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Thriller Kahani

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Jis jagah par khada shiva kuch dhondh raha tha waha se 10 meter peeche hat kar apne kapde utartne lagta hai shiva ko kapde utarta dekh majaguru aur bako sab cahunk jate hai kyuki unhe ye laga tha ki shiva bahaw dekhkar apna iarda badal dega magar unhe ye kahan pata tha ki shiva ko mushkilon ka samna karne me bahut maza ata hai



Shiva apne poore kapde utar deta is waqt shiva sirf apne underwear me tha uska jism dekhkar jahan sabhi ladkiyan use lalchai nazron se dekh rahi thi wahi sabhi ladke irsha ki nazron se shiva apni jagah se kuch peeche jata hai aur daudta hua us nadi me chhalang laga deta hai aur pani ke under kareeb 3 min tak rahta hai aur phir apni chalang laagai hui jagah se 300 meterdoor

Bahar nikalta hai aur phir neeche chala jata hai ye kaam usne 4 bar kiya aur phir wo nadi se bahar nikal aya use is tarah tairte hue dekh kar sabhi log hairat me the aisa lag raha tha ki shiva kuch dhoondh raha ho kareeb 750 meter doori par shiva nadi se bahar nikalta hai aur ghaur se us jagah ko dekhne lagta hai tabhi mahaguru aur baki log shiva ke paas aate hai mahaguru shiva se kahte hai



Mahaguru – shiva kya baat hai kya soch rahe ho



Shiva – kuch nahi



Aur wapas usi jagah chala jane lagta hai jahan uske kapde the



Wahi dusri taraf safehouse me mahaul thoda shant tha magar pareshani sabhi ke chahre pe thi lekin sabse jayada aslam pareshan tha toh deva uske paas aata hai aur poochhta hai.



Deva – kya baat hai aslam tum kuch jyada hi pareshan lag rahe ho kya hua



Aslam – tumhe yaad shiva ne hum se ek baar kaha tha ki uske andar kuch aisa jo agar bajar aa gya toh poori duniya tabah ho jayegi



Deva – han yaad aya ohh shit ab kuch kuch meri bhi samjh me aa raha hai



Aslam – veenu ko ye sapna aane ka matlb hai ki jo bhi shiva ke andar hai wo kabhi bhi bahar aa sakta hai



Deva – toh use roke kaise



Aslam – yahi toh samjh me nahi aa raha



Wo log abhi sabji se kuch doori pe khade the isiliye unki baaten koi nahi sun paa raha tha



Kuch der sochne ke baad aslam ekdum se bolta



Aslam – archan han archan humari madad kar sakte hai



Deva – toh fir der kis baat ki chalo hum dono hi archan ke paas chalte hai



Aslam – nahi hum dono nahi mai aur veenu hi jayenge



Deva – kyu veenu kyu aur mai kyu nahi chal sakta



Aslam – dekho veenu isliye kyuki sapna veenu ko aya tha aur tum isiliye nahi ja sakte ho kyuki aise nazuk waqt me yaha hum dono me kisi ek ka hona bahut zaroori hai



Deva kuch der sochta hai aur phir bolta



Deva – theek kaha magar commissioner krishnamoorti se kya kahoge



Aslam – unhe tum sambhal lena mai veenu koi bhi bahana bana ke yaha se nikal lunga bakiyon ko aur commissioner sahab ko tum koi kahani suna dena



Deva – theek hai tum jald jald nikalne ki taiyyari karo.



Uske baad aslam aur deva bhi sabhi ke paas aake baith jate hai



Idhar rahman apne boss se kuch baat kar raha tha kuch der baat karne baad wo wahan se chala jata hai uske jate hi rahman ka boss kisi se phone pe baat karta hai aur kuch der baat karne ke baad wo phone rakh deta hai



Wahi shiva qabeele me maujood ek chhote teele par baitha kuch soch raha tha Use paheli ke chhote chhote kai tukde mil gaye the magar abhi wo bada tukda nahi mila tha jisse ye sare tukde jude hue the wo inhi khyaalon me khoya hua kai theories taiyyar kar raha tha magar koi bhi theory use satisfy nahi kar pa rahi thi har thak har kar usne waqt ke hatho sab kuch chhod diya kyuki shiva ka man na tha ki agar aap kuch na kar pao toh chup chaap baith jana me hi bhalai hai



Wahi safe house me aslam veenu ke paas jata hai jo is waqt charu aur aziz ke baithi hui thi aslam usse kahta hai



Aslam – veenu wo raaz ka phone aya tha use tum se milna hai



Veenu – magar usne toh mere phone pe phone nahi kiya



Aslam – tumahara phone mil nahi raha tha isiliye deva ke phone pe kiya tha toh ne mujhse kaha ki tumhare saath jaaun



Aziz – ek minute deva ne tum se hi kyu kaha mai aur surya bhi hai yaha



Aslam – kyuki mai us waqt uske saath hi khada tha aur waise bhi veenu ki zimmedari deva kisi ko nahi dena chahta isiliye usne mujhse kaha



Aziz – hmm theek hai maine socha tha isi bahane mai thoda bahar ghoom ata 5 din ho gaye sadak ki shakal nahi dekhi



Veenu is baat kar muskura deti hai



Aslam – toh chalo



Veenu – theek 5 minute do



Kah kar wo apno jagah se uthti hai bathroom ki taraf nikal jati hai



Wahi kahin door veeraniyon me wo dragon jaisa dikhne wala jeev kisi qabr ke samne baitha hua tha



Idhar mahaguru aur baki sab shiva ka intzaar kar rahe khana khane liye kaha guru ne kisi ko bheja toh tha magar wo abhi tak aya nahi par thodi der baad shiva waha zaroor aa gya is waqt sabhi log zameen par baithe hue the majaburi ne apne paas ki jagah khali rakhi jab shiva waha aya toh bagair kuch bole maha guru ke bagal me baith gya aur chup chaap khana khane laga.



Idhar aslam aur veenu gadi me baithe hue the aur gadi shahar ki sadkon par daudi ja rahi thi veenu aslam se kahti hai



Veenu – hum ja kaha rahe hai



Aslam – archan ke paas



Veenu – kyu



Aslam – tumhare aapne ka matlb poochhne



Iske baad dono me koi baat nahi hui



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Shivay chauhan

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Lijiye doston update hazir hai padhiye aur apne keemati reviews dijiye

Maaf karna doston itne agyatavas me rahne ke liye magar zindgi ki raftar se raftaar milana koi asaan baat nahi mai bahut disturb tha aur disturbed mind se mai kuch bhi aap ke samne pesh nahi karna chahta tha so a very big sorry to all of you
 
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Jis jagah par khada shiva kuch dhondh raha tha waha se 10 meter peeche hat kar apne kapde utartne lagta hai shiva ko kapde utarta dekh majaguru aur bako sab cahunk jate hai kyuki unhe ye laga tha ki shiva bahaw dekhkar apna iarda badal dega magar unhe ye kahan pata tha ki shiva ko mushkilon ka samna karne me bahut maza ata hai



Shiva apne poore kapde utar deta is waqt shiva sirf apne underwear me tha uska jism dekhkar jahan sabhi ladkiyan use lalchai nazron se dekh rahi thi wahi sabhi ladke irsha ki nazron se shiva apni jagah se kuch peeche jata hai aur daudta hua us nadi me chhalang laga deta hai aur pani ke under kareeb 3 min tak rahta hai aur phir apni chalang laagai hui jagah se 300 meterdoor

Bahar nikalta hai aur phir neeche chala jata hai ye kaam usne 4 bar kiya aur phir wo nadi se bahar nikal aya use is tarah tairte hue dekh kar sabhi log hairat me the aisa lag raha tha ki shiva kuch dhoondh raha ho kareeb 750 meter doori par shiva nadi se bahar nikalta hai aur ghaur se us jagah ko dekhne lagta hai tabhi mahaguru aur baki log shiva ke paas aate hai mahaguru shiva se kahte hai



Mahaguru – shiva kya baat hai kya soch rahe ho



Shiva – kuch nahi



Aur wapas usi jagah chala jane lagta hai jahan uske kapde the



Wahi dusri taraf safehouse me mahaul thoda shant tha magar pareshani sabhi ke chahre pe thi lekin sabse jayada aslam pareshan tha toh deva uske paas aata hai aur poochhta hai.



Deva – kya baat hai aslam tum kuch jyada hi pareshan lag rahe ho kya hua



Aslam – tumhe yaad shiva ne hum se ek baar kaha tha ki uske andar kuch aisa jo agar bajar aa gya toh poori duniya tabah ho jayegi



Deva – han yaad aya ohh shit ab kuch kuch meri bhi samjh me aa raha hai



Aslam – veenu ko ye sapna aane ka matlb hai ki jo bhi shiva ke andar hai wo kabhi bhi bahar aa sakta hai



Deva – toh use roke kaise



Aslam – yahi toh samjh me nahi aa raha



Wo log abhi sabji se kuch doori pe khade the isiliye unki baaten koi nahi sun paa raha tha



Kuch der sochne ke baad aslam ekdum se bolta



Aslam – archan han archan humari madad kar sakte hai



Deva – toh fir der kis baat ki chalo hum dono hi archan ke paas chalte hai



Aslam – nahi hum dono nahi mai aur veenu hi jayenge



Deva – kyu veenu kyu aur mai kyu nahi chal sakta



Aslam – dekho veenu isliye kyuki sapna veenu ko aya tha aur tum isiliye nahi ja sakte ho kyuki aise nazuk waqt me yaha hum dono me kisi ek ka hona bahut zaroori hai



Deva kuch der sochta hai aur phir bolta



Deva – theek kaha magar commissioner krishnamoorti se kya kahoge



Aslam – unhe tum sambhal lena mai veenu koi bhi bahana bana ke yaha se nikal lunga bakiyon ko aur commissioner sahab ko tum koi kahani suna dena



Deva – theek hai tum jald jald nikalne ki taiyyari karo.



Uske baad aslam aur deva bhi sabhi ke paas aake baith jate hai



Idhar rahman apne boss se kuch baat kar raha tha kuch der baat karne baad wo wahan se chala jata hai uske jate hi rahman ka boss kisi se phone pe baat karta hai aur kuch der baat karne ke baad wo phone rakh deta hai



Wahi shiva qabeele me maujood ek chhote teele par baitha kuch soch raha tha Use paheli ke chhote chhote kai tukde mil gaye the magar abhi wo bada tukda nahi mila tha jisse ye sare tukde jude hue the wo inhi khyaalon me khoya hua kai theories taiyyar kar raha tha magar koi bhi theory use satisfy nahi kar pa rahi thi har thak har kar usne waqt ke hatho sab kuch chhod diya kyuki shiva ka man na tha ki agar aap kuch na kar pao toh chup chaap baith jana me hi bhalai hai



Wahi safe house me aslam veenu ke paas jata hai jo is waqt charu aur aziz ke baithi hui thi aslam usse kahta hai



Aslam – veenu wo raaz ka phone aya tha use tum se milna hai



Veenu – magar usne toh mere phone pe phone nahi kiya



Aslam – tumahara phone mil nahi raha tha isiliye deva ke phone pe kiya tha toh ne mujhse kaha ki tumhare saath jaaun



Aziz – ek minute deva ne tum se hi kyu kaha mai aur surya bhi hai yaha



Aslam – kyuki mai us waqt uske saath hi khada tha aur waise bhi veenu ki zimmedari deva kisi ko nahi dena chahta isiliye usne mujhse kaha



Aziz – hmm theek hai maine socha tha isi bahane mai thoda bahar ghoom ata 5 din ho gaye sadak ki shakal nahi dekhi



Veenu is baat kar muskura deti hai



Aslam – toh chalo



Veenu – theek 5 minute do



Kah kar wo apno jagah se uthti hai bathroom ki taraf nikal jati hai



Wahi kahin door veeraniyon me wo dragon jaisa dikhne wala jeev kisi qabr ke samne baitha hua tha



Idhar mahaguru aur baki sab shiva ka intzaar kar rahe khana khane liye kaha guru ne kisi ko bheja toh tha magar wo abhi tak aya nahi par thodi der baad shiva waha zaroor aa gya is waqt sabhi log zameen par baithe hue the majaburi ne apne paas ki jagah khali rakhi jab shiva waha aya toh bagair kuch bole maha guru ke bagal me baith gya aur chup chaap khana khane laga.



Idhar aslam aur veenu gadi me baithe hue the aur gadi shahar ki sadkon par daudi ja rahi thi veenu aslam se kahti hai



Veenu – hum ja kaha rahe hai



Aslam – archan ke paas



Veenu – kyu



Aslam – tumhare aapne ka matlb poochhne



Iske baad dono me koi baat nahi hui



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Shiva khana khate hue sabji ko ek nazar dekhta sabhi chehron par dukh saaf dikhai de raha tha shiva se raha nahi gya aur wo poochh padta hai



Shiva – kya aap log itna pareshan kyu hain



Mahaguru – aaj pooran mashi hai



Shiva – to



Bhadra – aaj ki raat hum log apne kuldevta ke mandir ja kar pooja karte hai



Shiva – toh isme pareshan hone wali kaun si baat hai



Amba – pareshani ye hai ki humare kuldevta kaalbhairav ka mandir us jagah ke paas hai jahan un logon ki lab hai



Mandar – aur hum waha ja nahi sakte



Mahaguru – isiliye hum pareshan hai



Shiva – toh isme pareshan hone wali kya baat hum wahan zaroor jayenge



Mahaguru – magar kaise



Shiva – kaalbhairav swyam aapki madad karenge



Itna kah kar wo apni jagah se uth jata hai aur wapas usi geele ke taraf chala jata hai jahan wo pahle baitha hua tha



Mahagauri aur baki sabhi chahron par khushi saaf dikh rahi thi lekin kis baat khushi thi ye nahi pata



Idhar commissioner krishnamoorti safehouse pahuchte hai wahan wo aslam aur veenu ko na paa kar bahut aag babool hote hai magar deva ne samjha bujha kar rawana kar diya aur sach ka rahsya qayam raha magar kab tak rahega ye kise pata



Vikram thappar apne kisi kaam ke silsile me shahr se bahar tha magar apni gairhazri me apne bharose ke adamiyon ki fauj usne safehouse ke bahar tainat kar rakhi thi kyuki wo janta tha ki jo zimmedari usne li hai agar usme zara si bhi chook hui toh us chook ka badla use jaan de kar chukana pad sakta hai.



Wahi aslam aur veenu academy ki taraf tez raftar se badhe ja rahe the veenu aslam se bolti hai



Veenu – tumhe lagta hai ki archan ke paas is sapne ka jawab hoga



Aslam – hona toh chahiye



Usne samne dekhte hue kaha uski awaz me wo pahle wala aslam nahi tha jhank raha tha jo humesha atmavishvas se bhara rahta aaj wo nervous tha jane



Veenu – agar nahi hua toh



Veenu ne uski taraf dekhte hue kaha



Aslam – dekhte kya ho sakta hai



Aslam ne phir usi andaz me jawab diya



Veenu – aslam kya baat hai aaj tum kuch nervous lag rahe akhir baat kya hai



Aslam – kai cheezen hai shiva ka yaha nahona rahman ka nuclear weapons ki taraf itna attraction tumhara wo sapna aur sabse zaroori cheez tumhara aur mera is tarah saath hona



Veenu akhir baat sun kar chaunk jati aur kahti



Veenu – matlb



Aslam – tumhe pata hai tum kiski amanat ho agar tumhe kuch ho gya toh mujhe us kameene se kaun bachayega



Aslam ki baat sun ke veenu khil khila kar hasi aur boli



Veenu – aisa kuch nahi hoga



Aslam – allah kare aisa kuch na ho



Idhar qabeele me sabhi log pooja ki taiyyari me lag gye the magar mahaguru ne saaf kah diya mandir sirf shiva wo hai aur mandar log hi jayenge kyuki waha kafi khatra ho sakta hai



Wahi dusri taraf amba bhadra aur mandar shiva ke paas aate hai unke baaqi sathi mhaguru ke saath the shiva is waqt teele par baitha hua tha kuch soch raha tha amba shiva ke paas aati hai aur bolti hai



Amba – hum log mandir bagair mare kaise pahunchenge



Shiva – pareshanmat ho maine sab soch liya hai



Shiva bina uske taraf dekhe jawab diya



Bhadra – toh hume bhi bata do



Usne kuch tanziya laheje me kaha



Shiva – har sahi waqt par hi hona chahiye



Shiva ne phir apne sapat laheje me kaha



Wo kuch der aise hi khade rahe aur phir waha se chale gye Siway amba ke shiva ek baar amba ki taraf dekhta hai wo lagatar shiva ko dekhe ja rahi thi shiva uske chahre se nazar hata leta hai aur kahta



Shiva – aise kya dekh rahi ho



Amba – dekh nahi rahi hun tumhe padhne ki koshish kar rahi hun



Shiva – kyu



Amba – tumhare jaisa maine aaj tak nahi dekha



Shiva – dekho hi bhi nahi mai ek hi hun only one piece



Amba – tumhare apnon ko tum par bahut naaz hoga na



Shiva – mera koi apna nahi



Amba – mahar mahaguru toh bata rahe the ki tumhari ek team hai



Shiva – wo mere sathi hai apne nahi



Amba – sathi aur apnon me Kya fark hai



Shiva – bahut fark hai



Amba – jaise



Shiva – jaise mai is waqt tum logon ke saath hun is jagah pichhle 4 din se magar mai tumahara apna nahi hun



Amba – aisa nahi Hai



Shiva – hmm waqt aane par sab pata chal jayega Ab tum yaha se ja sakti ho
 

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Yaron comments bhi kar diya karoitna gussa accha nahi
 
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Very good and interesting story
 
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