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Romance Kanch ki haveli

Kaun sa kirdaar aapke Dil Ko chhu gaya

  • Kanchan

    Votes: 10 66.7%
  • Nikki

    Votes: 4 26.7%
  • Ravi

    Votes: 3 20.0%
  • Thakur Jagat singh

    Votes: 2 13.3%
  • Radha devi

    Votes: 1 6.7%
  • Nishchal

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    15

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Update 23


nikki apni jeep mein baithi uska intezaar kar rahi thi. Jis jagah ravi aur kanchan khade hokar kiss kar rahe the wo jagah jeep se zyada door nahi thi. Wahan se thoda niche utarte hi nikki unhe saaf dekh sakti thi.

Ravi bike tak aaya. Phir nikki ko dekha. Uski aankhein shola ugal rahi thi. Chehra gusse se fat padne ko taiyar tha.

Ravi uski aag ugalti aankhen aur gusse se bhari surat dekhkar samajh gaya ki nikki ne use kanchan ke sath dekh liya hai.

Is tarah apni chori pakde jaane se uski sitti-pitti gum ho gayi thi. lekin usne apni ghabraht nikki par zaahir nahi hone diya. usne laaparwahi se nikki ko dekhte hue kaha - "nikki ji, aap yahan, is waqt?"

"mujhe aap mat kaho." nikki gusse se chikhi. - "jab main tumhe pasand hi nahi to phir ye jhoothe samman kis liye?"

uske gusse ko dekhkar ravi hairaan rah gaya. usne socha bhi nahi tha ki nikki uspar is tarah bhadak sakti hai. lekin wo uske gusse ki parwaah kiye bina bola - "main kuchh samjha nahi."

"nahi samjhe?" nikki vyang se muskurayi. phir usi kutilta ke sath boli - "agar tanhayi mein chhupkar paap karna hi tha to mujhe thukrakar mera apmaan kis liye kiya tha?"

"kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum?" ravi gusse se cheekha. Use iss baat se bahut gussa aaya ki Nikki ne uske sath sath Kanchan Jaisi bholi aur Nirdosh ladki ke Charitra par bhi ungli utjane ki koshish ki thi

"Main yadi bakwas kar Rahi hoon to tumhi Haqeeqat Bata do ki tum dono yahan akele mein Kaun sa mahapuraan padh rahe the." Nikki use sir se paon tak dekhte hue vyang se muskurai.

"Main tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dene ke liye vivash nahi hoon." Ravi ne use do took jawab diya aur bike ki taraf badh Gaya.

"ye kyon nahi kehte, tumhare paas safai dene ke liye shabd hi nahi bache hain." nikki ne use mudte dekh khijkar kaha.

uski baaton se chidhkar ravi palta. Par gusse ki adhikta mein kuchh keh nahi paya. Bas daant pees kar rah gaya. Dvesh bhavna se pidit naari ko koi samjhaye bhi to kaise. Unke aqal par aisa patther pada hota hai ki laakh koshish kar lo par wo patther nahi hat-ti. Usne chup rahne mein hi apni bhalai samjhi.

Ravi ek vyang bhari muskurahat nikki par chhodta hua wapas apni bike ki aur badh gaya.

Nikki ravi ke is upekshit (negligently) vyavhaar ko seh na saki. Wah gusse se jeep se utri aur lapak kar us tak pahunchi. - "main puchhti hoon.....aisa kya hai kanchan mein jo mujhmein nahi? Kya main sundar nahi? Kya main jawan nahi? Dekho mujhe aur batao. Kya kami hai mujhmein?" ye kehte hue nikki ne uske saamne apni chhatiyan taan di.

uske aisa karne se uske safed tishirt mein kase uske uroj apne pure aakar ka pradarshan kar uthe.

Na chahte hue bhi ravi ki nigaahen uske parvat ki tarah uthe uski chhati ki golaiyon par chali gayi. uske ubhre hue boobs ko apni aankhon ke itne sameep mehsus kar ravi ka pura sharir sihar utha. Par dusre hi pal usne apni nazron ko wahan se hata liya.

"tum mein sabse badi kami yah hai ki tum vaasna se pidit ladki ho." ravi ne nikki ki aankhon mein tairte vaasnatmak leharon ko dekhte hue kaha - "Tum apni tulna kanchan se kar bhi kaise sakti ho?"


"main vaasna se pidit hoon to tum kya ho? Tum bhi to kuchh der pehle kisi ki garm bahon mein pade hue the." nikki jalkar boli - "tum mere saamne saadhu bante ho aur mere peeth pichhe aiyyasiyan karte ho. Kya main nahi jaanti?"

"band karo apni ye bakwaas." ravi gusse se chikha. - "mujhpar na sahi par thoda biswas kanchan par to rakho."

"wo to bholi hai tumhari baaton mein aa gayi hogi. Lekin itna yaad rakho Ravi......tumne mujhe thukrakar kisi aur ko apnaya to main tumhe chain se rahne nahi dungi." nikki apne daant chabate hue boli.

ravi ke prati uski tadap ab keval sharirik sukh bhar ka nahi rah gaya tha. Ab wo ravi ko apne pati ke roop mein haasil karna chahti thi. Lekin aaj ravi ka jhukav khud ke bajaye kanchan ki aur dekhkar wah gusse se bhar uth thi.

Wo khud ko kanchan ke muqable har drishti se behtar samajhti thi. kanchan na to uski jitni padhi likhi thi, na hi uski jitni dhani thi, na uska ghar uske ghar se bada tha, na wo nikki se achhe kapde pehanti thi, na to nikki se behtar baat karne ka dhang janti thi. ravi uska mehmaan tha uske ghar rahta tha uska khata tha. Phir bhi wo uske bajaye kanchan se pyar karta tha. nikki ka ahankari naari swabhav isi baat se dukhi tha.

Wo kanchan ko apna dushman nahi samajh rahi thi, lekin wo is baat ko seh nahi pa rahi thi ki jo kanchan sada uski mohtaaj rahi, jis kanchan ko usne jhopde se uthakar haveli mein sthan diya. Jiske sath usne apni thaali baati, jiske liye usne har fark ko mitaya, aaj wahi kanchan us par bhaari pad rahi thi. Uska abhimani mann isi baat se aahat tha.

Ravi ne usse adhik ulajhna theek nahi samjha. Wo palta aur apni bike par ja baitha.

"kahan ja rahe ho?" nikki uski kalai pakadkar gurrayi.

"tumhe raat yahi gujarni ho to shauk se gujaro. Main apne raaste chala." wah bola aur bike ki chabhi ghumaya.

"tum aise nahi ja sakte." nikki fufkari.

"to....?" ravi ne aashcharya se ghura.

"tumhe mujhe bhi waisa hi kiss karna hoga jaisa tumne kanchan ke honthon par kiya tha." ye kehte hue nikki ne Apne honth uske uske honthon ke Kareeb kar diya.

"Lagta hai tum hosh mein nahi ho." Ravi ne ashcharya se use dekha aur phir bike par kick mara.

"ravi." nikki kisi naagin ki tarah fufkari. - "main apni kasam khakar kehti hoon. Agar tumne mujhe kiss na kiya to main abhi isi waqt apni jeep sahit is pahadi se niche kud jaungi."

"mazaak band karo aur ghar chalo." ravi ne vichlit hokar kaha. Use nikki ke chehre ki sakhti andar tak hila gayi thi.

"tumhe lag raha hai main mazaak kar rahi hoon." nikki daant pisti hui boli. uski aankhon ke sholay bhadak uthe - "to theek hai, agar tum meri baaton ki sachai parakhna hi chahte ho to ek qadam yahan se aage badhakar dikhao. main agar is pahadi se na kudi to main thakur jagat singh ki beti nahi." wo chattan ki tarah thos shabdon mein boli - "lekin yaad rakho ravi. Tumhe apni is bhool par zindagi bhar afsos hoga. Kyonki main mazaak nahi karti."

Ravi Sar se paon tak kaanp gaya. usne dhyan se nikki ko dekha. Nikki is waqt behad gusse mein thi. Uski aankhon mein gusse ke sath sath ek gehre dard ki parat bhi chadhi hui thi. Ravi manochikitshak (Psychologist) tha use samajhte der nahi lagi ki niiki ko agar usne aur aahat kiya to ye sachmuch mein apni jaan de degi.

Pyar mein apmaanit stri, kaama-agni mein jalta deh kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Wo ek baar pehle bhi nikki ka naajuk mauqe par tirskaar kar chuka tha. ravi nahi chahta tha ki uski ek bhool se koi badi aafat uske gale pade. uski galti se nikki ko kuchh hua to wo thakur sahab ko kya jawab dega? Kya beetegi thakur sahab par jab unhe ye maalum hoga ki jis insaan ko wo doctor jaankar apni patni ka ilaaz karane laaye the wo khooni bankar unhi ki beti ka khoon kar diya.

Ravi is ehsaas se punah kaanp utha. usne vivashta se apne honth chabane shuru kar diye. Use apne bachav ka koi bhi maarg dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Usne nikki ko dekha wo abhi bhi uske sar par sawaar thi. Wo apni jalti hui aankhon se use ghure ja rahi thi.

"theek hai." ravi bujha bujha sa bola - "lekin iske baad tum koi bhi behas nahi karogi aur seedha haveli laut jaogi?"

"mujhe manzoor hai." nikki apne honthon par vijayi muskurahat laate hue boli.

Ravi ne jawab mein apne honth uski aur badha diye. Nikki ne uske gardan ko pichhe se pakda aur apne honthon ko uske honthon se mila diya. Phir kisi pake hue aam ki tarah uske honthon ko chusne lagi. Ravi ke pure sharir mein tez sansanahat bharti chali gayi. nikki ke sharir ki garmi uske muh ke raaste uske sharir mein utarne lagi. Uski aankhein nashe mein band hone lagi. Use aisa mehsus hua jaise wo kisi aur hi duniya mein pahunch gaya ho.

Nikki honth chusne ke maamle mein maharat rakhti thi. wo usi prakaar dheere dheere uske honthon ko chusti rahi. Phir purn tripti ke baad wo ravi se alag hui.

nikki ke alag hote hi ravi ne nashe mein band hoti apni bhari palkein kholkar use dekha. Uske chehre mein jeet ki khushi thi to wahin uske honth apni kaamyabi par garv se muskura uthe the.

Ravi ki gardan sharm se jhuk gayi. wah kuchh der yunhi uske chehre ko dekhta raha. nikki use dekhkar muskurati rahi. ravi ne uski aur se apni gardan ghumakar bike ko ek jordaar kick maari. Abhi wo aage badhna hi chahta tha ki nikki ki awaaz uske kaano se takryi. - "thehro."

"ab kya hua?" ravi ne sawaliya nazron se use ghura.

"tumne ye to bataya hi nahi ki kiska swad-sugandh achha tha? Is shahri gulaab ka ya us pahaadi phool ka?" nikki ne garv se muskurate hue puchha.

Ravi uski aur dekhkar vyang se muskuraya. Phir bola - "shahar ke gamlo mein khilne wale kisi bhi phool mein wo sugandh kahan? Jo pahaadi ke aanchal par khile phoolon mein hoti hai?"

Uski is kataksh (Insinuation) se nikki ka pura sharir apmaan se sulag utha. Lekin isse pehle ki wo ravi ko koi jawab deti. Ravi ek jhatke se aage badh chuka tha. Nikki gusse se use jate hue dekhti rahi.
 

Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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Ye nikki to bina hath per chalaye hi us ravi ki ijjat lut li :roflol:
yahan kuch points pe gaur ki jaaye to ravi bhi to tharki hi hai ek tarah se waran is tarah se nikki ke jishm ko taktaki lagaye dekhta nahi ....
aur dusri baat kiss ke maze to wo bhi le raha tha yaha tak kiss tutne baad bhi...
Hawasi kahi ka....
btw nikki mein krodh bahot adhik matra mein hai.... chhoti chhoti baaton uske andar gussa aisa ubal maare ki pucho hi mat... khaskar ushe naa sunne ki aadat nahi..... lage jaise ki saamne wale ko us gusse aur krodh ke jwala se jaalake rakh kar degi...
aise mein ravi ne wo kiya jiske bare mein katai na us baat ko sochi thi nikki..
pehle se apamanit ho chuki thi ,upar se ab usiki friends ko kiss karke gusse ko bhadka diya ravi ne .... aur uski vyang bhari baatein jaise aag mein ghee ka kaam kiya....

Waise main kya soch rahi thi ki nikki gusse aake ravi aur kanchan ko maut ki saza degi pahaadiyon se niche dhakka deke... Lekin yaha to ulat ho gaya...
par ye aakhir mein jo baatein kahi ravi ne shayad aage chalke ushi khamiyaza bhugatna pare aur sath hi shayad kanchan bhi ...

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika...
Waise ye achha hua ki kanchan pehle hi chali gayi udhar se...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 
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majedar update ..nikky ko kuch jyada hi gussa aa gaya hai aur usse jyada wo khudko apmanit mehsus kar rahi hai .apni barabari kanchan se karne lagi hai wo .
abhi usko pyar ke maayne hi pata nahi hai aur ravi ne sahi kaha ki wo hawas me andhi ho gayi hai .
nikky ko un dono ka pyar dikh hi nahi raha .
aur ab zabardasti blackmail karke ravi ko kiss bhi kar liya par aakhri shabdo ne usko uski aukat dikha di .
 

Jaguaar

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Update 23


nikki apni jeep mein baithi uska intezaar kar rahi thi. Jis jagah ravi aur kanchan khade hokar kiss kar rahe the wo jagah jeep se zyada door nahi thi. Wahan se thoda niche utarte hi nikki unhe saaf dekh sakti thi.

Ravi bike tak aaya. Phir nikki ko dekha. Uski aankhein shola ugal rahi thi. Chehra gusse se fat padne ko taiyar tha.

Ravi uski aag ugalti aankhen aur gusse se bhari surat dekhkar samajh gaya ki nikki ne use kanchan ke sath dekh liya hai.

Is tarah apni chori pakde jaane se uski sitti-pitti gum ho gayi thi. lekin usne apni ghabraht nikki par zaahir nahi hone diya. usne laaparwahi se nikki ko dekhte hue kaha - "nikki ji, aap yahan, is waqt?"

"mujhe aap mat kaho." nikki gusse se chikhi. - "jab main tumhe pasand hi nahi to phir ye jhoothe samman kis liye?"

uske gusse ko dekhkar ravi hairaan rah gaya. usne socha bhi nahi tha ki nikki uspar is tarah bhadak sakti hai. lekin wo uske gusse ki parwaah kiye bina bola - "main kuchh samjha nahi."

"nahi samjhe?" nikki vyang se muskurayi. phir usi kutilta ke sath boli - "agar tanhayi mein chhupkar paap karna hi tha to mujhe thukrakar mera apmaan kis liye kiya tha?"

"kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum?" ravi gusse se cheekha. Use iss baat se bahut gussa aaya ki Nikki ne uske sath sath Kanchan Jaisi bholi aur Nirdosh ladki ke Charitra par bhi ungli utjane ki koshish ki thi

"Main yadi bakwas kar Rahi hoon to tumhi Haqeeqat Bata do ki tum dono yahan akele mein Kaun sa mahapuraan padh rahe the." Nikki use sir se paon tak dekhte hue vyang se muskurai.

"Main tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dene ke liye vivash nahi hoon." Ravi ne use do took jawab diya aur bike ki taraf badh Gaya.

"ye kyon nahi kehte, tumhare paas safai dene ke liye shabd hi nahi bache hain." nikki ne use mudte dekh khijkar kaha.

uski baaton se chidhkar ravi palta. Par gusse ki adhikta mein kuchh keh nahi paya. Bas daant pees kar rah gaya. Dvesh bhavna se pidit naari ko koi samjhaye bhi to kaise. Unke aqal par aisa patther pada hota hai ki laakh koshish kar lo par wo patther nahi hat-ti. Usne chup rahne mein hi apni bhalai samjhi.

Ravi ek vyang bhari muskurahat nikki par chhodta hua wapas apni bike ki aur badh gaya.

Nikki ravi ke is upekshit (negligently) vyavhaar ko seh na saki. Wah gusse se jeep se utri aur lapak kar us tak pahunchi. - "main puchhti hoon.....aisa kya hai kanchan mein jo mujhmein nahi? Kya main sundar nahi? Kya main jawan nahi? Dekho mujhe aur batao. Kya kami hai mujhmein?" ye kehte hue nikki ne uske saamne apni chhatiyan taan di.

uske aisa karne se uske safed tishirt mein kase uske uroj apne pure aakar ka pradarshan kar uthe.

Na chahte hue bhi ravi ki nigaahen uske parvat ki tarah uthe uski chhati ki golaiyon par chali gayi. uske ubhre hue boobs ko apni aankhon ke itne sameep mehsus kar ravi ka pura sharir sihar utha. Par dusre hi pal usne apni nazron ko wahan se hata liya.

"tum mein sabse badi kami yah hai ki tum vaasna se pidit ladki ho." ravi ne nikki ki aankhon mein tairte vaasnatmak leharon ko dekhte hue kaha - "Tum apni tulna kanchan se kar bhi kaise sakti ho?"


"main vaasna se pidit hoon to tum kya ho? Tum bhi to kuchh der pehle kisi ki garm bahon mein pade hue the." nikki jalkar boli - "tum mere saamne saadhu bante ho aur mere peeth pichhe aiyyasiyan karte ho. Kya main nahi jaanti?"

"band karo apni ye bakwaas." ravi gusse se chikha. - "mujhpar na sahi par thoda biswas kanchan par to rakho."

"wo to bholi hai tumhari baaton mein aa gayi hogi. Lekin itna yaad rakho Ravi......tumne mujhe thukrakar kisi aur ko apnaya to main tumhe chain se rahne nahi dungi." nikki apne daant chabate hue boli.

ravi ke prati uski tadap ab keval sharirik sukh bhar ka nahi rah gaya tha. Ab wo ravi ko apne pati ke roop mein haasil karna chahti thi. Lekin aaj ravi ka jhukav khud ke bajaye kanchan ki aur dekhkar wah gusse se bhar uth thi.

Wo khud ko kanchan ke muqable har drishti se behtar samajhti thi. kanchan na to uski jitni padhi likhi thi, na hi uski jitni dhani thi, na uska ghar uske ghar se bada tha, na wo nikki se achhe kapde pehanti thi, na to nikki se behtar baat karne ka dhang janti thi. ravi uska mehmaan tha uske ghar rahta tha uska khata tha. Phir bhi wo uske bajaye kanchan se pyar karta tha. nikki ka ahankari naari swabhav isi baat se dukhi tha.

Wo kanchan ko apna dushman nahi samajh rahi thi, lekin wo is baat ko seh nahi pa rahi thi ki jo kanchan sada uski mohtaaj rahi, jis kanchan ko usne jhopde se uthakar haveli mein sthan diya. Jiske sath usne apni thaali baati, jiske liye usne har fark ko mitaya, aaj wahi kanchan us par bhaari pad rahi thi. Uska abhimani mann isi baat se aahat tha.

Ravi ne usse adhik ulajhna theek nahi samjha. Wo palta aur apni bike par ja baitha.

"kahan ja rahe ho?" nikki uski kalai pakadkar gurrayi.

"tumhe raat yahi gujarni ho to shauk se gujaro. Main apne raaste chala." wah bola aur bike ki chabhi ghumaya.

"tum aise nahi ja sakte." nikki fufkari.

"to....?" ravi ne aashcharya se ghura.

"tumhe mujhe bhi waisa hi kiss karna hoga jaisa tumne kanchan ke honthon par kiya tha." ye kehte hue nikki ne Apne honth uske uske honthon ke Kareeb kar diya.

"Lagta hai tum hosh mein nahi ho." Ravi ne ashcharya se use dekha aur phir bike par kick mara.

"ravi." nikki kisi naagin ki tarah fufkari. - "main apni kasam khakar kehti hoon. Agar tumne mujhe kiss na kiya to main abhi isi waqt apni jeep sahit is pahadi se niche kud jaungi."

"mazaak band karo aur ghar chalo." ravi ne vichlit hokar kaha. Use nikki ke chehre ki sakhti andar tak hila gayi thi.

"tumhe lag raha hai main mazaak kar rahi hoon." nikki daant pisti hui boli. uski aankhon ke sholay bhadak uthe - "to theek hai, agar tum meri baaton ki sachai parakhna hi chahte ho to ek qadam yahan se aage badhakar dikhao. main agar is pahadi se na kudi to main thakur jagat singh ki beti nahi." wo chattan ki tarah thos shabdon mein boli - "lekin yaad rakho ravi. Tumhe apni is bhool par zindagi bhar afsos hoga. Kyonki main mazaak nahi karti."

Ravi Sar se paon tak kaanp gaya. usne dhyan se nikki ko dekha. Nikki is waqt behad gusse mein thi. Uski aankhon mein gusse ke sath sath ek gehre dard ki parat bhi chadhi hui thi. Ravi manochikitshak (Psychologist) tha use samajhte der nahi lagi ki niiki ko agar usne aur aahat kiya to ye sachmuch mein apni jaan de degi.

Pyar mein apmaanit stri, kaama-agni mein jalta deh kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Wo ek baar pehle bhi nikki ka naajuk mauqe par tirskaar kar chuka tha. ravi nahi chahta tha ki uski ek bhool se koi badi aafat uske gale pade. uski galti se nikki ko kuchh hua to wo thakur sahab ko kya jawab dega? Kya beetegi thakur sahab par jab unhe ye maalum hoga ki jis insaan ko wo doctor jaankar apni patni ka ilaaz karane laaye the wo khooni bankar unhi ki beti ka khoon kar diya.

Ravi is ehsaas se punah kaanp utha. usne vivashta se apne honth chabane shuru kar diye. Use apne bachav ka koi bhi maarg dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Usne nikki ko dekha wo abhi bhi uske sar par sawaar thi. Wo apni jalti hui aankhon se use ghure ja rahi thi.

"theek hai." ravi bujha bujha sa bola - "lekin iske baad tum koi bhi behas nahi karogi aur seedha haveli laut jaogi?"

"mujhe manzoor hai." nikki apne honthon par vijayi muskurahat laate hue boli.

Ravi ne jawab mein apne honth uski aur badha diye. Nikki ne uske gardan ko pichhe se pakda aur apne honthon ko uske honthon se mila diya. Phir kisi pake hue aam ki tarah uske honthon ko chusne lagi. Ravi ke pure sharir mein tez sansanahat bharti chali gayi. nikki ke sharir ki garmi uske muh ke raaste uske sharir mein utarne lagi. Uski aankhein nashe mein band hone lagi. Use aisa mehsus hua jaise wo kisi aur hi duniya mein pahunch gaya ho.

Nikki honth chusne ke maamle mein maharat rakhti thi. wo usi prakaar dheere dheere uske honthon ko chusti rahi. Phir purn tripti ke baad wo ravi se alag hui.

nikki ke alag hote hi ravi ne nashe mein band hoti apni bhari palkein kholkar use dekha. Uske chehre mein jeet ki khushi thi to wahin uske honth apni kaamyabi par garv se muskura uthe the.

Ravi ki gardan sharm se jhuk gayi. wah kuchh der yunhi uske chehre ko dekhta raha. nikki use dekhkar muskurati rahi. ravi ne uski aur se apni gardan ghumakar bike ko ek jordaar kick maari. Abhi wo aage badhna hi chahta tha ki nikki ki awaaz uske kaano se takryi. - "thehro."

"ab kya hua?" ravi ne sawaliya nazron se use ghura.

"tumne ye to bataya hi nahi ki kiska swad-sugandh achha tha? Is shahri gulaab ka ya us pahaadi phool ka?" nikki ne garv se muskurate hue puchha.

Ravi uski aur dekhkar vyang se muskuraya. Phir bola - "shahar ke gamlo mein khilne wale kisi bhi phool mein wo sugandh kahan? Jo pahaadi ke aanchal par khile phoolon mein hoti hai?"

Uski is kataksh (Insinuation) se nikki ka pura sharir apmaan se sulag utha. Lekin isse pehle ki wo ravi ko koi jawab deti. Ravi ek jhatke se aage badh chuka tha. Nikki gusse se use jate hue dekhti rahi.
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Iss Nikki ne toh bechare Ravi ki izzat hi lut li. Bechara Ravi Kanchan ko kiss karke buri tarah se fhass chuka hai. Ab Nikki isse kaise bhi karke apni hawas shant karwa hi legi.

Lekin isse shayad ab Kanchan aur Nikki ki dosti mein khatas aasakti hai. Kyoki ab Nikki Kanchan ko apni dost nhi ek competitor ke roop mein dekhegi.

Dekhte hai ab Ravi kyaa karta hai. Kyoki ghar mein bhi uske liye ek bomb taiyaar hai jo thakur blast karne wala hai.
 

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nikki apni jeep mein baithi uska intezaar kar rahi thi. Jis jagah ravi aur kanchan khade hokar kiss kar rahe the wo jagah jeep se zyada door nahi thi. Wahan se thoda niche utarte hi nikki unhe saaf dekh sakti thi.

Ravi bike tak aaya. Phir nikki ko dekha. Uski aankhein shola ugal rahi thi. Chehra gusse se fat padne ko taiyar tha.

Ravi uski aag ugalti aankhen aur gusse se bhari surat dekhkar samajh gaya ki nikki ne use kanchan ke sath dekh liya hai.

Is tarah apni chori pakde jaane se uski sitti-pitti gum ho gayi thi. lekin usne apni ghabraht nikki par zaahir nahi hone diya. usne laaparwahi se nikki ko dekhte hue kaha - "nikki ji, aap yahan, is waqt?"

"mujhe aap mat kaho." nikki gusse se chikhi. - "jab main tumhe pasand hi nahi to phir ye jhoothe samman kis liye?"

uske gusse ko dekhkar ravi hairaan rah gaya. usne socha bhi nahi tha ki nikki uspar is tarah bhadak sakti hai. lekin wo uske gusse ki parwaah kiye bina bola - "main kuchh samjha nahi."

"nahi samjhe?" nikki vyang se muskurayi. phir usi kutilta ke sath boli - "agar tanhayi mein chhupkar paap karna hi tha to mujhe thukrakar mera apmaan kis liye kiya tha?"

"kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum?" ravi gusse se cheekha. Use iss baat se bahut gussa aaya ki Nikki ne uske sath sath Kanchan Jaisi bholi aur Nirdosh ladki ke Charitra par bhi ungli utjane ki koshish ki thi

"Main yadi bakwas kar Rahi hoon to tumhi Haqeeqat Bata do ki tum dono yahan akele mein Kaun sa mahapuraan padh rahe the." Nikki use sir se paon tak dekhte hue vyang se muskurai.

"Main tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dene ke liye vivash nahi hoon." Ravi ne use do took jawab diya aur bike ki taraf badh Gaya.

"ye kyon nahi kehte, tumhare paas safai dene ke liye shabd hi nahi bache hain." nikki ne use mudte dekh khijkar kaha.

uski baaton se chidhkar ravi palta. Par gusse ki adhikta mein kuchh keh nahi paya. Bas daant pees kar rah gaya. Dvesh bhavna se pidit naari ko koi samjhaye bhi to kaise. Unke aqal par aisa patther pada hota hai ki laakh koshish kar lo par wo patther nahi hat-ti. Usne chup rahne mein hi apni bhalai samjhi.

Ravi ek vyang bhari muskurahat nikki par chhodta hua wapas apni bike ki aur badh gaya.

Nikki ravi ke is upekshit (negligently) vyavhaar ko seh na saki. Wah gusse se jeep se utri aur lapak kar us tak pahunchi. - "main puchhti hoon.....aisa kya hai kanchan mein jo mujhmein nahi? Kya main sundar nahi? Kya main jawan nahi? Dekho mujhe aur batao. Kya kami hai mujhmein?" ye kehte hue nikki ne uske saamne apni chhatiyan taan di.

uske aisa karne se uske safed tishirt mein kase uske uroj apne pure aakar ka pradarshan kar uthe.

Na chahte hue bhi ravi ki nigaahen uske parvat ki tarah uthe uski chhati ki golaiyon par chali gayi. uske ubhre hue boobs ko apni aankhon ke itne sameep mehsus kar ravi ka pura sharir sihar utha. Par dusre hi pal usne apni nazron ko wahan se hata liya.

"tum mein sabse badi kami yah hai ki tum vaasna se pidit ladki ho." ravi ne nikki ki aankhon mein tairte vaasnatmak leharon ko dekhte hue kaha - "Tum apni tulna kanchan se kar bhi kaise sakti ho?"


"main vaasna se pidit hoon to tum kya ho? Tum bhi to kuchh der pehle kisi ki garm bahon mein pade hue the." nikki jalkar boli - "tum mere saamne saadhu bante ho aur mere peeth pichhe aiyyasiyan karte ho. Kya main nahi jaanti?"

"band karo apni ye bakwaas." ravi gusse se chikha. - "mujhpar na sahi par thoda biswas kanchan par to rakho."

"wo to bholi hai tumhari baaton mein aa gayi hogi. Lekin itna yaad rakho Ravi......tumne mujhe thukrakar kisi aur ko apnaya to main tumhe chain se rahne nahi dungi." nikki apne daant chabate hue boli.

ravi ke prati uski tadap ab keval sharirik sukh bhar ka nahi rah gaya tha. Ab wo ravi ko apne pati ke roop mein haasil karna chahti thi. Lekin aaj ravi ka jhukav khud ke bajaye kanchan ki aur dekhkar wah gusse se bhar uth thi.

Wo khud ko kanchan ke muqable har drishti se behtar samajhti thi. kanchan na to uski jitni padhi likhi thi, na hi uski jitni dhani thi, na uska ghar uske ghar se bada tha, na wo nikki se achhe kapde pehanti thi, na to nikki se behtar baat karne ka dhang janti thi. ravi uska mehmaan tha uske ghar rahta tha uska khata tha. Phir bhi wo uske bajaye kanchan se pyar karta tha. nikki ka ahankari naari swabhav isi baat se dukhi tha.

Wo kanchan ko apna dushman nahi samajh rahi thi, lekin wo is baat ko seh nahi pa rahi thi ki jo kanchan sada uski mohtaaj rahi, jis kanchan ko usne jhopde se uthakar haveli mein sthan diya. Jiske sath usne apni thaali baati, jiske liye usne har fark ko mitaya, aaj wahi kanchan us par bhaari pad rahi thi. Uska abhimani mann isi baat se aahat tha.

Ravi ne usse adhik ulajhna theek nahi samjha. Wo palta aur apni bike par ja baitha.

"kahan ja rahe ho?" nikki uski kalai pakadkar gurrayi.

"tumhe raat yahi gujarni ho to shauk se gujaro. Main apne raaste chala." wah bola aur bike ki chabhi ghumaya.

"tum aise nahi ja sakte." nikki fufkari.

"to....?" ravi ne aashcharya se ghura.

"tumhe mujhe bhi waisa hi kiss karna hoga jaisa tumne kanchan ke honthon par kiya tha." ye kehte hue nikki ne Apne honth uske uske honthon ke Kareeb kar diya.

"Lagta hai tum hosh mein nahi ho." Ravi ne ashcharya se use dekha aur phir bike par kick mara.

"ravi." nikki kisi naagin ki tarah fufkari. - "main apni kasam khakar kehti hoon. Agar tumne mujhe kiss na kiya to main abhi isi waqt apni jeep sahit is pahadi se niche kud jaungi."

"mazaak band karo aur ghar chalo." ravi ne vichlit hokar kaha. Use nikki ke chehre ki sakhti andar tak hila gayi thi.

"tumhe lag raha hai main mazaak kar rahi hoon." nikki daant pisti hui boli. uski aankhon ke sholay bhadak uthe - "to theek hai, agar tum meri baaton ki sachai parakhna hi chahte ho to ek qadam yahan se aage badhakar dikhao. main agar is pahadi se na kudi to main thakur jagat singh ki beti nahi." wo chattan ki tarah thos shabdon mein boli - "lekin yaad rakho ravi. Tumhe apni is bhool par zindagi bhar afsos hoga. Kyonki main mazaak nahi karti."

Ravi Sar se paon tak kaanp gaya. usne dhyan se nikki ko dekha. Nikki is waqt behad gusse mein thi. Uski aankhon mein gusse ke sath sath ek gehre dard ki parat bhi chadhi hui thi. Ravi manochikitshak (Psychologist) tha use samajhte der nahi lagi ki niiki ko agar usne aur aahat kiya to ye sachmuch mein apni jaan de degi.

Pyar mein apmaanit stri, kaama-agni mein jalta deh kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Wo ek baar pehle bhi nikki ka naajuk mauqe par tirskaar kar chuka tha. ravi nahi chahta tha ki uski ek bhool se koi badi aafat uske gale pade. uski galti se nikki ko kuchh hua to wo thakur sahab ko kya jawab dega? Kya beetegi thakur sahab par jab unhe ye maalum hoga ki jis insaan ko wo doctor jaankar apni patni ka ilaaz karane laaye the wo khooni bankar unhi ki beti ka khoon kar diya.

Ravi is ehsaas se punah kaanp utha. usne vivashta se apne honth chabane shuru kar diye. Use apne bachav ka koi bhi maarg dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Usne nikki ko dekha wo abhi bhi uske sar par sawaar thi. Wo apni jalti hui aankhon se use ghure ja rahi thi.

"theek hai." ravi bujha bujha sa bola - "lekin iske baad tum koi bhi behas nahi karogi aur seedha haveli laut jaogi?"

"mujhe manzoor hai." nikki apne honthon par vijayi muskurahat laate hue boli.

Ravi ne jawab mein apne honth uski aur badha diye. Nikki ne uske gardan ko pichhe se pakda aur apne honthon ko uske honthon se mila diya. Phir kisi pake hue aam ki tarah uske honthon ko chusne lagi. Ravi ke pure sharir mein tez sansanahat bharti chali gayi. nikki ke sharir ki garmi uske muh ke raaste uske sharir mein utarne lagi. Uski aankhein nashe mein band hone lagi. Use aisa mehsus hua jaise wo kisi aur hi duniya mein pahunch gaya ho.

Nikki honth chusne ke maamle mein maharat rakhti thi. wo usi prakaar dheere dheere uske honthon ko chusti rahi. Phir purn tripti ke baad wo ravi se alag hui.

nikki ke alag hote hi ravi ne nashe mein band hoti apni bhari palkein kholkar use dekha. Uske chehre mein jeet ki khushi thi to wahin uske honth apni kaamyabi par garv se muskura uthe the.

Ravi ki gardan sharm se jhuk gayi. wah kuchh der yunhi uske chehre ko dekhta raha. nikki use dekhkar muskurati rahi. ravi ne uski aur se apni gardan ghumakar bike ko ek jordaar kick maari. Abhi wo aage badhna hi chahta tha ki nikki ki awaaz uske kaano se takryi. - "thehro."

"ab kya hua?" ravi ne sawaliya nazron se use ghura.

"tumne ye to bataya hi nahi ki kiska swad-sugandh achha tha? Is shahri gulaab ka ya us pahaadi phool ka?" nikki ne garv se muskurate hue puchha.

Ravi uski aur dekhkar vyang se muskuraya. Phir bola - "shahar ke gamlo mein khilne wale kisi bhi phool mein wo sugandh kahan? Jo pahaadi ke aanchal par khile phoolon mein hoti hai?"

Uski is kataksh (Insinuation) se nikki ka pura sharir apmaan se sulag utha. Lekin isse pehle ki wo ravi ko koi jawab deti. Ravi ek jhatke se aage badh chuka tha. Nikki gusse se use jate hue dekhti rahi.
Nikki kanchan ko leke jealous feel karne lagi he jisko wo apni behen jesi dost mani thi use ravi pasand karti he jabki nikki kanchan se khud ko behtar manti he..nikki ravi se pyar nehni karti sirf usko haasil karna chahati he..Ab hogi dosti kaa asli imtihan kon kiska pyar kurban karta he..ye dekhne wali bat he amazing update..
 

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Ye nikki to bina hath per chalaye hi us ravi ki ijjat lut li :roflol:
yahan kuch points pe gaur ki jaaye to ravi bhi to tharki hi hai ek tarah se waran is tarah se nikki ke jishm ko taktaki lagaye dekhta nahi ....
aur dusri baat kiss ke maze to wo bhi le raha tha yaha tak kiss tutne baad bhi...
Hawasi kahi ka....
btw nikki mein krodh bahot adhik matra mein hai.... chhoti chhoti baaton uske andar gussa aisa ubal maare ki pucho hi mat... khaskar ushe naa sunne ki aadat nahi..... lage jaise ki saamne wale ko us gusse aur krodh ke jwala se jaalake rakh kar degi...
aise mein ravi ne wo kiya jiske bare mein katai na us baat ko sochi thi nikki..
pehle se apamanit ho chuki thi ,upar se ab usiki friends ko kiss karke gusse ko bhadka diya ravi ne .... aur uski vyang bhari baatein jaise aag mein ghee ka kaam kiya....

Waise main kya soch rahi thi ki nikki gusse aake ravi aur kanchan ko maut ki saza degi pahaadiyon se niche dhakka deke... Lekin yaha to ulat ho gaya...
par ye aakhir mein jo baatein kahi ravi ne shayad aage chalke ushi khamiyaza bhugatna pare aur sath hi shayad kanchan bhi ...

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika...
Waise ye achha hua ki kanchan pehle hi chali gayi udhar se...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Shukriya Naina ji itne achhe review ke liye. Waise Naina ji aap chahen Nikki ka paksh leti raho aur Nikki chahen jitna Ravi Ko aata le. Lekin Kanchan ka pyar Ravi ke Dil se hargiz nahi nikaal Sakti. Ravi ke rom rom mein Kanchan bas chuki hai.
 

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Raipur ke railway station par nikki pichhle 20 minute se khadi thi. Uska gusse se bura haal tha. deewan ji ne driver ko nikki ko lene bheja tha par uska koi pata nahi tha. Nikki Gusse se bhari platform par chalkadmi kar rahi thi.


Is waqt nikki pink color ki frock pehne hue thi. Uski aankhon mein dhoop ka chasma chadha hua tha aur sar par sun hats tha. frock itni chhoti thi ki aadhi janghe numaya ho rahi thi. Platform par aate jate log lalchayi najron se uske khubsurat jangho aur ubhre hue chhati ko ghurte ja rahe the. Achanak hi kisi bike ki acceleretor ki tej awaaz uske kaano se takrai. Awaaz itni tej thi ki nikki ka gussa saatwe aasman par pahunch gaya. nikki ki drishti ghumi. saamne hi ek khubsurat naujawan apni bike par baitha bike ke kaan marodne mein vyast tha. Wo jab tak acceletor leta bike start rahti acceletor chhodte hi bike bhuy bhuy karke band ho jati. Wo phir se kick marta...acceletor leta aur bike start karne mein lag jata. Wah pasine se tar batar ho chuka tha. Nikk 5 minute tak uski bhany bhany sunti rahi. ant mein uska sabr jawab de gaya. Wah gusse se uski aur dekhkar boli - "aye mister, apni is khatara ko band karo ya kahin door le jaakar start karo. Iski besuri awaaz se mere kaan ke parde fat rahe hain."


Wah yuvak bike na start hone se waise hi pareshan tha uspar aisi jhidki, uski bike ka aisa apmaan...wah sah na saka. gusse mein palta par jaise hi uski nazar nikki par padi wah chaunk pada. Apne saamne ek khubsurat hasina ko dekhkar uska gussa khsan bhar ke liye gaayab hua. Phir bola - "aap meri bike ko khatara keh rahi hain? Aapko andaza nahi hai main is bike par baith kitni race jeet chuka hoon."


"race...? Aur wo bhi is bike se? ye chalti bhi hai, mujhe to iske strat hone par bhi sandeh ho raha hai." wah vyang se muskurayi.


Yuvak ko tej gussa aaya par man masos kar rah gaya. Usne bike ko azeeb najron se ghura phir ek jor dar kick mara. Is baar bhi bike start nahi hui. Wah baar baar prayas karta raha aur acceletor ki awaaz se nikki ko pareshan karta raha. kuchh hi der mein nikki ka driver jeep lekar pahuncha. Driver jeep se utar kar nikki ke paas aaya.


"itni der kyon hui aane mein?" nikki driver ko dekhte hi barsi.


"galti ho gayi chhoti malkin...wo kya hai ki.....asal....mein..." driver haklaya.


"shut up." nikki gusse mein chikhi.


Driver saham gaya. uski najrein zameen chatne lagi.


"saaman uthane ke liye koi dusra aayega? " nikki use khada dekh phir se bhadki. Driver teji se harkat mein aaya aur saaman uthakar jeep mein rakhne laga.


Nikki ki najrein us bike wale yuvak ki aur ghumi. wo idhar hi dekh raha tha. use apni aur dekhte pakar nikki ne ek baar phir vyang se muskurayi aur apni jeep ki aur badh gayi. achanak hi wo hua jiski kalpana nikki ne na ki thi. Uski bike start ho gayi. nikki ne us yuvak ko dekha. Abki muskurane ki baari us yuvak ki thi. wah bike par baitha aur nikki ko dekhte hue ek ada se sar ko jhatka diya aur seeti bajata hua bike ko bhagata chala gaya. Nikki jal-bhun kar rah gayi.


Driver saaman rakh chuka tha. Nikki lapak kar steering wali seat par aayi. Chabhi ko ghumaya gear badli aur full speed se jeep ko chhod diya.


"chhoti maalkin....!" driver cheekhte hue jeep ke pichhe dauda.


Nikki teji se pahadi raaston par jeep bhagati chali ja rahi thi. Kuchh hi door aage use wahi bike wala yuvak dikhayi diya. Usne jeep ki raftaar badhayi aur kuchh hi pal mein uske Barabar pahunch gayi. Phir uski aur dekhti hui boli - "hello mr khatara"


Yuvak ne nikki ki aur dekha, abhi wah kuchh kehne ki soch hi raha tha ki nikki ne ek jhatke mein farrate ki gati se jeep ko le bhagi. Yuvak gusse mein nikki ko dekhta hi rah gaya. Uski aankhen sulag uthi usne acceletor par hath jamaya aur bike ko full speed par chhod diya. Abhi wah kuchh hi door chala tha ki sadak par kuchh ladkiya paar karti dikhayi di. usne jaldi se break maara. Uski raftaar bahut adhik thi , bike fisla aur seedhe ek patther se ja takraya. Yuvak uchhal kar door ja gira. Bike se bandha uska suitcase khul gaya aur saare kapde sadak par idhar udhar bikhar gaye. Wah langdata hua utha. Tabhi uske kaano se kisi ladki ke hasne ki awaaz takrayi. Usne palat kar dekha. Ek gramin baala salwar kurta pehne khilkhilakar hans rahi thi. Uske pichhe uski saheliyan bhi khadi khadi muskura rahi thi. Un sabhi ladkiyon ke hath mein pustaken thi jis se Yuvak ko samajhte der nahi lagi ki ye ladkiyan paas ke gaon ki rahne wali hain aur is waqt collage se laut rahi hain.


"ye dekho, kaath ka ullu" aage wali ladki haste hue saheliyon se boli.


Yuvak ki nazar uspar thehar gayi. Wo bala ki khubsurat thi. garmi ki wajah se uske chehre par pasina chhalak aaya tha. pasine se tar uska gora mukhda surya ki roshni mein aise chamak raha tha jaise purnima ki raat mein chaand. uska dupatta uske gale se lipatkar pichhe pith ki aur jhul raha tha. Saamne uski bhari hui chhatiyan kisi parwat shikhar ki tarah tane hue use ghur rahe the. Pet samtal tha, kamar patli thi lekin kulhe chaudi aur bhari golakar liye hue thi. Uska nashila gathila badan kapdon mein chhupaye nahi chhup raha tha. Yuvak kuchh pal ke liye uski sundarta mein kho sa gaya. Wah ye bhi bhul gaya ki is ladki ne kuchh der pehle use kaath ka ulla kaha tha. Use ye bhi dhyan nahi tha ki uski bike sadak par giri padi hai aur uske kapde hawaon ki jor se sadak par idhar udhar ghisat rahe hain.


Lekin ladkiyon ko uski dasha ka anumaan tha. Uski haalat par ek baar phir ladkiyan khilkhila kar hans padi. Uski chetna lauti. Usne apni bhaunhe chadhayi aur us ladki ko ghura jisne use kaath ka ullu kaha tha. "kya kaha tumne? Jara phir se kehna."


"kaath ka ullu." wah ladki punah boli aur phir hans padi.


"main tumhe kaath ka ullu nazar aata hoon" yuvak ne bifarkar bola.


"aur nahi to kya....apni surat dekho pakke kaath ke ullu lagte ho." uske sath uski saheliyan bhi khilkhilakar hasne lagi.


Yuvak apmaan se bhar utha, usne kuchh kehne ke liye muh khola par hoth chabakar rah gaya. use apni dasha ka gyan hua, wah un ladkiyon se ulajhkar apni aur fazihat nahi karwana chah raha tha. Wah muda aur apne kapde sametne laga. Ladkiyan hansti hui aage badh gay.
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Nikki abhi thodi ghamnd kar rahi hai our lagta hai nikki ko harna pasand nahi hai is liye last waqt main bhi yuvak se maza lekar chali gayi

Jisse yuvak gir pada our yeha bhi ek ladki ne yuvak se maza le liye aage Dekhte hai kya hota hai
 
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