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Romance Kanch ki haveli

Kaun sa kirdaar aapke Dil Ko chhu gaya

  • Kanchan

    Votes: 10 66.7%
  • Nikki

    Votes: 4 26.7%
  • Ravi

    Votes: 3 20.0%
  • Thakur Jagat singh

    Votes: 2 13.3%
  • Radha devi

    Votes: 1 6.7%
  • Nishchal

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    15

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Toh apne saiyaa ke liye Kanchan ne kheer banani sikh hi li. Par kyaa woh yeh kheer kabhi khila bhi paayegi.
Kyaa Nikki usko aisa kabhi karne bhi degi.

Idher Thakur Ravi se shaadi ki baat karne wala hai dekhte hai ab Ravi kyaa karta hai. Kyaa woh sach bol paayega yaa phir shaadi ke liye haa karega.
Baat to Sahi Kah rahe hain aap. Ravi Ko kheer khilana tedhi kheer hai Kanchan ke liye. Kahi kisi ke dabav mein to nahi aa jata wo
 

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Kanchan jab tak ghar pahunchi, saanjh dhal chuki thi. Saanta bua ne raat ka khana pakane ke liye mitti ke chulhe mein aag laga chuki thi.

Sugna abhi bhi ghar nahi lauta tha. Chintu shayad aandar padhayi kar raha tha.

Kanchan shanta ko dhundhti andar rasoi tak aayi. Shanta pateele mein chaawal pakane ke liye paani bhar rahi thi. Usne shanta ko pukara - "bua....aaj kya bana rahi ho khaane mein?"

kanchan ki aawaz se shanta ne palatkar use dekha. uski aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi sawal tha. Sath hi chehre par thodi bechaini bhi vyapt thi. - "kyon puchh rahi hai? Tumhe to mere hath ka bana har cheej achha lagta hai?"

"bua....!" kanchan apni ungliyon mein dupatta ghumate hue boli - "bua aaj kheer banao na. mera mann aaj kheer khane ka ho raha hai."

"kheer...?" shanta ne aashcharya se use dekha - "lekin kheer ke liye saaman kahan hai?"

"to le aao na bua. Jo saaman chahiye. Aaj mera bada mann ho raha hai...." kanchan tapak se boli. Aur phir apni ugliyon mein dupatta ghumane lagi.

Shanta ne hairani se kanchan ko dekha. Aaj use kanchan kuchh ajeeb si lag rahi thi. Itni bechaini khane ke liye uske mann mein kabhi nahi hoti thi. Jo bana ke de diya wo kha leti thi. par aaj jaane kyon wo kheer khane ke liye itni jor de rahi hai?

Shanta mann mein sochne lagi - Abhi iski umar hi kitni hui hai, sirf sharir se badi hui hai. Aqal to abhi bhi bachon jitni hi hai. Shayad isne kisi ke ghar mein kheer bante dekha ho. Aur iska kheer khane ka mann machla ho. -"aaj tujhe kheer khane ki itni adhirta kyon hai bhala? Shanta ne puchha.

"bahut din ho gaye hain na isliye....!" kanchan bholepan se boli - "kya....nahi banaogi bua?"

"banaungi kaise nahi. Tu jo itni pyar se bol rahi hai." shanta ne muskaurate hue kahan - "kuchh cheejein batati hoon....use baniye ki dukaan se leti aa."

kanchan ne haan mein gardan hilayi. Phir shanta ki batayi cheejon ko yaad kar tezi se aangan ke darwaze se bahar nikal gayi. Tab tak shanta dusre kaamo mein vyast ho gayi.

Lagbhag 30 minnut baad kanchan lauti. Uske hath mein thele bhar ka saaman tha. Use dekhkar shanta ki aankhein hairat se chaudi ho gayi. - "itna sara kya utha layi tu?"

shanta ne to use ek din ka saaman laane ko kaha tha. Par kanchan to door ki soch kar gayi thi aur pure hafte bhar ka saaman utha laayi thi. Wo bua se boli - "Abhi le aayi to achha kiya na bua." phir kabhi khane ka mann hua to?"

"to tab le aati." shanta ne thele ka saaman jaanchte hue kaha. - "ab ye rakhe rakhe kharab nahi ho jayenge?"

kanchan khamosh ho gayi. Ab wo kaise samjhati bua ko ki use ab roz hi kheer khane ka mann hone wala hai.

Use udaas dekh shanta boli - "achha hi kiya beti jo tu le aayi. Roz roz dukaan jane se samay harz hota hai. Ab jab bhi tera mann kheer khane ka kare mujhe bata dena main bana diya karungi."

Shanta kanchan se thela lekar usse saaman nikaalne lagi. Usse kabhi kanchan ki udaasi nahi dekhi jati thi. bin maa ki ladki ko wo udaas dekh bhi kaise sakti thi. Bachpan se aise hi uski jara jara si baaton ka khyal karti aayi thi. Jaise wo usi ki kokh se janmi ho. shanta kabhi kabhar chintu par baras padti thi to kabhi kabhi uski shararat par maar bhi deti thi, par kanchan ko kabhi bhul se bhi nahi daant'ti thi. Aaj bhi wo uske udaas chehre ko dekh tadap uthi thi.

kanchan abhi bhi shanta ke pichhe khadi use saaman nikaalte dekh rahi thi.

Shanta ne use khada dekha to muskurakar boli - "beti...main kheer bana dungi. Thodi der tak tu chintu ke sath baithkar padhayi kar. Kheer bante hi main tumhe bula lungi."

"main tumhe kheer banate dekhna chahti hoon bua." kanchan ne aagrah ki. - "kheer kaise banayi jati hai.....main sikhna chahti hoon."

"kyon sikhna chahti hai?" shanta ne puchha - "kya tumhe ye lagta hai main tumhe phir kabhi kheer banakar nahi khilaungi?."

"aisi baat nahi hai bua. Main ab ghar ke sare kaam sikhna chahti hoon. Tumne to mujhe abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi sikhaya." kanchan ne shikayat ki.

Use sach mein is baat ka dukh tha ki bua ne use kabhi ghar ka koi kaam karne nahi diya. Khana banana nahi sikhaya. Kuchh nahi to kheer hi banana sikha deti. Kam se kam wo apne hathon se banayi kheer to ravi ko khila sakti thi.

Wahin Shanta khade khade use hairat se dekhe ja rahi thi. Use aaj kanchan ke swabhav mein kaafi parivartan dikhayi de raha tha. Pehle kheer khane ke liye utavlapan aur ab ghar ke kaamo ke prati lagaav....."kuchh to hua hai ise." wah mann mein Sochi.

"ye tumhe achanak se ghar ke kaamon ko sikhne ka mann kyon hua?" shanta ne muskurate hue puchha.

"jo na sikhi to......jab main sasuraal jaungi tab meri saas mujhe daategi nahi? Kahengi nahi ki....mujhe ghar ka koi kaam nahi aata."kanchan bina ruke kehti rahi. - "tab tumhari kitni badnaami hogi bua? Phir saas mujhe ghar se bhi nikaal dengi. Isliye ab main roz aapke sath khana banana sikhungi aur ghar ke dusre kaam bhi."

bholi kanchan ki bholi baatein sunkar ek aur jahan shanta mand mand muskura rahi thi to wahi dusri aur is baat se chakit bhi thi ki aaj kanchan ko itni sari baatein kahan se sikhne ko mil gayi. Phele to ye kabhi is tarah ki baatein nahi karti thi

"kyon hans rahi ho bua.?" shanta ko hasnte dekh kanchan ke chehre par laaj ki laali fail gayi.

"aise hi." shanta ne muskurakar jawab diya. Phir uske jhuke chehre ko thodi se pakadkar uthate hue aage boli. - "wo sab to theek hai, main tumhe sab sikha dungi. par tumhare mann mein ye saas ka darr bhara kisne?"

Kanchan ke aage ravi ka chehra ghum gaya. Par bua se uske bare mein keh na saki. Laaj ki gathri bani khamoshi se shanta ko dekhti rahi.

"theek hai rahne de mat bata. Aa mere sath baith, tujhe aaj kheer banakar dikhati hoon. Phir apni sasuraal mein banana apni saas ke liye." shanta ye kehte hue kanchan ka hath pakadkar chulhe tak le gayi. Phir use ek ek karke sare vidhi batane lagi aur kanchan uske bataye anusar kheer banane lagi.

Kanchan pure dhyan se shanta ki batayi baaton ko mann mein utarti rahi. kanchan is kaam mein aisi khoyi ki chintu ke baar baar bulane par bhi uske paas nahi gayi. Roz is waqt wo chintu ko padhati thi, par aaj usne bhai ki taraf dekha tak nahi.


antatah ! kanchan ki mehnat puri hui aur uski meethi kheer bankar taiyar hui.

Itne mein sugna bhi laut aaya tha. Aangan mein paon dharte hi kheer ki sugandh uske naak se takrayi.

"ohhh......to aaj ghar mein kheer banayi ja rahi hai." sugna naak sunghte hue chukhe tak aaya. -"badi achhi sugandh aa rahi hai."

"sugandh kaise nahi aayegi bhaiya. Kanchan ke hath ka bana jo hai." shanta ne paani ka lauta sugna ko dete hue kaha.

"kya.....!" sugna ka muh se khushi se bhara swar nikla. Usne kanchan ko dekha jo hothon mein muskurahat aur aankhon mein sharm liye peeta ki aur dekhe ja rahi thi. - "ye jaan kar to meri bhukh duguni ho gayi hai. main khana to thodi der mein khaunga.....par abhi thodi si kheer katori mein le aa. Jara dekhun to meri beti ne kaisi kheer banayi hai."

Sugna ke kehne ki deri thi aur kanchan kheer nikalne daud padi. rasoi se katori laakar usme kheer bhari aur sugna ko pakda di. Phir sugna ke khane ke baad apni prashansha sunne ke liye paas hi khadi ho gayi.

Sugna ne chammach se kheer uthakar apne muh mein liya. Phir apni jeebh chalate hue usne kanchan ko dekha jo taktaki lagaye usi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske mann mein hazaron shankayein thi......jaane bapu ko kheer kaisa laga hoga. Kahin aisa na ho bapu naaraz ho jayein. Lekin agle hi pal uski saari shankayein bejaan shaabit hui.....jab uski nazar sugna ke honthon par failti muskurahat par padi.

"bapu batao na kheer kaisi lagi?" kanchan se aur na raha gaya. uske mann mein apne mehnat ka parinaam jaan'ne ki utsukta charam par thi.

"swadisht....Behad swadisht !" sugna gadgad hokar bola - "mujhe to biswas hi nahi ho raha hai ki meri beti itni achhi kheer bana sakti hai."

Kanchan bhav-vibhor ho gayi. apne bapu ke muh se apne hath se banaye kheer ki prashansha sunkar uska rom rom pulkit ho utha. Mann mayur ki tarah naachne ko hua. Par peeta ka dhyan karke apni khushi apne dil mein daba gayi.

Uski khushi keval isliye nahi thi ki usne achhi kheer banayi thi aur uske peeta ne uski sarahna ki thi. Uski khushi ka kaaran tha ravi.....! wo ye sochkar khush ho rahi thi ki kal wo apne pritam ko apne saheb ko apne hathon se kheer banakar khila sakegi. Uske muh se apne liye sachi prashansha sunegi. Use is baat ki khushi thi ki ab wo ravi ko apna sakegi. kehne ko to usne sirf kheer banani sikhi thi....par koi uski nazar se dekhe to jaan paye ki uske us kheer mein kitni bhavnayein chheepi hui thi.

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Ravi jab haveli pahuncha to nikki bhi uske pichhe pichhe haveli mein daakhil hui.

Hall mein thakur sahab ke sath deewan ji baithe hue the. Wey aapas mein kuchh baatein kar rahe the jab ravi ne unhe hath jodkar greet kiya.

Ravi aur nikki ko ek sath bahar se aate dekh thakur sahab ki aamkhein khushi se muskura uthi. - "aao ravi, hum tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the. Tumse kuchh aavashyak baatein karni hai." thakur sahab ravi se sambodhit hue.

Ravi ki aankhein aashcharya se sikud gayi. Paas hi khadi nikki ki aur nazar ghumi to uske honthon par ek rahasyamayii muskaan thirakte paaya. Usne phir se apni nazron ka rukh thakur sahab ke chehre par kiya. usnke chehre par gehre santosh ka bhav tha. raipur aane ke baad aaj pehli baar usne thakur sahab ko itna prasann dekha tha. lekin unke santosh ka kaaran uske samajh se pare tha.
Amazing update bro
Ravi ko kheer dene k liye kanchan kheer banana sikh liya he apni bua se first time bhi safal rahi apni kosis me.
Ravi kis musibat me padne walla he usko khud nehni pata.Thakur sahab ki khushi ka Raaz usko bhari padegaa.
 

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is update mein ullekhit kayi baatein achi lagi to ek do baatein buri bhi lagi...
waise hamesha se hi pasandida kahaniyon ki list mein gaon pe adhaarit kahaniyaan zyada ahmiyat rakhti hai mere liye... kyunki gaon ke parivesh, vatavaran, uski mitti mein ek freshness rahti hai.... Saralta aur saadgi se bharpoor hoti hai...
Kanchan jab tak ghar pahunchi, saanjh dhal chuki thi. Saanta bua ne raat ka khana pakane ke liye mitti ke chulhe mein aag laga chuki thi.
lage ki main bhi wohi baithi hoon ... Jaise is thandi mausam mein chulhe ki aag ki garmi mein makke bhun rahi hun khane ke liye. ... padhte waqt ek alag hi ehsaas hai ye bhi....

dusri baat...laakh burayi karu kanchan ki lekin aaj is update mein uski maasoomiyat ne dil jeet li ho jaise..
sath hi shanta ka ashim prem aur mamta uske liye... ye bhi ek wajah hai jiske chalte shanta favorite story characters ki list mein hai....

Lekin buri lagi ye baat ki kanchan ne apne pita aur bhai se jagah us ravi ko zyada importance di hai... :bat:

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
 

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Amazing update bro
Ravi ko kheer dene k liye kanchan kheer banana sikh liya he apni bua se first time bhi safal rahi apni kosis me.
Ravi kis musibat me padne walla he usko khud nehni pata.Thakur sahab ki khushi ka Raaz usko bhari padegaa.
Shukriya Saurabh bhai update pasand karne ke liye. Sath bane rahen.
 

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is update mein ullekhit kayi baatein achi lagi to ek do baatein buri bhi lagi...
waise hamesha se hi pasandida kahaniyon ki list mein gaon pe adhaarit kahaniyaan zyada ahmiyat rakhti hai mere liye... kyunki gaon ke parivesh, vatavaran, uski mitti mein ek freshness rahti hai.... Saralta aur saadgi se bharpoor hoti hai...

lage ki main bhi wohi baithi hoon ... Jaise is thandi mausam mein chulhe ki aag ki garmi mein makke bhun rahi hun khane ke liye. ... padhte waqt ek alag hi ehsaas hai ye bhi....

dusri baat...laakh burayi karu kanchan ki lekin aaj is update mein uski maasoomiyat ne dil jeet li ho jaise..
sath hi shanta ka ashim prem aur mamta uske liye... ye bhi ek wajah hai jiske chalte shanta favorite story characters ki list mein hai....

Lekin buri lagi ye baat ki kanchan ne apne pita aur bhai se jagah us ravi ko zyada importance di hai... :bat:

Well sabhi pehlu mein sabhi arthpoorn baaton, kirdaaro bich huye vaartalaap ko aur gatividhiyo ko ek sathik gati ke sath samete huye hai update ke jariye writer sahab ne shabdon mein khoob roopantaran kiya hai. .

Bahot dilchasp update sath hi kuch arthpoorn aur manmahok kirdaaro ki bhumika...

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :yourock: :yourock:
Maine kaha tha na ek din Kanchan aapka Dil Jeet lega. Wo hai hi itni pyari ki koi usse nafrat kar hi nahi Sakta. :bahut bahut dhanyavaad iss pyare review ke liye.
 

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Update 23


nikki apni jeep mein baithi uska intezaar kar rahi thi. Jis jagah ravi aur kanchan khade hokar kiss kar rahe the wo jagah jeep se zyada door nahi thi. Wahan se thoda niche utarte hi nikki unhe saaf dekh sakti thi.

Ravi bike tak aaya. Phir nikki ko dekha. Uski aankhein shola ugal rahi thi. Chehra gusse se fat padne ko taiyar tha.

Ravi uski aag ugalti aankhen aur gusse se bhari surat dekhkar samajh gaya ki nikki ne use kanchan ke sath dekh liya hai.

Is tarah apni chori pakde jaane se uski sitti-pitti gum ho gayi thi. lekin usne apni ghabraht nikki par zaahir nahi hone diya. usne laaparwahi se nikki ko dekhte hue kaha - "nikki ji, aap yahan, is waqt?"

"mujhe aap mat kaho." nikki gusse se chikhi. - "jab main tumhe pasand hi nahi to phir ye jhoothe samman kis liye?"

uske gusse ko dekhkar ravi hairaan rah gaya. usne socha bhi nahi tha ki nikki uspar is tarah bhadak sakti hai. lekin wo uske gusse ki parwaah kiye bina bola - "main kuchh samjha nahi."

"nahi samjhe?" nikki vyang se muskurayi. phir usi kutilta ke sath boli - "agar tanhayi mein chhupkar paap karna hi tha to mujhe thukrakar mera apmaan kis liye kiya tha?"

"kya bakwaas kar rahi ho tum?" ravi gusse se cheekha. Use iss baat se bahut gussa aaya ki Nikki ne uske sath sath Kanchan Jaisi bholi aur Nirdosh ladki ke Charitra par bhi ungli utjane ki koshish ki thi

"Main yadi bakwas kar Rahi hoon to tumhi Haqeeqat Bata do ki tum dono yahan akele mein Kaun sa mahapuraan padh rahe the." Nikki use sir se paon tak dekhte hue vyang se muskurai.

"Main tumhare kisi bhi sawal ka jawab dene ke liye vivash nahi hoon." Ravi ne use do took jawab diya aur bike ki taraf badh Gaya.

"ye kyon nahi kehte, tumhare paas safai dene ke liye shabd hi nahi bache hain." nikki ne use mudte dekh khijkar kaha.

uski baaton se chidhkar ravi palta. Par gusse ki adhikta mein kuchh keh nahi paya. Bas daant pees kar rah gaya. Dvesh bhavna se pidit naari ko koi samjhaye bhi to kaise. Unke aqal par aisa patther pada hota hai ki laakh koshish kar lo par wo patther nahi hat-ti. Usne chup rahne mein hi apni bhalai samjhi.

Ravi ek vyang bhari muskurahat nikki par chhodta hua wapas apni bike ki aur badh gaya.

Nikki ravi ke is upekshit (negligently) vyavhaar ko seh na saki. Wah gusse se jeep se utri aur lapak kar us tak pahunchi. - "main puchhti hoon.....aisa kya hai kanchan mein jo mujhmein nahi? Kya main sundar nahi? Kya main jawan nahi? Dekho mujhe aur batao. Kya kami hai mujhmein?" ye kehte hue nikki ne uske saamne apni chhatiyan taan di.

uske aisa karne se uske safed tishirt mein kase uske uroj apne pure aakar ka pradarshan kar uthe.

Na chahte hue bhi ravi ki nigaahen uske parvat ki tarah uthe uski chhati ki golaiyon par chali gayi. uske ubhre hue boobs ko apni aankhon ke itne sameep mehsus kar ravi ka pura sharir sihar utha. Par dusre hi pal usne apni nazron ko wahan se hata liya.

"tum mein sabse badi kami yah hai ki tum vaasna se pidit ladki ho." ravi ne nikki ki aankhon mein tairte vaasnatmak leharon ko dekhte hue kaha - "Tum apni tulna kanchan se kar bhi kaise sakti ho?"


"main vaasna se pidit hoon to tum kya ho? Tum bhi to kuchh der pehle kisi ki garm bahon mein pade hue the." nikki jalkar boli - "tum mere saamne saadhu bante ho aur mere peeth pichhe aiyyasiyan karte ho. Kya main nahi jaanti?"

"band karo apni ye bakwaas." ravi gusse se chikha. - "mujhpar na sahi par thoda biswas kanchan par to rakho."

"wo to bholi hai tumhari baaton mein aa gayi hogi. Lekin itna yaad rakho Ravi......tumne mujhe thukrakar kisi aur ko apnaya to main tumhe chain se rahne nahi dungi." nikki apne daant chabate hue boli.

ravi ke prati uski tadap ab keval sharirik sukh bhar ka nahi rah gaya tha. Ab wo ravi ko apne pati ke roop mein haasil karna chahti thi. Lekin aaj ravi ka jhukav khud ke bajaye kanchan ki aur dekhkar wah gusse se bhar uth thi.

Wo khud ko kanchan ke muqable har drishti se behtar samajhti thi. kanchan na to uski jitni padhi likhi thi, na hi uski jitni dhani thi, na uska ghar uske ghar se bada tha, na wo nikki se achhe kapde pehanti thi, na to nikki se behtar baat karne ka dhang janti thi. ravi uska mehmaan tha uske ghar rahta tha uska khata tha. Phir bhi wo uske bajaye kanchan se pyar karta tha. nikki ka ahankari naari swabhav isi baat se dukhi tha.

Wo kanchan ko apna dushman nahi samajh rahi thi, lekin wo is baat ko seh nahi pa rahi thi ki jo kanchan sada uski mohtaaj rahi, jis kanchan ko usne jhopde se uthakar haveli mein sthan diya. Jiske sath usne apni thaali baati, jiske liye usne har fark ko mitaya, aaj wahi kanchan us par bhaari pad rahi thi. Uska abhimani mann isi baat se aahat tha.

Ravi ne usse adhik ulajhna theek nahi samjha. Wo palta aur apni bike par ja baitha.

"kahan ja rahe ho?" nikki uski kalai pakadkar gurrayi.

"tumhe raat yahi gujarni ho to shauk se gujaro. Main apne raaste chala." wah bola aur bike ki chabhi ghumaya.

"tum aise nahi ja sakte." nikki fufkari.

"to....?" ravi ne aashcharya se ghura.

"tumhe mujhe bhi waisa hi kiss karna hoga jaisa tumne kanchan ke honthon par kiya tha." ye kehte hue nikki ne Apne honth uske uske honthon ke Kareeb kar diya.

"Lagta hai tum hosh mein nahi ho." Ravi ne ashcharya se use dekha aur phir bike par kick mara.

"ravi." nikki kisi naagin ki tarah fufkari. - "main apni kasam khakar kehti hoon. Agar tumne mujhe kiss na kiya to main abhi isi waqt apni jeep sahit is pahadi se niche kud jaungi."

"mazaak band karo aur ghar chalo." ravi ne vichlit hokar kaha. Use nikki ke chehre ki sakhti andar tak hila gayi thi.

"tumhe lag raha hai main mazaak kar rahi hoon." nikki daant pisti hui boli. uski aankhon ke sholay bhadak uthe - "to theek hai, agar tum meri baaton ki sachai parakhna hi chahte ho to ek qadam yahan se aage badhakar dikhao. main agar is pahadi se na kudi to main thakur jagat singh ki beti nahi." wo chattan ki tarah thos shabdon mein boli - "lekin yaad rakho ravi. Tumhe apni is bhool par zindagi bhar afsos hoga. Kyonki main mazaak nahi karti."

Ravi Sar se paon tak kaanp gaya. usne dhyan se nikki ko dekha. Nikki is waqt behad gusse mein thi. Uski aankhon mein gusse ke sath sath ek gehre dard ki parat bhi chadhi hui thi. Ravi manochikitshak (Psychologist) tha use samajhte der nahi lagi ki niiki ko agar usne aur aahat kiya to ye sachmuch mein apni jaan de degi.

Pyar mein apmaanit stri, kaama-agni mein jalta deh kuchh bhi kar sakta hai. Wo ek baar pehle bhi nikki ka naajuk mauqe par tirskaar kar chuka tha. ravi nahi chahta tha ki uski ek bhool se koi badi aafat uske gale pade. uski galti se nikki ko kuchh hua to wo thakur sahab ko kya jawab dega? Kya beetegi thakur sahab par jab unhe ye maalum hoga ki jis insaan ko wo doctor jaankar apni patni ka ilaaz karane laaye the wo khooni bankar unhi ki beti ka khoon kar diya.

Ravi is ehsaas se punah kaanp utha. usne vivashta se apne honth chabane shuru kar diye. Use apne bachav ka koi bhi maarg dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Usne nikki ko dekha wo abhi bhi uske sar par sawaar thi. Wo apni jalti hui aankhon se use ghure ja rahi thi.

"theek hai." ravi bujha bujha sa bola - "lekin iske baad tum koi bhi behas nahi karogi aur seedha haveli laut jaogi?"

"mujhe manzoor hai." nikki apne honthon par vijayi muskurahat laate hue boli.

Ravi ne jawab mein apne honth uski aur badha diye. Nikki ne uske gardan ko pichhe se pakda aur apne honthon ko uske honthon se mila diya. Phir kisi pake hue aam ki tarah uske honthon ko chusne lagi. Ravi ke pure sharir mein tez sansanahat bharti chali gayi. nikki ke sharir ki garmi uske muh ke raaste uske sharir mein utarne lagi. Uski aankhein nashe mein band hone lagi. Use aisa mehsus hua jaise wo kisi aur hi duniya mein pahunch gaya ho.

Nikki honth chusne ke maamle mein maharat rakhti thi. wo usi prakaar dheere dheere uske honthon ko chusti rahi. Phir purn tripti ke baad wo ravi se alag hui.

nikki ke alag hote hi ravi ne nashe mein band hoti apni bhari palkein kholkar use dekha. Uske chehre mein jeet ki khushi thi to wahin uske honth apni kaamyabi par garv se muskura uthe the.

Ravi ki gardan sharm se jhuk gayi. wah kuchh der yunhi uske chehre ko dekhta raha. nikki use dekhkar muskurati rahi. ravi ne uski aur se apni gardan ghumakar bike ko ek jordaar kick maari. Abhi wo aage badhna hi chahta tha ki nikki ki awaaz uske kaano se takryi. - "thehro."

"ab kya hua?" ravi ne sawaliya nazron se use ghura.

"tumne ye to bataya hi nahi ki kiska swad-sugandh achha tha? Is shahri gulaab ka ya us pahaadi phool ka?" nikki ne garv se muskurate hue puchha.

Ravi uski aur dekhkar vyang se muskuraya. Phir bola - "shahar ke gamlo mein khilne wale kisi bhi phool mein wo sugandh kahan? Jo pahaadi ke aanchal par khile phoolon mein hoti hai?"

Uski is kataksh (Insinuation) se nikki ka pura sharir apmaan se sulag utha. Lekin isse pehle ki wo ravi ko koi jawab deti. Ravi ek jhatke se aage badh chuka tha. Nikki gusse se use jate hue dekhti rahi.
Ye sab kya kar diya is pagal ladki ne, bachara ravi :sad: ye abhi bhi waesi hi stubborn hai jaisi pichli story me thi :sigh2:
 

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Kanchan jab tak ghar pahunchi, saanjh dhal chuki thi. Saanta bua ne raat ka khana pakane ke liye mitti ke chulhe mein aag laga chuki thi.

Sugna abhi bhi ghar nahi lauta tha. Chintu shayad aandar padhayi kar raha tha.

Kanchan shanta ko dhundhti andar rasoi tak aayi. Shanta pateele mein chaawal pakane ke liye paani bhar rahi thi. Usne shanta ko pukara - "bua....aaj kya bana rahi ho khaane mein?"

kanchan ki aawaz se shanta ne palatkar use dekha. uski aankhon mein abhi bhi wahi sawal tha. Sath hi chehre par thodi bechaini bhi vyapt thi. - "kyon puchh rahi hai? Tumhe to mere hath ka bana har cheej achha lagta hai?"

"bua....!" kanchan apni ungliyon mein dupatta ghumate hue boli - "bua aaj kheer banao na. mera mann aaj kheer khane ka ho raha hai."

"kheer...?" shanta ne aashcharya se use dekha - "lekin kheer ke liye saaman kahan hai?"

"to le aao na bua. Jo saaman chahiye. Aaj mera bada mann ho raha hai...." kanchan tapak se boli. Aur phir apni ugliyon mein dupatta ghumane lagi.

Shanta ne hairani se kanchan ko dekha. Aaj use kanchan kuchh ajeeb si lag rahi thi. Itni bechaini khane ke liye uske mann mein kabhi nahi hoti thi. Jo bana ke de diya wo kha leti thi. par aaj jaane kyon wo kheer khane ke liye itni jor de rahi hai?

Shanta mann mein sochne lagi - Abhi iski umar hi kitni hui hai, sirf sharir se badi hui hai. Aqal to abhi bhi bachon jitni hi hai. Shayad isne kisi ke ghar mein kheer bante dekha ho. Aur iska kheer khane ka mann machla ho. -"aaj tujhe kheer khane ki itni adhirta kyon hai bhala? Shanta ne puchha.

"bahut din ho gaye hain na isliye....!" kanchan bholepan se boli - "kya....nahi banaogi bua?"

"banaungi kaise nahi. Tu jo itni pyar se bol rahi hai." shanta ne muskaurate hue kahan - "kuchh cheejein batati hoon....use baniye ki dukaan se leti aa."

kanchan ne haan mein gardan hilayi. Phir shanta ki batayi cheejon ko yaad kar tezi se aangan ke darwaze se bahar nikal gayi. Tab tak shanta dusre kaamo mein vyast ho gayi.

Lagbhag 30 minnut baad kanchan lauti. Uske hath mein thele bhar ka saaman tha. Use dekhkar shanta ki aankhein hairat se chaudi ho gayi. - "itna sara kya utha layi tu?"

shanta ne to use ek din ka saaman laane ko kaha tha. Par kanchan to door ki soch kar gayi thi aur pure hafte bhar ka saaman utha laayi thi. Wo bua se boli - "Abhi le aayi to achha kiya na bua." phir kabhi khane ka mann hua to?"

"to tab le aati." shanta ne thele ka saaman jaanchte hue kaha. - "ab ye rakhe rakhe kharab nahi ho jayenge?"

kanchan khamosh ho gayi. Ab wo kaise samjhati bua ko ki use ab roz hi kheer khane ka mann hone wala hai.

Use udaas dekh shanta boli - "achha hi kiya beti jo tu le aayi. Roz roz dukaan jane se samay harz hota hai. Ab jab bhi tera mann kheer khane ka kare mujhe bata dena main bana diya karungi."

Shanta kanchan se thela lekar usse saaman nikaalne lagi. Usse kabhi kanchan ki udaasi nahi dekhi jati thi. bin maa ki ladki ko wo udaas dekh bhi kaise sakti thi. Bachpan se aise hi uski jara jara si baaton ka khyal karti aayi thi. Jaise wo usi ki kokh se janmi ho. shanta kabhi kabhar chintu par baras padti thi to kabhi kabhi uski shararat par maar bhi deti thi, par kanchan ko kabhi bhul se bhi nahi daant'ti thi. Aaj bhi wo uske udaas chehre ko dekh tadap uthi thi.

kanchan abhi bhi shanta ke pichhe khadi use saaman nikaalte dekh rahi thi.

Shanta ne use khada dekha to muskurakar boli - "beti...main kheer bana dungi. Thodi der tak tu chintu ke sath baithkar padhayi kar. Kheer bante hi main tumhe bula lungi."

"main tumhe kheer banate dekhna chahti hoon bua." kanchan ne aagrah ki. - "kheer kaise banayi jati hai.....main sikhna chahti hoon."

"kyon sikhna chahti hai?" shanta ne puchha - "kya tumhe ye lagta hai main tumhe phir kabhi kheer banakar nahi khilaungi?."

"aisi baat nahi hai bua. Main ab ghar ke sare kaam sikhna chahti hoon. Tumne to mujhe abhi tak kuchh bhi nahi sikhaya." kanchan ne shikayat ki.

Use sach mein is baat ka dukh tha ki bua ne use kabhi ghar ka koi kaam karne nahi diya. Khana banana nahi sikhaya. Kuchh nahi to kheer hi banana sikha deti. Kam se kam wo apne hathon se banayi kheer to ravi ko khila sakti thi.

Wahin Shanta khade khade use hairat se dekhe ja rahi thi. Use aaj kanchan ke swabhav mein kaafi parivartan dikhayi de raha tha. Pehle kheer khane ke liye utavlapan aur ab ghar ke kaamo ke prati lagaav....."kuchh to hua hai ise." wah mann mein Sochi.

"ye tumhe achanak se ghar ke kaamon ko sikhne ka mann kyon hua?" shanta ne muskurate hue puchha.

"jo na sikhi to......jab main sasuraal jaungi tab meri saas mujhe daategi nahi? Kahengi nahi ki....mujhe ghar ka koi kaam nahi aata."kanchan bina ruke kehti rahi. - "tab tumhari kitni badnaami hogi bua? Phir saas mujhe ghar se bhi nikaal dengi. Isliye ab main roz aapke sath khana banana sikhungi aur ghar ke dusre kaam bhi."

bholi kanchan ki bholi baatein sunkar ek aur jahan shanta mand mand muskura rahi thi to wahi dusri aur is baat se chakit bhi thi ki aaj kanchan ko itni sari baatein kahan se sikhne ko mil gayi. Phele to ye kabhi is tarah ki baatein nahi karti thi

"kyon hans rahi ho bua.?" shanta ko hasnte dekh kanchan ke chehre par laaj ki laali fail gayi.

"aise hi." shanta ne muskurakar jawab diya. Phir uske jhuke chehre ko thodi se pakadkar uthate hue aage boli. - "wo sab to theek hai, main tumhe sab sikha dungi. par tumhare mann mein ye saas ka darr bhara kisne?"

Kanchan ke aage ravi ka chehra ghum gaya. Par bua se uske bare mein keh na saki. Laaj ki gathri bani khamoshi se shanta ko dekhti rahi.

"theek hai rahne de mat bata. Aa mere sath baith, tujhe aaj kheer banakar dikhati hoon. Phir apni sasuraal mein banana apni saas ke liye." shanta ye kehte hue kanchan ka hath pakadkar chulhe tak le gayi. Phir use ek ek karke sare vidhi batane lagi aur kanchan uske bataye anusar kheer banane lagi.

Kanchan pure dhyan se shanta ki batayi baaton ko mann mein utarti rahi. kanchan is kaam mein aisi khoyi ki chintu ke baar baar bulane par bhi uske paas nahi gayi. Roz is waqt wo chintu ko padhati thi, par aaj usne bhai ki taraf dekha tak nahi.


antatah ! kanchan ki mehnat puri hui aur uski meethi kheer bankar taiyar hui.

Itne mein sugna bhi laut aaya tha. Aangan mein paon dharte hi kheer ki sugandh uske naak se takrayi.

"ohhh......to aaj ghar mein kheer banayi ja rahi hai." sugna naak sunghte hue chukhe tak aaya. -"badi achhi sugandh aa rahi hai."

"sugandh kaise nahi aayegi bhaiya. Kanchan ke hath ka bana jo hai." shanta ne paani ka lauta sugna ko dete hue kaha.

"kya.....!" sugna ka muh se khushi se bhara swar nikla. Usne kanchan ko dekha jo hothon mein muskurahat aur aankhon mein sharm liye peeta ki aur dekhe ja rahi thi. - "ye jaan kar to meri bhukh duguni ho gayi hai. main khana to thodi der mein khaunga.....par abhi thodi si kheer katori mein le aa. Jara dekhun to meri beti ne kaisi kheer banayi hai."

Sugna ke kehne ki deri thi aur kanchan kheer nikalne daud padi. rasoi se katori laakar usme kheer bhari aur sugna ko pakda di. Phir sugna ke khane ke baad apni prashansha sunne ke liye paas hi khadi ho gayi.

Sugna ne chammach se kheer uthakar apne muh mein liya. Phir apni jeebh chalate hue usne kanchan ko dekha jo taktaki lagaye usi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske mann mein hazaron shankayein thi......jaane bapu ko kheer kaisa laga hoga. Kahin aisa na ho bapu naaraz ho jayein. Lekin agle hi pal uski saari shankayein bejaan shaabit hui.....jab uski nazar sugna ke honthon par failti muskurahat par padi.

"bapu batao na kheer kaisi lagi?" kanchan se aur na raha gaya. uske mann mein apne mehnat ka parinaam jaan'ne ki utsukta charam par thi.

"swadisht....Behad swadisht !" sugna gadgad hokar bola - "mujhe to biswas hi nahi ho raha hai ki meri beti itni achhi kheer bana sakti hai."

Kanchan bhav-vibhor ho gayi. apne bapu ke muh se apne hath se banaye kheer ki prashansha sunkar uska rom rom pulkit ho utha. Mann mayur ki tarah naachne ko hua. Par peeta ka dhyan karke apni khushi apne dil mein daba gayi.

Uski khushi keval isliye nahi thi ki usne achhi kheer banayi thi aur uske peeta ne uski sarahna ki thi. Uski khushi ka kaaran tha ravi.....! wo ye sochkar khush ho rahi thi ki kal wo apne pritam ko apne saheb ko apne hathon se kheer banakar khila sakegi. Uske muh se apne liye sachi prashansha sunegi. Use is baat ki khushi thi ki ab wo ravi ko apna sakegi. kehne ko to usne sirf kheer banani sikhi thi....par koi uski nazar se dekhe to jaan paye ki uske us kheer mein kitni bhavnayein chheepi hui thi.

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Ravi jab haveli pahuncha to nikki bhi uske pichhe pichhe haveli mein daakhil hui.

Hall mein thakur sahab ke sath deewan ji baithe hue the. Wey aapas mein kuchh baatein kar rahe the jab ravi ne unhe hath jodkar greet kiya.

Ravi aur nikki ko ek sath bahar se aate dekh thakur sahab ki aamkhein khushi se muskura uthi. - "aao ravi, hum tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the. Tumse kuchh aavashyak baatein karni hai." thakur sahab ravi se sambodhit hue.

Ravi ki aankhein aashcharya se sikud gayi. Paas hi khadi nikki ki aur nazar ghumi to uske honthon par ek rahasyamayii muskaan thirakte paaya. Usne phir se apni nazron ka rukh thakur sahab ke chehre par kiya. usnke chehre par gehre santosh ka bhav tha. raipur aane ke baad aaj pehli baar usne thakur sahab ko itna prasann dekha tha. lekin unke santosh ka kaaran uske samajh se pare tha.
Jab bhi kanchan ki baatein padhti hoon to dil khush ho jata hai :love:
 

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Ye sab kya kar diya is pagal ladki ne, bachara ravi :sad: ye abhi bhi waesi hi stubborn hai jaisi pichli story me thi :sigh2:
Iss Baar Nikki ka attitude pehle se zyada dekhne Ko milega sister. Kahani ke Sath Jude rahen dhanyavaad
 

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Jab bhi kanchan ki baatein padhti hoon to dil khush ho jata hai :love:
Kanchan ki baaten likhte waqt main bhi uske kirdaar mein kho jata hoon
 
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