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Rits ka es trahh bilakh kar rona mujhe ander tak takliff dene lga . Mujhe uska Rona dekha nhi gya or mene uthakar use gale se laga liya. Meri aankhen bhi nam ho chukin thin.
"vihaan kii maut ke baad main puri tarah toot chuki thi ... mere dil mein hamesha vihaan kii maut ka bojh rahata tha. main na collage jati thi aur na kisi se milti thi. zindagi jaise khatm ho gaii thi mere liye. is hadase ko ek mahina beet chuka tha. tabhi mujhe meri dost ne bataaya ki baahar vihaan ke kuchh dost mujhse milne aye hain.
main bade beman se unase milne gaii. unamen aranav bhi shaamil tha.
"Rits jo kuchh bhi hua ham sab jaante hain ki usmen tumhara koii dosh nhi hai lekin tum khud ke saath aisa kar ke vihaan ko dhokha de rhi ho. kya vihaan khud kabhi chaahega ki tum apni zindagi aise jio ?"
mene khaamosh chehare se un sabakii or dekha.
"Rits poora collage tumhara intezar kar raha hai kyonki sab jaante hain ki agar tum aaogi to kahi na kahi unhen vihaan apne beech dobaara se mil jayega. Please Rits agar tum sach mein hame apna dost Manti ho to fir se collage aana shuroo kar do"
meri samajh mein kuchh nhi aa raha tha lekin un sabake zor dene par mene haan kar dee.
aur jab main collage gayee to main ye dekhakar hairaan thi ki sabhi ne mujhe vaise hee pyaar aur izzat dee jaise vo vihaan ko dete the. sab mera har vaqt khyaal rakhate the. aur jab mene collage chhoda us din sabhi kii aankhe nam thi."
"aur uske baad main vaapis manali aa gaii aur yaheen ek collage mein literature padhaana shuroo kar diya ... haalaanki mene vihaan ko kiye vayde ko nibhaaya, kabhi likhana nhi chhoda .. vo kaagaz jo tumne mujhe us din vaapis kiya tha usspar vahi kavita likhee thi jo main use dena chahti thi lekin zindagi ne mujhe itana bhi mauka nhi diya aur tab se use main hamesha apne saath rakhti hoon isse mujhe aisa lagata hai ki vo hamesha mere saath hai"
kuchh pal ke liye vahaan ek khaamoshi ne jagah le lee.
"ab main kya kahoon tum sach mein bahut mazaboot ho. itane vaqt tak ye bojh apne dil par lekar jeeti rhi aur kisi se ek shabd bhi nhi kaha ... main sach me bahut khushakismat hoon ki mene tumase pyaar kiya ... aur main tumhen aaj ek vaada karata hoon ki chaahe tum mujhe pyaar karo ya na karo, chaahe tum mujhe milo ya na milo main tumhen hamesha yoon hee pyaar karata rahoonga"
"vo to thik hai lekin ab aage kya karna hai ?" Rits ne savaal kiya.
"karna kya hai, choonki ab main tumhaari na kii vajah jaanta hoon to kabhi bhi dobaara tumase is baare mein kuchh nhi poochhunga aur ab jis kaam ke liye aaya tha vo to hua nhi to kal hee vaapis ja raha hoon. lekin jaane se pehle mujhe tumase kuchh chaahiye"
"kya ?"
"ek vaada ki chaahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye tum apne hothon par yoon hee muskaan rakhogee hamesha. ise kabhi gum nhi hone dogi . bolo manjoor ?"
Rits ne haan mein sir hila diya
Me manali se khaali haath hee vaapis aa gya tha lekin is baar mere dil mein ek sukoon tha. aur ab mere dil me Rits ke liye pyaar aur ijzat dono hee aur badh gaye the.
ghar pahunchakar mene socha ki paapa se is baare mein baat kare par vo kafi busy the. fir ek din unhonne khud hee mujhse is baare mein puchha.
"to barakhurdaar baat kahaan tak pahunchi ?, Rits ne haan kii ya nhi ?"
"nhi paapa, uska jawab nhi badla lekin haan ab main uske inakaar kii vajah janta hoon aur sach kahiye ab mujhe uskii na se koii etaraaj nhi hai"
"achha zara mujhe bhi bataoge, usne aisa kya kaha. ham vaada karte hain ki ye baat sirf ham dono ke beech rahego "
aur fir meen unhen sab bata diya jo kuchh Rits ke saath hua. ye sab sunakar papa kisi soch mein doob gaye.
"kya hua paapa, aap kahaan kho gaye ?"
"kuchh nhi beta, achha tumhaare paas us ladke vihaan kii koii photo hai ya Rits ne tumhen kabhi dikhaii ho"
"haan ek minat rukiye" mene kuchh sochakar kaha kyonki mujhe yaad aaya ki vihaan kii ek photo Rits kii us dairy mein thi jo us aag vaale haadase ke din sathb saath hee mere saman mein aa gaii thi ... lekin Rits ko lagata tha ki vo dairy jal chuki hai.
Mene vo photo laakar apne paapa ko dikhaii .
use dekhate hee unhen ek bada jhataka laga.
"Ohhh god ye nhi ho sakata" unake munh se bs yhi nikala.
"kyon aap aisa kyon kah rahe hain kya nhi ho sakata ? boliye paapa bataie"
aur fir unhonne jo bataaya vo mere liye kisi sadme se kam nhi tha. Meri zindagi kii itani badee Haqikat jisase me itane vaqt se anajaan tha aaj mere samne khadee thi. aur vo hakikat kuchh aisi thi.
"aaj se 2 saal pehle kii baat hai beta jab doctors ne kah diya tha ki tum ab aise dil ke saath nhi jee sakte jisame ek chhed hai ... unhonne kaha ki ab koii rasta nhi hai sivaay iske ki koii tumhen apna dil transplant ke liye de. main aur hamare jaankaar doctors ne bahut koshish kii lekin aisa koii nhi mila ... aur fir ek din tumhaar ii halaat gambhir ho gaii aur hamen tumhen hospital mein admit karna pada"
"haan paapa mujhe achchhe se yaad hai lekin meri surgery ka in sabse kya lena-dena"
"us raat tum behosh the aur hamen koii raasta nhi soojh raha tha. Doctors jawab de chuke the ki agar koii dil mila to thik varana ham tumhen kho denge. main us vaqt tumhen bachaane ke liye kuchh bhi karne ko taiyaar tha. aur tabhi mujhe pta chala ki hospital mein ek accident case aaya hai aur us ladke kii haalat bahut gambhir hai ... mene doctor se uske baare mein puchha to unhonne bataaya ki accident bahut bura tha aur uske bachne ke aasaar kam hain. unhonne bataaya ki ab tak koii bhi us ladke ke ghar se nhi aaya hai ... main vahin intezar karne laga. thodi der mein hee maaloom hua ki vo ladka mar chuka hai... Doctors use lavarish laash samajhkar le ja hee rahe the ki tabhi mene unase gujaarish kii kii vo uska heart tumhen transplant kar den. mere zor dene par vo log Mann gaye.
aur us ladke ka dil surgery se tumhaare andar transplant kar diya gya ... lekin baad mein mene dekha ki uske Maa-baap bhi aa gaye the. haalanki mene aur doctors ne unhen sab bata diya tha. uske baap ne kaha ki ab unka beta to raha nhi kam se kam uskii vajah se mera beta to zinda hai ...... Our vo ladka koii aur nhi vihaan hee tha"
ye kahakar vo chup ho gaye.
"vihaan ! ! !" Me is sacch ko sunkar dang rah gya. jis ladke ne mujhe dil dekar meri jaan bachaii aur jise Rits beintehaa pyaar karti thi vo dono ek hee the mere seene mein is vaqt vihaan ka dil dhadak raha tha.
dheere-dheere mere samne sab aane laga. kaise me tab us se pehli baar mila aur uskii jaan bachaii . kaise jab me us se baat karne gya to aisa laga ki jaise me use bahut pehle se janata hu ... jab bhi me use dekhta tha tab mujhe lagta tha ki hum dono ek-doosre se hamesha se jude the ... mujhe Rits kii vo sab baaten yaad aane lagi jo usne vihaan ke baare mein kahee thi.
Me soch raha tha ki "agar Rits ko is baat ka pta chalega to use kaisa lagega. kya sochegi vo mere baare mein ?"
isi kashmakash mein 5 din beet gaye ... Agali shaam mere paas naani ka phone aaya.
"Hello Akhil beta kaise ho tum ?"
"main thik hoon naani, aap kaisi hain ? aur Rits vo kaisi hai ?"
"main thik hoon lekin beta tum Rits ko rok lo. vo meri baat nhi sun rhi hai"
"aap kya kah rhi hain, saff-saff batao ” ghabrate hue me bola
"Rits ne America kii kisi University mein apply kiya tha aur vo approve ho gya hai ... vo kal hee ja rhi hai beta. usne mujhe bhi aaj hee bataya hai. beta use roklo.. ek tum hee ho jo fir se use zindagi jeena seekha sakte ho. tum hee use is andhere se baahar nikal sakte ho main tumhaare aage haath jodti hoon beta, use rok lo "
"naani aap fikr mat kiijie main abhi aa raha hoon vahaan" kah kar mene phone rakh diya.
Mene apne Maa-paapa ko sab bataaya to unhonne bhi mujhe jaane kii ijaazat de dee.
Me usi vaqt manali ke liye nikal pada. lekin durbhaagyavash us raat mausam kuchh jyaada hee kharab ho gya aur raaste mein bhari baarish aur pahadi raasta hone ke kaaran meri kii gadi ek ped se ja takaraii ... Mujhe buri tarah chot aaii thi. vo to vahaan se gujar rahe logon ne mujhe vakt se hospital pahuncha diya Varna mera kalyan vhi ho jata
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bahut tez baarish ho rhi thi aaj aur fir achaanak se tadaak kii awaj ke saath ek ke baad ek deevaar par lagi do tasveeren neeche gir kar choor ho gaiin. kamare mein itna saara toota kaanch dekhakar Rits ekadam dar gaii.
"ye sirf tufaan ke kaaran tha ya koii Aanhoni ka ishaara ?" usne baahar jaakar dekha to naani apne kamare mein so rhin thi.
usne mujhe phone milaaya lekin vo bhi band tha. use behad ghabaraahat hone lagi thik aise hee jaise us din vihaan ke na aane par huii thi. vo subah hone ka intajaar karne lagi.
subah uske phone par ring baji. usne phone uthaaya to doosari taraf se awaj aaii
"Hello Rits beta main Akhil ka dad bol raha hoon. tum jaldi se hospital aa jao kal raat Akhil ka accident ho gya hai. tum jaldi se aa jao"
ye sunakar Rits behosh hote-hote bachi . usne rote hue sab naani ko bataaya aur unhen lekar tunrat hospital pahunchi. vahaan mere Maa paapa pehle se hee maujood the.
use dekhte hee meri Maa ne use gale se laga liya.
beta hamen maff kar do ham bhi tumhaare gunahagaar hain"
"ye aap kya kah rhin hai aunty ?, Akhil kaisa hai ?" Rits ne hairaan hote hue puchha.
"vo thik hai beta abhi khatare se baahar hai. lekin us se pehle ki tum us se milo main tumhen kuchh batana chahta hoon" papa bole
aur fir papa ne Rits ko mere aur vihaan se judi saari sachchaii bata dee jise sunakar Rits ko ek aur jhatka laga.
"beta hamen maff kardo"
"sorry kisliye uncle jo kuchh bhi meri aur vihaan kismat mein likha tha vo to hona hee tha. usme aap logon ka kya kusoor ... apne to ek baap ke naate us vaqt jo sahi tha vahi kiya" Rits ne unhen samajhte hue kaha.
"kya main us se mil sakti hoon ?"
"haan bilkul"
aur Rits us kamare kii taraf badhane lagi jisame me tha. use ek-ek kar ke sab yaad aa raha tha ki kis tarah vihaan ke jaise hee mene har baar uskii jaan bachaii thi. kyon vo har vaqt ye mahasoos kartii thi ki vihaan uske saath hai jab bhi me uske saath hota tha.
vo dheere se kamre mein daakhil huii. Me aankhe band kiye hue leta tha. usne dheere se jaakar mujhe pukaara.
"Akhil "
Mene aankhe kholi to dekha samne Rits khadi thi. Mere hothon par ek sukoon vaali muskan thi.
"tum kab aaii ?"
"Sshhhhh " Rits ne mere munh par ungli rakhte hue kaha.
"tumhen kya laga tha ki tum mujhe nhi bataoge to mujhe pta nhi chalega"
"kya"
"yahee kii ye jo khoobasoorat sa dil tum liye firte ho ye kisi aur ka nhi balki uska hai jis se main bahut pyaar karti hoon" kahate hue uskii aankhon me aansu aa gaye.
"lekin Rits mene tumhaare pyaar ka dil churaaya hai saza to mujhe milani chaahiye thi"
"haan aur isii vajah se tum yahaan hospital mein aa gaye hai na ? lekin main tumhe iske liye magf nhi karoongi" Rits ne jhutha gussa dikhaate hue kaha.
"ye kya baat huii ? naraaz to mujhe tumse hona chaahiye ... tum is dil aur mujhe dono ko chhodakar ja rhi thi. ye kahan ka iinsaff hai ?"
"haan main ja rhi thi lekin ab nhi ja rhi hoon kyonki main ek baar apna pyaar kho chuki hoon dobaara nhi khona chahti" Rits ne mere sir par haath ferte hue kaha.
"to kya tum sach mein mera zindagi bhar sath dogi ?"
Mere dil par hath rkhte hue boli "haan ab meri Amanat jo tumhaare paas hai" kahate hue Rits hans padi.
“ Rits ” me uska hath thamte hue bola
“ Hammm ”
“ Me tumhare muhh se vo 3 magical words sunna chahta hu, jinhe sunne ke liye na jane me Etne din tak tadpa ” mene uske hath ko or jor se dabate hue kaha . Meri baat sunkar Rits ke gore Gaal gulabi rang ke ho gye
“ Kounse magical words ? Mujhe nhi pta un words ke bare me ” mand mand muskurate hue Rits boli
“ tumhe pta hai Rits , please bol do na taki mere dil ko sukoon mil jaye ”
“ Accha thik hai ” Etna kehkar Rits mere uper chuki or kuch hi second me uska Palo me uska chera mere chehre ke bilkul karib aa gya
“ I Love you ” or ek halka sa chumbann mere galo par kar diya “ Ab to khush hona ” vapas sidhe hote hue Rits ne kaha
“ bahut khush ” fir mene apne jeb se ek kagaj nikala or Rits ke hath me thamaya . Rits ne meri taraf muskurate hue dekha fir us kagaz ki open karke usme likhe shabdo ko padne lgi
" Ye tumne likhi ? ” mene ha me gardan
" Akdum backvash likhi, par koi baat nhi me tumhe sikha dungi because I'm fucck'n romantic writer ” haste hue Rits boli ... Use hasta dekh me bhi muskura diya
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Rits ka es trahh bilakh kar rona mujhe ander tak takliff dene lga . Mujhe uska Rona dekha nhi gya or mene uthakar use gale se laga liya. Meri aankhen bhi nam ho chukin thin.
"vihaan kii maut ke baad main puri tarah toot chuki thi ... mere dil mein hamesha vihaan kii maut ka bojh rahata tha. main na collage jati thi aur na kisi se milti thi. zindagi jaise khatm ho gaii thi mere liye. is hadase ko ek mahina beet chuka tha. tabhi mujhe meri dost ne bataaya ki baahar vihaan ke kuchh dost mujhse milne aye hain.
main bade beman se unase milne gaii. unamen aranav bhi shaamil tha.
"Rits jo kuchh bhi hua ham sab jaante hain ki usmen tumhara koii dosh nhi hai lekin tum khud ke saath aisa kar ke vihaan ko dhokha de rhi ho. kya vihaan khud kabhi chaahega ki tum apni zindagi aise jio ?"
mene khaamosh chehare se un sabakii or dekha.
"Rits poora collage tumhara intezar kar raha hai kyonki sab jaante hain ki agar tum aaogi to kahi na kahi unhen vihaan apne beech dobaara se mil jayega. Please Rits agar tum sach mein hame apna dost Manti ho to fir se collage aana shuroo kar do"
meri samajh mein kuchh nhi aa raha tha lekin un sabake zor dene par mene haan kar dee.
aur jab main collage gayee to main ye dekhakar hairaan thi ki sabhi ne mujhe vaise hee pyaar aur izzat dee jaise vo vihaan ko dete the. sab mera har vaqt khyaal rakhate the. aur jab mene collage chhoda us din sabhi kii aankhe nam thi."
"aur uske baad main vaapis manali aa gaii aur yaheen ek collage mein literature padhaana shuroo kar diya ... haalaanki mene vihaan ko kiye vayde ko nibhaaya, kabhi likhana nhi chhoda .. vo kaagaz jo tumne mujhe us din vaapis kiya tha usspar vahi kavita likhee thi jo main use dena chahti thi lekin zindagi ne mujhe itana bhi mauka nhi diya aur tab se use main hamesha apne saath rakhti hoon isse mujhe aisa lagata hai ki vo hamesha mere saath hai"
kuchh pal ke liye vahaan ek khaamoshi ne jagah le lee.
"ab main kya kahoon tum sach mein bahut mazaboot ho. itane vaqt tak ye bojh apne dil par lekar jeeti rhi aur kisi se ek shabd bhi nhi kaha ... main sach me bahut khushakismat hoon ki mene tumase pyaar kiya ... aur main tumhen aaj ek vaada karata hoon ki chaahe tum mujhe pyaar karo ya na karo, chaahe tum mujhe milo ya na milo main tumhen hamesha yoon hee pyaar karata rahoonga"
"vo to thik hai lekin ab aage kya karna hai ?" Rits ne savaal kiya.
"karna kya hai, choonki ab main tumhaari na kii vajah jaanta hoon to kabhi bhi dobaara tumase is baare mein kuchh nhi poochhunga aur ab jis kaam ke liye aaya tha vo to hua nhi to kal hee vaapis ja raha hoon. lekin jaane se pehle mujhe tumase kuchh chaahiye"
"kya ?"
"ek vaada ki chaahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye tum apne hothon par yoon hee muskaan rakhogee hamesha. ise kabhi gum nhi hone dogi . bolo manjoor ?"
Rits ne haan mein sir hila diya
Me manali se khaali haath hee vaapis aa gya tha lekin is baar mere dil mein ek sukoon tha. aur ab mere dil me Rits ke liye pyaar aur ijzat dono hee aur badh gaye the.
ghar pahunchakar mene socha ki paapa se is baare mein baat kare par vo kafi busy the. fir ek din unhonne khud hee mujhse is baare mein puchha.
"to barakhurdaar baat kahaan tak pahunchi ?, Rits ne haan kii ya nhi ?"
"nhi paapa, uska jawab nhi badla lekin haan ab main uske inakaar kii vajah janta hoon aur sach kahiye ab mujhe uskii na se koii etaraaj nhi hai"
"achha zara mujhe bhi bataoge, usne aisa kya kaha. ham vaada karte hain ki ye baat sirf ham dono ke beech rahego "
aur fir meen unhen sab bata diya jo kuchh Rits ke saath hua. ye sab sunakar papa kisi soch mein doob gaye.
"kya hua paapa, aap kahaan kho gaye ?"
"kuchh nhi beta, achha tumhaare paas us ladke vihaan kii koii photo hai ya Rits ne tumhen kabhi dikhaii ho"
"haan ek minat rukiye" mene kuchh sochakar kaha kyonki mujhe yaad aaya ki vihaan kii ek photo Rits kii us dairy mein thi jo us aag vaale haadase ke din sathb saath hee mere saman mein aa gaii thi ... lekin Rits ko lagata tha ki vo dairy jal chuki hai.
Mene vo photo laakar apne paapa ko dikhaii .
use dekhate hee unhen ek bada jhataka laga.
"Ohhh god ye nhi ho sakata" unake munh se bs yhi nikala.
"kyon aap aisa kyon kah rahe hain kya nhi ho sakata ? boliye paapa bataie"
aur fir unhonne jo bataaya vo mere liye kisi sadme se kam nhi tha. Meri zindagi kii itani badee Haqikat jisase me itane vaqt se anajaan tha aaj mere samne khadee thi. aur vo hakikat kuchh aisi thi.
"aaj se 2 saal pehle kii baat hai beta jab doctors ne kah diya tha ki tum ab aise dil ke saath nhi jee sakte jisame ek chhed hai ... unhonne kaha ki ab koii rasta nhi hai sivaay iske ki koii tumhen apna dil transplant ke liye de. main aur hamare jaankaar doctors ne bahut koshish kii lekin aisa koii nhi mila ... aur fir ek din tumhaar ii halaat gambhir ho gaii aur hamen tumhen hospital mein admit karna pada"
"haan paapa mujhe achchhe se yaad hai lekin meri surgery ka in sabse kya lena-dena"
"us raat tum behosh the aur hamen koii raasta nhi soojh raha tha. Doctors jawab de chuke the ki agar koii dil mila to thik varana ham tumhen kho denge. main us vaqt tumhen bachaane ke liye kuchh bhi karne ko taiyaar tha. aur tabhi mujhe pta chala ki hospital mein ek accident case aaya hai aur us ladke kii haalat bahut gambhir hai ... mene doctor se uske baare mein puchha to unhonne bataaya ki accident bahut bura tha aur uske bachne ke aasaar kam hain. unhonne bataaya ki ab tak koii bhi us ladke ke ghar se nhi aaya hai ... main vahin intezar karne laga. thodi der mein hee maaloom hua ki vo ladka mar chuka hai... Doctors use lavarish laash samajhkar le ja hee rahe the ki tabhi mene unase gujaarish kii kii vo uska heart tumhen transplant kar den. mere zor dene par vo log Mann gaye.
aur us ladke ka dil surgery se tumhaare andar transplant kar diya gya ... lekin baad mein mene dekha ki uske Maa-baap bhi aa gaye the. haalanki mene aur doctors ne unhen sab bata diya tha. uske baap ne kaha ki ab unka beta to raha nhi kam se kam uskii vajah se mera beta to zinda hai ...... Our vo ladka koii aur nhi vihaan hee tha"
ye kahakar vo chup ho gaye.
"vihaan ! ! !" Me is sacch ko sunkar dang rah gya. jis ladke ne mujhe dil dekar meri jaan bachaii aur jise Rits beintehaa pyaar karti thi vo dono ek hee the mere seene mein is vaqt vihaan ka dil dhadak raha tha.
dheere-dheere mere samne sab aane laga. kaise me tab us se pehli baar mila aur uskii jaan bachaii . kaise jab me us se baat karne gya to aisa laga ki jaise me use bahut pehle se janata hu ... jab bhi me use dekhta tha tab mujhe lagta tha ki hum dono ek-doosre se hamesha se jude the ... mujhe Rits kii vo sab baaten yaad aane lagi jo usne vihaan ke baare mein kahee thi.
Me soch raha tha ki "agar Rits ko is baat ka pta chalega to use kaisa lagega. kya sochegi vo mere baare mein ?"
isi kashmakash mein 5 din beet gaye ... Agali shaam mere paas naani ka phone aaya.
"Hello Akhil beta kaise ho tum ?"
"main thik hoon naani, aap kaisi hain ? aur Rits vo kaisi hai ?"
"main thik hoon lekin beta tum Rits ko rok lo. vo meri baat nhi sun rhi hai"
"aap kya kah rhi hain, saff-saff batao ” ghabrate hue me bola
"Rits ne America kii kisi University mein apply kiya tha aur vo approve ho gya hai ... vo kal hee ja rhi hai beta. usne mujhe bhi aaj hee bataya hai. beta use roklo.. ek tum hee ho jo fir se use zindagi jeena seekha sakte ho. tum hee use is andhere se baahar nikal sakte ho main tumhaare aage haath jodti hoon beta, use rok lo "
"naani aap fikr mat kiijie main abhi aa raha hoon vahaan" kah kar mene phone rakh diya.
Mene apne Maa-paapa ko sab bataaya to unhonne bhi mujhe jaane kii ijaazat de dee.
Me usi vaqt manali ke liye nikal pada. lekin durbhaagyavash us raat mausam kuchh jyaada hee kharab ho gya aur raaste mein bhari baarish aur pahadi raasta hone ke kaaran meri kii gadi ek ped se ja takaraii ... Mujhe buri tarah chot aaii thi. vo to vahaan se gujar rahe logon ne mujhe vakt se hospital pahuncha diya Varna mera kalyan vhi ho jata
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bahut tez baarish ho rhi thi aaj aur fir achaanak se tadaak kii awaj ke saath ek ke baad ek deevaar par lagi do tasveeren neeche gir kar choor ho gaiin. kamare mein itna saara toota kaanch dekhakar Rits ekadam dar gaii.
"ye sirf tufaan ke kaaran tha ya koii Aanhoni ka ishaara ?" usne baahar jaakar dekha to naani apne kamare mein so rhin thi.
usne mujhe phone milaaya lekin vo bhi band tha. use behad ghabaraahat hone lagi thik aise hee jaise us din vihaan ke na aane par huii thi. vo subah hone ka intajaar karne lagi.
subah uske phone par ring baji. usne phone uthaaya to doosari taraf se awaj aaii
"Hello Rits beta main Akhil ka dad bol raha hoon. tum jaldi se hospital aa jao kal raat Akhil ka accident ho gya hai. tum jaldi se aa jao"
ye sunakar Rits behosh hote-hote bachi . usne rote hue sab naani ko bataaya aur unhen lekar tunrat hospital pahunchi. vahaan mere Maa paapa pehle se hee maujood the.
use dekhte hee meri Maa ne use gale se laga liya.
beta hamen maff kar do ham bhi tumhaare gunahagaar hain"
"ye aap kya kah rhin hai aunty ?, Akhil kaisa hai ?" Rits ne hairaan hote hue puchha.
"vo thik hai beta abhi khatare se baahar hai. lekin us se pehle ki tum us se milo main tumhen kuchh batana chahta hoon" papa bole
aur fir papa ne Rits ko mere aur vihaan se judi saari sachchaii bata dee jise sunakar Rits ko ek aur jhatka laga.
"beta hamen maff kardo"
"sorry kisliye uncle jo kuchh bhi meri aur vihaan kismat mein likha tha vo to hona hee tha. usme aap logon ka kya kusoor ... apne to ek baap ke naate us vaqt jo sahi tha vahi kiya" Rits ne unhen samajhte hue kaha.
"kya main us se mil sakti hoon ?"
"haan bilkul"
aur Rits us kamare kii taraf badhane lagi jisame me tha. use ek-ek kar ke sab yaad aa raha tha ki kis tarah vihaan ke jaise hee mene har baar uskii jaan bachaii thi. kyon vo har vaqt ye mahasoos kartii thi ki vihaan uske saath hai jab bhi me uske saath hota tha.
vo dheere se kamre mein daakhil huii. Me aankhe band kiye hue leta tha. usne dheere se jaakar mujhe pukaara.
"Akhil "
Mene aankhe kholi to dekha samne Rits khadi thi. Mere hothon par ek sukoon vaali muskan thi.
"tum kab aaii ?"
"Sshhhhh " Rits ne mere munh par ungli rakhte hue kaha.
"tumhen kya laga tha ki tum mujhe nhi bataoge to mujhe pta nhi chalega"
"kya"
"yahee kii ye jo khoobasoorat sa dil tum liye firte ho ye kisi aur ka nhi balki uska hai jis se main bahut pyaar karti hoon" kahate hue uskii aankhon me aansu aa gaye.
"lekin Rits mene tumhaare pyaar ka dil churaaya hai saza to mujhe milani chaahiye thi"
"haan aur isii vajah se tum yahaan hospital mein aa gaye hai na ? lekin main tumhe iske liye magf nhi karoongi" Rits ne jhutha gussa dikhaate hue kaha.
"ye kya baat huii ? naraaz to mujhe tumse hona chaahiye ... tum is dil aur mujhe dono ko chhodakar ja rhi thi. ye kahan ka iinsaff hai ?"
"haan main ja rhi thi lekin ab nhi ja rhi hoon kyonki main ek baar apna pyaar kho chuki hoon dobaara nhi khona chahti" Rits ne mere sir par haath ferte hue kaha.
"to kya tum sach mein mera zindagi bhar sath dogi ?"
Mere dil par hath rkhte hue boli "haan ab meri Amanat jo tumhaare paas hai" kahate hue Rits hans padi.
“ Rits ” me uska hath thamte hue bola
“ Hammm ”
“ Me tumhare muhh se vo 3 magical words sunna chahta hu, jinhe sunne ke liye na jane me Etne din tak tadpa ” mene uske hath ko or jor se dabate hue kaha . Meri baat sunkar Rits ke gore Gaal gulabi rang ke ho gye
“ Kounse magical words ? Mujhe nhi pta un words ke bare me ” mand mand muskurate hue Rits boli
“ tumhe pta hai Rits , please bol do na taki mere dil ko sukoon mil jaye ”
“ Accha thik hai ” Etna kehkar Rits mere uper chuki or kuch hi second me uska Palo me uska chera mere chehre ke bilkul karib aa gya
“ I Love you ” or ek halka sa chumbann mere galo par kar diya “ Ab to khush hona ” vapas sidhe hote hue Rits ne kaha
“ bahut khush ” fir mene apne jeb se ek kagaj nikala or Rits ke hath me thamaya . Rits ne meri taraf muskurate hue dekha fir us kagaz ki open karke usme likhe shabdo ko padne lgi
chhilti lakiron se bahati ravani ho tum,
dikh kar bhi anadekhei kahani ho tum,
thithurate hathon kee muskurati shaam se lekar,
subah kee tapati javani ho tum,
kurabaniyat ke Inaam ko tarasati,
pyaar bhari alhad deevani ho tum,
zubaan se barasate kahar ko peeti,
aankhon mein daba pani ho tum,
banati ho apne andar hee ek duniya,
duniya ke lie begani ho tum,
tum, tum ho hee kahan is bedard duniya mein,
takiti nigahon kee beiimani ho tum.
RITS
dikh kar bhi anadekhei kahani ho tum,
thithurate hathon kee muskurati shaam se lekar,
subah kee tapati javani ho tum,
kurabaniyat ke Inaam ko tarasati,
pyaar bhari alhad deevani ho tum,
zubaan se barasate kahar ko peeti,
aankhon mein daba pani ho tum,
banati ho apne andar hee ek duniya,
duniya ke lie begani ho tum,
tum, tum ho hee kahan is bedard duniya mein,
takiti nigahon kee beiimani ho tum.
RITS
" Ye tumne likhi ? ” mene ha me gardan
" Akdum backvash likhi, par koi baat nhi me tumhe sikha dungi because I'm fucck'n romantic writer ” haste hue Rits boli ... Use hasta dekh me bhi muskura diya
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Finally I finished the story guys 
.... Aaj to dimag ka dahi bann gya sacch me . Ek din me 4 update 
... Khair I hope you liked the story agar nhi bhi aai to ab eska kya hu kar sakte hai ... Story me mirch masala dal kar esko relam pel yani lamba bhi khinch sakta tha but i didn't do that bcoz i don't fucking like this 
... Meri taraf se apna 100 % diya ... Sacch kahu to jitna asan incest likhna hota hai utna asan romantic or thriller likhna nhi hota . Dimag ka bhajiya pudi bann jata hai ...
Well aalu SANJU ( V. R. ) Death Kiñg 11 ster fan Naik DARK WOLFKING Lucky.. or jo silent writer hai un sabhi ka shukriya jo mujhe Etna pyar Diya ( vaise ek hisab se shukriya to writer ka karna chahiye jisne bina swarth ke apke liye kahani likhta hai)....
ek long story long story ya Farrar ko restart karta but Etna time nhi tha mera pass bs one week ka study se break liya tha to soccha ki mindfresh ke liye kuch likh liya jaye
... Next time jab free houngi tab ya to ek new MINDFUCK thriller story leke aunga ya fir Farrar ko restart karunga
.. btw mene ek bahut jyada short story or likhi thi jise socch rha hu esi thread par tonight ko post kar do ... Short hai but bahut acchi kahani hai vo bhi ... End last bs yhi kehna chahta hu Like, Share & Subscribe and click the bell button to get new estory 
Meri etni mehnat par ek badiya sa review dena matt bhulna . Agar nhi diya to jo mene mindfresh ke liye likha na review na milne se MINDFUCK vala mamla ho jayega fir or ha skeep kar karke matt padna nhi to mere likhne ka koi matalab nhi rehh jayega or na aap kahani ko feel kar paoge .... To milte hai Kate night esi thread par ek short story ke sath, tab tak liye bye bye
.... Aaj to dimag ka dahi bann gya sacch me . Ek din me 4 update ... Khair I hope you liked the story agar nhi bhi aai to ab eska kya hu kar sakte hai ... Story me mirch masala dal kar esko relam pel yani lamba bhi khinch sakta tha but i didn't do that bcoz i don't fucking like this ... Meri taraf se apna 100 % diya ... Sacch kahu to jitna asan incest likhna hota hai utna asan romantic or thriller likhna nhi hota . Dimag ka bhajiya pudi bann jata hai ...Well aalu SANJU ( V. R. ) Death Kiñg 11 ster fan Naik DARK WOLFKING Lucky.. or jo silent writer hai un sabhi ka shukriya jo mujhe Etna pyar Diya ( vaise ek hisab se shukriya to writer ka karna chahiye jisne bina swarth ke apke liye kahani likhta hai
)....ek long story long story ya Farrar ko restart karta but Etna time nhi tha mera pass bs one week ka study se break liya tha to soccha ki mindfresh ke liye kuch likh liya jaye
... Next time jab free houngi tab ya to ek new MINDFUCK thriller story leke aunga ya fir Farrar ko restart karunga .. btw mene ek bahut jyada short story or likhi thi jise socch rha hu esi thread par tonight ko post kar do ... Short hai but bahut acchi kahani hai vo bhi ... End last bs yhi kehna chahta hu Like, Share & Subscribe and click the bell button to get new estory Meri etni mehnat par ek badiya sa review dena matt bhulna . Agar nhi diya to jo mene mindfresh ke liye likha na review na milne se MINDFUCK vala mamla ho jayega fir or ha skeep kar karke matt padna nhi to mere likhne ka koi matalab nhi rehh jayega or na aap kahani ko feel kar paoge .... To milte hai Kate night esi thread par ek short story ke sath, tab tak liye bye bye
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Devil bro . Ho gaii completefor starting the new story. But main koi support nhi karunga aur naahi koi revos dungaa.
Pichli story mein kitna support kiya par usse adhuri chorr di. Isko complete karoge main nhi maanta. Isiliye main koi support nhi karungaa.
... Time ek sa nhi rehta dost ... Next time jab time milega tab Farrar ko bhi complete kar dunga 
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yeh kya kiya be kameene puri story hi complete kar daali... socha tha thora pyaar se bajaaonga tumhari.... lekin nahin ek baar mein hi saara maja chahte ho....Finally I finished the story guys
Well aalu SANJU ( V. R. ) Death Kiñg 11 ster fan Naik DARK WOLFKING Lucky.. or jo silent writer hai un sabhi ka shukriya jo mujhe Etna pyar Diya ( vaise ek hisab se shukriya to writer ka karna chahiye jisne bina swarth ke apke liye kahani likhta hai
ek long story long story ya Farrar ko restart karta but Etna time nhi tha mera pass bs one week ka study se break liya tha to soccha ki mindfresh ke liye kuch likh liya jaye
Meri etni mehnat par ek badiya sa review dena matt bhulna . Agar nhi diya to jo mene mindfresh ke liye likha na review na milne se MINDFUCK vala mamla ho jayega fir or ha skeep kar karke matt padna nhi to mere likhne ka koi matalab nhi rehh jayega or na aap kahani ko feel kar paoge .... To milte hai Kate night esi thread par ek short story ke sath, tab tak liye bye bye
theek hain padh ke beijjati karta hoon..
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Ju logo ne dil tod diya .... Abhi tak ek bhi review nhi ? Kya incest story ko hi support milta hai yha ? Agar aisa hai to abse baar likhna band or ye sahi bhi hai ki akhir likhe to kiske liye ? Soccha tha ki jab fir kabhi time milega to likhunga but ab kabhi nhi likhunga
.... Abhi tak ek bhi review nhi ? Kya incest story ko hi support milta hai yha ? Agar aisa hai to abse baar likhna band or ye sahi bhi hai ki akhir likhe to kiske liye ? Soccha tha ki jab fir kabhi time milega to likhunga but ab kabhi nhi likhunga
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Dhamki dete ho juJu logo ne dil tod diya
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Dhamki nhi . Satya kaha bhai ... Vaise bhi apan thehri vidhyarthi . Estory likhne padne ka vaise hi time nhi milta . Bs kabhi break lete hai tab likh leta hu . Par ab nhi likhunga . Ab break time vocation par ya family members ke sath spend karunga ... Bc mene dekha yha jitne bhi behtrin writer hai unko itna support nhi milta exa. Harshit Bhai , Subham Kumar , Champ Bhai , or bhi bahut se hai jiske jo es forum ke best writer me se hai ... Or eske ulat Jin story ka sir pair malum nhi hota unko bahut support milta hai .. chahe vo incest ho ya romance ...ajeeb sokh hai londo keDhamki dete ho ju
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So, another story completed... Ek aur badhiya rachna Kingfisher urf Single Launde ki kalam se... Rits yaani ki meri favourite kirdaar ka past dekhne ko mila jo sachmein kaafi dukhad tha... Wo bechaari uss gunaah ke liye khud ko zimmedar maanti rahi jo usne kiya hi nahi... Vihaan ki maut mehaz ek haadsa tha jiska theekra uske parents ne bechaari Rits ke maathe par fod diya... Jaao tum dono ko bad dua lagegi meri... Bechaari Rits 
...
Khair, baat karen Akhilwa ki to pata chala ke jiss din Vihaan bhai ki mrityu huyi ussi din iss launde ka heart jawaab de gaya... Nateejtan ek heart transplant kiya gaya jismein Vihaan ka dil Akhil ko laga diya gaya... Aur issi dil ke kaaran Akhil Rits ki taraf aakarshit hua, aur uske pyaar mein bhi gir gaya...
Akhil aur Rits dono ko hi ye sachayi pata chali aur ant mein ek happy ending dekhne ko mili jahaan Akhil aur Rits sada sada ke liye ek ho gaye... Par last mein saara mood kharaab kar diya ju ne... Bechaari bholi Rits kabhi gaali nahi de sakti
... Ye fuckkin... Vuckkin... Sab Kingu ki bhasha hai... Rits ke naam se apni baat nahi bolne ka...
– Kahani Ka Pasandida Kirdaar...
Ye kaisa sawaal hai!!! Of course, my favourite Rits... Kitni sundar, kitni bholi, kitni masoom hai wo... Aur kitne gum sahe uss bechaari ne par uff tak naa ki... So, everyone should have
for Rits... Waise Rits aur Vihaan ke beech jo kuchh bhi hua usmein shayad ittefaq ki hi galti thi aur Rits ki koyi galti naa thi... She's a pure soul...
– Kahani se mili seekh??
Bas yahi ke gussa hi insaan ka sabse bada dushman hai... Impatience aur gussa Insaan ke Vivek ko har leta hai aur aksar gusse mein ki gayi harkaton ka anjaam bura hota hai... Jo masla aasani se do minute coffee peete huye baat karke sulajh sakta tha, uska gussa maankar Vihaan ne apni jaan ganwa di... Par jo bhi ho ek tarah se uska dil to sadaiv Rits ke nazdeek hi rahega...
– Chand shabd doosre kirdaaron ke liye??
Akhilwa, sacha prem kiya isne Rits se... Aur Naani ke phone par pehle Cafe mein pahunchkar Aag se usse bachaya aur fir baad mein usse America jaane se rokne ke liye apna accident karwa baitha... Par chalo issi sab ghatna kram ke beech usse apna pyaar to mil hi gyaa, aur kya chahiye zindagi mein...
Naani... Ek achhi aur suljhi huyi mahila, jinhone Rits ke Maa Baap ki mrityu ke baad uske sar se parents ka saya gaayab naa hone diya aur Maa Baap dono ka pyaar usse diya... Jab Vihaan guzar gaya tab bhi dukh ke samundar mein usse Akhil naamak Saahil ka raasta dikhaaya aur aakhir mein dono ko ek bhi kar hi diya..
Khekhar sahab yaani Akhilwa ke Dad... Pehle to saala ye naam badlo... Mujhe ulti aa rahi hai ye naam sunke... Baaki bas yahi kahunga ke bhaiyon behno ye maatra ek fictional character tha... Aese Baap asal zindagi mein yadi expect karoge tab hoga asli Tandav shuru... Kya Cool aadmi hai matlab, Haan Akhil beta tu Rits se pyaar karta hai naa to jaa chala jaa uske paas Manali, main kuchh nahi kahunga... Aur jab maine apne Dad ko bataya tha ke main ek ladki.... Chhodo...
Lekhak ke baare mein chand alfaaz???
Kingfisher urf Kingu... Chhodo yaar waise tareef ka mann to nahi par kiye deta hoon... Ek behatreeen writer jiski kaabiliyat se ham sab parichit hain... Faraar ho ya fir Izhaar E Mohabbat dono badhiya estory likhi hain pehle bhi in bhaisahab ne... Aur ussi tarah ye estory, small but superb... Waise bhi apun ko short story zyada pasand aati hai... Khair, sahi shabdon ka upyog kahani mein, drishyon ka badhiya varnan aur kirdaaron ki badhiya bhumika darshayi writer saahab ne aur Isiliye doston... a round of applause mere liye to banta hai
...
End mein thanks for presenting this story bhai... Keep going...
[ Ek sawaal
... Rits Akhil ko peti pack mili hai ya Vihaan 
]
At last... I Love You Rits
...
...Khair, baat karen Akhilwa ki to pata chala ke jiss din Vihaan bhai ki mrityu huyi ussi din iss launde ka heart jawaab de gaya... Nateejtan ek heart transplant kiya gaya jismein Vihaan ka dil Akhil ko laga diya gaya... Aur issi dil ke kaaran Akhil Rits ki taraf aakarshit hua, aur uske pyaar mein bhi gir gaya...
Akhil aur Rits dono ko hi ye sachayi pata chali aur ant mein ek happy ending dekhne ko mili jahaan Akhil aur Rits sada sada ke liye ek ho gaye... Par last mein saara mood kharaab kar diya ju ne... Bechaari bholi Rits kabhi gaali nahi de sakti
... Ye fuckkin... Vuckkin... Sab Kingu ki bhasha hai... Rits ke naam se apni baat nahi bolne ka...– Kahani Ka Pasandida Kirdaar...
Ye kaisa sawaal hai!!! Of course, my favourite Rits... Kitni sundar, kitni bholi, kitni masoom hai wo... Aur kitne gum sahe uss bechaari ne par uff tak naa ki... So, everyone should have
for Rits... Waise Rits aur Vihaan ke beech jo kuchh bhi hua usmein shayad ittefaq ki hi galti thi aur Rits ki koyi galti naa thi... She's a pure soul...– Kahani se mili seekh??
Bas yahi ke gussa hi insaan ka sabse bada dushman hai... Impatience aur gussa Insaan ke Vivek ko har leta hai aur aksar gusse mein ki gayi harkaton ka anjaam bura hota hai... Jo masla aasani se do minute coffee peete huye baat karke sulajh sakta tha, uska gussa maankar Vihaan ne apni jaan ganwa di... Par jo bhi ho ek tarah se uska dil to sadaiv Rits ke nazdeek hi rahega...
– Chand shabd doosre kirdaaron ke liye??
Akhilwa, sacha prem kiya isne Rits se... Aur Naani ke phone par pehle Cafe mein pahunchkar Aag se usse bachaya aur fir baad mein usse America jaane se rokne ke liye apna accident karwa baitha... Par chalo issi sab ghatna kram ke beech usse apna pyaar to mil hi gyaa, aur kya chahiye zindagi mein...
Naani... Ek achhi aur suljhi huyi mahila, jinhone Rits ke Maa Baap ki mrityu ke baad uske sar se parents ka saya gaayab naa hone diya aur Maa Baap dono ka pyaar usse diya... Jab Vihaan guzar gaya tab bhi dukh ke samundar mein usse Akhil naamak Saahil ka raasta dikhaaya aur aakhir mein dono ko ek bhi kar hi diya..
Khekhar sahab yaani Akhilwa ke Dad... Pehle to saala ye naam badlo... Mujhe ulti aa rahi hai ye naam sunke... Baaki bas yahi kahunga ke bhaiyon behno ye maatra ek fictional character tha... Aese Baap asal zindagi mein yadi expect karoge tab hoga asli Tandav shuru... Kya Cool aadmi hai matlab, Haan Akhil beta tu Rits se pyaar karta hai naa to jaa chala jaa uske paas Manali, main kuchh nahi kahunga... Aur jab maine apne Dad ko bataya tha ke main ek ladki.... Chhodo...
Lekhak ke baare mein chand alfaaz???
Kingfisher urf Kingu... Chhodo yaar waise tareef ka mann to nahi par kiye deta hoon... Ek behatreeen writer jiski kaabiliyat se ham sab parichit hain... Faraar ho ya fir Izhaar E Mohabbat dono badhiya estory likhi hain pehle bhi in bhaisahab ne... Aur ussi tarah ye estory, small but superb... Waise bhi apun ko short story zyada pasand aati hai... Khair, sahi shabdon ka upyog kahani mein, drishyon ka badhiya varnan aur kirdaaron ki badhiya bhumika darshayi writer saahab ne aur Isiliye doston... a round of applause mere liye to banta hai
...End mein thanks for presenting this story bhai... Keep going...
[ Ek sawaal
... Rits Akhil ko peti pack mili hai ya Vihaan ]At last... I Love You Rits
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Well ye to sahi hai bhai... Adult forum par Incest hi zyada padhi jaati hai... Par fir bhi kayi readers hain jo sabhi tarah ki stories ko support karte hain... Ju khud ki pichhli dono story par dekh lo... Baaki bas yahi kahunga ke ju badhiya likhte ho... Jab bhi waqt mile Faraar ke sath waapis aa jaana...