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Romance Kuch to tha tere mere Darmiyaan

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Subh apne ghar pahuchta hai uski maa (Gayatri: 44 years Teacher) school se aa gyi thi aur apne ghar ke kaamo me vyast thi. Subh ke pita army me the aur jab subh 12 saal ka tha tab unki maut ek hamle me ho gayi thi. Tab se ghar ki sari jimmedariyan Subh ke sar par aa gyi.

Gayatri: College kaisa raha betu.

Subh: Badhiya tha maa. Aur aaj kuch naye dost bane (use kavya ka chehra yaad aa jata hai) aur uske chehare par muskura aa jati hai.

Gayatri: (Subh ke kandhe par rakh ke) Bahut sundar hai na. Name kya hai?

Subh: (Jo ki sapno me khoya hua tha) Han maa bahut khubsurat. Kavya naam hai uska.

Gayatri: (Subh ke kaan pakad ke) Accha bachhu tune pahale hi din bahu dhud li aur khil khila ke hasne lagti hai.

Subh hosh me aate hi: Maa dard ho raha hai.. aur kaan chhuda kar apne room me bhag jata hai.

Gayatri: Lunch kar le beta (awaj deti hai).

Subh: Maa maine college me hi kar liya hai.

Gayatri (mann me): Chalo badhiya akhirkar koi to pasand aayi.


Subh room me aate hi apni sketch book nikalta hai jo usne subah sketch bnayi thi use dekhne lagta hai aur phir jaldi se cupboard se 3 sketches aur nikalta hai jo ki kavya ke hi the… Subh ne kavya ko pehli baar 6 mahine pahle ek playground me dekha to jo chote bachhon ke sath khel rahi thi.

Subh un sketches ko dekhkar kehta hai: To tumhara naam kavya hai. Aapko kya pata miss jab maine pehli baar dekha tabhi ye dil aapko de baitha tha. Aur jab tumhe college me dekha tab mujhe laga shayad sapna dekh raha hu.

Aur subh sketch ko sine me rakh ke so jata hai.



Idhar Kavya apne room me baithi hoti hai aur apni bachpan ki dost Priya se phone pe baat kar rahi thi.

Priya: Aur bata tere rajkumar kaise hai.

Kavya: Kahe ke rajkumar yaar. Unko jab se dekha hai tab se hi crush hai unpe par wo to mujhe choti behan jaise treat karte hai (thoda ukhade man se btati hai).

Priya: Par tune to btaya tha kabhi kabhar flirt karte hai.

Kavya: Ye unka majak karne ka tarika hai.

Priya: Kya pata wo tujhe pyar karte ho. Akhir bachpan se ek dusre ko jante ho.

Kavya: Sawal hi nhi uthata. Wo gale tak nahi lagne dete.

Priya: Sach me yaar Shushant itne mast dikhte hai ab kya batau bole to ekdam maal. Unko dekhte hi lagta hai bahon me chali jau.

Kavya: kamini… Shu ke bare me aise ulte sidhe shabd use kregi to dant tod dungi.

Priya: Oye hoye abhi ek sath huye nahi tabhi aise bolne lagi.. jab shadi ho jayegi tu to shushant se baat hi nahi karne degi.



Tabhi kavya ko uski maa ki awaj aati hai : Kavya tujhse milne shushant aayein hai.

Kavya: Priya chal ab mai rakhti hu.

Priya: Kya ho gya kahan jaa rahi. Kuch college ke bare me bata.

Kavya: Baad me bataungi abhi mammi bula rahi. Bye

Fir wo call cut kar deti hai aur bhag kar niche jati hai.



Shushant kiran se baat kar raha tha.

Aage badhne se pahle shushant ke bare me jaan lete hai.


[Shushant Malhotra: 20 years, tall height, dikhne me handsome. AIIMS delhi se MBBS kar raha hai. Sabhi se ache se baat karta hai chahe chote ho ya bade. Jo bhi milta hai shushant ke nature se impress ho jata hai.

Vineet Malhotra: 54 years Businessman shushant ke dad, aur pahle ashok(kavya ke dad) ke padosi huya karte the

Rashi Malhotra: 51 years housewife

Disha Malhotra: 24 years, lawyer hain aur 1 saal pahle ek IAS se shadi hui hai. Inke husband ka name Rohan Shukla hai]



Kavya bhagti hui apne room se nikalti hai aur bolti hai: Shu aap kab aaye aur mamma aapne mujhe bataya nahi.

Shushant: Mujhe aaye huye 20 min ho gaye… Chachi ji se baat kar raha tha.

Kiran: Mera beta mujhse milne aaya (shu ko gale lagate huye).. Tujhse thodi na

Kavya: Han bahut ho gaya laad pyar. Shu aap mujhe kahin ghumane le chalenge waise bhi itne dino baad aaye hai.

Shushant: Jo agya mam. Kahan chalogi.

Kavya: Acha 5 min rukiye main ready hokar aati hu. Tab tak aap mamma se baat kariye.



Karib 20 min baad kavya apne room se nikalti hai aur use dekh kar shushant palak jhapkana bhul jata hai. Kavya itni pyari lag hi rhi thi.

Shushant: Wow 5 min? (apni wrist watch me dekhte hue bolta hai)

Kavya: (Use apni tarif ki ummid thi aur wo udas hokar) Ab chaleBye mamma

Shushant: Bye Chachi ji.

Kiran: Bye bachhon. Khayal rakhna apna.



Shushant kavya ko apni car me baithata hai aur movie dekhne ke liye nikal jate hai.

Kavya khidki se bahar dekh rahi hoti hai aur shushant chori chori kavya ko dekhta hai.

Shushant: Kavyu aaj bahut pyari lag rahi ho ekdam pari ki tarah.

Kavya ka chehra khil uthata hai : Thank you aur aap bhi bahut handsome lag rahe.

Fir kuch pal ke liye dono khamosh ho jate hai tabhi

Kavya: Aaj matlab mai aur din pyari nahi lagti aapko.

Shushant kavya ke galo ko chukar: Kavyu tum to mujhe neend me bhi pyar lagti ho.

Kavya shushant ki ankhon me kho jati hai … kuch der baad wo theatre pahuch jate hai

Karib 3 ghante baad movie khatam hoti hai wo dono bahar aa jate hai.

Kavya: Shu wo teeno ladkiyan kitni besharam thi kaise aap se chipkane ki koshish kar rahi thi…. Ek minute matlab delhi me bhi aise hi ladkiyan… Shu aap ki kitni girlfriend hai.

Shushant: Ek bhi nahi.

Kavya shushant kea age aakar khadi ho jati hai: Jhuth koi na koi to hoga.. Atleast koi to hoga jise aap pasand karte honge.

Shushant thoda sochta hai: Koi nahi hai kavyu… Jab koi hoga to sabse pahle tumhe hi bataunga. Acha kuch khane ka man hai?

Kavya: Han, chaliye burger khate hai.

Shushant: Fir se fastfood

Kavya: Mujhe burger hi khana hai (muh banate huye bolti hai)

Shushant: Tum jab aise expression deti ho na… Khair chalo burger hi khate hain

Kavya: Jab mai aise expression deti hu tab aage kya?

Shushant: Kuch nahi. Acha kya kya khaogi.

Shushant order deta hai aur apna meal leke dono khane baith jate hai aur shushant bas kavya ko dekhe jaa rha tha.

Kavya: Movie bahut hi achi thi. Akhirkar hero ne heroine se pyar ka izhar kar hi diya.

Sushant man me sochta hai: Kavya mai tumhe kab bataunga ki tumse kitna pyar karta hu… Dinbhar bas tumare bare me sochta rahta hu aaj se nahi balki jabse bachpan se mili ho tabse dilo dimag me basi huyi ho… Kash mere andar batane ki himmat hoti ki mai tumse kitna pyar karta hu. Par shayad tum mujhe sirf ek best friend aur bade bhai ki tarah dekhti ho… Darta hu ki jab tumhe ye baat pata chalegi to tum mujhse dur chali jaogi..



Kavya: Itna kya soch rahe aap Shu.

Shushant: Kavyu mai ek saal ke liye US jaa rha.

Kavya (shock ho jati hai aur hath se burger niche gir jata hai): Kya US, aise achanak par kyu.

Shushant: US me course exchange mila hai.

Kavya: Jana jaruri hai? (Udas hokar)

Shushant: Aisi opportunity bahut kam milti hai to jana hi padega.

Kavya: Achaa? Bich bich me aayenga na aap? Aur mujhe daily call karenge na is baar aap delhi gaye mujhe ek baar call nahi kiye aap? (bechaini se itne saare sawal kar di)

Shushant: Pata nahi kavyu. Kuch promise nahi kar sakta tum to janti ho timezone ka issue.

Kavya gusse se wahan se nikal jati hai uske ankhone se anshu bahne lagte hai wo apne anshu pochti hai taki shushant na dekh sake. Shushant bhi daud ke jata hai aur kavya ke hath pakdke rokta hai.

Shushant: I am sorry kavyu but ye bhi to jaruri hai na.

Kavya: Mera hath choriye aap. Iska matlab aap mujhse akhari baar milne aaye the aur waise bhi aap mujhe sorry kyu bol rahe mai lagti hi kya hu aapki.

Ye sunte hi Shushant ka dil pasich jata hai. Kavya jakar car me baith jati hai aur shushant car ko kavya ki ghar taraf badha deta hai dono khmosh the… kuch der baad kavya ka ghar aa jata hai aur kavya utar ke andar jane hi wali hoti hai ki shushant car se nikal ke bolta hai

Shushant: I am so sorry kavyu. Please forgive me.

Kavya ke kadam ruk jate hai aur wo palat ke daud ke shushant ke paas aati hai aur gale milne hi wali hoti hai ki shushant rok leta hai.

Kavya ki ankhe nam ho gayi thi: Ek baar to hug karne dijiye shu.

Shushant bhi use right side pe gale laga leta hai taki kavya uske dil ki dhadkan kavya na sun paye. Kuch der baad kavya ghar ke andar chali jati hai uski maa usase baat krti hai par use ignore karke apne room me chali jati hai.

Kiran: Ise kya ho gya.

Tabhi shushant aata hai aur kiran ke pair chuta hai

Shushant: Chachi ji ab mai chalta hu. Kavya ka khayal rakhiyega.

Kiran: Thodi der baitho beta waise bhi itne din baad aaye ho. Aur kavya ko kya ho gaya?

Shushant: Mujhe thodi der baad airport nikalna hai isliye nahi baith sakta. Aur mai US exchange program ke liye jaa rha to Kavya naraj hai

Kiran: Acha… wo bhi na pagal hai. Ache se jana beta

Shushant: Ji chachi ji.

Shushant fir wahan se nikal jata hai. Aur Kiran Kavya room me jati hai par kavya bolti hai abhi wo baat nahi karna chahti to kiran bhi jyada pareshan nahi karti aur wo dinner ready karne chali jati hai. Kavya ke dad aur bhai baith ke football match dekh rahe the to wo in sab gahtnao se bekhabar the.




Idhar apne flat me baith ke Saurabh, vivek aur varun baith ke daru pee rahe the. Saurabh ka baap MLA tha to paise bharpur the. Usne acha alisaan flat le rakha tha. Saurabh bahut hi gire kism ka ladka tha. Uske group me kayi ladke the par khas dost 3 hi the. Vivek, Varun aur rohan. Rohan ki badi behan Rohini, Saurabh ki gf thi aur ye baat rohan ko bhi pata thi. Charo bahut hi harami the, college ki kayi ladkiyon ki jismo se khel chuke hai fir chahe pyar se ya jabardasti, inhone blackmail bhi bahuto ko kiya hai. Wo teeno Saurabh ko boss bolte the.


Vivek: Boss wo laundiya bahut hi masum thi.

Saurabh: Aise hi ladkiyon ko to raudane me maja aata hai (Uske chehre me kaatil muskan thi).

Varun: Par wo harami Aarav bich me aa gya.

Vivek: Boss tum Aarav ka kuch karte kyu nhi.

Saurabh (ek peg pite huye): Sala mujhe khud samajh nahi aata chiz kya hai wo. BC mere baap ki bhi gand fatati hai usase. Mere baap ne usase uljhane ko mana kiya hai warna ….

Varun: Boss Aarav ke group me bhi ek se ek maal hai. Par sala wo aur uske dost koi bhi un chhamiyon ko kuch kar de to lagta hai jaan se maar denge.

Vivek: Mujhe to ye samajh nahi aata sala Aarav itna majbut kaise hai. Dikhne me to normal insan ki tarah lagta hai par majbuti aisi hai ki koi terminator ho.

Saurabh: Abe wo sab chhodo ab to nayi maal aa gyi hai. Unka name kya hai aur us launde ka kya name jo bich me kud raha tha.

Varun: Ladki ka name kavya hai… aur us ladke ka name Subham hai.

Saurabh: Sali me bahut akad hai na. Aisa game khelunge uske sath khud ma khud apne se bistar me aayegi.

Vivek: Aur uski saheliyon ko hum (teeno hasne lagte hai)

Saurabh: Main 1 hafte ke liye ghar ja raha hu tum salo kuch gadbad na krna.

Vivek aur varun sath me: Ji boss.

Varun: Par boss unke sath aisa kya karenge.

Saurabh (kaatil muskan ke sath): 1 hafte ruklo… aisa jaal bichaunga ki machli apne aap fans jayegi. Aur chuchundar(Subham) ko bhi sabak sikhaunga ki jinadagi bhar yaad rakhega.

Vivek: Fir to sahi hai boss. Kayi dino se apna program nahi jama boss.

Saurabh: To rohini ko pel lo.

Varun: Are nahi boss tumhari gf hai.

Saurabh (haste huye): Kahe ki gf. Bas wo bistar garam karne ke liye hai. Aaj ham teeno mil ke uski marte hain. Akhirkar tum dono ne bhi to apni gf ko mere paas bheja hai.

Vivek: Kya rohini manegi?

Saurabh: Wo kya uska bhai pahuchane aayega.

Saurabh rohini ko call karta hai…

Rohini: Aur sweetheart kaise yaad kiya.

Saurabh: Bahut mann kar raha janeman aa jao… aur aaj tumko alag hi maja aayega.

Rohini: Aisa kya hai… aur sweetheart raat bahut ho gayi kaise aaungi.

Saurabh: Rohan yahan tak chhor dega tujhe.

Rohini: Thik hai sweetheart aati hu.

Aur ye sunte hi varun aur vivek ke chehre par Shaitani muskan aa jati hai.





Aur dusri taraf apne bistar me leti hui Kavya khud se kahti hai Shu aap mujhe bahut satate ho na koi baat nahi aap dekhna mujhe bhi koi khub pyar karne wala milega…. Aur ek pal ke liye uske mann me subh ka masum chehra aa jata hai aur kavya ke chehre par muskan aa jati hai par agle hi pal Shushant ki yadein fir se use gher leti hai jiske karan kavya ki akhon me aasu aa jate hai. Fir kuch der baad so jati hai.




Aur wo bechari is baat se anjan thi ki agle hafte uske sath kya hone wala hai jo ki uski puri duniya hi palat sakti hai...



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