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[Rahul]

ab padhte padhte hi thak gay.................... parso se lagatar padhkar to yahan pahucha hoon.............

comment baad me karunga

pahle update de do
2 din se soya bhi nahi hu
update padkar hi sounga

Are mujhe sapne me bhi update aate is story ke bhai kal bhi aaye aur aaj bhi waise aaj ka update jabardast tha mujhe yaad hai par likhunga nahi

 

[Pritam.bs]

Nice going bhayia ji lekin ye kya kand ker diya meri favorite wali ko hero ki Behan he bana diya ek dum se jhatka dete ho kidhar kidhar ap ka dimagh chalta rehta hai

To ami ko priya ka Behan hona pasand nahi aya kiu ke wo punnu ke liye bohat zada possessive hai han hota hai Aur abhi bachi hai agar waqt per samjhaya gaya Pyar se baitha ker to samjh sakti hai mushkil ho gi lekin Pyar sab kuch theek ker de ga use yaqeen karwana ho ga priya us se punnu nahi chene gi

Is Duran ek Lady James Bond ki bhi entry huwi ye to sach me insaan ko gajar muli ki tarha kat ker rakh deti hai lekin dil ki saaf hai I like it

Abhi yahan mujhe sikha ka role bhi thora sa daba huwa laga lekin situation ke hisaab se chale ga

Durjan ki kahani ek suspense bani huwi hai ek taraf wo punnu ke papa se itni nafrat karta hai ke un ka bacha tak kidnapped ker liya wanhi un ke saath baith ker khana bhi kha raha hai

Ab daikhna hai aakhir durjan ne ye sab kiu kiya? Jab priya ko sachayi pata chale gi us kw expression kiya ho gye? Kya Ami Nimi priya accept ker sake gi? Kya punnu ka baap priya ko accept ker sake ga?

Sawal bohat hai jawab aage ja ker apne waqt per mile gye best of luck for next part

Thanks damha bhai, lekin is jhatke ko dene ki taiyari punnu ke mumbai jane ke pahle hi ho gayi thi. Bas is jhatke ko dene ke liye 150 update tak ka sabar karna pada tha. Rahi ami nimi ki priya ko napasand karne wali baat to, wo dono abhi bachchi hai aur samay rahte unhe samjhaya ja sakta hai. Yadi punnu iske liye koshish kare to wo aasani se is pareshani ko door kar sakta hai. Fir bhi dekhte hai ki punnu is pareshani se nikalne ke liye kya karta hai. Shikha ke kirdar ke baare me abhi maine kuch faisla nahi kiya hai ki, uska aage kya karna hai. Isliye uska kirdar abhi daba hua najar aaya hai. Rahi durjan ki baat to, uski baat se jaldi hi parda uthta najar aayega. Lekin uske pahle punnu ko kuch jaruri kaam niptana hai. Uske bad hi wo is baare me kuch jaankari hasil karne ki koshish karega. Ummid hai ki, in sab baton ko janne ke liye kiya gaya aapka intejar bekar nahi jayega.

 

[Pritam.bs]

ab padhte padhte hi thak gay.................... parso se lagatar padhkar to yahan pahucha hoon.............

comment baad me karunga

pahle update de do
2 din se soya bhi nahi hu
update padkar hi sounga

Kamdev bhai, aap aaram se so jaiye. Kyoki abhi update nahi aane wala hai. Parso ke comments ka reply baki tha. Bas usi ko dene ke liye aaya hu. Uske bad update ko pura karuga. Shayad update aane me 10-11 baj jaye.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Are mujhe sapne me bhi update aate is story ke bhai kal bhi aaye aur aaj bhi waise aaj ka update jabardast tha mujhe yaad hai par likhunga nahi

Jab mera update sapne me dekh liya hai to, meri mehnat kyo badate ho. Aap hi update chhap do. Mujhe bhi ek din ki udpate likhne se chhutti mil jayegi.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Waise bhai writer ka kaam bi asaan nahi hai,,, har ek Reader ke comment ka reply karna,, update type karke post karna,,,

Reader ka kaam bhi kam mushkil nahi hota. Use story ke chalte rahne tak sabar rakhna padta aur har update par apni pratikriya dena padti hai.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Zabardast update tha bhai ji, ,,,, nimi ka bachpna dekh mja aa gya,,,,,,, pehle ami nimi kirti ko gusse se dekh rahi thi fir kirti ne hi pasa palat diya

Aur ab ye vaani kyu mausi ko Mumbai bhejna chahti hai,,, muje to kuch aur baat lag rahi hai jaise ki chanda mausi ki security ki vajah se vaani ye sab kar rahi hi

Thanks akki bhai, ami nimi ki shararat to aage bhi chalti rahegi. Rahi vaani ki baat to usne usi update me saaf saaf bata diya hai ki, wo chanda mausi ko mumbai kyo bhejna chahti hai. Mujhe to isme vaani ke aisa karne ki koi khas vajah samajh me nahi aati hai. Fir bhi aage chal kar dekhte hai ki, aapke is anuman ka kya hota hai.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai ...

Thanks LB bhai, update pasand karne aur sath bane rahne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Bahot khoobsurat update tha, or ab ye apna hero sunita se kya baat karna chahta hai?

Thanks arsalan bhai, update pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad. Punnu sunita se kya baat karna chahta hai. Ye baat shayad aapko agle update me bhi pata na chal sake. Is baat ko janne ke liye bhi aapko kuch samay ka intejar karna padega.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Ek baar fir se,
Behtareen update, sabse achchhi baat is kahani ki ye hai ki jo pathak sochate ya chahte hai wo nahi hota jo kahani ke liye sabse jyada jaruri hota hai wo hota hai aur sabhi patron ko saman ahmiyat Di jaati hai.
Agar neha Dushyant ko baba manti hai to Chanda Mausi usaki maa hi lagegi aur baba ke Saath Chanda Mausi ke hone se use priya logo ke yaane apne ghar me rahane se apne baba ki chinta nahi hogi.
Kya kahu bas jabarjast...

Thanks chintu bhai, aapka ye sochna bilkul sahi hai. Kuch update dete huye mujhe bhi uljhan hoti hai ki, ye update aapko pasand aayega ya nahi aayega. Lekin kahani ko aage badane aur aane wale update ke liye kuch update dena jaruri ho jate hai. Aisa hi abhi aa rahe kuch update ke sath bhi hai. Bas un update ki boriyat se bachne ke liye ami nimi aur keerti ka sahara lena padta hai. Taki story bhi aage badti rahe aur update bhi aapko bor na kare. Aisa hi kuch is update me bhi hua hai. Rahi neha ki baat to, chanda mausi ke jaane se neha ko jarur is baat ka aasra ho jayega ki, uske baba akele nahi hai. Fir bhi dekhte hai ki, neha aur chanda mausi ke bich ka rishta kaisa rahne wala hai.

 

[Pritam.bs]

Ye story to mujhe pahle bhi pasand thi bhai jab main xp par nahi aaya tha tab se fav one rahi hai...
Fir se padhkar purani yade taja ho rahi hai..

Thanks dr sahab, story ki itni tarif ke liye ek baar fir bahut bahut dhanyawd. Ummid hai ki aage ki story pad kar aapko nirasha nahi hogi.