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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Black water

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Fantastic update bhai ?
 

Naina

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Update 37
Saryanta rach chuke hai yeh log. ab ispe amal bhi karenge ki kaise jivu ko nischal se dur kiya jaaye aur ushi aakarshit karke apne sath zoren grah pe le jaya jaaye.....
udhar nischal apne powers purn roop istemaal kar raha hai.... jivu ko yeh ehsaas dilane ke liye ki uske dil mein bhi nischal ke liye pyaar hai.... koshish toh jaari hai.. ab kamyab hota hai ki nahi yeh toh waqt hi batayega...
hmm... toh aliens phir se shikar pe nikle...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

Naina

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Update 38
apini, josefer aur biwi ke karname ki kaajal se bhi gayi gujari woh tanisha ki itni majal :banghead:... Agar dum hai toh nischal se takra ke dikhaye toh maanu... us masoom pe julm kyun :mad:. .. poor sapna :(
insects apini, josefer aur us tanisha ko toh iski saza jarur milegi :dwarf:
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 
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Aakash.

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My suspicion was correct, I had also said in my previous review that Kunal is a person of enemy side. :cool: Josefar at home, Kunal in college, it is not going well.:( Jivisha is only for Nischal and at least talk about Jivisha. Innocent Nischal is happy to see the dream and is driving Jivisha crazy.:lotpot:
Even before this once hunting was in the forest, now there should be no hunting, I cannot see innocent people dying.:madno::angryno:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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बन्धुवर ,अतुलनीय कहानी लिख रहे हैं आप।
हमने तीन दिनों के अंतराल में ही आपकी दोनों कहानियों को पढ़ लिया। ये कहानी भी देवनागरी में लिखी जानी चाहिए थी।
अब केवल नयी कड़ियों की प्रतीक्षा है।

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Update:38



Tanisha apne shikar ke pichha karti, turant Apini se contact ki….. “Haaṅ Tanisha, mil gaya kya shikar”?


Tanisha…. Ummmmmm… you will love this shikar. 15 rating aa rahi uski. Main ab bardast nahi kar pa rahi iski khusbu. Kahin main iss ka jabardasti shikar na kar lun….


“Mere hote huye tumhe jabardasti shikar karne ki kya jaroorat hai, 15 rating ke shikar roj-roj nahi milte. Iss ka shikar to hum baḍe pyar se karenge”


Jald he Apini bhi Tanisha ke pass pahunch gaya, aur apne shikar ko dekh kar uss ki aakhen fati ki fati rah gayi…. “Tanisha, ye to mast shikar hai. To chalen iss ka pata lagaya jaye”


Tanisha….. Apini 3 din lagenge pata lagane me, fir ek din baad shikar. Isse dekh kar mujh se bardast na ho raha. Iski yadi indriyaṅ na bhi jagrit ho to bhi ye 10 ki rating to de he degi. Wo bhi bahut hote hain. Kahaṅ hume 4/5 rating ka shikar nahi mil pa raha tha.


Apini….. Hmmm ! Kah to tum sahi rahi ho. Par shikari kosis to kar he sakte hain.


Tanisha….. Haaṅ to karo kosis, maine Josefer aur baki logoṅ ko bhi bula liya hai.


Apini…… Cool haaṅ ! Matlab aaj to shikar pakka hai….


Tanisha….. Yes, aaj he hum shikar karenge. Kal se to fir uss Nischal ke shikar ki planning chalegi.


Thodi he der me Josefer aur uss ke sath do log uss location par pahunch chuke the. Kafi bhiḍ bhaḍ wala ilaka tha…


Apini…. Josefer mayajal failao, aur shikar ko ekant tak le kar aao.


Josefer ne turan apna roop badla. Hatch ke ad wala “Pug” breed ka pyara sa pappi bana aur sidha uss laḍki ke pass pahunch kar uss ke paun ko chaṭne laga. Wo laḍki dog ko dekh kar apna paun piche khinchi aur idhar udhar dekhne lagi. Sayad wo kutte ko malik ko dhuṅdh rahi thi.


Tabhi ek bar fir Josefer uss ke paun ke pass pahunch kar uss ka paun chaṭne laga. Wo laḍki idhar udhar dekhi, usse wahiṅ pass para ek ḍanḍa mila, kafi ġusse se wo ḍanḍe ko uṭhayi aur rakh di ghuma kar…. “I hate chatore, chal bhag ja yahaṅ se”


Josefer ku, ku, ku ki awaz nikalta wahan se bhaga. Laut kar apne logoṅ ke pass wapas aaya…. “Kis ka idea tha ye pappi ban kar bhejne ka, kitna joṛ ki mari. In insano me daya khatam ho gayi hai kya”?


Apini…. Ha ha ha, koi baat nahi hai Josefer, ab har kisi ko ek he chij thode na pasand aati hai. Ab jab uss ne tum par humla kiya hai to tumhara bhi farj banta hai uss par jawabi humla karna.


Josefer….. Ye hui na baat, main abhi jata huṅ.


Apini….. Ruko, aise nahi kuttoṅ ka gange banao aur daurana shuru karo usse. Aur haan kaṭna jaroor, taki Ilaz ke liye humare pass he aaye.


Josefer apne do sathiyoṅ ke sath fir se kutta ban gaya. Iss baar wo aage aur uss ke piche-piche do bhayanak kutte. Aur teeno pahunch gaye uss laḍki ke pass. Laḍki teeno ko apni ore he aate dekh ghabra gayi. Wo dhire-dhire wahan se khisakne lagi. Jaise-jaise wo khisak rahi thi, teeno bhi waise he waise aage baḍh rahe the.


Bhiḍ se thoda aage jab wo nikal aayi, waise he Josefer aur uss ki team ne uss bhaunkte huye daurana shuru kar diya. Daurte-dauṛte jab wo ek khali gali ke pass pahuṅchi, waise he teeno uss par ṭooṭ pare aur usse nochne lage. Dar se uss laḍki ki haalat bilkul kharab ho gayi. Uss ke hath paun kapne lage.


Tabhi wahan par Tanisha bhi pahunch gayi. Wo teeno kuttoṅ par humla bolti, jaldi se uss laḍki ke upar se haṭaya…… “Lagta hai kitton ko kuch jyada he pyar hai tum se. Are you alright”.


Wo ladki ab bhi sadme me he thi. Usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki uss par itna bhayankar humla bhi ho sakta hai. Wo ab bhi jamin par baithi, apni tej chal rahi dhadakano ko kabu karne ki kosis kar rahi thi.


Tanisha uss se ek baar fir puchhi……. “Are you alright”.


Ladki.... Haan main thik hun. Thanks a lot. Itna kah kar wo apne raste Jane lagi. Tanisha usse rokti….. "Aisi haalat me kahan ja rahi ho. Aisa lag raha hai jaise kisi ne rape kiya ho"


Ladki apni halat ek bar dekhti.... “Oh main itna sadme me thi ki kuch dhyan he na de payi. Khair thanks once again, main in kapdon ko aage manage kar lungi"


Tanisha.... Don’t worry, yahan pass me he mere hubby ka clinic hai. Tum mere sath aao, jab tak tumhara first aid hoga tab tak tumhare kapdey bhi aa jayenge. Waise ek baat bata dun, mere hubby ko free service pasand nahi, isliye card wagrah to sath layi ho na.


Ladki, hasti hui.... Haan card bhi hai aur account me paise bhi. Par mauke ka fayda utha kar mujhe loot to nahi logi. Pata chala 1000 jahan lagna tha wahan 1 lac ka bill bana diya.


Tanisha.... Ilaz to free me karwa dungi, tum bas kapdon ka bill pay kar dena. Now happy


Ladki.... Ha ha ha, ab ṭo chalna he paṛega….


Tanisha ke sath wo chal di. Wo ab bhi apne upar huye humle ke bare me he soch rahi thi, aur Tanisha ke sath aage baḍh rahi thi. Kuch he der me dono Apini ke banaye jaal yani uss ke clinic tak pahunch gaye. Dono sidha Dr chamber me pahuṅchi jahaṅ Apini pahle se baiṭha hua tha.


Apini…. Hey baby, abhi to tum yahaṅ se gayi thi. Aur ye tumhare sath aayi iss laḍki ko kya hua, badi he buri haalat me dikh rahi hai….


Tanisha…. Ye meri dost hai, iss par kuttoṅ ka humla hua tha.


Apini…. Ohhh ye to bura hua…. Waise tumhari dost iss haalat me bhi kafi sexy dikh rahi hai. Mujh se introduce nahi karwaogi.


Laḍki, apna hath aage baḍhati…. “Hi I am sapna”


Apini bhi badi hasrat se hath milate….. “Hi I am Apini”


Sapna muskurati hui…. “Apini ji kya baat hai, biwi ke samne he mujh par chance mar rahe hain, ab hath to chhor dijiye”.


Apini…. Ha ha ha, wo kya hai na meri biwi bhi mere samne kai logoṅ ko chance marti hai. To maine socha kyoṅ na itni hot babe ke sath main bhi chance mar lun…


Tanisha….. Apini, just shut-up. Tum Sapna ka first aid karwao, aur kisi ko bhej kar iss ke liye kapdey mangwa lo.


Apini…. Sapna detail ek paper me note kar do. 10 min me tumhari dress yahaṅ aa jayegi.


Sapna ek paper par dress ki size likhti…. “Mujhe fresh hona hai, bathroom hai kya yahaṅ”


Tanisha….. Upar chali jao, upar ke kamre me washroom bana hai. Tum jab tak aaram se naha lo, tab tak tumhari dress bhi aa jayegi.


Sapna….. Thank you so much. Waise ek baat batao, tum dono ke shadi ko kitne sal ho gaye. Kya mbbs karte huye he tum dono ki shadi hui.


Tanisha….. Haaṅ, Apini uss waqt mbbs kar raha tha, aur main college me thi. Lagbhag 6 sal ho gaye honge.


Sapna…. Aur Dr sahab kitne salon se hum jaise marizoṅ ka ilaz kar rahe hain.


Apini….. 4 salon se main practice kar raha huṅ. Kyoṅ kya hua, tum bhi ek Dr ho kya ?


Sapna….. Arre nahi Apini ji, main to bas apne dostoṅ ke bare me jaankari le rahi thi. Chalti huṅ thoda fresh ho liya jaye…


Sapna wahan se upar aa gayi aur upar aate he kahin se bhagne ka rasta ḍhuṅḍhne lagi…. “Kamino, my name is Sapna. Mujhe kya gawar samjha hai jo trap kar loge. Commisonor ki beṭi huṅ main, ab to tum dono ka ilaz mere papa karenge”.


Sapna jab se Tanisha ke sath thi wo apna behaviour normal rakh kar chizoṅ ko samajhne ki kosis kar rahi thi. Uss ke dimaġ me shaq ka kiḍa tabhi janm le chuk tha, jab Josefer uss ka paun chat raha tha, aur wo idhar udhar dekh kar uss kutte ke malik ko dhuṅdh rahi thi.


High breed ka kutta aakhir kaise sadak par bina malik ke ghum raha tha. Jitne bhi kutte the wo high breed ke the, aakhir bina kisi ke ishare par kyoṅ humla karne lage. Practice kai salon se hai to clinic ka board kyoṅ nahi. Mbbs karne aur khud ki practice start karne ke kam se kam 28/30 sal umr ho jati hain, aur dekhne se dono 20/22 sal ke, uss ke hum umr dikh rahe the.


Aisi kai sari points jo Sapna ke dimaġ me ghum rahe the aur wo khud me sab baton ki samiksha karne ke baad iss natije par pahuṅchi thi ki, usse jaan bujh kar trap kiya gaya tha, lekin motive ka pata nahi. Khair motive ka pata to uss ke papa laga lenge, filhaal ab wo yahaṅ se bhagne kar nikalne ka soch rahi thi.


Idhar Sapna jaise he un dono ke najron se ojhal hui, waise he Apini ne Tanisha ko ishara kiya….. “Iss laḍki ko shaq ho gaya hai, wo bhagne ke irade se upar gayi hai”.


Tanisha…. Kuch bhi Apini, wo to kitni normal dikh rahi thi.


Apini…. Wo to normal thi, par uss ka aakhri sawal normal nahi tha. Humari shadi aur meri practice ke bare me puchna. Wo apne shaq ko bas clear kar rahi thi. Usse hum par shaq ho gaya hai.


Tanisha….. Fir ab kya kare…..


Apini….. Chalte hain shikar par. Tum sab taiyar raho bas….


Apini ke kadam upar ke kamre ki ore baḍh chuke the. Wahiṅ Sapna ko samjh me aa chuka tha ki ye ek trap hai, isliye turant uss ne apne mobile se group msg kiya “I am in danger”… aur wahan se bhagne ka rasta dhuṅdh rahi thi. Idhar Apini ke kadam upar baḍh rahe the aur udhar Sapna balcony se niche jane ke liye chadar laṭka chuki thi.
Bahut badhiya update hai bhai......
 
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