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उम्दा अपडेट। कहानी रोचक लग रही है।UPDATE 1
August ka mahina tha aur subah hi thodi barish hone ke karan Mausam bahut hi Suhana tha, halki halki hawa chal rhi thi jo mausam ko aur char sunahra bana raha tha.
Suraj ki halki kirane khidki ke kanch se hote hue room ke andar aa rhi thi aur ek masum chechre pe pad rhi thi. Khidki khuli hone ke karan hawa andar bhi aa rhi thi jiske karan uske resham jaise baal halke halke ud rahe the aur uske chehre pe smile hoti hai shayad koi acha sapna dekh rhi thi.
Tabhi phone me alarm bajta hai aur wo bina ankh khole apne hatho se bistar me idhar udhar phone khojne lagti hai. 30 second baad alarm band ho jata hai aur fir wo neend ki gahrayi me chali jati hai.
Lekin ye jyada pal ke liye nhi ho pata kyuki 5 min baad alarm fir baj uthta hai. Isbar wo uth ke…
Girl: Iski to… ise bhi abhi bajna tha.
Wo alarm band karti hai aur samay dekhti hai to abhi 07:05 ho rahe the.
Girl (Mann me): Abhi to bahut time hai… thodi der aur so leti hu. Yrr kitna acha sapna dekh rhi thi aur ise bhi abhi bajna tha.
Fir wo apne bagal me rakhe pilo ko uthati hai aur use hug karke fir se sapno me chali jati hai.
Kuch der baad kitchen se ek aurat ki awaaj aati hai
“Kavya… kavya … ab uth bhi ja pata nhi kab tak soyegi.
Aur wo apne aap se bolti hai: Pata nhi is ladki ka kya hoga.. 10 alarm laga ke bhi nhi uthati aur fir se awaj deti hai … Kavya
Ji han yahi masum chehre wali ladki hai Kavya par log iske chehre ko dekhkar hi masum samjhane ki galti kar baithate hai aur awaj dene wali aurat uski maa Kiran hai.
Awaj sunte hi Kavya jhat se uth ke baith jati aur bolti hai: Han mamma uth gayi hun.
Kiran: Kya uth gayi hun. Mamma ki bacchi time dekha hai… Tujhe aaj first day hi college ke liye late hona hai.
Jaise hi Kavya phone uthati hai aur time dekhti hai.. uski saari neend chhu mantar ho jati hai.
Kavya: Are 10 min ke liye hi to soyi thi ye 2 ghante kaise nikal gaye
Kavya bistar se uth ke sidha bathroom me ghus jati hai aur karib adhe ghanthe baad ready hokar apne room se bahar aati hai.
Dining table me baitha uska chhota bhai phone chala rha tha aur awaj deta hai
“Mamma please breakfast jaldi do bhuk bahut tej lagi hai.
Kiran: Ritik pahle tu ja aur dii ko jaga.
Kavya: Koi jagane ki jarurat nhi.. Miss queen uth chuki hai.
Kavya ki awaj sunkar Ritik apna dhyan phone se uthakar apni dii ko dekhta hai.
Ritik: Dii aaj aap bahut pyari lag rhi ho. Aap par ye kapda bahut janch rha hai.
(Aaj Kavya sach me bahut hi sundar lag rhi thi. Usne cream colour ka top pehna hua tha aur navy jeans. Uske reshmi baal khule hue the aur halka sa chehre par makeup aur ankho me kajal. Gale me infinity shape ka pendant uski khubshurti me char chand laga rha tha. Left hand me bracelet aur right hand me wrist watch bandhi hoti hai.)
Kavya (apni tarif sunke): Mai to roj hi aise hi dikhti hu. Teri jaise khadus thodi na jo mahine bhar nahata nahi.
Ritik (udas mann krke): Mamma dekho na dii ky bol rahi. Aur han mai roj nahata hu.
Itne me Kiran nashta lekar aa jati hai..
Kiran: Kya tum dono kutte billi ki tarah ladte rahte ho. Kam se kam aaj ke din to na lado.
Ritik: Mamma mai to dii ko kabhi pareshan nhi karta, wo hamesha mujhe tang karti rehti hai.
Kavya: (Ritik ke paas jakar uske gaal pyar se khichkar) Mere munna mai to majak kar rhi thi. Mai to apni jaan se sabse jyada pyar karti hu. Aur Thank you so much bol ke gale laga leti hai.
Aur Kiran bhi aakar dono ko hug kr leti hai.
Kiran: Aur meri jaan to mere bacchho me basti hai.
Fir sab alag hote hai aur Kiran apna thoda kajal nikal ke Kavya ke kaan ke piche laga deti hai
Kiran: Aaj meri bacchi bahut khubsurat lag rhi. Kisi ki nazar na lage.
Kavya: Thank you mamma aur kiran ke gaal pr kiss kr leti hai… Mamma nashta jaldi do nhi to college ke first day hi late ho jaungi.
Ritik: Papa abhi nashte ke liye nhi uthe.
Kiran: Wo Shukla uncle ke yahan kuch kaam tha to wahan gaye hai, aate hi honge.
Itne me piche se awaaj aati hai : “Are aa gya hu bhai jaldi se nashta nikalo bhuk lagi hai aur aaj to meri princess to apsara lag rhi. Ye bol ke kavya ko gale laga leta hai.
Kavya: Thank you dad.
Ye hain ritik aur kavya ke pita shri Ashok Shrivastav. Kiran sabhi ke liye nashta nikalti hai aur nashte ko dekhte hi Kavya ki ankhe chamak jati hai.
Kavya: Wowww…. Sushi… You are great mamma.. bol ke Kiran ko hug kr leti hai.
Kiran: Aaj college ka first day hai… To socha apni jaan ki favourite dish bna deti hu.. mann achha rahega.
Fir sab nashta karne lagte hai aur jab tak ye log nashta kr rahe tb tak family members se vakif kara deta hun.
[ Kavya Shrivastav : Age 18 years- Dikhne me masum lekin bahut ye bahut tej ladki hai. Iske nature ke bare me hame aage kahani me pata lgega. Apne bhai se bahut pyar karti hai lekin use tang bhi karti hai. Ise music me bahut jyada interest hai aur piano bahut achi tarah baja leti hai.
Ashok Shrivastav: Age 40 years- Ek dedicated father aur loving husband. Apni biwi se bahut pyar karte hain aur bacchho me inki jaan basti hai. Ye SBI me bank manager hai. Ye bahut practical aadmi hai. Apne upar emotions ko haavi nhi hone dete.
Kiran Shrivastav: Age 40 years- Ye ek housewife hain aur apne pati aur baccho se jaan se bhi jyada pyaar karti hain. Bahut hi sidhi sadhi aur sulajhi hui aurat hai. Thoda emotional hai par apne pati ke tarah practical hain. Lekin ye apni maa aur pita ko bahut miss karti hain.
Ritik Shrivastav: Age: 14 years- Ye bahut shant ladka hai aur apni dii se bahut hi pyar karta hai. Use kabhi pareshan nhi karta aur na hi aanshu dekh sakta. Ye abhi 9th class me gaya hai aur padhne me bhi apni dii ki tarah tej hai.
Ashok aur Kiran ne bhagkar shadi ki thi jiske karan dono ki family ne sare rishte tod diye the.]
Sabhi ne nashta khatam kiya aur apne apne rashte jane ko tayyar ho gye. Teeno apne room me chale gaye aur Kiran bartan utha ke kitchen me le gayi.
(Inka ek chota sa ghar hai jise Jannat bhi kah sakte hai. 4 rooms hai ek kitchen jo dining hall se connected hai aur ek drawing room. Ek room Kiran aur Ashok ka hai, ek Kavya ka aur in dono room ke beech me Ritik ka room. Aur ek guest room jo drawing room se connected hai.)
Ashok: Kavya chalo mai tumhe college chhor dunga.
Kavya: Dad aapko ulta pad jayega aap chale jao… Mai auto se chali jaungi.
Kiran: Aise kaise akele chali jayegi, aaj college ka phla din hai tum dad ke sath chali jao wo tumhe drop kr denge… Drop kr denge na ji (Ashok ko dekhte huye boli).
Ashok: Han han kar dunga… Kavya ritik jaldi karo late ho rha hai.
Kavya: Are mamma mai chali jaungi akele aap chinta na karo… Aapki beti ek sherni hai jo kisi se nhi darti hai.
Aur ye bolkar Kavya college ki taraf chal deti hai. Ashok aur Ritik bhi ek sath chale jate hai kyuki Ritik ka school raste me hi padta hai.
Kiran sabhi ko bye bolti hai aur khud se kahti hai: Ye ladki bhi na….
Main road kavya ke ghar se bs 200m dur tha isliye wahan tak wo paidal chali gayi aur auto ka wait karne lagi. Tabhi use 1 bike pe 2 ladke uski taraf aate huye dikhayi de rhe the wo dikhne me hi lofad lag rhe the. To Kavya ne phone nikala aur itne me wo aa gye aur ek auto bhi aa gya jise Kavya ne rukaya.
Ladka 1 : Janeman bolo to ham chhor de.
Ladka 2 : Ya kahin aur le chale.
Kavya ka matha ekdum thanak chuka tha
Kavya : Jute utar ke itna marungi ki teri maa bhi sochegi kis kutte ko janam de diya.
Ladka 2: Kya boli re tu… Ruk aur ladka gaadi se utarne lagta hai.
Tabhi Kavya ke phone se awaaj aati hai
“Mam aap thik to hai.
Kavya : Aap police station se bol rhe
(Ji han jab Kavya ne phone nikala tabhi usne police ko phone laga diya tha)
“Yes mam .. aap ko koi samasya hai.
Kavya : 2 lafange mujhe ched rahe aur batmeezi se baat kar rahe hain.
“Ji maine bhi suna.. kya aap unke bare me kuch information de skti hai.
Kavya : Dikhne me to chapri hai aur unk gaadi ka number XXXXXX hai.
“Thik hai inhe mai dekhta hu aur agar aap abhi safe hain to mai aapko baad me contact karta hu.
Ye sunte hi wo 2 ladko ke pairo tale zameen khisak gayi aur “Tujhe to mai baad me dekh lunga ” bolte huye rafuchakkar ho gye.
Kavya haste huye auto wale se boli: Bhaiya Science Institute jana hai.
Autowala: Ji madam baithiye.
Kavya auto me baith gayi aur auto apni manjil ki taraf badh chala. Waise to Kavya hamesa bahudari dikhati hai, lekin aaj uska jee ghabra rha tha. Uske mann me saikado sawal uth rhe the
“Kaisa college hoga?, log kaise honge? Mere friends banenge bhi ya nhi? Mai wahan adapt bhi kar paungi?”
Kavya ye sab soch rahi thi ki College aa gya wo auto se utari aur driver ko paise di aur sar upar karke main gate ko padha.
‘Indian Science Institute’
Ye India ka top college tha iski ginti duniya ke top colleges me ki jati hai. Kavya is college me admission pane ke liye jee tod mehanat ki thi.
Kavya ne muthi bandhi aur khud se kaha
“Kavya, Lets enter the next chapter of life. You are going to outshine.”
Aur fir Kavya college campus ki taraf chal deti hai….
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काव्या का करैक्टर काफी अच्छा लग रहा। भाई और बहिन के बीच जुगलबंदी काफी अच्छी है।
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