Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Qaatil]

Heart broken update



Nibba Nibbi

Ye ekdum se zajbaat palat diye
Sakshi

Ab bhai bas ek request h yha se update late nhi hone chahiye regular hone chahiye chahe ek din ka gap ho ya do din
... Ab khani kafi dilchasp ho chuki h

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Lovely Review
Or bhai zarur, 2 din me hi Update post karunga.... Next Update Will Be Out Tonight, Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

wonderful update So, finally Mansi and Aksh Confessed each other about themseleves. It is said that "It is easy to love, But it is hard to play", Let's see how far can this love last...?
Sakshi poor girl never imagined that she as to see this situation in life, it is very painful to see the person whom you loved the most, means more than anything in the world is no more yours. That feeling... feeling... is like life without any reason (Purpose). But as said by over Ancestors that " To Love, Without Condition, Intension, to give without reason, to care without expectation that's the spirit of true love" So let's see, who hold's the spirit of true love.....
Waiting.....

"
Badi barkat hai tere ishq mein,
jab se hua hai koi dusra dard hi nahi hota
"​

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review
Dekhte he bhai ab kya hota he aage. Next Update Will Be Out Tonight Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Arey yrr jiska dar tha vahi hua .....
Sakshi ka toh ekk hi pal m dil tot gya yrr esw hi hota hai jise hum beintehan Pyaar karte hai na voh hume kabhi nhi miltaa......
Pyaar mai hmesha sirf dukh hi milta h khair sakshi ki toh ekk pal mai duniya hi khtm hui usse Aksh ko.pehle hi bta dena chahiye tha......
Vaise jaha tak mujhe lagta h k Aksh bhi sakshi se pyaar karta hai or voh bhi bht pehle se prr usse iss baat ka ehssas hi nhi h abbb sakshi ko hi usee yeh ehssas dilana padega .......but I really feel very bad for sakshi....


Or udher Aksh or Mansi aapni hi ekk alag pyaar ki duniya m khoye hue h abb jab tino ikathe aamne samne aayenge toh pta nhi lya hoga .......

Sakshi abb pta nhi Aksh ko apne pyaar ka ehssas dila bhi payegi yaa nhi ......
Let's see what happen nxt
Eagerly waiting for nxt update plzzzz Qaatil sir jaldi see agla update de dijiye plzzzzzzzzz waiting for nxt update ❤

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review
Ab kya kar sakte he, jo hona tha wo to koi rok nahi saka, lekin aage jo hona he, wo to jald have pata chalega. Next Update Will Be Out Tonight Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

 

[Qaatil]

Superb story, and my fav character is Sakshi, aur is update ne majboor kar dia uske liye likhne ko... Well i hope k use uska sachha pyaar jald mil jaaye....

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Beautiful Review
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[Naina]

Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance ke sath sath thrill, action aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ...btw pata nahi Qaatil sahab brutally kiye gaye murder scenes kahe add nahi kar rahe mujhe rakt se bharpur update chaahiye jaha kirdaar ek dusre ko brutally maut ke ghat utar de like wrong turn movie series ki tarah

Khair.. kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge.jaise abhi sakshi ka pyar jiska ehsaas us thulle aksh ko nahi .. aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. jaise khaskar kamini haaraman mansi
toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai.... Lekin afsos ki baat ye hai ki lead heroine kiran ko zyada highlights nahi hone de rahe hai Qaatil sahab... kahe bichari ek hi to Aashiqq hai... usko bhi mansi ki jholi mein daal diya... bad, Bhery Bhery bad
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Aksh: Mansi..... I Love You...... I Love You So Much..... Me kafi waqt se tumhe apne dil ki baat batana chahta tha, lekin kafi darr raha tha ke kahi tum bura na maan jao, lekin ab me apne aap ko rok nahi paya Mansi.... Tumhe pata he jab mene tumhe pehli baar dekha tha, tab se hi me shayad tumse pyaar kar betha tha, ab tum soch rahi hogi ke hum pehli baar us raat ko mile the jab tumhari car ka tyre kharab hua tha, lekin nahi, dimag par zor dalne ke baad mujhe yaad aya ke hum us se pehle bhi mile the, yaad he jab tum apne Dad ke saath Mumbai ayi thi, or tumhari car bigad chuki thi, jise thik karane tum mere garage par ayi thi..... Me to us waqt hi apna dil tumhe de betha tha, lekin us waqt ye sab namumkin lagg raha tha, kaha tum or kaha me? Lekin bhagwaan ne humari firse mulakat karwa di, or is tarike se karwa di ke.... Ke me apne aap ko tumse beinteha pyaar karne se rok nahi paya.... Mansi me janta hu ke aaj bhi me tumhare Dad jitna kabil nahi hu, me janta hu ke me kisi rich family se belong nahi karta, me to ek middle class family se hu, na zyada padha likha..... lekin... Lekin me tumhari sari khushiyo ko pura karunga..... Tumhe kabhi kisi baat ki kami nahi lagne dunga.... me, Sakshi, Aai, Baba.... Hum sab... Hum sab milkar tumhe humesha khush rakhenge.... i promise..... Tumhe... Tumhe kabhi koi pareshani nahi hone denge..... Kabhi nahi...... Mansi ab mere paas dusra rasta nahi he, me apna dil kab ka haar chuka hu, or is raste se wapis jana mujhse marte dumm takk nahi ho payega..... I Love You..... Till The end of my time, I'll be loving you....

Baaki sab to thik par baaki ke words normal aur ye thulle aksh aur us kulta mansi ke bich jo baate huyi hai wo bold letter mein kahe tell tell
Khair.. Mujhe kya
Let's see what happens next
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ab intezaar is baat ki... ki kab sakshi us nibbi mansi ko khaufnaak aur dardnaak maut degi are uske pyar ka sawal hai, koi mazak nhi

 

[Naina]

Jis ka Dar tha Akhir wo he huwa lekin agar ye na hota to shayad kuch iss se bhi bhayanak hota kam to ye bhi nahi hai ek pal me bechari Shakshi ki puri duniya ujar gayi wo iss waqt ek aissi halat me jis ko wo kisi ke saath share bhi nahi ker sakti akhir ek he to insaan tha us ke paas jis ko us ne duniya me sab se zada chaha tha jis ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayar thi lekin wohi insaan dur ho gya us se


shakshi ne kehne ko to mazoori de di hai lekin ye asan nahi hone wala har pal aise beetne wala hai jaise kanto ke bistar per raat guzarti hai har guzarte lamhe ke saath aisa mehsoos ho ga jaise jism se khoon ke katre nikal rahe hai agar mazbooti se apne faisle per tiki bhi rahi to wo us ke khud ke liye khatarnak ho sakti hai lekin apne pyaar ke liye shayad wo ye safar bhi teh ker le lekin us halat me shayad shakshi wo purani wali shakshi na ban sake


Wanhi aksh aur Mansi ki zindagi me khusiya aa chuki hai ek dusre ko apne dil ki halar bayan ker di hai daikhte hai iss pyaar ke rang me kon kon rangta hai aur Mansi ke papa ka kia reaction ho ga iss per


Wanhi Abhinav drugs smuglar jo dabochne ki puri planing kar ke baitha hai iss ka bhi Aksh ki zindagi me kia asar hota hai wo daikhna bhi dilchasp ho ga


Awesome story aur ap ke likhne ke andaz ka to main shuru se fan hu Waiting for next

agar shakshi apne pyar ko sakshi maanke us mansi ko raaste se hata de hamesha, hamesha ke liye to saare problems ek jhatke mein solved
Na rahega bans na bajegi banshuri

 

[Musafir]

agar shakshi apne pyar ko sakshi maanke us mansi ko raaste se hata de hamesha, hamesha ke liye to saare problems ek jhatke mein solved
Na rahega bans na bajegi banshuri

Lekin shakshi ko us bansuri ki dhun matlab Aksh to chahiye na

 

[Naina]

Lekin shakshi ko us bansuri ki dhun matlab Aksh to chahiye na

are ye kahawat hai... matlab agar mansi ka kissa khatam kar diya to sare fasad ki jad hi mit jani hai...

 

[Naina]

Lekin shakshi ko us bansuri ki dhun matlab Aksh to chahiye na

Btw mansi ko maarne ke baad sakshi ko milegi saza kanoonan aur phir kiran aur aksh ko ek hone se koi nahi rok sakta

 

[Musafir]

are ye kahawat hai... matlab agar mansi ka kissa khatam kar diya to sare fasad ki jad hi mit jani hai...

oohh wo kya hai na nera dimagh not running its slowly slowly walkingAb ye to Qaatil Bhayia per hai ke wo shakshi ko us ke pyaar ki shakshi maan ker apne naam ki tarha Qaatil banate hai ya nahi