Adultery Khel Khel Mein...

[Khusbupayar]

Thanks, thanks esliye ki aapne apni baat ko itni genuinely rakha aur maine es topic pe dubara reply nhi krna tha but aapne jo girls k baare me baat boli wo mujhe acchi lagi esliye vivash ho k reply kr ha hu

Es story me mere liye khushi aur dukh wali baat dono hai...jaise reader characters k sath jud gye.. dekh k accha lga but wahi rashi ki harakat ne unko bura feel kara diya....par mera core aim es story ko likhne ka yahi tha ki sacche pyaar me bhi gray side ho sakti hai...aur story me koi loophole ho jaise..ladki bf se satisfied nahi hai, wo ganda aadmi hai..ya wo cheater hai...aise easy plot pe mera likhne ka mann nhi krta

esliye esme rashi ka loophole yhi dikhaya tha ki uske liye sab new hai.. bhale hi wo doctor hai..usko sab pta hai...lekin sex k baare me pta hona..aur usko pahli baar feel krna dono me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai..ye aapko bhi pta hoga...esliye starting me bhi btaya tha ki rashi aur iski friend dono chanchal thi but study k chalte wo sab wahi stop ho gya tha.. par 2 male character k aate hi wo sab phir se activate hone lga tha...

for example vishwamitra hamare yaha k sabse bade rishi muni the par unki bhi tapasya menka ne bhang kr di thi..to jab itne bade rishi muni bhatak sakte hai..to ye to ek mamuli doctor hai..ye kyu nhi bhatak sakti..yhi simple sa logic tha isme but shayad readers ko jo maine upar mention kiye wahi logic samajh aate hai...aur ye samjhane me nakaam rahe ya mai samjhaane me...hum sab aurat ho ya mard insan esliye hi hai ki hamara apni bhawanao pe control nhi hota...aur usme fas kr galat rah pe chal padte hai kabhi kabhi...wo mard ho ya aurat usme itna discrimination nhi hona chahiye

aur rahi baat bhai aapke concern ki to mai khud cuckold ya incest ka fan nhi hu..aur na hi ye story es category me aane wali thi..isme aise hi up down aane the aur ek din rashi k paap ka ghada bharta to sab clear ho jaata..

par yaha to readers pahle hi twist pe bilbila uthe...aur aapke comment se feel hua ki aage ki updates aur bura feel kra sakti hai...nhi to baaki log to apni frustration aur ut patang logic de rhe the... ab jaise ki aap aur sab yhi chahte the ki ab story happy ending ki aur jaani chahiye to ab yahi hoga...kyuki mai yaha logo ko entertain karne aaya tha bura feel kraane nhi

aur jo readers abhi aur action chahte the to unke liye yaha aisi story bahut si hai...esliye es bahas ko yhi khatam krte hai aur sabko khush karte hai...

aur bhai ye na sochna ki mai story ko jabardasti wrap up kr rha hu..happy ending wali update me kuch bhi dramatic nhi hoga....bas jo beech me updates aani thi wo short sentance me describe hogi aur phir aage ending wali update...

Aap apne tarike se hi likhiye ..jesha aapne phle se socha hai veshe hi likhiye

 

[Khusbupayar]

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[Khusbupayar]

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[Raj_Singh]

Thanks, thanks esliye ki aapne apni baat ko itni genuinely rakha aur maine es topic pe dubara reply nhi krna tha but aapne jo girls k baare me baat boli wo mujhe acchi lagi esliye vivash ho k reply kr ha hu

Es story me mere liye khushi aur dukh wali baat dono hai...jaise reader characters k sath jud gye.. dekh k accha lga but wahi rashi ki harakat ne unko bura feel kara diya....par mera core aim es story ko likhne ka yahi tha ki sacche pyaar me bhi gray side ho sakti hai...aur story me koi loophole ho jaise..ladki bf se satisfied nahi hai, wo ganda aadmi hai..ya wo cheater hai...aise easy plot pe mera likhne ka mann nhi krta

esliye esme rashi ka loophole yhi dikhaya tha ki uske liye sab new hai.. bhale hi wo doctor hai..usko sab pta hai...lekin sex k baare me pta hona..aur usko pahli baar feel krna dono me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai..ye aapko bhi pta hoga...esliye starting me bhi btaya tha ki rashi aur iski friend dono chanchal thi but study k chalte wo sab wahi stop ho gya tha.. par 2 male character k aate hi wo sab phir se activate hone lga tha...

for example vishwamitra hamare yaha k sabse bade rishi muni the par unki bhi tapasya menka ne bhang kr di thi..to jab itne bade rishi muni bhatak sakte hai..to ye to ek mamuli doctor hai..ye kyu nhi bhatak sakti..yhi simple sa logic tha isme but shayad readers ko jo maine upar mention kiye wahi logic samajh aate hai...aur ye samjhane me nakaam rahe ya mai samjhaane me...hum sab aurat ho ya mard insan esliye hi hai ki hamara apni bhawanao pe control nhi hota...aur usme fas kr galat rah pe chal padte hai kabhi kabhi...wo mard ho ya aurat usme itna discrimination nhi hona chahiye

aur rahi baat bhai aapke concern ki to mai khud cuckold ya incest ka fan nhi hu..aur na hi ye story es category me aane wali thi..isme aise hi up down aane the aur ek din rashi k paap ka ghada bharta to sab clear ho jaata..

par yaha to readers pahle hi twist pe bilbila uthe...aur aapke comment se feel hua ki aage ki updates aur bura feel kra sakti hai...nhi to baaki log to apni frustration aur ut patang logic de rhe the... ab jaise ki aap aur sab yhi chahte the ki ab story happy ending ki aur jaani chahiye to ab yahi hoga...kyuki mai yaha logo ko entertain karne aaya tha bura feel kraane nhi

aur jo readers abhi aur action chahte the to unke liye yaha aisi story bahut si hai...esliye es bahas ko yhi khatam krte hai aur sabko khush karte hai...

aur bhai ye na sochna ki mai story ko jabardasti wrap up kr rha hu..happy ending wali update me kuch bhi dramatic nhi hoga....bas jo beech me updates aani thi wo short sentance me describe hogi aur phir aage ending wali update...

Aapke liye Shikari_Golu ji ka Comment sabse behtar hoga, jarur padhiyega,

Happy Ending ki Hame jarurat nahi hai, bas End padhkar ye lage, ki jisne jo kiya, uska use waisa hi Fal mila.
Acche ko Accha, Kharab ko Kharab.

 

[Sumit1990]

waiting....???

 

[Ezio Auditore]

Thanks, thanks esliye ki aapne apni baat ko itni genuinely rakha aur maine es topic pe dubara reply nhi krna tha but aapne jo girls k baare me baat boli wo mujhe acchi lagi esliye vivash ho k reply kr ha hu

Es story me mere liye khushi aur dukh wali baat dono hai...jaise reader characters k sath jud gye.. dekh k accha lga but wahi rashi ki harakat ne unko bura feel kara diya....par mera core aim es story ko likhne ka yahi tha ki sacche pyaar me bhi gray side ho sakti hai...aur story me koi loophole ho jaise..ladki bf se satisfied nahi hai, wo ganda aadmi hai..ya wo cheater hai...aise easy plot pe mera likhne ka mann nhi krta

esliye esme rashi ka loophole yhi dikhaya tha ki uske liye sab new hai.. bhale hi wo doctor hai..usko sab pta hai...lekin sex k baare me pta hona..aur usko pahli baar feel krna dono me zameen aasmaan ka antar hota hai..ye aapko bhi pta hoga...esliye starting me bhi btaya tha ki rashi aur iski friend dono chanchal thi but study k chalte wo sab wahi stop ho gya tha.. par 2 male character k aate hi wo sab phir se activate hone lga tha...

for example vishwamitra hamare yaha k sabse bade rishi muni the par unki bhi tapasya menka ne bhang kr di thi..to jab itne bade rishi muni bhatak sakte hai..to ye to ek mamuli doctor hai..ye kyu nhi bhatak sakti..yhi simple sa logic tha isme but shayad readers ko jo maine upar mention kiye wahi logic samajh aate hai...aur ye samjhane me nakaam rahe ya mai samjhaane me...hum sab aurat ho ya mard insan esliye hi hai ki hamara apni bhawanao pe control nhi hota...aur usme fas kr galat rah pe chal padte hai kabhi kabhi...wo mard ho ya aurat usme itna discrimination nhi hona chahiye

aur rahi baat bhai aapke concern ki to mai khud cuckold ya incest ka fan nhi hu..aur na hi ye story es category me aane wali thi..isme aise hi up down aane the aur ek din rashi k paap ka ghada bharta to sab clear ho jaata..

par yaha to readers pahle hi twist pe bilbila uthe...aur aapke comment se feel hua ki aage ki updates aur bura feel kra sakti hai...nhi to baaki log to apni frustration aur ut patang logic de rhe the... ab jaise ki aap aur sab yhi chahte the ki ab story happy ending ki aur jaani chahiye to ab yahi hoga...kyuki mai yaha logo ko entertain karne aaya tha bura feel kraane nhi

aur jo readers abhi aur action chahte the to unke liye yaha aisi story bahut si hai...esliye es bahas ko yhi khatam krte hai aur sabko khush karte hai...

aur bhai ye na sochna ki mai story ko jabardasti wrap up kr rha hu..happy ending wali update me kuch bhi dramatic nhi hoga....bas jo beech me updates aani thi wo short sentance me describe hogi aur phir aage ending wali update...

Aap jitna bhi chahe sabhi readers ko santusht nahi kar payenge. Kuch negative comments ke karan story ka flowmat badliye. kuch writers ko dekhe hai readers ke kehne par kahani badal dete hai. kabhi kabhi readers ki demand pura karna chahiye liken har ek demnad nahi, Aapne jaise socha tha wese hi likhte rahiye. Mujhe last update accha nahi isliye bataya. Ab iska natlab ye nahi ki aap kahani badal denge ya jaldi khatam kar denge.

Insaan koi devta ya farishta nahi hai to galti ho jata hai. aur galti ko maaf karna bhi pyar ka sarvottam roop hota hai. jab bhi koi acche insan ke sath galat ho to hame bura lagta hai. chahe wo insan admi hai ya aurat. yaha par Vikram ke sath galat hota dekh kuch readers ko bura laga. ab kuch readers chahte hai ki bura karne vale ke sath bhi bura ho. unki demand bhi thik hai kiuki bura karnevalo ko bhi apne karmon ka phal bhogna hi padata hai.

mai aapse ek hi request karunga ki aap kahani ko apne tarike se likhte rahiye. criticism hote rahenge. bade bade logo ka bhi criticism hota hai. wo log to criticism dekh kar piche nahin hatate hai. age aapki marzi.

 

[Jatin01122]

Update

 

[Amar kumar Mohanty]

Are writer ji kiun bura man rehe ho. Xforum main sab kamuk kahani padhne ate hain. Ye real story nehi kahani. Jinko taklif hota hai oh khud incest thread pe maze lete hai. Sab ka apna apna choice hota hai. Jinko pasand nehi mat padho. Writer ji aap likhte rahie.

 

[Khusbupayar]

Update pls

 

[Jatin01122]

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