Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Idhar Jivisha apne sapney me khoyi apni dil ki baat pure pariwar ko bata rahi thi, aur udhar uski maa ka B.P high hota ja raha tha......


Jivisha jaise he apni baat kah kar aage mudi...... "chatakkkkk.... chatakkkkk" do thappad Jivisha ke gal par....


Pura ghar shocked.... Sab ke muh khule ke khule rah gaye..... butt ban kar jaise sab apni jagah khadey ho....


Himanshu.... Priya, bachon ko koi aise marta hai kya...


Priya.... Himmat to dekho iss ladki ki, sab ke samne kaise besharmon ki tarah kah rahi hai. Jarra bhi sharm na aayi isse. Suniye ji ye aap sab ke lad pyar ka natija hai. Ek he baat hogi yadi ye shadi na hui to main zahar kha lungi....


Himanshu.... Ye kya pagalpan hai Priya....


Jivisha action me aati.... "Bas mukhiya ji bas.... ab no argument... aap sab yahi chahte hain na ki main aap sab ki marji se shadi kar lun, to thik hai bajwaeye dhol, kar dijiye mere hath pile... meri khushi na mili to na sahi, aap sab ki khushiyon ke liye ji lungi"....


Aisa laga jaise background me abhi se he sahnaeyan baj gayi ho. Ghar wale sab khush. Jivisha sab ka chehra dekhti sochne lagi.....


"Kamal hai ye to, maine senty dialogue mare to kisi ne bhi ye na kaha, achha thik hai teri pasand se he shadi karenge. Meri baat ko ulta meri rajamandi samjh kar aise khush ho rahe jaise ladka abhi pass hota to abhi he shadi kara ke vida kar dete. Pagal, ullu, jhalli, barboli kahin ki... aur maar le dialogue"....


Ussi din ladkey aur ladki, dono ne ek dusre ko dekh kar pasand bhi kar liya. Agle din magni tay aur 10 din baad ki tarikh bhi pakki ho gayi.......



Raat ke waqt....


Chirag apni bua ke kamre me aaya aur uske gode me apna sir rakh kar so gaya.... Jivisha uske galon ke chumti puchhne lagi..... "Kya hua mere bache ko, aaj itna gumsum kyon hai"


Chirag, Jivisha ke gal par hath ferte kahne laga..... "Bahut gandi hai dadi, aap ko kitni jor se mara"


Jivisha.... Achha, tab tune kuch kaha kyon nahi, bas chup-chap dekhta raha...


Chirag.... Dadi thi na isliye chhor diya, koi aur hota to chir far deta...


Jivisha.... Basss, bahut badmas ho gaya hai. Yahi sikhaya hai kya maine tujhe...


Chirag.... Haan to, aap ko koi kuch karega to kya main chup rahunga...


Jivisha.... Maar khayega betu, kahi na bass... waise ye bata tu abhi yahan kya kar raha hai... sone nahi gaya.... fir koi presani hai kya...


Chirag..... Di aap kaise sab samjh jati ho....


Jivisha.... Tu to mera bacha hai, tujhe na samjhungi to kise samjhungi...


Chirag..... Di main mathmatics me fail ho gaya. Aaj to aap ke shadi ke baat ke karan bach gaya, lekin kal mamma mujhe mar degi... bacha lo please...


Jivisha.... Tu fail kaise ho gaya.... Fail hone wala to tu nahi tha. Kya karan hai tumhare fail hone ki.


Chirag.... Di tum bhi reason he puchogi, ya mujhe save karogi.


Jivisha, aakhen dikhate.... "Jaldi muh kholo"


Chirag.... Di, wo meri gf fail hoti to uski maa bahut marti, aur uske pass to meri tarah pyari di bhi nahi, jo usse save kar sake, isliye maine paper exchange kar diye. Bahut cute hai wo di, bilkul aap ki tarah.


Jivisha uss ki baat sun kar hasne lagi...... "Bitte bhar ka ho kar abhi se tere pass gf bhi hai"


Idhar Himanshu, subah hui ghatna par apni patni ko sunate huye kahne laga.... "Priya, Jivisha ko mari kyon".


Priya.... Aap ne nahi dekha kaise wo badh-chadh kar bol rahi thi...


Himanshu.... Bachi hai wo... apne armaan humare pass nahi kahegi to kya padosiyon ke pass kahegi. Aur kya burai hai yadi wo apne pasand ke ladkey se shadi karegi...


Priya.... Aap ko to koi bhi baat galat he nahi lagti. Chadha lo usse sir par...


Humanshu.... Had hai, shadi ka matlab beti khush rahe jiske bhi sath rahe. Humara kaam to itna dekhna hai ki ladka wo chune ya hum, bas chunaw galat nahi ho... tabhi to bachi khush rahegi. Kya maa-baap se ladka pasand karne me galti nahi hoti...


Priya.... Haan thik hai samjh gayi, mujhe hath nahi uthana chahiye tha. Lekin mujhe bura laga to hath uth gaya. Gussa kyon nahi aayega aap batao. Aap ko to pata he hai na, Jivisha ke bare me, uski kundli, uski indriyan gyan aur uski alp aayu. Aap bhawnao me bah kar pahle bhi 5 shadi cancel kar chuke ho. Par iss baar nahi Himanshu... Jivisha ki slamati ke liye hume ye shadi kisi tarah karwani he hogi, fir chahe wo mane ya na mane.


Himanshu.... Maan to gayi hai wo, fir kyon itni paresan ho rahi ho....


Priya... Haan, maan gayi hai.... Natunki kar rahi hai nautanki, Jaroor wo apne dimag me kuch khichdi paka rahi hogi...


Humanshu.... Hahaha... to chalo uske dimag ki khichdi kha kar aate hain....


Himanshu aur Priya, dono ke kadam badh chale the Jivisha ke kamre ki ore. Dono jab uske gate par pahunche, tabhi Chirag aur Jivisha ki baten bhi shuru hui thi. Dada, dadi apne pote ki baat par hase bina rah nahi paye.....


Priya, hasti hui ander aayi.... "Ohh hoo, to Bua-Bhatije me ye khichdi pak rahi hai. Kyon re main gandi hun, ruk abhi teri maa ko main teri kartut batati hun".


Chirag jhat se apne dadi ke dono paun pakar kar...... "Nai, nai, nai... dadi please maa ko mat bolna. Janti to ho kitni khukhar hai wo. Main to bas didi ko khush karne ke liye aap ko aisa bol diya. Sachi.... baki aap to meri pyari dadi ho....


Himanshu.... Ha, ha, ha.... Chal ja ab so ja.


Chirag.... Kyon mukhiya ji iss baar Di se private panchayat karne aa gaye....


Jivisha, Chirag ko aankhen dikhati.... "Badmassss.... aisa bolte hain... chal bhag"


Priya.... Beta I am sorry. Gusse me mera hath uth gaya....


Jivisha, apne maa ke gale me dono hath dal kar usse hilati hui kahne lagi.... "Koi na maa, do aur maar lo, mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga. Par.. maaaaaa... ye shadi... please mujhe nahi karni na... fir bhi jabardasti sab tay kar diye. Kya main kisi ke sath bhagi ja rahi thi jo itni jaldi sab kuch tay kar diya...


Himanshu, Apni beti ke sir par hath ferte..... "Aaj na kal, shadi to karni he thi na. Waise ab bhi kuch na hua hai, tumhe agar ab bhi lagta hai ki hum jabardasti kar rahe to main Punya ko bol kar cancel kar deta hun ye rista. Par beta jarra soch... jaise ladkey ki tu talash kar rahi thi wo gun tere hone wale pati me bhi to ho sakta hai na.... sirf iss baat ke liye shadi se inkaar kar dena ki arrange marriage hai, jayaj to nahi"....


Jivisha...... Thoda bura lag raha tha ki aap ne meri feeling nahi suni, bas sab tay kar diya, lekin ab khush hun. Aap ki baat samjh me aa gayi papa, mera prince charm mera hone wala he hai... aur yadi waisa nahi hua to belan se maar-maar ke usse apne khawon ka sahzada bana dungi....


Shadi ke din.....


Sahnaeyan bajna shuru ho gayi thi. Din ke 2 baj kar 22 min ka subh muhrrat nikla tha... Pura ghar saza tha, har koi khush tha. Papa ki aankhen na jane aaj subah se he kyon nam thi... Chhote bhaiya Avinash jo hamesa khinchatani karte rahta tha, na jane usse aaj kya ho gaya tha... bas apni bahan se pyar he jata raha tha.


Maa shadi ki sari rashmon ko pura karne me lagi thi... Bare bhaiya aur bhabhi sare guest ka swagat aur unke dekhbhal me lage the. Ek achhe host ki tarah welcome karne me lage huye the... Mandap saja... barat aayi, Dulhe-Dulhan ki pahli jhalak sab ne jaymala stage par dekhi... Sab ke muh se ek he baat nikal rahi thi... "Kya jodi hai, made for each other"


Jaymala chal rahi thi, Jivisha ko sab upar uthaye the, uska hone wala dulha Shresh usse war-mala dalne ki kosis kar raha tha. Hansi-mazak ka mahol tha, tabhi Shresh ke mobile ki ghanti baji, aur uss ne pick kar ke usse baad me call karne ko kaha.


Kisi ko iss harkat se koi fark nahi para kyonki chhanik mamla tha, Shresh ne ek line msg diya aur uss mahol me ram gaya tha. Lekin ye baat Jivisha ne notice kar li....


Jaymale ke baad wo apne kamre me akeli baithi thi, idhar shadi ke mandap par tab tak rashmen nibhayi ja rahi thi.....


"Kya karun, kisi se kahungi ki ye ladka thik nahi to sab emotional drama karne lagenge. Fir itne sare ristedar, izzat-bejjati.... Bhag Jivisha bhag, itne jhamelon se achha hai ki abhi nikal le. Sab thoda naraj he honge na, koi na apne he ghar ke log hain mana lungi"


Idhar 2 baje pandit ji ne awaz laga di.... "dulhan ko le kar aaeye, vivah ka subh muhrat nikla ja raha hai"


Teen-char ladkiyan gayi Jivisha ke kamre tak, aur sabhi daurti hui wapas aa kar chillane lagi..... "Dulhan apne kamre me nahi hai, wo bhag gayi"......

 

[nain11ster]

Update:-4​

Teen-char ladkiyan gayi Jivisha ke kamre tak, aur sabhi daurti hui wapas aa kar chillane lagi..... "Dulhan apne kamre me nahi hai, wo bhag gayi"......


Jivisha apne chhote se flashback ko yaad kar ke, niche baithi bas yahi soch rahi thi.... "Iss chipku se to jyada achha main uss chipku se he shadi kar leti, bhagwan sare twist aaj he de dena kal ke liye kuch mat chhorna"


Jivisha itna soch kar jaise he apne khyalon se bahar aayi, thik uske bagal me Nischal baitha tha...... Usse dekhte he Jivisha fir se thunakte huye jor-jor se rone lagi......


"Ab ye ladki ro kyon rahi hai, isse fir kya ho gaya. Mujhe yahan ki bhasha sikhni hogi, tabhi iss ladki se mujhe kuch fayda bhi milega..."


Nischal uske pass se utha aur ek side me chala gaya... high-tect yantr apne jeb se nikal kar uske wire apne sir ke dono side laga diya. Apne aankhen munda aur concentrate karte huye Serin.. Serin bar-barane laga..... Thodi he der me dusre ore se bhi respond hua....


Nischal..... Serin iss location ko trace karo aur yahan ki ajib si bhasha ko decode kar ke upload karo.

Serin.... Lightwave frequency to kafi dur ki lag rahi hai. Nischal tum itni dur pahunche kaise... aur yahan sab tumhe bhagode kyon kah rahe hain ?....


Nischal.... Jise jo kahna hai kahne do, mujhe kya karna hai. Tumhe jo kaha tum bas wahi karo....


Serin... Par Nischal...


Nischa.... Koi bahas nahi. Jitna kaha, utna chup-chap karo....


Jivisha ne jab rona shuru kiya, tabhi Nischal uth kar chala aaya. Usne jab aankhe kholi tab tak Nischal ja chuka tha.


"Thank god, jaan bachi... pahle he rone lagti to itna drama nahi hota. Ab jara main relax ho kar station se bahar niklun fir sochti hun aage kya karna hai"


Jivisha Kalyan junction ke bahar aayi. Raat andheri thi aur junction ke bahar ka mahol bhi kuch achha nahi, upar se ek akeli ladki jo dulhan ke vesh me upar se niche tak saji thi. Jivisha jab bahar nikli tab se he uska pichha hona shuru ho gaya.


Idhar Jivisha wahan se nikalte he sab se pahle kaam apna huliya badlne ka sochi. Wahin najdiki ek mall me ghusi aur apna huliya change kiya, aur bahar aa gayi.... "Huliya to change kar liya ab jarra pet puja ho jaye to kuch sochun aage kya karna hai"


Mast khana khayi, khate-khate usse khyal aaya..... "Mumbai me rahi to fasna pakka hai, kyon na kuch dino ke liye apne dost ke pass Indore chala jaye, aakhir uss par mere itne ehsaan bhi hai"... Fir kya tha Jivisha jaldi se khana khatam ki aur wapas Kalyan junction aa gayi.


Kismat, Kalyan junction par Indore jane wali train ka announcment bhi ho raha tha, Jivisha bhagi-bhagi train pakrne pahunch gayi. Lekin in sab ke bich usse pata bhi na chala ki usko lutne ki puri planning ban chuki hai, aur 5 gundey uske pichhe lage hain.


Idhar Saren se baat kar ke jab tak Nischal lauta, tab tak wo ja chuki thi. Afsos usse bahut hua, abhi-abhi to kisi se pahchan hui thi, wo bhi kahin gum ho gayi. Nischal bhi Kalyan junction par tab se Jivisha ko he dhund raha tha....


Jivisha, Indore jane ke liye bhagi, bhagi train pakrne ja rahi thi, uske pichhe-pichhe wo sare gundey, aur unke pichhe Nischal. Sabhi sleeper class me pahunche.


Jivisa compartment ke ander pahla kadam he dali thi ki usse wahi lady mil gayi jo pichhli train me thi. Jivisha ko dekhte he wo.... "Arre beta tum bhi Indore ja rahi ho kya, aur tumhare husband kahan hai, nahi mila kya ?"


"Bhagwan, yahan log kitne fursat me hote hain, isse to sab yaad hai"...... Jivisha ajib si jabardasti wali hansi, hasti hui kahne lagi..... "Pata nahi aunty kahan chala gaya. Koi aisa bhi karta hai kya, batao ?"


Jivisha apni kahani suna he rahi thi ki samne Nischal aa kar khada ho gaya..... "Hey bhagwan, ab to lagta hai main train se kud he jaun".


Jivisha man me apna rona ro rahi thi, Nischal thik uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya..... Nischal ko samne khada dekh wo lady uss se puchhne lagi..... "Kaun ho tum, yahan aa kar kyon khadey ho gaye. Ye humari reserve berth hai"


"Ye naye log mujh se kuch kah raha hai, sayad mere bare me puchh rahe honge... main isse isharon me batata hun ki main aur ye, hum dono ek dusre ko jante hain"..... Nischal ne apna he solution nikala aur uss lady se "Muaahhh... muahhhh" ka ishara karte batane laga ki Jivisha ne usse kiss kiya... wo usse janta hai"...


Bas fir kya tha, wo lady ko laga yahi hai Jivisha ka pati. Fir kya tha uss lady ka pura khandan toot para uss par...... "Aisa koi karta hai kya... apni biwi ko koi chhor kar jata hai kya ... ye wo, bla-bla"...


Nischal chup-chap sunta raha aur soch chuka tha, ab to kuch bhi ho jaye wo yahan se jayega nahi. Idhar Jivisha..... "Cool haan, to in logon ne ristedari bhi jor diya. Koi na main samjh gayi iss chipku se to ab Indore me he pichha chhutega. Jivisha beta go with flow, ab aur jyada yahan koi drama nahi".


Jivisha ne bhi sahmati dete huye, usse apna pati swikar kar li. Nischal ki harkaton ko bhanpte fir to Jivisha ne lambi chahuri kahani bana di...... "Mera pati bol aur sun nahi sakta. Ye mujhe bahut pyara lagta hai, isliye maine iss se shadi kar li"


Baton ka daur lamba he chalta gaya aur Jivisha bhi puri kahani par kahani banati rahi. Nischal ko to kuch samjh me aane se raha, sab ko dekh wo bas apna sir he hilata raha.


Idhar wo sare chor ussi berth ke dayen-bayen unki baton ko sun rahe the. Pati gunga, patni ke pass lakhon ka maal.... kaam to pahle se aasan tha, ab bas sone ka intzar ho raha tha.


Raat ke takriban 3 baje wo chor active huye aur Jivisha ka sara maal lootne ki kosis karne me lag gaye. Bare he chaturai se usne Jivisha ka bag urraya, aur urra kar chain pulling kar ke train se bahg gaye....


Train se jab wo niche utar kar aapas me apni saflta par khush ho rahe the tabhi samne se unhe Nischal dikha.... Nischal ko dekh kar sabhi chaunk gaye..... "Abe tu to so raha tha, yahan kya urri maar kar aaya"


Dusra aadmi.... "Tu bhi kahan gunge se baat kar raha hai. Ye sale... inka sixth sence kafi tej hota hai. Maar isse aur nikalte hain yahan se...


Sab ne marne par sahmati diya aur Nischal ki ore lapatne daure. Nischal ka dhyan to sirf uske hath me para Jivisha ke saman ke upar tha. Nischal ne kuch jyada mehnat nahi kiya. Wo log samne se aa rahe the, Nischal side se bhagta usse apne pichhe aane par majboor kiya... aur jab wo log Nischal ke pichhe bari teji se daur rahe the, tabhi wo ruk kar ek kadam pichhe hua aur jhappatta marta bag chhin kar fir se daur laga diya.


Nischal daudte huye chalti train me aaram se chadh gaya.... Jivisha aur baki sare log ab bhi so rahe the, Nischal ne bhi apni jagah pakar li. Nischal Jivisha ko dekhte huye sochne laga.... "Kuch alag he khinchaw hai iss ladki me. Aakhir mera itna jhukaw kyon ho raha hai. Jo bhi ho Saren jaldi yahan ki bhasa decode kare fir dekhte hain ye kitne kaam aa sakti hai ye".


Raat ko fir sabhi mast nind lene lage. Agle din train Indore pahunchi... Jivisha rahat ki sans leti sochne lagi.... "Ab to iss family aur iss chipku dono se chhutkara milega"


Bhid puri utarne me lagi thi, Nischal aur wo family jab utarne ke liye aage badhe, Jivisha teji dikhati hui dusre gate se utar gayi..... dusre gate se jaise he utri, uski najar apne dost Nandni par gayi....


"Aahhh bahgwan, kal se le kar aaj tak me yahi ek sahi kaam kiye ho. Thank you"... Jivisha bhag kar Nandita ke pass pahunchi aur uska hath pakar kar khinchti hui usse bahar ki taraf le jane lagi.


Pune ka koi dost, yun achanak se Indore station par, na kuch kaha, na kuch suna... sidha hath khinchte huye bahar le jane lage..... Shocking...


Nandni, Jivisha ka hanth khinch kar roki..... "Duffer, ye sab kya hai"


Jivisha..... Time nahi mere pass raste me puri baat batati hun.


Nandni.... Yaar meri puri family issi train se utar rahi hai.... main unhe receive karne aayi hun. Pata nahi tere baat par kya reaction dun. Ruk main unko receive kar ke tere sath chaliti hun...


Jivisha, uska hanth khinchti..... "Wo kya bache hain jo station par gum ho jayenge... main yahan itni musibat me hun... itna samjh ki yadi usne mujhe dekh liya to main mari jaungi...


Nandni.... Kyaaaa ????


Jivisha, fir se uska hanth khinchti.... "Tu ye shocking expression baad me bhi sakti hai, abhi tu chal na please. Ye mere zindgi aur maut ka sawal hai"


Baat ki gahrai ko samjhte, Nandni bhi uske sath teji se bahar ki ore nikli. Jivisha ko dilasha deti hui kahne lagi.... "Tu dar mat Indore me tujhe kisi baat ki chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi. Koi tere pichhe para hai ye baat tu phone par batati to ab tak uski band yahin baj jati",


Baat karte dono bahar aa gaye aur dono chal diye ghar ki taraf. Raste me jab Jivisha ne apni puri kahani usse bayan ki to Nandita apna sir pit'ti kahne lagi.....


"Jisa teri to. Kamini kahin ki, jahil gawar ullu. Tere melodrama ke chakkar me tu to fasti he hai, dusron ko bhi shock de deti hai. Waise ek baat bata tujhe jaroorat kya thi usse kiss karne ki... itne bare station par kahin bhi kona pakar leti".


Jivisha... Nandu situation he aisi thi, wo log itne pass aa gaye the ki mujhe majbooran kiss karna para. Khair tum nahi samjhegi....


Dono baat karte huye ghar pahunch gaye. Un dono ko pahunche 5 min bhi nahi huye honge ki pichhe se Nadni ka pura pariwar pahunch gaya.... Jivisha ke aankhon ke samne wahi pariwar jo train me mili thi, aur unke sath tha Nischal bhi....


Unhe dekhte he Jivisha ke muh se nikal gaya...... "Hey bhagwan"

 

[Iron Man]

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Filhal only one comment man ke chaliye kyonki 30 + Running stories padh raha hu to abhi new story join karna possible na hai

 

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Filhal only one comment man ke chaliye kyonki 30 + Running stories padh raha hu to abhi new story join karna possible na hai

ji .... kafi busy rakha hai aapne apne aap ko .. keep enjoying story

 

[Naina]

Update:-3​

Idhar Jivisha apne sapney me khoyi apni dil ki baat pure pariwar ko bata rahi thi, aur udhar uski maa ka B.P high hota ja raha tha......


Jivisha jaise he apni baat kah kar aage mudi...... "chatakkkkk.... chatakkkkk" do thappad Jivisha ke gal par....


Pura ghar shocked.... Sab ke muh khule ke khule rah gaye..... butt ban kar jaise sab apni jagah khadey ho....


Himanshu.... Priya, bachon ko koi aise marta hai kya...


Priya.... Himmat to dekho iss ladki ki, sab ke samne kaise besharmon ki tarah kah rahi hai. Jarra bhi sharm na aayi isse. Suniye ji ye aap sab ke lad pyar ka natija hai. Ek he baat hogi yadi ye shadi na hui to main zahar kha lungi....


Himanshu.... Ye kya pagalpan hai Priya....


Jivisha action me aati.... "Bas mukhiya ji bas.... ab no argument... aap sab yahi chahte hain na ki main aap sab ki marji se shadi kar lun, to thik hai bajwaeye dhol, kar dijiye mere hath pile... meri khushi na mili to na sahi, aap sab ki khushiyon ke liye ji lungi"....


Aisa laga jaise background me abhi se he sahnaeyan baj gayi ho. Ghar wale sab khush. Jivisha sab ka chehra dekhti sochne lagi.....


"Kamal hai ye to, maine senty dialogue mare to kisi ne bhi ye na kaha, achha thik hai teri pasand se he shadi karenge. Meri baat ko ulta meri rajamandi samjh kar aise khush ho rahe jaise ladka abhi pass hota to abhi he shadi kara ke vida kar dete. Pagal, ullu, jhalli, barboli kahin ki... aur maar le dialogue"....


Ussi din ladkey aur ladki, dono ne ek dusre ko dekh kar pasand bhi kar liya. Agle din magni tay aur 10 din baad ki tarikh bhi pakki ho gayi.......



Raat ke waqt....


Chirag apni bua ke kamre me aaya aur uske gode me apna sir rakh kar so gaya.... Jivisha uske galon ke chumti puchhne lagi..... "Kya hua mere bache ko, aaj itna gumsum kyon hai"


Chirag, Jivisha ke gal par hath ferte kahne laga..... "Bahut gandi hai dadi, aap ko kitni jor se mara"


Jivisha.... Achha, tab tune kuch kaha kyon nahi, bas chup-chap dekhta raha...


Chirag.... Dadi thi na isliye chhor diya, koi aur hota to chir far deta...


Jivisha.... Basss, bahut badmas ho gaya hai. Yahi sikhaya hai kya maine tujhe...


Chirag.... Haan to, aap ko koi kuch karega to kya main chup rahunga...


Jivisha.... Maar khayega betu, kahi na bass... waise ye bata tu abhi yahan kya kar raha hai... sone nahi gaya.... fir koi presani hai kya...


Chirag..... Di aap kaise sab samjh jati ho....


Jivisha.... Tu to mera bacha hai, tujhe na samjhungi to kise samjhungi...


Chirag..... Di main mathmatics me fail ho gaya. Aaj to aap ke shadi ke baat ke karan bach gaya, lekin kal mamma mujhe mar degi... bacha lo please...


Jivisha.... Tu fail kaise ho gaya.... Fail hone wala to tu nahi tha. Kya karan hai tumhare fail hone ki.


Chirag.... Di tum bhi reason he puchogi, ya mujhe save karogi.


Jivisha, aakhen dikhate.... "Jaldi muh kholo"


Chirag.... Di, wo meri gf fail hoti to uski maa bahut marti, aur uske pass to meri tarah pyari di bhi nahi, jo usse save kar sake, isliye maine paper exchange kar diye. Bahut cute hai wo di, bilkul aap ki tarah.


Jivisha uss ki baat sun kar hasne lagi...... "Bitte bhar ka ho kar abhi se tere pass gf bhi hai"


Idhar Himanshu, subah hui ghatna par apni patni ko sunate huye kahne laga.... "Priya, Jivisha ko mari kyon".


Priya.... Aap ne nahi dekha kaise wo badh-chadh kar bol rahi thi...


Himanshu.... Bachi hai wo... apne armaan humare pass nahi kahegi to kya padosiyon ke pass kahegi. Aur kya burai hai yadi wo apne pasand ke ladkey se shadi karegi...


Priya.... Aap ko to koi bhi baat galat he nahi lagti. Chadha lo usse sir par...


Humanshu.... Had hai, shadi ka matlab beti khush rahe jiske bhi sath rahe. Humara kaam to itna dekhna hai ki ladka wo chune ya hum, bas chunaw galat nahi ho... tabhi to bachi khush rahegi. Kya maa-baap se ladka pasand karne me galti nahi hoti...


Priya.... Haan thik hai samjh gayi, mujhe hath nahi uthana chahiye tha. Lekin mujhe bura laga to hath uth gaya. Gussa kyon nahi aayega aap batao. Aap ko to pata he hai na, Jivisha ke bare me, uski kundli, uski indriyan gyan aur uski alp aayu. Aap bhawnao me bah kar pahle bhi 5 shadi cancel kar chuke ho. Par iss baar nahi Himanshu... Jivisha ki slamati ke liye hume ye shadi kisi tarah karwani he hogi, fir chahe wo mane ya na mane.


Himanshu.... Maan to gayi hai wo, fir kyon itni paresan ho rahi ho....


Priya... Haan, maan gayi hai.... Natunki kar rahi hai nautanki, Jaroor wo apne dimag me kuch khichdi paka rahi hogi...


Humanshu.... Hahaha... to chalo uske dimag ki khichdi kha kar aate hain....


Himanshu aur Priya, dono ke kadam badh chale the Jivisha ke kamre ki ore. Dono jab uske gate par pahunche, tabhi Chirag aur Jivisha ki baten bhi shuru hui thi. Dada, dadi apne pote ki baat par hase bina rah nahi paye.....


Priya, hasti hui ander aayi.... "Ohh hoo, to Bua-Bhatije me ye khichdi pak rahi hai. Kyon re main gandi hun, ruk abhi teri maa ko main teri kartut batati hun".


Chirag jhat se apne dadi ke dono paun pakar kar...... "Nai, nai, nai... dadi please maa ko mat bolna. Janti to ho kitni khukhar hai wo. Main to bas didi ko khush karne ke liye aap ko aisa bol diya. Sachi.... baki aap to meri pyari dadi ho....


Himanshu.... Ha, ha, ha.... Chal ja ab so ja.


Chirag.... Kyon mukhiya ji iss baar Di se private panchayat karne aa gaye....


Jivisha, Chirag ko aankhen dikhati.... "Badmassss.... aisa bolte hain... chal bhag"


Priya.... Beta I am sorry. Gusse me mera hath uth gaya....


Jivisha, apne maa ke gale me dono hath dal kar usse hilati hui kahne lagi.... "Koi na maa, do aur maar lo, mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga. Par.. maaaaaa... ye shadi... please mujhe nahi karni na... fir bhi jabardasti sab tay kar diye. Kya main kisi ke sath bhagi ja rahi thi jo itni jaldi sab kuch tay kar diya...


Himanshu, Apni beti ke sir par hath ferte..... "Aaj na kal, shadi to karni he thi na. Waise ab bhi kuch na hua hai, tumhe agar ab bhi lagta hai ki hum jabardasti kar rahe to main Punya ko bol kar cancel kar deta hun ye rista. Par beta jarra soch... jaise ladkey ki tu talash kar rahi thi wo gun tere hone wale pati me bhi to ho sakta hai na.... sirf iss baat ke liye shadi se inkaar kar dena ki arrange marriage hai, jayaj to nahi"....


Jivisha...... Thoda bura lag raha tha ki aap ne meri feeling nahi suni, bas sab tay kar diya, lekin ab khush hun. Aap ki baat samjh me aa gayi papa, mera prince charm mera hone wala he hai... aur yadi waisa nahi hua to belan se maar-maar ke usse apne khawon ka sahzada bana dungi....


Shadi ke din.....


Sahnaeyan bajna shuru ho gayi thi. Din ke 2 baj kar 22 min ka subh muhrrat nikla tha... Pura ghar saza tha, har koi khush tha. Papa ki aankhen na jane aaj subah se he kyon nam thi... Chhote bhaiya Avinash jo hamesa khinchatani karte rahta tha, na jane usse aaj kya ho gaya tha... bas apni bahan se pyar he jata raha tha.


Maa shadi ki sari rashmon ko pura karne me lagi thi... Bare bhaiya aur bhabhi sare guest ka swagat aur unke dekhbhal me lage the. Ek achhe host ki tarah welcome karne me lage huye the... Mandap saja... barat aayi, Dulhe-Dulhan ki pahli jhalak sab ne jaymala stage par dekhi... Sab ke muh se ek he baat nikal rahi thi... "Kya jodi hai, made for each other"


Jaymala chal rahi thi, Jivisha ko sab upar uthaye the, uska hone wala dulha Shresh usse war-mala dalne ki kosis kar raha tha. Hansi-mazak ka mahol tha, tabhi Shresh ke mobile ki ghanti baji, aur uss ne pick kar ke usse baad me call karne ko kaha.


Kisi ko iss harkat se koi fark nahi para kyonki chhanik mamla tha, Shresh ne ek line msg diya aur uss mahol me ram gaya tha. Lekin ye baat Jivisha ne notice kar li....


Jaymale ke baad wo apne kamre me akeli baithi thi, idhar shadi ke mandap par tab tak rashmen nibhayi ja rahi thi.....


"Kya karun, kisi se kahungi ki ye ladka thik nahi to sab emotional drama karne lagenge. Fir itne sare ristedar, izzat-bejjati.... Bhag Jivisha bhag, itne jhamelon se achha hai ki abhi nikal le. Sab thoda naraj he honge na, koi na apne he ghar ke log hain mana lungi"


Idhar 2 baje pandit ji ne awaz laga di.... "dulhan ko le kar aaeye, vivah ka subh muhrat nikla ja raha hai"


Teen-char ladkiyan gayi Jivisha ke kamre tak, aur sabhi daurti hui wapas aa kar chillane lagi..... "Dulhan apne kamre me nahi hai, wo bhag gayi"......

sabke sab ek badhkar ek hai.... par hai bade pyaare kirdaar... inki nautanki bhi dil ko chu jaye... aur sabse bada natkhat woh chhota packet chirag uska kya kahne... baatein toh dekho chhotu ki... waise hath uthna yeh sahi baat nahin hai... aur yeh kya baat huyi.. Beti shaadi nahin karegi toh jahar hi kha legi...

Pagal, ullu, jhalli, barboli kahin ki... aur maar le dialogue"....

Khud ko kitni baar bolegi yeh same dialogue

Khair jivu ki sixth sense ne ushe shresh ko leke joh chetaavanee di hai woh galat nahin hai..
So old formula... udi maar li ghar se.. panchi bani udti phire mast gagan mein
let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji

 

[Naina]

Update:-4​

Teen-char ladkiyan gayi Jivisha ke kamre tak, aur sabhi daurti hui wapas aa kar chillane lagi..... "Dulhan apne kamre me nahi hai, wo bhag gayi"......


Jivisha apne chhote se flashback ko yaad kar ke, niche baithi bas yahi soch rahi thi.... "Iss chipku se to jyada achha main uss chipku se he shadi kar leti, bhagwan sare twist aaj he de dena kal ke liye kuch mat chhorna"


Jivisha itna soch kar jaise he apne khyalon se bahar aayi, thik uske bagal me Nischal baitha tha...... Usse dekhte he Jivisha fir se thunakte huye jor-jor se rone lagi......


"Ab ye ladki ro kyon rahi hai, isse fir kya ho gaya. Mujhe yahan ki bhasha sikhni hogi, tabhi iss ladki se mujhe kuch fayda bhi milega..."


Nischal uske pass se utha aur ek side me chala gaya... high-tect yantr apne jeb se nikal kar uske wire apne sir ke dono side laga diya. Apne aankhen munda aur concentrate karte huye Serin.. Serin bar-barane laga..... Thodi he der me dusre ore se bhi respond hua....


Nischal..... Serin iss location ko trace karo aur yahan ki ajib si bhasha ko decode kar ke upload karo.

Serin.... Lightwave frequency to kafi dur ki lag rahi hai. Nischal tum itni dur pahunche kaise... aur yahan sab tumhe bhagode kyon kah rahe hain ?....


Nischal.... Jise jo kahna hai kahne do, mujhe kya karna hai. Tumhe jo kaha tum bas wahi karo....


Serin... Par Nischal...


Nischa.... Koi bahas nahi. Jitna kaha, utna chup-chap karo....


Jivisha ne jab rona shuru kiya, tabhi Nischal uth kar chala aaya. Usne jab aankhe kholi tab tak Nischal ja chuka tha.


"Thank god, jaan bachi... pahle he rone lagti to itna drama nahi hota. Ab jara main relax ho kar station se bahar niklun fir sochti hun aage kya karna hai"


Jivisha Kalyan junction ke bahar aayi. Raat andheri thi aur junction ke bahar ka mahol bhi kuch achha nahi, upar se ek akeli ladki jo dulhan ke vesh me upar se niche tak saji thi. Jivisha jab bahar nikli tab se he uska pichha hona shuru ho gaya.


Idhar Jivisha wahan se nikalte he sab se pahle kaam apna huliya badlne ka sochi. Wahin najdiki ek mall me ghusi aur apna huliya change kiya, aur bahar aa gayi.... "Huliya to change kar liya ab jarra pet puja ho jaye to kuch sochun aage kya karna hai"


Mast khana khayi, khate-khate usse khyal aaya..... "Mumbai me rahi to fasna pakka hai, kyon na kuch dino ke liye apne dost ke pass Indore chala jaye, aakhir uss par mere itne ehsaan bhi hai"... Fir kya tha Jivisha jaldi se khana khatam ki aur wapas Kalyan junction aa gayi.


Kismat, Kalyan junction par Indore jane wali train ka announcment bhi ho raha tha, Jivisha bhagi-bhagi train pakrne pahunch gayi. Lekin in sab ke bich usse pata bhi na chala ki usko lutne ki puri planning ban chuki hai, aur 5 gundey uske pichhe lage hain.


Idhar Saren se baat kar ke jab tak Nischal lauta, tab tak wo ja chuki thi. Afsos usse bahut hua, abhi-abhi to kisi se pahchan hui thi, wo bhi kahin gum ho gayi. Nischal bhi Kalyan junction par tab se Jivisha ko he dhund raha tha....


Jivisha, Indore jane ke liye bhagi, bhagi train pakrne ja rahi thi, uske pichhe-pichhe wo sare gundey, aur unke pichhe Nischal. Sabhi sleeper class me pahunche.


Jivisa compartment ke ander pahla kadam he dali thi ki usse wahi lady mil gayi jo pichhli train me thi. Jivisha ko dekhte he wo.... "Arre beta tum bhi Indore ja rahi ho kya, aur tumhare husband kahan hai, nahi mila kya ?"


"Bhagwan, yahan log kitne fursat me hote hain, isse to sab yaad hai"...... Jivisha ajib si jabardasti wali hansi, hasti hui kahne lagi..... "Pata nahi aunty kahan chala gaya. Koi aisa bhi karta hai kya, batao ?"


Jivisha apni kahani suna he rahi thi ki samne Nischal aa kar khada ho gaya..... "Hey bhagwan, ab to lagta hai main train se kud he jaun".


Jivisha man me apna rona ro rahi thi, Nischal thik uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya..... Nischal ko samne khada dekh wo lady uss se puchhne lagi..... "Kaun ho tum, yahan aa kar kyon khadey ho gaye. Ye humari reserve berth hai"


"Ye naye log mujh se kuch kah raha hai, sayad mere bare me puchh rahe honge... main isse isharon me batata hun ki main aur ye, hum dono ek dusre ko jante hain"..... Nischal ne apna he solution nikala aur uss lady se "Muaahhh... muahhhh" ka ishara karte batane laga ki Jivisha ne usse kiss kiya... wo usse janta hai"...


Bas fir kya tha, wo lady ko laga yahi hai Jivisha ka pati. Fir kya tha uss lady ka pura khandan toot para uss par...... "Aisa koi karta hai kya... apni biwi ko koi chhor kar jata hai kya ... ye wo, bla-bla"...


Nischal chup-chap sunta raha aur soch chuka tha, ab to kuch bhi ho jaye wo yahan se jayega nahi. Idhar Jivisha..... "Cool haan, to in logon ne ristedari bhi jor diya. Koi na main samjh gayi iss chipku se to ab Indore me he pichha chhutega. Jivisha beta go with flow, ab aur jyada yahan koi drama nahi".


Jivisha ne bhi sahmati dete huye, usse apna pati swikar kar li. Nischal ki harkaton ko bhanpte fir to Jivisha ne lambi chahuri kahani bana di...... "Mera pati bol aur sun nahi sakta. Ye mujhe bahut pyara lagta hai, isliye maine iss se shadi kar li"


Baton ka daur lamba he chalta gaya aur Jivisha bhi puri kahani par kahani banati rahi. Nischal ko to kuch samjh me aane se raha, sab ko dekh wo bas apna sir he hilata raha.


Idhar wo sare chor ussi berth ke dayen-bayen unki baton ko sun rahe the. Pati gunga, patni ke pass lakhon ka maal.... kaam to pahle se aasan tha, ab bas sone ka intzar ho raha tha.


Raat ke takriban 3 baje wo chor active huye aur Jivisha ka sara maal lootne ki kosis karne me lag gaye. Bare he chaturai se usne Jivisha ka bag urraya, aur urra kar chain pulling kar ke train se bahg gaye....


Train se jab wo niche utar kar aapas me apni saflta par khush ho rahe the tabhi samne se unhe Nischal dikha.... Nischal ko dekh kar sabhi chaunk gaye..... "Abe tu to so raha tha, yahan kya urri maar kar aaya"


Dusra aadmi.... "Tu bhi kahan gunge se baat kar raha hai. Ye sale... inka sixth sence kafi tej hota hai. Maar isse aur nikalte hain yahan se...


Sab ne marne par sahmati diya aur Nischal ki ore lapatne daure. Nischal ka dhyan to sirf uske hath me para Jivisha ke saman ke upar tha. Nischal ne kuch jyada mehnat nahi kiya. Wo log samne se aa rahe the, Nischal side se bhagta usse apne pichhe aane par majboor kiya... aur jab wo log Nischal ke pichhe bari teji se daur rahe the, tabhi wo ruk kar ek kadam pichhe hua aur jhappatta marta bag chhin kar fir se daur laga diya.


Nischal daudte huye chalti train me aaram se chadh gaya.... Jivisha aur baki sare log ab bhi so rahe the, Nischal ne bhi apni jagah pakar li. Nischal Jivisha ko dekhte huye sochne laga.... "Kuch alag he khinchaw hai iss ladki me. Aakhir mera itna jhukaw kyon ho raha hai. Jo bhi ho Saren jaldi yahan ki bhasa decode kare fir dekhte hain ye kitne kaam aa sakti hai ye".


Raat ko fir sabhi mast nind lene lage. Agle din train Indore pahunchi... Jivisha rahat ki sans leti sochne lagi.... "Ab to iss family aur iss chipku dono se chhutkara milega"


Bhid puri utarne me lagi thi, Nischal aur wo family jab utarne ke liye aage badhe, Jivisha teji dikhati hui dusre gate se utar gayi..... dusre gate se jaise he utri, uski najar apne dost Nandita par gayi....


"Aahhh bahgwan, kal se le kar aaj tak me yahi ek sahi kaam kiye ho. Thank you"... Jivisha bhag kar Nandita ke pass pahunchi aur uska hath pakar kar khinchti hui usse bahar ki taraf le jane lagi.


Pune ka koi dost, yun achanak se Indore station par, na kuch kaha, na kuch suna... sidha hath khinchte huye bahar le jane lage..... Shocking...


Nandita, Jivisha ka hanth khinch kar roki..... "Duffer, ye sab kya hai"


Jivisha..... Time nahi mere pass raste me puri baat batati hun.


Nandita.... Yaar meri puri family issi train se utar rahi hai.... main unhe receive karne aayi hun. Pata nahi tere baat par kya reaction dun. Ruk main unko receive kar ke tere sath chaliti hun...


Jivisha, uska hanth khinchti..... "Wo kya bache hain jo station par gum ho jayenge... main yahan itni musibat me hun... itna samjh ki yadi usne mujhe dekh liya to main mari jaungi...


Nandita.... Kyaaaa ????


Jivisha, fir se uska hanth khinchti.... "Tu ye shocking expression baad me bhi sakti hai, abhi tu chal na please. Ye mere zindgi aur maut ka sawal hai"


Baat ki gahrai ko samjhte, Nandita bhi uske sath teji se bahar ki ore nikli. Jivisha ko dilasha deti hui kahne lagi.... "Tu dar mat Indore me tujhe kisi baat ki chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi. Koi tere pichhe para hai ye baat tu phone par batati to ab tak uski band yahin baj jati",


Baat karte dono bahar aa gaye aur dono chal diye ghar ki taraf. Raste me jab Jivisha ne apni puri kahani usse bayan ki to Nandita apna sir pit'ti kahne lagi.....


"Jisa teri to. Kamini kahin ki, jahil gawar ullu. Tere melodrama ke chakkar me tu to fasti he hai, dusron ko bhi shock de deti hai. Waise ek baat bata tujhe jaroorat kya thi usse kiss karne ki... itne bare station par kahin bhi kona pakar leti".


Jivisha... Nandu situation he aisi thi, wo log itne pass aa gaye the ki mujhe majbooran kiss karna para. Khair tum nahi samjhegi....


Dono baat karte huye ghar pahunch gaye. Un dono ko pahunche 5 min bhi nahi huye honge ki pichhe se Nadita ka pura pariwar pahunch gaya.... Jivisha ke aankhon ke samne wahi pariwar jo train me mili thi, aur unke sath tha Nischal bhi....


Unhe dekhte he Jivisha ke muh se nikal gaya...... "Hey bhagwan"

ha ha ha ha
yaar jivu jaha bhi jaati hai problems uske piche piche... well shayad problem ke paas woh jaati hai...
Pehle nischal, phir train mein woh log, phir anjane mein hi chor logis ko davat de diya... phir wohi train wale log, phir nischal....
in sabhi dramatic situations aur twists mein nischal ko muk pati bhi maan liya. woh train wali family ne bhi us baat ko sach maan liya ... ek jhuth ko chupane ke ek ke baad ek jhuth..... phir nandini se milna..ushe ek tarah se ghasit ti huyi uske ghar le gayi ..... are yaar ek chij joh iski life normal huyi ho hamesha musibat mein fansh jaye, aise kaam hi kyun karti hai yeh.. ab dekho woh train mein mili woh family nandu ke ghar sath hi nischal bhi....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji
waise nandu ne akhir Kar entry le hi li story mein

 

[ABHISHEK TRIPATHI]

Excellent update..

 

[BhattiDon]

Wah bhai asman se gira khajur me atka

 

[kamdev99008]

abhivadan sarkar .. waise aapne wahan b nahi dekha tha ise aur yahan bhi dekhnege ki nahi bada sawal hai

nain bhai apko kuchh galatfahmi hui hai
meine apki har kahani padhi thi wahan par...........aur yahan bhi padh raha hu..........triya charitr jo apne kuchh updates dekar adhuri chhod di wo bhi padhi hai meine

haan! comments jyada nahin honge............aur like ka option nahin tha xp mein........

ab aap batayein...................... tab xp par mein 100+ threads par daily visit karta tha....50-40 updates bhi padhta hi tha....kitne comment karta

ab yahan xf par ..................200+ stories par visit karta hu daily....100 ke aspas to updates bhi padhta hu....aur unhein story ke pichhle updates se link karta hu...dimag mein
comment na milne se fir bhi ap naraj hain...........to mere likes ko hi mera samarpan maan lijiye
itna dimag ghoomta hai ki apne updates likhte time bhool jata hu ki kya likhu..............

lekin......................padhta jarur rahunga
ye meri jindgi ka pahla shauk hai................aur akhiri bhi banaye rakhunga..........jab tak jinda hoon
baki...........hathiyar, nasha aur sambhog.............. ye bhi jab tak in par haavi rahne ki kshamta rahegi.........tab tak inka bhi maja leta rahunga
aur kuchh is nashwar sansar mein aisa nahin.................jiski chah ho

 

[Chutiyadr]

Ye Meri Aakhri Kahani Thi, Jo Main Xossip Par Likh Raha Tha....... Unfortunately XP Band Ho Gayi Aur Ye Kahani Bich Mein Hi Atak Gayi. Halanki mein bhi atak gaya tha fir, bhid-bhad me khoya sa aur likhna bhi bhul gaya tha....

Kuch kamine dost jo xp se mera picha nahi chhod rahe.... unhone fir mujhe bahut hadkaya aur wapas likhne ki zid par bhukh hartal ko baith gaye..... mein lagbhag 3 sal baad laut raha tha...... Apne chir parichit section Romance se fir maine Bhanwar likhna shuru kiya....

Mujhe ummid nahi thi ki, itne salon baad bhi wapas se likhne ke baad bhi readers ke bich Bhanwar ko itna pyara response milega...... Main yahan ke sabhi readers ko aabhar vyakt karna chahunga jinhone meri kahani ko saraha aur kahani ke sath bane huye hain....

Mujhe laga tha logon ne bhula diya hoga iss kahani ko ... lekin aisa nahi tha. Bahut sare readers ke jahan me ab bhi ye story apna chhap banaye huye the... Main naam likh kar yahan dusron ki bhawnao par koi aaghat to nahi karna cahhata.. lekin unhi readers ke bich ek reader ne mujhse itna aagrah ki ... ki main khud se hi sawal puchne laga.... Jinhone viswas kiya ek purn kahani ka.. kya unhe ek adhuri kahani dena jayaj hai...

khas dhanywad us pathika ko jisne mujhe ye sochne par majboor kiya aur is soch ke baad ab main bilkul taiyar hun "Ishq-Risk" ko uske anjam tak pahunchane ke liye.... So taiyar ho jaeye ek mindless fantasy ke liye..... jo sachai se koson dur hai aur main apeksha karunga ki aap ise matr ek fantasy love story ki tarah padhe jisme facts ko takh par rakh kar kahani ko enjoy kare....

Isi ke sath main apni baaten samapt karta hun... aur ummid karta hun ki aap readers ke bich ye kahani jagah bana sake.....

Dhanywaad....

nainu bhaiya nayi story ke liye congratulations
poster to mast lag raha hai , jadu wadu hoga lag raha hai aur aapki story hai to romance to hona hi hai