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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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"Chay le lo chay, chay garam, chay garam" .... "Ek rupya de do sahab, mere bache bhuke hain.. aap ko dua lagegi".... "Vanita, mayapuri, oulook, sarita... magazine le lo magazine".... "Yatrigan kripya dhyan den, train no 12406, Mumbai-howrah mail apne nirdharit samay se ek ghanta der se chal rahi hai... aap ke hui aswidha ke liye hume khed hai"

"Ufff kitni bhid hai yahan... ye main kaun si grah par aa pahuncha, ye to chidiyakhana jaisa lag raha hai".....

Nischal, Kalyan junction ke platform no. 4 par khada wahan ki bhir ko dekh ascharya me par gaya. Ajib tarah ke mahol, ajib tarah ke log aur bhasha to bikul samjh se pare.

Tabhi koi train uss platform par aa kar ruki aur logon ki bhir utri.... ek aurat upar se niche bag lade, chillati hui kahne lagi.... "Ae khambe ki tarah raste me kyon khada hai, side hat na. Dikhta nahi bhari saman uthaye hun"

Nischal uss aurat ke ajib si baat ko samjh to nahi paya bas usse laga ki wo kuch kah rahi hai. Nischal hathon ke ishare me puchha "Kya hai"

Aurat.... Pagal hai kya hatne kah rahi hun to tujhe samjh me nahi aa raha hai kya....

Uski bhasha Nischal ke samjh se pare thi. Aur khada bas isharon me puchhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki wo kahna kya chahti hai.... anth me haar kar wo aurat he uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo aurat karib char kadam aage gayi hogi, Nischal ne samne dekha to uss aurat ka ek jhola sayad wahin chhut gaya tha... Nischal ne jhola liya aur teji se mura jhola usse wapas dene ke liye....


"Hey bhagwan ye mukhiya ji ke aadmi mujhe dhundhte yahan na aa jaye. Please bhagwan un kamino ki najar nahi pare mujh par, bacha lo prabhu... bacha lo"

Jabardasti shadi ho rahi thi, aur Jivisha shadi ke din he bhag aayi. Jab se train me baithi thi, usse ek he dar sata raha tha kahin mukhiya ji ke aadmi na dekh le, aur pakar kar uski jabardasti shadi na karwa de...

Dulhan ke libas me, upar se niche tak sazi Jivisha.... "Bhagwan-bhagwan" karti chali ja rahi thi.... tabhi... "Ticket... ticket"... karte huye T.T bhi pahunch gaya...

T.t ko dekh dekh kar Jivisha jor-jor se rone lagi. Halanki uski aankhon me aanshu to nahi the par awaz me rone wali siskiyan jaroor thi.

Kuch he der me bhir jama ho gayi..... "Kya hua bitiya, tum ro kyon rahi ho, tumhare sath wale log kahan gaye"

Bhir me se ek dayalu lady, Jivisha ko satwana deti puchhne lagi..... Jivisha apne naak aur aankh ponchhti kahne lagi..... "Mere sath koi bhi nahi. Pata nahi mere pati kahan chale gaye. Subah jab nind khuli to mere pass nahi the. Kab se unhe dhund rahu hun mil he nahi rahe. Ticket, paisa sab unhi ke pass hai... subah se bhukhi bhi hun, kuch khayi tak nahi".

T.t, wahan ke mahol ko dekh kar he nikal gaya. Usse samjh me aa gaya tha ki aage kuch kaha to public puri lapat paregi.

Train ke achhe bhale log, sab uss bechari akeli asahay ladki ko wahan se utha kar apne stah wali berth par le aaye. Pahle to khub khilaya pilaya, fir Jivisha ke pati ko 100 galiyan dete huye usse kosne lage.....

Train apni puri raftar se apne har paraw par rukti hui chal rahi thi. Jivisha ka safar achha katne laga, lekin tabhi lobby me najar gayi aur dar se Jivisha ka kaleja dhak-dhak karne laga. Mukhiya ji ke aadmi Jivisha ko dhundhte uss compartment me pahunch chuke the.

"Ab kya karun... Bhagwan kaha tha na thodi madad karo... nahi suni na aap ne"... Jivisha chupke se wahan se uthi aur ja kar bathroom me ghus gayi... idhar mukhiya ji ke aadmi usse pure compartment me dhundhte aage badh rahe the.... Tabhi Kalyan junction par train ruki aur Jivisha chhipte-chhipate bahar nikal gayi.....

Jisvisha mud-mud kar aage pichhe dekh rahi thi aur bari teji se aage badh rahi thi. Nischal uss aurat ka bag utha kar usse dene ke liye mura he tha... aur ussi waqt Jivisha mur kar train ko dekh rahi thi aur apne kadam aage badha rahi thi.....


"Dharam"....... Jivisha aur Nischal ki takkar ho gayi... Jivisha larkhara kar girne lagi. Tabhi Nischal ne uske kamar ko apne hathon me tham liya aur usse girne se bachaya....

Nischal ne aakhen munda... sara ghatnakarm usse slow motion me dikh raha tha.... uska murna... aur Jivisha ka kandha uske sine se takraya..

Uski gardan piche ki ore mure aur kadan aage tha.... uffff jhatke ke sath gardan ghumate aage muri... khubsurat se chehre par pura baal bikher gaye. Uske aage ka paun larkharaya, aur wo girne lagi...

Nischal ne apni aakhen khol diya... Jivisha ko ab bhi wo apne hathon me thame tha... aur Jivisha ka chehra pura balon se dhaka tha.... Jivisha apne chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hatayi... "Uffff kya masoom, khubsurat si jhalak thi, aur ye dulhan ka libas iss roop me par aur char chand laga raha tha"

Nischal ke liye ye pal jaise tham sa gaya ho, aur najren bas Jivisha par he tiki rah gayi. Idhar Jivhsa khud ko balance nahi kar payi aur wo larkhara kar girne lagi. Bikhre baal sidhi karti wo jab uthne ki kosis kar rahi thi, tabhi samne Nischal ka wo khubsurat sa chehra tha....

Ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki ye chehra dil me utar raha hai. Par agle he pal jab wapas najren train ki ore gayi to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke aadmi issi taraf aa rahe hain....

Jivisha, Nischal ke kalai ka sahara le kar sidhi khari hui. Apne aeriyon ko unchi karti thodi upar hui aur Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar hont se hont laga diya. Jisvisha apna chehra chhipane ke liye Nischal ke hont se hont laga, usse chumna shuru kar di.... Nischal ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi... usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki ek he pal me ye kya ho gaya....

Jivisha hont se hont lagaye rakhi, aur najren utha kar dekh bhi rahi thi ki wo log unhe cross kiye kiye ya nahi. Aankhen khuli to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke log bhi wahan khadey ho kar free ka show enjoy kar rahe hain.....

"Fas gayi Jivisha iss filmy trick ke chakkar me. Bhagwan ab aur kitne twist haan, kuch to raham karo. Kab tak main iss anjaan ke sath kiss karti rahun".

Jivisha aakhen kholti aur fir kiss continue karne lagti. Chhota kiss to samajh me bhi aata hai, logon ka dhyan nahi jaye. Lekin ye kiss to lamba, aur lamba he hota chala ja raha tha, aur logon ki puri bhir jama ho kar bas yahi najara dekh rahi thi.... tabhi Jivisha ke kano tak aawaz pahunchi....

"Chalo re inhe romamce kar lene do, lagta hai honeymoon bhi yahin mana kar jayenge. Chalo Jivisha ko ander train me he dhundhte hain"

Train ne horn dena shuru kiya aur mukhiya ji ke log nikal liye. Train jab badh chali to Jivisha, Nischal ke hont chhorti, yakkk-yakk karti apne hont ko rumal se pochh ne lagi....

Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....
 

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Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....


Jivisha.... Aise kya dekh rahe ho, jo bhi hua usse bhul jao aur bhago yahan se.

"O' Khudaya, kuch to aisa karo ki inki baat mujhe samjh me aa jaye. Khair baat samjh me aaye ki na aaye, inka andaz pasand aaya, issi ke sath chalta hun, kafi friendly nature hai iska".

Jisvisha.... Abhi tak yahin khare ho aur aise tukur-tukur kya dekh rahe ho. Ek baar kahi to samjh me nahi aa raha kya. Ab main kyon isse samjha rahi hun. Tum maro yahin main chali.


Jivisha, Nischal ko chhor kar platform se bahar jane lagi, aur Nischal bhi uske pichhe-pichhe chal diya. Jivisha pani bottol kharidne ek stall par ruki, tabhi Nischal bhi uske pass aa kar khada ho gaya...... Jivisha ki najar jaise he uss par gayi..... "Jivisha, pagal, jhalli, ullu... kis chipku ko kiss kar di duffer, pichha he nahi chhor raha".... bari si aankhen kiye bebas bhari najron se Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhte, hath jor kar kahne lagi.....

"Unnnnnhhhh huuuunnn hunnnn.... sorry baba wo jaan bachani thi isliye kiss kiya, mera pichha chhor do please. Dekho tum mera pichha chhor do to badle me main tumhe bahut sara rupya dungi"... Itna kah kar Jivisha ne kuch 500-1000 ke note aage badha diye...


"Bechari ladki, kitni musibat me hai, lekin ye bekar si chij mujhe kyon de rahi hai... Lagta hai issi wajah se paresan hai".... Nischal ne khud me jo samiksha karna tha kiya aur Jivisha ke hath se note le kar tukra-tukra kar diya....


Jivisha gusse me usse dekhti.... "Tum ye paise far kar kya dikhana chahte ho, bahut bare raish ho... huhhh. Dekho ab tak pyar se kah rahi thi lekin ab yadi pichha nahi chhora to police se pakrwa dungi"....


Nischal ko ab kya samjh me aaya ki wo kya kah rahi thi, wo bas haan me apna sir hila diya. Haan me usne jaise he sir hilaya, Jivisha halki muskurayi .... "chalo picha chhuta"... Jivisha ko muskurata dekh Nischal bhi muskuraya..... "Lagta hai ye bechari uss kachre ke wajah se paresan thi, ab khush lag rahi hai"


Jivisha muskurati bye ka ishara karte usse chhor kar jane lagi.... Nischal bhi hath hilata uske sath-sath chalne laga.... Jivisha mukurate huye usse fir dekhi aur kahne lagi...... "Darling abhi to kahe the ki tum mera pichha nahi karoge, fir mere sath kyon chal rahe ho... tum apne raste jao main apne raste"


Ek baar fir Nischal ne haan me sir hilaya... Jivisha ko fir laga ki ab ye apne raste jayega aur main apne raste.... wo apne kadam aage badhayi... aur fir se uske sath Nischal bhi chal diya....

Jivisha sir pit'ti wahin jamin par baith gayi aur nakiyate jor se chillayi..... "Mammiiiiiiiii"..... Agle he pal Jivisha khud ko kosne lagi... "wo kaun si manhush ghari jo main bhagi aur ye chipku mil gaya, na main bhagti aur na he ye chipku milta".....

Jivisha in flash back... kuch din pahle....



Buglow ke bahar ki jhalak... Main gate par Swarn Villa likha hua... ander uski pyari mom Priya Rajput apne pati Himanshu Rajput ke sath sofe par baithi hai... uske gode me pariwar ka sab se chhota sadasya yani ki unka pota Chirag Rajpur, apni dadi ke gode me baitha tha aur uski dadi pyar se usse seb khila rahi thi.

Samne se uski bahu Nandita Rajput apne hathon me chay ka tray liye aa rahi. Pahle apne saas sasur ko serve ki fir apne pati Ravi Rajput ki ore chay badha di. Pass me he uska ladla dever Avinash Rajput bhi baitha tha, usse bhi chay deti wo sab ke sath baith gayi....

Chay ki pahli chuski ke sath Papa Himanshu bole.... "Ab tak soyi he hui hai, ye bitte bhar ka bacha jaag gaya aur wo ladki ab tak so rahi hai"

Priya.... Jane do na ji, sone do. Kal der raat tak usne padhai ki hai....

Abhi..... Isliye kahta hun mom thoda bahut khud bhi padh liya karo. Aap ki ladli beti jasusi novel padh rahi thi... koi apne course ki kitab nahi padh rahi thi.

Priya.... Kuch bhi padh to rahi thi na. Wo nahi padhegi, nahi padhegi... shadi kar ke apne sasural jayegi, teri tarah to nahi hai... pura din apne awara doston ke sath ghumta hai aur bhar din mobile me laga rahta hai....

Nadita, hasti hui kahne lagi.... "Maa ji, dever ji ke mobile par to ladkiyon ke bhi phone aate hain"

Priya.... Kya ??? Dekha ji aapne... main shuru se kahti thi ye ladka kuch na krega gawn bhej do isse, wahin apna khet dekhega. Par iss ghar me meri koi sune tab na... dekhna kisi din kisi ladki ko bhaga le aayega to fir mujhe kuch mat kahna....

Abhi apni bhabhi ko ghurte huye dekhne laga.... tabhi bhai Ravi topic ko divert karte kahne lage.... "Bas bhi karo sab, yahan Jivisha ki baat ho rahi thi, aur tum sab Abhi ke pichhe he par gaye"....

Himanshu.... Ek minute tum sab jarra shant ho jao. Mujhe kuch jaruri baat kahni hai...

Sara pariwahe dhyan se Himanshu ki ore dekhne laga...... "Mere dost hai na Punya pratap singh, uska beta abhi-abhi foreign se lauta hai. Dikhne me smart hai, videsh se padh kar lauta hai, aur kuch din baad apne company ko chalayega.... Mujhe to Jivisha ke liye iss se achha rista kahin nahi milega... kya kahte ho tum sab".....

Pura pariwar "Haan-haan" kart charcha karne lage... tabhi chhotu ustad Chirag apni dadi ki gode se utar kar, chupke se apne bua ke kamre me chala aaya...

Jivisha, makhmal ke bistar par, takiye ko apne sine se lagaye muskurati so rahi thi. Chirag ne idhar-udhar dekha aur mej par rakha pani ka jug utha kar Jivisha ke upar pani pura urrel diya....

Jivisha harbara kar uthi aur uth kar baith gayi. Dhime se ek aankh kholi aur samne Chirag.... "Chhotku, tujhe to main aaj batati hun"

Jivisha jhapat kar dauri, wo pure kamre me idhar udhar bhagta raha aur Jivisha uske pichhe-pichhe bhag rahi thi... tabhi Jivisha ne usse pakra aur pakar kar bistar par patak di... "Saitan kahin ka aise jagate hain"

Jivisha usse pakar kar gudgudi karne lagi.... "Bol fir karega aisa... bata"

Chirag.... Heee heee heee ... bua chhoro bhi... bua...

Jivisha.... Bua bol kar chidha raha ruk tujhe abhi batati hun ....

Jivisha uske naak par dant katne lagi.....

Chirag.... Di bolo to maa marti hai, bua kaho to aap gussa karti ho... bhagwan main karun to kya karun....

Jivisha.... Nalayak tum mera beta hai ki apni maa ka. Jo main bolungi wahi karna kisi ki mat saun'na....

Chirag... Thik hai di, ab mujhe chhoro warna aap he fasogi....

Jivisha.... Ohhh ! Ye emergency wake up tha kya...

Chirag apna sir hilate.... Haan di, ye emergency wake up tha.... mukhiya ji aap ki shadi tay kar rahe hain....

Jivisha.... Mukhiya ji ki itni himmat... chal tu mere sath... aaj inki family meeting ki to fis-fis...

Jivisha, bahar hall me aayi... tab tak inki family meeting chal rahi thi aur sab log khusiyan mana rahe the... kyonki un sab ki ore se ye rista pakka ho gaya tha.....

Jivisha ko aate dekh, Priya..... "Bare achhe samay par aayi hai, sun beta har ladki ko ek na ek din"...

"Ek na ek din" par abhi baat chal he rahi thi ki Jivisha apni ek hath aage dikhati..... "Bas... to yahan mukhiya ji ke dekh rekh me puri panchyat bithayi gayi hai meri shadi ke liye. Lekin ek baat aap sab bhi sun lo, aur mukhiya ji khas kar aap... main abhi shadi nahi karungi"

Himanshu... Par kyon beta, itna achha rista hai.. hum sab ko pasand hai, fir tu kyon inkaar kar rahi hai.. dekh hum sab tera bhala he chahte hain....

Abhi.... Ye na karne wali hai shadi kyonki ye to pahle se he apna bf pasand kar chuki hai... main shuru se kahta tha ki iska aur Videh ka koi chakkar chal raha tab kaun tha jo mujhe naroow minded kahta tha....

Jivisha apni bhawen sikori... muh chamkayi..... "Bhaiya main aap ka khun kar dungi. Papa dekha na kaise awara ladkon ke sath rah-rah kar inki soch bhi gandi ho gayi hai. Chhi, aisi baten... aaj ke baad iss gandi soch wale se mera rista khatam. Main tumhe ab rakhi bhi nahi bandhungi"...

Abhi... Kaun sa free me bandhti hai. Last time scooty li thi bhul gayi. Main he tha jo sab se lar kar tujhe scooty diya tha. Abhi tu mujhe he suna rahi hai. Papa aap ne jaisa socha hai waisa he hoga...

Jivisha.... Nahi, main abhi shadi nahi karungi... yadi jabardasti kiye to main aap sab par police case kar dungi....

Himanshu.... Sab chup... beta yadi Abhi jhoot kah raha hai, aur tu ne kisi ko pahle se pasand nahi kiya to baat kya hai inkaar ki....

Jivisha ke chehre par faili muskaan .... wo tahalti hui apni baat kahne lagi....

"Nahi mera koi bf nahi aur koi hoga bhi nahi... mera to prince charm aayega... Jab wo aayega to hawa me ek ajib si khusbu hogi, mahol surmayi tarange bikherenge.... uska roop itna lubhawna hoga ki dil me utar jaye. Aur jab uss ko mujhe se pyar hoga to nile asman me wo I Love You likh dega... Dekhna wo pure himmat ke sath, aap sab ki aankhon me aankhen dal kar, mujhe aap sab se magne aayega... Bas ussi ke intzar me hun, aur main ussi se shadi karungi".....

Idhar Jivisha apne sapney me khoyi apni dil ki baat pure pariwar ko bata rahi thi, aur udhar uski maa ka B.P high hota ja raha tha......
 
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"Chay le lo chay, chay garam, chay garam" .... "Ek rupya de do sahab, mere bache bhuke hain.. aap ko dua lagegi".... "Vanita, mayapuri, oulook, sarita... magazine le lo magazine".... "Yatrigan kripya dhyan den, train no 12406, Mumbai-howrah mail apne nirdharit samay se ek ghanta der se chal rahi hai... aap ke hui aswidha ke liye hume khed hai"

"Ufff kitni bhid hai yahan... ye main kaun si grah par aa pahuncha, ye to chidiyakhana jaisa lag raha hai".....

Nischal, Kalyan junction ke platform no. 4 par khada wahan ki bhir ko dekh ascharya me par gaya. Ajib tarah ke mahol, ajib tarah ke log aur bhasha to bikul samjh se pare.

Tabhi koi train uss platform par aa kar ruki aur logon ki bhir utri.... ek aurat upar se niche bag lade, chillati hui kahne lagi.... "Ae khambe ki tarah raste me kyon khada hai, side hat na. Dikhta nahi bhari saman uthaye hun"

Nischal uss aurat ke ajib si baat ko samjh to nahi paya bas usse laga ki wo kuch kah rahi hai. Nischal hathon ke ishare me puchha "Kya hai"

Aurat.... Pagal hai kya hatne kah rahi hun to tujhe samjh me nahi aa raha hai kya....

Uski bhasha Nischal ke samjh se pare thi. Aur khada bas isharon me puchhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki wo kahna kya chahti hai.... anth me haar kar wo aurat he uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo aurat karib char kadam aage gayi hogi, Nischal ne samne dekha to uss aurat ka ek jhola sayad wahin chhut gaya tha... Nischal ne jhola liya aur teji se mura jhola usse wapas dene ke liye....


"Hey bhagwan ye mukhiya ji ke aadmi mujhe dhundhte yahan na aa jaye. Please bhagwan un kamino ki najar nahi pare mujh par, bacha lo prabhu... bacha lo"

Jabardasti shadi ho rahi thi, aur Jivisha shadi ke din he bhag aayi. Jab se train me baithi thi, usse ek he dar sata raha tha kahin mukhiya ji ke aadmi na dekh le, aur pakar kar uski jabardasti shadi na karwa de...

Dulhan ke libas me, upar se niche tak sazi Jivisha.... "Bhagwan-bhagwan" karti chali ja rahi thi.... tabhi... "Ticket... ticket"... karte huye T.T bhi pahunch gaya...

T.t ko dekh dekh kar Jivisha jor-jor se rone lagi. Halanki uski aankhon me aanshu to nahi the par awaz me rone wali siskiyan jaroor thi.

Kuch he der me bhir jama ho gayi..... "Kya hua bitiya, tum ro kyon rahi ho, tumhare sath wale log kahan gaye"

Bhir me se ek dayalu lady, Jivisha ko satwana deti puchhne lagi..... Jivisha apne naak aur aankh ponchhti kahne lagi..... "Mere sath koi bhi nahi. Pata nahi mere pati kahan chale gaye. Subah jab nind khuli to mere pass nahi the. Kab se unhe dhund rahu hun mil he nahi rahe. Ticket, paisa sab unhi ke pass hai... subah se bhukhi bhi hun, kuch khayi tak nahi".

T.t, wahan ke mahol ko dekh kar he nikal gaya. Usse samjh me aa gaya tha ki aage kuch kaha to public puri lapat paregi.

Train ke achhe bhale log, sab uss bechari akeli asahay ladki ko wahan se utha kar apne stah wali berth par le aaye. Pahle to khub khilaya pilaya, fir Jivisha ke pati ko 100 galiyan dete huye usse kosne lage.....

Train apni puri raftar se apne har paraw par rukti hui chal rahi thi. Jivisha ka safar achha katne laga, lekin tabhi lobby me najar gayi aur dar se Jivisha ka kaleja dhak-dhak karne laga. Mukhiya ji ke aadmi Jivisha ko dhundhte uss compartment me pahunch chuke the.

"Ab kya karun... Bhagwan kaha tha na thodi madad karo... nahi suni na aap ne"... Jivisha chupke se wahan se uthi aur ja kar bathroom me ghus gayi... idhar mukhiya ji ke aadmi usse pure compartment me dhundhte aage badh rahe the.... Tabhi Kalyan junction par train ruki aur Jivisha chhipte-chhipate bahar nikal gayi.....

Jisvisha mud-mud kar aage pichhe dekh rahi thi aur bari teji se aage badh rahi thi. Nischal uss aurat ka bag utha kar usse dene ke liye mura he tha... aur ussi waqt Jivisha mur kar train ko dekh rahi thi aur apne kadam aage badha rahi thi.....


"Dharam"....... Jivisha aur Nischal ki takkar ho gayi... Jivisha larkhara kar girne lagi. Tabhi Nischal ne uske kamar ko apne hathon me tham liya aur usse girne se bachaya....

Nischal ne aakhen munda... sara ghatnakarm usse slow motion me dikh raha tha.... uska murna... aur Jivisha ka kandha uske sine se takraya..

Uski gardan piche ki ore mure aur kadan aage tha.... uffff jhatke ke sath gardan ghumate aage muri... khubsurat se chehre par pura baal bikher gaye. Uske aage ka paun larkharaya, aur wo girne lagi...

Nischal ne apni aakhen khol diya... Jivisha ko ab bhi wo apne hathon me thame tha... aur Jivisha ka chehra pura balon se dhaka tha.... Jivisha apne chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hatayi... "Uffff kya masoom, khubsurat si jhalak thi, aur ye dulhan ka libas iss roop me par aur char chand laga raha tha"

Nischal ke liye ye pal jaise tham sa gaya ho, aur najren bas Jivisha par he tiki rah gayi. Idhar Jivhsa khud ko balance nahi kar payi aur wo larkhara kar girne lagi. Bikhre baal sidhi karti wo jab uthne ki kosis kar rahi thi, tabhi samne Nischal ka wo khubsurat sa chehra tha....

Ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki ye chehra dil me utar raha hai. Par agle he pal jab wapas najren train ki ore gayi to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke aadmi issi taraf aa rahe hain....

Jivisha, Nischal ke kalai ka sahara le kar sidhi khari hui. Apne aeriyon ko unchi karti thodi upar hui aur Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar hont se hont laga diya. Jisvisha apna chehra chhipane ke liye Nischal ke hont se hont laga, usse chumna shuru kar di.... Nischal ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi... usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki ek he pal me ye kya ho gaya....

Jivisha hont se hont lagaye rakhi, aur najren utha kar dekh bhi rahi thi ki wo log unhe cross kiye kiye ya nahi. Aankhen khuli to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke log bhi wahan khadey ho kar free ka show enjoy kar rahe hain.....

"Fas gayi Jivisha iss filmy trick ke chakkar me. Bhagwan ab aur kitne twist haan, kuch to raham karo. Kab tak main iss anjaan ke sath kiss karti rahun".

Jivisha aakhen kholti aur fir kiss continue karne lagti. Chhota kiss to samajh me bhi aata hai, logon ka dhyan nahi jaye. Lekin ye kiss to lamba, aur lamba he hota chala ja raha tha, aur logon ki puri bhir jama ho kar bas yahi najara dekh rahi thi.... tabhi Jivisha ke kano tak aawaz pahunchi....

"Chalo re inhe romamce kar lene do, lagta hai honeymoon bhi yahin mana kar jayenge. Chalo Jivisha ko ander train me he dhundhte hain"

Train ne horn dena shuru kiya aur mukhiya ji ke log nikal liye. Train jab badh chali to Jivisha, Nischal ke hont chhorti, yakkk-yakk karti apne hont ko rumal se pochh ne lagi....

Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....
Wah kya welcome hua hai nischal ka...
pehle us aurat ne jhiddka... phir takrar.. phir umah umah... bichara nischal :D
ab nischal aur jivu ko milna kudarat ka karishma ya hamare writer sahab ki koshish.. par milna inke kismat mein tha.. lo pehli nazar mein chehra dil mein bas gaya .. waise dekhe kahin ore, chale kahin ore... takrana to tha hi...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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"Chay le lo chay, chay garam, chay garam" .... "Ek rupya de do sahab, mere bache bhuke hain.. aap ko dua lagegi".... "Vanita, mayapuri, oulook, sarita... magazine le lo magazine".... "Yatrigan kripya dhyan den, train no 12406, Mumbai-howrah mail apne nirdharit samay se ek ghanta der se chal rahi hai... aap ke hui aswidha ke liye hume khed hai"

"Ufff kitni bhid hai yahan... ye main kaun si grah par aa pahuncha, ye to chidiyakhana jaisa lag raha hai".....

Nischal, Kalyan junction ke platform no. 4 par khada wahan ki bhir ko dekh ascharya me par gaya. Ajib tarah ke mahol, ajib tarah ke log aur bhasha to bikul samjh se pare.

Tabhi koi train uss platform par aa kar ruki aur logon ki bhir utri.... ek aurat upar se niche bag lade, chillati hui kahne lagi.... "Ae khambe ki tarah raste me kyon khada hai, side hat na. Dikhta nahi bhari saman uthaye hun"

Nischal uss aurat ke ajib si baat ko samjh to nahi paya bas usse laga ki wo kuch kah rahi hai. Nischal hathon ke ishare me puchha "Kya hai"

Aurat.... Pagal hai kya hatne kah rahi hun to tujhe samjh me nahi aa raha hai kya....

Uski bhasha Nischal ke samjh se pare thi. Aur khada bas isharon me puchhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki wo kahna kya chahti hai.... anth me haar kar wo aurat he uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo aurat karib char kadam aage gayi hogi, Nischal ne samne dekha to uss aurat ka ek jhola sayad wahin chhut gaya tha... Nischal ne jhola liya aur teji se mura jhola usse wapas dene ke liye....


"Hey bhagwan ye mukhiya ji ke aadmi mujhe dhundhte yahan na aa jaye. Please bhagwan un kamino ki najar nahi pare mujh par, bacha lo prabhu... bacha lo"

Jabardasti shadi ho rahi thi, aur Jivisha shadi ke din he bhag aayi. Jab se train me baithi thi, usse ek he dar sata raha tha kahin mukhiya ji ke aadmi na dekh le, aur pakar kar uski jabardasti shadi na karwa de...

Dulhan ke libas me, upar se niche tak sazi Jivisha.... "Bhagwan-bhagwan" karti chali ja rahi thi.... tabhi... "Ticket... ticket"... karte huye T.T bhi pahunch gaya...

T.t ko dekh dekh kar Jivisha jor-jor se rone lagi. Halanki uski aankhon me aanshu to nahi the par awaz me rone wali siskiyan jaroor thi.

Kuch he der me bhir jama ho gayi..... "Kya hua bitiya, tum ro kyon rahi ho, tumhare sath wale log kahan gaye"

Bhir me se ek dayalu lady, Jivisha ko satwana deti puchhne lagi..... Jivisha apne naak aur aankh ponchhti kahne lagi..... "Mere sath koi bhi nahi. Pata nahi mere pati kahan chale gaye. Subah jab nind khuli to mere pass nahi the. Kab se unhe dhund rahu hun mil he nahi rahe. Ticket, paisa sab unhi ke pass hai... subah se bhukhi bhi hun, kuch khayi tak nahi".

T.t, wahan ke mahol ko dekh kar he nikal gaya. Usse samjh me aa gaya tha ki aage kuch kaha to public puri lapat paregi.

Train ke achhe bhale log, sab uss bechari akeli asahay ladki ko wahan se utha kar apne stah wali berth par le aaye. Pahle to khub khilaya pilaya, fir Jivisha ke pati ko 100 galiyan dete huye usse kosne lage.....

Train apni puri raftar se apne har paraw par rukti hui chal rahi thi. Jivisha ka safar achha katne laga, lekin tabhi lobby me najar gayi aur dar se Jivisha ka kaleja dhak-dhak karne laga. Mukhiya ji ke aadmi Jivisha ko dhundhte uss compartment me pahunch chuke the.

"Ab kya karun... Bhagwan kaha tha na thodi madad karo... nahi suni na aap ne"... Jivisha chupke se wahan se uthi aur ja kar bathroom me ghus gayi... idhar mukhiya ji ke aadmi usse pure compartment me dhundhte aage badh rahe the.... Tabhi Kalyan junction par train ruki aur Jivisha chhipte-chhipate bahar nikal gayi.....

Jisvisha mud-mud kar aage pichhe dekh rahi thi aur bari teji se aage badh rahi thi. Nischal uss aurat ka bag utha kar usse dene ke liye mura he tha... aur ussi waqt Jivisha mur kar train ko dekh rahi thi aur apne kadam aage badha rahi thi.....


"Dharam"....... Jivisha aur Nischal ki takkar ho gayi... Jivisha larkhara kar girne lagi. Tabhi Nischal ne uske kamar ko apne hathon me tham liya aur usse girne se bachaya....

Nischal ne aakhen munda... sara ghatnakarm usse slow motion me dikh raha tha.... uska murna... aur Jivisha ka kandha uske sine se takraya..

Uski gardan piche ki ore mure aur kadan aage tha.... uffff jhatke ke sath gardan ghumate aage muri... khubsurat se chehre par pura baal bikher gaye. Uske aage ka paun larkharaya, aur wo girne lagi...

Nischal ne apni aakhen khol diya... Jivisha ko ab bhi wo apne hathon me thame tha... aur Jivisha ka chehra pura balon se dhaka tha.... Jivisha apne chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hatayi... "Uffff kya masoom, khubsurat si jhalak thi, aur ye dulhan ka libas iss roop me par aur char chand laga raha tha"

Nischal ke liye ye pal jaise tham sa gaya ho, aur najren bas Jivisha par he tiki rah gayi. Idhar Jivhsa khud ko balance nahi kar payi aur wo larkhara kar girne lagi. Bikhre baal sidhi karti wo jab uthne ki kosis kar rahi thi, tabhi samne Nischal ka wo khubsurat sa chehra tha....

Ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki ye chehra dil me utar raha hai. Par agle he pal jab wapas najren train ki ore gayi to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke aadmi issi taraf aa rahe hain....

Jivisha, Nischal ke kalai ka sahara le kar sidhi khari hui. Apne aeriyon ko unchi karti thodi upar hui aur Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar hont se hont laga diya. Jisvisha apna chehra chhipane ke liye Nischal ke hont se hont laga, usse chumna shuru kar di.... Nischal ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi... usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki ek he pal me ye kya ho gaya....

Jivisha hont se hont lagaye rakhi, aur najren utha kar dekh bhi rahi thi ki wo log unhe cross kiye kiye ya nahi. Aankhen khuli to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke log bhi wahan khadey ho kar free ka show enjoy kar rahe hain.....

"Fas gayi Jivisha iss filmy trick ke chakkar me. Bhagwan ab aur kitne twist haan, kuch to raham karo. Kab tak main iss anjaan ke sath kiss karti rahun".

Jivisha aakhen kholti aur fir kiss continue karne lagti. Chhota kiss to samajh me bhi aata hai, logon ka dhyan nahi jaye. Lekin ye kiss to lamba, aur lamba he hota chala ja raha tha, aur logon ki puri bhir jama ho kar bas yahi najara dekh rahi thi.... tabhi Jivisha ke kano tak aawaz pahunchi....

"Chalo re inhe romamce kar lene do, lagta hai honeymoon bhi yahin mana kar jayenge. Chalo Jivisha ko ander train me he dhundhte hain"

Train ne horn dena shuru kiya aur mukhiya ji ke log nikal liye. Train jab badh chali to Jivisha, Nischal ke hont chhorti, yakkk-yakk karti apne hont ko rumal se pochh ne lagi....

Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....
Ye Nischal ki kismat itni acchi kyun thi arre aisa kaha hota hai ki ladki kisi ko bhi kiss kar le. Mere saath to nahi hua :cry2:

Nischal ji ka swagat to bahut acche se hua iss grah par ab aage dekhna hai kya kya hota hai.
 

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Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....


Jivisha.... Aise kya dekh rahe ho, jo bhi hua usse bhul jao aur bhago yahan se.

"O' Khudaya, kuch to aisa karo ki inki baat mujhe samjh me aa jaye. Khair baat samjh me aaye ki na aaye, inka andaz pasand aaya, issi ke sath chalta hun, kafi friendly nature hai iska".

Jisvisha.... Abhi tak yahin khare ho aur aise tukur-tukur kya dekh rahe ho. Ek baar kahi to samjh me nahi aa raha kya. Ab main kyon isse samjha rahi hun. Tum maro yahin main chali.


Jivisha, Nischal ko chhor kar platform se bahar jane lagi, aur Nischal bhi uske pichhe-pichhe chal diya. Jivisha pani bottol kharidne ek stall par ruki, tabhi Nischal bhi uske pass aa kar khada ho gaya...... Jivisha ki najar jaise he uss par gayi..... "Jivisha, pagal, jhalli, ullu... kis chipku ko kiss kar di duffer, pichha he nahi chhor raha".... bari si aankhen kiye bebas bhari najron se Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhte, hath jor kar kahne lagi.....

"Unnnnnhhhh huuuunnn hunnnn.... sorry baba wo jaan bachani thi isliye kiss kiya, mera pichha chhor do please. Dekho tum mera pichha chhor do to badle me main tumhe bahut sara rupya dungi"... Itna kah kar Jivisha ne kuch 500-1000 ke note aage badha diye...


"Bechari ladki, kitni musibat me hai, lekin ye bekar si chij mujhe kyon de rahi hai... Lagta hai issi wajah se paresan hai".... Nischal ne khud me jo samiksha karna tha kiya aur Jivisha ke hath se note le kar tukra-tukra kar diya....


Jivisha gusse me usse dekhti.... "Tum ye paise far kar kya dikhana chahte ho, bahut bare raish ho... huhhh. Dekho ab tak pyar se kah rahi thi lekin ab yadi pichha nahi chhora to police se pakrwa dungi"....


Nischal ko ab kya samjh me aaya ki wo kya kah rahi thi, wo bas haan me apna sir hila diya. Haan me usne jaise he sir hilaya, Jivisha halki muskurayi .... "chalo picha chhuta"... Jivisha ko muskurata dekh Nischal bhi muskuraya..... "Lagta hai ye bechari uss kachre ke wajah se paresan thi, ab khush lag rahi hai"


Jivisha muskurati bye ka ishara karte usse chhor kar jane lagi.... Nischal bhi hath hilata uske sath-sath chalne laga.... Jivisha mukurate huye usse fir dekhi aur kahne lagi...... "Darling abhi to kahe the ki tum mera pichha nahi karoge, fir mere sath kyon chal rahe ho... tum apne raste jao main apne raste"


Ek baar fir Nischal ne haan me sir hilaya... Jivisha ko fir laga ki ab ye apne raste jayega aur main apne raste.... wo apne kadam aage badhayi... aur fir se uske sath Nischal bhi chal diya....

Jivisha sir pit'ti wahin jamin par baith gayi aur nakiyate jor se chillayi..... "Mammiiiiiiiii"..... Agle he pal Jivisha khud ko kosne lagi... "wo kaun si manhush ghari jo main bhagi aur ye chipku mil gaya, na main bhagti aur na he ye chipku milta".....

Jivisha in flash back... kuch din pahle....



Buglow ke bahar ki jhalak... Main gate par Swarn Villa likha hua... ander uski pyari mom Priya Rajput apne pati Himanshu Rajput ke sath sofe par baithi hai... uske gode me pariwar ka sab se chhota sadasya yani ki unka pota Chirag Rajpur, apni dadi ke gode me baitha tha aur uski dadi pyar se usse seb khila rahi thi.

Samne se uski bahu Nandita Rajput apne hathon me chay ka tray liye aa rahi. Pahle apne saas sasur ko serve ki fir apne pati Ravi Rajput ki ore chay badha di. Pass me he uska ladla dever Avinash Rajput bhi baitha tha, usse bhi chay deti wo sab ke sath baith gayi....

Chay ki pahli chuski ke sath Papa Himanshu bole.... "Ab tak soyi he hui hai, ye bitte bhar ka bacha jaag gaya aur wo ladki ab tak so rahi hai"

Priya.... Jane do na ji, sone do. Kal der raat tak usne padhai ki hai....

Abhi..... Isliye kahta hun mom thoda bahut khud bhi padh liya karo. Aap ki ladli beti jasusi novel padh rahi thi... koi apne course ki kitab nahi padh rahi thi.

Priya.... Kuch bhi padh to rahi thi na. Wo nahi padhegi, nahi padhegi... shadi kar ke apne sasural jayegi, teri tarah to nahi hai... pura din apne awara doston ke sath ghumta hai aur bhar din mobile me laga rahta hai....

Nadita, hasti hui kahne lagi.... "Maa ji, dever ji ke mobile par to ladkiyon ke bhi phone aate hain"

Priya.... Kya ??? Dekha ji aapne... main shuru se kahti thi ye ladka kuch na krega gawn bhej do isse, wahin apna khet dekhega. Par iss ghar me meri koi sune tab na... dekhna kisi din kisi ladki ko bhaga le aayega to fir mujhe kuch mat kahna....

Abhi apni bhabhi ko ghurte huye dekhne laga.... tabhi bhai Ravi topic ko divert karte kahne lage.... "Bas bhi karo sab, yahan Jivisha ki baat ho rahi thi, aur tum sab Abhi ke pichhe he par gaye"....

Himanshu.... Ek minute tum sab jarra shant ho jao. Mujhe kuch jaruri baat kahni hai...

Sara pariwahe dhyan se Himanshu ki ore dekhne laga...... "Mere dost hai na Punya pratap singh, uska beta abhi-abhi foreign se lauta hai. Dikhne me smart hai, videsh se padh kar lauta hai, aur kuch din baad apne company ko chalayega.... Mujhe to Jivisha ke liye iss se achha rista kahin nahi milega... kya kahte ho tum sab".....

Pura pariwar "Haan-haan" kart charcha karne lage... tabhi chhotu ustad Chirag apni dadi ki gode se utar kar, chupke se apne bua ke kamre me chala aaya...

Jivisha, makhmal ke bistar par, takiye ko apne sine se lagaye muskurati so rahi thi. Chirag ne idhar-udhar dekha aur mej par rakha pani ka jug utha kar Jivisha ke upar pani pura urrel diya....

Jivisha harbara kar uthi aur uth kar baith gayi. Dhime se ek aankh kholi aur samne Chirag.... "Chhotku, tujhe to main aaj batati hun"

Jivisha jhapat kar dauri, wo pure kamre me idhar udhar bhagta raha aur Jivisha uske pichhe-pichhe bhag rahi thi... tabhi Jivisha ne usse pakra aur pakar kar bistar par patak di... "Saitan kahin ka aise jagate hain"

Jivisha usse pakar kar gudgudi karne lagi.... "Bol fir karega aisa... bata"

Chirag.... Heee heee heee ... bua chhoro bhi... bua...

Jivisha.... Bua bol kar chidha raha ruk tujhe abhi batati hun ....

Jivisha uske naak par dant katne lagi.....

Chirag.... Di bolo to maa marti hai, bua kaho to aap gussa karti ho... bhagwan main karun to kya karun....

Jivisha.... Nalayak tum mera beta hai ki apni maa ka. Jo main bolungi wahi karna kisi ki mat saun'na....

Chirag... Thik hai di, ab mujhe chhoro warna aap he fasogi....

Jivisha.... Ohhh ! Ye emergency wake up tha kya...

Chirag apna sir hilate.... Haan di, ye emergency wake up tha.... mukhiya ji aap ki shadi tay kar rahe hain....

Jivisha.... Mukhiya ji ki itni himmat... chal tu mere sath... aaj inki family meeting ki to fis-fis...

Jivisha, bahar hall me aayi... tab tak inki family meeting chal rahi thi aur sab log khusiyan mana rahe the... kyonki un sab ki ore se ye rista pakka ho gaya tha.....

Jivisha ko aate dekh, Priya..... "Bare achhe samay par aayi hai, sun beta har ladki ko ek na ek din"...

"Ek na ek din" par abhi baat chal he rahi thi ki Jivisha apni ek hath aage dikhati..... "Bas... to yahan mukhiya ji ke dekh rekh me puri panchyat bithayi gayi hai meri shadi ke liye. Lekin ek baat aap sab bhi sun lo, aur mukhiya ji khas kar aap... main abhi shadi nahi karungi"

Himanshu... Par kyon beta, itna achha rista hai.. hum sab ko pasand hai, fir tu kyon inkaar kar rahi hai.. dekh hum sab tera bhala he chahte hain....

Abhi.... Ye na karne wali hai shadi kyonki ye to pahle se he apna bf pasand kar chuki hai... main shuru se kahta tha ki iska aur Videh ka koi chakkar chal raha tab kaun tha jo mujhe naroow minded kahta tha....

Jivisha apni bhawen sikori... muh chamkayi..... "Bhaiya main aap ka khun kar dungi. Papa dekha na kaise awara ladkon ke sath rah-rah kar inki soch bhi gandi ho gayi hai. Chhi, aisi baten... aaj ke baad iss gandi soch wale se mera rista khatam. Main tumhe ab rakhi bhi nahi bandhungi"...

Abhi... Kaun sa free me bandhti hai. Last time scooty li thi bhul gayi. Main he tha jo sab se lar kar tujhe scooty diya tha. Abhi tu mujhe he suna rahi hai. Papa aap ne jaisa socha hai waisa he hoga...

Jivisha.... Nahi, main abhi shadi nahi karungi... yadi jabardasti kiye to main aap sab par police case kar dungi....

Himanshu.... Sab chup... beta yadi Abhi jhoot kah raha hai, aur tu ne kisi ko pahle se pasand nahi kiya to baat kya hai inkaar ki....

Jivisha ke chehre par faili muskaan .... wo tahalti hui apni baat kahne lagi....

"Nahi mera koi bf nahi aur koi hoga bhi nahi... mera to prince charm aayega... Jab wo aayega to hawa me ek ajib si khusbu hogi, mahol surmayi tarange bikherenge.... uska roop itna lubhawna hoga ki dil me utar jaye. Aur jab uss ko mujhe se pyar hoga to nile asman me wo I Love You likh dega... Dekhna wo pure himmat ke sath, aap sab ki aankhon me aankhen dal kar, mujhe aap sab se magne aayega... Bas ussi ke intzar me hun, aur main ussi se shadi karungi".....

Idhar Jivisha apne sapney me khoyi apni dil ki baat pure pariwar ko bata rahi thi, aur udhar uski maa ka B.P high hota ja raha tha......
aise kaise picha chhod de nischal.. akhir darti pe pehli dost wohi toh hai.. :D dekho uske liye paise tak fad diya.... aur jivu hai ki bina wajah rone ki acting kar rahin hai :D
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yeh jivu ke gharwale ufff til ko tad bana de..
Btw yeh underline mat diya kijiye :smile:
Khair ab intezaar bas woh iconic kirdaar ki... nandini..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 
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