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[vj4u]

VJ Bhai.....

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Aap role model ho mere liye writing k to in stories mein jitne bhi characters hai wo aapke liye ek chotta sa tribute hai meri taraf se.

Aapke advice k liye thanks bhai , mai dhyan rkhunga aage se length k baare mein.

Aur please story ko apna kimti waqt dete rahiyega please.

Thanks a lot

done...& once again,all the best Brother...

 

[ashish_1982_in]

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[ankuraggar]

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[ankuraggar]

Update - 6

Chapter- 2 Grade seven Martial Spirit

Part-1

"ek grade dus martial spirit, yah ek grade dus martial spirit nikala!"

ek grade dus martial spirit bahut asaamaany thi. na keval Dawalgarh mein mein, balki aas pass k aur raajy mein bhi koi jaldi se dekhne ko nahi milta tha jisi martial spirit shuru se hi ek grade dusmartial spirit ho.

Vijayraj ne apane bete ke peechhe mandaraate hue three-eyed black tiger ko dekha. uski donon mutthiyaan kas kar jakadee hui theen, bamushkil hi vah us pal ko mahasoos kar pa rahee thee, jo usane mahasoos kiya tha. phir bhee, usaka shareer thoda kaampane laga.

kuchh samay ke lie Bahnupratap ki hansee hole mein goonjatee rahee. unhen ummeed nahin thi ki martial hole k liye unaki anaupachaarik yaatra unhen itana adbhut aashchary degi!

"achchha achchha achchha!" Bahnupratap ne ek vistrt muskaan ke saath teen baar achchha shabd doharaaya.

gaharaee se saans lete hue, usane apane aap ko ikattha kiya kyonki usane apane dil mein uttejana ko dabaane kee koshish kee. usakee aankhen khushee se bharee huee theen kyonki vah is pote ko pyaar se dekhata tha, jisake paas ek grade dus martial spirit thee.

unhen dawalgarh dvaara pradaan kiye gae samarthan, cultivation method aur sansaadhanon se vishvaas tha ki Mohit ki upalabdhiyaan nishchit roop se unase aage nikal jaengee, jisase unake pote ko ek aise daayare tak pahunchane kee anumati milegee jo unhonne apana poora jeevan sapane dekhane mein bitaaya tha.

is samay, Jairaj badhayi dene ke lie Vijayraj ki or chale: "congratulation,bade bhai."

Vijayraj ne Jairaj ke imandaar chehare ko dekha, phir unhonne Jairaj ke kandhon ko thapathapaaya aur kaha: "dhanyavaad, chote.

aaie intajaar karen, Vikram ko abhi tak apanee martial spirit ko jagaana hai, ek mauka hai ki vah bhee ek grade dus ke paas ho sakata hai.

bade hole mein,Dawalgarh Kile ke elders aur kuch others members Vijayraj ko badhaee dene mein vyast the.

"Mohit, yahaan aao." is samay, hole ke kendr mein khada hua Bahnupratap ne Mohit ko awaz lagai.

"haan, dada ji." Mohit ne javaab diya.

Bhanupratap ke paksh mein aane se pahale, vah Vikram ke saamane se gujara, aur uski aankhen spasht roop se ahankaar se bharate hue Vikram ke paas chali gayi.

Vikram shaanti se use gujarate huye dekhta raha.

haalaanki Mohit unake chachere bhai the, lekin dono ki aapas mein nahi banati thi.

do saal pahale, Mohit aur elders ke kai anay bachche vikram ki bahan Arushi ko dhamaka rahe the aur sanyog se, Vikram ghatana par phunch gaya aurun sabkebeech kaha suni ho gayi jisme vikram k dwara mohit ko kuch hanikarak chotein bhi aayi.

Mohit chale gae aur apane daada ke saamane khade ho gae.

Bhanupratap ka haath, Mohit ke sir ko ragadane ke lie pahunch gaya, wo muskuraaya aur pyaar se bhar gaya. hansate hue, vah Vijayraj ke paas gaya aur kaha, "Vijayraj, aapane ek utkrsht pote ko janm dene ka achchha kaam kiya!"

doosare chhor par, apane pita kee prashansa sunakar Vijayraj ko thodee sharmindagee mahasoos huee, "pitaajee, kya aapako nahin lagata ki hamen pahale jaagaran samaaroh ko jaaree rakhana chaahie?"

Bhanupratap ne samajhate huye sir hilaaya, ki is maamale par charcha karane ka yah uchit samay nahin tha.

sauhardpoorn dhang se muskuraate hue unhonne kaha: "sahi hai, jaagaran samaaroh ko jaaree rakhen."

Mohit ke baad, ab Vikram ki baari thi.

Vikram ke baare mein kya? dekhane vaale sabhi yahi soch rahe the.

Vikram ne shaanti se hexagonal-pattern vaale prakaash kiran mein kadam rakha.

Jairaj aur Minakshi madad nahin kar sakate the, lekin ek-doosare ka haath ghabarae hue pakade hue the, yahaan tak ki apane bete ko hexagonal pattern mein kadam rakhate hue bhi unake dil ki dhadakan tej ho gayi thi.

Aage kya hoga Vikram k saath

Abhi k lye itna hi.................

 

[ragish7357]

behatrin update bro..............bro update ki size thoda bda kr skte ho kya.................ye kafi chote h jb pdne lgo to pta nhi chlta kb khtm ho gya agr size thoda bda rakhoge to jyada better rahega.................

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update - 6

Chapter- 2 Grade seven Martial Spirit

Part-1

"ek grade dus martial spirit, yah ek grade dus martial spirit nikala!"

ek grade dus martial spirit bahut asaamaany thi. na keval Dawalgarh mein mein, balki aas pass k aur raajy mein bhi koi jaldi se dekhne ko nahi milta tha jisi martial spirit shuru se hi ek grade dusmartial spirit ho.

Vijayraj ne apane bete ke peechhe mandaraate hue three-eyed black tiger ko dekha. uski donon mutthiyaan kas kar jakadee hui theen, bamushkil hi vah us pal ko mahasoos kar pa rahee thee, jo usane mahasoos kiya tha. phir bhee, usaka shareer thoda kaampane laga.

kuchh samay ke lie Bahnupratap ki hansee hole mein goonjatee rahee. unhen ummeed nahin thi ki martial hole k liye unaki anaupachaarik yaatra unhen itana adbhut aashchary degi!

"achchha achchha achchha!" Bahnupratap ne ek vistrt muskaan ke saath teen baar achchha shabd doharaaya.

gaharaee se saans lete hue, usane apane aap ko ikattha kiya kyonki usane apane dil mein uttejana ko dabaane kee koshish kee. usakee aankhen khushee se bharee huee theen kyonki vah is pote ko pyaar se dekhata tha, jisake paas ek grade dus martial spirit thee.

unhen dawalgarh dvaara pradaan kiye gae samarthan, cultivation method aur sansaadhanon se vishvaas tha ki Mohit ki upalabdhiyaan nishchit roop se unase aage nikal jaengee, jisase unake pote ko ek aise daayare tak pahunchane kee anumati milegee jo unhonne apana poora jeevan sapane dekhane mein bitaaya tha.

is samay, Jairaj badhayi dene ke lie Vijayraj ki or chale: "congratulation,bade bhai."

Vijayraj ne Jairaj ke imandaar chehare ko dekha, phir unhonne Jairaj ke kandhon ko thapathapaaya aur kaha: "dhanyavaad, chote.

aaie intajaar karen, Vikram ko abhi tak apanee martial spirit ko jagaana hai, ek mauka hai ki vah bhee ek grade dus ke paas ho sakata hai.

bade hole mein,Dawalgarh Kile ke elders aur kuch others members Vijayraj ko badhaee dene mein vyast the.

"Mohit, yahaan aao." is samay, hole ke kendr mein khada hua Bahnupratap ne Mohit ko awaz lagai.

"haan, dada ji." Mohit ne javaab diya.

Bhanupratap ke paksh mein aane se pahale, vah Vikram ke saamane se gujara, aur uski aankhen spasht roop se ahankaar se bharate hue Vikram ke paas chali gayi.

Vikram shaanti se use gujarate huye dekhta raha.

haalaanki Mohit unake chachere bhai the, lekin dono ki aapas mein nahi banati thi.

do saal pahale, Mohit aur elders ke kai anay bachche vikram ki bahan Arushi ko dhamaka rahe the aur sanyog se, Vikram ghatana par phunch gaya aurun sabkebeech kaha suni ho gayi jisme vikram k dwara mohit ko kuch hanikarak chotein bhi aayi.

Mohit chale gae aur apane daada ke saamane khade ho gae.

Bhanupratap ka haath, Mohit ke sir ko ragadane ke lie pahunch gaya, wo muskuraaya aur pyaar se bhar gaya. hansate hue, vah Vijayraj ke paas gaya aur kaha, "Vijayraj, aapane ek utkrsht pote ko janm dene ka achchha kaam kiya!"

doosare chhor par, apane pita kee prashansa sunakar Vijayraj ko thodee sharmindagee mahasoos huee, "pitaajee, kya aapako nahin lagata ki hamen pahale jaagaran samaaroh ko jaaree rakhana chaahie?"

Bhanupratap ne samajhate huye sir hilaaya, ki is maamale par charcha karane ka yah uchit samay nahin tha.

sauhardpoorn dhang se muskuraate hue unhonne kaha: "sahi hai, jaagaran samaaroh ko jaaree rakhen."

Mohit ke baad, ab Vikram ki baari thi.

Vikram ke baare mein kya? dekhane vaale sabhi yahi soch rahe the.

Vikram ne shaanti se hexagonal-pattern vaale prakaash kiran mein kadam rakha.

Jairaj aur Minakshi madad nahin kar sakate the, lekin ek-doosare ka haath ghabarae hue pakade hue the, yahaan tak ki apane bete ko hexagonal pattern mein kadam rakhate hue bhi unake dil ki dhadakan tej ho gayi thi.

Aage kya hoga Vikram k saath

Abhi k lye itna hi.................

Nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

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[king60]

Amazing update bro....Story kafi sahi ja rhi h....
Aese hi update dete rhen....

 

[ankuraggar]

behatrin update bro..............bro update ki size thoda bda kr skte ho kya.................ye kafi chote h jb pdne lgo to pta nhi chlta kb khtm ho gya agr size thoda bda rakhoge to jyada better rahega.................

Thanks brother... stay tuned for next update.... thodi der mein ek mega update
Jisme melegi vikram k powers ki kuch jalakhiyan

 

[ankuraggar]

Nice update bhai

Thanks brother... stay tuned for next update.... thodi der mein ek mega update
Jisme melegi vikram k powers ki kuch jalakhiyan