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Adultery Khel Khel Mein...

RayABuncle

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Are yaar....fir se tumhare thread par bolne wala hu....halaki maine ab tak story puri nhi padhi....par ye comment dekh kar socha ki kuch bol du.....Kuch bura bhi lagega..aur kuch acha bhi...ok

Dekho...pahle to ye boluga...ki kisi bhi haal me apna concept mat badalna....wahi likhna jo socha tha....

Ending happy ho ya nhi....bas sahi ho to maza aa jayga....but bilkul bhi mat badalna..


Comment karna....apni baat rakhna.....ye readers ka haq hai.....

But writter ko bhi apni story apne hisaab se likhne ka haq hai....for ex - khud main...hahaha.....

Meri stories par bhi log gussa hote.....bura kahte....but main unhe galat nhi bolta....

Unko reply deta hu aur likhta wahi hu jo likhna tha.....baki end hote hi sab samjh jate hai ki kya hua tha aur kyo hua tha....

To likhna mat badalna.....wahi likho jo socha tha......


Ab character ke baare me abhi kuch nhi bol sakta....kyoki pura padha hi nhi...par aapke example ka bolta hu...

Mana menka ne tapsya bhang ki....par use shraap bhi bhugatna pada....bahut bada....to wo bhi jaroori hai na yaar...hai ki nhi....shraap bhi hona hi chahiye....

Aur vishwambharntra ko bhi bahut kuch khona pada tha....to ye bhi jaroori hai....samjh rahe ho na.....

Aur wo ek baar bhatke...fir line par bhi aaye the....to kya yaha line par aai...ya aaygi.....main padhuga tab kuch aage boluga...ok...

Aur ha......aapne sahi kaha ki bhavnaao me bah kar hum galat raste chal padhte gai....

par ye bhi sach hai ki hume us raste par jane ki bhaari keemat chukani hoti hai...

Aur agar hume samay rahte pata chale ki hum galat raste oar hai...to hum rasta chhod bhi yo dete hai....infact kosis to karte hai......ab isme kya hua.....ye aap hi jano...main padhuga..fir boluga....ok..

Main ye story isliye padhne aaya...kyoki mere ek xf frnd ne tareef ki thi....par aapke aise comment dekh kar bura feel hua...as a writter.....

Abhi bhi yahi kahuga....wahi likhna jo socha tha.....aur happy ending ke chakkar me mat rahna.....bas kosis karna ki end padh kar sab yahi bole....ki jiske sath jo hua....wo sahi hua...

main apni story me yahi karta hu.....puri story me koi kuch bhi samjhe.....last me sab chup rahte hai....kyoki wajah hoti hi aisi hai...


Ek baar fir se kahuga....dont giv up....do whatever u want to do.....

Ok frnd...
Keep writting......
Thanks friend..
 

RayABuncle

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Logo ke kehne par story ka flow kyun change kar rahe ho...logic dundhne walo k sath tumhari writing pasand karne vale bhi bahot hai yahan..unka socho..
I am waiting to see new episodes the way you planned.. if not due to certain someone ...please upload them on your blog.. i will willingly read that!!
flow nhi change kr rha...ye to waise bhi 2-3 updates me complete honi thi...to bas 1 update jaldi complete ho jayegi bas... aur haan good idea, blog pe hi ab koi new adult story shuru krunga iske baad... yaha ab bas romance category me likhunga...
 
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