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JADUI PARIVAAR
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Mrutyu lok se yaani mere parivar se behad dur ek aur duniya thi jiska naam tha Amrit lok.
" Kya hua guruji , aap ko Aashcharya me kyu hai , aisa kya hai meri beti ki kundli main "
" Beti , tumhari beti Is Amritlok ki raani banne vaali hai "
" Kya ? Ye aap kya kah rahe hai , is raajya ki to ek bhi raani nahi hai is rajya ki raani hue 100 saal ho chuke hai , yaha to sab gulam hi hote hai "
Tabhi Apni patni ki baat par sochte hue ek aadmi ne guruji se kaha .
" Kahi aap ye to nahi kahna chahte ki vo krur Kharad meri beti se shadi karega. usne ab tak sirf sabko gulam hi mana hai, usne Amrit lok ko Vish lok me tabdil kar diya "
" Nahi , ye is rajya ke sachhe raja yaani Ki is rajya ke rakshak jaise devlok me Indra hai vaise hi hamare rajya ke raja ki patni banegi tumahari beti "
Vaha khade sab log khushi se fule nahi sama rahe the , lekin itni battar jindagi ke baad aisi ummide bhi rakhne par himmat nahi hoti .
" Kahi , ham jo samjh rahe hai aap vahi kahna chah rahe hai na ki meri beti is Amrit lok ki Amrita hogi Aur hamare Raja "
" Haa vahi "
" Ye kaisa ho sakta hai , pichhli baar usne apne hatho se Raja ko jaan se mara tha is baar bhi vo Kharad hamare Raja jaise bhole bhale vyakti ko khatam kar dega unki shakti par hame sandeh nahi lekin Kharad behad hi bura insaan hai "
" Haa guruji ham aapka apman nahi karna chahte lekin Kharad jaise bura insaan hamne Aaj Tak nahi dekha, vo khudki beti se shadi kar ke betiya paida kar raha hai aur phir unse shadi karke phirse beti paida karta hai isse uske pass shakti shali sena tayyar kar di hai , aur dusri taraf nyay ki murti vo kisi bhi Janam me is tarah ki harkat nahi karenge ".
" Putri main janta hu tum sabko apne rajya ki chinta ho rahi hai , kyuki Kharad ko khatam karne ke liye use usi ki tarah ka insaan chahiye jo ki paida ho chuka hai , aur vahi isi jadui nagari jaha har kisi ke jadu basa hai use kharad ko nasht karke bachayega"
" Matlab raja ne janm le liya hai "
" le liya hai lekin mrutyu lok par "
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" Kamal , darwaja khol aaj teri khair nahi " darwaje ke piche se mera bhai chilla raha tha jabse samjhne Laga tha tabse mujhe uske liye nafrat hi thi aur kuch nahi .
" Kya hua tum chilla kyu rahe ho " mene mere bhai par darwaja khol chillane laga . Mujhe bahut darr lagta tha mere bhai ka kyuki uske pass bahut takat thi aur usne mujhe bahut baar kuta tha . Aur support ke liye koi bhi nahi aata tha .
" Kamal , tumne college me aaj mere dost Arjun ke sath aisa kyu Kiya "
" Kyu kiya kya matlab Maine kuch nahi Kiya hai "
" Kamal jyada natak mat karo tumhara main muh Tod dunga , uske pant me khujli ki powder tumne daali thi ,bichara kitni buri tarah se tadaf raha hai "
" Haa daali to," maine itna bola aur mere jabde pad ek jor se jhapad pada me rote hue " Vo mujhe kitne dino se bully/ pidit kar raha tha lekin aap ko vo nahi dikha jab maine kuch kiya to uska dard dikhane laga , mere sharir par kitne jhakhme ke daang hai vo aap ko nahi dikhe "
" Kamal aavaj niche , mene to abhi kuch Kiya hi nahi hai , kuch kiya to tumhe bhi pata hai ki kya hashar hoga "
Tabhi meri Nirdayi parivar vaha aa gaya .
" Kya hua Kamal kyu jhagada kar rahe ho , dekho pura chehra tumhara bigad chuka hai tumse jhagada nahi hota to apne bhai ko uksaya bhi mat karo "
Mujhe is baat se koi bhi naya pan nahi lag raha tha , unki najaro me main kamjor tha to mujhe kamjor ki tarah hi rahna chahiye .
" Lekin maa maine kuch kiya bhi nahi hai , mujhe school me ek ladka satata tha jab bhi main aap ko yaa bhaiya ko batata tha , aap kahte the ki bachho ki tarah family ko mat bataya Karo Vishal ki tarah apni problem solve Kiya Karo jab ki to bhaiyya mujhe hi daantne lage aur upar se aap sab log bhi mujhe ho sunane lage "
Meri maa ne is baat par jyada kuch nahi kaha bass mere bhai ko aankh dikhadi .
"Vishal , Tumhe apne bhai ka sath dena chahiye aur tum ho ke ,vo kamjor hai tumhe uski dhal Banna chahiye "
Mai unki in baato se thak gaya tha , main kamjor hu . Ab sabko takatvar hone ke liye koi jadui shakti hona jaruri hai kya .
Mere parivar me sabke pass jadui shakti hai sab log sadharan insaan se 10-15 Guna jyada takatvar the jisme Mera bhai shayad 100 guna bhi ho sakta hai . Baakiyo ke pass shakti thi . Mere pass nahi sab log mujhe ek kamjor insaan samjhte the .
Unke har ek family gatherings me ek outsiders ban jata tha .sab log ek dusre ko side lete the unki baate jyada tr jadu aur aur unke jadui karnamon ke aaspass hi rahti thi jo ki mujhe unse dur kar deti thi .
Unke har Sunday meet-up hota tha usme chacha ko family aur bua aur mama ki family bhi aati thi .
sab log ek dusre ke shaktiyo ka pradarshan karte the kisiko mere sath baat karne ki bhi fursat nahi thi.
Aaj usi hi tarah ki meet-up thi .
Sab log shyam ko jame hue the main mera suja hua chehra liye tha . In sab me meri jyadatr Ashu se hi banti thi lekin shayad unse ye bhi dekha nahi gaya ho use sabse dur bhej diya padhne ke liye .
" Ouuuch " main ek table se teka leke baitha hua tha ko mujhe kuch pith ke niche ke hisse ko chubha .
Maine ekdum se piche dekha . Kuch bhi nahi dikha , phir se me sidha ho gaya .
Isbaar mujhe gud gudi hone lagi thi .
Main akela jor jor se hasne laga sab logone meri taraf najar ki aur meri is harkat pe aur jor se hasne lage .
Mujhe samjh aa gaya ye kya ho raha hai , ye sab agar normal family me hota to sab. Hasi majak lagti lekin is cruel family me ye sab mujhe bass majak banane ke liye hi ho raha tha.
Main in sab ka majak banane ka ek khilona hu bass aur nahi .
" Guddu didi please mujhe chhod dijiye "
Ekdum se merk gud gudi kam ho gayi aur chhoti si Table par khadi ho gayi , maine thodi dhyan se unhe dekha .
" Didi ho gaya aapka kar li majak "
" Are tum bhi bahut senti hota hai , are ab sab log kuch Naa kuch kar rahe the ab tujhe usme involved karne kaa soch hi raha thi lekin tere hisab ka koi game nahi bass truth and dare hai lekin usme bhi Ashu ho to tabhi maja aata hai vo ekdum jhatke se sach bata sakti hai "
" To Aap mujhe aur pareshan karegi "
" Are mere chote Bhai , pata hai ki tu naraj hai Vishal ne Tera thopdajo suja diya hai lekin tu phikar naa kiya kar kisi ne kuch bigada naa to teri ye jadui family sab ko sabak sikhayegi sivay bass Vishal se mat takrana bahut takat var hai usase tujhe to sirf meri maa hi bacha sakti hai "
" Achha ho gaya aapka "
Mene apne aas pass dekha sabhi koi naa Koi khel khel rahe the , meri chachi bich me candel rakhke uske flames ko meri maa ki upar marti vo use meri maa bujhati thi.
Aapko ye khel behad bore laga raha hoga meri tarah lekin uske liye us tarah ki shaktiya bhi chahiye jo ki hamare pass nahi hai .
Baaki mera bhai sabke saamne kuch Naa khel me flex karta tha ab ye saara khel unka garden me ho raha tha .
Jab me bachha tha to ye sab chije behad achhi lagti thi lekin ab sirf main in sabke khel me a
kela ho gaya tha .
Unki lifestyle jadu ke aaspass mandarti thi aur main unke layak hi nahi tha .
School me bhi sab Mujhe mere bhai se compare karte the , vo to har ek sports me number 1 tha ,usme to mujhe doubt tha hi nahi lekin main ek sadharan average . Maa aur papa bhi mujhe usase compare kartre kabhi kabhi sochta tha ki main hi Aisa kyu hu . meri chhoti bahan to vishal se Bachpan se impress thi . Uske bade bhaiya the meri tarah kamjor aur lachar to nahi the .
Meena mere bhai ki gf thi bachapan se hi unka rishta pahle hi fix ho gaya tha jaise mera Ashu se, hamare parivaar me ek rivaj hai ki shadiyan inhi do parivaron ke bich hoti thi kyuki shaktiya inhi family me rahe . Kabhi kabhi sochta tha ki main najayaj to nahi hu .
Yaa phir god liya hua .Ab shadiyo ki baat ki jaaye to kon Kisase shadi karega vo fix hi tha. Bass Mera bhai college me idhar udhar muh maarta tha shayad meena aur uske bich kuch karne se shadi tak mana kiya hua tha rahi baat Ashu ki to use mujhse kabka in logo ne dur kar diya.
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Nice story, keep on updating regularly.
Congratulations for your new story
Nice introduction
Awesome update
Waiting for next update
Nice and beautiful introduction of the story.....
Nice and superb update....
Ek no story Bhai keep it up. Hero ke pass to koi bhi power nahi hai , phir kya hoga .
Vaise Amrit lok ko bachane vaala kahi iska Bhai to nahi hai kamal naa hokar.
Nice update
Nice update
UpdatedBahut hi shaandar update diya hai hemya bhai....
Nice and lovely update.....
Thanks aap bane rahiye hai bassWords nhi apki story ke liye kafi umda aur behtareen concept hai congratulations