Romance In A HeartBeat - (COMPLETED)

[Naik]

Update ... 7



Rits ka es trahh bilakh kar rona mujhe ander tak takliff dene lga . Mujhe uska Rona dekha nhi gya or mene uthakar use gale se laga liya. Meri aankhen bhi nam ho chukin thin.


"vihaan kii maut ke baad main puri tarah toot chuki thi ... mere dil mein hamesha vihaan kii maut ka bojh rahata tha. main na collage jati thi aur na kisi se milti thi. zindagi jaise khatm ho gaii thi mere liye. is hadase ko ek mahina beet chuka tha. tabhi mujhe meri dost ne bataaya ki baahar vihaan ke kuchh dost mujhse milne aye hain.



main bade beman se unase milne gaii. unamen aranav bhi shaamil tha.


"Rits jo kuchh bhi hua ham sab jaante hain ki usmen tumhara koii dosh nhi hai lekin tum khud ke saath aisa kar ke vihaan ko dhokha de rhi ho. kya vihaan khud kabhi chaahega ki tum apni zindagi aise jio ?"


mene khaamosh chehare se un sabakii or dekha.


"Rits poora collage tumhara intezar kar raha hai kyonki sab jaante hain ki agar tum aaogi to kahi na kahi unhen vihaan apne beech dobaara se mil jayega. Please Rits agar tum sach mein hame apna dost Manti ho to fir se collage aana shuroo kar do"


meri samajh mein kuchh nhi aa raha tha lekin un sabake zor dene par mene haan kar dee.


aur jab main collage gayee to main ye dekhakar hairaan thi ki sabhi ne mujhe vaise hee pyaar aur izzat dee jaise vo vihaan ko dete the. sab mera har vaqt khyaal rakhate the. aur jab mene collage chhoda us din sabhi kii aankhe nam thi."



"aur uske baad main vaapis manali aa gaii aur yaheen ek collage mein literature padhaana shuroo kar diya ... haalaanki mene vihaan ko kiye vayde ko nibhaaya, kabhi likhana nhi chhoda .. vo kaagaz jo tumne mujhe us din vaapis kiya tha usspar vahi kavita likhee thi jo main use dena chahti thi lekin zindagi ne mujhe itana bhi mauka nhi diya aur tab se use main hamesha apne saath rakhti hoon isse mujhe aisa lagata hai ki vo hamesha mere saath hai"



kuchh pal ke liye vahaan ek khaamoshi ne jagah le lee.


"ab main kya kahoon tum sach mein bahut mazaboot ho. itane vaqt tak ye bojh apne dil par lekar jeeti rhi aur kisi se ek shabd bhi nhi kaha ... main sach me bahut khushakismat hoon ki mene tumase pyaar kiya ... aur main tumhen aaj ek vaada karata hoon ki chaahe tum mujhe pyaar karo ya na karo, chaahe tum mujhe milo ya na milo main tumhen hamesha yoon hee pyaar karata rahoonga"


"vo to thik hai lekin ab aage kya karna hai ?" Rits ne savaal kiya.


"karna kya hai, choonki ab main tumhaari na kii vajah jaanta hoon to kabhi bhi dobaara tumase is baare mein kuchh nhi poochhunga aur ab jis kaam ke liye aaya tha vo to hua nhi to kal hee vaapis ja raha hoon. lekin jaane se pehle mujhe tumase kuchh chaahiye"



"kya ?"


"ek vaada ki chaahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye tum apne hothon par yoon hee muskaan rakhogee hamesha. ise kabhi gum nhi hone dogi . bolo manjoor ?"



Rits ne haan mein sir hila diya


Me manali se khaali haath hee vaapis aa gya tha lekin is baar mere dil mein ek sukoon tha. aur ab mere dil me Rits ke liye pyaar aur ijzat dono hee aur badh gaye the.


ghar pahunchakar mene socha ki paapa se is baare mein baat kare par vo kafi busy the. fir ek din unhonne khud hee mujhse is baare mein puchha.



"to barakhurdaar baat kahaan tak pahunchi ?, Rits ne haan kii ya nhi ?"


"nhi paapa, uska jawab nhi badla lekin haan ab main uske inakaar kii vajah janta hoon aur sach kahiye ab mujhe uskii na se koii etaraaj nhi hai"


"achha zara mujhe bhi bataoge, usne aisa kya kaha. ham vaada karte hain ki ye baat sirf ham dono ke beech rahego "


aur fir meen unhen sab bata diya jo kuchh Rits ke saath hua. ye sab sunakar papa kisi soch mein doob gaye.


"kya hua paapa, aap kahaan kho gaye ?"


"kuchh nhi beta, achha tumhaare paas us ladke vihaan kii koii photo hai ya Rits ne tumhen kabhi dikhaii ho"


"haan ek minat rukiye" mene kuchh sochakar kaha kyonki mujhe yaad aaya ki vihaan kii ek photo Rits kii us dairy mein thi jo us aag vaale haadase ke din sathb saath hee mere saman mein aa gaii thi ... lekin Rits ko lagata tha ki vo dairy jal chuki hai.


Mene vo photo laakar apne paapa ko dikhaii .



use dekhate hee unhen ek bada jhataka laga.


"Ohhh god ye nhi ho sakata" unake munh se bs yhi nikala.


"kyon aap aisa kyon kah rahe hain kya nhi ho sakata ? boliye paapa bataie"


aur fir unhonne jo bataaya vo mere liye kisi sadme se kam nhi tha. Meri zindagi kii itani badee Haqikat jisase me itane vaqt se anajaan tha aaj mere samne khadee thi. aur vo hakikat kuchh aisi thi.


"aaj se 2 saal pehle kii baat hai beta jab doctors ne kah diya tha ki tum ab aise dil ke saath nhi jee sakte jisame ek chhed hai ... unhonne kaha ki ab koii rasta nhi hai sivaay iske ki koii tumhen apna dil transplant ke liye de. main aur hamare jaankaar doctors ne bahut koshish kii lekin aisa koii nhi mila ... aur fir ek din tumhaar ii halaat gambhir ho gaii aur hamen tumhen hospital mein admit karna pada"



"haan paapa mujhe achchhe se yaad hai lekin meri surgery ka in sabse kya lena-dena"


"us raat tum behosh the aur hamen koii raasta nhi soojh raha tha. Doctors jawab de chuke the ki agar koii dil mila to thik varana ham tumhen kho denge. main us vaqt tumhen bachaane ke liye kuchh bhi karne ko taiyaar tha. aur tabhi mujhe pta chala ki hospital mein ek accident case aaya hai aur us ladke kii haalat bahut gambhir hai ... mene doctor se uske baare mein puchha to unhonne bataaya ki accident bahut bura tha aur uske bachne ke aasaar kam hain. unhonne bataaya ki ab tak koii bhi us ladke ke ghar se nhi aaya hai ... main vahin intezar karne laga. thodi der mein hee maaloom hua ki vo ladka mar chuka hai... Doctors use lavarish laash samajhkar le ja hee rahe the ki tabhi mene unase gujaarish kii kii vo uska heart tumhen transplant kar den. mere zor dene par vo log Mann gaye.


aur us ladke ka dil surgery se tumhaare andar transplant kar diya gya ... lekin baad mein mene dekha ki uske Maa-baap bhi aa gaye the. haalanki mene aur doctors ne unhen sab bata diya tha. uske baap ne kaha ki ab unka beta to raha nhi kam se kam uskii vajah se mera beta to zinda hai ...... Our vo ladka koii aur nhi vihaan hee tha"


ye kahakar vo chup ho gaye.


"vihaan ! ! !" Me is sacch ko sunkar dang rah gya. jis ladke ne mujhe dil dekar meri jaan bachaii aur jise Rits beintehaa pyaar karti thi vo dono ek hee the mere seene mein is vaqt vihaan ka dil dhadak raha tha.


dheere-dheere mere samne sab aane laga. kaise me tab us se pehli baar mila aur uskii jaan bachaii . kaise jab me us se baat karne gya to aisa laga ki jaise me use bahut pehle se janata hu ... jab bhi me use dekhta tha tab mujhe lagta tha ki hum dono ek-doosre se hamesha se jude the ... mujhe Rits kii vo sab baaten yaad aane lagi jo usne vihaan ke baare mein kahee thi.



Me soch raha tha ki "agar Rits ko is baat ka pta chalega to use kaisa lagega. kya sochegi vo mere baare mein ?"


isi kashmakash mein 5 din beet gaye ... Agali shaam mere paas naani ka phone aaya.


"Hello Akhil beta kaise ho tum ?"


"main thik hoon naani, aap kaisi hain ? aur Rits vo kaisi hai ?"


"main thik hoon lekin beta tum Rits ko rok lo. vo meri baat nhi sun rhi hai"


"aap kya kah rhi hain, saff-saff batao ” ghabrate hue me bola


"Rits ne America kii kisi University mein apply kiya tha aur vo approve ho gya hai ... vo kal hee ja rhi hai beta. usne mujhe bhi aaj hee bataya hai. beta use roklo.. ek tum hee ho jo fir se use zindagi jeena seekha sakte ho. tum hee use is andhere se baahar nikal sakte ho main tumhaare aage haath jodti hoon beta, use rok lo "



"naani aap fikr mat kiijie main abhi aa raha hoon vahaan" kah kar mene phone rakh diya.


Mene apne Maa-paapa ko sab bataaya to unhonne bhi mujhe jaane kii ijaazat de dee.


Me usi vaqt manali ke liye nikal pada. lekin durbhaagyavash us raat mausam kuchh jyaada hee kharab ho gya aur raaste mein bhari baarish aur pahadi raasta hone ke kaaran meri kii gadi ek ped se ja takaraii ... Mujhe buri tarah chot aaii thi. vo to vahaan se gujar rahe logon ne mujhe vakt se hospital pahuncha diya Varna mera kalyan vhi ho jata

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bahut tez baarish ho rhi thi aaj aur fir achaanak se tadaak kii awaj ke saath ek ke baad ek deevaar par lagi do tasveeren neeche gir kar choor ho gaiin. kamare mein itna saara toota kaanch dekhakar Rits ekadam dar gaii.


"ye sirf tufaan ke kaaran tha ya koii Aanhoni ka ishaara ?" usne baahar jaakar dekha to naani apne kamare mein so rhin thi.



usne mujhe phone milaaya lekin vo bhi band tha. use behad ghabaraahat hone lagi thik aise hee jaise us din vihaan ke na aane par huii thi. vo subah hone ka intajaar karne lagi.


subah uske phone par ring baji. usne phone uthaaya to doosari taraf se awaj aaii


"Hello Rits beta main Akhil ka dad bol raha hoon. tum jaldi se hospital aa jao kal raat Akhil ka accident ho gya hai. tum jaldi se aa jao"


ye sunakar Rits behosh hote-hote bachi . usne rote hue sab naani ko bataaya aur unhen lekar tunrat hospital pahunchi. vahaan mere Maa paapa pehle se hee maujood the.


use dekhte hee meri Maa ne use gale se laga liya.


beta hamen maff kar do ham bhi tumhaare gunahagaar hain"


"ye aap kya kah rhin hai aunty ?, Akhil kaisa hai ?" Rits ne hairaan hote hue puchha.


"vo thik hai beta abhi khatare se baahar hai. lekin us se pehle ki tum us se milo main tumhen kuchh batana chahta hoon" papa bole


aur fir papa ne Rits ko mere aur vihaan se judi saari sachchaii bata dee jise sunakar Rits ko ek aur jhatka laga.



"beta hamen maff kardo"


"sorry kisliye uncle jo kuchh bhi meri aur vihaan kismat mein likha tha vo to hona hee tha. usme aap logon ka kya kusoor ... apne to ek baap ke naate us vaqt jo sahi tha vahi kiya" Rits ne unhen samajhte hue kaha.


"kya main us se mil sakti hoon ?"


"haan bilkul"


aur Rits us kamare kii taraf badhane lagi jisame me tha. use ek-ek kar ke sab yaad aa raha tha ki kis tarah vihaan ke jaise hee mene har baar uskii jaan bachaii thi. kyon vo har vaqt ye mahasoos kartii thi ki vihaan uske saath hai jab bhi me uske saath hota tha.


vo dheere se kamre mein daakhil huii. Me aankhe band kiye hue leta tha. usne dheere se jaakar mujhe pukaara.


"Akhil "


Mene aankhe kholi to dekha samne Rits khadi thi. Mere hothon par ek sukoon vaali muskan thi.


"tum kab aaii ?"


"Sshhhhh " Rits ne mere munh par ungli rakhte hue kaha.


"tumhen kya laga tha ki tum mujhe nhi bataoge to mujhe pta nhi chalega"


"kya"


"yahee kii ye jo khoobasoorat sa dil tum liye firte ho ye kisi aur ka nhi balki uska hai jis se main bahut pyaar karti hoon" kahate hue uskii aankhon me aansu aa gaye.


"lekin Rits mene tumhaare pyaar ka dil churaaya hai saza to mujhe milani chaahiye thi"


"haan aur isii vajah se tum yahaan hospital mein aa gaye hai na ? lekin main tumhe iske liye magf nhi karoongi" Rits ne jhutha gussa dikhaate hue kaha.


"ye kya baat huii ? naraaz to mujhe tumse hona chaahiye ... tum is dil aur mujhe dono ko chhodakar ja rhi thi. ye kahan ka iinsaff hai ?"


"haan main ja rhi thi lekin ab nhi ja rhi hoon kyonki main ek baar apna pyaar kho chuki hoon dobaara nhi khona chahti" Rits ne mere sir par haath ferte hue kaha.


"to kya tum sach mein mera zindagi bhar sath dogi ?"


Mere dil par hath rkhte hue boli "haan ab meri Amanat jo tumhaare paas hai" kahate hue Rits hans padi.


“ Rits ” me uska hath thamte hue bola


“ Hammm ”


“ Me tumhare muhh se vo 3 magical words sunna chahta hu, jinhe sunne ke liye na jane me Etne din tak tadpa ” mene uske hath ko or jor se dabate hue kaha . Meri baat sunkar Rits ke gore Gaal gulabi rang ke ho gye


“ Kounse magical words ? Mujhe nhi pta un words ke bare me ” mand mand muskurate hue Rits boli


“ tumhe pta hai Rits , please bol do na taki mere dil ko sukoon mil jaye ”


“ Accha thik hai ” Etna kehkar Rits mere uper chuki or kuch hi second me uska Palo me uska chera mere chehre ke bilkul karib aa gya


“ I Love you ” or ek halka sa chumbann mere galo par kar diya “ Ab to khush hona ” vapas sidhe hote hue Rits ne kaha


“ bahut khush ” fir mene apne jeb se ek kagaj nikala or Rits ke hath me thamaya . Rits ne meri taraf muskurate hue dekha fir us kagaz ki open karke usme likhe shabdo ko padne lgi

chhilti lakiron se bahati ravani ho tum,
dikh kar bhi anadekhei kahani ho tum,


thithurate hathon kee muskurati shaam se lekar,
subah kee tapati javani ho tum,


kurabaniyat ke Inaam ko tarasati,
pyaar bhari alhad deevani ho tum,


zubaan se barasate kahar ko peeti,
aankhon mein daba pani ho tum,


banati ho apne andar hee ek duniya,
duniya ke lie begani ho tum,


tum, tum ho hee kahan is bedard duniya mein,
takiti nigahon kee beiimani ho tum.



RITS​

" Ye tumne likhi ? ” mene ha me gardan

" Akdum backvash likhi, par koi baat nhi me tumhe sikha dungi because I'm fucck'n romantic writer ” haste hue Rits boli ... Use hasta dekh me bhi muskura diya

THE END​

Rits ki poori dastan sun ker Akhil ko bhi rona aa gya koyi bhi aise dastan ker emotional tow hoga hi
Baherhal Akhil khali haath wapas aa gaya or poori kahani apne PAPA ko sunayi tow yaha kuch kahani thi pehle
Akhil ke dil jo dil dhadk raha woh uska nahi Vihan ka h wah kia baat h
Ritas ko apna pyar mil gaya Akhil ko tow mila hi
Behad khoobsurat kahani ka
Bemisaal END
Behtareen story bhai

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

जहां प्रेम होता है वहां संदेह या शक की कोई जगह नहीं होनी चाहिए । इंसान का सबसे बड़ा दुश्मन " शक करना " होता है । सारे रिश्ते नाते क्षण भर में ही चकनाचूर हो जाते हैं । विहान ने शक की बिमारी पाली और फिर क्रोध ने उसकी मती हर ली । अंजाम उसकी मौत हो गई ।
रिट्स ने कभी भी किसी तरह की गलती नहीं की । उसने सच्चा प्यार किया था विहान से । मगर एक गलतफहमी की वजह से उसका प्यार अधुरा रह गया ।
लेकिन शायद कुदरत ने कुछ और ही सोच रखा था निटृस के लिए । वो वापस आया लेकिन अखिल के रूप में । उसका दिल जो ट्रांसप्लांट हो गया था अखिल के शरीर में ।
शायद यही कारण था जो दोनों , निटृस और अखिल , हर समय एक दूसरे के प्रति अट्रैक्ट होते रहे । दिल से दिल का सम्पर्क जो था ।

बढ़िया लगा जो अंत में सब कुछ भला ही भला हुआ । दोनों प्रेमी एक हो गए ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत कहानी थी । छोटी थी मगर प्रभावशाली थी । हड़बड़ी में जल्दी जल्दी कहानी समाप्त करने की मंशा नहीं होती तो और भी ज्यादा बेहतर हो सकती थी । नायक और नायिका दोनों की इमोशन्स कुछ और भी एड करनी चाहिए थी ।
यह कहानी कम से कम पचास अपडेट्स से कम में समाप्त नहीं होनी चाहिए थी ।

खैर कोई बात नहीं ! इस बार कोई लम्बी कहानी लिखिए। हम जरूर आप का साथ देते रहेंगे ।

सभी अपडेट्स बेहद ही खूबसूरत थे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

 

[aalu]

pyaar ka dushman gussa,,, ek chhoti si galti ya keh kismat... kismat se phone band hua aur rits dhyan na de payee,,, aur kismat se vihaan wahan aa pahuncha jab rits uske dost ke saath hostel pahunchi... footi kismat dekho kee phir se ek aur galat samay pe vihaan ko le aayee kismat...

agar do pal vihaan sun leta rits ke baate toh uska gussa kafoor ho jata,,, lekin gussa vivek ka dushman aur vivek sunya insaan aksar galat faisla hi leta hain... usne door jana chuna rits se uss samay lekin kismat usse itna door le gayee jahan se koi wapas laut ke nahin aata hain...

lekin kismat ko dekho,,, aisa khel racha wapas se jaa mila uss dil se jisse ruth ke bhaga tha,,, bhale hi shareer badal liya,,, lekin wo pyaar nahin badla,,, kismat ne phir se usse milaya,,, phir se usse bachaya,,, jab pyaar jyada hota hain toh usko parkha bhi utna hi jata hain... kismat ne thok peet ke puri tarah se parakh liya in dono ko,, tab jaa kee samjhaya kee main hi toh hoon jo hamesha se tha jab tum uske paas thee,,, jab tum usse door hui,,, jab tumhe laga kee tumne usse kho diya,,, tabhi maine bheja usse tumhare paas..

main hee toh hoon tumhaara kismat...

a beautiful and twisted ending Kingfisher aka kingu...

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ...3 ... mere to ll lagg gye​

kuchh din yoon hee beet gaye aur fir ek din mujhe aise hee baazaar mein ghoomte hue Rits dikhaii dee ... Mene dekha ki kuchh tourist ladke use pareshaan kar rahe the.


"Are Rits tum yahaan ho, main tumhen kab se puri market mein dhoondh raha hoon, der ho gaii hai chalo ghar chalte hain" mene Rits ka haath pakad kar chalte hue kaha. ye dekhakar vo sabhi side hat gaye.


baat ko samajhate hue Rits bhi chupchap mere saath chal dee.


"vo " Rits is se pehle kuchh bolti me bol pada.


" Nhi nhi, thanks kehne kii jaroorat nhi hai, ye to mera farz tha"


"thanks nhi par main ye kehna chahti thi ki I could handle them "


"haan main janta hoon ! lekin apko aisee situation mein dekh’kar mujhse raha nhi gya"


"lekin mujhe samajh mein nhi aata ki aap har jagah kaise pahunch jaate hain ?" Rits ne thode sakht lahaze mein kaha.


tabhi mene use pakadakar apni taraf kheench liya Rits ek pal ke liye chaunk gaii par use dhyaan aaya ki abhi-abhi ek tez gadi lagabhag use chhoo kar nikli hai.


"ab ye to mujhe bhi nhi maaloom ki jab aap musibat mein hoti hain to mai vahaan kaise aa jaata hoon" ... Mene apnen dono haath uthaate hue maasoomiyat bhare lahaze mein kaha jise sun’kar Rits achaanak se hans padee.


use is tarah hanste mene Pehli baar dekha tha aur Rits khud bahut saalon baad is tarah se hansi thi.( mujhe kaise pta ye )


"ab to vaakii mein main apke ahesanno tale dab chuki hoon" Rits ne hansate hue kaha.


"lekin aap abhi ke abhi ye ehasaan utaar sakti hain" mene kaha.


"Achha, vo kaise ?"


"kya hai ki ghar ka khaana khaye bahut din ho gaye hain to agar aap apne haath ka bana kuchh khila saken to"


"achha thik hai, to fir ghar chaliye meri naani Maa bahut hee testy khana banati hain" Rits ne kuchh sochate hue muskuraakar kaha.


"to kya aaj se ham dost ban sakate hain ?,I swear main apko bilkul pareshaan nhi karoonga"


"manjoor, par shaayad abhi tak hamaara thik se introduction bhi nhi hua hai"


"koii baat nhi abhi kar lete hain ! hello, I’m Akhil Rastogi, to mis Rits "


"Rits shreevastav" mera sentence pura hone se pehle hi vo boli


"Ohhh to Rits shreevastav kya aap mujhse friendship karengi ?" Mene apna haath aage badhaate hue kaha.


" Sure " Rits ne bhi haath milaate hue bola.


"to aap kya karte hain ? Mister Akhil Rastogi "


"Basically main Delhi se hoon aur haal hee mein mene apna photography ka course complete kiya hai. iske alava main music ka Student rehh chuka hoon"


" music " ye sunte hee Rits ke chehre par muskaan kii jagah udasi ne le lee.



"kyon apko music pasand nhi ?"


"nhi aisa nhi hai aur kaun-kaun hai apke ghar mein ?" Rits ne baat badalate hue kaha.


"paapa aur Maa aur apkii family mein ?"


"main aur meri naani Maa"


"aur apke parent’s ?"


"mere Mom-Dad bachpann mein hee gujar gaye the"


"Ohhh sorry I’m really sorry"


"its Okk, lijiye ghar aa gya" Rits ne ghar kii taraf ishara karte hue kaha.


"kaun aaya hai Rits ?" naani ne puchha|


"naani Maa ye Akhil hai, mene bataaya tha na"


"achha-achha vahi jise kitaaben padhane ka shaunk hai" naani ne meri taraf dekh kar Rits ko chhedate hue kaha.


"namaste naani"


"khush raho par mujhe samajh nhi aa raha ye ladkii tumhen ghar tak kaise le aaii ise to tumse baat karna bhi pasand nhi" naani ne hansate hue kaha.


"Uff ho naani Maa ye sab main apko baad mein bata dungi abhi aap khaane ke liye kuchh achha sa bana deejiye" Rits ne baat kaat'te hue kaha.


"achha thik hai tum log baitho main aati hoon"


Mere jaane ke baad Rits apne kamare mein gaii aur usne apne bed ke niche se ek Box baahar nikala, us box mein ek khubasoorat gitaar tha. usne us gitaar ko nikala aur pyaar se sehalane lagi.


"use bhi to music se kitna pyaar tha ye gitaar vo use uske janmadin par gipht karna chahti thi, magar mene to use itna bhi mauka nhi diya. us se pehle hee use chheen liya" ye sab yaad kar uskii aankhon se aansoo girne lage.


aur us din ke baad se Rits aur meri friendship ho gaii ... Me roj milne par ab bhi ussse pehle kii tarah hee savaal karata lekin fark ye tha ki ab mere savaal Rits ko pareshaan nhi karte the ... is tarah mujhko manali mein karib 15 din se bhi jyaada ho gaye the.


ek din roj kii tarah hee hum dono cafe mein amne-samne baithe the ... Rits apni kisi new kahani ka climax likh rhi thi aur me chupchap kitaab padh raha tha ya fir ye kahe ki najaren bachaakar Rits ko dekhne ke liye ye ek bahna tha mera .


tabhi mere mobile par anant ka call aaya.


"yaar Akhil aur kitani der lagegi ? ham yahaan baahar tera wait kar rahe hain"


"haan thik hai aata hoon" kah kar mene phone rakh diya.


"Rits mujhe ab chalana chaahie baahar mere dost intajaar kar rahe hain ham kal milate hain"


"thik hai"


"baay" kah kar me chal gya.


Mere jaane ke baad Rits ne dekha ki me apna camera apni seat par hee bhool gya hu ... usne camera uthaaya aur mujhe dene ke liye mere peechhe baahar nikal gaii ... paarking area mein pahunch kar usne dekha ki me apne doston se baat kar raha tha.


"are yaar jab too use itana pasand karata hai to kis baat ka intajaar kar raha hai ? ab bol bhi de use ki tujhe us se pyaar ho gya hai I’m 100% sure ki vo tujhe mana nhi karegi" Anant ne mujhe samajhte hue kaha.


"nhi yaar mujhe lagta hai ki abhi jaldi hoga bahut"


"too bekaar mein itna soch raha hai abhi nhi to kabhi nhi aur fir dekh khud ko itane handsome ladke ko kaun ladkii mana karegi ?" Pritam ne aankh dabaate hue kaha.


"nhi pyare vo aisee nhi hai aur mujhe lagta hai ki abhi ye sab batana sahi nhi hai ab tum log batao main kya karoon ?" Mene puchha lekin un dono ne koii jawab nhi diya.


"tum log kuchh bol kyon nhi rahe aur mujhe aise ghoor kyoon rahe ho" me hairani se bola.


Praitam ne use ishaare se peeche kii aur mudane ko kaha ... jaise hee mene peechhe mudakar dekha to Rits thik mere pichhe khadi thi aur uska chehara gusse se laal tha ... Me ye dekhakar ghabara gya.


"Rits meri baat suno"


"chup ekadam chup" Rits ne gusse se kaha.


"tum mere baare mein aisa soch bhi kaise sakate ho ?, mene tumhen apna dost samajha aur tum mujhse ye ummeed kar rahe ho dekho Akhil main ek baat tumhen achchhi tarah se bata dena chahti hoon ki meri zindagi mein pyaar ke liye koii jagah nhi hai aur tum apne dimaag mein ye baat achchhi tarah se bitha lo ... aur doosaree baat ki aaj ke baad main tumase nhi milna chahti kabhi bhi aur tum bhi aisi koii koshish mat karna ...Tum ise hamari aakhiri mulakaat samajho ... Good bye "


itana kah kar Rits mere haath mein camera de kar gusse se chalee gaii.


"Rits Rits meri baat to suno" mene use awaj lagaii lekin usne nhi suna.

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takreeban 7 din beet chuke the. Me aur Rits ke beech baatacheet hue ... haalanki shuroo mein ek-do din mene ne us se baat karne kii koshish kii lekin vo koii jawab nhi deti thi ... cafe mein bhi mujhko dekh’kar vo vahaan se chali jati thi aur fir usne vahaan aana hee band kar diya lekin Me vaha har roj jata tha Rits ke intezar mein ........ aur fir ek din raat ke 9 baje mere mobile par ek call aaya.


"Hello Akhil beta, main Rits kii naani bol rhi hoon" doosaree taraf se awaj aaii.


"jee naani, boliye itano raat ko apne call kiya? .... sab thik to hai na ?" Mene thoda ghabarahat se puchha.


"nhi beta, vo Rits kahi chali gaii hai. mera matalab hai ki vo subah se kahi gaii hai aur ab tak ghar nhi lauti " naani kii awaj mein chinta ßaoasth dikh rhi thi.


"abhi tak ghar nhi aaii ?, kahaan gayi hogi vo ?, apne use phone kiya ?"


"kiya tha lekin vo apna phone ghar par hee chhod gaii hai"


"aise kaise vo kahi ja sakti hai kuchh hua tha kya ? vo kisi baat se pareshaan thi ?"


"darasal beta aaj uska janmadin hai aur vo kaii salon se apna janmadin nhi Manati ... hamesha vo akele hee kahi chali jati hai taaki koii use janmadin kii badhaii na de lekin shaam hote hee laut aati hai. magar aaj vo ab tak nhi aaii to mujhe laga ki mujhe tumhen batana chaahiye "


"apne bahut achha kiya naani, aap chinta mat kiijie main Rits ko dhoondh’kar laata hoon. aap bilakul bhi stress mat leejie main use lekar seedhe apke paas hee aaoonga"


"thanks bete"


"Okk naani ab main rakhata hoon"

To be countinue ....​

lovely update ..rits ke saath dosti bhi ho gayi par akhil ke pyar karnewali baat pata lagnepar toot bhi gayi ..
akhil ke music ka shauk sunkar rits ko yaad aa gayi apne premi ya dost ki jisse dukhi ho gayi thi wo .
ab ye rits ko kaha dhundega akhil ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ....4​

aur fir me bina apne doston ko batae gadi lekar Rits ko dhoondhane nikal gya ... Mujhe samajh nhi aa raha tha ki vo is vaqt kahaan gayee hogi ? Mene un sabhi raaston par dekha jahaan humm mile the ya jahaan Rits ke hone kii sambhaavana thi ... lekin kuchh pta nhi chala ... itane mein hee 1 ghante se jyaada beet chuka tha.



fir achaanak se mujhe yaad aaya ki is vaqt tourists ke jyaada aane se cafe kareeb 12 baje tak khule rahte hain.



"Ohhh god main ye kaise bhool gya, sabse important jagah" mene phataaphat cafe kii taraf gadi ghumaee ... jab me cafe ke najdeek pahuncha to baahar logon kii bhid lagi huii thi ... mujhe kuchh samajh nhi aaya ... Mene vahin gadi paark kii aur utar kar tez kadamon se cafe kii or badhane laga.



najdeek pahunchane par mujhe ek tez jhataka laga ... poora cafe aag kii lapaton se ghira hua tha aur log chilla rahe the or kucch edher-udher bhag bhi rhe the ... ek pal ke liye mujhko kuchh samajh mein nhi aaya fir mene jaldee se bhid mein jaakar Rits ko talaash karna shuru kiya lekin use vo kahi nhi dikhi ... achaanak mene cafe ke maalik ko dekha jo sadame aur dukh se ro raha tha ... mene jaldee se uske paas jaakar puchha



"ye sab kaise hua kaaka ?, ye aag"



"pta nhi beta achaanak se kaise ye sab " usne badi mushkil se kaha.



"achha kaaka kya Rits yahaan aaii thi ? vo ladkii jo laast vali table par baithati thi ! use dekh apne ?"



"pta nhi beta haan vo aaii to thi tum dekho yaheen kahi hogi vo"



Mene unse jyaada kuchh puchhna sahi nhi samajha ... par me Rits ko sab jagah dekh chuka tha vo bhid mein kahi nhi thi ... mujhe kuchh samajh nhi aa raha tha tabhi Meri nazar cafe ke pichhale bhaag mein lage kaanch ke sheeshe par padee. Mene jaldi se vahaan pahunchkar andar jhaanka.



Mene dekha ki Rits vahin table ke paas neeche behosh padee hai ... mene jaldi se chaaron taraf andar jaane ka raasta dhoondhna shuru kiya ... peechhe bhid mein se log mujhe vaapis aane ke liye bula rahe the, lekin mere sir par to jaise junoon savaar tha ... kisi tarah bahut koshish ke baad me cafe ke daravaaje se andar pahunchane mein kaamayaab ho gya ... lekin abhi bhi Rits mujhse door thi . Mene ek adhjali chair ko uthaaya aur us se aag se bachate hue me kisi tarah uske paas pahuncha.



"Rits utho" mene Rits ka chehara thapathapaate hue kaha. lekin lagta tha vo dhune se puri tarah behosh ho chuki thi.



Mene turant ek Table cover mein usko lapeta our jaise hee use uthaane laga mujhe Rits kii dairy dikhi jo pharsh par padee thi .. mene jaldi se use uthaaya aur Rits ko god me lekar baahar aa gya.



"please koii doctor ko bullaiye " mene chillaakar kaha.



Me use gadi kii taraf le gya. tabhi Fire Brigade aur ambulance bhi aa gaii ... do log doctor ko lekar jaldi se Rits aur mere ke paas aae...doctor ne Rits ka chekap kiya.



"ghabaraane vali koii baat nhi hai bas dhune se saans atak gaii thi is liye behoshi aaii hai ... achha hua jo aap inhen vakt rahate nikaal laye ... mene injection de diya hai ye thodi der mein hosh mein aa jjayeng, aap inaka khyaal rakhiye"



"jee doctor, thaiks" me bola.



Mene Rits kii taraf dekha ... aaj to me buri tarah dar gya tha ki agar Rits ko sach mein kuchh ho jaata to is khyaal se hee Meri aankhon mein aansoo aa gaye ... Me use lekar turant ghar aa gya ... use behosh dekh kar naani ghabara gaii.



"ye sab kya hua hai Akhil ?, Rits aise behosh kyon hai ?"



"main sab bataata hoon naani" mene Rits ko bed par litaate hue kaha ... Me aur naani kamare se baahar aa gaye aur mene cafe mein jo kuchh bhi hua vo naani ko bata diya.



"ab baakii ke savaal aap apni Rits se poochhiega"



"main kis munh se tumhara shukriya karoon beta, tumane aaj mere jeene ke ikalaute sahaare ko bachaaya hai. main hamesha tumhaaree ehasaanamand rahoongi"



"ye to galat baat hai naani, vo kya sirf apkii hee sabkuchh hai, vo meri bhi dost hai ... to ab aap rona band kiijie. ab vo bilakul thik hai"

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"vo table par baithi roe ja rhi thi. aaj uske aansoo rukane ka naam hee nhi le rahe the ... usne khidakii se baahar dekhkar apna dhyaan baantane kii koshish kii aur tabhi ek awaj sunaii dee.



“Rits ”



aur usne mudakar dekha to Vo uske samne khada tha ... vaise hee muskaan ke saath jaise Vo har din us se milta tha ... ek pal ke liye use apni aankhon par vishvaas nhi hua, usne use chhoone ke liye jaise hee haath badhaaya, vo usse door jaane laga aur tabhi ekaek andhera chhaane laga aur logon mein apharataphari mach gaii aur jab usne chaaron taraf nazar daudaee to dekha aag lagi huii thi ... use kuchh samajh nhi aa raha tha, usne uthane kii koshish kii lekin aise laga ki koii uska dam ghont raha hai ... usne haath badhaakar kar use awaj lagaani chaahi lekin tabhi vo gaayab ho gya."



"Nhi " vo ek dam dar se chillaee aur jaag gayee ......... awaj sunakar me aur naani daudkar uske kamare mein aaye.



"Rits kya hua meri bachchee ? tum thik to ho na ? " kahakar naani ne use gale laga liya.



vo kuchh nhi bol rhi thi bas roii ja rhi thi ... fir achaanak uskii nazar vahaan khade mujh par padee aur usne naani kii taraf savaaliya nazar se dekha.



"jab too itani der tak ghar nhi aaii to mene hee ise phone kiya tha aur tujhe aag se bhi isee ne bachaaya hai" naani ne bataaya ....... Rits ne meri taraf is nazar se dekha jaise ye sab mera kusoor tha.



"achha ab tum log baat karo main kuchh khaane ke liye laati hoon, Rits ko bhookh lagi hogi . hai na ?"Nani ki bat par Rits unki taraf dekh kar muskura dee.



unake jaane ke baad Rits ne meri or dekha "dekho thanks to tum bolna bhi mat aur is baar mujhse koii hamadardee kii ummeed mat rakhna ... kya samajhati kya ho tum apne aap ko ? kaun see duniya mein khoii rahati ho ki apne oopar aane vali musibat ka dhyaan nhi rahata ... tumhen pta hai naani kitna ghabara gayeen thi tumhen is haalat mein dekh kar ... aur agar tumhen kuchh ho jaata to mera kya ho " Me gusse mein bolate-bolate achaanak se ruk gya.



"main Janti hoon tum mujhse naaraaz ho lekin jo kuchh bhi hua usamen meri koii galati nhi thi ... aur us din jo kuchh bhi mene tumhen bola vo gusse mein bola tha. uske liye I’m really sorry" Rits ne badi masoomiyat se kaha ......... tabhi naani kamare mein khaana aur Cake lekar aaii.



"dekho Rits tum apna janmadin nhi Manati lekin fir bhi main hamesha cake banaati hoon is ummeed se ki kabhi to tum ise kaatogi ... lekin aaj main khud chahti hoon ki apne dost ke liye tum ise kaato . usne tumhaari jaan bachaii hai iske badale tum itana to kar hee sakti ho" naani ne Rits ke siir par haath pherte hue kaha.



"thik hai naani Maa aap kahati hain to main jaroor karungi ye"



aur is tarah naani mere bahaane se Rits ka janmadin manaane mein saafal ho gaiin. unhen khushi thi ki mere aane se Rits mein kuchh to badalaav hua tha.



"Akhil beta aaj raat tum yaheen ruk jao, subah chale jaana abhi vaqt jyaada ho gya hai aur main jaanati hoon ki tum bhi meri baat nhi taaloge"



"thik hai naani"



"chalo main tumhen tumhara room dikhaati hoon"



subah jab Rits uthi to use uske daravaaje par ek kaagaz mila. jisamen likha tha ki



"pichhale dinon jo kuchh bhi hua use bhool jao aur jo kuchh bhi mene kaha uske liye mujhe maaf kar dena. main aaj hee Delhi vaapis ja raha hoon" ye padhkar Rits ke chehre par udaasi chha gaii because vo fir se akeli ho gaii thi.



"Akhil chala gya ? bina bataye" naani ne chaay dete hue puchha.



"haan, hamesha ke liye. vo to yahaan ghoomne aaya tha, use to jaana hee tha ... aur achha hee hai ki meri manahoos kismat se vo door chala gya" ye kahakar Rits uthi aur baahar chali gayee.



Mujhko manali se aaye hue 3 month’s beet chuke the . Mene bahut koshish kii Rits ko bhulaane kii lekin me use apne dil se nikaal hee nhi pa raha tha ... is beech mene apna dhyaan hataane ke liye apne paapa ka Business bhi join kar liya tha, magar fir bhi me kahi na kahi se Rits ke khyaalon mein aa hee jati thi.



idhar Rits ne fir se akelepan ko apna saathi bana liya tha kyonki uska Maaanna tha ki pyaar kii ab uskii zindagi mein koii jagah nhi hai aur na hee use iska haq hai. haalaanki vo bhi meri bak-bak ko bahut miss karti thi.



"vishaal beta kya baat hai ? main dekh raha hoon jabse tum Delhi vaapis aaye ho tabse udaas se rahate ho ... aakhir baat kya hai ? agar koii problam hai to batao mujhe" Papa ne mujhse puchha.



"nhi aisi koii baat nhi hai papa"



"main tumhara baap hoon, bachpann se jaanata hoon tumhen. jab tak ghar ko apni baaton se sir pe na utha lo tumhen chain nhi aata ... aur aajakal tum kisi se sahi se baat bhi nhi kar rahe ho. dekho jo kuchh bhi saff saff batao kyonki chhipaane se koii fayda nhi hai "



ye sunakar me unake gale lagakar rone laga aur unhen saaree baat bata dee.



"Ohhh ab samajh mein aaya janaab ishq kar baithe hain. are lekin isamen dukhi hone vaali kaunsi baat hai ? tumhe to khush hona chaahie"



"lekin paapa vo mujhse pyaar nhi karti infact vo to ye kahati hai ki vo ab kisi se pyaar nhi kar sakti. ab aap hee bataie main aise mein kaise khush ho sakta hoon"



"hammmm baat to sahi hai. magar beta uske aisa kehne ke peechhe koii badi vajah bhi to ho sakti hai. kya tumane kabhi us se puchha ?"



"nhi, darasal usne shart rakhi thi ki main uskii parsonal life se juda koii savaal na karoon"



"to koii baat nhi tum fir mat karo. tum ek kaam karo vaapis manali jao aur us se apne dil kii baat bol daalo ... aur agar vo na kare to us se uskii na ki vajah janne kii koshish karo... mujhe lagata hai ki itane sab ke baad vo tumhen jaroor bata degi aur fir kya pta tumase door rah kar usne apna iraada badal liya ho ... tum ek baar kadam aage badha kar to dekho" paapa ne mujhe samajhaaya.



"thanks papa , aap duniya ke sabase achchhe paapa hain" mene khushi se kaha. Or sochne lga ki vo kaisa pall hoga jab me Rits se milunga

To be countinue

Fast forward likha gya update hai typo ya word mistake ho jate to bataiyega​

lovely update ..rits cafe me behosh mili aur akhil ne daring karke bacha liya usko aag ki chapet me aane se ..
nani ne bday manane ke raaji kar hi liya akhil ke bahane se ..
akhil bina bataye hi chala aaya sirf ek letter chhodke ,aur ab rits dobara akelepan me jeene lag gayi .
akhil ne apne baap ko sab batake sahi kiya aur uske baap ne sahii salaah di usko .

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

Update ... 5​

agle hee din me manali ja pahuncha. Mene hotal pahunchkar Rits ko call kiya.


"Hello Rits" mene hichakichaahat se kaha.


"Akhiill ?" itane dinon baad meri awaj sunakar vo khush bhi thi aur hairaan bhi.


"vo Rits main kehna chahta tha ki main tumase milana chahta hoon bas ek baar to kya tum please "


"haan jaroor lekin tum is vaqt ho kahaan"


"main yaheen manali main hoon"


"manali ? tum yahaan kab aaye ?"


"aaj hee aur ab main bas tumse ek baar milana chahta hoon"


"thik hai batao kahaan milana hai ?"


"purani lack ke paas aaj shaam ko main tumhara intezar karoonga"


"thik hai"


phone rakhne ke baad mujhko aisa laga jaise mere dil se koii bojh utar gya ho Varna ab tak to muhhe yahi dar tha ki Rits mujhse milna chaahegi bhi ya nhi.

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bahut hee khoobasurat najaara tha vahaan ka. sooraj lagabhag doob chuka tha aur halka-halka chhaaya andhera us shaam ko aur bhi rangeen bana raha tha.....mene sab intezaam kar liya tha. bas ab der thi to uske aane kii. Me bs intezar karne laga.



achanak se mere pichhe se awaj aaii "Akhil " ... Mene peechhe mudakar dekha . vo aaj halke aasami choodidaar soot mein behad khoobasoorat lag rhi thi... hava mein laharaate vahi ghane kaale baal. Mujhe laga jaise me ek baar fir yaheen apna dil kho baithunga.


"kahaan kho gaye ?" Rits ne mere chehare ke samne haath hilaate hue kaha.


"kahi nhi, bas yoon hee"


"tumhen yahaan dekhakar bahut achha lag raha hai" Rits ne mere gale lagate hue kaha . Hum dono is tarah shaayad pehli baar mil rahe the ... sacch me us ahesas ko me shabdo me bya nhi kar sakta . me bs yhi prarthna kar rha tha ki ye pall yhi tham jaye or hum dono kabhi juda na ho



"ummeed to mujhe bhi nhi thi ki main yahaan aaoonga" mene bola.


"par aa gaye na"


"haan kismat hamen kheench hee laati hai tum baitho na" usne mujhe chair offer karte hue kaha.


"thanks, vaise poochh sakti hoon ki itne itanjaam kis khushi mein ?" Sawaliya najro se usne pucha



"are nhi ab tumse milalne se badh kar kya ho sakta hai tum itani khaas dost ho meri"


"haan ye to hai lekin tum us din bina bataye chale gaye, isake liye main tumase naaraaz hoon"


"haan main Maanta hoon, mujhe aise nhi jaana chahiye tha. I’m really sorry "


"to kya plan hai ? aage ka"


"plaan kuchh nhi bas tumhaare saath vaqt bitaana hai aur tumhen kuchh bataana hai"


"achha to jaldi se batao"


"samajh nhi aa raha tumase kaise kahoon ?"


"are itana kyon soch rahe ho bolo bhi"


"Okk Rits main jo tumase kehne ja raha hoon please use dhyaan se sunana aur samajhne kii koshish karna main main tumase pyaar karata hoon behad pyaar aur is baat ka mujhe tab ehasaas hua jab main tumase door hua ... halanki main shuru se hee tumhen pasand karata tha, tumhari saadgi, tumhaari shaayari, tumhari baaten ... us din jab tumane kaha ki tum kisi se pyaar nhi kar sakti to mene Faisla kiya ki main ab kabhi tumhen is baat ka ehasaas nhi hone doonga aur isiliye main tumhen bina batae chala gya ... lekin ghar jaakar bhi tum mere zehan se ek pal ke liye door nhi huii ... main jahaan bhi sochata tha sirf tum hoti thi ... jahaan bhi dekhta tha tum hoti thi. mene laakh koshish kii tumhen bhulaane kii lekin main naakaam raha ... aur bahut himmat karne ke baad main tumase yahaan milne aa saka hoon ... main nhi jaanata ki tum mere baare mein kya sochati ho magar main jo bhi kah raha hoon dil se kah raha hoon aur ye sab sach hai. ab tumhara jo bhi Faisla hoga vo mujhe manjoor hai"



ek pal ke liye hum dono shaant ho gaye ... fir Rits ne khaamoshi todi .


"vishaal main tumhaare is ehasaas kii izzat karti hoon kyonki main ab jaanti hoon ki tum kitne achchhe insaan ho ... tumne itani baar bina kisi rishte ke meri jaan bachaee hai aur tum jaisa dost kismat vaalon ko milata hai ...mene tumhaare aage shart rakhi thi ki tum kabhi meri zindagi se juda koii savaal nhi poochhoge kyonki tab mujhe laga tha ki tum bhi aur ladakon kii tarah sirf time paas karne aye ho lekin ab jab main jaanati hoon ki tum ek khoobasurat dil rakhte ho to mujhe lagta hai ki ab mujhe tumhen apne inkaar kii vajah bata deni chahiye"



"kaisi vajah ?" Meri baat par Rits muskura dee.


" vihaan vihaan tha uska naam. collage ka sabse popular aur handsome dekhne vaala ladka ... vo music ka student tha aur mene literature mein admission liya tha ... ye baat aaj se 5 saal pehle kii hai jab mene Delhi ke collage mein graduation ke liye kadam rakha ... vo mujhse ek saal senior tha, jitna achha vo dikhane mein tha utna hee music mein bhi ... sangeet uska Fashion tha. collage kii takareeban saari ladakiyaan uspar Fida thi .



ek din kisi ne class mein aakar bataaya ki sabhi students ko hol mein bulaaya gya hai ek important meeting ke liye ... mujhe bhi kuchh samajh nhi aaya aur jab hol mein pahunche to dekha ki vahaan ek ladaka stej par apne music baind ke saath sabse vaahavahi bator raha hai. hol mein sab taraf vihaan vihaan kii awajen goonj rhi thi ... aur fir usne gaana shuroo kiya. haalaanki uskii awaj bahut hee sureeli thi aur koii bhi us par vaah vaah kar uthta lekin mujhe us bhid mein khade rahane se jyaada jaroori apna lacture laga ... main akeli hee vahaan se nikal aaii. aur vo meri life ka sabase sahi faisla tha" Rits hansane lagi.



"fir ?"

"fir jab shaam ko main hostel ja rhi thi to raaste mein ek gadi aakar rukii aur awaj aaii


"Ohhh madam, gaana achha nhi laga tha to bata deti yoon beech me chhodakar beizzati to na karti aap"


mene jab dekha to vo aur koii nhi vihaan hee tha. mene koii jawab nhi diya aur aage chal dee. vo gadi se utarakar peechhe aa gya.


"are us 2000 students kii bhid mein se akeli aap meri performance chhodkar gayee, ab ye to bata deejie ki kya kami thi gaane mein ?"


"dekhiye mister"


"vihaan sab mujhe vihaan ke naam se jaanate hain" usne meri baat kaat’kar kaha.


"dekhiye aap jo bhi hain mujhe na to apke gaane mein koii intarest hai aur na hee apkii baaton mein. ab aap mera raasta chhodiye"



"thik hai chhod dete hain lekin ek shart hai. apko mujhe bataana padega ki aap vahaan se kyon gaii ?"


"ajeeb admi hain aap. main apko kah rhi hoon ki mujhe aapme koii intarest nhi hai aur aap hai ki vajah poochh rahe hain ! to suniye mene yahaan admission apni study ke liye liya hai kisi kii performance dekhne ke liye nhi"



"are aap to gussa kar gaii... mene to sirf isliye puchha tha taaki main apni galati ko sudhaar sakoon" ...mene use ghoorakar dekha.


"achha thik hai aap mat suniye mera gaana. par itna to bata sakti hain ki aap kis stream kii student hain ?"


"mujhe apse baat karne mein koii dilachaspi nhi hai aur behatar hoga aap yahaan se jaiye" kyonki chalte chalte ham kaafee door nikal aaye the.



"thik hai agar aap baat nhi karna chahti to main chala jaata hoon magar yaad rakhiyega ek din aap bhi mera gaana jaroor pasand karengee bye " ... Kehkar vo chla gya but mujhe uske jaane ke baad mujhe bahut gussa aaya.



"agale din subah jaise hee main collage mein daakhil hue to kuchh senior ladkon ne mujhpar tarah tarah ke comments karne shuru kar die unamen se kaii ne meri raging karne kii baat bhi kii .. lekin fir kuchh der baad hee vo sabhi mere peechhe se mudakar vaapis chale gaye.



jab mene samne dekha to vihaan khada tha. mujhe laga ki shaayad ye koii itefaaq hoga magar baad mein mujhe pta laga ki collage ke sabhi ladke vihaan se darte hain kyonki vo koii bhi galat harakat bardaasht nhi karta hai ... ye sunane ke baad mere dil mein uske liye kahi na kahi respect kii jagah ban gayi thi.



ab vo mujhe utana bura nhi lagta tha jitana pehle din laga tha. darasal vo bura tha hee nhi bas mene hee samajhne mein galati kar dee thi ... lekin main ye nhi jaanti thi ki uske dil mein bhi mere liye ek khaas jagah ban chuki thi. kyonki mere khyaal se to us ke liye collage mein tamaam khoobasurat ladakiyaan maujood thi ."



"aur fir ek din mere kuchh sharrarati doston ko mere saath ek prank karne kii soojhii. haalanki unhonne apni puri taiyaari kii thi lekin unhen nhi maaloom tha ki ye prank itana serious ho jaega.



unhonne meri aankhon par pattii bandhi aur bola ki vo mujhe kuchh dikhaana chaahte hain ... mene bhi kuchh nhi kaha. aur is tarah vo mujhe collage kii tares par le gaye aur mujhe deevaar par khada kar diya. unhen laga tha ki jab main ye dekhungi to dar jaoongi magar is se pehle vo log kuchh karte mene apne pair aage tares se neeche badha diye."



"What ? ? ?" Mene chaunkte hue kaha.


"haan lekin main neeche nhi giri. jaise hee mene apni aankhon se patti utaari to dekha ki vihaan ne mujhe god mein utha rakha hai. jab mujhe saara mamla samajh aaya to main khud ko is tarah dekh kar hadbadahat mein niche utar gaii ... itne mein mere sab dost bhi neeche aa gaye. poora collage ikttha ho chuka tha aur uske baad vihaan ne jo class lagaii un sabkii vo dekhne laayak thi ... use yoon un sabako dantate hue dekh mujhe yoon laga jaise koii mera apna mere liye lad raha ho. bachpann se koii tha hee nhi jo is tarah mere liye react karata sivaay meri naani Maa ke.



"Aur aap madam" usne meri taraf dekhate hae bola.


"door rahiye aise bevkoof doston se" usne gusse mein bola to mene chupchap sir hila diya.


us din ke baad vo hamesha mujhe apni nazar mein rakhata tha. main kahi chhoti see musibat mein bhi hoti vo vahin pahunch jaata tha. aur is tarah ham dono achchhe dost ban gaye.



jab se use pta chala tha ki mujhe likhne ka shaunk hai vo apne likhe hue gaane sabase pehle mujhe dikhata aur kahata ki main unhen chek karoon ki vo sahi hai ya usamen badlaav kii jaroorat hai.



kabhi-kabhi vo mujhe collage se hostal chhodane bhi jaata tha aur ab mujhe bhi uskii ye fikr achchhi lagne lagi thi... sabke liye ham bhale hee dost the lekin ham dono hee ek doosare se man hee man pyaar karne lage the."

To be countinue

(Lawda aa pure din likhunga bcoz I'm fucck'n mental writer )​

majedar update ..akhil ne apne dil ka haal bayan kar hi diya rits ke saamne aur rits ko akhil sahi banda laga isliye apne past ke baare me batana shuru kar diya .kyu wo akhil se pyar nahi kar sakti ye uski kahani me hi pata chalega ..

delhi ke college me mulakat huyi thi vihaan se ,vihan achcha ladka tha aur care bhi karnelaga tha rits ki ,dono ke mann me pyar ka paudha khilne laga tha par abhi tak kisine ijhahar nahi kiya hai .

 

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Update .... 6​

use mujhe suprise dena pasand tha. ek baar mere birthday par usne mujhe football graund mein bulaaya raat ko ... mujhe kuchh bhi nhi pta tha ki usne mujhe kyon bulaaya hai ? aur jaise hee main vahaan pahunchi usne mujhe apne doston ke saath vahaan light, cake aur music ke saath pahunchkar chaunka diya ... main bahut khush thi aur tabhi usne ek kitaab meri aur badhai aur ye dekhkar meri khushi ka thikaana na rha ki vo kitaab mere naam se publish huii thi.



usne mujhe bataaya ki kis tarah usne meri shaayari vali dairy churakar vo buk publish karavaii ... aur tab usne mujhse vaada liya ki main kabhi likhna nhi chhodungi."



"aur is tarah one an half year beet gya. main second year mein aa chuki thi aur vo Final year mein ... ab ham jyaadatar vaqt ek doosare ke saath bitate the. main naani se hamesha vihaan kii baaten karti thi aur us se naani ke baare mein ... naani aur vihaan kii baat bhi aksar phon par hoti thi. ab naani bhi use pasand karne lagin thi.



aur ek din vo meri aankhe band kar ke hol mein le gya. usne bataaya ki aaj uska janmadin hai. sabhi students uska birthday celebration karne ke liye vah maujood the ... aur tabhi usne in sabake samne apne ghutanon par baithakar mujhe purpose kar diya.



"main apni zindagee ka har saal ab se tumhare saath bitalana chahta hoon, kya tum mera saath dogi Rits ?"


aur chaaron taraf se se yes-yes kii awajen aane lagin ... main hairaan thi ye sab dekhakar, mujhe apni aankhon par yakiin nhi ho raha tha ki ye sab sach hai ya ek sapna aur fir mene haan kar dee...usne ring meri ungali mein pahana dee. vo din meri zindagi ka sabse khushnuma din tha.



uske baad se jaise sab badal gya. main collage mein sabke liye khaas ban gaii. vihaan sab ka chhehta tha aur main uskii pasand isliye agar kisi ko koii bhi kaam hota to vo mujhse sifarish ke liye aata."



ye sochakar Rits hansane lagi. lekin fir ekaek khaamosh ho gaii.


"fir kya hua Rits ?" Mene utsukata se puchha.


"aur meri khushiyon ko nazar lag gaii. meri ek chhoti see galti mere liye zindagi bhar ka naasoor ban gayii " uskii aankhon me aansoo saff jhalak rahe the.



"kyon aisa kya hua tha ?"


"us shaam meri dost Radhika ne apne ghar par ek party rakhi thi aur usne mujhe kaha ki main bhi aaoon. uske bahut zor dene par main bhi chalee gayee. Party mein uske aur bhi bahut se parents’ the aur unamen se ek tha Arnav jo vihaan ka bahut achha dost tha. vo ek bahut achha insaan tha aur vihaan kii tarah hee meri bhi bahut izzat karata tha.



us raat karib parry 1 baje tak chali aur fir ham sab ghar ke liye nikale. kyonki main hostalar thi aur hostal Radhika ke ghar se kaffi door tha to Arnav ne mujhe hostal tak chhodne ke liye puchha ... itani raat ko akele jaane se achha mujhe uske saath aana sahi laga aur mene haan kar dee ... usne raaste mein mujhe bataaya ki vo Radhika se bahut pyaar karata hai lekin kabhi use bol nhi paaya aur is maamle mein meri madad chahta hai ... usne bataaya ki kal subah vo use purpose karne vaala hai aur kaha ki agar baat nhi banti hai to main situation ko sambhaal loon.



aur in sab mein main ye bhool gayi ki mera phon pichhli shaam se battery na hone ke kaaran band pada hai aur bas yahi bhool ho gaii thi mujhse ... ham log jaise hee hostal ke samne pahunche mene dekha ki vihaan apni gadi ke saath vahaan khada tha ... use yoon itani raat ko dekhakar main hairaan ho gaii.



main utarakar uske paas gaii aur puchha...."vihaan tum is vaqt yahaan kya kar rahe ho ?"



"kahaan thi tum ? aur is vaqt Arnav ke saath kaise ?"


"are vo main raadhika ke ghar party mein thi aur Arnav bas mujhe drop karne aaya tha"



"kya hua vihaan sab thik hai ?" Arnav ne puchha to vihaan ne use haath se jaane ka ishaara kiya. vo apni gadi lekar chal gya.


"tumhara phone kaha hai ?" usne fir se usi sakht lahaze mein mujhse puchha.



"phone to vo to battery na hone ke kaaran off hai, lekin baat kya hai vihaan. tum kuchh batao to"


"baat thi lekin ab koii baat nhi hai" uske chehare pe gussa saff jhalak raha tha.



"matalab ?"


"matalab ye ki main tumhen kal shaam se phone laga raha hoon lekin nhi lag raha hai. jaanati ho kyon ? kyonki main tumhen ghar le jaakar mom-dad se milavana chaahata tha ... lekin tumhen to koii fikra hee nhi hai. ek baar kisi ke phone se mujhe bata bhi sakti thi ki tum Radhika ke ghar par ho. kal shaam se main yaheen tumhara intezar kar raha hoon" uska ye gussa dekhakar main dar gaii.


"I’m sorry main bhool gayee thi really sorry vihaan, please tum aise gussa mat karo"



"thik hai, main gussa nhi karoonga lekin ab mujhe tumase koii baat nhi karni hai"


"vihaan ye tum kya kah rahe ho ?" main vihaan ke us tarah ke bartaav se hairaan thi kyonki shayad ye pehli baar tha jab vo aise baat kar raha tha.



usne gusse mein meri koii baat nhi suni aur vo vahaan se chla gya ... mujhe andar se bahut bura lag raha tha. lekin mujhe vishvaas tha ki subah tak sab thik ho jaega... isliye main bhi chupchap hostel chali gaii


agali subah jab main collage pahunchee to meri nazaren vihaan ko dhoondh rhi thi aur tabhi ekadam se Arnav mere samne gulaab lekar aa gya.



“ye sab kya hai Arnav” mene irritate hote hue bola.


“are yaar kal yoon hee bevajah tumhaare aur vihaan ke beech anaban ho gaii, Ye uska solution hai ... Tum jaakar use ye gulaab de do aur fir dekho vo kaise ek second mein mann jaata hai”



“mujhe nhi lagta”


“ Are trust me uska gussa bahut kam time ke liye hota hai aur fir tum use filmy andaz mein ye gulaab dena” usne apne ghutano par baithte hue purpose karne kii acting karte hue kaha.



Aur tabhi mene dekha ki vihaan hame door se khada gusse se dekh raha tha ... Mujhe laga ki baat aur na bigad jae isliye main uske pichhe bhaagi par is se pehle main uske paas pahunchti vo gadi lekar collage se baahar nikal gya ... Meri kuchh samajh mein nhi aa raha tha ki kya karoon ? fir mene ek kaagaj par kavita likhi aur uske aane ka intezar karne lagi, Mujhe yakin tha ki jab main use ye doongi to ise padhkar vo apna gussa bhool jaega. Magar “ kahate kahate Rits ruk gaii.



“magar kya ?”


“main evening tak uska intajaar karti rhi lekin vo nhi aaya. Usaka intajaar karte-karte 9 baj gaye aur gatekeeper ne mujhse kaha ki ab main jaoon kyonki ab get band karne padega. Main vahaan se hostal aa gaii ... Lekin na hee uska koii phone aaya na hee koii massage, Aur to aur uska phone bhi band tha. Main andar hee andar ghabra gaii thi ... Intezar karte karte raat ke 2 baj gaye . Tabhi mere phone par ek unknown number se call aaya .. Vo phone City hospital se tha . Phone karne vaale ne bataaya ki unhen car accident mein ek aadmi kii lash mili hai ... caar ka nambar sunakar mere hosh ud gaye .. Vo vihaan kii hee car thi”



Mujhe laga ki jaise meri saaree duniya ek pal mein tabaah ho gaii. Mujhe mere kaanon par vishvaas nhi ho raha tha. mene jaldee se vordan ko sab bataaya aur hospital ke liye nikal gayi



Main jab hospital pahunchi to vaha vihaan ke mom dad postamartem room ke baahar baithe the. Unhen dekh kar main buri tarah dar gaii. Jab uskii Maa ne mujhe dekha to vo gusse se paagal ho gaii .


“tumhi ho na vo jisne mere bete ko mujhse chhina hai, kya chahti thi tum kya lene aaii ho ab yahaan mar chuka hai vo suna tumane mar chuka hai vo” unake ye shabd sun’kar main sunn rah gaii.”



Rits kii aankhon se aansoo lagaataar bah rahe the.


“vo bolti rhi unkii nazar me main unke bete kii maut kii jimmevaar thi aur ek maayane mein ye sach hee tha.



“tumane mere bete ko maara hai ab chali jao is se pehle kii main kuchh kar baithoon”


“ aunty please mujhe ek baar vihaan ko dekh lene dijiye please aunty ” main unake samne gidagidaate hue ghutanon par baith gaii.


“khabardaar jo ab mere bete ke najdeek bhi gayi to, jeete jee use chhoda nhi ab marne ke baad bhi too uske paas jaye ye main nhi hone doongi .... Tujhe koii hak nhi hai uska chehra dekhne ka. Aur agar tujhe jara sa bhi us se pyaar tha to abhi ke abhi yahaan se chali ja. Mujhe teri shakl bhi nhi dekhni .” Aur mere laakh mannate karne ke baad bhi vo nhi maani. Mujhe mujhe vihaan kii laash tak dekhne ko nhi mili ”


Ye kahte hue Rits phoot-phoot kar rone lagi.

To be countinue

(Bc I'm fucck'n romantic writer Etna to kabhi nhi likha ! Ungalia bhi gali dene lagg gaii mujhe . Btw ab ek bda sa final update or likha jayega uske baad estory complete . Fir hum vapis underground )​

nice update ..vihan ne propose kar diya aur rits bhi maan gayi ,dono ka pyar bhi parwan chadha aur sabko ye rishta pasand tha college me .

par ye vihan ko achanak itna gussa kyu aa gaya jisse wo naraj ho gaya rits se ,, kya arnav ki koi chaal thi dono ko alag karne ki .. ya bas galatfehmi ka shikar ho gaya vihaan .
accident kaise hua aur vihan ki maa rits ko hi galat kyu keh rahi thi samajh nahi aaya .

 

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Update ... 7



Rits ka es trahh bilakh kar rona mujhe ander tak takliff dene lga . Mujhe uska Rona dekha nhi gya or mene uthakar use gale se laga liya. Meri aankhen bhi nam ho chukin thin.


"vihaan kii maut ke baad main puri tarah toot chuki thi ... mere dil mein hamesha vihaan kii maut ka bojh rahata tha. main na collage jati thi aur na kisi se milti thi. zindagi jaise khatm ho gaii thi mere liye. is hadase ko ek mahina beet chuka tha. tabhi mujhe meri dost ne bataaya ki baahar vihaan ke kuchh dost mujhse milne aye hain.



main bade beman se unase milne gaii. unamen aranav bhi shaamil tha.


"Rits jo kuchh bhi hua ham sab jaante hain ki usmen tumhara koii dosh nhi hai lekin tum khud ke saath aisa kar ke vihaan ko dhokha de rhi ho. kya vihaan khud kabhi chaahega ki tum apni zindagi aise jio ?"


mene khaamosh chehare se un sabakii or dekha.


"Rits poora collage tumhara intezar kar raha hai kyonki sab jaante hain ki agar tum aaogi to kahi na kahi unhen vihaan apne beech dobaara se mil jayega. Please Rits agar tum sach mein hame apna dost Manti ho to fir se collage aana shuroo kar do"


meri samajh mein kuchh nhi aa raha tha lekin un sabake zor dene par mene haan kar dee.


aur jab main collage gayee to main ye dekhakar hairaan thi ki sabhi ne mujhe vaise hee pyaar aur izzat dee jaise vo vihaan ko dete the. sab mera har vaqt khyaal rakhate the. aur jab mene collage chhoda us din sabhi kii aankhe nam thi."



"aur uske baad main vaapis manali aa gaii aur yaheen ek collage mein literature padhaana shuroo kar diya ... haalaanki mene vihaan ko kiye vayde ko nibhaaya, kabhi likhana nhi chhoda .. vo kaagaz jo tumne mujhe us din vaapis kiya tha usspar vahi kavita likhee thi jo main use dena chahti thi lekin zindagi ne mujhe itana bhi mauka nhi diya aur tab se use main hamesha apne saath rakhti hoon isse mujhe aisa lagata hai ki vo hamesha mere saath hai"



kuchh pal ke liye vahaan ek khaamoshi ne jagah le lee.


"ab main kya kahoon tum sach mein bahut mazaboot ho. itane vaqt tak ye bojh apne dil par lekar jeeti rhi aur kisi se ek shabd bhi nhi kaha ... main sach me bahut khushakismat hoon ki mene tumase pyaar kiya ... aur main tumhen aaj ek vaada karata hoon ki chaahe tum mujhe pyaar karo ya na karo, chaahe tum mujhe milo ya na milo main tumhen hamesha yoon hee pyaar karata rahoonga"


"vo to thik hai lekin ab aage kya karna hai ?" Rits ne savaal kiya.


"karna kya hai, choonki ab main tumhaari na kii vajah jaanta hoon to kabhi bhi dobaara tumase is baare mein kuchh nhi poochhunga aur ab jis kaam ke liye aaya tha vo to hua nhi to kal hee vaapis ja raha hoon. lekin jaane se pehle mujhe tumase kuchh chaahiye"



"kya ?"


"ek vaada ki chaahe kuchh bhi ho jaaye tum apne hothon par yoon hee muskaan rakhogee hamesha. ise kabhi gum nhi hone dogi . bolo manjoor ?"



Rits ne haan mein sir hila diya


Me manali se khaali haath hee vaapis aa gya tha lekin is baar mere dil mein ek sukoon tha. aur ab mere dil me Rits ke liye pyaar aur ijzat dono hee aur badh gaye the.


ghar pahunchakar mene socha ki paapa se is baare mein baat kare par vo kafi busy the. fir ek din unhonne khud hee mujhse is baare mein puchha.



"to barakhurdaar baat kahaan tak pahunchi ?, Rits ne haan kii ya nhi ?"


"nhi paapa, uska jawab nhi badla lekin haan ab main uske inakaar kii vajah janta hoon aur sach kahiye ab mujhe uskii na se koii etaraaj nhi hai"


"achha zara mujhe bhi bataoge, usne aisa kya kaha. ham vaada karte hain ki ye baat sirf ham dono ke beech rahego "


aur fir meen unhen sab bata diya jo kuchh Rits ke saath hua. ye sab sunakar papa kisi soch mein doob gaye.


"kya hua paapa, aap kahaan kho gaye ?"


"kuchh nhi beta, achha tumhaare paas us ladke vihaan kii koii photo hai ya Rits ne tumhen kabhi dikhaii ho"


"haan ek minat rukiye" mene kuchh sochakar kaha kyonki mujhe yaad aaya ki vihaan kii ek photo Rits kii us dairy mein thi jo us aag vaale haadase ke din sathb saath hee mere saman mein aa gaii thi ... lekin Rits ko lagata tha ki vo dairy jal chuki hai.


Mene vo photo laakar apne paapa ko dikhaii .



use dekhate hee unhen ek bada jhataka laga.


"Ohhh god ye nhi ho sakata" unake munh se bs yhi nikala.


"kyon aap aisa kyon kah rahe hain kya nhi ho sakata ? boliye paapa bataie"


aur fir unhonne jo bataaya vo mere liye kisi sadme se kam nhi tha. Meri zindagi kii itani badee Haqikat jisase me itane vaqt se anajaan tha aaj mere samne khadee thi. aur vo hakikat kuchh aisi thi.


"aaj se 2 saal pehle kii baat hai beta jab doctors ne kah diya tha ki tum ab aise dil ke saath nhi jee sakte jisame ek chhed hai ... unhonne kaha ki ab koii rasta nhi hai sivaay iske ki koii tumhen apna dil transplant ke liye de. main aur hamare jaankaar doctors ne bahut koshish kii lekin aisa koii nhi mila ... aur fir ek din tumhaar ii halaat gambhir ho gaii aur hamen tumhen hospital mein admit karna pada"



"haan paapa mujhe achchhe se yaad hai lekin meri surgery ka in sabse kya lena-dena"


"us raat tum behosh the aur hamen koii raasta nhi soojh raha tha. Doctors jawab de chuke the ki agar koii dil mila to thik varana ham tumhen kho denge. main us vaqt tumhen bachaane ke liye kuchh bhi karne ko taiyaar tha. aur tabhi mujhe pta chala ki hospital mein ek accident case aaya hai aur us ladke kii haalat bahut gambhir hai ... mene doctor se uske baare mein puchha to unhonne bataaya ki accident bahut bura tha aur uske bachne ke aasaar kam hain. unhonne bataaya ki ab tak koii bhi us ladke ke ghar se nhi aaya hai ... main vahin intezar karne laga. thodi der mein hee maaloom hua ki vo ladka mar chuka hai... Doctors use lavarish laash samajhkar le ja hee rahe the ki tabhi mene unase gujaarish kii kii vo uska heart tumhen transplant kar den. mere zor dene par vo log Mann gaye.


aur us ladke ka dil surgery se tumhaare andar transplant kar diya gya ... lekin baad mein mene dekha ki uske Maa-baap bhi aa gaye the. haalanki mene aur doctors ne unhen sab bata diya tha. uske baap ne kaha ki ab unka beta to raha nhi kam se kam uskii vajah se mera beta to zinda hai ...... Our vo ladka koii aur nhi vihaan hee tha"


ye kahakar vo chup ho gaye.


"vihaan ! ! !" Me is sacch ko sunkar dang rah gya. jis ladke ne mujhe dil dekar meri jaan bachaii aur jise Rits beintehaa pyaar karti thi vo dono ek hee the mere seene mein is vaqt vihaan ka dil dhadak raha tha.


dheere-dheere mere samne sab aane laga. kaise me tab us se pehli baar mila aur uskii jaan bachaii . kaise jab me us se baat karne gya to aisa laga ki jaise me use bahut pehle se janata hu ... jab bhi me use dekhta tha tab mujhe lagta tha ki hum dono ek-doosre se hamesha se jude the ... mujhe Rits kii vo sab baaten yaad aane lagi jo usne vihaan ke baare mein kahee thi.



Me soch raha tha ki "agar Rits ko is baat ka pta chalega to use kaisa lagega. kya sochegi vo mere baare mein ?"


isi kashmakash mein 5 din beet gaye ... Agali shaam mere paas naani ka phone aaya.


"Hello Akhil beta kaise ho tum ?"


"main thik hoon naani, aap kaisi hain ? aur Rits vo kaisi hai ?"


"main thik hoon lekin beta tum Rits ko rok lo. vo meri baat nhi sun rhi hai"


"aap kya kah rhi hain, saff-saff batao ” ghabrate hue me bola


"Rits ne America kii kisi University mein apply kiya tha aur vo approve ho gya hai ... vo kal hee ja rhi hai beta. usne mujhe bhi aaj hee bataya hai. beta use roklo.. ek tum hee ho jo fir se use zindagi jeena seekha sakte ho. tum hee use is andhere se baahar nikal sakte ho main tumhaare aage haath jodti hoon beta, use rok lo "



"naani aap fikr mat kiijie main abhi aa raha hoon vahaan" kah kar mene phone rakh diya.


Mene apne Maa-paapa ko sab bataaya to unhonne bhi mujhe jaane kii ijaazat de dee.


Me usi vaqt manali ke liye nikal pada. lekin durbhaagyavash us raat mausam kuchh jyaada hee kharab ho gya aur raaste mein bhari baarish aur pahadi raasta hone ke kaaran meri kii gadi ek ped se ja takaraii ... Mujhe buri tarah chot aaii thi. vo to vahaan se gujar rahe logon ne mujhe vakt se hospital pahuncha diya Varna mera kalyan vhi ho jata

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bahut tez baarish ho rhi thi aaj aur fir achaanak se tadaak kii awaj ke saath ek ke baad ek deevaar par lagi do tasveeren neeche gir kar choor ho gaiin. kamare mein itna saara toota kaanch dekhakar Rits ekadam dar gaii.


"ye sirf tufaan ke kaaran tha ya koii Aanhoni ka ishaara ?" usne baahar jaakar dekha to naani apne kamare mein so rhin thi.



usne mujhe phone milaaya lekin vo bhi band tha. use behad ghabaraahat hone lagi thik aise hee jaise us din vihaan ke na aane par huii thi. vo subah hone ka intajaar karne lagi.


subah uske phone par ring baji. usne phone uthaaya to doosari taraf se awaj aaii


"Hello Rits beta main Akhil ka dad bol raha hoon. tum jaldi se hospital aa jao kal raat Akhil ka accident ho gya hai. tum jaldi se aa jao"


ye sunakar Rits behosh hote-hote bachi . usne rote hue sab naani ko bataaya aur unhen lekar tunrat hospital pahunchi. vahaan mere Maa paapa pehle se hee maujood the.


use dekhte hee meri Maa ne use gale se laga liya.


beta hamen maff kar do ham bhi tumhaare gunahagaar hain"


"ye aap kya kah rhin hai aunty ?, Akhil kaisa hai ?" Rits ne hairaan hote hue puchha.


"vo thik hai beta abhi khatare se baahar hai. lekin us se pehle ki tum us se milo main tumhen kuchh batana chahta hoon" papa bole


aur fir papa ne Rits ko mere aur vihaan se judi saari sachchaii bata dee jise sunakar Rits ko ek aur jhatka laga.



"beta hamen maff kardo"


"sorry kisliye uncle jo kuchh bhi meri aur vihaan kismat mein likha tha vo to hona hee tha. usme aap logon ka kya kusoor ... apne to ek baap ke naate us vaqt jo sahi tha vahi kiya" Rits ne unhen samajhte hue kaha.


"kya main us se mil sakti hoon ?"


"haan bilkul"


aur Rits us kamare kii taraf badhane lagi jisame me tha. use ek-ek kar ke sab yaad aa raha tha ki kis tarah vihaan ke jaise hee mene har baar uskii jaan bachaii thi. kyon vo har vaqt ye mahasoos kartii thi ki vihaan uske saath hai jab bhi me uske saath hota tha.


vo dheere se kamre mein daakhil huii. Me aankhe band kiye hue leta tha. usne dheere se jaakar mujhe pukaara.


"Akhil "


Mene aankhe kholi to dekha samne Rits khadi thi. Mere hothon par ek sukoon vaali muskan thi.


"tum kab aaii ?"


"Sshhhhh " Rits ne mere munh par ungli rakhte hue kaha.


"tumhen kya laga tha ki tum mujhe nhi bataoge to mujhe pta nhi chalega"


"kya"


"yahee kii ye jo khoobasoorat sa dil tum liye firte ho ye kisi aur ka nhi balki uska hai jis se main bahut pyaar karti hoon" kahate hue uskii aankhon me aansu aa gaye.


"lekin Rits mene tumhaare pyaar ka dil churaaya hai saza to mujhe milani chaahiye thi"


"haan aur isii vajah se tum yahaan hospital mein aa gaye hai na ? lekin main tumhe iske liye magf nhi karoongi" Rits ne jhutha gussa dikhaate hue kaha.


"ye kya baat huii ? naraaz to mujhe tumse hona chaahiye ... tum is dil aur mujhe dono ko chhodakar ja rhi thi. ye kahan ka iinsaff hai ?"


"haan main ja rhi thi lekin ab nhi ja rhi hoon kyonki main ek baar apna pyaar kho chuki hoon dobaara nhi khona chahti" Rits ne mere sir par haath ferte hue kaha.


"to kya tum sach mein mera zindagi bhar sath dogi ?"


Mere dil par hath rkhte hue boli "haan ab meri Amanat jo tumhaare paas hai" kahate hue Rits hans padi.


“ Rits ” me uska hath thamte hue bola


“ Hammm ”


“ Me tumhare muhh se vo 3 magical words sunna chahta hu, jinhe sunne ke liye na jane me Etne din tak tadpa ” mene uske hath ko or jor se dabate hue kaha . Meri baat sunkar Rits ke gore Gaal gulabi rang ke ho gye


“ Kounse magical words ? Mujhe nhi pta un words ke bare me ” mand mand muskurate hue Rits boli


“ tumhe pta hai Rits , please bol do na taki mere dil ko sukoon mil jaye ”


“ Accha thik hai ” Etna kehkar Rits mere uper chuki or kuch hi second me uska Palo me uska chera mere chehre ke bilkul karib aa gya


“ I Love you ” or ek halka sa chumbann mere galo par kar diya “ Ab to khush hona ” vapas sidhe hote hue Rits ne kaha


“ bahut khush ” fir mene apne jeb se ek kagaj nikala or Rits ke hath me thamaya . Rits ne meri taraf muskurate hue dekha fir us kagaz ki open karke usme likhe shabdo ko padne lgi

chhilti lakiron se bahati ravani ho tum,
dikh kar bhi anadekhei kahani ho tum,


thithurate hathon kee muskurati shaam se lekar,
subah kee tapati javani ho tum,


kurabaniyat ke Inaam ko tarasati,
pyaar bhari alhad deevani ho tum,


zubaan se barasate kahar ko peeti,
aankhon mein daba pani ho tum,


banati ho apne andar hee ek duniya,
duniya ke lie begani ho tum,


tum, tum ho hee kahan is bedard duniya mein,
takiti nigahon kee beiimani ho tum.



RITS​

" Ye tumne likhi ? ” mene ha me gardan

" Akdum backvash likhi, par koi baat nhi me tumhe sikha dungi because I'm fucck'n romantic writer ” haste hue Rits boli ... Use hasta dekh me bhi muskura diya

THE END​

lovely update ..rits ka sach bata diya papa ko aur papa ne bhi bomb fod diya akhil ke saamne ki vihan ke dil ki wajah se wo jinda hai .
rits america jaa rahi thi aur nani ne akhil se request ki usko rokne ki .
akhil manali chala gaya aur raste me uska accident ho gaya .rits ko bhi anhoni ki ashanka hone lag gayi thi .aur subah pata chal gaya akhil ke baare me .
hospital me sachchai bata di rits ko akhil ke papa ne aur rits ye jaankar khush huyi ki uske premi ka dil dusre premi me hai .
aur aakhirkar dono ek ho hi gaye ..

 

[Kingfisher]

So, another story completed... Ek aur badhiya rachna Kingfisher urf Single Launde ki kalam se... Rits yaani ki meri favourite kirdaar ka past dekhne ko mila jo sachmein kaafi dukhad tha... Wo bechaari uss gunaah ke liye khud ko zimmedar maanti rahi jo usne kiya hi nahi... Vihaan ki maut mehaz ek haadsa tha jiska theekra uske parents ne bechaari Rits ke maathe par fod diya... Jaao tum dono ko bad dua lagegi meri... Bechaari Rits ...

Khair, baat karen Akhilwa ki to pata chala ke jiss din Vihaan bhai ki mrityu huyi ussi din iss launde ka heart jawaab de gaya... Nateejtan ek heart transplant kiya gaya jismein Vihaan ka dil Akhil ko laga diya gaya... Aur issi dil ke kaaran Akhil Rits ki taraf aakarshit hua, aur uske pyaar mein bhi gir gaya...

Akhil aur Rits dono ko hi ye sachayi pata chali aur ant mein ek happy ending dekhne ko mili jahaan Akhil aur Rits sada sada ke liye ek ho gaye... Par last mein saara mood kharaab kar diya ju ne... Bechaari bholi Rits kabhi gaali nahi de sakti ... Ye fuckkin... Vuckkin... Sab Kingu ki bhasha hai... Rits ke naam se apni baat nahi bolne ka...

– Kahani Ka Pasandida Kirdaar...

Ye kaisa sawaal hai!!! Of course, my favourite Rits... Kitni sundar, kitni bholi, kitni masoom hai wo... Aur kitne gum sahe uss bechaari ne par uff tak naa ki... So, everyone should have for Rits... Waise Rits aur Vihaan ke beech jo kuchh bhi hua usmein shayad ittefaq ki hi galti thi aur Rits ki koyi galti naa thi... She's a pure soul...

– Kahani se mili seekh??

Bas yahi ke gussa hi insaan ka sabse bada dushman hai... Impatience aur gussa Insaan ke Vivek ko har leta hai aur aksar gusse mein ki gayi harkaton ka anjaam bura hota hai... Jo masla aasani se do minute coffee peete huye baat karke sulajh sakta tha, uska gussa maankar Vihaan ne apni jaan ganwa di... Par jo bhi ho ek tarah se uska dil to sadaiv Rits ke nazdeek hi rahega...

– Chand shabd doosre kirdaaron ke liye??

Akhilwa, sacha prem kiya isne Rits se... Aur Naani ke phone par pehle Cafe mein pahunchkar Aag se usse bachaya aur fir baad mein usse America jaane se rokne ke liye apna accident karwa baitha... Par chalo issi sab ghatna kram ke beech usse apna pyaar to mil hi gyaa, aur kya chahiye zindagi mein...

Naani... Ek achhi aur suljhi huyi mahila, jinhone Rits ke Maa Baap ki mrityu ke baad uske sar se parents ka saya gaayab naa hone diya aur Maa Baap dono ka pyaar usse diya... Jab Vihaan guzar gaya tab bhi dukh ke samundar mein usse Akhil naamak Saahil ka raasta dikhaaya aur aakhir mein dono ko ek bhi kar hi diya..

Khekhar sahab yaani Akhilwa ke Dad... Pehle to saala ye naam badlo... Mujhe ulti aa rahi hai ye naam sunke... Baaki bas yahi kahunga ke bhaiyon behno ye maatra ek fictional character tha... Aese Baap asal zindagi mein yadi expect karoge tab hoga asli Tandav shuru... Kya Cool aadmi hai matlab, Haan Akhil beta tu Rits se pyaar karta hai naa to jaa chala jaa uske paas Manali, main kuchh nahi kahunga... Aur jab maine apne Dad ko bataya tha ke main ek ladki.... Chhodo...

Lekhak ke baare mein chand alfaaz???

Kingfisher urf Kingu... Chhodo yaar waise tareef ka mann to nahi par kiye deta hoon... Ek behatreeen writer jiski kaabiliyat se ham sab parichit hain... Faraar ho ya fir Izhaar E Mohabbat dono badhiya estory likhi hain pehle bhi in bhaisahab ne... Aur ussi tarah ye estory, small but superb... Waise bhi apun ko short story zyada pasand aati hai... Khair, sahi shabdon ka upyog kahani mein, drishyon ka badhiya varnan aur kirdaaron ki badhiya bhumika darshayi writer saahab ne aur Isiliye doston... a round of applause mere liye to banta hai ...

End mein thanks for presenting this story bhai... Keep going...

[ Ek sawaal ... Rits Akhil ko peti pack mili hai ya Vihaan ]

At last... I Love You Rits ...

Shukriya bhai
Second last ka javab next part me milega ( profix adult )

Rits ki poori dastan sun ker Akhil ko bhi rona aa gya koyi bhi aise dastan ker emotional tow hoga hi
Baherhal Akhil khali haath wapas aa gaya or poori kahani apne PAPA ko sunayi tow yaha kuch kahani thi pehle
Akhil ke dil jo dil dhadk raha woh uska nahi Vihan ka h wah kia baat h
Ritas ko apna pyar mil gaya Akhil ko tow mila hi
Behad khoobsurat kahani ka
Bemisaal END
Behtareen story bhai

Shukriya bhai

जहां प्रेम होता है वहां संदेह या शक की कोई जगह नहीं होनी चाहिए । इंसान का सबसे बड़ा दुश्मन " शक करना " होता है । सारे रिश्ते नाते क्षण भर में ही चकनाचूर हो जाते हैं । विहान ने शक की बिमारी पाली और फिर क्रोध ने उसकी मती हर ली । अंजाम उसकी मौत हो गई ।
रिट्स ने कभी भी किसी तरह की गलती नहीं की । उसने सच्चा प्यार किया था विहान से । मगर एक गलतफहमी की वजह से उसका प्यार अधुरा रह गया ।
लेकिन शायद कुदरत ने कुछ और ही सोच रखा था निटृस के लिए । वो वापस आया लेकिन अखिल के रूप में । उसका दिल जो ट्रांसप्लांट हो गया था अखिल के शरीर में ।
शायद यही कारण था जो दोनों , निटृस और अखिल , हर समय एक दूसरे के प्रति अट्रैक्ट होते रहे । दिल से दिल का सम्पर्क जो था ।

बढ़िया लगा जो अंत में सब कुछ भला ही भला हुआ । दोनों प्रेमी एक हो गए ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत कहानी थी । छोटी थी मगर प्रभावशाली थी । हड़बड़ी में जल्दी जल्दी कहानी समाप्त करने की मंशा नहीं होती तो और भी ज्यादा बेहतर हो सकती थी । नायक और नायिका दोनों की इमोशन्स कुछ और भी एड करनी चाहिए थी ।
यह कहानी कम से कम पचास अपडेट्स से कम में समाप्त नहीं होनी चाहिए थी ।

खैर कोई बात नहीं ! इस बार कोई लम्बी कहानी लिखिए। हम जरूर आप का साथ देते रहेंगे ।

सभी अपडेट्स बेहद ही खूबसूरत थे ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

Shukriya bhai

Me apki baat pari trahh agree karta hu .. I know ye kahani lambi ho sakti thi but mene nhi Kiya jiska ek hi reason hai vo hai time ki shortage . Kahani shuru karne se pehle anumanit update bhi etne hi the jitne likhe gye ... Agli baar ek long story leke aunga . But tabhi jab me thread kholne se pehle almost sare update likh du . Samay ka pta nhi kab palat jaye or kahani adhuri rehh jaye

pyaar ka dushman gussa,,, ek chhoti si galti ya keh kismat... kismat se phone band hua aur rits dhyan na de payee,,, aur kismat se vihaan wahan aa pahuncha jab rits uske dost ke saath hostel pahunchi... footi kismat dekho kee phir se ek aur galat samay pe vihaan ko le aayee kismat...

agar do pal vihaan sun leta rits ke baate toh uska gussa kafoor ho jata,,, lekin gussa vivek ka dushman aur vivek sunya insaan aksar galat faisla hi leta hain... usne door jana chuna rits se uss samay lekin kismat usse itna door le gayee jahan se koi wapas laut ke nahin aata hain...

lekin kismat ko dekho,,, aisa khel racha wapas se jaa mila uss dil se jisse ruth ke bhaga tha,,, bhale hi shareer badal liya,,, lekin wo pyaar nahin badla,,, kismat ne phir se usse milaya,,, phir se usse bachaya,,, jab pyaar jyada hota hain toh usko parkha bhi utna hi jata hain... kismat ne thok peet ke puri tarah se parakh liya in dono ko,, tab jaa kee samjhaya kee main hi toh hoon jo hamesha se tha jab tum uske paas thee,,, jab tum usse door hui,,, jab tumhe laga kee tumne usse kho diya,,, tabhi maine bheja usse tumhare paas..

main hee toh hoon tumhaara kismat...

a beautiful and twisted ending Kingfisher aka kingu...

Thanks Bhai .. totally heart touching review Bhai . Love it

lovely update ..rits ke saath dosti bhi ho gayi par akhil ke pyar karnewali baat pata lagnepar toot bhi gayi ..
akhil ke music ka shauk sunkar rits ko yaad aa gayi apne premi ya dost ki jisse dukhi ho gayi thi wo .
ab ye rits ko kaha dhundega akhil ..

Shukriya bhai .

lovely update ..rits cafe me behosh mili aur akhil ne daring karke bacha liya usko aag ki chapet me aane se ..
nani ne bday manane ke raaji kar hi liya akhil ke bahane se ..
akhil bina bataye hi chala aaya sirf ek letter chhodke ,aur ab rits dobara akelepan me jeene lag gayi .
akhil ne apne baap ko sab batake sahi kiya aur uske baap ne sahii salaah di usko .

Bahut bahut shukriya Leon bro

majedar update ..akhil ne apne dil ka haal bayan kar hi diya rits ke saamne aur rits ko akhil sahi banda laga isliye apne past ke baare me batana shuru kar diya .kyu wo akhil se pyar nahi kar sakti ye uski kahani me hi pata chalega ..

delhi ke college me mulakat huyi thi vihaan se ,vihan achcha ladka tha aur care bhi karnelaga tha rits ki ,dono ke mann me pyar ka paudha khilne laga tha par abhi tak kisine ijhahar nahi kiya hai .

Thanks

nice update ..vihan ne propose kar diya aur rits bhi maan gayi ,dono ka pyar bhi parwan chadha aur sabko ye rishta pasand tha college me .

par ye vihan ko achanak itna gussa kyu aa gaya jisse wo naraj ho gaya rits se ,, kya arnav ki koi chaal thi dono ko alag karne ki .. ya bas galatfehmi ka shikar ho gaya vihaan .
accident kaise hua aur vihan ki maa rits ko hi galat kyu keh rahi thi samajh nahi aaya .

Shukriya brother .. I hope apke sare swal ke javab end ke update me mil gye honge

lovely update ..rits ka sach bata diya papa ko aur papa ne bhi bomb fod diya akhil ke saamne ki vihan ke dil ki wajah se wo jinda hai .
rits america jaa rahi thi aur nani ne akhil se request ki usko rokne ki .
akhil manali chala gaya aur raste me uska accident ho gaya .rits ko bhi anhoni ki ashanka hone lag gayi thi .aur subah pata chal gaya akhil ke baare me .
hospital me sachchai bata di rits ko akhil ke papa ne aur rits ye jaankar khush huyi ki uske premi ka dil dusre premi me hai .
aur aakhirkar dono ek ho hi gaye ..

Dhanyawad antt tak sath dene ke liyeb

 

[Aakash.]

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