Adultery KALYUG ( Antt Hi Aarambh Hai ) { Incest , Fantasy , Romance , Thriller }

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KALYUG... Part.. 16



( I Miss you Maa )


Evening Time... 5 : 35 PM...


Location... Unknown...


...Huhhhhh... Woh jaa chuki hai... Mujhe chodd kar... Kaash maine usse baat ki hoti mai usko bta pata woh mujhe kitni pasand hai... Toh shayad halaat kuch aur hote... Shayad woh mere saath hoti... Yeh sab meri wajah se hua mujhe Jana hi nahi chahiye tha use akela chodd kar... Sab meri galti hai... Mujhe maaf kar dena agar tum mujhe sun rahi ho... Agar mai tumhe chod kar nahi jata toh syad kuch nahi hua hota... Sab meri galti hai sab meri...


Vimala... Beta Tony...


Tony... ( Soch se bahar aate hue ) Huhhh kya hua...


Vimala... ( Kandhe par hath rakh kar ) Beta Nandu subh se akela hai usne hospital mai kuch nahi khaya yeh khana laayi thi uske liye... Ab jo ho gaya usko hum badal nahi sakte... ( Nam aankhon se ) Yashoda ab kabhi wapis nahi aane waali... Woh hume chod kar jaa chuki hai iss baat ko tumhe maan Lena chahiye... maanti hun kaafi muskill hai magar Nanduu uska kya... Tum aise rahoge toh usko kon sambhalega... Kya use tumhe aise dekh khushi hogi... Kya woh kuch nahi tumhare liye...


Tony... ( Chonkte hue ) Yeh kya keh rahi hai aayi... Beta hai woh mera...


Vimala... ( Aansun ponchte hue ) Toh aise baithne se kuch nahi hoga... Yeh le khana usne subh se kuch nahi khaya... Usne apni maa ko khoya hai ab tumhe baap ke saath use maa ka pyaar bhi Dena hoga...


Tony... ( Uthkar khada hote hue ) hmmmm... La de mai jaa raha...


Tony hath se Tiffin le leta hai aur jaane lagta hai... Vimala usko jaate hue dekhti hai tabhi Tony rukta hai...


Tony... Nazim ghar aaya kya...


Vimala... ( Ghabrate hue ) naaahiii.... Kkyyuuu...


Tony... Bas aise hi...


Tony waha se nikal jata hai uske jaate hi... Vimala ka chehra paseene se bheeg jata hai... Woh samjh Rahi thi Tony ka ishara kiss baare mai hai... Use apne bete ki fikar bhi ho rahi thi... Aur uske kiye par sharminda bhi thi...


Usne apne dimaag ko samjha Diya tha... Ki Nazim ne jo kiya woh galat hai use iski Saza milni hi chahiye...



Lekin Dil nahi maan raha tha Maa jo thi 9 maheene pet mai pala use, uske baad kaafi sangharsh kiya usne Nazim ko bada karne ke liye... Naurkiri bhi ki jisse ghar chal sake lekin khoobiyon ke saath khaamiyan bhi hoti hai...


Ghar chalane ke liye bahar kaam karte samay woh Nazim ko Sikhsha nahi de paayi ho maa apne bacche ko bachpan se sahi galat ka chnaav karna shikhati hai... Kya accha hai kya bura... magar woh kaam ke chalte Nazim par dhyaan nahi de paayi aur kab Nazim basti ke logo ki sangat mai bigadna chaalu hua use pta na chala... Aur jab chala tab tak der ho chuki thi... Aane waali pal ki kalpana kar uski ruhh kaamp rahi thi kya hoga aage...


Evening Time... 6 : 20 PM...


Location... ****** Hospital...



...Nandu kya hua bta na... Bol kyun nahi raha kya likha hai isme... Dekh mera dil ghabra Raha h... Mujhe fir se Rona aa jayega tune merese baat nahi ki toh... Sunnn Naa... Nanndu...



Mai Jo file mai likhi baaton ka matlb samjhne ki koshish kar raha tha... Lekin Sweety karne de tab na... Aadhe ghante se pareshan kar rahi hai... Pehle khud muhh Fula leti hai aur na manao toh bhi meri hi galti hai maine kyun nahi manaya... Huhhhh Ladkiyon ke kitne Nakhre hote hai... Baap re pta nahi jisse Shaadi hogi uska kya haal hoga bhagwan uski aatma ko shanti de... he he he... Mai bhi kya soch raha agar isko pta chal gya... toh mai gya kaam se chup rehne mai hi bhalai hai...


Mai... ( Jhunjhulate hue ) kya hai 2 min chup nahi baith sakti bad bad kare jaa rahi kab se... Abhi thodi der pehle muhh Fula liya tha kya hua... Ab kyun baat kar rahi hai mujhse...


Sweety... ( Gusse mai ) Huhhh... Aur Tune jo mujhe Rulaya uska kuch nahi... Dekh meri aankhein laal ho gayi hai subh se khana bhi nahi khaya Maine... Aur tune mujhe rulaya thoda sa pyaar se baat kar leta toh kya ho jata...



Mai... Toh aisa bol na bhookh lagi hai bhukkad kahi ki... Maine khaya kya subh se kuch... haan... Yeh nahi ki khana khila de 1 ghante se bass dimaag kha rahi hai... Tujhse aacha meri Dimpi hai kitna khayal rakhti hai mera...


Sweety... ( Gusse me ) kyaaaaa kaaahaa ek baar fir se kehna...


Mai... ( Ghabrate hue ) kucch nahi... Woh mujhe bhookh lagi jaa bahar dekh kar aa baba yaa koi aaya hai kya Tiffen leke...


Sweety... ( Rukhe swar mai uthte hue ) Huhhhhh... Tumhe toh mai baad mai dekhti hun... Ek baar theek ho jao fir aisi dhunayi karungi ki dubara mere saamne uss kutiya ka naam nahi loge...


Mai... Tum usse itna chidhti kyun ho...


Sweety... ( Ghoorte hue ) Huhhhh...


Mai... Kuchhhh nahiii...


Sweety mujhe ghurti hui Room se bahar nikal gayi uske jaate hi maine ek aaahhhh bhari tabhi mera dhyaan ek baar fir File ki taraf gya aur mai sochne laga...


Isme likha sach hai yaa jhooth kaise pta karun... Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai gaadi aaker ruki thi yeh Reports bata Rahi hai ki humara gaadi se accident hua jisme maa ko chot lagi... Lekin maa toh mere upar thi jab mai gira tha fir isme accident kyun likha hai... Aur Dusri Post Mortem hai lekin... Kyun samjh nahi aa raha...


Abhi mai soch hi Raha tha ki Ek baar fir Darwaza khulta hai jisme se Sweety ander aati hai Naak par gussa abhi bhi tha uske... woh chalte hue mere paas aati hai aur khana plate mai nikal bed par rakh deti hai... Mai usko gusse mai dekh kuch bolne ki himmat nahi juta pata aur uth kar baithne ki koshish karta hun...



Pairon mai patti ki wajah se mushkil hoti hai jise dekh Sweety paas aati hai mujhe sahara dekar baitha deti hai... khana khane ke liye hath badhaya toh dard hua aahhhh nikal gayi... Tab woh paas mai baith jaati aur plate apnr hath mai le ek nivala bna kar muhh ke pass kar deti hai...


Mai uski harkaton ko dekh muskura raha tha... Aur saath mai khana bhi kha raha tha... Ab bhi uska muhhh Fula hua tha jisper mujhe hasi aa rahi thi magar mai jaise taise karke roke hue tha khudko... Mujhko muskurate dekh pta nahi use kya hota hai aur woh khana khilane ki wjh mere muhhh mai khana thoosne lagti hai... Aur Uthkar baahar chali jaati hai...


Mid Night... 9. :45 PM...


Sweety ko gaye kaafi der ho gayi thi woh aayi nahi shayad Baba yaa kisi ke saath ghar chali gayi hogi... Ab maine aaram karne ki Sochi magar jaise hi aankhein band ki toh maa ka chahra dikhayi diya jise dekhte maine aankhein khol li... Aur meri aankhon mai ek baar fir nami aa gayi...


Kitna bhi mai khud ko sabke saamne saabit kar lun ki sakht launda hoon mai sambhal chuka hun... Magar saachai yeh hai ki aaj hi meri maa mujhe chod kar jaa chuki hai... woh maa jisne mujhe paal posh kar bada kiya... Jise mujhe chalna shikhya , sahi galat ka chayan karwaya , apne sanskaar diye... Aur aaj woh mujhe akela chod jaa chuki hai....


" Ghutno se rengte rengte kab pairon par khada hua...
Teri Mamta ki chaanv mai jane kab mai bada hua...

Mai hi mai hoon har jagah , maa yeh pyaar Tera kaisa hai ?
Seedha saccha bhola bhala Mai hi sabse aacha hun..

" Kitna Bhi Bada Ho Jaun Maa mai Humesha Tera Baccha hoon ""


Yaad mai mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi... Aansun ponch kosish kar raha tha sone ki... tabhi gate khulta hai...Baba ander aate hai... Unki aankhein bhi dekhne mai Laal lag rahi thi... Shayad rone ki wajah se ho yaa pta nahi abhi mai unhe dekh hi raha tha ki woh ladkhadate hue ander aaye aur mere baaju mai baith gye...


Unki haalat dekh mai samjh gaya ki daaru pee kar aaye hai... Woh mujhe hi dekh rahe the saath hi mere sir par hath ferte rahe... Main unko aur unki harkaton ko dekh raha tha... Lekin bola kuch nahi unhone bhi mujhe kuch nahi bola bass mere sir par haath ferte rahe... kaafi time baithne...


Tony... Ab kaise tabiyat hai mere bete...


Mai... ( Unko dekh normal hote hua ) ab theek hai aap Kab aaye...


Tony... Bas abhi... Soye Nahi abhi tak...


Mai... ( Hichkicha kar ) wwohh basss aiiseee hiii...


Tony... Maa ki yaaad aa rahi hai...



Mai... Huuuhhhhh ( ekdum se shock ho gaya ) hmmmm...


Tony... Mujhe bhi....


Maine Baba ko dekh unki aankhein Nam thi maine maa aur Baba ko kam hi baat karte hue dekha tha... Mujhe laga shayad dono ke beech jhagda hai isliye dono baat nahi karte lekin Baba bhi maa ko utna yaad kar rahe jitna mai kar hoon... Hmmm maine unka unka ek hath jo khali tha usko thaam liya unhone ek baar meri taraf dekha... Aur kuch kha nahi... Kaafi der tak woh mere sir par hath ferte rahe...


Aur pta nahi kab mujhe neend aa gayi....



Mid Night... Time 10 : 55 PM...


Location... ****** Hospital...


...Daddddd...


Aadmi... ( Chonkte Hue ) Huhhhh sukuuu... Tumhe Hosh aa gya... Ruko mai Doctor ko bula kar lata hun...


Ladki... ( Dubara awaaz dete hue ) Nahi Dad mere paas jayada Time nahi hai main jaanti hun... Mujhe kya hua hai uska ilaaj...


Aadmi... Beti tumhe kuch nahi hua... Ab tum theek ho Doc ne kha hai hafte bhar mai tumhe chutti mill jayegi... ( Nam aankhon se ) Aur fir tumhe apni Maa ki tarah Doctor banna hai na... Apna sapna poora karna hai...


Ladki... Lekin Dadddd...


Aadmi... Maine kaha na tumhe kuch nahi hoga... Jab tak apna sapna poora nahi kar leti... Abhi tumhe aaram ki jarurat hai...



Ladki... Daddd....


Aadmi... Shhhhhhh.... aankhein band karo... Sab theek ho jayega...


Ladki ne apne Dad ki taraf dekha jo uske paas baith uske sir par hath fer rahe the... Usne bhi unka ek hath thaam liya aur aankhein band kar li... Jaise usne bharosa kar liya tha jo Dad ne kaha woh sach hai... lekin kaise.... ???


Wanhi Aadmi bhi kisi aur soch mai gummm tha... Mujhe maaf kar dena beti abhi mai tumhe kuch nahi bata sakta... Mai jo kiya galat ya sahi mujhe Nahi pta lekin iske alawa koi aur raasta nahi tha mere pass...


Raat Gehri hoti Gayi dheere dheere sab log so gye... Sivay teen Logo ke... Jo aap sab jante hi Hain... Tony , Unknown Aadmi , Vimala....



Tony / Aadmi ne poori raat apne bete / beti ke saath baith kar nikaal di... Wanhi Vimala ko apne bete Nazim ka intjaar tha uski neend bhi gayab thi ab tak Nazim Ghar jo nahi aaya tha... Aur aata bhi kaise... Woh kisi aur ka shikaar ban chuka tha....


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Bahot bada game khela gaya h Yashoda ke saath matlab woh ladki ka koyi part kharab tha jisse badalna zaroori tha nahi mar jaati or yeh bhai sahab apni beti bachane ke liye Yashoda ki Bali chadha daali yeh bhi Socha uske beta ka kia hoga sirf apni beti ke baare m Socha or report yeh bana daali ki Yashoda ka accident huwa tha sahi bhai bahot bada game khel Tum tow
Vimla jo ab nazim ka intizar mat karo woh bahot door chala gaya jaha se koyi wapas nahi aata
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Editing...

Ghanta!!!!

Kitni spelling mistakes hai aur editing aise likh rahe ho jaise kitna bada kaam kiya ho

( KALYUG... Part 3 )



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Morning... 7:34AM...



Thhhkkk thkkk thkkkk... TejSingh... TejSingh... Ander ho yaa bhaag gye... Darwaza kholo mai kehta hoon... Thkkkk thkkkk... TejSingh.



TejSingh jo kursi par baithe baithe hi so gya tha uska dhyaan darwaje par jata toh uth kar use khol deta hai... Khat khat se Yashoda ki neend bhi khul gayi thi... Woh bhi uth kar baith jaati hai tabhi kamre mai do log ander aate hai... Jimse se ek ko woh pehchanti thi... Yeh wohi ladka tha jo aaye din usse chedta rehta tha... Uske sath uska baap tha shayad... Jisse woh pehchanne ki koshish karti hai.. tabhi ek kadak awaaz use sunayi deti hai jo woh shakhs kehta hai...



Aadmi... TejSingh... Mujhe dukh hai jo kuch bhi kal hua uske baare mai sunkar magar uska mai kuch nahi kar sakta... Mai jaha yeh jaane aaya hoon ki mere paise ka kya hua... Jise tumne 2 maheene pehle dene ka wada kiya ab jo kal hua usme meri toh koi galti nahi hai na... Tum keh rahe the meri beti naukri kar Paisa chuka degi ab use bhi wanha se nikaal diya gaya hai... Ab Mera Paisa kon dega yeh batao... kal ko agar tum bhaag Gaye toh mere paise toh latke reh jayenge na batao kon dega Mera Paisa tum yaa tumhari beti....



TejSingh... ( Jo kaafi der tak sab baatain sun raha tha use pta tha yeh sab hoga lekin itni jaldi hoga usne yeh ummeed nahi ki thi... Kal hi toh patni ki Chita ko aag ke hawale kiya hai usne... Aaj apne saamne khade shaks ko dekh woh kya bole kuch samajh nahi aa raha yeh wahi dost tha uska jo saath dene ka dawa karta tha aaj muskill time mai yeh bhi uske saath bartaav dekh uski aankhein jawaab de gayi... ) Shersing mujhe thoda samay aur dedo... tum jante hi ho kal kya hua tha mujhe thoda samay dedo.. mai dost hun tumhara tum mujhe bachpan se jaante hai mai tumhari paayi paayi chuka dunga...



Shersing... Dost mera hai paise ka toh nahi na... Woh kisi ka dost nahi hota na... Kal ko tu na de paya aur tune bhi kuch kar liya toh apna paisa kisse manunga yeh bata... teri beti se jo ab naukri bhi nahi karti toh Mera Paisa kon dega... Hai kuch jawab tumhare paas...



TejSingh... ( Gidgidate hue ) Nahi nahi.. tum mujhpar bharosa rakho mai kahi nahi jaunga mai jubaan deta hun mujhe 1 maheene ki mohlat dedo mai tumhara saara karza chuka dunga...


Shersing... Mere maathe par chutiya likha hai kya.. yaa mujhe banane chale itne dino se paisa nahi chuka paye toh ek mahine mai kaha se doge batao mujhe... Hai koi jawaab tumhare pass... Mai yaha apna paisa lene aaya hun aur Paisa leke jaunga warna tum aache se jaante ho mujhe mai kya karsakta hun...



Yeh kehte waqt ek kameeni muskaan uske chehre par utar aate hai jise TejSingh samjh jata hai... Woh uske bete ko dekhta jo hawas ki najron se uski beti ko dekh raha hota hai... Woh samjh jata hai baap bete Jaan kar yaha jhagda karne aaye hai jiska woh fayda utha sake.. abhi woh kuch bolta uske pehle woh dekhta hai shersing ka beta uske kaan mai kuch kehta jise sun..ek kameeni muskaan se ek nazar woh Yashoda ko dekhta hai neeche nazron kiye aakh se aasun Baha rahi thi...



Shersing... Theek hai mai tujhe ek mahine ka time aur deta hun agar paise ka intzaam nahi hua toh yaad rakhna agli baar yaha se khali haath nahi jaunga.. ( ek nazar yashoda par daal dono baap bete nikal jaate hai... Aane wale kal ki planning karne unko pta tha TejSingh kabhi ek mahine mai unka Paisa nahi de sakta fir woh jo karenge uske baare mai soch dono khushi se ek tahaaka maar dete hai aur apne ghar ki taraf nikal padte hai... )
TejSingh bhi unki baatain unke haav bhaav se samjh chuka tha ki woh aage kya karne waale hai.... Usne apni zindagi jee li thi use apni beti ki fikar hoti hai woh kaise bachayega apni beti ko un haiwaano se.... Qyuki aaj nahi toh kal woh yaha fir se aayenge... Aur ek mahine mai itni badi rakam ka intjaam karna bhi muskill hai... Ek nazar woh apni beti ko dekhta hai... Abhi tak nazrein zameen par gadaye hue thi.. dar se hath kaamp rahe the uske... Usko bhi andaja tha ki woh log kya karne ka keh gaye hai...



Aane wale pal ka soch uski ruhhh tak kaamp chuki thi... Usko apna kal dikh raha tha kya hoga uske saath woh abhi se dekh paa rahi thi... Tabhi ek haath uske kapte hathon par use mehsus hota hai... Woh nazar utha kar dekhti hai toh uske pita use sab theek hone ka aasvasan de rahe the... Woh dikha rahe the main tumhare saath hoon tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... Jisse Yashoda bhi thodi bhut sambhal gayi thi... Uske pita uske saath hai yeh dekha usme thodi himmat aayi magar ek mahine mai itna paisa dena sambhav nahi yeh khyaal bhi uske dimag Mai ghoom raha tha...


Aage aane pal ne ek baar fir use soch mai gum kar diya tabhi.. baacha ek baar fir roone laga jisse Yashoda ka dhyaan bhi uspar jata hai woh aage badh use goad me utha leti hai ek nazar apne pita ko dekhti hai... Jise dekh TejSingh samjh jaata hai aur ghar se bahar nikal chal deta hai...
Poore Raaste Tej Singh ka dimaag chalta rehta hai... Kal hi beti ka rista tuta hai aur shayad woh log bhi uski madat na kare na shaadi ke liye maane... Usko bas apni beti ko kaise bhi kar surakshit karna tha ... Jo iss sheher mai rehkar toh hona sambhav hi nahi tha... Ek khyaal uske man mai yeh bhi aa raha tha ki use khud se door karke sahi kar raha hai ki nahi.... Kya uski beti Jo abhi ** saal ki hai bhale hi badi hai magar bin maa baap ke kaise surakshit reh sakti hai... pita se saaye se jayada kya surakshit ho sakta hai bacchon ke liye... Magar wo haalat ko bhi andekha nahi kar sakta tha abhi ke haalat mai uska saath rehne se jayada door rehna behtar lag raha tha...



Tabhi dukaan aa jati hai aur woh doodh ka packet le ghar ki taraf chal deta hai... Wohi lautate waqt woh doodh ke packet ko dekh sochta hai... Ab akeli toh nahi hai beti meri ek zimmedari bhi aa gayi hai uske upar... Yehi uske akele mai uska saath degi... Aur jeene ki wajah bhi.... Soch kar uske chehre par muskaan aa jati hai aur woh ghar mai kadam rakh deta hai... Beti toh uski gate par hi moujood thi ki kab uske pita aaye kab woh unse paket le doodh garam kare baacha bhookha hai subh se... Woh yeh bhool gayi thi ki usne aur uske pita ne bhi kal se kuch nahi khaya tha... Magar use khud ki bhookh na dikh baache ke liye vyakul hote dekh TejSingh ki aankhe bhi nam ho gayi... Fir man hi man TejSingh kuch faisla karta hai...



Apne pita ko soch mai gum dekh Yashoda kuch nahi kehti bas hath se doodh ka Packet le kitchen mai chali jaati hai... TejSingh bhi Yashoda ko jaata dekh kuch sochte hue ghar se bahar nikal jata hai...
Late night... 11:27 PM...
Location... Bus Service Station...



TejSingh.... Kamalnath.. bhut ehsaan hai tera mujhpar Pata nahi iss janam mai main tera karz chuka paunga yaa nahi... Bas iss zanam mere upper ek aakhri upkar aur karde... Meri beti ko sahi salamat yaha se door le jaa warna woh bhediye meri beti ko noch dalenge... Main jaanta hun un kameeno ko aache se aaj nahi toh kal woh meri gair mojudgi mai Agar mere ghar aa gye toh mai kaise apni baachi ki raksha kar paunga... Pasion se woh kuch bhi kar sakte hai main unka saamna nahi kar paunga... Meri aakhiri umeed lekar mai tumhare paas aaya hun... Yeh madat karde mere bhai mai tera zindagi bhar ehsaan mand rahunga...


Yashoda jo kaafi der se apne pita ki baat sun Rahi thi... Hairaan thi ki akhir yeh sab ho kya raha hai... Woh raat mai baache ko doodh pila so rahi thi tabhi uske pita usko yaha le aaye... Woh pita se puchti rahi ki hum kaha Jaa rahe hai itni raat ko pitaji.. magar TejSingh ne use kuch na bataya aur yashoda ka kuch samaan ek puraane se bakse mai rakh ghar se nikal yaha uske chachere bhai kamalnath ke paas aa phuncha.... Jaha yashoda hairan sab kuch samjhne ki koshish kar rahi thi wohi TejSingh Kamalnath ko sabkuch bta deta hai jo kuch woh kal aur aaj hua...



Asal me Kamalnath bus service mai kaam krta tha aur apni patni ke saath dusre sheher mai rehta hai... Kabhi kabhi jab sheher ka chakkar lgta tha toh yaha apne bhai se milne aa jaya karta tha... Kamalnath ne apne bhai TejSingh ki kayi baar paiso se madat bhi ki thi... Waise toh woh bhi middle class family se hai do baache uske dono beti Yashoda ke Umr ke lagbhag hi hongi... paison ki jarurat use bhi rehti thi magar uska gujar basar chal jata tha... Bus se aachi khaasi kamayi ho jaati thi uski... jo ghar chalane ke liye paryapt thi...



Yashoda apne pitaji ko dekhti toh kabhi apne chacha ko... Woh soch hi Rahi thi abhi kuch bolne ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi usme...



Wahi Kamalnath TejSingh ki baatain sun jaha hairan hua bhabhi ka sun use dukh bhi hua ki itna sab kuch ho gya.. woh aaj iss sheher mai bhut samay baad aaya tha... Uski biwi ko uska yaha aana aur TejSingh se milna pasand nahi tha... Karan yehi tha ka kahi na kahi use lagta tha TejSingh uske pati ka fayda utha raha hai.. Meethe meethe baaton Mai fasa use loot leta hai... woh bhi gareeb ghar se aayi thi shaadi ke bhut din usne aise bhi dekhe jab ghar mai khane ko kuch nahi tha... Magar uska pati uske saath khada raha aur apni mehnat se aaj uske sir par chath aur aachi naukri hai... Aise mai woh nahi chahti thi ki TejSingh ki wajah se use fir se woh din dekhne pade... TejSingh uski nazar mai berojgar kisi kaam ka nahi tha... Na uske saath rista rakhne ke liye uske paas paise the...



Ji haan is kalyug mai riste bhi paise dekh kar rakhe jaate hai... Jitna jayada paise waale utne Jayda cahhne waale uske...


Kher Kamalnath abhi soch hi Raha tha ki kaise woh apni Yashoda ko ghar leke jayega... Aur jab uski biwi ko pta chalega toh woh kya bakheda karegi woh yahi soch raha tha... Pichli baar bhi jab woh TejSingh se mila tha aur uski kuch madat ki thi paise de kar... Yeh baat uski biwi ko pta chal gayi uss din dono mai kaafi kaha suni Hui thi.. kafi din tak biwi ne usse baat bhi nahi ki thi... Ab firse woh yeh sab nahi chahta tha apne ghar mai... Magar halaat ko madde Nazar rakhte hue use TejSingh se Na karna bhi sahi nahi laga...



Kamalnath... Kya Yashodha sirf teri beti hai meri kuch nahi lagti kya... Chinta Mat kar mere do nahi teen beti hai... Tu bas apna khayal rakhna.. iska mujhspar chod de...

Thodi himmat jama kar kamalnath itna hi bol pata hai jise sun TejSingh jo chinta bhare nazron se kamalnath ke bolne ka intzaar thodi Rahat hoti hai... Wahi isse palat Yashoda ki haalat ek baar fir kharab ho gayi apne pita ko akela chod kar jana use pasand nhi aa raha tha... jab use pta tha uske jaane ke baad yaha kya hona hai...



Yashoda... ( Aankh seaansun bahate hue apne pita ki kalayi pakad leti hai himmat krke ) Nahi pita ji mai aapko chodd kar kahi nahi jaungi... Agar Jana hi hai toh aap bhi humare saath chalo warna mai kahi nahi jaungi...



TejSingh... ( Apni beti ka pyaar dekh aakhen nam ho jaati hai beti ke sir par ek haath ferte hue kehta hai ) beti tujhe yaha ke halat pata hi hai kaise hai agar mai bhi tere saath chal dunga toh sabko pata chal jayega hum kaha gaye hai... Paison ki madat se woh hume dhoondh nikalenge.. fir mai chah kar bhi tumhari madat nahi kar paunga... Mera yakeen maan beti mai jo kar raha hun hum teeno ki bhalayi ke liye kar raha hoon.. ( ek ishara baache ki taraf kar deta jisse woh apni family ka sadasya maan liya tha.. ) aur jaise hi halat theek honge mai waha tumhe lene wapas aa jaunga bas kuch din intjaar kar lo Mai wada karta hun tumse jald hi mai waha tumhe lene aa jaunga...



Yashoda... ( Ki chinta abhi bhi khtam nahi hui thi ) lekin pita ji yaha woh.....


TejSingh... ( Hath ko majboot pakad bana kar ) Bharosa rakh sab theek ho jayega... Tu chinta mat kar mai bhi yaha se jaldi door chala jaunga... Waada kiya hai na jald hi tujhse milne aaunga....



Yashoda abhi kuch aur kehti ki bus driver Kamalnath ko awaaz de chalne ko bolta hai... TejSingh bhi apni beti ke kandhe ko pakad bus ki taraf chal padta hai... Aur apni beti ko bus Mai baitha pyaar se uske sir par hath fir jhuk kar maathe par ek kiss karta hai aur baache par bhi ek kiss kar deta hai... Baacha neend mai uski ungli jor se pakad leta hai.. jaise use jane se rok raha ho.. jise dekh TejSingh ke chehre par bhi ek muskurahat aa jati hai... Aur woh apna haath baache se chuda bus se neeche utar jata hai...


Yashoda apne pitaji ko khidki se dekh rahi thi... uske pita ne wada kiya tha woh jald hi usekene aayenge.. par pta nhi Uska man vyakul ho raha woh uthkar bahar aane ko hoti hai ki bus chal deti hai... Yashoda ek baar fir aasun bahate hue pitaji ko dekhti hai pukarti hai magar bus jaate hi TejSingh palat jata hai shayad apne aansun chipa raha ho...



TejSingh... Mujhe maaf kar dena beti shayad humhara saath yahi tak likha tha... Shayad mai aacha pita aacha pati na ban saka... Magar pyaar kabhi kam nahi hua tumhare liye... Yaad hai mujhe jab tumhe pehli baar goad mai uthya tha aur woh pal bhi jab pehli baar tumhare muh se maa ki jagah papa nikal tha... ( Aankhon se aasun bhahate hue wahi paas ki dewaar se sir tika baith jata hai ) mai tumhe kuch nahi de saka beti meri itni haisiyat hi nahi ki mai tujhe kuch de sakun.. bass pyaar mai koi kami nahi hone di.. jo kuch tha sab daav par laga tujhe doctor banana chahta tha... Magar dene ko ghuus nahi thi toh nurse hi sahi.... Mujhe maaf kar dena maine tujhse jhooth bola ab shayad hi tu apne baap ko kabhi dekh sake... Agr mai aisa nahi karta toh woh bhookhe bhediye tum tak phunch jaate aur mai apni phool si beti ke saath aisa kaise hone de sakta hun... Mujhe maaf kar dena...



Kaafi der baithe rehne ke baad uthkar chal deta hai apne ghar ki taraf... Jo poora Khali pada tha kamre mai ander jaa woh gate ko band kar leta hai...




Next Day Morning... 6:35 AM
Location... ****** Kamalnath house...


Kamalnath apni biwi Manju ke saamne baitha tha paas mai hi Yashodha khadi dono ko dekh rahi thi... Manju subh apne pati ko wapas aaya dekh khush hoti hai aur ander bula chai banane ko chali jati hai bina peeche mude... Kamalnath bhi Yashodha ke saath ghar mai ande chal deta hai... Tabhi Manju bhi kitchen se chai lekar aa jati hai.... Aur apne pati ko ek ladki ke saath aaya dekh hairaan hoti hai.. saath mai pareshan bhi qki ladki ke hath mai baccha tha... Use dekh pta nahi kitne khyaal aa rahe the uske man jise woh rok nahi paa rahi thi aur chalti hui apne pati ke saamne baith jati hai...



Manju... Mujhe btaoge yeh kon hai... Aur yaha kyun hai...



Kamalnath ko samjh nahi aa raha tha woh kya bole... Qki use pta tha abhi kya hone wala hai... Tabhi woh Manju ko kamre mai chalne ka ishara karta hai... Jise dekh Manju kuch soch uthkar apne kamre mai chali jati hai... Yashoda ek nazar dono ko dekh rahi thi... Kamalnath bhi uske peeche phunch gate band karta hai... Aur use shuru se laker ab tak jo kuch bhi hua sab bta deta hai... Jaise hi Manju yeh sunti hai ki Yeh TejSingh ki beti hai gusse mai aag babola ho jati hai... Aur bhar bhar kar TejSingh ko galiya dene lagti hai... jiski awaaz bahar baithi Yashoda ko bhi sunayi padti hai...



Manju... Are paal nahi sakte toh paida kyu kiya tha apni beti ko... Aur beti bhi aisi ki chi chi... Pta nahi kiska paap goad mai liye ghoom rahi hai... aur tum itne Mahan banne ki koi jarurat nahi hai... Yeh yha nahi rahegi abhi ke abhi ise bahar nikaal do warna tum jaante ho mai kya kar dungi pichli baar maaf kardiya uska natija yeh nahi ki aaj tum uski ladki ko ghar le aao... Are kam kam se kam yeh toh dekho uska charitr kaisa hai... Ab agar isne yaha bhi yeh sab kaam shuru kar diya jiski wajah se iske baap ne ise bhaga diya hai tou kya hoga jawaab hai tumhare paas tumhari bhi 2 betiya hai... Kal ko koi iska aashiq yaha tak phunch gya usne meri beti ko bhi iske jaise samjh kuch harkat karne ki koshish ki toh tum kya karoge jawaab do jab iska koi aashiq ki nazar meri beti par padi tou tum kaise apni beti ko bachaoge....



Kamalnath... Manju tum faltu mai baat ko badha Chadha kar bol rahi ho aisa kuch nahi woh baacha toh....



Manju... haan haan pta hai... Mai tumhe thoda bhut akalmand samjhthi thi but tum poore morkh ho TejSingh ne kaha aur tumne maan liya... aisa hi tha toh apni beti ke saath kyun nahi aaya kyun use akela chod diya shayad woh bhi apni beti ke gande kaam ke baare mai Jaan gya hoga...



Kamalnath... ( Gusse mai tez awaaz mai ) Manju.... kuch bolne se pehle soch liya karo kya keh rahi kiske baare mai keh rahi ho... Bhaiya ko mai aache se jaanta hoon aur yashoda bitiya ko bhi... Woh aisa kuch nahi ki hai sab man gadant kahani banaye jaa rahi hai tu...



Manju... Tumhare chillane se sacchai nahi badal jayegi woh ek raa** hai jo dhanda..... Aahhh..



Ek thappad ki goonj kamre mai sunayi padti hai...



Kamalnath.. chup ek dum chup kab se jo man mai aaya bole jaa rahi hai rukne ka naam nahi le rahi... yeh yahi rahegi kaan khol kar sun le...


Manju... ( Rote hue ) haan haan maaro mujhe.. mai pagal kutiya hun na Jo bhonke jaa rahi hoon... anpad hoon iska matlab yeh nahi mujhe kuch pta nahi kya chal raha samaaj mai.. kal ko baaki sab ko yeh baat pata chalegi... Toh kiss kiss kam muh band karoge aap, sab log gandi gandi baatain banayenge... aap kiss kiss ka muh band karenge, iske saath saath woh meri beti ke baare mai bhi ulta seedha bolenge... Mai ek maa ho kar kaise apni beti ke baare mai bura sun sakti hoon... Ek izzat hi hai humare paas aur yeh jo badi mehnat se kamaya hai... Kya hoga jab koi beti ke baare mai hume ganda bole bolo... Isse aacha ek kaam karo mujhe aur meri betiyon ko zeher de kar maar do fir bhale hi apni ek aur beti ke saath reh Lena... Mai apni betiyon ke baare mai samaaj se kuch nahi sun sakti...


Aur bilakh bilakh kar rone lagti hai... Kamalnath bhi maju ki baatain sun kar sunya ho jata hai... Wanhi bahar Yashoda dono ki baatain sun rahi thi....



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Sabse badi mistake story me, spelling hi hai!! Flow khraab ho jata hai jab bhi koi aisa sabd aa jata hai jiska matlab hi na banta ho

Now coming to the update!

It was nice as always, although abhi tak mujhe kuch exciting nazar nhi aaya hai... It's typical tv serial type, even though I believe it's ur original story but sometimes u have to think out of the box plot too!

Like, yasodha ka gaon chorna aur fir manju aur Kamalnath ka jhagda ye koi khaas cheez nhi thi!... Even udhar sher singh aur uske bete ka bhi charitra chaukane wala nhi tha!

Update me emotion har jagah bhara hua tha, jaise tej singh ki bebasi aur ek pita ki mohabbat... Saath hi yasodha ki khamoshi aur dimaag me chal rahi ulajhan... Sab bilkul sahi tarah tumne bataya lekin bas ise dikhane me tum choonk gaye!

Wo raat ke andhere me sunsaan sadak par ek baap ka apni beti se alvida kehna aur beti ki godh me pal rahe bachhe ki kilkaari dono hi ek alag ahasaas deti agar tum ise thode aur achhe se dikhane ka prayaas karte! Kyunki tej singh ne unhi haatho se apni beti ko buse baithaya hai jiss haatho se har pita ka sapna hota hai ki wo apni beti ka khushi se kanyadan kar sake!

Aur itni jaldi gaon ki khubsurati ko chorna bhi mujhe sahi nhi laga... Mere kehne ka matlab hai, tumhe thoda gaon ki khubsurati bhi dikhani chahiye thi taaki hume uss vatavaran se lagaav ho pata jise yasodha chorkar ja rahi hai..

Ab tak to hume sirf yasodha ko chorkar sabhi ke emotion tumne dikha diye! Ummeed karungi uske man ki bhi baat hume aage janne ko mile.

Aakhir nayak ki maa hai wo

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May be my revo sound like a total negative type... But it's just becoz till now mujhe kuch naya ya chaukane wala kuch nhi dikha hai... Emotionally connected hu but mentally abhi bilkul nhi!!

Hope aage ke update me tum jarur kuch magic karoge jo main notice nhi kar paungi aakhir isiliye to tum _ABHAY_Smarty_ ho

Thanks for the update, abhay-kun~

(Ps- ye sher singh ki gm karni chaahiye thi tej singh ko naam to dono ke ek hi lagte hai... To ye tharak singh kaise ho gaya aur uske bete ki to m-b karni chahiye main character ko .... Aur ye manju ki betiyo ke saath future me MC ka kuch chakkar to nhi chalne wala agar haa to ye manju bilkul sahi kar rahi yasodha ko ghar se beghar karke big boss ki tarah )

 

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Nice update _ABHAY_Smarty_ bhai

 

[Sukhi Choudhry]

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