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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

nain11ster

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Update late hone ka wajah jan chakta hu main....

Hahaha ... Simple sa kuch batata hun sorbo bhai ..

1 update likhne me mujhe 3 ghante undiluted chahiye.. aur 1 ghanta complete edit ke liye.. ye ho gayi update ki baat..

Ab ... Kuch apni bhi zindgi hai ..aur wahan bhi kahani chalti hai.. kabhi dost mil gaye to baithna parta hai.. to kabhi ghar ke logon ke sath .. aur is kaal me to sab free hain ...

Iske alwa kaam hai .. wo bhi dekhna hota hai..kuch social issue bhi hain jahan kab din nikla jaye pata bhi nahi chalta aur laut kar aane ke baad pure din ka kaam niptana hota hai.. .

Wajah natural hai.. zindgi aur zindgi se jude khatte mithe pal.. jo har kisi ke sath hota hai ..
 

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Bhiḍ ko chirte jab teeno thoda aur aage badhe to Sawalker unhe mil gaya…. “Mujhe pura ummid tha, ye kand bhi tum dono se he juda hoga”…. Sawalker bahar teeno se baat kaṛ he raha tha, itne me ander se Kasak fir se joṛ-joṛ se chillayi…. “Help me… help me please… koi to bachao, mera kidnap ho gaya hai, rape hone wala hai… kuch der me katal bhi kar dega…. Koi to madad karo, help me pleaseeeeee”…..


Sawalker, darwaje ke ore ishara karte…. “Kholo isse”


Jaise he darwaja khula, Kasak aaṅkheṅ munde jo samne aaya, ussi se lipaṭ kar chillane lagi…. “Bachao, bachao, bachao… mujhe bachao”


Sawalker…. Godpade, public ko side kar, sab ko apne-apne flat me bhej. Aur miss (Kasak se) aap kya chipki he rahengi. Chhoriye isse aur chaliye ander…


Sawalker ki policiya awaz sunkar Kasak, Nischal se alag hui. Jab wo alag hui, to usse Nandni bhi najar aane lagi.. aur jaise he Nandni usse dikhi…. “Nandni, mujhe bacha le, mera kidnap ho gaya… bacha le… bacha le”


Sawalker…. Shant ho jao, chalo ander chal kar baat karte hain. Waise miss…


Kasak…. Ji Kasak naam hai mera.


Sawalker…. Haaṅ to miss Kasak, jis laḍki se aap bachao-bachao ki guhar laga rahi hain, abhi kuch der pahle ussi ke flat me aap kidnapped hui thi.


Kasak bilkul apni dono aaṅkheṅ failati…. “Haynnnn.. ye Nandni ka flat hai”


Sab log ander aa gaye. Sabhi ek taraf se hall me baithe, tukur-tukur ek dusre ko dekh rahe the. Aur Kasak ki isthiti to sab se jyada vichitr thi. Kabhi wo Nischal ko dekh rahi thi, to kabhi Nandni ko, to kabhi Sawalker ko aur teeno ko dekh kar kabhi apne sir khuja rahi thi, to kabhi matha pit rahi thi.


Sawalker…. Miss Kasak, kya aap batayengi, kis ne aap ko kidnap kiya?


Aisa laga jaise Kasak ne Sawalker ka sawal suna he na ho. Wo abhi bhi apne achrya bhare najron se teeno ko dekh rahi thi….. “Tum Nischal ho na, tumhe lagta hai dekha hai, fir bhi lagta hai nahi dekha. Ye wahi inspector hai na jo Chirag ke case me aaye the, inhe bhi lagta hai ki dekha hai, par nahi dekha”.


Sawalker, Nandni aur Nischal se…. “Ye kya pagal hai, jo ye aise baḍabaḍa rahi hai. Abhi uss din he to ye apne ghar me mujh se mili thi”.


Nischal, Sawalker ko side me le jate…. “Baḍe bhaiya, uss ki dimaġi haalat ṭhik nahi hai, tabhi to kamre me band kar rakha tha. Aap jao hum isse sambhal lenge”.


Sawalker….. “Pagal hai” aur itna kah kar, apna muṅdi ghuma kar ek baar Kasak ko dekha…. “Bechari, itni cute dikhti hai aur isse pagalpan hai”


Nischal…. Haaṅ baḍe bhaiya.


Sawalker ek baar fir uss ki ore dekhte….. “Bechari. Waise ye khatarnak to nahi na. Kah to mental hospital ki gaḍi bulwa dun”.


Nischal…. Aam taur par to bilkul khatarnak nahi, lekin pata nahi police waloṅ ko dekh kar isse kya ho jata hai. Wo aisa show karegi ki wo police se bahut ḍarti hai, aur jab mauka mila to humla karne se nahi chukti. Aurangabad me 3 police wale par aisa humla ki, bechare 70% vikalang ghoshit ho gaye.


“Hey Bhagwan…. jab se ye log mile hain, aisa kyoṅ lagta hai sare pagal mere he kundli me aa kar bas gaye. Humla kar deti to case bhi nahi banta”…. Sawalkar, Kasak ko dekh kar gahri chintan karne laga…


Nischal….. “Kya hua baḍe bhaiya”….. Sawalker… “Mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaya. Ja raha huṅ, tum apna khyal rakhna”


Sawalker ko bhagte dekh, Nandni uss ke pass pahuṅchi….. “Ye sir ko kya hua, aise bhage jaise bhut dekha ho, aur ye Kasak aise paglon ki tarah kyoṅ kar rahi hai. Kahti hai ye sab kand hote dekha hai, par nahi dekha”


Nischal…. Arre wo log Kasak ko wapas chhodne wale the, isliye uss nakli Kasak ke sare vision iss ke ander dal diya. Ab iss ke visonary part kahta hai iss ne sab dekha, par mind ki status ye hai ki uss ne kuch nahi dekha. Bas issi me fasi hai bechari.


Nandni…. Na tu Dr bhi ho ja, engineer bhi ho ja, aur ab to tu scientist bhi ho ja. Internet par tujhe ye sab jankari mil kahaṅ se jati hai.


Nischal…. Duffer, sara kuch main earth se he sikhuṅga, humara garah par to science hai he nahi. Sab aṅguṭhachhap he baste hai na. Ullu, maine bhasha kaise sikha tha. Nuro-transmitter ke jaṛiye sara deta mere brain me insert kar diya gaya tha. Ab jo admi ye brain me insert wala kaam karwate rahta hai, wo itna bhi nahi samjhega kya?


Nandni…. Sorry baba, bhaḍkta kyoṅ hai. Ye bata ab iss ka kya kareṅ.


Nischal…. Kuch nahi ek sone wala goli de kar sula de. Achhe se soyegi to brain me kal tak sab adjust ho jayega.


Nandni ne ṭhik waisa he kiya, jaisa Nischal ne karne ko kaha. Jab Kasak gahri nind me thi, Nischal baḍe safai se usse Jivisha ke kamre me ja kar sula diya. Jab wo Kasak ko liṭa kar laut raha tha, Jivisha karwaṭ badalti Nischal ki ore muṛ gayi.


Nischal ka dhyan soti hui Jivisha par gaya. Apne chehre ko hathoṅ pe ṭika, wo baḍe gaur se Jivisha ko dekhne laga. Kitni masoom dikh rahi thi Jivisha. Uss ke pyara sa roop dekh kar Nischal ka man usse chumne ka karne laga. Lekin Jivisha ke badan me hui thodi si hulchal se Nischal ka dhyan toot gaya, aur wo apne sir par hath marta wapas aa gaya….


Agli subah jab Kasak ki nind khuli to sab normal tha. Raat ki baat usse kisi sapne ki tarah lagi, aur khud ke sir par he marti wo kahne lagi…. “Main bhi kitni badi duffer huṅ”. Idhar dono bahne taiyar ho kar college jane ke liye nikli aur udhar Nischal aur Nandni.



College ke raste me Kasak aur Jivisha….


Kasak…. “Jivi pata nahi uss din mere muh se sab sach kaise nikal gaya. Sorry bahna, manf kar de”. Aur itna kah kar Kasak, Jivisha ke bilkul samne khadi ho gayi aur apne dono kaan pakaḍ li.


Jivisha, Kasak ke kano se hath hata’ti…. “Mujhe tumhari baat ka bilkul bura nahi laga Kasak. Jhuṭh to jhuṭh he hota hai na. Main bhi to reel life ko real life se mix kar rahi thi, par kyoṅ bhul gayi ki wahan to sab kuch plan hota hai aur life is all about uncertain”.


Kasak…. Kya baat hai, life is all about uncertain. To fir ye bata ki meri bahna ki haṅsi kyoṅ ġayab hai. Ab jo ho gaya kya usse bhula kar tu normal nahi ho sakti. Kamini tune to muskurana tak chhod diya.


Jivisha…. Hat pagal kuch bhi sochti hai. Khush huṅ main Sachi re. Ab college chaleṅ ya gappe he marti rahegi.


Kasak, ne aage iss par baat karna ṭhik nahi samjha aur wo chup ho kar drive karne lagi.



College ke raste me Nischal aur Nandni….


Nandni…. Kya baat hai mere sher, aaj to laḍkiyoṅ ki tarah cream powder laga kar taiyar hua hai. Jivisha ko dikhane ja raha hai… haaṅ bol, bol… bol na…


Nischal…. Kuch bhi haaṅ, samne dhyan de, accident na karwa dena…


Nandni…. Oh ho ladkey ki jarra muski to dekho…. Aay hay najar na lage. Chal-chal, jaldi college chal, tere liye to aaj Jivisha bhi taiyar ho kar aayi hogi…..


“Sach me Nandni” …. Wheel ke crouching ki awaz, aur tej break ke sath car ruk gayi. Nandni ke car ke samne, D.sp ki jeep syren deti rasta roke khadi thi. Nandni aur Nischal ne ek dusre ko dekha aur dono car se bahar aaye. Aur jab car se bahar aaye to samne Sawalker D.sp ki jeep se bahar utar raha tha…..


Nandni…. Had hai yaar, tu ye kis se dosti kar liya hai, har jagah dikh jata hai. Ab ye college time me rasta roke kahe khada hai….


Sawalker dono ke pass pahuṅcha, aur ajib tarah se khada ho kar, kabhi apne jeep ko to kabhi apne wardi ke star ki ore ishara kar raha tha…. “Kya hua baḍe bhaiya, aaj kuch badle-badle najar aa rahe hain”.


Sawalker, Nischal ke gale lag kar uss ka gal chumte….. “Jis criminal ko hum ne pakaḍ tha, uss ke liye govt. ne mujhe permote kar ke D.sp bana diya.


Nischal…. Baḍe bhaiya, ye kya sukhe-sukhe good news suna rahe, party to banti hai na bhai.


Sawalker…. Haaṅ, haaṅ… aaj raat grand masti karenge hum. Nandni, tum bhi invited ho. Wo sab evening me, abhi chal mere sath college.


Nischal…. Arre baḍe bhaiya, Nandni to hai na sath me. Hum dono chale jayenge.


Sawalker…. Arre pahla din hai college ka. D.sp ki jeep se tu utarega, aur jab kahega D.sp tera bhai hai to tera rob jamega na college me”.


Nandni…. Wahan commisnor ke bete ki bhi izzat nahi hai…


Nandni, taunt karti, dono ko sunati hui kahi. Iss par Nischal pratikirya dete….. “Chalo baḍe bhaiya, ye to meri raging karwayegi college ke pahle din, isliye jal kar aisa bol rahi. Aap chalo baḍe bhaiya”.



Sawalker…. Haaṅ chal choṭe. Waise bhi ye laḍkiyaṅ jealous hoti hain, kisi ka bhala, in se dekha nahi jata.


Sawalker aur Nischal dono Nandni ke samne se nikal gaye…. “Dono pure duffer hain. Post graduation ke class me kahe ki raging… kaun samjhaye inhe”.


Khair jab dono college pahunche, Sawalker ko bas ye dikhana tha ki, wo D.sp ban gaya hai. Lekin bechara, usse kya pata tha aaj pahle din iss sahar ke aur bhi baḍe-baḍe adhikari ke bache yahaṅ padhne aaye honge. Jab se Sawalker college me ghusa, bas salute ṭhokte-ṭhokte he padesan tha.



Kahte hain chhipa pyar juban se koi kah paye ki nahi, chehra sab bata jata hai. Nischal class ke bahar he khada tha jab samne se usse Jivisha aati hui dikhi. Jivisha, Nischal ko aate kya dikhi, uss ke chehre par jaise muskaan tair gayi ho. Jivisha ko dekhte Nischal jaise kahin kho sa gaya ho.


Kasak, Nischal ke pass se jab gujar rahi thi, uss ke sir par kitab se marti…. “Gadhe, putale ki tarah khadey hone se laḍki nahi paṭne wali, jao kuch mehnat karo”.


Nischal khawab se jag kar jaise he hakikat me aaya, daur kar wo bhi class me gaya. Thoḍa dar aur thodi himmat juta’te wo ja kar Jivisha ke pass wale seat par baiṭh gaya. Class shuru hui, fir khatam hui. Fir class shuru hui, aur khatam hui… lekin Jivisha najar tak ghuma kar nahi dekhi ki kaun uss ke pass baiṭha hai.


Jivisha ka aisa ignore karna, Nischal ko jaise chubha ho. Uss ke sine me kahin dard uṭha ho jaise. Ab aur wahan rukna uss se bardast nahi ho paya, aur mayus ho kar wo chala aaya. Class chal rahi thi, aur Nischal college campus ke kisi kone me ja kar baiṭha hua tha….


“Hi, I am Kiraṇ, kya aap free hain”


Nischal jab apna sir uṭha kar dekha to ek khubasurat si laḍki apna hath baḍhaye khadi thi. Nischal uss se hath milata…. “Hi, I am Nischal”


Kiraṇ…. Nischal, kya aap free hain…


Nischal…. Haaṅ free he samjhiye… Kahiye kya kaam hai…


Kiraṇ…. Kya aap mere bf banenge….



“Kya…….. Bf” ??????????????????????????????
Jabardast update hai bhai...... Nischal badhi chalaki se sab ko safe kiya.....or nikal geya waha se....or kasak ko leke aaya.....or suu or ruku nischal ke bachpan ke baare me josefor ko bataya or nischal se dur rehne ke liye bhi bola hai...or intejar karenge sahi wakt ka....kya wakai me un logo ka sahi wakt aayega.......???????
Or nischal or jivisha ke love story kab shuru hoga bhai....or ye koun aageya hai jo shida nischal ko apni bf banana chahta hai.... Iske piche kya wajah ho sackta hi hai dekhte hai
Waiting for next update
 

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super update bhai is ka mtlb ka nischal bhut buri cheez ha or jivisha to kich zyda hi bhao kha rhi ha or ab ya kiran kya bla ha wasa bhai ap ko mayus hona ki zarrourt nhi ha kabhi kabhi comments kam bhi ata hain its ok bjai main to hr update read krna ka bd zarrour reply deta hu
 
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Aakash.

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Nischal is saving people's lives like a superhero.:superh: I like the pair of Nischal and Nandni, both of them having fun together.:laugh: Along with fear as well as jokes, you write wonderfully. The enemy side's move failed, it was good and we saved Kasak as well.:yippi:
Nischal's story was very good, which shows his strength. It is not a good thing that hunters are ambush.:angryno: Innocent Nandini is scared. :laugh:It was a great pleasure to see Real Kasak back and it was necessary to do a little drama in this happiness. My Jivisha is the most beautiful.:love:
Nischal has received an offer from the front.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Ruki- suko ne kya into diya hai Nishchal ki ab fan following aur badh gai :D
Superb update bhai
 

nain11ster

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nice update ....nishchal ka intro mast diya dono ne .....kaise usne jaanwar ko maara ....par kasak ko bhi sach bataya nahi ..use bhi apne team me shamil karna chahiye tha ..... yaha alien ke naam aise hai ki yaad hi nahi rehte ? isliye aap samajh jao ki dono kaun hai ....naam dekhne ke liye update dobara padhna padta hai fastly ???

Bechari ko chain se abhi jine to dijiye .. warna Kasak ka chhota sa dimag fat jayega :D.. alian ke naam par charcha kar diya tha baki tension na lijiye .. main to kayi story ke lead ka naam bhul jata hun :D

:thanks: for your lovely comment .. aise sath nibhate chaliye.. :woohoo:
 
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