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King of light

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first of all :congrats:for new story and best of luck with your story

story ki starting hi aapne kaafi interesting tarike se ki hai jiss mai eek GURU apne hi SHISHYA se yudh kr rha hai par kisi ko diye gye vachan ke kaaran vo usse maar nhi rhe hai but kaid kr diya hai ussi ke sharir mai

kaid hone se pehle apna ANSH usne bahar chod diya hai shayad yeh ANSH hi hero hai

well mujhe umeed hai ki aap story jaari rakhen ge aur isse aant tak le kr jayenge

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING
from now i am
YOUR REGULAR READER
Sukriya bhai meri story pe aane ke liye or aage kya hoga ye aapko aage story mai pta chal jayega bhai
Or thank you mere regular reader bnne ke liye
 

Stone cold

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Update 2


ek shaher ke ek bahot bade ghar Mai bahot Khushiyan manai ja rhi thi us ghar ke sab log aaj bahot khush the kyuki unhe Subha hi ek phone aaya tha jis se unhe Pta chala ke is ghar ki ek website se ek file download hui hai oh sorry sorry mtlb is ghar ko ek Chirag Mila hai ji ha us ghar ki badi bahu Ko ek ladka paida hua tha.

Vo Abhi dusre shahar ke hospital Mai the or aaj sham tak hi ghar bapas aa rhe the
Is liye ghar Ko sajaya ja rha tha.doctor ne unhe rokka tha ke Abhi in Ko 2 din or hospital Mai rkha jaye par vo nhi Mane is liye doctor ne unki dekh bhal ke liye do nurses bhi sath bheji thi. Sab log bahot khush the par in sab Mai se sab se jyada ek choti bachi khush thi kyuki usko pta chala tha ke us ke papa us ke khelne ke liye ek gudda la rhe hai. Vo Baar Baar sab se time puch rhi thi kyuki uske papa ne kha tha ke vo sham ke 6 baje tak aa jayege. Us Nanhi bachi ka Chanchal man aapne liye aa rhe gudde Ko dekhne ke liye bahot beyakul ho rha tha. Us se intzaar nhi ho rha tha. Is liye vo Baar Baar ghar ke darvaje par ja ke aapne papa ka wait kr rhi thi. Us ki uksukta Ko dekh ke ghar ke baaki log bhi uksukh ho rhe the aapne Chirag Ko dekhne ke liye. Vo bhi Baar Baar in Ko phone krke puch rhe the ke kha tak pahuch gye.

Akhirkar vo lamha bhi aa hi gya jab un ke ghar ke bahar do car aa kr ruk gayin pehli car Mai se ek aadmi bahar aaya or sath hi Mai ek aurat bache Ko le kr bahar nikli Or dusri car Mai se ek or aadmi bahar Nikla or us ne bahar Nikal kr car ka dusra darvaja Khola or us Mai se ek aurat ko aapne hatho Mai ootha liya or ghar ki taraf chalne lga usi car Mai se 2 ladkia or nikli or unhone white color dress pehni hui thi jis se PTA chal rha tha ke ye nurse hai vo sab ghar ki traf ja rhe the Jha ek aurat hath Mai Aarti ki thali le kr khadi thi jab vo sab ghar ke darvaje pr aaye to us aurat ne in sab ki Aarti otari fir sab ghar ke aandar aa gye. Vo choti bachi bhag kr aapne papa ke paas gyi or boli

Bachi- papa papa mela gugga ka hai(papa papa mera gudda kha hai)

To us ke papa ne Jo aurat us ke hath Mai thi use paas ke ek Baad par Lita diya or ek aurat ke hath se us bache Ko liya or us bachi Ko dikane lga or bola

Papa- beta ye hai tumhara bhai

Vo ladki itni khush hui ke vo vohi pr tali bja kr nachne lgi. Tabhi ek aurat ne us se kha ke

Aurat- kajal beta tumhe to ek gudda chaiye tha na (ji ha us bachi ka Naam kajal hai)

Kajal- nhi Chachi mude to et bhai taiye ol Mai isi te tath khelogi (nhi Chachi mujhe to ek bhai chaiye or Mai isi ke sath khelogi)

Sab log kajal ki is baat paar bahot kush hue or Sara din aise hi Gujar gya

Dusre din Subha sab se pehle kajal nind se jagi. Us ka bed aapne mummy Papa ke kamre Mai hi tha. Vo bhag kr aapne aapne mummy Papa ke paas gyi Jha us ka chota bhai Abhi so rha tha. Vo pyar se us ke sar Ko sehlane lgi thi ki tabhi us ka chota bhai jag jata hai or rone lgta hai. Vo Apne bhai Ko rota dekh ke khud bhi rone lgti hai or bhag ke aapne papa ke paas jati hai or unhe kheti hai

Kajal- papa papa mela bhai lo la hai (papa papa mera bhai ro rha hai)

Us ke papa bhi jaag jate hai or aapne bete Ko rota dekh vo aapni Biwi Ko jga ke khete hai

Papa- are dekho mera beta ro rha hai lgta hai use bhuk lgi hai

Ye sun kr us Biwi aapne bache Ko dodh pilane lgti hai or vo bacha chup ho jata hai. Aapne bhai Ko chup dekh ke kajal bhi muskurane lgti hai.

Kuch time Baad sab ghar wale kajal ke papa ke kamre Mai the kajal ki maa leti hui thi or paas hi Mai vo bacha bhi so rha tha or kajal bhi aapne bhai ke paas bethi thi vo to baas usi Mai kho gyi thi use to us ke siwa kuch dikhai hi nhi de rha tha.

Chachi- bhai Sahab hame hamare Chirag ke naamkaran ke liye kal ek puja krni chaiye

Chacha- or hai bhai Sahab raat ke time hame ek party bhi krni chaiye.


Papa- tum thik bol rhe ho chote to kal Subha ham puja ki tyari krte hai. Or ha party bhi hogi uski tyari bhi tumhe hi krni hai chote or ha aaj hi sab friends or relatives Ko invention bhej do.

Us ke Baad ye Sara din party or Pooja ki tyario Mai hi Gujar jata hai.

Next day

Aaj sab Subha jaldi uth jate hai or Pooja ki tyario Mai jut jate hai.

Ab sab tyario ho chuki thi to Puja bhi shuru Hoti hai. pandit aapne mantra padhta hai. Fir puja ke ke vich mai pandit bolta hai

Pandit- yajmaan aapne is balak ka Naam kya socha hai

Chachi or maa ek sath- pandit ji ye hamare ghar ka Chirag hai is liye hame is ka Naam CHIRAG rkha hai.





Family intro

Is ghar ke mukhiya- Vihaan Aryan

Un ki wife- Anjali Aryan

Badi beti- Kajal Aryan

Beta- CHIRAG ARYAN(KARAN)

beti -Kaira Aryan

Choti beti- Sara Aryan

Bade chacha- Vivaan Aryan

Badi chachi- Aditi Aryan

Beti- Divya

Chote chacha- Ayaan Aryan

Choti chachi- Nisha Aryan

Beti- Noor Aryan



Dosto mujhe update Mai image dalni nhi aati koi bhai meri is Mai help krega
Nice update

Apne hero ka janm aur naamkaran dono hogaya aur Kajal ko bhi uska gudda mil gaya and bhai aapne Kajal ka apne chote bhai ke liye pyaar badi khubsurati se darshaaya hai aise hi update dete raho.

Ab agle update ka intezar hai
 

Mathur

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nice one brother beautifully written and described

HERO ka naam karan chl rha hai aur CHIRAG rkha gya hai well KARAN may be nick name ho

KAJAL ki atachmatta kaafi hai apne bhai se beautiful way of expressing feeling

KEEP WRITING
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King of light

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Update 3

Aaj raat ghar Mai party thi is liye sab log bahot jyada exited the sab log aapne Khandan ke waris Ko Puri duniya ke samne lane ke liye bahot uksukh the. Lagbhag sab tyaria ho gyi thi ab to bas mehmano ke aane ka intzaar kiya ja rha tha.
Or kuch hi der Mai mehmaan aana bhi shuru ho gye. Party itni shandar thi ke Aisa lag rha tha ke Aryan family ne pure shaher Ko hi party Mai bula liya ho. Ghar Ko bahot ache trah sajaya gya tha


Ghar Ko kuch is tra sajaya gya tha


Or ghar ka gardan kuch is tra sajaya gya tha

To party shuru ho gyi thi sab log wait kr rhe the ke btaya jaye ke ye party kis bjah se di gyi hai. Itne Mai Vihaan Aryan stage pe aate Hain or hath Mai Mike le kr bolna shuru krte hai

Vihaan- dosto aap sab soch rhe hoge ke hamne ye party kyu rkhi hai. Baat ye hai dosto ke Aaj mere or meri family ke liye bahot khushi ka din hai. Kyuki hame hamare ghar ke waris mil gya hai. Mtlb ki Maine father ki duty sambal li hai. Thank you

Tabhi Puri mehfil Mai taliyo ki awaj gujne lgti hai Vihaan Apne bete chirag Ko hath Mai lete hai or use sab Ko dikhata hai

Magar koi is party Mai tha jise ye sab sun kr Khushi nhi hoti.




Ek haveli Mai kuch log Bethe the. Or baate kr rhe the. Chale sunte hai kya baate ho rhi hai


Aapko pta hai ke vo kha gye

Nhi ham nhi jante vo kha gye.

To fir hame un Ko dhodna hoga is se pehle ki mahaguru or un ke log unhe dhond le

Nhi ham unhe nhi dhond skte or na hi mahaguru unhe dhond skte hai. Unhe to sirf un ka ansh hi Khoj skta hai.

To kya ham yha hath par hath rakh kr Bethe rhe

Nhi ham unhe to nhi dhond skte hai. Pr ham un ke ansh Ko dhond skte hai. Or vo is samhe kisi aam insani ghar Mai janam bhi le Chuka hoga ya fir Lene wala hoga.


Dusri taraf

Ek bahot hi Budha aadmi behta kuch soch rha tha us Ko dekh ke Aisa lag rha tha jaise vo lagbhag 150 saal ka ho kyuki unki dari hi bahot badi thi or Puri white thi or Sar ke Baal bhi or Sar pr topi (cap)thi. Tabhi ek aadmi us ke paas aaya

Mahaguru aaj us Ko gayab hue lagbhag ek saal hone wala hai or Abhi tak ham us Ko dhond nhi paye.

Tabhi mahaguru ne ankhen kholi or bole.

Mahaguru- hame to pehle hi kha tha us Ko khojna aapke bas ki baat nhi hai Bikram ji. Or use na khojna hi budhimani hai kyuki us ki Khoj Mai samye bearth Jaya hoga.

Bikram ji- to ab aap hi Marg dikha skte hai mahaguru ke ab ham kya kre.

Mahaguru- aap us ki Khoj smapat ke dijiye.

Bikram ji- jaisa aap khe mahaguru.

Mahaguru- aapke kuch or prshn(questions) hai Bikram ji

Bikram ji- mahaguru us ke ansh ka kya hoga.

Mahaguru- (kuch soch kr) vo sab aap samye par chod dijiye

Ab Bikram ji mahaguru se koi sawal nhi puchte or vha se Jane ki ijajat mangte hai.


Bikram ke Jane ke Baad mahaguru fir se aapni soch Mai kho jate hai.


Or idhar Aryan family ki party bhi khatam ho jati hai. Sab mehmaan chale gye the. Or Aryan family bhi aapne ghar sone Chali gayi thi

Ek Ghar Mai ek aadmi ek kurshi par betha tha vo bahot gusse Mai lg rha tha. Or chilla chilla kr kuch aadmi se baat kr rha tha(chaliye ham hamari buri aadat shuru krte hai dusro ke Ghar ki jasosi ki)

Aadmi1- (chilla kr) tumne mujhe ye kyu nhi btaya ke Vihaan Aryan baap bnne wala hai (ji hai ye vohi aadmi hai jo party Mai aaya tha
)

Aadmi2- sir ye to hame bhi nhi pta tha ke Vihaan Aryan ke ghar bacha paida hone wala tha or sir hamne aapko ye khabar bhi di thi ke Vihaan Aryan or us ki wife 1 saal se gayab the.

Aadmi1- to Maine tum logo Ko use dhonddne Ko bola tha.

Aadmi3- (ghabra kar) sir hame Puri koshish ki thi un Ko dhonddne ki

Vo itna hi bola tha ke Goli chalne ki awaj aayi

Aadmi1 ne aadmi3 Ko maar diya tha us ke Baad vo rukka nhi us ne baki sab Ko bhi maar diya.

Aadmi1- lgta hai ab ye kaam mujhe hi krna pdega, Vihaan Aryan tu bahot khush ho rha haina ke tu baap ban gya (itna bol kr vo jor jor se hasne lgta hai
)

Aadmi1 ek phone krta hai

Aadmi1- tumhare liye ek kaam hai Vicky

Vicky- ji raichand sahab boliye

Raichand- kal tum mujhe......... Place pr milna

Vicky- jaisa aap khe

Us ke Baad vo call cut kr deta hai or ek shatani hasi ke sath so jata hai.

Agli Subha

Aaj Subha sab se pehle badi chachi nind se jagti hai or nahane ke Baad ja kr breakfast bnane lgti hai.(chalo in ko khana bnane dete hai chalte hai dusri traf)

Choti chachi ke room Mai

Chacha Abhi tak so rhe hain par Chachi jag gyi hai or vo aabhi aapne jogging dress Mai thi baat ye hai ke choti chachi Ko kasrat or yoga ka bahot shock tha is liye vo roj Subha ghar ke gardan Mai jogging or yoga krti thi or aaj bhi vo vahi ja rhi thi.

Or isi trah ek ghanta beet jata hai. Sab ghar ke log tyar ho kr Khane ki table par Bethe the or khane ka wait kr rhe the. Bus Anjali or kajal Ko chod kr kyuki Anjali to aapne kamre Mai aaram kr rhi thi or Chirag ussi ke paas tha or kajal us ke sath khel rhi thi.
Kabhi vo use hasane ke liye aapne face se alag alag shakle bnati kabhi use gudgudi krne lgti. Kajal ka itna pyar dekh kr kajal ki maa Ko bahot acha lg rha tha.

Idhar Raichand or Vicky.......... Par milte hai

Vicky- btaiye sir Mai aapke liye kya kar skta ho

Raichand- ........

Vicky- ji sir aapka kaam ho jaiye ga

Uske Baad Vicky vha se challa jata hai or fir ek jga par ja kr kisi Ko phone krta hai

Vicky- tum sab yha aa jao

Fir usne call cut kr diya. Thodi der Baad kuch log vha par aata hai vo unhe plan smjha kar bhej deta hai

Raat ke samye jab Aryan family Mai sab log chain se so rhe the tab unhe kya pta tha aage un ke sath kya hone wala hai.

Ghar ke andar to sabhi so rhe hai to chaliye unhe disturb nhi krte bahar chalte hai are ye kya gatekeeper to sab ke sab behosh pde hai.

Tabhi ek saya ghar ke gate se andar aata hai. Vo andar aa kr kuch soch rha hai. Fir vo sidiya chadne lgta hai. Vo pehla room kholta hai to Usme chote chacha Chachi so rhe the. Vo darvaja band kr deta hai is ke Baad dusre kamre ke paas jata hai us kamre ka darvaja band tha is liye vo khidki khol kar Ander dekhta hai andar bade chacha or badi chachi so rhe the. Un Ko dekh kr vo khidki band kr deta hai. Fir tisra Kamra kholta hai to us Mai koi bhi nhi tha. Aage ja kr use ek kamre Mai se kuch light dikhti hai vo us taraf jata. Or darvaja kholne ki koshish krta hai par ye kya darvaja andar se band hai to vo khidki kholta hai or andar dekhta hai ke Vihaan or us ki Biwi soye hai paas Mai ek bacha hai dusre bed pe kajal so rhi hai. khidki kholi thi par vo choti hone ke Karan vo us se andar nhi ja skta tha. Vo kuch sochne lgta hai tabhi use ek or khidki dikhti hai ji kholi hai or kafi badi bhi hai. Par vo ghar ke bahar ki taraf thi jis se sunlight kamre ke andar aaye. Us ne kuch socha fir vo ghar ki chat pr gya vha us ne ek Raasi(vo Raasi vo aapne sath laya tha) Ko kisi chej se bandha fir dusre sire se aapne aapko bandha fir vo Dheere dheere us Raasi ki madat se chat se niche ootra or us khidki ke paas aa kr us ne vo khidki kholi or us ke andar gya. Andar aa kr usne vo Raasi khol di.
Fir vo bed ki taraf gya. Sab log vha gehhri nind Mai so rhe the. Tabhi usne aapni pocket se ek rumal Nikal liya fir us ne us pr ek kuch Pani jaisa dala. Fir us ne vo rumal bache ke face pe rakh diya. Shayad ye behosh krne wali medicine thi. Or vaise hi us ne vo rumal baari baari sab ke face par rakh diya. Or fir unne aapne bag Mai se ek kapda Nikal liya. Usne us bache Ko us kapde Mai bandh diya or fir vo kapda usi rassi se bandh ke rassi ki madat se us bache Ko usi khidki ki madat se bahar nikala fir vo khud us rassi ki madat se niche aaya vha niche ek or aadmi khada tha. Vo us se bola

Boss ab kya krna hai

Boss- sab se pehle tum upar ja kr is rassi Ko le kr ao fir sab darvaje band krke yha se chale jana.or jaise hamne plan kiya tha tum sab dusre shahar chale jana.

Fir vo aadmi us bache Ko le kr chala jata hai.









Mai special thanks khehna chatha ho stone cold bhai Ko jin ki bja se Mai is update Mai pics add kr paya

Thank you stone cold bhai:thankyou:
 
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