi thi ki wo rokk paaye unn sab ko aur ander chali jaaye.....Maine dekha jo do gole mere pass the wo dono uss kaale golle ke pass gaye....aur ek pal ko to aisa laga jaise wo tinno hi ek ho gaye.....aur phir unme se chingari nikli aur thoda sa dhuwan nikla...aur phir wo alag ho gaye.....Uss kaale rang ke gole ka kalapan pahle se aur kam ho gaya tha wahi baaki ke dono golo ka rang kuch kuch gadha sa ho chukka tha.....aur phir wo mere pass aa gaye....aur wo kaale rang ka gola usne 3-4 aur chakkar lagaye Slayer ke uske baad wo bhi aasman ki taraf chala gaya......aur wahi pe kahi gum ho gaya baaki sabhi ke jaise.....

Main jaanta tha ye do gole kya hai....yaa ye kahu ki kaun hai.....Mujhe inse milna tha....aur naa sirf milna tha balki kuch logo ko inse milwana bhi tha.......

Main - Old Owl Bua ke pass jaao.....aur unse kaho ki wo sabhi gharwalo ko ikkatha kare.....Daksh Mama aur Pankaj ko bhi....

Old Owl - Main tumhe yaha pe akela chod ke.....

Main - iss baare mein hum pahle baat kar chukke hai aur tumhe pata hai ki tumhe meri baat manni hi hogi to jaao aur Bua se kaho jo Maine kaha hai.....agar sawal pucche to bas wahi baat wapas se kah dena...aur uske baad mere pass wapas aa jaana....

Old Owl jaane ke liye taiyaar tha par usse pahle wo piche mudda aur isse pahle wo wapas se mere charo taraf wo ghera banata.....Maine usko rokk diya.....aur jaldi se jaane ko kaha......

Main - Kya wo Sofia thi......

Mere itna kahne se wo dono golle mere charo taraf ghumne lag gaye....Matlab wo Sofia hi thi......

Main - Kya Slayer ke ander abhi bhi Dhruv theek hai.....

Wo dono golle abhi bhi mere charo taraf ghumte rahe......matlab wo theek tha ander.....ye acchi baat thi....

Main - Main aap dono ko baaki sab se milwana chahta hu.....sayad aap bhi yahi chahte hai.....

Wo dono waise hi ghumte rahe.....gol gol mere charo taraf....

Slayer abhi bhi ussi tarah baitha apne chahre ko dhakne ki koshish kar raha tha par ab uska sarir jaise kamzzor hota jaa raha tha.....uski haddiyan dikhne lag gayi thi......sareer sukh chukka tha....aur dekhte hi dekhte.....wo nicche ki taraf gir gaya......par wo roshaniya abhi bhi....waise hi nikal rahi thi.....kuch deer ke baad wo band ho gayi....aur Slayer abhi bas ek haddiyon ka dhancha jaisa dikhai de raha tha saamne......

Thodi der tak jab uska sarir waise hi waha raha uske baad wapas se uska sarir pahle jaisa hone lag gaya.....jo abhi haddiyon ka dhancha dikhai de raha tha wo wapas se apne pahle jaise roop mein aane lag gaya tha.....haa psr aankhon ka rang badal gaya tha......Slayer ko banane ke liye Sofia ne dono tarah ke jaadu ka use kiya tha....par ab.......ab uske ander Dhruv tha to dark magic naa ke barabar hone lag gayi thi....kahte hai aankhon mein sarir ka haal dikhai deta hai bas wahi baat thi.....wo uske nader maujood saari energies ko dikha raha tha.....par abhi usne koi ek colour choose nahi kiya tha....wo bas badalta jaa raha tha.....

Main apne aankhon ke saamne dekh raha tha uske sarir ko bante hue....

Abhi yaha pe ye ho hi raha tha ki DB apne jagah se khada hua.....matlab uska kaam pura ho chukka tha usne Fumos ke energy source ko kaabu mein kar liya tha.....aur shant bhi kar diya tha....yaa ye kaha jaaye usne usko sulla diya....

Agar aisa nahi hota to sayad abhi main aur wo khud aur baaki ke sab jo yaha Fumos pe the....wo sab ke sab yaha waha antariksh mein tairti hui patheron pe hote......naa ki iss pure planet pe.....

Uske aisa karne ke baad waha aas pass jo bhi pathrili jameen thi unke pass bhi chote chote paudhe dikhai dene lag gaye the......

Upar jo aasmaan mein Fumos ke log the.....wo sab ke sab baarish ki bundon ki tarah jameen pe girne lag gaye the....Maine jab wo dekha to meri nazarein Leader ko dhundhne lag gayi.....agar baaki sabhi ki powers jaa rahi thi to uski bhi jaane wali thi....aur wo bhi upar aasman se girne wala tha.....par Maine dekha pass ka hi ped achanak se bada hone lag gaya aur uncha hota jaa raha tha...upar dekha to waha pe Leader tha....aur isse pahle wo nicche girta usne uss ped ko pakad liya tha.....

Ye DB kar raha tha uss ped ke saath......aur jab Leader ne ped ko pakad liya to DB ne usko nicche uttar diya....wo nicche aaya par sath mein Demos wale bhi aa rahe the uspe hamla karne ko aakhir wo abhi tak unke hisab se iss jagah ka leader tha aur jung mein jab tak aap yaa to mar nahi jaate yaa haar kabl nahi karte tab tak aap nahi haarte ho.....to wo to yaha pe isko maarne aa rahe the....

Main kuch karta isse pahle waha pe lage pedon ne wapas se apna kamal dikhaya.....wo jhoom rahe the.....unki pattiyan unke tanne kisi hathiyar ki tarah kaam kar rahi thi......kabhi koi ped kisi Demos wale ko apne pattiyon mein samma leta to kabhi kisi ko apne tanne se maar ke dusre taraf pahucha deta.....

Demos ki aadhi sena inhi sab ke chappet mein aa chukki thi.....aur kyunki unhone aisa kuch pahle dekha nahi tha....iss wajah se unhone waha se bhag jaane mein hi apni salamati samjhi aur bas.....saare ke saare ho gaye 9....2....11...

Iss baat se bekhabar ki jab Lucifer unko binna jeet hasil kiye hue paayega....to wo unka kya haal karega.....

DB abhi bhi uss Suraksha dhere ke ander hi tha.....aur wahi se ye sab kar raha tha.....usne wo ghera toda.....aur usme se bahar aaya.....usne ek nazar Slayer pe daali phir mujhe dekha.....

DB - Tum dono kahi lad to nahi rahe the naa.....

Main - Nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.....usne bhi mere pass unn do gollon ko dekha....aur bas dekhta raha....phir apni gardan hilate hue aage badha.....

DB - Maine iske baare mein nahi socha tha.....

Mujhe nahi pata ye kya soch raha tha par kuch baatein sirf aur sirf immortals ko hi pata hoti hai.....aur ye baat bhi unhi mein se ek thi.....mujhe yaad nahi kisi bhi Immortal ne iss baare mein kisi dusre ko koi baat batai thi.....

Leader - DB.....Kya ab sab theek hai.....kya Main aazad hu....aur Fumos ka kya hua....

DB - Aap bataiye.....kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aapko......

Leader - Main.....main theek hu.....haa thodi kamzori si lag rahi hai mujhe.....

DB - wo iss wajah se kyunki ab aapko Fumos ki taraf se milne wali powers nahi mil rahi hai......ab wo saari powers uss ped ko mil rahi hai....aur wo ped.....unn sabhi powers ko aas pass bikher de raha hai....

Leader - To kya Fumos abhi bhi......

DB - Wo gahri neend mein so raha hai....aur abhi usko bahut waqt lagne wala hai......

Abhi hum baatein kar rahe the ki Slayer ka sarir wapas se hilne lag gaya aur wo khada ho gaya......

Leader ne bhi dekha usko.....

Leader - To ab iska kya....

Main - Iski chinta mat kariye ye hamare saath hi hai....

Dhruv(Slayer) - Ha Main aapke saath hi hu....

Yaha ka kaam mere hisab se pura ho chukka tha.....Main bas uss Old owl ka wait kar raha tha.....pata nahi usko kya hua......ek kaam diya tha usko aur usme bhi wo itna waqt laga raha tha.....

Wahi yaha se durr.....

Bahar se jitne bhi log Fumos pe nazrein gadayein hue the......unko ab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.....Fumos bilkul se badal gaya tha.......har jagah pe ped hi ped the ab.....pura planet hi jungle jaisa dikhai de raha tha bahar se.....ander kya chal raha tha aur kya nahi ye sab kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kisi ko....

Kuch ko lagne laga sayad Lucifer ne jeet liya iss planet ko wahi kuch logo ko lag raha tha ki Fumos ne apna roop badal liya unn sab ko harane ke baad......

To upar to bahut halchal thi.....har koi janna chah raha tha par kisi ko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha......

Lekin ek banda tha.....asal mein do the.....ek to Lucifer aur dusra koi aur.......

Lucifer to gusse se pagal ho gaya tha aur apne logo ko maar raha tha.....wahi dusra abhi jo hua wo dekh ke pagal hua jaa raha tha......

Uske hisab se waqt aa gaya tha iss jagah ko tabah kar dene ka.....nahi to Fumos baaki planets pe kabza kar leta.....lekin usne dekha Fumos shant ho gaya tha.....so gaya tha.....aur ye baat usko samajh nahi aa rahi thi.......

Par wo wapas se waha aana nahi chahta tha......usko iss baat ki phikar thi ki kahi usko dekh naa liya jaaye......

Next update mein ek baar Demos ka nazara dekhne chalenge aur Fumos pe kuch kaam bacche hai wo bhi dekh lenge.....saath mein kya Prateek apne Maa Baap ke khooni ke sarir ko apne ghar pe le jaa paayega.....

Fantastic update bhai maza aa gya

Ashish120 · Oct 17, 2021

Super duper update bhai

Vickyabhi · Oct 17, 2021

Super nice update

Lovekillsyou · Oct 17, 2021

Writer sahab ye hridya parivartan kaise huwa batana chaho btao. Kitna wait kiya tha update ka lakin apki traf se jabab bhi nahi mil raha tha

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