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Agle din shiva apne routine se 4 baje utha aur ghar se bahar nikal gya jab sab log uthe toh shiva ghar pe nahi tha is waqt subah ke 6 baj rahe the shiva aadhe ghante baad ghar wapas aata hai use dekh rudranshi usse poochti hai .
Rudranshi – kahan gye the subah subah .
Rudranshi ne jitni apniyata se sawal kiya utni hi arrogance se shiva ne ghoor je dekha aur sukhe shabdon me kaha .
Shiva – exercise karne gya tha .
David – shiva tum ek kaam karo pahle mere room me jaao aur fresh ho jao .
Shiva – mai fresh ho kar hi aya hun aur naha kar bhi .
James – magar yaha toh common bathroom hai hi nahi toh tum kaha fresh hokar aagye .
Shiva – bathroom ki jarurat tumhe hogi mujhe nahi yahan paas me jo nadi hai wahi fresh ho kar aya hun .
Vinod – wo nadi toh yaha se 20 kilometer door hai .
Shiva – toh
James – matlb tum 20 kilomitar door gye the wo bhi chal kar .
Shiva – nahi daud kar uske baad kuch der exercise ki naya dhoya aur wapas aa gya mai ye sab isliye bata raha hun ki tum aage se mujhse sawal na karo mujhe jawab dene ki adat nahi .
Itna kar kah shiva apni chatai pe baith jata hai kuch hi der hui thi use baithe hue ke ghar ke bahar ek jeep aa ke rukti hai jisme se ek three star lamba chauda heroic personality wala inspector utarta hai aur tez kadmo se chalta hua ghar me dakhil hota hai uski entry se sabhi log chauk jate hai magar shiva khamosh baitha rahta hai use dekhte hi David aage badhta hai aur kahta hai .
David – kya baat inspector sahab aap yaha itni subah subah .
Inspector – tuk logo me shiva kaun hai .
Usne david ki baat ko bilkul ansuna karte hue kaha uski baat sun ke shiva apni chatai se uthta hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – mai hun shiva koi dikkat .
Inspector shiva ke paas aata hai aur usse kahta hai .
Inspector – you are under arrest .
Rudranshi – kis jurm me .
Inspector – thaane aa jana phir bataunga aur tum chalo mere saath.
Kah kar wo chal deta hai toh shiva bolta hai .
Shiva – may I see the warrant plese .
Inspector uski taraf aata hai aur kahta hai .
Inspector – tu khud ko samjhta kya hai chal chup chaap warna ghaseet ke le jaunga .
Shiva uski taraf sakhti se dekhta hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – you can not arrest a citizen without having warrant ye humara samvidhan kahta hai the Constitution of our country .
Inspector shiva ki baat sun ke aag baboola ho jata hai aur jeb se warrant nikal kar shiva ke haath me rakh deta hai shiva warrant dekhta hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – hmmm ab theek hai chaliye .
Kah kar shiva befikri se uske saath chal deta hai shiva ka attitude dekh kar ek baar toh inspector bhi chauk jata hai khair dono log police jeep me baith kar thane ki taraf chal padte hai unke jaate hi David kisi ko phone mila deta hai aur kuch der baat karne ke baad sabhi log thane ki taraf nikal padte hai idhar jeep me kuch constables ke saath shiva peeche baitha hua tha kuch der baad wo log police station ke bahar khade the shiva aur inspector aur saath aaye constables sabhi log thane me dakhil hote hai andar aate hi inspector ek laathi uthata hai aur shiva ki chhati pe waar karta hai aakar aaisa hone se samne wala zameen pe gir padta hai magar aaj shayad inspector ka din hi accha nahi tha usne jaise hi shiva ki chaati pe war kiya laathi ke do tukde ho gye magar shiva ke chahare pe ek shikan bhi na padi inspector aur thame me maujood sare log chahe wo mulzim ho ya police sabhi shiva ko ghoor kar aise dekh rahe the ki mano koi alien dekh liya ho shiva aage badhta hai aur bikul normally usse poochta hai .
Shiva – mera jurm kya hai .
Shiva ki baat sun ke inspector aise behave karta hai jaise wo chetana me wapas aya ho .
Inspector – ye … ye dekh kya rahe ho dal do sale ko lock up me abhi sale ki sari garmi nikalta hun.
Wo shiva ko lock up me le jate aur uske sare kapde utar dete hai aur uske dono haath chains se upar ki taraf bandh dete hai hai is waqt shiva sirf underwear me tha kuch der baad inspector apne saath char admi leke lock up me aata hai aur shiva pe pil padta hai uske saath aye admi bhi shiva lathiyan barasane lagte hai magar shiva ke muh se dard bhari cheekh toh kya ek siski bhi nahi nikalti hai wo use kareeb 30 min tak marte rahe aur shiva khamoshi se mar khata raha abhi ye karykram kuch der aur chalta ki tabhi peeche ek tez aur raubdar aawaz aati hai .
Stoop it inspector .
Inspector mud ke dekhta hai toh uske hosh ud jaate peeche aur koi nahi balki dig raghuveer pratap singh khade the sabhi lock up se bahar aate hai aur unhe salute karte hai .
Dig – tum sab ye kar kya rahe ho .
Inspector – sir is ladke ke khilaaf fir hui hai isne badi besharmi se 20 logon ko mara hai kaiyon ki toh ye halat hai ki icu me hai isiliye ise giraftar kiya .
Dig – hmm theek hai take him to the cabin .
Kuch der baad david rudranshi wo inspector aur shiva inspector ke cabin me khade the dig sahab khud samne chair pe baithe hue the .
Dig – toh inspector ispe aise kaun se serious charges hai jo tum ne ise third degree di .
Unhone shiva ki taraf ishara karte hue poocha .
Inspector – sir is ladke akele 20 logon ko mara aur kaiyon ko toh icu me admit karwa diya aur jab mai ise arrest karne gya toh mujse badtamiji karne laga .
Dig – hmm toh kya tum ye jante ho ki isne un 20 logon ko kyu mara .
Inspector – no sir
Inspector apni gardan kiye hue jawab deta .
Dig – FIR kis ne likhawai .
Maine .
Peeche se dheerendra pawar jawab diya aur dig se bina permission liye andar aa gya aur shiva ko ghoorte hue kaha .
Dheerendra pawar – isne mere 20 admiyon buri tarah se mara hai agar mai wahan hota toh jan se mar deta ise .
Shiva – shukr karo tum waha nahi the warna aaj shayad mujh pe 302 ka case chal raha hota .
Dheerendra pawar – matlb tu mujhe mar deta tu janta hai tu kisse baat kar raha .
Shiva – abhi itne bure din nahi aaye ki mai har aire gaire ke bare me pata karun aur sun ye akhiri baar tha agar dubara mera rasta kata toh tujhe kaat dunga ye dhamki nahi naseehat hai samjha .
Shiva ne dheerendra ko ghoorte hue kaha uska ye roop dekh kar waha maujood har insan ke dil khauf aa gya tha chahe wo dig hi kyu na .
Dheerendra pawar – saale tu mujhe naseehat dega teri toh .
Kah kar usne shiva pe haath utha diya magar shiva ne turant uska haath rok liya aur uski gardan pakad li shiva ki ankhon se saaf nazar aa raha tha ki wo aaj dheerendra pawar ko nahi chhodega .
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Agle din shiva apne routine se 4 baje utha aur ghar se bahar nikal gya jab sab log uthe toh shiva ghar pe nahi tha is waqt subah ke 6 baj rahe the shiva aadhe ghante baad ghar wapas aata hai use dekh rudranshi usse poochti hai .
Rudranshi – kahan gye the subah subah .
Rudranshi ne jitni apniyata se sawal kiya utni hi arrogance se shiva ne ghoor je dekha aur sukhe shabdon me kaha .
Shiva – exercise karne gya tha .
David – shiva tum ek kaam karo pahle mere room me jaao aur fresh ho jao .
Shiva – mai fresh ho kar hi aya hun aur naha kar bhi .
James – magar yaha toh common bathroom hai hi nahi toh tum kaha fresh hokar aagye .
Shiva – bathroom ki jarurat tumhe hogi mujhe nahi yahan paas me jo nadi hai wahi fresh ho kar aya hun .
Vinod – wo nadi toh yaha se 20 kilometer door hai .
Shiva – toh
James – matlb tum 20 kilomitar door gye the wo bhi chal kar .
Shiva – nahi daud kar uske baad kuch der exercise ki naya dhoya aur wapas aa gya mai ye sab isliye bata raha hun ki tum aage se mujhse sawal na karo mujhe jawab dene ki adat nahi .
Itna kar kah shiva apni chatai pe baith jata hai kuch hi der hui thi use baithe hue ke ghar ke bahar ek jeep aa ke rukti hai jisme se ek three star lamba chauda heroic personality wala inspector utarta hai aur tez kadmo se chalta hua ghar me dakhil hota hai uski entry se sabhi log chauk jate hai magar shiva khamosh baitha rahta hai use dekhte hi David aage badhta hai aur kahta hai .
David – kya baat inspector sahab aap yaha itni subah subah .
Inspector – tuk logo me shiva kaun hai .
Usne david ki baat ko bilkul ansuna karte hue kaha uski baat sun ke shiva apni chatai se uthta hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – mai hun shiva koi dikkat .
Inspector shiva ke paas aata hai aur usse kahta hai .
Inspector – you are under arrest .
Rudranshi – kis jurm me .
Inspector – thaane aa jana phir bataunga aur tum chalo mere saath.
Kah kar wo chal deta hai toh shiva bolta hai .
Shiva – may I see the warrant plese .
Inspector uski taraf aata hai aur kahta hai .
Inspector – tu khud ko samjhta kya hai chal chup chaap warna ghaseet ke le jaunga .
Shiva uski taraf sakhti se dekhta hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – you can not arrest a citizen without having warrant ye humara samvidhan kahta hai the Constitution of our country .
Inspector shiva ki baat sun ke aag baboola ho jata hai aur jeb se warrant nikal kar shiva ke haath me rakh deta hai shiva warrant dekhta hai aur kahta hai .
Shiva – hmmm ab theek hai chaliye .
Kah kar shiva befikri se uske saath chal deta hai shiva ka attitude dekh kar ek baar toh inspector bhi chauk jata hai khair dono log police jeep me baith kar thane ki taraf chal padte hai unke jaate hi David kisi ko phone mila deta hai aur kuch der baat karne ke baad sabhi log thane ki taraf nikal padte hai idhar jeep me kuch constables ke saath shiva peeche baitha hua tha kuch der baad wo log police station ke bahar khade the shiva aur inspector aur saath aaye constables sabhi log thane me dakhil hote hai andar aate hi inspector ek laathi uthata hai aur shiva ki chhati pe waar karta hai aakar aaisa hone se samne wala zameen pe gir padta hai magar aaj shayad inspector ka din hi accha nahi tha usne jaise hi shiva ki chaati pe war kiya laathi ke do tukde ho gye magar shiva ke chahare pe ek shikan bhi na padi inspector aur thame me maujood sare log chahe wo mulzim ho ya police sabhi shiva ko ghoor kar aise dekh rahe the ki mano koi alien dekh liya ho shiva aage badhta hai aur bikul normally usse poochta hai .
Shiva – mera jurm kya hai .
Shiva ki baat sun ke inspector aise behave karta hai jaise wo chetana me wapas aya ho .
Inspector – ye … ye dekh kya rahe ho dal do sale ko lock up me abhi sale ki sari garmi nikalta hun.
Wo shiva ko lock up me le jate aur uske sare kapde utar dete hai aur uske dono haath chains se upar ki taraf bandh dete hai hai is waqt shiva sirf underwear me tha kuch der baad inspector apne saath char admi leke lock up me aata hai aur shiva pe pil padta hai uske saath aye admi bhi shiva lathiyan barasane lagte hai magar shiva ke muh se dard bhari cheekh toh kya ek siski bhi nahi nikalti hai wo use kareeb 30 min tak marte rahe aur shiva khamoshi se mar khata raha abhi ye karykram kuch der aur chalta ki tabhi peeche ek tez aur raubdar aawaz aati hai .
Stoop it inspector .
Inspector mud ke dekhta hai toh uske hosh ud jaate peeche aur koi nahi balki dig raghuveer pratap singh khade the sabhi lock up se bahar aate hai aur unhe salute karte hai .
Dig – tum sab ye kar kya rahe ho .
Inspector – sir is ladke ke khilaaf fir hui hai isne badi besharmi se 20 logon ko mara hai kaiyon ki toh ye halat hai ki icu me hai isiliye ise giraftar kiya .
Dig – hmm theek hai take him to the cabin .
Kuch der baad david rudranshi wo inspector aur shiva inspector ke cabin me khade the dig sahab khud samne chair pe baithe hue the .
Dig – toh inspector ispe aise kaun se serious charges hai jo tum ne ise third degree di .
Unhone shiva ki taraf ishara karte hue poocha .
Inspector – sir is ladke akele 20 logon ko mara aur kaiyon ko toh icu me admit karwa diya aur jab mai ise arrest karne gya toh mujse badtamiji karne laga .
Dig – hmm toh kya tum ye jante ho ki isne un 20 logon ko kyu mara .
Inspector – no sir
Inspector apni gardan kiye hue jawab deta .
Dig – FIR kis ne likhawai .
Maine .
Peeche se dheerendra pawar jawab diya aur dig se bina permission liye andar aa gya aur shiva ko ghoorte hue kaha .
Dheerendra pawar – isne mere 20 admiyon buri tarah se mara hai agar mai wahan hota toh jan se mar deta ise .
Shiva – shukr karo tum waha nahi the warna aaj shayad mujh pe 302 ka case chal raha hota .
Dheerendra pawar – matlb tu mujhe mar deta tu janta hai tu kisse baat kar raha .
Shiva – abhi itne bure din nahi aaye ki mai har aire gaire ke bare me pata karun aur sun ye akhiri baar tha agar dubara mera rasta kata toh tujhe kaat dunga ye dhamki nahi naseehat hai samjha .
Shiva ne dheerendra ko ghoorte hue kaha uska ye roop dekh kar waha maujood har insan ke dil khauf aa gya tha chahe wo dig hi kyu na .
Dheerendra pawar – saale tu mujhe naseehat dega teri toh .
Kah kar usne shiva pe haath utha diya magar shiva ne turant uska haath rok liya aur uski gardan pakad li shiva ki ankhon se saaf nazar aa raha tha ki wo aaj dheerendra pawar ko nahi chhodega .
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Wait rahega next update ka
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Wait rahega next update ka
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