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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

Naina

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Sawalker aur Jyoti se milne ke Ansh ko apne dil ka bojh kuch halka sa lagne laga… wah flat wapas gaya, lagbhag 1 ghante lage honge usse khade kahde darwaje par, tab kahin jakar Nandni ne darwaja khola…


Uske baad lagbhag 2 ghanton tak wo Nandni ko manate raha… aur apni bewakoofi aur gusse me kahe gaye baton ke liye sharminda hota raha. Nandni muskurai jaroor lekin uski muskurahaton me wo baat nahi thi. Khair kisi tarah Nandni ko sulane ke baad Ansh bhi so gaya…


Nandni jab subah jagi, tab Nischal apne kamre me he tha. Sayad raat ke waqt kafi let aaya ho, gahri nind me so raha tha. Usse apne kamre me soya dekh Nandni ka chehra khil gaya aur aakhon se aashu chhalak aaye…


Nandni uske sir ke pass baith kar uske balon par hath ferne lagi. Aashu ki kuch bunde Nischal ke chehre par giri aur Nischal had-bada kar uth'te huye Nandni ko gaur se dekhne laga... Nischal, utha'kar baith'te huye, Nandni ke aashu saaf kiya.. aur uska chehra thoda upar karke, ek thappad laga diya..


Nandni gusse me usse ghurti, uske baal pakad kar jitni takat se ho sakti thi, utni takat laga kar pakar kar khinch di… "Aao.. pagal kahin ki ganja ho jaunga.".. Nandni usse dekhkar hansti hui apne pass bulayi aur uske gale lag kar kahne lagi…. "Soory yaar, kal gusse me main kuch bhi kah gayi thi".. unke bich Ansh bhi aate huye… "Me too sorry.. in sab mamlon ke piche main hi tha... Yaar thodi jagah mujhe bhi de do"..


Nandni:- Nischal doctor ko bol de yahan se chala jaye.. warna main kuch bhi bol dungi to muh chhota sa ho jayega.


Nischal, ek side se thoda alag hote Ansh ko bhi bich me le liya… Ansh bich me ghuskar hanste huye kahne laga… "Muh chhota ho ya dil chhota ho jaye.. ab tumhe hi sun'na hai aur tumhe hi jhelna hai sweetheart"..


Nischal:- Kya baat hai doctor sahab lage hain, lage raho.. aur ek baar pyar ho jaye to umr bhar pyar aise hi jatate raho… waise subah ki latest news ye hai ki Jivisha ne Shresh ke sath shadi ke liye haan kar di hai… aur apna pack up…


"Teri raat ki harkaten gadhe"…. Nandni, Nischal se alag hoti gusse se usse ghurne lagi lekin kuch bol nahi rahi thi, kewal gusse me ghurti rahi…. "Ab tum kya chahti ho main sorry kahun. Kyon doctor sahab aap ko kya lagta hai.. mujhe sorry kahna chahiye kya?"


Ansh apne dono hath jodte… "tum dono ka mamla hai, tum dono samjho.. main chala hospital"… Ansh apni baat kahte wahan se nikal gaya…


Nandni….. Raat ko khana khaye the.


Nischal….. Bhukh nahi thi….


Nandni…. Kal wahan se chale kyon aaye?


Nischal…. Maine Ansh ko msg kiya tha, wo bade bhaiya ne mujhe bula liya tha, to jana para.


Nandni…. Sawalker ne bula liya haan, jhuthe Ansh kal tumhe dhundte unke ghar gaya tha. Ab bolo….


Nischal….. Ab jane bhi do na, chhodte hain iss baat ko…..


Nandni, Nischal ka utra chehra dekhti…. Gadha kahin ka. Jivisha ka hone wala pati hai Shresh, abhi hua nahi hai. Itni si baat ke liye tu himmat harega.


Nischal….. Nahi himmat harne wali baat nahi hai, bas pata nahi kyon mere dil me ajib si jalan ho rahi hai uss Shresh ke naam se…


Nandni….. Tu to giyo beta, aaj kal jalan bhi ho rahi. Kya baat hai. Waise ek baat bata….


Nischal…. Kya ?????


Nandni….. Tumhe to shaq tha ki Jivisha ke jagah koi alien hai, fir tu uss alien ke liye itna emotion kyon dikha rahe.


Nischal…. Nahi mera shaq be-buniyad tha. Wo Jivisha he hai. Tujhe pahle bhi to bataya hai uske bare me..


Nandni….. Haan tabhi to tumhare emotion uss ke liye fut-fut kar nikal rahe the. Oye devdas aage kya karna hai socha hai….


Nischal…… Socha to bahut kuch tha. Badi muskil se aaj apne sath jane ke liye raji bhi kiya usse, par….


Nandni….. Par kya ….


Nischal…. Sidhe shabdon me kahun to meri fat rahi hai.


Nandni…. Oye fattu, waise to mar-pit me bara mard banta hai, aur ladki ke sath jane par fat rahi. Yaad hai na kis shart par wo tumhare sath jane ke liye taiyar hui hai….


Nischal….. Haan pata hai, tabhi to itni fati hai. Kahin aaj main fail ho gaya to….


Nandni…. Aisa kuch nahi hoga, tu mast ready ho kar ja, aur baki sab kismat par chhod de.


Nischal, Nandni ki baat mante pure josh me taiyar hua. Sabhi log college pahunche. Sab ek jagah ekant me baithe the aur khamosh sa mahol tha… Kasak Nischal ko dekh'kar chidti hui kahne lagi… "Kal tum Jatin ke bunglow par kya bakwas kar rahe the.. wo sex aur noch'kar khane wali baat".


Nandni:- Kya ??? Disco se sidha bunglow… kafi fast haan..


Kasak, wahan ke mahol ko dekh'kar jhenp gayi… usse kuch samjh me hi nahi aaya wo kya jawab de… "Ye pagal ho gayi hai… Raat ko sapna bhi dekho tab bhi mujhe ghasit lo. Ye puri pagal ho gayi hai".


Kasak:- Sorry, thodi confuse ho gayi thi. Shayad raat ko kuch jyada hi ho gaya tha.. Mujhe ye tak yaad nahi ki main ghar kaise pahunchi…


Jivisha jo khamoshi se sabko sun rahi thi.. uski najar baar-baat Nischal par hi tik jati .. Ghar walon ki khushi ke liye Jivisha ne bhale hi haan kah diya tha, lekin ander se usse apne pyar par pura yakin tha… Ek baar pahle bhi haan kar chuki thi, ek baar aur haan kar di. Haan karne se yadi sabko khushi milti hai to harj he kya hai… Baki raat bhar to wo aaj ke hi bare me soch kar romanchit ho rahi thi. Na to Jivisha ke man me koi second though thi aur na hi koi doubt. Sab clear tha…


Jivisha ka dil baiman, Nischal ko dekh'kar ander ke arman hasraten bharne lagi.."Hay mera sona.. love you.. Umaahhhhh"…. Jaise hi uske arman dil se nikle, Nischal apni najar ghuma kar Jivisha ko dekh'kar muskurane laga… Jivisha ko ek pal ke liye aisa laga jaise Nischal ne uski dil ki baat sun lee ho… wo turant apni najar idhar-udhar karti.. apna dhyan Nischal ke upar se hatayi… Thodi der baad Nandni aur Kasak wahan se chali gayi.. aur ye dono car me aa gaye…


Jivisha….. Haan to hum pahle kahan ja rahe hain….


Nischal….. Aaj tum bahut pyari lag rahi ho. Tumhare chehre se najar he nahi hat rahi.


Jivisha…… Tumhari marji hai, tum chaho to aaj pura din mujhe dekh sakte ho.


Nischal, khushi se uchhalte huye….. "Wakai, kya ye sach hai".


Jivisha……. Haa tum ne bilkul sahi suna, bas apna promise yaad rakhna, yadi aaj impress na kar paye to dobara apni shakal mat dikhana.


Nischal…… Hmmm ! Samajh gaya. Achha subah ki suruwat tum se karte hain. Chalo tumhare pasand ke kisi jagah par chalte hain.


Jivisha, kuch sochti hui….. "Chalo Shresh se milne chalte hain. Kal raat uss bechare ki bina baat ke pitai ho gayi thi".


Nischal ka bujha sa jawab…. "Haan thik hai chalo chalte hain".


Dono jane ke liye taiyar the. Nischal side seat par baith kar usse dekhte rahne ki ikchha jatayi aur Jivisha ko car drive karne bol diya.


Nischal bas apne man me yahi soch raha tha ki…. "Baar-baar ye Shresh uski kundli me kaise chala aata hai". Jabki Jivisha, Nischal ki haalat par ander he ander hase ja rahi thi.…. "Hayyyy, chhota sa muh banaye kitna pyara lag raha hai. Ye bhi na, main kya uss gadhe se shadi karungi. Lekin fir bhi pata na ye itna insecure kyon feel kar raha"?


Gari chal pari thi. Shresh ke office ja kar dono mile, jahan Jivisha Shresh ke zakhmon ke sath kuch jyada he close ho rahi thi.


Jivisha ka "sorry-sorry" kah kar touch karna aur Shresh ke liye itna jyada emotion dikhana…. Ufffff jal kar bechara Nischal bhun chuka tha, aur usse jalane me Jivisha koi kasar nahi chhod rahi thi.


Jab Jivisha ko laga ki ab jyada ho raha hai tab wo Shresh ko bye bol kar Nischal ke sath chali aayi. Car sadak par chal rahi thi aur kahan jana hai Nischal ne ab tak nahi bataya tha.


Achanak he Nischal….. "Jivisha meri pasliyan bhi suzi hui hain"


Jivisha….. Dr to tumhare flat me he rahta hai, tab bhi ab tak ilaj nahi karwaye.


Jivisha tirchhi najar ghuma kar ek baar Nischal ko dekhi, aur uss ka latka hua muh dekh kar…. "Hayyyy inna sona".


Nischal ko laga Shresh jaisi sympathy usse bhi milegi, magar yahan to usse mur kar dekhi tak nahi Jivisha. Nischal jhunjhlate huye…. "Kahan ja rahe hain hum"?


Jivisha….. Mujhe kya pata, Tum ne he aaj ka din maga tha. Tum jano.


Nischal kuch der shant raha, fir Jivisha ko car rok kar side seat par aane ke liye kaha aur khud drive karne laga.


Gari ab Mumbai pune ke highway ke ore chalne lagi. Jivisha…. "Itni teji se kahan ja rahe ho. Wapas sahar ke ore chalo".


Nischal…… Meri najron se tum nature ko dekhna. Jitni pawitarta, aur swakshta uss jagah tumhe milegi, utni he pawitrata meri mohabbat me hai. Jitna manmohak wahan ka drishya hai, utni he manmohak humare pyar ki kahani hogi. Bas ek mauka do, wahan chalo mere sath, uss jagah ki wadiyon me tumhe bhi mujh se pyar ho jayega.


Jivisha….. Nischal, tum baat samjhne ki kosis karo, main wahan nahi ja sakti. Wahan mukhiya ji ke site ka kaam chal raha hai. Main wo jagah kayi baar ghum chuki hun.


Nischal…… Nahi main ek nahi sunuga, wahan chahe koi bhi ho, tumhe darne ki koi jaroorat nahi. Mera viswas karo, main hun na.


Jivisha…… Nischal, kya bachpana hai ye.


Nischal, car ko side me laga kar, Jivisha ka hath apne hatho me le liya. Uss ke aakhon me jhakte huye…… "Thoda bachpan jinda rahne do. Thoda pagalpan kar lene do. Janti ho khushi ke lamhon ke liye bahut tarsa hun, thoda khush ho lena do".


Khamosh sama me, apni dil ki gahrai se, apne arman kahne ke baad, Nischal khamosh, Jivisha ko dekhne laga.


Dono khamosh bas ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. "Thoda risk hai, par ye ishq hai", Jivisha, khud se kahi aur Nischal ko aakhon se ishara kar di, chalne ke liye.


Nischal behad khush tha, usse laga jaise aaj he Jivisha uss ke pyar ko haan kah degi. Uske chehre ki chamak se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo ander he ander jit ki khushi mana raha hai.
ek baat toh hai... ansh chaahe muh se bole ya na bole lekin shaq ki nigah se jarur dekhega phir se aaj nahi toh kal.. aur is baat ka ehsaas nandu ko bhi hai...
Khair abhi ke liye teeno ke bich sab thik ho gaya hai..
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So kasak ko kuch yaad nahi achhe se ki raat ko kya kya hua tha..
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jivu jo kar rahi hai kya woh thik hai... ya nischal joh sah raha hai woh thik hai..
yaar I think nischal ke liye kasak hi thik hai..
na aliens ke bich na koi jhagda, na koi khooni jung... ek simple si happy wali love story :D
Khair.. let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 
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Naina

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Nischal behad khush tha, usse laga jaise aaj he Jivisha uss ke pyar ko haan kah degi. Uske chehre ki chamak se saaf pata chal raha tha ki wo ander he ander jit ki khushi mana raha hai.

Lekin Jivisha ka mood to kuch aur he tha. Usse Nischal ko chidhane me maza aa raha tha aur wo usse khub chidha rahi thi.


Dono jab site scene ke liye pahunche, Nischal jab bhi kahta "ye dekho Jivisha", tab wo tedha muh jawab deti, isme dekhne jaisa kya tha. Raste ke jit ki khushi yahan aa kar jaise fus ho gayi ho.


Nischal pura mayus ho gaya. Usse lag gaya ki ye pyar uss ke bas ki baat nahi. Jivisha hans kar uss se baat to kar sakti hai, lekin pyar nahi.


Jivisha aage ki ore pahad ki khai dekh rahi thi aur Nischal piche raste ko dekhta, apne pyar ke nakami par mayus khada tha….


Nischal…… Jivisha pichhe mudo..


"Isme dekhne jaisa.… kya hai". Jivisha khai ke ore dekh'kar jaise hi pichhe mudi… Tabhi samne se awaz aayi….. "Haan mujh me dekhne jaisa kya hai. Baap matlab ghar ka naukar hota hai, jo sab ke liye achha soche aur sab usse he dhutkaro. Tum iss fraud ke sath kya kar rahi ho. Ek ladka ko shadi ke liye haan kah'kar, dusre ladke ke sath ghum rahi. Sharm naam ki chij hai ki nahi tum me".


Nischal…. Nahi uncle wo mere jid ke karan….


Himanshu….. "Ek sabd bhi nahi, chup ho jao aur jao yahan se. Aur tu khadi-khadi kya sun rahi hai"….


Raat ke waqt…. Nischal jab se wahan se lauta tha, man me yahi soch raha tha…… "Kuch bhi achha nahi ho raha. Filmon me aise situation banane wale mil jaye to main usse goli mar dun. Impress hona to dur ki baat hai, ab to lagta hai mujhse kabhi baat bhi nahi karegi. Phone kar ke puch to lun, meri wajah se usse sab padesan to nahi kar rahe".


Nischal, darte huye Jivisha ko call lagaya…. Jivisha, Nischal ka call dekhti….. "Dobara fir kabhi mujhe call mat karna, aur jo wada kiya tha uss par kayam rahna. Tum fail huye aur ab humare bich kuch nahi".


Nischal, Jivisha ki baat sunkar pure aawesh me aate huye khud se hi kahne laga…. "Bhad me jao tum Jivisha.. Bahut ho gaya tumhara natak"…


Ussi Raat, Rajeev gandhi zoological park, Pune…


Rijo aur uske sath aayi sainya tukdi ki purn vayvastha karne ke liye, Apini aur uski puri team ne 3-4 din me hi pura park me aatank machaye huye the… Saanp aur Sheron ke humle se pura park prashashan sakte me aa gayi thi aur pure park ko agle aadesh tak ke liye band kar diya gaya tha..


Rijo, Apini se Malkia ke vishay me purn jankari lekar, aaj ki raat ke plan ko jald se jald pura karne ke liye logon ko taiyar kar raha tha… Jivisha ke ghar ke har sadsya ke roop ke liye bahrupiye ki puri team ban chuki thi, jise khud Rijo lead karne wala tha…


Apini aur uske pure team ko rest diya gaya tha... Siway Josefer aka Jatin ko. Josefer ko 400 khatrnak tukdi aur 200 adrishi janwar ke sath Nischal par humla karke, ya to usse raat bhar tak uljhaye rakhna tha ya fir usse mar'kar jit ki khushkhabri deni thi…


Back up plan ke hisse me, yadi Josefer fail hota hai to bache sainya bal… 600 khatarnak tukdi aur 300 adrishi janwar ke sath Apini, Nischal par purn humla karke adhura kaam pura karega… Rijo ke dimag me yah baat bhi thi ki kahin dono hi fail ho gaye to bhi usse itna waqt mil hi jayega ki wo bharma kar Jivisha ko viman tak le aayega…


Sari planning lagbhag tay ho chuki thi. Sab log apni puri taiyari kar chuke the.. Josefer bhi taiyar hokra wahan pahunch chuka tha…


"Rijo, Apini mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai… tukdiyon ko kuch samay vishram ka aadesh de"… Josefer ghutne par baith'te huye sar jhuka kar apni baat kahi...


Rijo, Josefer ko utha'kar puchne lage… "kya ye baat itni jaroori hai"..


Josefer:- Yah main tay to nahi kar sakta ki baat kitni jaroori hai? Lekin mujhe itna jaroori to lag hi raha hai ki 2 minute ka vishram lekar aap meri baat suno..


Rijo ne sabko vishram ka ishara diya aur Josefer ko baithne ka ishara karte huye..… "Haan Josefer, kaho apni baat"..


Josefer:- Nischal Viggo Sigma hai. Wo bhi Alpha, unidentified first class…


Josefer ki baat sunkar sab log hasne lage…. "Viggo itihas me kewal 2 he Viggo Sigma huye.. aur tum kah rahe ho ki wo upar se Alpha unidentified first class bhi hai.. mujhe lagta hai uska khauff tumhare dil me baith gaya hai Josefer. Jinke itihas me aaj tak ek bhi Alpha ne nahi janm liya, usme tum Alpha, wo bhi unidentified first class bata rahe ho.. Ye zene kya aasman se tapak padi. Faltu ka hunra samay nasht kiya tumne"..


Apini:- Rijo, Josefer ki baat jhut bhi to nahi kah sakte.. Jis tarah usne hume pareshan kiya hai, uske Viggo hone se to main bhi inkar nahi kar sakta…


Rijo:- To kya humari itni badi sainya tukdi se wo akela bidh jayega…


Josefer:- Rijo usne ek device banaya hai, jo humare body micro praticle ko orignal shape me dikha sakta hai.. wo ye brihat paimane par bana chuka hai.. sath me ek khatre ke alert alarm system bhi Malkia aur apne doston ke ghar me laga chuka hai… Yadi usse lagega ki wo safal nahi ho pa raha hai, tab aisi soorat me wo humare yahan hone ke saboot prithwi ke rakhwalon ko de dega..


Rijo thoda chinta jahir karte… "Annhhhh ! Iss Viggo ko bhi iss aakhri kaam ke bich me hi aana tha… Aur koi jankari Josefer"


Josefer:- Haan ! Usse pata hai ki hum sab kahan hai.. kal raat wo yahan baith'kar baat karne aa raha hai..


Rijo:- Usse jankari hai ki hum yahan hain.. fir to wo sainya tukdi ke sath aayega… Jab yahan ke sainya tukdi se ladna hi hai, to aaj raat hi ye risk kyon na liya jaye…


Josefer:- Rijo usne sahmati dee hai ki wo akele hi baat karne aayega aur baat karke masle ka hal nikalega…


Rijo:- Uss Viggo Nischal ne sach me apni sahmati diya hai ki wo akela aayega…


Josefer:- Haan Rijo…


Rijo:- Josefer, tumhari suchna kamal ki hai… Thik hai tum uss Viggo par najar diye raho… Sabhi tukdi kal raat tak vishram karegi… Kal ke baat-chit ke baad, dobara se ranniti tay hogi…


Rijo ke aadesh par Josefer, Nischal par najar rakhne chal diya. Idhar Josefer ke jate hi Rijo aur Apni ki ek behad aham baithak hui jisme yah tay kiya gaya ki kal baat-chit ke dauran Nischal ki chhal se bali leni hai…


Idhar Josefer, Nischal par najar kya rakhne jayega, aisa lag raha tha jaise bhagwan se milne bhakt ja raha ho… Josefer sidha flat ka bell bajaya… Nandni darwaja kholi, fir jhat se darwaja band ki aur fir wapas se darwaja kholi… "Ji kahiye"..


Josefer:- Nischal se milna hai mujhe..


Nandni:- Aaeye ander aaeye… Akele hain ya aur bhi koi aaye hain...


Josefer:- Main samjha nahi…


Nandni:- Aap aaram se baith jaeye bhaiya.. pani piyenge…


Josefer nahi kahta rah gaya lekin Nandni steel ke glass me pani le aayi… Josefer, Nandni ke vyawhar se hairani me tha. Fir bhi ab wo samne glass hath me pakdi thi, to majboori me usse hath badhana hi para..


Jaise hi Nischal ne wo glass pakda, achha tej jhatka khaya aur wo bijli ke jhatke se piche feka gaya. Pahle jakar deewar se takraya fir 1-2 flower pot toote, aur finally wo lakdi ke table se takrane ke baad, dhamn se niche jamin par land hua…


Ab itni tej awaz ho aur Nischal ko sunai na de…. "Kya patak rahi hai Nandu"… kamre ke ander se hi awaz lagate Nischal bahar aaya… aur floor par Josefer ko dekh'kar, Nischal apne muh par hath rakhkar usse hi dekhne laga…


Nandni, Nischal ke kandhe par apne hath tikati… "Dekha kaise iss janwar ko sidha maut ka jhatka de di"


Nischal dhire se apna gardan ghuma kar dekhte huye… "Meri maa maut ka jhatka kyon de di.. aur itna bada jhatka dene ke liye kya khyal layi thi"…


Nandni:- Mujhe laga ye sala mere ander ka body organ chaba-chaba kar kha raha hai… aur wo bhi mere sath wo sab karte.. chi chi chi... Bus fir dil me josh aur hathon me shakti.... Aur natija dekh le, mitti me mil gayi iski hasti."


Nischal hawa ki furti me gayab hua aur 2 minute baad bahut sare saman ke sath wapas aaya… jaldi se Josefer ke sine me ek chhota sa surakh banaya aur apne hont se uske muh me hawa dene laga... Sath me uske sine ko bhi pump karne laga..


Takriban 10 minute ke upchar ke baad Josefer bahut hi jar-jar ki stithi me jaga.. Nischal medicine ke kuch ghol taiyar karke, ek glass me rakha aur usme apne sath laye ek chhote se patthar ko uske ander dal kar 2 minute tak chhod diya..


Kuch der tak patthar ko ander dubaye rakhne ke baad Nischal ne wo ghol chhan kar pani Josefer ko diya aur patthar apne bag me rakh aaya… Wo pani pine ke baad Josefer apne sharir me kuch takat mehsus karte, farsh se utha aur sofe par baith gaya…


Nandni to bus tukur-tukur Nischal ko hi dekh rahi thi… "Kamine tu apne grah ka doctor hai kya?"..


Nischal:- Sab samjha dunga kaun sa main bhaga ja raha hun…


Nandni:- Kutte ki dum, aaj tak to bataya nahi ki aisa kya hua tha jo tu yahan pahuncha. Upar se aur ek sawal dimag me store karne bol raha hai…


Nischal:- Koi ghar me aaya hai.. tu sabke samne aise bol rahi..


Nandni:- Kaun ye… ye wahi Jafar hai na jo ladkiyon ke sath kukarm karke uske maans ko kha jata hai.. iss sale ko tune bachaya kyon..


Josefer…. 1.2 decimal, bole to 12000 volt ka jhatka wo bhi still ke ek glass se current pass karwa diya… Viggo ye aap ki he tecnology ho sakti ha,i aur usse istamal karne wali bhi kamal ki hai.. Kya santulan hai uske pass.. kya timing hai.. aur kya knowledge hai ki marna kitne power me hain..


Nandni:- Tarif ka shukriya lekin iss pagal ne tumhe bacha liya... Ab raaj se koi parda hatayega ki tum dono ek sath kaise ho?


Nischal, idhar udhar dekhte… "doctor kahan hai Nandu"


Nandni:- Shayad hospital hai.. uss se naraj hun na, isliye 2-4 din ghar par kam hi rahega. Kafi intelligent hai mera doctor, usse pata hai ki gusse ke waqt main kuch nahi sunti, isliye 2-4 din gusse ke thande hone ka intzar karta hai.


Josefer:- Ye teeno film ki deewani ladkiyan… baat kuch bhi shuru ho.. khinch kar bakwas par hi le jayegi..


Khinch kar ek uddta hua chappal Josefer ke muh par para aur Nandni pil gayi, pass pari jhadu le kar… Nischal usse pakadte huye…. "Chhod de usse, bacha hai wo, usse pata nahi kahan kaun sa communication karna hai. Basically pahli baar mazak try kar raha hai"..
Lo pyaar suru hone se pehle hi kahani khatam.... :D
are yaar kasak ko lao re koi nischal ki jindagi mein...
Yeh roz ki jhik jhik koun dekhe.... :sigh:
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aur in gatar ke kido ko dekho... jab dekho bas nischal ko maarna hai aur jivu ko le jana hai.. lagta hai tap recorder mein itna record ho paya hoga uske baad kisine us recorder ko hi tod diya hoga..
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Yeh achha kiya nandu ne jor ka jhatka jor diya josefer ko..lekin phir bhi yeh nahi shudharne wala... nandu ko chhed ke samat bula liya hai isne... btw yeh jhatka us gatar ka kida apini & uske woh chirkut gang ko bhi deni chahiye.. shayad unlogo ko bhi akal aaye kuch...
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
 

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Nandni:- Batao pagalpan ki had hoti hai.. ek to public place par jhagra karta hai upar se attitude dekho bhai sahab ke.. Paun me mobile fek kar bhag gaya hai… Iski to main puri khabar lungi…


Ansh:- Lekin Nandu usne Shresh se jhagra kab kiya tha..


Nandni:- Jab wo Shresh ke sath jhagra kar raha tha, tab kya kisi ladki ko tar rahe the?


Ansh:- Usne Shresh se jhagra nahi kiya tha.. balki Shresh ko to usne gala pakad kar uthaya aur dharam se bar counter par patak diya… yahan dhyan dene wali kuch baaten hain.. pahli baat to ye ki Nischal ne ek hath se Shresh ka gala pakda tha aur thik uss waqt dusre hath me uske wine ki glass thi … dusra paun jamin me touch nahi kar rahe the.. teesra wo apni jagah se bina hile ye karnama kar chuka tha…


Nandni, Ansh ko ghurti hui… "Tumhe tv serial ki bimari lagi hai kya, jo ek saas ki tarah behave kar rahe ho aur bahu ki har bariki ko janch-partal me lage ho"..


Ansh:- Pagal ho gayi ho tum Nandu.. Wo koi insan nahi lagta.. mujhe to koi alian lagta hai.. dekhi nahi bina koi pakad banaye kaise usse utha kar patak diya..


Nandni:- Mere ander bhi ek alian wali power hai, jante ho kya?


Ansh:- Kya?


Nandni:- Apne aakhon ke ishare se tumhe raat bhar bahar sula sakti hun.. dekhna pasand karoge kya… pata nahi tumhare dimag me ye sab bakwas baaten aati kahan se hai…


Ansh:- lekin Nandu..


Nandni:- ekdum chup, yadi uss bare me ek shabd bhi nikale to tumhe alian banakar space ship me dalwa dungi…


Ansh ki baat par puri tarah se naraj hokar, Nandni, Ansh ko akele chhod'kar, wahan se car lekar nikal gayi. Ansh bhi uske pichhe-pichhe bhaga lekin Nandni usse ansuni karke nikal gayi…


Piche se taxi lekar Ansh bhi flat pahuncha… "Kya bachpana hai yaar, aise naraj hokar chali aayi"…


Nandni, apne kapde nikalti… "Tum analysis karte raho ki kaun alian hai aur kaun insan"…


Ansh, Nandni ka hath pakad kar uske kadmo me baith'te… "Sorry baba, ab mujhe jo laga wahi to maine kaha tumse.. Ab main tumse nahi share karunga to kis se karunga…


"Isse baat share karna nahi kahte hain Ansh. Baat mazak ki ho to hansi me kahin jati hai, lekin tum jis tone me kah rahe the usse yakin ke sath shaq hona kahta hain".... Nandni apni baat kahti hui, bijli ka bilkul halka jhatka Ansh ko de di.. Ansh jhatke se apna hath khincha aur hairan hokar dekhne laga ki ye jhatka kahan se laga..


Ansh jabtak jhatke aur aashraya se uabarta, tabtak Nandni apne upar kapde dal'kar kitchen me pahunch chuki thi… Ansh bhi Nandni ke piche-piche kitchen tak aaya, lekin Nandni usse jakar hall me baithkar tv dekhne bol di.


Takriban ghante bhar baad Nandni pasine se tar hoti hui kitchen se nikli… tabhi siti ke awaz ke sath… "Pasine me naha'kar aur bhi namkin ho gayi ho"… Nandni ko apne kano par yakin nahi hua tha.. wo ander he ander hanti hui khud se hi kahne lagi… "What… Doctor ne comment kiya.. ye kab se sudhar gaya"..


Baharhaal Nandni bika koi pratikriya diye sidhe jakar bathroom me ghus gayi. Nandni jaise hi ander kamre me gayi , thik ussi waqt Ansh, mukhya darwaja band karke sidha bathroom me ghus gaya… tabhi ek aur siti ki awaz aur… "gore badan par ye kali bra kayamat lag rahi hai"..


Nandni:- Chhi aisi baton ka koi tuk bhi banta hai kya… aur tum bathroom me kya kar rahe ho... Nischal aa jayega kabhi bhi..


Ansh:- Kaise aayega, maine mukhya dwar band kar diya hai..


Nandni:- To uske pass hamesa key hoti hai ek... Samjhe…


Ansh:- What, uske pass key hai.. koi nahi main yahan ka gate band kar'ke aata hun..


Nandni apne bache kapde utar'ti hui shawar chalayi… "uske pass mere room ki key bhi hai"..


Ansh… What ??? Iss room ki key..


Nandni:- Haan iss room ki key…


Ansh:- Lekin kyon???


Nandni:- Bharosa hai isliye... Kyon jaisi kya baat hai..


Ansh:- Aur kabhi hum dono sath huye exactly jaise abhi tum ho to…


Nandni:- Litrally ye tumhari query hai?


Ansh thoda gussa hote huye… "bhadosa, dosti aur close hone ke naam par kya tum kuch bhi karogi"..


Nandni, Ansh ki baat par thodi bhadki jaroor thi lekin shanti se uski stithi ko aakalan karne ke baad, aaram se puchhne lagi…. "Hmmmm ! Yadi mere mammi papa aa gaye aur hum dono ander huye fir kya hoga Ansh..


Ansh:- Wo to mammi papa hai yaar … wo honge to hum aisa karenge hi kyon ..


Nandni:- Aur Nischal hoga to koi fark nahi padega … manate raho rangraliya…


Ansh:- Haan to kisne kaha tha usse sath rakhne ke liye… Humari sari privacy chali gayi..


Nandni:- U know mr Ansh .. tumhe insecurity feel ho rahi hai. Nischal hai isliye tum ho iss ghar me Ansh, warna main yahan akeli hi thik thi..


Ansh:- Ye kuch jyada nahi ho raha hai kya?


Nandni:- Tum itna chidh kyon rahe ho Ansh. Main to aaram se baat kar rahi hun na... Ek baat batao kya humari shadi ho gayi Ansh..


Ansh:- Aaj na kal to ho hi jani hai..


Nandni:- Aur agar main abhi break up kar lun fir…


Ansh:- Yahi to hai tum ladkiyon me, kuch bhi ho to break up kar lo… lekin apni galti mat mano..


"Main tumse na to chidh kar puchh rahi hun aur na hi mera tone high hai. Ek sawal puchhi jawab do"… Nandni apna badan ko tauliye se pochhti hui puchne lagi…


Ansh:- Mujhe nahi pata… yadii break up hua to main ji nahi paunga…


Nandni:- wo to tumhara side hua… aur mere sath jo sex kiye … wo to bina relation ke maze lekar nikal jana hi hua na…


Ansh:- Hadd bewakoof ho tum Nandni… relation hai tab to hum aage badhe na… ek Nischal naam ke complication ke karan yadi tum break up karti ho, aur fir ye sawal puchhti ho to kahan tak jayaj hai…


Nandni, apne upar kapde dal chuki thi.. Ansh ko apne pass bulayi aur usse bistar par bitha'kar uske balon ko bikherti hui kahne lagi….


"Ansh pyar to bahut karte ho tum mujhse lekin fir bhi relation insecure hai"….. "Nahi aisi baat nahi hai Nandu, wo to bus Nischal ko lekar"…. "Now let me finish first" .


Nandni:- "Ek insecure relation, fir wajah chahe jo bhi rahe. Aaj wajah Nischal hai to kal Jivisha ho sakti hai. Fir ye bhi ho sakta hai ki tum apne hospital me pura samay do, aur tumhare pass aaj ke itna kal samay na ho… To break up ki wajah to kuch bhi ho sakti hai na baby… Center kewal Nischal hi kyon?"..

"To ek insecure relation me, main tumhare secure pyar ko feel karti, jab main secure ho sakti hun… Fir to Nischal ke sath mera complete relation hai. Purn viswas samjhte ho. Ruko samjhati hun kitna viswas hai. Main yadi achet awastha mein, complete nude bhi hoti hun to bhi uski najar nahi fisal sakti hai. Tane de dega meri haalat par openly.. ho sakta hai mujhe tease bhi kar de, lekin bhadosa itna hai ki uska meri ore dekhna, mujhe incesure nahi kar sakta."

Bhadose ka bahut bada aur shayad ghatiya example diya hai tumhe…. Shayad thoda asamajik example tha, lekin Nischal ke prati mere viswas ki kahani tum nahi samjh sakte aur na ye samjh sakte ho ki hum me dosti ke alawa koi relation ki feeling tak nahi. Waqt parne par mere liye wo maa bhi hai, baap bhi hai.. bhai bhi hai .. aur un sab se kahin badh'kar ek sacha dost hai"..

"Fir tum kaise soch sakte ho ki main bina shadi ke husband and wife wali privacy kar dun aur usse apne kamre me aane se mana kar dun"..


Ansh:- I am sorry Nandu..


Nandni:- Kamal hai Ansh, yadi mere mammi papa yahan honge to tab tum kyon mere sath romance karoge.. kyonki wo mere blood relation hai, aur abhi hum unmarried. Humari shadi bhi hui hoti, to bhi hum kuch aise rahte jaise unhe kuch pata na chale… lekin baat agar Nischal ki ho to tumhare dimag me sirf itna hi hota, ek anjaan ladka yahan kya kar raha hai…


Ansh, sharminda hote… "Baby I am sorry"


Nandni:- Tumhre dimag ke channel me to yahi chalta hoga na Nandni apne ghar ke kapde aise pahnti hogi, waise pahnati hogi.. pata na uss ladke ki najar hamesa kahan rahti hogi… lekin wahi yahan mera bhai ya baap hota, to Ansh babu ko koi fikr nahi hoti, kyonki ek ladki ka kapda pahn'na relation par depend karta hai… Bhai baap hoga to ache se kapde pahnegi … Aur yadi koi dost hoga jispar pura badhosa hai… oh sorry chhota sa correction… Flat me Nandni ke sath koi anjaan ladka ho to Nandni badan dikhati firegi…


Ansh, uth'kar Nandni ke pass baith'te huye usse side se pakad kar…. "Hey cutieeee… main apni baton ke liye behad sharminda hun… Gadha hun main jo gusse me kuch bhi kah gaya"…


Nandni:- Gusse me nahi nikla hai Ansh, jo khyal dimag me chalte hain, wahi juban par aa gayi tumhare... Kamal hai na Ansh, baap aur bhai apni kuwari beti ya bahan ke kamre me aa jaye to koi objection nahi, lekin Nischal hota kaun hai… Abhi nikal do usko. Tum to abtak humare physical relation ke bare me bhi soch chuke ho... My friend Nischal … Main tumse abhi baat karna chahti hun … please kisi tarah mujhse contact karo… just contact me any how….


Ansh:- Nandu main bahut sharminda hun…


Nandni:- Khana khao Ansh.. thanda ho jayega...


Abhi 10 minute bhi nahi huye the… Ek unknown number se ghanti bajne lagi. Nandni ki aakhen bhar aayi aur wo call utha'kar bus "hello" ki awaz ka intzar karne lagi. Nandni ko jaise hi pata chala dusri ore se Nischal hai...... "Nischal tumhe yahan aane ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.. tum ab apna kahin aur intzam dekh lo…"


Nandni, Nischal se baat karke call disconnet kar di aur apne kamre ko band karke lagatar roye ja rahi thi. Ansh darwaje par khada knock karne laga, lekin kafi der tak knock karne ke baad bhi jab Nandni ne koi jawab nahi diya tab Ansh khud ki baton par guilt feel karte, wo Nischal ko dhundhne ke liye Sawalker ki madad lene chala gaya.


Sawalker thane me nahi tha. Isliye uss se milne ke liye wo uske ghar chala gaya… Sawalker apni patni jyoti ke sath baithkar fursat ke pal bant raha tha aur dono pyar se ek dusre se baaten kar rahe the…


Tabhi unke ghar ke darwaje ki ghanti baji… "Are doctor sahab aap.. aaeye ander aaeye"…


Jyoti, Ansh ko dekhti hui puchhne lagi, "ye kaun hai".. Sawalker bhi uska parichay dete huye Ansh ke vishay me sari jankari de diya. Ek chhote parichay ke baad Sawalker, Ansh se uske aane ka karan puchhne laga…

Ansh kya kahe aur kya nahi… Dabe huye shabdon me bus itna kaha ki kuch gadbad ho gayi hai aur Nandni ne Nischal ko flat par wapas aane se mana kar diya…


Jyoti jise mamle ke bare me kuch bhi nahi pata tha.… "Doctor sahab humare shadi ko 12 sal ho gaye hain.. aur mera pati ek police wala hai. Police wala ka matlab samjhte ho aap. Main batati hun, kisi par yakin nahi karna. Aap ke pass baitha hai mera pati, puchh lo ki yadi Nandni ke jagah wo humare sath rahta to wo kya sochta"..


Sawalker:- Nischal ke case me sochna jaisa to kuch bhi hai hi nahi. Wo to dwapar yug ka koi balak lagta hai jiski bhasha aur najar dono me koi chhal nahi... Pahle din wo raat ke 2 baje mujhe sadak par mila tha deewano ki tarah bhatkte.. bus uss waqt usse 2 line suna tha aur samjh gaya sab kuch uske bare me..


Jyoti:- Itne salon me ek wahi hai jise main ghar me aana allowed nahi ki, balki uske yahan aane ya jane se koi fark hi nahi parna hai. Aisa lagta hai pariwar me ek pyara sadsya ne entry le lee hai. Bus iss piyaakad ne uss bache ko bigad diya hai..


Ansh:- Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi. Nandni ne khana bhi nahi khaya aur darwaje lagakar soyi hai..


Jyoti:- Soyi nahi hogi ro rahi hogi. Jyada socho nahi Ansh, yah ek aam ghatna hai… dampatti jivan me aisi samsya to hote rahti hai… Lekin riston ke bich jhagra aur pyar hi rakhna .. nafrat aur shaq nahi. Ab jao tum Nandni ko manao, Nischal ko bura lagega to bhi wo flat wapas aayega.. aur bura nahi lagega to bhi wo flat wapas aayega…


Ansh:- Bura laga hoga to kyon aayega wo wapas..


Sawaker:- Kyonki wo sacha dost hai, usse samjh me aa gaya hoga ki Nandni gusse me hogi, isliye uss se jhagra karega usse 4 baten sunayega, lekin wapas aayega…


Sawalker aur Jyoti se milne ke Ansh ko apne dil ka bojh kuch halka sa lagne laga… wah flat wapas gaya, lagbhag 1 ghante lage honge usse khade-kahde darwaje par tab kahin jakar Nandni ne darwaja khola…
Itna emotion bhara hai story me ki pad ke lagta hai khud kahani me ji rahen hai. keep giving such type fantastic update
 
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