Rajesh Sarhadi
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Lo ji ho gaya siyapa....
Behad hi shandar or Hotttt update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb
good one
Story dhire dhire mazedaar hoti jaa rahi hai
Thanks bhai. Apki tareef ke liye shukriyawah dear!!!! kamaal buss kamaal ke updates , kya likhte hai aap! aapka lekhan vaastav mein kaamukata aur uttejana se bhara hai.
aapka har update such mien mind blowing , ekdum jhakaass, faadu aur bahut bahut majedar aur lazzatdar.
Thanks bhai. And ap sath bane rahiye story toh aise hi age badhti rahegi.hamesha ki tarah badhiya update bhai...aap bahut achha likhte ho...divya kya bolne wali thi woh suspense hi reh gaya. shayad wo apne baare mein usse baat karne waali thi. lagta hai ab yeh kahani apne asli roop yani incest mein pahuch chuki hai aur jald hi divya aur rahul ka intimacy scene padhne ko mil sakta hai. anyways i am enjoying the story very much.
Thanks bhaibahut h jabardast update , Yah kahaai such mien bahut hi romanchak aur kamuk hein yaar
mujhko bahut bahut hi passand aya aur maza bhi, bahut hi acha likha hai aap ne hum bahut bahut khush hue
Behad hi shandar or dilchasp update bhai.UPDATE 26
“Par tune toh kaha tha k wo log sham tak ayenge. Toh fir ab yeh kya hai?” Dar ke mare Aditi ke v hath paon phool rahe the.
Rahul: yaar mujhe toh khud kuchh samajh mein nahi a raha. Par abhi kya karein pehle wo socho.
Aditi(gusse mein): ab main kya sochun. Yeh sab tumhari galti ki wajah se huya hai toh iska solution v tum hi nikalo.
Rahul: are meri maa. Abhi yeh time blame daalne ka nahi hai. Khair chhodo main hi kuchh sochta hun. Han yeh sahi rahega.
Aditi(tension mein): kya sahi rahega. Kahin tum mujhe cupboard mein chhipane ka toh nahi soch rahe. Main aisa kuchh nahi karne wali.
Rahul: are yaar tumhe ho kya gaya hai. Paglon jaisi batein kare ja rahi ho. Aisa kuchh karne ko nahi keh raha main.
Aditi: I am sorry yaar, tension mein mera dimag kharab ho jata hai. Tum batao k kya plan isse pehle k wo log ander a jayein.
Rahul: achha suno, tum aisa karo k chup chap jakar Hall mein pade sofe par baith jao. Aur jaise hi wo dono enter hon toh tum aise acting karna jaise tum yahan Divya ko hi milne ayi ho.
Aditi: par main Divya ko milne kion aungi.
Rahul: tum uski tension mat lo wo sab main sambhal lunga.
Aditi: pakka na?
Rahul: han pakka… (bas Divya koi gadbad na kare toh.)
Aditi: tumne kuchh kaha?
Rahul: han pakka.
Aditi: nahi uske baad.
Rahul: yaar tension ke mare tumhare kaan baj rahe hain abhi tum jao jaldi se. Nahi toh wo log a jayenge. Main bas kapde pehan kar aya.
Aditi: han but jaldi a jana plz. Mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai.
Rahul: han par abhi jao toh sahi.
Fir Rahul ne Aditi ko wahan se nikala aur khud kapde pehanne laga. Aditi jaldi se jakar sofe par baith gayi aur khud ka huliya theek karne lagi taki koi gadbad na ho. Wo buri tarah se nervous ho rakhi thi aur apne pairon ko lagatar hilaye ja rahi thi. Tabhi Rahul v jaldi jaldi se kisi tarah kapde pehan kar bhaga bhaga wahan aya. Abhi wo sofe ke paas aya hi tha k Kiran aur Divya apas mein batein karte huye ghar mein enter huye. Jaise hi unki nazar Aditi aur Rahul par padi toh wo ek dum se wahin ruk gaye.
Agar main is ek pal ko pause karke sab ki taraf gaur karun toh Sab ke chehre par is waqt alag alag expressions the jo uski is waqt ki manodasha ko vyan kar rahe the. Jaise k Rahul ke chehre par dekh kar hi pata chal raha tha k wo ander hi ander prarthna kar raha hai k kisi tarah Divya use is musibat se nikal le. Wahin Aditi ki toh tension ke mare fati ja rahi thi k kahin uska jhuth pakda gaya toh Rahul ki maa aj uska jo haal karegi wo use soch kar hi dar lag raha tha.
Dusri taraf Kiran aur Divya ke man mein kuchh alag hi vichar chal rahe the. Is waqt Kiran yeh soch rahi thi k Yeh ladki akhir hai kon aur is waqt yahan kya kar rahi hai. Kahin yeh Rahul ki GF toh nahi aur shayad wo ise hum logon se milwane le aya hoga. Agar aisa kuchh huya toh main toh jhat se maan jaungi. Kitni pyari aur sundar ladki lag rahi hai. Wahin Divya ka khoon yeh soch kar khaul raha tha k uske bhaiya ne use Aditi ko lekar jhuth kion bola. Jab maine puchha tha k kya wo apki GF hai toh seedha seedha han nahi bol sakte the. Itna bada jhuth bolne ka kya matlab. Aur ab yeh aise kion baithi hai kahin bhaiya ise mom se milwane toh nahi laye na?
Kiran(Aditi ko): hlo beta.
Aditi(darte huye): hii Aunty.
Aditi ne itna bolte hi Rahul ki taraf dekha toh Rahul ne use ishara kiya k plan ke mutabik chalo.
Aditi: hi Divya. Actually main tumse hi milne ayi thi.
Divya(Hairan si hokar): mujhse?
Divya ne badi Hairani se Rahul ki taraf dekha toh uski shakal pe barah baje huye the. Usne Divya ki taraf bechari si shakal bana kar aise dekha mano use bol raha ho k aj toh bas tum hi bacha sakti ho.
Divya(Rahul ka ishara samjhte huye): are han yaad aya mujhe Taniya ne bataya tha k tum ane wali ho.
Kiran: oh toh yeh tumhari friend hai?
Divya: han mom actually yeh Aditi hai meri Friend Taniya ki cousin. Wo actually isko mujhse kuchh kaam tha toh isiliye ayi hai.
Kiran: ok toh theek hai tum dono tumhare room mein jakar baitho main tab tak saman rakh deti hun. Rahul meri help karoge beta?
Rahul(chain ki saans lete huye): ji mom.
Divya: chalo Aditi hum mere room mein chal kar batein karte hain.
Divya Aditi ko lekar apne kamre mein chali gayi aur Rahul Kiran ke sath shopping ka saman car se nikalne chala gaya.
Divya(room mein pahunch kar): akhir yeh sab chal kya raha hai.
Aditi(Sir neeche kare huye): I am sorry Divya.
Divya: are yaar mujhe sorry mat bolo plz. Ismein tumhari kya galti. That’s ok. Mujhe toh bhaiya par gussa a raha hai k unhone mujhe tumhare bare mein kuchh v nahi bataya.
Aditi(man mein): shayad yeh samajh rahi hai k hum dono date kar rahe hain. Khair main chup hi rehti hun nahi toh pata chale k yeh mujh par aur jyada bhadak jaye.
Divya: kya huya tum kuchh bol kion nahi rahi? Khair tum thoda time yahan par hi baitho fir jab mom apne room mein chali jaye toh tum nikal jana.
Aditi: thank you Divya.
Divya: that’s ok. Ismein thank you ki kya baat hai.
Udher Kiran ke sath pura smaan rakhwane ke baad Rahul v free ho chuka tha. Usne bilkul v time waste nahi kiya aur jaldi se uper Divya ke room mein bhag gaya. Uper pahunch kar usne dekha k wo dono aram se baithi batein kar rahi thi. Par jaise hi unhone Rahul ko dekha toh wo ek dum se shant ho gayin.
Rahul: kya huya tum dono aise chup kion ho gayi.
Aditi(Rahul ko ignore karte huye): Divya mujhe lagta hai abhi mujhe chalna chahiye.
Divya: ok toh theek hai. Tumse batein karke bahut maja aya.
Aditi: han mujhe v.
Fir Aditi aur Divya dono ne halka sa hug kiya aur Aditi wahan se bina Rahul ko bulaye hi nikal gayi. Rahul bechara hakka bakka sa khada yeh sab dekh raha tha.
“Divya yeh achanak Aditi ko kya huya. Mujhse baat kion nahi kar rahi?” Rahul ne hairan sa hote huye Divya se puchha.
Divya: ap toh mujhse baat hi mat kijiye. Jhuthe kahin ke.
Itna bol kar Divya v apne room se nikal kar niche chali gayi aur Rahul bechara akela wahan khada is sab ko samjhne ki kosish karta raha.
Thanks bhaiBehad hi shandar or dilchasp update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.