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Thriller Kahani

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..aap dinkar Singh ki Kavita nhi v likhte to clta ..but aapne Puri Kavita likh di.
 

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Agle din jab shiva david aur bakiyon ki taraf aya toh usne dekha ki 4 5 log air bhi wahan hai shiva jab unke kareeb pahuncha toh david ne kaha .

David – shiva in se milo ye hai Johnson sir mumbai ke sabse bade zoo ke malik jinhone hum is cheete ko pakadne ka contract diya ye unhi ke through is cheete ko hum se khareedne aye hai aur johnson sir ye hai shiva isi ne is cheete ho pakda hai .

Johnson – you are such a brave boy david bata raha tha ki kis tarah tumne bina kisi hathiyar ke is cheete pe kaboo paya nice to meet you

Johnson sir ne shiva ki taraf haath milane ke apna haath badhaya magar shiva ne koi pratikriya nahi di .

David – shiva Johnson sir is waiting .

Shiva – mai haath nahi milata .

Kah kar waha se chala gya uske jane ke baad Johnson sir kahte hai .

Johnson sir – david mera experience kahta hai ki ye ladka bahut jyada mysterious hai iske bare me koi bhi kabhi pata nahi laga sakta hai .

David – I know well thanks for coming .

David ne unse haath milaya aur unhone david ko ek briefcase thama diya aur chale gye kuch der baad david ne sabhi logon ko ikattha kiya aur briefcase mese cash nikal kar dene laga sabhi ka hissa bata hua tha sabhi ke hissa 3 3 laakh rupaye aye jab shiva ki bari aai toh usne shiva ko 4 laakh rupaye diya jis par Shiva ne usse sawal kiya .

Shiva – mu 4 laakh kyu .

David – kyuki is cheete ko pakadne me main role tumhara hai .

Shiva – nahi david hum sabhi ne apna apna hissa nibhaya hum sab ek team hain aur team me sab barabar hote hai koi choota ya bada nahi .

Kah kar shiva jane lagta hai toh rudranshi kahti.

Rudranshi – Shiva jis daur me log doosron ka kha jane ki firaaq ki me rahte hai usi daur tum jaisa bhi koi hai ye main nahi janti thi .

Shiva peeche mudta hai aur apne haath pe pakde hue paise dikha kar kahta hai .

Shiva – rudranshi in ka tab tak koi mol nahi hai jab tak hum inhe mahatv nahi dete ye bas bejaan kagaz ke tukde hai magar insan usme jaan hoti hai janwaron me jaan hoti hai in ped paudhon me jaan hoti hai in paison se jyada keemat in cheezon ki kabhi pedo ko baat karte hue suna hai ye kabhi jhooth nahi ek baar logon se insanon se pyar karne ki adat agar insanon ko lag gai toh in paison ka koi mahtv nahi rahega .

Kah kar shiva khamosh hota hai aur wahan se chala jata hai uske jane ke baad james kahta .

James – wow what a speech no wonder that he is the best student of the academy.

David – sach kaha ek min ke liye toh aisa laga jaise archan bol rahe ho .

Vinod – sach kaha usne aaj mujhe bhi garv ho raha hai ki tumne shiva ko is team la hissa banaya .

Jaha sab log shiva ki taareef kar rahe wahi rudranshi kisi aur soch me thi kuch der baad david ne james se bol ke shiva ko bulwa liya shiva jab wahan pahuncha toh sara samaan pack ho chuka tha david shiva se kahta .

David – shiva yahan ka khtm ho gya hai ab hume yahan se jana hoga ek naya contract mila hai .

Shiva kuch nahi bolta bas sunta rahta hai jaise use koi fark hi nahi pad raha ho ki wo kaha ja raha kaha nahi ja raha kaha rahna kuch bhi nahi wo bilkul ek machine ki tarah behave kar raha tha halanki kisi ne is baat pe jyada gaur nahi kiya kuch der baad sabhi log david ki jeep me baith gye aur chal pade david ke ghar ki taraf kuch door jane ke baad rudranshi kahti hai.

Rudranshi – david mujhe bhook lag rahi hai .

David – theek hai yahi paas me ek dhaba hai wahi chalte hai mai party ko bhi wahi bula leta hu .

Kareeb 10 kilometer chalne ke baad david ne jeep ek dhabe ke samne roki sabhi log jeep se utar gye dhabe ka malik shyad david ko janta tha sabhi logon ke liye do tables ek saath rakhi gai sabhi ne apna apna oder diya jab bari shiva ki aai toh shiva bolta hai .

Shiva – non veg me jo hai le aao .

Shiva ki baat sun ke rudranshi bolti hai .

Rudranshi – tum non vegetarian ho .

Rudranshi ne hairani se kaha

Shiva – kyu koi problem .

Shiva ne use ghoorte hue jawab diya abhi khana aya bhi nahi tha 4 Scorpio akar dhabe ke samne rukti hai unmese lambe chaude 10 12 log nikalte hai aur unke saath ek 5 feet 8 inch ka medium personality ka ek admi humari taraf aata hai uske aate hi David usse haath milata hai aur ek kursi aur lane ko kahta hai jab wo wyakti baith jata hai hai toh david kahta .

David – ji bataiye hum apki kya madad kar sakte hai .

Itne me khana bhi serve kar diya jata hai shiva sab ki baton ko nazarandaz karte hue khana khane lagta hai wahi wo dusra admi kahta hai .

Admi – mera naam dheerendra pawar hai mujhe tum logo ki madad chahiye humare ilake me hathiyon ka ek jhund hum par aksar humla karta rahta hai pata nahi kyu magar kaiyon ko unhone maar diya ya hospital pahucha diya hum chahte hai ki tum log unka shikar karo .

David – ek aad haathi pagal ho sakta hai magar sab ke sab pagal ho ye baat samjh me nahi aati .

Tabhi shiva achanak bol padta hai .

Shiva – pawar sahab hathiyon ke daant ki kya keemat chal rahi hai market me .

Shuva ki baat se jahan sab log chaunk jata hai wahi dheerendra pawar use ghoor ke dekhta hai jiske jawab me shiva bhi use ghoor ke dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – david ye hum logon se madad mangne nahi aye balki hum logon ja istemaal karne aye hai ye chahte hai ki him hathiyon ko maren aur ye unke dant international market me bench sake kyu theek kaha na .

Dheerendra pawar – dimag aur zuban dono bahut tez hai gan mai yahi chahta hun apni keemat bolo .

David – hum koi gairkanooni kaam nahi karte .

Dheerendra pawar david ki baat pe muskurata hai aur kahta hai .

Dheerendra pawar – tum shayad jante nahi ki tum is waqt mere ilake me khade ho aur mujhe na sunne ki adat nahi .

Kahte hue usne pistol nikal kar table pe rakh di .

Dheerendra pawar – ab bol kya bolta hai .

Kah kar usne shiva ki taraf dekha shiva ne apne haath tissue paper se saaf kiye air ek gahri nazar se dekha aur jhatke se pistol utha li aur uspe taan di ye dekh kar uske saath aaye huye log aage badhte hai toh shiva kahta hai unki taraf bina dekhe kahta hai .

Shiva – agar apni khopdi me ched nahi karwana toh in se kaho ki jahan hai wahi ruk jaye .

Dheerendra pawar haath ishara karke unhe rukne ko kahta hai .

Shiva – ab meri baat dhyan se sun hum ye kaam nahi karenge samjha aur tum kya kah raha tha ki hune na sunne ki adat nahi toh sun be c grade movie ke b grade villain jitni gundai tu sochta hai na usse jyada mai moot deta hun mujhe apni pe utarne par majboor mat kar warna teri laash cheel kauwe bhi nahi khayenge ab nikal yahan se .

Shiva ne uski aisi halaat kar di thi ki use samjh me nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya kare wo uthta hai aur david ko ghoorta hua waha se nikal jata hai


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Nice update bhai.update thoda jaldi Diya Karo Kahani ke touch me rahne keliye please
 
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai.
Bc blockbuster update Bhai ..
Shiva ka kiy tasan tha is update mai wht a dilouge bhai
 

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Uske jaane ke baad david shiva se kahta hai

David – shiva tumhe usse aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi ab tum academy me nahi ho ye bahar ki duniya academy ki duniya se bilkul alag hai yahan hume kai baar wo cheezen bhi bardasht karni hoti hai jo humare zameer ke khilaaf hai .

James – david theek kah raha hai shiva is tarah sabhi se lad ke tum zinda nahi rah sakte .

Rudranshi – bilkul mai sahamat hun .

Vinod – mai bhi .

Shiva jo abhi tak chup chaap khana kha raha tha wo sabki taraf ek nazar dekhta hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – tum theek kah rahe ho david academy ki duniya aur bahar ki duniya bahut alag hai magar zindagi me mujhse kabhi ye ummeed mat rakhna ki mai apne zameer se samjhauta karunga mera ek usool hai ki jis cheez se dikkat ho to ya to use badlo ya chup chap nikal jao aur mai badalne me vishwash rakhta hun aur iske liye mai kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hun 100 ko bachane ke liye mai 10 marne ya khud marne peeche nahi hatunga .

Shiva kuch ke liye ruka aur phir Sabhi ki taraf gambheerta se dekhte hue bola .

Shiva – dekho abhi tum logon ko lag raha hoga ki josh me mai ye sab kah raha hun magar zara socho samaaj hum se bana hai na ki hum samaaj se to is ki buraiyon ko door karne ki zimmedari bhi humari hai aur jahan tak rahi baat zameer ko marne ki toh mere hisaab se is duniya me aisa kuch nahi hai jo insaan le zameer se jyada bada ho .

Iske baad wahan sabhi log khamosh the aur unki khamoshi me unki glani saaf nazar aa rahi thi unhe is baat se dikkat nahi thi ki shiva ne unhe indirectly ghlt kaha balki dikkat is baat se thi ki shiva sach bol raha tha kuch der baad sabhi log nikal padte hai rudranshi david se poochti hai .

Rudranshi – ab hum log kahan ja rahe hai .

David – ghar aur kaha .

Abhi ye log kuch door hi chale honge ki achanak David break maar deta hai karan samne khadi scorpio aur kuch gunde the david turant gadi back karta hai magar peeche bhi kuch log aur ek car rasta roke khadi thi david ek nazar shiva ki taraf dekhta hai shiva bina kuch bole gadi utar jata hai aur david ki taraf dekh kar kahta hai .

Shiva – tum log yahi ruko mai abhi aata hun .

Rudranshi – magar shiva tum ….

Shiva rudranshi ko ghoor ke dekhta hai aur kahta .

Shiva – mai akela hi jaunga kii beech me nahi ayega ye ladai mai mool li hai toh iski keemat bhi mai hi chukana.

Kah kar shiva aage badhta hai shiva un logon ki taraf badhta hai un mese ek shiva se kahta hai .

Kyun be bahut zuban chalti hai teri .

Shiva – haath bhi chalte hai hai .

Dusra admi – abe tujhe dikh nahi raha hum 20 log hai aur tu akela .

Shiva – toh .

Teesra Admi – maro sale ko .

Uske kahte hi ek admi aage badhta hai aur shiva pe apne daye haath se waar karta magar shiva apne baye haath se uska war rokta hai aur ek mukka uske seene me jad deta hai wo admi seedha jake Scorpio me ladta jisse gadi kuch inch peeche ho jati hai fir sabhi log ek saath shiva pe toot padte hai magar shiva akela hi sab pe bhari padta hai tabhi peeche ek admi ne uski kamar pe chaku se waar kiya jis kafi gahra zakhm hua magar fir bhi ladta hai akhir me sab ke zameen pe pade shiva ek admi ke paas jata hai aur usse kahta hai .

Shiva – tera malik kahan milega .

Shiva ne itni kathorata se kaha ki us admi ki jaan hi nikal gai marta kya na karta usne apne malik ka pata bata diya

shiva ke chahre dard ka koi namonishan nahi tha wo hi sahajta se chalta hua david ke paas aata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – tum hato drive mai karunga .

David hat jata hai rudranshi kuch kahne ko hoti magar kah nahi paati bas shiva ke ghaav ki taraf ishara karti hai shiva apni kamar ke pichhle hisse pe haath pherta hai aur ungli daal ke gaharai check karta ye dekh sabhi log hairan rah jate hai shiva apni shirt utar kar apni kamar pe baandh leta hai aur david se kahta hai kuch hi der baad shiva jeep ko ek farm house ke andar daal deta hai ye sirf naam ka hi farmhouse tha dikhne kisi haweli se kam nahi tha shiva ko dekhte hi kuch log uski taraf aate hai toh shiva unhe ghoor ke dekhta hai jane kya tha shiva ki ankho me ki kisi ki himmat nahi hui ki shiva ko rok paye shiva chalta hua drawing-room me dakhil hota waha dheerendra pawar centerme sofa baitha hua uske aas paas kuch admi khade the shiva ko dekhte hi wo chaunk jata hai shiva uske padi hui kursi pe baith jata hai uske baithte hi dheerendra pawar bolta hai .

Dheerendra pawar – manna tu jitna dikhta hai usse jyada hai mere sare admiyon ko tune akele mara yakeen to nahi hota ki tujh jaise 18 19 saal ka ladka aisa bhi kar sakta hai hmm ek kaam kar mere saath kaam kar noton me khelega tu king bana dunga tujhe king .

Shiva – tera ho gya ab meri sun tera aur mera matter dhabe pe hi khtm ho gya tha phir bhi tu ne admi bheje mujhe marne ke liye magar hua kya ab sun aage se agar tune mera rasta kata toh mai tujhe aur tere sare admiyon ko wo maut marunga ke postmartam se bhi pata nahi chal payega ki body insan ki hai ya kisi janwar ki yaad rahe mere ya mere kisi bhi saathi taraf tune nazar utha ke bhi dekha toh ……… aage tu khud hu samjhdar hai .

Kah kar shiva chal deta hai toh peeche se dheerendra pawar chillata.

Dheerendra pawar – ayyeeee ladaka haath bhar ka launda mujhe dhamki deta hai .

Shiva mud ke tezi se uske paas aata hai aur kahta hai .

Shiva – dekh tu jo samjh raha haibmai wo nahi hun tujh jaison ko mai chahon toh apni jeb me rakhon samjha aur ye cheekh chillaat mujhe mat dikhana kyuki gar mai cheekh pada na toh tum sab ki cheekhen nikal jayegi

kah kar shiva wahan se chala jata hai



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