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Bhai kya hi update diye yaar kuch khass nahi laga ,kamal Shanti se apne baap se maar khata raha aur uski maa shital tamasha dekhti rahi aur sabhi Ghar waale kamal ko hi bura maan rahe hai jabki usse kisi ne nahi poccha ki itne din tak kamal kaha tha ,aur ye vishal aur uske dost kuch jyada hi ud rahe haiUPDATE 30
Mahmano me dhire se khusur pusur chalu hone lagi. Sab log ab khaana khaa rahe the, Charo taraf charcha ka vishay Kamal aur Amrita hi the. Rupali is baat behad gussa ho chuki thi, sath hi sath sunil bhi unke is khaasa din ko Kamal ne Apne baare me bana Diya tha.
Rupali koi Tamasha karti lekin Use Shital ne rok liya ki vo khud baat karegi Kamal se.
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"Aapko kuch kahna chahiye tha." Sunidhi Natasha ke pass kursi par baith boli.
"Main kya kahti?"
"Aap Mami hai uski, aisi harkat mujhe bilkul pasand nahi aayi."
"Main uski Maa se kahungi."
"Nahi aap khud kahiye, Amrita ke pita nahi hai, isiliye koi to chahiye jo uske sath sakt bartav kare."
"Haa lekin vo meri baat ka bura manegi." Natasha ka chehra sunidhi ki baato se narajgi jata raha tha. lekin use jo pata tha vo Sunidhi ko nahi pata tha.
"Tumhari baat ka bura mane to koi baat nahi lekin aajkal ke bachhe jaldi apne maa baap se nafrat karne lagte hai, hamse kare to kuch nahi lekin sachhai batana hamara kaam hai."
"Thik hai, main baat karungi lekin abhi aur bakheda khada karna thik nahi lagega." Natasha ne kisi tarah se karan bana liya kyuki vo Amrita ko dantna nahi chahti thi aur upar se usne kal jo kiya uske liye kuch bolne ka use koi adhikar bhi nahi tha. Bhalehi Amrita uski ijjat karti thi bachpan se lekin Vo Amrita thi jiski kahaniya sun Natasha badi hui thi.
" Haa tumhari baat bhi bilkul sahi hai,
Tejaswini bhabhi ko unki beti ki sagai me jo hua use aur ghumana nahi chahegi."
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"Nirmala tum Ashu ko sambhalo bichari ke dil par kya bit rahi hogi vo vahi jaanti hai." Ye baat Nirmala bua ki maa yaani meri dadi bol rahi thi.
" Haa Maa aap sahi kah rahi hai, mujhe bilkul bhi nahi laga tha ki Kamal aisa ladka niklega."
"Mujhe phir bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki Kamal aisa kaise kar sakta hai, Achanak jaise us par koi jadu hua ho."
" Haa main jaati hu dekhti hu ki Ashu kaisi hai."
Idhar Ashu Kamal ke pass baithi hui thi vo dono kone me khana lekar baithe the.
"Jaanu"
"Kya?"
"Bolo naa kuch, kya hua? tum baat bhi nahi kar rahi ho."
Ashu ne apni najar niche jhukakar bola.
"Kamal tum bura mat manana, lekin mujhe ek pal ke liye laga ki main tumhe kho chuki hu, tumse main door hoti jaa rahi hu."
Ashu ka udas chehra dekh Kamal aur Bura lagne laga.
"tumhe meri bhavnaye Amrita ke pati kya hai bata saku itni kshamata to mujhme nahi hai, lekin tum mere liye behad khass agar main pritam naa bhi hota to bhi main tumse pyar karta. Aur main tum chaho to Asmita ke sath jo bhi hai vo chhod sakta hu, mujhe malum hai ki use usase taklif hogi, jo ki main nahi chahta lekin tumhare liye vo karne ko tayar hu lekin Amrita ko nahi."
Ashu ne apni aankhe upar ki.
"Main ise koi ise tyag ka darja nahi de raha. Tyag to tum kar rahi ho, lekin meri jindagi Ka aham hissa ab Amrita ban chuki hai, vo mere ek hisse ko us tarah se samjhti hai jo shayad main bhi nahi samjh pata lekin main phir bhi tumhara utna hi hi jitna Amrita ka hu."
"Kamal main tumhe dosh nahi de rahi, Amrita tumhari soulmate hai main uski jagah nahi lena chahungi lekin, main shayad kamjor hu In sab ke liye."
"Tum kamjor nahi ho.."
"Tum ab Yaha kya kar rahe ho?" Nirmala ne Kamal ko Ashu ke pass baitha dekh kaha.
Ashu ki nigahen ekdum chinta me dub gayi.
"Us din to bade nakhre kar rahe the ki sirf Ashu hi sab kuch hai is parivar se koi lena dena nahi hai tumhara."
Kamal koi jawab de nahi paya.
"Bolo kuch kyu Kiya meri beti ke sath ye sab, kya sirf istemal karne ke liye hi thi meri beti tumhare?"
"MAA!" Ashu jor se boli "aap ye kya kah rahi hai."
"Kuch galat thodi kaha,sab kuch ho jane ke baad ab dusri or muh marna shuru kar diya."
Kamal ko is baat ka bura laga lekin vo kuch kah bhi nahi sakta tha.
Tabhi Nirmala ke chillane ki aavaj sun sab ki najare is taraf ho gayi.
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"Meena, agar Kamal aisa hi karne vaala tha to aana hi nahi chahiye tha."
" haa didi aapki baat se sahamat hu, kamal ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha, sabke samne vo bhi."
" Vahi to ham itne bade ho chuke hai ham kuch nahi kar rahe aur ye kuch jyada nahi ho raha, bichari Ashu jo usase itna pyar karti hai uske saamne ye sab. vo tumhare sath bhi kaisi harkat kar raha tha kamal us din Amritane sach me kuch jadu kar rahi hai, itne jaldi fasa liya."
"Aisa kyu lagta hai tumhe?" Meena jise pata tha ki Amrita kon hai isiliye usne pucha.
"Kyu matlab? Is ghar me sabse samjhne me kathin uski hi shaktiya hai jarur kuch jaal chal rahi hogi."
"Kon jaal chal rahi hogi" bich me sunil aur Vishal ne aate hue baat ki.
"Vahi Amrita usine kuch jadu tona kiya hoga isiliye aisi harkat Kamal kar raha hai."
"Mujhe nahi lagata usne kuch Kiya hoga Kamal aisa hi hai, tumhe yaad to hogi hi na uski harkate kya kya karta tha."Rupali Vishal ki baat par soch rahi thi.
Darsa ghar ki ladkiyo ki bathroom me unhe ek do baar camere mile the. Jiska iljaam Vishal aur Sunil ne Kamal par daal Diya tha. Rupali ki panties ko Kamal ki bag me chupakar pakadvana jisase camera ka Shak un dono par naa aaye is vajah se Rupali ki najar me Kamal thoda gir gaya tha lekin vo use abhi bhi apna Bhai manti thi.
Isiliye use Vishal ki baat sahi lagi lekin Vishal ki baat par Meena ko ab shak hua kyuki vo jaanti thi Kamal koi sadharan ladka nahi tha is vajah se pahli baar use Vishal shak hua.
"Haa aur Rupali tum kya Kamal ki chinta karti rahti ho, vaise bhi tumne dekha nahi meri bahan ke sath kya kiya usne puri tarah gira hua insaan hai vo." Sunil ki baat par Rupali ne bhi haami bhar di.
Tabhi unhe Shor sunai dene laga Sunil ki maa ka shor sab ko sunai diya.
Sunil us aur chala gaya uske pichhe sabhi bhage.
Vo pahunche tab tak Pratik yaani Ashu ke pitane samjhakar Nirmala ko Ashu sahit vaha se andar Ghar ke bhitar le gaye.
Kamal ki taraf ab sabki najare thi uski chhoti bahan, jaise use ghin aa rahi ho aise dekh rahi thi.
Tabhi ek Kamal ke kaan ke niche pada,ye kisi ne nahi uske pita yaani viswas ne lagaya tha.
Ye dekh Amrita ekdam gusse se tilmila uthi.
Thappad marte hi vishwas bola.
"Tumhari jurrat kaise hui, yaha sagai me aakar tamasha khada karne ki."
"Main marji se nahi aaya."
" Agar aisa hi tha to nahi aana tha, sab ko laga sara parivar eksath ho ga to achha rahega, lekin tum shayad is parivar me rahne layak ho hi nahi."
Apni pati ki baat sun shital bich me aayi.
Lekin use rokte hue viswas bola.
"Tum kuch mat bolo, tumhe hi tha ki yah ghar par aaye sath rahe. Dekh liya kuch fayada hai is baat ka."
Kamal behas nahi karna chahta tha. Vahi Shital ko apne pati ki kahi baat achhi nahi lagi.
Vishwas kuch der aor Kamal ko daanta raha. Is par Vishal aur Sunil ke sath uske dost aur Payal bhi muskurane lagi.
"Kya aise besharmo ki tarah khade ho kuch sharam hai ki nahi kuch to bolo."
Kamal ne is par kuch nahi bola aur paani ka gilas uthakar can se paani bharkar Pine laga.
Pine ke baad phirse Apne pita ke saamne khada hua.
Bahut se khusurpusur karte hue 'besharam ladka' 'asanskari' aise shabd bol rahe the.
Vahi is harkat pe Shital aor naraj ho gai.
Lekin jab is baar Vishwas ka marne ke liye hath utha tabhi Kamal ne ungli dikhate hue bola.
"Is baar main thappad ka jawab thappad se dunga, to sambhal kar."
"Beta ye kaisi baat rahe ho?" Shital apne bete ko aisa kahta dekh boli. Kyuki ab ye tamasha banta jaa raha tha jisme naam ab unka hi kharab hone vaala tha.
"Konsa beta, kisi anjan aadmi ko tumhara pati thappad marega aur chup chap khaa lega, main to yaha mahman ke taur pe aaya tha isiliye ek thappad kha liya.ab main umar ka koi lihaj nahi karunga."
"Haramkh.."
Vishwas kuch bolta Mathews ne bich me aakar Vishwas ko dusri aur le gaya kyuki aur tamasha na ho aur jate-jate ek aurat ko meri taraf ishara kiya.
Vo aurat meri aor aate hue boli.
"Chalo is tarah apne pitase kon baat karta hai" Aur Aisa kahte hue mujhe kuchh kursiyon ki taraf le gayi uske pichhe Abby aur karan bhi aa gaye. Meri maa ko aata dekh Abby boli ki "aap jaa kar vishwas uncle ko sambhaliye.''
Phir ham sab ek jagah baith gaye mujhe samjhte der nahi lagi ki ye vahi hai jisase Mathew mujhe milane vaala tha.Vo aurat lagbhag meri maa ke Umar ki thi. Lekin unki aankhe puri tarah shant thi. Sath hi sharir dubla tha meri maa se lekin sawale rang ki khubsurati un ki jarur thi.
"Kamal ye kya tha? Kar liya apne man se."
Karan ki baat par Abby ne use aankh dikhayi.
Tabhi vo aurat bol padi.
" Vaise mera naam Shanti hai. Mere baare me Mathew ne tumhe kitna bataya malum nahi."
"Darasal main unse mila hi nahi."
"Vo maine Mathew ko bataya tha, Kamal ke baare me." Karan bich me bola.
"Achha, koi baat nahi. Pahle meri kahani se shuruaat karte hai. Mera janm Amrit lok me hua hai aur Mere pati Amrit lok ke kuch hisse ko sambhalte the. Kharad ke
Raja banne ke baad sare logo ki suraksha ki jimmedari vaha ke rajgharano ki ho gai, logo ka vishwas Amrit lok ke swami se uthkar unke apne chhote mote rajao par bharosa ho gaya. Jis vajah se mere pati ne bhi rudpur shahar aur Aaspass ke gao par niyantran rakha. Lekin kharad ko ye baat jyada din tak pasand nahi aayi aur usne mere pati ko unke hi bhai ke sahare maar daala aur mere devar ko vaha raja ghoshit kar diya."
"Kyu kharad ne khud kyu nahi maara?" Ye sawal puchte hi mujhe bura laga kyuki ye unke hi pati ke baare me tha Maine maafi mangni chahi.
"Maafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai, lagbhag 25 saal ho chuke hai us baat ko, log vaha par Rajgharano ko maante hai,kyuki unhone Pritam ka sath diya tha Ozors ke khilaf samrajya khada karne me. Kharad agar mere pati ki jaan leta to vo logo par apna niyantran nahi rakh pata, jo ki use pasand hai shakti aur niyantran ek hi sikke ke pahlu hai. Jiske pass niyatran hai vo shaktishali hai. Is liye usne Aisa raja khada kar diya jiske khilaf log naa jaye aur vo kharad ka paltu kutta bankar rahe aur kharad apni manmarji logo par kare.jo ki tumse badlega."
"Aisa aapko kyu lagta hai?"
"Mujhe kyu lagta hai, Agar tum nahi bachha sakte to kharad se hame koi nahi bacha sakta."
Maine unki baar par sar hilaya.
"To ham karne kya vaale hai."
Tabhi vaha par Mathew aa gaya.
"Hame sabse pahle ek sena banani hogi, jo
Un ozors ke aage tik paaye aur kharad ke khilaf to tumhe hi ladhna hai."
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" Ye Mathew uncle aur Abby kya baate kar rahi hai Kamal ke sath." Vishal Arjun Aur baaki dosto ke sath baitha tha. Jyada tr mahman Jaa chuke the bass kuch hi bache the.
"Usase kya? Itna bada tamasha kiya usne samjha rahe hoge." Arjun bola.
" Vaise manana padega Kamal ko Amrita jaisi ladki hasil kar li usne." Arjun ke pass khade unke dost ne kaha.
"Haa Vishal bhai tumhara number to gaya." Arjun bola.
"Kya malum usne ye kaise Kiya to lekin itni jaldi main kaise haar maan sakta hu."
"To kya khayal hai?"
"Impress karna hoga use aur Kamal ki ijjat ki dhajjiyan udani hogi Amrita ke saamne."
"Haa Tumne kuch jarur soch hi hoga, vaise bhi maine tumhari tarah rough n tough ladka abhi tak nahi dekha."
Vishal apni tarif sun muskurate hue Arjun ki taraf dekha.
"Haa ye to shuruvat hai,tumne mer
e baare dekha kaha hai." Is par phirse baaki ladke Vishal ki tarifo ke pull bandhne lage. Vishal ko bhi apni tarif sunna pasand tha isiliye unki galtiyon par bhi unhe jama karke rakhta tha.
likes kardo.kaisi lagi Bata Dena.
Abhi yaha se Kamal ki asli journey chalu hogi. Uske saare sawal ke jawab use milne chalu ho jayenge.
Ekdam se sab kuch ho jayega to story khatam ho jayegi, hero ek hi update me sab kuch kaise karega Abhi maa bete ka milna baaki hai, vo sidhe agli update me dikhane vaala tha puri maa bete ki conversation achanak se.spoiler hai lekin aapki jigyasa ke liye bata raha hu.Bhai kya hi update diye yaar kuch khass nahi laga ,kamal Shanti se apne baap se maar khata raha aur uski maa shital tamasha dekhti rahi aur sabhi Ghar waale kamal ko hi bura maan rahe hai jabki usse kisi ne nahi poccha ki itne din tak kamal kaha tha ,aur ye vishal aur uske dost kuch jyada hi ud rahe hai
Bhai next update jaldi Dena yrr ek to hafte me ek hi update aata hai aur bhi itna Chhota
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