Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[parkas]

waiting for the next update..

 

[Qaatil]

Thank You So Much Dosto aap sabke Comments ke liye and sorry 3-4 dino se offline tha. Darasal Friday ko company ki taraf se mujhe Vaccine lagne ki bari thi, or uske baad se hi tabiyat kafi kharab ho rakhi thi meri. Aaj bilkul thik mehsus kar raha hu, Update Almost ready he, bass final touches de kar aaj hi post kar dunga. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ​

superbb jabardast update bro

Akash aya bhi sakshi ke haath lekin nikal gaya lekin kahen na kahen ankhon he ankhon ne ek dusre ko pehchan toh jarur liya hoga jiska ehsas jld he hoga aur ab dekhna aage kya hota hai...

Fantastic superb update

Kiya scene create kiya tha bhai mujhe to lag raha tha aaj hii sakshi qaatil ko pehchaan legi koi bat nehi aage dekhte hai phir bhi uski aankh to dekh liya twins hone ke nate pehchaan jana chahiye tha... Bakshi ko to mar diya ab sahid ki halat kaise hai dekhte hai aage

super se bhi uper

romanchak update ..sakshi ne quatil ko dhundne ke liye sabut dhundne ki sochi aur usime rana ke aadmiyo ko maar giraya ..
aksh ko pata chala ki sakshi ne ye kaam kiya hai to warn karne ke liye ek audio clip uske ghar me rakh di ..

nice update ..bakshi ne sakshi ko kidnap karne ki jimmedari le li aur abdul ko jungle me jaate huye dekhkar uska pichha kiya ,,waha jakar usko abdul ki gaddari ka pata chala par abdul aur aksh ke haatho maara gaya ..

sakshi se moothbhed ho hi gayi aksh ki aur aksh ka chehra dekhne ke thodi si chuk gayi sakshi ,,shahid ko ghayal kar diya hai sakshi ne ..aur khud bhi ghayal hai ..

Nice update

Kahi gaayab nahi hue bhai. Jab samay milta hai tab online aa jaate hai. Aap likhte raho. Hum pritikriya dete rahenge. Bhale late de par denge zaroor.

Nice and excellent update...

Firstly Aksh didn't kill Abhinav, I think, Aksh's family was killed by Rana and he is also the reason for the death of Abdul's sister. Whenever Aksh and Rana come face to face, the fight will be very dangerous.
I thought the truth would come out today and our plan would fail but we were saved. Siblings are fighting among themselves, what is happening, what happened is not good, now we have to be careful because Sakshi may create mess up.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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अध्याय तीन का छठवाँ भाग​

बहुत ही बेहतरीन।।​

साक्षी को तो अनन्त ने गुमराह करके रख दिया है। अनंत भी गलतफहमी का शिकार है या वो ऐसा दिखाने की कोशिश कर रहा है।। उसके हिसाब से अक्ष ने अभिनव को मारा है। अगर ऐसा है तो फिर उसने अक्ष को रिहा क्यों करवाया ये समझ से परे है। राणा ने फिर से साक्षी को जिंदा पकड़ने की सुपारी बक्शी को दी। लेकिन बक्शी की किस्मत ही खराब थी हो वो अब्दुल की जासूसी करने में लग गया और अपनी जान से हाथ धो बैठा। साक्षी ने क़ातिल को पकड़ने के लिए कोई नया प्लान तैयार किया।​

राणा के ड्रग्स के कारोबार को मिटाने के लिए अब्दुल ने अक्ष को ड्रग्स के ख़रीदफरोख्त की तारीख और समय बतला दिया, लेकिन कहते हैं न कि किस्मत में जो लिखा होता है वो होकर रहता है। रेडियो तरंग के माध्यम से साक्षी को इसकी खबर लग गई और एक दिन पहले वो फैक्ट्री चली गई। राणा के ड्रग्स की डील भी एकदिन पहले हो गई। अक्ष भी फैक्ट्री पहुच गया। लेकिन साक्षी ने अक्ष को पकड़ लिए। दोनों की आंखे एक पल के लिए मिली, शायद यही बात अगर साक्षी ठंडे दिमाग से सोचे तो वो अक्ष को पहचान जाए।। दोनों भाई बहन किसी से कम नहीं थे, साक्षी ने तो अक्ष को धरासाई कर दिया था अगर शाहिद बीच मे नहीं आता तो आज पूरा राज़ खुल जाता साक्षी के सामने अक्ष और क़ातिल का।।​

Nice update bro

Superb action sequence Qaatil bhai....

Ek action aur utshukta badhane wala update tha... jo apne apme romanchkari hai... Kahani ke charitra /kirdaar aur unke bich ke dialogues aur action scenes ko kaise barkarar rakhna hai is mamle aap mahir hai...
Jis tarah se high level fight scenes aur ek bhai prati Bahan ki fikar ek alag tarah gun aur lakshan dikha rahe kahani ke jariye, kahani ke naam aur storyline sarathak kar diya hai... laal Ishq.....
ye achha kya bakshi ka kissa khatam karke..
so finally sakshi aur aksh aamne samne the... action bhi dekhne ko mili par afsos sakshi uska chehra nahi dekhne mein na kamyaab rahi.. koi na kabhi na kabhi pata chal ji jaana hai ki Qaatil ke piche ka chehra aksh ka hi hai.. sahid ko ghayal kiya par khud bhi ghayal hai...

Yaha pe gaur karne wali baat ye hai ki... Qaatil sahab kya maza aa raha hai aksh aur sakshi ke bich khooni Jung ladwake.... sakshi ki jo Haalat hai abhi... iski wajah koi aur nahi balki writer sahab hai
Khair...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Sunday se
Sakshi Aksh

Waiting for next

Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

Waiting for the next one.

Thodi time ki Kami hai Qaatil Bhai jitna time milta hai utne me thoda bahut Update likhne me chla jata hai . Jab free hounga tab Aram se story read karunga or apna feedback bhi dunga ...radhe radhe

Waiting

Waiting for next update...

Bahot khusi hui jankar ki aap waps aa gae bahot hi khoobsurat story hai ye aur ham sabhi readers yahi chahenge ki ye poori ho aur rahi update ki baat to ye bahot hi shandar thi

waiting for the next update..

 

[Naina]

Thank You So Much Dosto aap sabke Comments ke liye and sorry 3-4 dino se offline tha. Darasal Friday ko company ki taraf se mujhe Vaccine lagne ki bari thi, or uske baad se hi tabiyat kafi kharab ho rakhi thi meri. Aaj bilkul thik mehsus kar raha hu, Update Almost ready he, bass final touches de kar aaj hi post kar dunga. Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤​

Wo jhilmilati Sakshi ki aakhein ... uski bholi si ada... wo dheere dheere chal ke lehrati hawaein... Aksh ko le jaaye wahan... Jahan ho gaon undono ka... ..
to Anjani raahon mein aksh kise dhoondhnta phire... door jisko samjha wo Sakshi to paas hai Aksh ke......

so finally .. Aksh aur Sakshi ka Milne Ka din hai aaya....

. aaya...

 

[Naag Pasha]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 4

Mega Update​

Word Count: 4400
Estimated Reading Time: 00:25:00


Raat ke 9 baje Sakshi ghar laut ayi, aaj use kafi late ho gaya tha, Sakshi akar sidha so jati he. Lekin dusri taraf Aksh apni Team ke saath tayar ho chuka tha. Sabne is waqt kale rang ke kapde pehne hue the, or chehre par kale rang ka hi Mask pehna tha, jis se koi bhi unhe pehchan na sake. Sabke paas AR Rifle, Pistol or ek ek Khanjar tha, saath saath sabke paas ek ek Bag tha, jisme Guns ki Bullets or kuch zarurat ka saman tha.

Wo sab log apna saman gadi me bharkar apne kaam par nikal gaye, unhe apni manzil par pahochne me kuch waqt tha.

Dusri taraf ek band padi Factory me kareeb 40-50 log the, darasal yaha Rana or ek Mafia mojud tha, or ye sare log Rana or us Mafia ke the.

Mafia: lo Rana, truck bhar ke Maal me khud tumhe dene aya hu....
Rana: bade naseeb wale he fir to hum..... Khair, ab aye ho to chalo, saath me jaam se jaam milate he...
Mafia: zarur.... Chalo...
Fir Rana, Abdul or Mafia ke saath uske 3 aadmi waha se chale gaye, or baki log Mafia ki Truck se sara saman Rana ke logo ke hawale kar ke nikal gaye. Darasal ye saman or kuch nahi, balki Gold Biscuits the. Mafia ke sare aadmi apna Truck khali kar ke chale gaye. Yaha Rana ke 20 log the, or wo maal ko Truck me chadhane se pehle chek kar rahe the. Lekin tabhi waha Aksh or uski Team pahoch gayi.

Aksh: Shahid, tum mere saath aage se jaoge, or tum tino piche se...
Sablog: okay...
Aksh: or sab apne apne Bluetooth connect karlo.... Mere kehne se pehle koi fire nahi karega....
Shahid: sahi kaha... Waha 20-25 log majud honge, or unme se kayi logo ke paas Guns bhi he. To sambhal kar.
Fir sablog apni tay jagah jane lagte he, Jack Steph or Karl Factory ke piche pahoch gaye, wo log bahar ki sidhi ke sahare upar chadd gaye. Unhe apne tay jagah par dekh kar Aksh or Shahid bhi aage badhne lage. Kuch duri par hi Gate ke samne 4 log Gun haath me lekar pehre dari kar rahe the. Aksh or Shahid un logo se chup chupa kar Gate ki dayi taraf akar chup gaye. Shahid piche se ghum kar Gate ki bayi taraf akar khada ho gaya. Aksh ne janbujh kar apni bag ki awaz ki, jise sunkar 2 log Gate ki dayi taraf ane lage, Aksh apne dono haath me khanjar liye bilkul tayar tha, jese hi wo dono Gate ki bayi taraf aye, Aksh ne furti se dono ke gale par ek saath vaar kar diya, or dono ko apni taraf khich kar niche gira diya, or wahi par un dono ke gale me Khanjar ghusane laga. In dono ka kaam to tamam ho gaya, lekin ye awaze sunkar baki 2 log bhi Gate ki Bayi taraf jane lage, dayi taraf chupa Shahid savdhani se un dono ke piche piche Khanjar le kar chalne laga, jese hi wo dono log Aksh ke samne Aye Shahid ne piche se ek aadmi ka gala Khanjar se kaat diya, or Aksh ne dusre Aadmi ka muh daba kar use niche gira ke maar diya.

Yaha pehla padav paar ho chuka tha, Aksh ne baki tino ko is bare me bata diya, or ab dono asani se Factory ke andar ja sakte the, Rana ke log apna kaam Factory ke kafi andar ke hisse me kar rahe the, Aksh or Shahid andar achuke the, dono ne dur se hi sablogo ko dekh liya or ja kar ek jagah chup gaye.

Aksh: Jack, Steph tum dono Factory ke upar hi rahoge....
Jack/Steph: Got It....
Aksh: Karl, tum waha se utar kar un sabko piche se hi cover karoge....
Karl: Okay....
Fir Karl Factory ke upari hisse se savdhani se andar ki taraf niche utarne laga.
Aksh: Jack, Steph tum apni Guns tayar rakho, agar un logo ne Karl ko utarta hua dekh liya to Just Shoot them...
Jack/Steph: Okay, Samajh gaye....
Fir Jack Or Steph ne niche kaam kar rahe logo par Gun Point kar li. Karl bina kisi ki nazro me aye niche utar gaya, ab sablogo ne apni apni Guns tayar kar li. Lekin tabhi ek gadbad ho gayi, jaha par Steph khada tha, wo jagah thodi kamzor thi, jis se Steph ke per ki niche ki jagah tut gayi, Steph khud ko to sambhal leta he, lekin is awaz se waha sare logo ki nazar dono par padd gayi. Ab Jack ke paas Shoot karne ke alawa koi dusra rasta nahi tha. Jack ki Goliyo se 2 log wahi dher ho gaye, or baki yaha waha chupne lage, or is bich unhone samne Aksh or Shahid ko bhi dekh liya. Ek aadmi ne Aksh or Shahid ko dekhte hi waha nishana laga diya, lekin Aksh or Shahid goli chalne se pehle hi column ke piche chup gaye. Aksh or Shahid ne bhi apni Guns Load kar li, Aksh ne furti se nishana laga kar us aadmi ko dher kar diya jisne dono par nishana tana hua tha. Shahid bhagte hue column ke piche se hi Gundo ke nazdeek chala gaya, or Aksh bilkul samne se apne haath me AR Rifle liye aage badhne laga, waha baki log upar khade Jack or Steph par andha dhund firing kar rahe the, or wo dono bass kisi tarah unki firing se bache hue the, niche se Karl ne kuch logo ko dher kar diya, lekin ab uspar bhi goliya chal rahi thi, Aksh tezi se Truck ke paas agaya or waha 5-6 log ke piche khade ho kar sabko Goliyo se bhun diya. Aksh ab aage logo ko dekh raha tha, lekin use ye baat nahi pata thi ke Truck ke Tyre ke paas bhi ek bandha he, us aadmi ne Aksh ko dekh liya, lekin uske paas Koi Gun nahi thi, tabb use niche zameen par ek lohe ka pipe dikh gaya, us aadmi ne pipe utha liya or chupke se Aksh ke piche ja kar Aksh ke sar me wo Pipe de mara, Aksh us chot se dhadam se zameen par gir gaya, ab Aksh ki gun us se kuch dur ja giri, is moke ka fayda uthate hue us aadmi ne Aksh ki pith me Pipe ko maar diya, jis se Aksh Gun takk nahi pahoch paya, Or wo Aadmi furti se Gun par jhapat pada, Aksh ko apni Maut is tarah se katayi manzur nahi thi, isliye wo apne dard ki chinta kiye bina us aadmi par jhapat pada, us aadmi ne Gun ka pichla hissa Aksh ke muh par mara, lekin tabhi Aksh me Gun ko apne bagal me pakad kar apna sar zor se us aadmi ke muh par maar diya, iska natija ye raha ke wo aadmi Gun ko chodd niche gir gaya. Or ab kya tha? Aksh ne uspar Gun point kar ke us aadmi ka Bheja uda diya. Ab Aksh apne muh par aya khun saaf kar ke aage badh gaya. Abtak Shahid ne waha khel sambhal liya tha. Waha ab sirf 5 log bache the, lekin un sabke paas Guns bhi mojud thi, is waqt har koi ek dusre se chupa hua tha, or waha koi goli nahi chal rahi thi, tabhi ek aadmi Karl ko dekhne ke liye apna sar uthata he ke piche khada Aksh uske Sir me Goli maar deta he.

Aksh: dekho, tum logo ke paas ek moka he... Samne ajao, or apni jaan bacha lo....
Wo tez awaz me un bache logo se kehta he. Ye sunkar un logo me se 3 log Gun ko aage fek kar apne haath upar kar liye.
Aksh: bina hoshiyari se tino bahar ajao, tumhe kuch nahi hoga.
Uski baat sunkar wo tino dhire dhire bahar ane lage, Aksh thoda relax hokar bilkul khule me se aage ane laga, or ye dekh kar chupa hua ek Aadmi furti se uthkar Aksh par Fire kar deta he, us aadmi ko dekh kar baki ke tino bhi apno Guns par tut pade, lekin us se pehle hi Karl or Steph ne unhe maar kar gira diya, or jis aadmi ne Aksh par Goli chalayi use Shahid ne dher kar diya. Aksh ke per par Goli lagg chuki thi, ab waha sabkuch clear tha, isliye Shahid or baki sab bhagte hue Aksh ke paas agaye.

Shahid: Aksh.... Tum thik ho na....
Aksh: ha.... Ha.... Bass per par lagi he goli, tum dekho yaha koi or to nahi bacha....
Karl: nahi, sabko maar gira diya humne....
Aksh: Good.... Ab ek kaam karo, ye maal check karo kya he isme?
Wo Shahid ke sahare apne pero par khade hote hue kehta he. Tino ja kar Maal check karte he to usme Gold Biscuits the.
Karl: in sare Boxes me to Gold Biscuits he....
Aksh: thik he, ise Truck me load kar do Or in sari lasho ko bhi Truck me daal do.
Uski baat sunkar tino apne kaam me lagg jate he. Kuch der baad Truck me un sare Admiyo ki laashe or Gold Biscuits ke Boxes Load ho chuke the.

Aksh: me is Truck ko chaluanga, tum sab gadi le kar mere piche chalo....
Fir Aksh ja kar Truck on kar deta he, or use Factory ke bahar le ata he. Aksh Truck lekar aage badh raha tha, or uske piche gadi me Shahid or baki sab the. Aksh ne Truck ko ek Police Station ke kuch dur ruka diya or waha par sare Gold Biscuits ke boxes utar diye. Or ek khali rasta le kar Truck ko Rana ke adde par le jane laga.

Waha Rana apne kamre me betha hua tha, wo Mafia kabka yaha se ja chuka tha. Or thodi der baad Aksh yaha pahoch gaya.

Aksh: suno Shahid.... Apni Gadi ki Headlights Off kar do, or gadi ko Truck ke darwaze ke bilkul nazdeek le aao....
Wo apne Bluetooth Connected device se Shahid se kehta he.
Shahid: Aksh tum kar Kya rahe ho?
Aksh: sawal matt karo, humare paas waqt nahi he...
Uski baat par Shahid Aksh ke kahe nusar Gadi ki Headlights off kar ke gadi ko Truck ke darwaze ke parallel chalane laga. Ab Aksh or baki sab Rana ke adde ke kuch dur hi the, Aksh ne kisi tarah Accelerate pedal ko lock kar diya, jis se truck ek raftar se daudne laga. Aksh darwaza kholkar waha latak gaya, or sawdhani se apni gadi ke andar akar beth gaya. Fir Shahid gadi ko ghuma kar apne raste chala deta he. Waha Rana ke aade ke Gate par 4 log khade the, waha andhera hone se unhe dur se Truck ki light ka exposer nazar araha tha, na ki Aksh or uski gadi. Unhe laga ki uska aadmi hi us Truck ko lekar araha he. Lekin wo Truck bina ruke tezi se us Boundary Wall se takra gaya. Is awaz se Rana bahar balcony me akar dekhta he, jaha kuch duri par Truck diwar se takra gaya tha.

Rana: Matharchod, is behen ke lode ko apni jaan ki fikar na sahi, mere Maal ki Maa chod dega kya?
Wo kafi gusse me chillakar kehta he, or Gun lekar bahar ajata he. Abdul bhi uske saath bahar agaya. Lekin wo sab chok gaye jab unhe Truck me koi nahi dikhayi diya.
Rana: oye.... Truck ko khol jaldi....
Wo apne aadmi ko kehta he. Fir wo aadmi piche akar Truck ka piche ka door open kar deta he. Lekin jese hi Rana ko ye nazara dikhayi diya, uski to bolti band ho gayi. Us Truck me Rana ke admiyo ki bass lashe thi. Or tabhi uska phone bajne laga, usne paya ke wo call Aksh ka he, kyu ke uspar koi Number nahi tha. Rana chup chap Call pick kar leta he.

Aksh: sadma lagg gaya kya sab dekh kar? Agli baar apne admiyo ko Aksh se ladna sikha dena... Warna unka bhi haal isi tarah ho jayega... Or akhir me tera bhi.... kaha tha na tujhe mene ke me tujhe humesha mere zinda hone ka ehsas dilwata rahunga? Agli baar ke liye tayar rehna....
Or itna kehkar Aksh call kaat deta he. Rana Gusse me wahi khada tha.

Rana (mann me): Aksh.... Tere dadaji ki raah par hi chal raha he tu.... Lekin tu nahi janta ki Joshi Kaka ko unke kiye ki saza kese mili thi... Ab tujhe to us se bhi battar saza dunga....



Waha Aksh or baki sab apne adde par pahoch gaye the, Aksh ke sar me or per me is waqt kafi chot ayi thi, isliye use bilkul bhi thik mehsus nahi ho raha tha. Sab log use uthakar andar le jate he. Or andar ja kar Aksh ke ghav bhar dete he. Aksh bhi thakan or dard me tha, yaha par Karl ko Medical ki puri jankari thi, or isi liye Abdul ne use yaha laya tha. Karl ne Aksh ki marham patti kar di, or Shahid se kehkar kuch injection bhi mangwa liye. Injection lagne ke baad Aksh gehri nind me chala gaya. Or baki sab bhi Fresh hokar so gaye.

Lekin waha Rana ki nind bilkul udd chuki thi. Wo apne kamre me tha, or usne Bakshi ko call laga diya.

Rana: Behenchod tujhe ek kaam nahi ho raha he?
Wo apna gussa control karte hue Bakshi se kehta he, lekin Bakshi ye samajh gaya. Or uski bhi ab fatt kar haath me agayi.
Bakshi: B..... Boss.... Me... Me usi ko dhund ne me laga hu... Bass kuch waqt.....
Rana: Matharchod kitna waqt chahiye tujhe? Mujhe jald se jald wo ladki mere samne chahiye.....
Akhir kar Rana ka itni der se roka hua Gussa foot kar bahar agaya.
Rana: mujhe jald se jald wo ladki mere samne chahiye warna tere liye bhi accha nahi hoga.....
Or itna kehkar wo call cut kar deta he.

Khair, sari raat Rana ki nind uda kar Aksh khud gehri nind me tha, Subah uthkar Karl firse Aksh ko kuch dawai or Injection laga deta he. Jese tese wo din nikal gaya, waha Sakshi ab mentally or physically strong ho rahi thi, uski Training sabki ummid se kayi guna behtar rahi. 2 din baad Abdul ko ye baat pata chal gayi ke Sakshi ab CBI me join ho gayi he. Kareeb 2 baje Abdul waha Aksh se milne agaya. Aksh ka ghav puri tarah se to nahi bhara tha, lekin wo ab pichle dino se behtar tha.

Abdul: zyada chot to nahi ayi tumhe?
Aksh: nahi... Me thik hu....
Abdul: us raat tum sabne bahot umda kaam kiya... Lekin ek galati kar di....
Aksh: kesi galati?
Abdul: un Gold Biscuits ko raste par dalne ki galati.... Police ne sare Boxes apne hawale kar liye he...
Aksh: to usme galati kya thi? Tha to wo illegal saman hi na.....
Abdul: tumhe kya lagta he? Ab ye Gold Biscuits ka hisab Police sahi sahi darj karegi?
Uski baat par Aksh chup ho gaya.
Abdul: dekho Aksh, un sab Boxes ko tumhe apne paas rakhna tha... Jis se hume aage jakar na paiso ki kami ho, na kisi or chiz ki.... Khair, agli baar dhyan rakhna...
Uspar Aksh bass apna sar hila deta he.
Abdul: waise tumhare liye ek buri khabar he....
Ab Aksh Abdul ko dekh kar baat jaan na chah raha tha.
Abdul: Sakshi ne CBI Join kar liya he....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ko bahot bada jhatka lagg jata he.
Aksh: kya? Sakshi...... CBI me.....
Abdul: Ha... Sahi suna tumne....
Ab Aksh ka dimag hi kaam karna band kar gaya.
Abdul: waise ek baat batao Aksh.... Tumhe Jail se riha Anant ne hi karwaya he na?
Aksh: lagta to wahi he.... Kyu ke mujhe pata chala tha ke mere rihayi me kisi bade afsar ka haath he. Or me bass Abhinav Sir or Anant Sir ko hi acche se janta tha... To ye kaam Anant Sir ka hi ho sakta he...
Abdul: Aksh ye Anant zarur koi bada khel khelne ja raha he.... Bass tum dhyan rakhna...
Aksh: ha....
Abdul: thik he to me chalta hu....
Fir wo bahar jane lagta he ke Aksh ne use rok liya.
Abdul: kya baat he?
Aksh: wo..... S..... Wo.....
Wo Abdul se kuch puchna chah raha tha, lekin uski zuban par koi shabd hi nahi arahe the. Lekin Abdul samajh gaya ke Aksh kya kehna chahta he.
Abdul: Sakshi bilkul thik he.... Uski chinta matt karo....
Wo Aksh ke paas akar uske kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he. Or waha se chala jata he.

Uske jane ke baad Aksh wahi par sar niche kiye khada tha, tab piche se Shahid uske kandhe par haath rakh deta he.
Shahid: mujhe lagta he ke tumhe ek baar Sakshi se milna chahiye.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh aage badhkar khidki open kar ke waha ruk gaya.
Aksh: nahi mil sakta..... Me wo Aksh nahi raha jo pehle tha.... Mujhe bass apna badla pura karna he, uske baad me bhi ye sabkuch chhod kar chala jaunga.... Mere zinda rehne ki takat sirf or sirf mera badla he.. warna me bass ek zinda laash hu.....
Wo apni bhigi hui palko se kehta he.
Shahid: Sakshi bhi to tumhare jine ki wajah he na? Wo to ab bhi apne mann me tumse milne ki aas ko le kar jee rahi hogi....
Shahid ki baat ka jawab Aksh ke paas nahi tha, isliye Aksh waha se upar chatt par apne asu bahate beth gaya. Ab uske asu bahane ki wajah kya thi ye to wo khud hi jane.

Khair, waha Bakshi ko Sakshi ki khabar mil chuki thi, ab wo jaan chuka tha ke Sakshi yahi, Surat me reh rahi he. Lekin wo ye nahi janta tha ke Sakshi CBI me Join ho chuki he. Isliye wo apne 2 logo ko Sakshi ko kidnap karne ke liye bhej deta he. Or ye baat usne Abdul ko bhi batayi thi.

Raat ke 9 baje Sakshi apne ghar laut rahi thi, or uske piche piche gadi me 2 log bhi the, or in sabke piche tha Abdul or Shahid. Is waqt Sakshi ki gadi sabse aage thi, use Kidnap karne aye logo ki bich me or Abdul ki akhir me. Ye rasta lagbhag lagbhag khali hi tha, ab Abdul apne gadi ki raftar badha kar use Sakshi or un 2 logo ki gadi ke bich me le aya, Sakshi apni raftar se car chala rahi thi, or Abdul un dono logo ka rasta block karne ke saath saath hi apni raftar kam kar raha tha. Wo dono lagadar horn mare ja rahe the, or akhir kar Abdul gadi ko un dono ke samne hi rok deta he. Wo dono log gusse me gadi se bahar utar gaye, or jese hi samne ki Gadi se Abdul bahar nikla, to dono ka gussa gayab hokar unke chehre par darr cha gaya.

Aadmi: A.... Abdul bhai... Aap yaha? Or....
Wo is se aage kuch kehta ke Abdul ne use sar me goli Markar dharashayi kar diya. Ye dekh kar dusre aadmi ki fatt gayi, or wo gadi ko ghuma ne tayari me lagg gaya, lekin tabhi Shahid ne AR Riffle se us car par Goliya barsana shuru kar diya, kuch hi seconds me gadi ruk gayi, kyu ke andar betha dusra aadmi bhi mara gaya. Abdul or Shahid apna kaam pura kar ke waha se nikal gaye.

Subah ke waqt Bakshi dara sehma sa Rana ke aage khada tha.

Rana: kya saza du tujhe? Ek kaam nahi kar paya tu?
Bakshi: Boss... Me kal raat se un dono ko contact kar raha tha, lekin....
Rana: lekin kya Matharchod....
Wo Bakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue chillakar kehta he.
Bakshi: Boss.... Please.... Mujhe ek moka dijiye... Ek aakhri moka.... Is baar us ladki ko uske ghar se utha lunga....
Wo Rana ke samne haath jodte hue kehta he.
Rana: ab uski zarurat nahi he... Me khud usi ghar me jaunga.... Wahi Aksh ke wo purane zakhm jude he na?
Abdul: Boss.... Mujhe aapse kuch zaruri baat karni thi.
Rana: Bakshi, tujhe aaj akhri baar maaf kar raha hu, iske aage kabhi galati kar di to dekh lena... Ab ja yaha se....
Fir Bakshi apni jaan ki salamati ke saath kamre ke bahar agaya.
Abdul: mene aapse kaha tha ke me ye sab dekh lunga, or mujhe khabar mili he ke Sakshi CBI me Join ho gayi he.
Rana: ye kya keh rahe ho Abdul?
Abdul: ha boss....
Rana: Matharchod, ye sab chal kya raha he?
Wo Frustration me akar kehta he.
Abdul: Boss... Agar aap meri baat mane to is Waqt Sakshi ko hum kuch nahi karte....
Rana: Abdul tum jante ho tum keh kya rahe ho?
Abdul: Boss, me sirf kuch waqt ke liye keh raha hu, ye baat aap bhi jante ho ki CBI kis tarah haath dho kar aapke piche padi he... Pichli baar to Aksh bass CBI ke saath juda tha, lekin is baar Sakshi khud ek CBI Officer he, agar use kuch hota he to ye humare liye bilkul safe nahi hoga.... Or kya Aap Bauji ki baat bhul gaye? Aksh ke Maa Baap ko aapne bilkul sahi waqt par saza di thi, lekin Bauji ne Aksh or Sakshi ki saza ka bhi to waqt tay kiya tha..... Or ab to wo waqt bhi nazdeek araha he...
Ab Rana bhi apne Baap MP Rana ki kahi baato par dhyan dene lagta he.
Rana: wo badla to Bauji ne jesa kaha he, or jab kaha he, tabb hi pura hoga.... Tum bass us Aksh ko dhundo, karodo ka nuksan kiya he usne mera.....
Abdul: thik he Boss.....
Rana (mann me): bass jaldi se wo Din aye.... Or Bauji ka hisab chukta ho jaye.... Tabhi Bauji ki aatma ko mukti milegi....

Abdul (mann me): Rana..... Jo to soch raha he, wo kabhi nahi hoga..... Shayad tu bhul gaya Rukhsar apa or unke bete ke bare me... Lekin me nahi bhula... Or na hi kabhi bhul paunga......

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Aaj Sakshi Officially ek CBI Officer bann chuki thi, itne dino se chalti uski Training ab ja kar khatm ho gayi thi. Anant, Sana, Neel or kuch

Anant: And now let me Introduce you our New CBI Officer... Sakshi....
Uski baat par sab log taliya baja kar Sakshi ka swagat karte he.
Anant: Sakshi, ab tumhe apni jee jaan laga kar yaha kaam karna he....
Sakshi: yes sir.... I promise me kabhi CBI ko apne kaam se nirash nahi hone dungi...
Anant: mujhe tumse yahi ummid he Sakshi... Now let me show you The cabin jaha se tumhe apne pehle mission ko anjam dena he...
Fir Anant Sakshi ko lekar ek New Cabin me ajata he. Sakshi ke andar bhi ab jazba bhar chuka tha, Anant use kuch baate Samjha raha tha, jise Sakshi apna pura dhyan de kar sunn rahi thi.
Sakshi: sir... Mujhe us Qaatil ke bare me kuch jankari chahiye.....
Anant: okay.... Sakshi humare paas Qaatil ke bare me koi bhi Information nahi he....
Sakshi: to fir use....
Anant: yahi sabse badi chunoti he Sakshi.... Humare paas sirf ek CCTV Footage he, jisme Qaatil apna crime kar ke waha se ja raha tha... Me tumhe wo Clip bhej deta hu, use parkho....
Sakshi: okay sir....
Fir Anant waha se apne Cabin me chala gaya, or Sakshi ke Computer par ek CCTV Footage bhej di, jisme Qaatil mojud tha, darasal ye Footage tabki thi, jab Qaatil bass jail se riha hokar bahar aya tha, or ek jagah usne Rana ke admiyo ko markar ja raha tha.

Sakshi ne wo Video play kiya to usne paya ke Qaatil ne apne chehra kapde se bhand rakha tha, or use bilkul samajh nahi aya ke wo Aksh he, kyu ke uski halat bilkul badal chuki thi, uske dhake chehre se Aksh ko pehchan pana kafi mushkil tha. Ye CCTV Footage bass kuch seconds ki thi, jab Qaatil us jagah se ja raha tha. Sakshi baar baar us Clip ko play kar rahi thi, or tabhi use kuch nazar agaya. Sakshi ne us Video ko pause kar ke Zoom kiya to use Qaatil ke sar ke piche gardan par ek bada sa ghaav dikhayi diya. Ab Sakshi ke liye Qaatil ko pehchan ne ka ye ek hi nishan tha.

Khair, ab Sakshi ko Qaatil ko pakadne ke liye ek tagda plan banana zaruri tha, pura din bass Qaatil ke bare me choti choti jankari Sakshi dhund ne me lagi hui thi, or uska ye din kab nikal gaya iska andaza use bhi nahi tha. Raat ke 8 baje hue the, Anant uske cabin me chala aya, lekin Sakshi ko iski bhanak bhi nahi thi, wo to bass apne kaam me lagi thi, jo dekh kar Anant ko apne faisle par naaz tha.

Anant: Sakshi.....
Uski awaz sunkar Sakshi piche mudkar dekhti he, or Anant ko waha pa kar wo uth kadhi ho jati he.
Sakshi: yes sir....
Anant: Ghar nahi gayi abtak?
Sakshi: nahi.... Bass kuch kaam khatam kar ke chali jaungi....
Anant: Sakshi hume us Qaatil ko aaj ke aaj nahi pakadna.... Is Mission ko tum lead kar rahi ho, tumpar kisi bhi tarah ka dabav nahi he... Aram se is case ko study karna....
Sakshi: okay sir... Me dhyan rakhungi....
Anant: Good... Ab tum jao ghar, or aram karna....
Sakshi: Okay sir....
Fir Anant waha se chala jata he. Sakshi bhi sabkuch samet kar apne ghar nikal jati he.

Waise to Sakshi ko bhuk pyas bhi nahi thi, lekin ab use apni sehat par bhi dhyan dena tha, isliye ghar ja kar wo apne liye khana paka leti he or Aksh ki yaado me kabhi uske chehre par hasi ajati to kabhi udasi. Or ye bhavnaye iske liye swabhavik the.

Khair, ab ane wala samay kiski zindagi me kesa tufan layega, ye dekhna interesting hoga. Ek taraf Anant ne kuch soch kar Sakshi ko CBI join karwaya tha to dusri taraf Abdul in sabme sabse ek mysterious character bann kar Aksh ki madat kar raha tha. Ye khel Tash ke paato ki tarah hi ek ek kar ke samne ane wala tha. To bass isi khel ko aage jari rakhenge.

Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

bahot hi shandar update Rana ke gold ko aksh ne behatreen tarike se churaya hai aur rana ko tagda jhatka diya action se bharpur shakshi CBI officer ban hi gai aur qaatil ko pakdna hi apna maksad bana liya hai jab shakshi ko pata chalega ki aksh hi qaatil hai tab kya hoga ye dekhna hai

 

[Naag Pasha]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 5

Mega Update​

Word Count: 3510
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Subah ke kareeb 5 baje, jab suraj bhi dharti ke anchal me chupa hua tha. Tabb Sakshi uthkar apni Exercise kar rahi thi, kareeb 1 ghante ki kadi exercise ke baad Sakshi Fresh hokar Breakfast kar rahi thi, use apne kaam par jane ke liye kafi waqt tha, lekin use bilkul bhi chain nahi mil raha tha. Akhir kar Sakshi ne apna Laptop open kar hi diya or Qaatil ke bare me aage ki chaan bin karne me lagg gayi.

Sakshi (mann me): is Qaatil ne jin logo ko mara he, un sab par koi na koi Criminal Records darj he.... Mujhe lagta he iski dushmani kisi Gangster se hogi.....

Kafi der takk Sakshi ko koi bhi khas jankari hasil nahi ho payi, lekin tabhi Sakshi ko kuch sujhta he.

Sakshi (mann me): wait.... 2 din pehle Police ko raste par Gold Biscuits ke Boxes mile the... Or ye kaam koi chota Criminal to kabhi nahi kar sakta... Shayad iske piche bhi is Qaatil ka haath ho?

Ab Sakshi ka dhyan ghadi par chala gaya, usne paya ke use ab nikalna chahiye. Sakshi apne Laptop ke saath apne kaam par nikal gayi. Kuch der baad wo CBI Office pahoch gayi. Anant ko ane me kuch waqt tha. Isliye wo Anant ka intezar karne lagi, tabhi waha Sana agayi.

Sana: Good Morning Sakshi....
Sakshi: Good Morning Ma'am....
Sana: C'mon Sakshi, mene tumse kaha na mujhe ye Ma'am or sab sunn me ki adat nahi he... just call me Sana....
Sakshi: lekin....
Sana: what lekin, ulta is Mission me tum in charge ho, to hume hi aapko Ma'am kehna padega....
Sakshi: nahi nahi..... Aisa Bilkul nahi he.... Aap yaha apni kabiliyat se ayi ho, itne salo ki mehnat kar ke aapne ye mukam hasil kiya he. Or me.... Mujhe pata he Anant Sir ki Psychology, unhone kuch soch samajh kar hi mujhe CBI me shamil karwaya he... Warna CBI Officer bann na koi mamuli chiz nahi he....
Sana: Bilkul galat Sakshi.... Anant sir ne tumhe tumhari kabiliyat ke chalte CBI Officer banaya he. Wo jante he ke Aksh ko pane ke liye tum apna sabkuch daav par laga sakti ho, or uske chalte CBI ko bhi ek Qaatil ko pakadna asaan hoga.... To ye matt sochna ke tum yaha bass kisi karan warsh ayi ho. Tum yaha maksad lekar ayi ho... Or wo maksad CBI ke liye bhi fayde mand he, or yahi wajah he ke tum aaj yaha ho....
Wo aage akar Sakshi ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehti he.
Sana: chalo ab me chalti hu, kuch zaruri kaam he... And yaad rakhna ayinda mujhe Ma'am matt bulana. Koi budhiya nahi hu me.....
Sakshi: Okay....
Fir Sana apne kaam ke liye nikal gayi, waha kuch der baad Anant bhi agaya tha. Sakshi sabse pehle ja kar Anant se milti he.

Sakshi: sir mujhe abhi On Field jakar Qaatil ke bare me jankari jutani hogi....
Anant: On Field? Jaha se Qaatil ki CCTV footage mili he, waha par or koi CCTV camera nahi he... Or wo rasta bhi Middle City me he to waha ja kar tum.....
Sakshi: no sir.... Darasal mujhe doubt he ke jo 2 din pehle Police ne Gold Biscuits baramad kiye he, waha se hume Qaatil se juda koi clue mil sakta he.
Anant: Okay Sakshi, Go Ahead....
Sakshi: Okay....
Anant: or ha Sakshi, apne saath Sana ko le jana.
Sakshi: sir Sana apne kaam me busy he, or me akeli jakar bass kuch jankari jutane ki koshish kar lungi...
Anant: thik he.... Go Ahead

Anant ki hami milte hi Sakshi waha se apni gadi lekar Us Police Station ke paas chali jati he, jaha Police ne un sare Gold Biscuits ko baramad kiya tha. Sakshi apni car park kar ke Police Station ke andar agayi, lekin yaha mahol kuch alag hi tha, Police wale kaam chhod kar baki sab kar rahe the. Koi Table par per dalkar aram kar raha tha, to koi apas me galiya de dekar baate kiye ja rahe the. Yaha ka mahol Police Station se zyada ek taporiyo ka adda sa lagg raha tha. Khair, Sakshi aage akar ek Police Inspector ke samne khadi ho gayi. Jo itmenan se apne Mobile me gum tha.

Sakshi: Excuse Me..... Mujhe SHO (Police Station In charge) se milna he.....
Police: wo to abtak aye nahi.....
Wo apna Mobile chalate hue jawab deta he.
Sakshi: kabtak ayenge wo?
Police: unki marzi he.... Jab chahe tabb ayenge.
Uske jawab se Sakshi ko bahot Gussa ajata he.
Sakshi: Call Him Now.....
Wo kafi Sakht lehze me kehti he, lekin ispar wo Inspector Ubal jata he.
Police: tum ho kon jo yaha akar mujhe order de rahi ho? Kaha na SHO sahab abtak nahi aye....
Wo gusse me khade hokar Sakshi se kehta he. Jispar Sakshi apna CBI ki ID nikal kar use dikha deti he. Ab ja kar us Inspector ke taav badal gayi. Wo ID dekh kar bilkul chup ho gaya. Or waha mojud baki sab Police walo ko bhi ishara kar diya.
Police: I'm Sorry wo....
Sakshi: jaldi se SHO ko call kar ke yaha bula lijiye....
Wo Inspector ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Police: ji abhi karta hu.....
Or fir us Inspector ne SHO ko call laga kar bata diya ke CBI ki Officer yaha kuch kaam se ayi he.

Kareeb 20 minutes ke intezar ke baad akhir kar SHO dauda dauda Police Station me pahoch gaya.

SHO: I'm Really Sorry aapko wait karwane ke liye.... darasal me......
Sakshi: Already bahot waqt kharab ho gaya he.... Kaam ki baat kare?
Wo SHO ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
SHO: ha... Kahiye....
Sakshi: mujhe us jagah le chaliye jaha aapko wo Gold Biscuits ke Boxes mile the.... Or us case ko ab CBI apne under le rahi he, to please sari Formalities complete kar dijiyega....
SHO: Okay.....
Fir SHO Sakshi ko lekar waha chala gaya jaha wo Good Boxes Aksh ne daale the. Sakshi yaha waha nazar dalkar kisi saboot ko dhund ne me lagi thi, lekin ye sara ilaka ek khali jagah me shamil tha, jis wajah se yaha koi bhi saboot mil pana mushkil tha. Lekin tabhi Sakshi ki nazar dur bani ek under construction Building par chali gayi.
Sakshi: aapne koi saboot dhund ne ki koshish nahi ki?
SHO: yaha kese koi saboot mil pata? Yaha to koi CCTV bhi nahi laga he.... Humne to Police Station ke CCTV check kiye, lekin usme to koi bhi nishan nahi mila....
Sakshi: aapne us Construction Site par puchtach ki?
SHO: waha...... N..... Nahi.....
Sakshi: iska Matlab ya to aap apna kaam laparwahi se kar rahe he, ya aap ke upar bhi is Maal ko hadap lene wale insan ka dabav he... Jisme kuch hissa aapko bhi milega... Me sahi keh rahi hu na?
Uski baat sunkar SHO ke tote udd gaye, kyu ke SHO or uske upari adhikari milkar is maal ko hadapna chahte the. Isliye unhone abtak is case me koi chan bin nahi ki thi.
SHO: na.... Nahi.... Aisi... Aisi baat nahi he wo....
Sakshi: aapki halat dekh kar mujhe mera jawab mil gaya..... Khair.... Ab aapke upari adhikariyo se keh dijiye ke is baar haram ki kamayi ghar nahi apayegi.....
Uski baat sunkar SHO Sharminda sa apna sar jhuka kar khada ho gaya.

Sakshi ne SHO ko wapis Police Station bhej diya is Case ki legal formalities puri karne ke liye. Or khud us Construction Site par chali jati he. Waha par sab log apne kaam me lage the, Sakshi akar Security Guard ke samne khadi ho gayi.

Sakshi: Ji me CBI se ayi hu, aapse kuch baat karni thi....
CBI ka naam sunkar Guard thoda ghabra gaya.
Guard: madam, hum kuch nahi kiye..... Hum to yaha bass Naukri karte he....
Sakshi: nahi... Nahi.... Aap dariye matt. Me kisi or Case ke silsile me sirf aapse kuch jankari jutane ke liye ayi hu..
Guard: thik he ji.....
Sakshi: aapke kaam ka waqt kya he?
Guard: madam wo to har 3 din baad badalta rehta he, 3 din hum Raat ki shift karte or baki 3 din subah ki....
Sakshi: aapko pata he kuch din pehle kuch duri par us Police Station ke paas kayi Sone Ke Buscits mile the....
Guard: ji pata he.....
Sakshi: kya us raat aap yahi the?
Guard: ha ji yahi tha....
Sakshi: to aapne us raat kisi ko yaha dekha tha? Koi anjan insan ya gadi?
Uski baat se Guard apne dimag par zor dalkar sochne lagta he.
Guard: ji ha.... Raat ke 12-1 baje ke kareeb ek Truck or ek Jeep si gadi humne dekhi thi.....
Uske jawab se Sakshi ko ek ummid mil gayi.
Sakshi: kya? Aap please mujhe us bare me thoda vistar se batayenge?
Guard: madam vistar se kese bataye? Hum yahi apni jagah khade the, wo 2 gadiya tez Raftar se ayi or aage chali gayi. Ab hume ye aam baat lagi isliye humne uspar dhyan nahi diya ke wo aage kaha gayi or sab.....
Sakshi: accha koi baat nahi.... Aapka bahot bahot shukriya.....
Fit Sakshi us raste par chal padi jaha se Guard ne un do Gadiyo ko ata dekha tha. Kuch der takk us raste par jane ke baad waha rasta 3 hisso me butt jata he. Sakshi apni gadi se utar kar sochne lagi ke ab aage kya karna chahiye. Tabhi use kuch sujhta he. Sakshi car me beth gayi, or apna Laptop open kar ke us Area ki Satellite Images ko dekhne lagi. Usne paya ke yaha ek rasta aisi jagah jata he, jaha zyada abadi nahi thi. Isliye Sakshi usi Area ko apna nishana bana leti he.

Control Room se us jagah ki sari jankari ko hasil kar ke Sakshi us jagah ki chan bin karne nikal gayi. Sakshi bass yaha waha kisi saboot ki talash me thi. Dopeher ka waqt ho gaya tha, lekin Sakshi ko na to bhik ki chinta thi, na hi thakan ki. abhi abhi Control Room se mili jankari ke nusar Sakshi ko ek Abounded jagah par doubt ho gaya. Sakshi ne bina der kiye apni Gadi us taraf mod li. Kuch der baad Sakshi usi Factory ke paas agayi jaha Aksh ne apne kaam ko ajnam diya tha. Sakshi ne dur se hi dekha ke Factory ki halat kafi buri he, lekin tabhi Sakshi ki nazar waha khade ek aadmi par ja giri, lekin uske haath me Gun dekh kar Sakshi ko pakka yakeen ho gaya ke yaha zarur kuch gadbad he. Sakshi apni car dur chhod kar savdhani se Factory ke paas jane lagi. Usne paya ke kuch log waha pehredari karne me lage hue he, Sakshi ne sabse pehle Sana ko call kar ke Force ke saath yaha bula liya. Tabtak Sakshi Factory ke piche jane ka sochti he. Factory ki halat kuch thik nahi thi, isliye Sakshi ko piche jate hi tuti jagah se Factory ke andar ka nazara dikhne laga. Andar jagah jagah Goliyo ke nishan se Sakshi samajh gayi ke wo Gold Biscuits ki tasakri yahi se ho rahi thi.

Ab yaha Sakshi andar ka nazara jhak rahi thi, or tabhi ek aadmi Factory ka round marne nikal gaya, wo aadmi haath me Gun liye gana gun guna raha tha, jese hi wo Sakshi ke nazdeek ane laga, Sakshi ne uski awaz sunn li, or apni Gun Load kar ke waha Kone par agayi. Ab wo aadmi aage badhe ja raha tha, or Sakshi kone me khade hokar uska intezar kar rahi thi, Sakshi ne apni Gun rakh di, or jese hi wo Aadmi Sakshi ke samne aya, Sakshi ne furti se apna ek haath uske muh par rakh diya or dusra haath se us aadmi ke gun wale haath ko pakad kar use niche gira diya. Niche girte hi uske haath se Gun bhi niche gir gayi, lekin Sakshi ne uska muh dabaye rakha, or dusre haath se uske chehre par 2-3 mukke jadd diye. Wo aadmi zor se Sakshi ko apne upar se dhakka de deta he, Sakshi piche akar gir gayi, us aadmi ne apne aju baju dekha lekin use apni Gun nahi dikhayi di isliye wo aadmi Sakshi par jhapat pada, usne Sakshi ke baal pakad kar use Factory ki diwar se de mara, or Sakshi ko diwar se hi ghasit te hue muh ke bal gira diya. Sakshi ke chehre par is waqt kafi chot agayi thi, or ab uske chehre par khun agaya. Usne firse Sakshi ke balo ko pakad kar use utha liya, lekin is baar Sakshi ne apni kohni zor se us aadmi le muh par maar di, wo aadmi ladkhadate hue niche gir gaya, wo ab apne sathiyo ko awaz lagane hi laga tha ke Sakshi ne piche se uska gala chock kar diya.

Sakshi: bilkul awaz matt karna..... Warna....
Or ye kehkar usne zyada takat lagate hue uska gala chock kar diya. Wo aadmi saas lene ke liye tadap raha tha. Sakshi ne waha padi lakdi us aadmi ke muh me thus di, jis se uske muh se khun nikalne laga, Sakshi ne ye uska awaz band karne ke liye kiya tha. Wo aadmi dard se tadapta hua niche gir gaya. Sakshi ne jaldi se apne Fill Sleeve shirt ki Ek taraf ki Sleeve ko faad kar alag kar diya, or us aadmi ke muh se lakdi nikal kar uska muh bandh diya. Wo aadmi ab bhi Sakshi ke kabu me nahi tha, isliye Sakshi uske dono hatho ko bari bari zor se mod deti he. Ab usne apne paas rakha ek chota sa chaku nikal kar us aadmi ke pero ke piche ki nase hi kaat di, jis se wo aadmi kahi bhag na paye. Lekin ab is aadmi ko yaha aye kafi der ho gayi thi, isliye 2 or log is taraf ane lage, un dono ki awaz sunkar ab Sakshi ko Gun ka sahara lena hi pada. Usne bina waqt barbad kiye un dono admiyo ke samne akar unpar Goli chala di, or is me un dono admiyo ko apne aap ko bachane ka koi moka nahi mila. Lekin ab Goli ki awaz se baki sare aadmi bhi tayar ho chuke the. Sakshi apni jagah par hi bani rahi, lekin jab usne jana ke yaha ek saath 3-4 log arahe he to use bhi darr lagne lag. Lekin tabhi waha Sana 20 Officers ki force lekar agayi thi, usne Sakshi ko call kiya lekin jab wo koi jawab nahi deti to Sana samajh gayi ke situation kharab he. wo 3-4 logo ne jab Gate par ye dekha to wo Sakshi ki taraf badhne ki bajaye Gate ki taraf Fire karne lage. Sakshi ko ye baat pata nahi thi, lekin dusri taraf se bhi goliya chalne ki awaz se wo samajh gayi ke Sana yaha agyi he. Isliye Sakshi waha se nikal kar un 4 logo ko dher kar deti he. Sana ne waha se Sakshi ko dekh liya, or use wahi rukne ka ishara kar ke baki Officers ko Sakshi ki location bata di, jis se wo log Sakshi ki taraf Fire na kare. Waha Sana & Force ne morcha sambhal liya, lekin Sakshi ne dekha ke jis Aadmi ko usne waha zinda chhoda he, wo ab behosh sa hone laga tha. Isliye wo us aadmi ko uthakar piche se ghumkar hi Force ki Gadiyo ke paas chali ati he. Jaha ek Ambulance bhi mojud thi, waha mojud Doctor us aadmi ko sambhal leta he. Or tabtak Sana & Force ne sare Admiyo ko maar giraya.

Sana: Sakshi, tumhare chehre par ye khun... Tum thik hona?
Sakshi: ha me... Me... Thik hi....
Neel: or ye aadmi.....
Sakshi: darasal hume ek aadmi kuch bhi kar ke zinda chahiye hi tha.... To mene ise....
Sana: Good Sakshi.... You did a good job....
Wo Sakshi ke kandho par haath rakhte hue kehti he. Or fir wo sab lasho ko baramad kar ke waha se nikal jate he.


Waha Rana ko iski khabar takk nahi thi, use to tabb malum pada jab ek aadmi bhagte hue uske paas ata he or News Channel laga kar use dikha deta he.

TV: Surat ke ek ilake me band padi Illegal Factory ko aaj CBI dwara Seal kar diya gaya he. Kaha ja raha he ke Factory me mojud gundo ko bhi CBI ne maar giraya. Aage ki khabar......

Ye sunkar Rana to jese aag babula ho gaya. Lekin ab wo kuch kar bhi to nahi sakta tha, siwaye sharab pikar apni haar ka dukh manane ke. Lekin dusri taraf Aksh ko bhi is news ke bare me pata chal gaya.


Waha Sakshi ki chot bhi saaf kar di gayi thi, is waqt Sakshi CBI Office ke Medical department me aram kar rahi thi. Tabhi waha Anant ajata he.

Anant: how are you feeling now?
Sakshi: Sir.... Ji me bilkul thik hu....
Anant: You Know What Sakshi.... Tumhara pradarshan dekh kar me ye samajh gaya ke mene koi galat decision nahi liya he.... Very Good Sakshi.
Sakshi: Thanks Sir..... wo aadmi thik he na jise humne pakda tha?
Anant: tum uski chinta matt karo, aise nahi marne denge use... or ab apna khayal rakho na ki apne kaam ka....
Sakshi: me Aksh ko firse sahi salamat dekhna chahti hu.... Bahot galatiya ki he mene, jinhe sudharna chahti hu.... or shayad yahi tarika un galatiyo ko sudharne ka.
Wo apni Num aakho ke saath kehti he. Ab Anant use kese batata ke kahi na kahi Anant bhi use dhoka de raha he. Jo soch kar Anant ke chehre par bhi chinta cha jati he.


Waha Abdul is waqt Aksh ke saath waha mojud tha. Or sab milkar bethkar aaj hue hadse ke bare me baat kar rahe the.

Abdul: ye sab Sakshi ka kaam he Aksh....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh heran reh gaya.
Abdul: Police Station se khabri ne bataya ke CBI se ek ladki ayi thi is case ko study karne... Or wo Sakshi thi.
Ye sab sunkar Aksh ko bahot Gussa araha tha.
Abdul: Aksh me yaha Rana ko Sakshi ke khilaf jane se rok raha hu, or waha Sakshi apni hi musibat ko badhaye ja rahi he.....
Aksh: me janta hu mujhe kya karna he......
Wo ek gehri saas lekar kehta he.


Waha din bhar Anant ne Sakshi se ghar jane ke liye kaha, lekin Sakshi nahi mani. Sakshi ko bass us aadmi se baat karni thi, uske muh se sach ugalwa na tha, lekin wo nahi janti thi ke ye aadmi Rana ka he. Or Rana ka koi aadmi uske bare me kuch nahi bolta. Abtak uski halat thik nahi thi, isliye Sakshi us se aaj nahi baat kar payi.

Raat ko 8 baje Sakshi ghar pahoch gayi lekin jese hi wo apne kamre me ati, to use Bed par ek Pemdrive padi dikhayi di. Sakshi ne jaldi se Pendrive ko apne Laptop par chala diya. Usme ek Audio Recording thi. Or uska Title Tha Qaatil.

"Tujhe iski kimat chukani padegi..... Teri jankari ke liye bata du, ke tera Bhai mere paas hi he. Lekin zyada waqt takk nahi..... Jese tere pariwar ko upar pahocha diya, waise hi...... Us din to bach gaya wo, lekin itna yaad rakhna ke Mere khilaf jane ki koshish ki to......."

Sakshi ye sab sunkar sadme me ja chuki thi. Darasal ye sab Aksh ka hi kaam tha, usne apni Recorded Audio ko thoda change kar diya, jis se Sakshi uski awaz na pehchan paye. Or usne hi yaha akar wo Pendrive rakh di. Sakshi sabse pehle ghar ke bahar lage CCTV ke footage dekhti he. Jisme wahi kale kapde pehne or kale kapde se apna chehra chupaye koi insan ghar me dakhil hua tha. Lekin Sakshi ko firse uske sar ke piche gardan par ek bada ghav dikhayi diya. Jis se use yakeen ho gaya ke yahi Qaatil he.

Sakshi: kya karu? City ke sare CCTV Footage dekh kar bhi koi fayda nahi hoga.... Kyu ke aage ja kar ye aisi jagah chala jayega jaha dur dur takk CCTV nahi he.... Lekin Aksh..... Mera Aksh khatre me he.... Use kis tarah bachau? Deva.... Please mere Aksh ko sahi salamat rakhna. Please......

Aksh me khayal ne Sakshi ko rula diya. Use ab darr lagne laga ke kahi wo Qaatil Aksh ko maar na de. Kyu ke ab Sakshi ke paas jine ka or koi bhi sahara nahi tha. Lekin ab wo thande dimag se kaam lene ki aochti he. Or jaldi se Anant ko is sari ghatna ke bare me bata deti he. Anant to kuch samajh hi nahi paya ke akhir Aksh ye sab kya kar raha he. Lekin andar hi andar Anant ka plan successful raha, kyu me use Sakshi ko yahi yakeen karwana tha ke Aksh Qaatil ke paas he. Or Aksh ne ye sab kya soch kar kiya ye to aage lata chal hi jayega


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Pahle yo aksh ab sakshi v rana ki band baja rahi hai anjane mein hi sahi lekin aksh ne wo pendrive kyo chhoda aur iska asar sakshi par kya hoga ye dekhna hai great upadte bro

 

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Chapter 3 - Qaatil

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Waha sari raat Sakshi bass karvate badal badal kar sone ki koshish kar rahi thi, lekin jo kuch use Aksh ke bare me pata chala tha, usne Sakshi ki nind uda di thi. Wo bass yahi soche ja rahi thi ke ab aage kya?

Khair, jo bhi ho Sakshi aise bass hatho par haath dhare to nahi beth sakti thi, isliye ab wo aage ka plan banane me lagg jati he. Thodi si hi sahi lekin kuch der ki nind ke baad Sakshi apne kaam par nikal gayi. Sabse pehle wo ja kar Anant se milti he.

Anant: to ab aage ka kuch socha he Sakshi tumne?
Sakshi: sir, agar me koi bhi galat kadam uthati hu, to baat sidha Aksh par akar ruk jayegi.... Or me pehle hi uski takleefo ki wajah hu, ab koi galat kadam utha kar me use khona nahi chahti......
Sakshi kafi der se Anant ke samne mazbut bani rehne ki koshish kar rahi thi, lekin ab jab baat Aksh ki thi to wo apne jazbat sambhal nahi payi or ro padi.
Anant: Sakshi tum chinta matt karo..... tum khud socho, Agar wo Qaatil Aksh ko itni kadi security cell se bhaga sakta he, to agar use Aksh ko nuksan pahochana hota to wo use bhaga kar kyu le jata? Wo to asani se Aksh ko kabka...... Sakshi ye sab jitna dikh raha he, utna straight forward nahi he.... Bahot se raaz chupe hue he in sabke piche.... Or ye raaz sirf Qaatil ko pakadne par hi humare samne ayenge....
Anant baar baar kisi bhi tarah bass Sakshi ko Aksh ko lekar befikar rehne par majbur kar raha tha, kyu ke wo nahi chahta tha ke Aksh ki fikarmandi se Sakshi Qaatil ko pakadne me kamzor padd jaye. Or iska asar Sakshi par bhi ho raha tha. Ye sari baate sunkar use bhi kahi na kahi ehsas ho gaya ke koi wajah he jiske chalte Qaatil Aksh ko nuksan nahi pahochayega.
Sakshi: thik kaha sir.... Shayad Aksh ka sahi salamat rehna Qaatil ki majburi ho.... Lekin mujhe lagta he ke kuch waqt takk me Qaatil ko ye na lagne du ke me uske piche hu...
Anant: ha... Thik kaha tumne.... Or is Waqt me tum ek pakka plan bana lena...
Sakshi: okay sir....

Sakshi: sir kya me ek sawal puch sakti hu aapse?
Anant: ha zarur....
Sakshi: sir kya aap mujhe CBI me lane ke piche ka maksad bata sakte he?
Uske sidhe sawal par kuch Seconds to Anant bhi chup ho gaya.
Anant: me.... Me kuch samjha nahi....
Sakshi: sir me itna to samajh gayi hu ke aapne mujhe sirf Qaatil ko hi pakadne, ya Aksh ko bekasur sabit karwane ke liye nahi laye ho..... Shayad iske piche koi or badi wajah ho......
Anant: wajah he..... Or wo wajah Abhinav Sir ki Maut se judi he....
Sakshi: Matlab.....
Anant: waqt ane par tum iska Matlab samajh jaogi.....
Uski baat par Sakshi bass chup bethi rehti he.
Sakshi: okay sir.... Me chalti hu.....
Or fir Sakshi uthkar apne cabin me ajati he.

Anant (mann me): tumhe CBI join karwane ka maksad yahi tha ke me apne or Officers ki jaan khatre me nahi daal sakta.... Agar Aksh Abhinav Sir ko maar sakta he, to uske liye me ya or koi Officer to mayne bhi nahi rakhte.....

Waha Sakshi apne cabin me akar kuch kaam karne lagg gayi. Waise to usne soch liya tha ke wo ab kuch waqt takk Qaatil ke khilaf koi bada kadam nahi uthayegi. Lekin is waqt me use Qaatil ko pakadne ka ek mazbut plan banana tha. Or bass Sakshi usi ki tayari me lagg jati he.

Waha Aksh ka bass ek hi kaam tha, pure din bass apni Physical Health par kaam karna, apna nishana sahi karna, or bass battar se battar maut dene ke tarike sochna. Ek ke baad ek din nikal rahe the, Aksh ko ab apna agla daav khelna tha. Jiski tayari Aksh or uske baki sathi karne me lage the. Or wo daav tha Rana ke Drugs Smuggling ke dhande ko nuksan pahochana. Jiske liye abhi kafi waqt tha, lekin shayad yahi sabse bada kaam bhi tha.

Dusri taraf Rana din ba din gusse me pagal hue ja raha tha, usne har taraf se koshish kar li Aksh ke bare me pata lagane ki, lekin Aksh ko dhund pana kisi ke liye bhi asan nahi ho raha tha. Is waqt Rana ne Abdul or Bakshi ko apne kamre me bulaya tha.

Rana: Abdul, tumse ye ummid nahi thi..... Us 2 take ke Aksh ko dhund pana tumhare liye itna mushkil kyu ho raha he?
Wo kafi Sakht lehze me Abdul se puchta he.
Abdul: Boss.... Mene kaha na wo akela he, or kisi Gang ke bare me pata karna, or ek akele admi ke bare me pata karna dono alag he.... Or Aksh sirf akela nahi, balki wo bethikana bhi he.... To....
Rana: to kya Abdul? Wo akar meri maar kar chala jayega tabb pakdoge use?
Wo bahot hi gusse me Abdul ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he. Jispar Abdul bass apna sar jhuka kar khada ho gaya.
Rana: khair..... Shaam me hum tino ko zaruri kaam se nikalna he.....
Abdul: Boss.... Wo.... Me nahi apaunga.....
Rana: kyu? Kya hua?
Abdul: wo.... Darasal Ammi Abbu ki kabar par aaj chadar chadani he to or fir.....
Rana: thik he.... Meri taraf se bhi unki aatma ke shanti ki Dua karna.....
Wo Abdul ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.


Waha Sakshi ko Qaatil takk pahochne ka ek rasta mil chuka tha, wo bass an is plan ko har taraf se study karne lagg gayi, ke kahi isme koi loop hole na rahe.

Wahi dusri taraf Bakshi or Rana ek gadi me or piche 10 gadiyo ke kafile me kahi ja rahe the.

Bakshi: Boss... Me wo Sakshi ke bare me.....
Rana: nahi..... Wo sab ab Abdul dekh lega.....
Wo Bakshi ko bich me kaat te hue kehta he
Bakshi: lekin Boss mujhe lagta he ke Abdul ye nahi kar payega....
Uski baat sunkar Rana bahot hi gusse bhari nazro se use dekhne lagta he.
Bakshi: m.... Mera Matlab tha ke pehle hi Abdul par Aksh ko pakadne ki zimmedari he, or upar se ye..... Or shayad isi ke chalte wo Aksh ko pakadne me nakam ho raha he.... Agar aap use sirf Aksh ko dhund ne me lagate to shayad Aksh is waqt humare haath hota....
Uski baat kahi na kahi Rana ko bhi sahi lagg rahi thi.
Rana: hmm... Thik kaha, lekin Abdul ki baat sahi he. Us ladki ko agar kuch hota he to.....
Abdul: Boss.... Aap bhi jante ho ke koi bhi insan aaptak ane se pehle humse bhidta he.... Aapko to is baat ki chinta karni hi nahi chahiye ke ye ladki CBI me he ya or......
Ab Rana Bakshi ki baato me agaya.
Rana: to kya karega?
Bakshi: Boss, me wada karta hu kal subah jab aap wapis lautoge, to wo ladki aapke samne hogi.....
Rana: thik he..... Lekin is baar galati ki koi gunjaish nahi honi chahiye....
Bakshi: bilkul nahi Boss, me khud jakar us ladki ko kabze me kar lunga.....
Rana: or Abdul ko bhi bata dena ke tum us ladki ko utha rahe ho.....
Bakshi: Boss mujhe lagta he aaj Abdul ko in sab kaam se dur rakhna chahiye, mera Matlab aaj wo apne Maa Baap.....
Rana: thik kaha..... Lekin kal subah wo ladki mere samne honi chahiye..... Ek baar wo haath agayi, to Aksh apne aap haath lagg jayega.
Bakshi: befikar rahiye boss.....
Or fir wo sab apne manzil ki or bhadte jate he.


Raat ke 8 baje Sakshi apne ghar jane ke liye nikal gayi thi, or kareeb 9 baje wo ghar akar aram karne lagi. Lekin wahi dusri taraf Bakshi firse is taraf ane ke liye nikal gaya, usne apne 3 admiyo se bhi tayar rehne ke liye keh diya tha. Lekin jab wo wapis laut raha tha, to uski nazar samne se ja rahi Abdul ki gadi par padd gayi.

Bakshi (mann me): Abdul..... Lekin wo itne bahari ilake me?

Jabtak Bakshi kuch sochta, tabtak Abdul apni gadi ko ghane jungle ke bich mod deta he. Ab Bakshi ko kuch gadbad lagne lagi, isliye wo bhi Abdul ka picha karne ka sochta he. Usne pehle Abdul ki gadi ko bilkul andar jane diya, or fir khud uske piche chal pada jis se Abdul use nahi dekh pata. Yaha koi bhi rasta nahi tha, isliye gadi ki speed zyada nahi thi, or kafi der baad Bakshi ko uske admiyo ka call ajata he, Bakshi ne is waqt apna Abdul ke piche rehna sahi samjha, or un baki admiyo ko Sakshi ko pakadne ki zimmedari de di. Kafi der takk gadi chalane ke baad Bakshi ko dur ek ghar banayi dikhta he, ab Bakshi apni gadi wahi jhadiyo me chupa kar khud bhi pedo ke piche chup chupkar ghar ke paas jane laga, or isi waqt zordar barish hone lagi. Badi hi savdhani se Bakshi ghar ke bilkul paas pahoch gaya, ab ye ghar koi pakka makan to tha nahi, Bakshi ko waha ek khidki tuti hui dikh gayi, Bakshi bahot savdhani se us khidki ke andar ka nazara dekhta he, lekin ab Bakshi ke hosh udd gaye, kyu ke andar use Abdul ke saath saath kayi or log dikhe, lekin usme se ek ka chehra wo turant pehchan gaya.

Bakshi (mann me): Aksh..... Or Abdul Aksh ke saath, Matlab Abdul Boss ko dhoka de raha he....

Waha Bakshi ko apni aakho par yakeen kar pana mushkil ho raha tha, wo khidki se hatkar apna mobile nikalta he, lekin yaha itne ghane jungle ke bich aise normal mobile me network nahi ata tha. Kuch der takk Bakshi wahi khidki se Abdul ko dekh rah tha, kuch der baad Bakshi ab waha se nikalne ki sochne laga, lekin tabhi Abdul bhi waha se nikalne laga, use bahar ata dekh Bakshi wahi chupa raha, Abdul bahar akar apni gadi me bethne hi wala hota he ke tabhi use kisi ke girne ki awaz ati he, darasal barish ki wajah se waha par bilkul gila ho chuka tha, or Bakshi ka per usme fisal gaya. Abdul ke tez kano ne barish ke bich me bhi ye awaz sunn li, lekin wo kuch soch kar apni gadi me beth jata he, or waha se nikal jata he. Abdul ke jane ke baad Bakshi bhi waha se nikalne laga. Kuch duri par usne apni gadi chupayi thi, bhagte bhagte Bakshi apni gadi me akar beth jata he, or gadi start karne ki koshish karne lagta he, lekin gadi chalu nahi ho pa rahi thi. Tabhi use khidke me se kisi ki awaz ajati he.
"Kuch madat karu?"
Awaz sunkar Bakshi Left side ki Window ki taraf dekhta he to uski aakho me khuaf cha gaya. Kyu ke gadi ke bahar Abdul khada tha. Ab Bakshi ke paas Abdul se ladne ke siwaye koi chara nahi tha, isliye Bakshi ne turant apni Gun nikal di, lekin utni hi furti se Abdul ne gadi ke bahar se hi Bakshi ko jakad kar us khidki me se bahar nikal liya. Bakshi ki Gun gadi ke andar hi gir gayi, wo dhire dhire piche sarak raha tha, or Abdul apna raudra roop liye aage badh raha tha. Jese hi Bakshi ne apne pero par khade hone ki koshish ki, Abdul ne ek zordar laat uske sine me maar di, jis se Bakshi dur ja gira. Abdul bhagte hue uske paas agaya or use collar se pakad kar apne pero par khada kar diya, is bich Bakshi bhi sambhal gaya tha, or usne Abdul ka sar apne bagal me pakad kar use sar ke bal gira diya. Abdul ka sar sidha patthar se ja takraya, jis se uske sar se khun nikalne laga, is moke ka fayda utha kar Bakshi ne Abdul ki Gun nikal li, lekin jese hi wo Rana par Goli chalane wala hota he tabhi piche se ek Goli akar Bakshi sine me lagg jati he. Bakshi ke haath se Gun niche gir gayi, or wo dhire dhire apne ghutno par or fir muh ke bal niche gir gaya. Abdul piche mudkar dekhta he to waha Aksh or Shahid khade the, or wo Goli Aksh ne chalayi thi. Abdul uthkar aage ane laga ke tabhi use ehsas hua ke Bakshi ab bhi zinda he. Isliye wo niche jhuk kar Bakshi ko sidha leta deta he. Aksh or Shahid bhi uske paas agaye the.

Abdul: kya laga tujhe? Yaha se zinda jakar Rana ko khabar de payega? Huhhh
Lekin uski baat par Bakshi hasne lagta he.
Bakshi: haha.... L.... Lekin.... lekin wo.... Wo ladki n.... Nahi..... Nahi bachegi.....
Or itna kehkar wo apni jaan chhod deta he. Uski baat Aksh or Shahid nahi samajh paye, lekin Abdul ko kuch gadbad lagne lagi.

Abdul: Aksh.... Sakshi.... Sakshi khatre me he.....
Uski baat sunkar Aksh ke hosh udd jate he.
Aksh: k.... Kya Matlab?
Abdul: Aksh, Rana ne Sakshi ko pakadne ki zimmedari pehle Bakshi ko hi di thi.... Sakshi ko bachana hoga....
Ye sunkar Aksh aage ki taraf daudne lagta he, Abdul bhi apni chupayi gadi ko nikal kar Aksh or Shahid ke saath waha se nikal jate he.

To ab baat kar lete he jab Bakshi ne apne admiyo se Sakshi ko pakadne ka order diya tha. Kuch der ke baad wo 3 log Sakshi ke ghar ke bahar pahoch gaye. Wahi Sakshi ko barish dekh kar mann kar raha tha ke wo jakar badlo se girti thandi thandi bundo ke niche khadi ho jaye. Kuch soch vichar karne ke baad Sakshi apne mann ko kabu nahi kar payi, or uthkar backyard me chali gayi. Jese hi wo barish ki bunde Sakshi ke chehre par giri, to uske chehre par itne waqt ke baad itni pyari muskurahat agayi. Sakshi bass asman ki aur dekhte hue apne badan ko gila kar rahi thi. Waha Bakshi ke tino aadmi ghar ki diwar paar kar ke andar agaye the. wo log ghar ke piche se andar jane ki soch rahe the, lekin tabhi unhe Sakshi wahi bahar khadi dikhayi deti he.

Aadmi: wahh..... Maal to badhiya he, bhai to full maze udayenge is badan ke....
Aadmi 2: sahi kaha.... Or humare haath kya? Sirf paisa.... Are aisa maal ajaye to.....
Aadmi 3: bhosdiko, kaam karo.... Badme sapne dekhte rehna.... Chutiye.....

Fir wo tino bina dare Sakshi par humla kar dete he, lekin Sakshi ko bhi in sab ki training mili hui thi, wo samne se tino logo ko ata dekh backyard me rakhi chair uthakar unpar fek deti he, lekin wo chair sirf ek aadmi ko rokne me kamyab hui, or baki dono Sakshi ke paas pahoch gaye. Sakshi ne ek aadmi ka gala pakad kar dusre aadmi ko zordar laat maar di, jis se wo piche ja gira. Ye log Sakshi ke is andaz ke liye tayar bilkul nahi the, wo to sochkar aye the ke ladki ko kabu karne me konsi dikkat ayegi. Khair ab galati ki he to uski saza to milni hi thi. Sakshi ne us aadmi ko Gale se hi pakad kar kamre ke glass door par de mara. Wo aadmi glass door todta hua andar ja gira, lekin itne me wo aadmi jise Sakshi ki feki chair ne giraya tha, usne uthkar Sakshi ko piche se pakad kar girane ki koshish ki, lekin Sakshi bass ladkhadate hue firse sambhal gayi. Lekin tabtak us dusre aadmi akar Sakshi ke chehre par Ghutna de mara, jis se Sakshi apna santulan kho kar niche gir gayi. Ab wo dono aadmiyo ko lagi moka mil gaya, or is moke ka fayda utha kar un dono ne ek saath Sakshi par dhava bol diya. Ek ne Sakshi ko piche se kass kar pakad liya or dusre aadmi ne zor daar mukka Sakshi ke chehre par maar diya, ab Sakshi ke naak or honto me se khun behne laga. Sakshi takat se chutne ki koshish kar rahi thi ke tabhi use piche se pakde aadmi ne muh ke bal gira diya, or khud uski pith par apna ghutna dabaye uske haath piche kar ke mod diye. Sakshi ab lachar si thi, isliye wo thande dimag se kaam leti he. Sakshi ne janbujh kar apna sharir dhila chhod diya or apni aakhe band kar li. Uski body me koi halchal nahi thi, isliye un admiyo ko laga ke Sakshi behosh ho gayi he. Itne me andar gira aadmi bhi bahar agaya. Jo aadmi Sakshi ke upar tha, wo Sakshi ko paltane ke liye uske upar se hatt gaya, or isi moke ke intezar me Sakshi thi, usne puri takat se us aadmi ke tango ke bich laat maar di, jis se wo to aadmi dur ja gira. Sakshi un dono admiyo ke haath me ane se bachkar uthkar ghar ke aage ki taraf bhagne lagi, wo dono bhi uske piche bhag rahe the, or ab ek aadmi ne chalang markar Sakshi ke per pakad liye, jis se Sakshi muh ke bal gir gayi. Dusra aadmi apna khanjar nikal kar Sakshi ke upar jhapat pada, lekin Sakshi ne uska haath Modkar us se khanjar le liya, or uske hi sar me khanjar ko dhasa diya. Wo aadmi tadapne laga, or tabbi Sakshi ne apne per pakde aadmi ko balo se pakad kar khicha or uske gale me Khanjar ghopne lagi. Wo aadmi bhi tadap tadap kar apni jaan gava betha. Sakshi zor zor se haanf rahi thi, tabhi uske samne wo akhri aadmi agaya, waha nazara dekh uski bhi fatt ke haath me agayi. Sakshi use dekhte hue aage badh rahi thi, or wo aadmi dara sehma sa apne kadam piche le raha tha, jese hi usne piche bhagne ki koshish ki, Sakshi ne khanjar sidha uske pith me fek kar maar diya. Wo aadmi dard se karha raha tha, Sakshi uske paas ayi or wo Khanjar nikal kar uske gale par rakh diya.

Sakshi: kon he tu? Ha? Bata kon he tu? Kisne bheja tujhe yaha?
Wo gusse me apne daant piste hue us aadmi se puch rahi thi, lekin wo kuch keh nahi raha tha. Ab Sakshi ko bahot gussa ane laga, usne bina der kiye us aadmi ke gale par khanjar fer diya.

Ab Sakshi uthkar khadi ho gayi or zor zor se saase lens lagi, usne jakar sabse pehle CBI me ye khabar de di, or jakar apne chehre ka khun saaf karne lagi.


Waha Abdul Aksh or Shahid Sakshi ke ghar ke paas pahoch gaye, lekin waha itni sari Police ki gadiya or ek Ambulance dekh kar Aksh ki saas hi ruk gayi. Lekin tabhi use waha khadi Sakshi dikhayi deti he. Sakshi ko sahi Salamat dekh kar sabhi chain ki saas lete he. Waha un tino logo ki laash le jata dekh kar wo samajh gaye ke Sakshi ab koi aam ladki nahi rahi.

Abdul: Aksh, Sakshi bahot badi galati kar rahi he....
Shahid: thik kaha, Aise me to Rana.....
Aksh: kuch nahi hoga.... Me janta hu mujhe kya karna he......
Wo Shahid ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he. Fir wo sab apne apne raste chale jate he.


Der raat Sakshi naha kar agayi, or kapde badal kar bed par leti hi thi ke uska Mobile ring hone laga, usne bina Mobile dekhe call pick kar liya.

Sakshi: hel.....
Dusri taraf: tu shayad bhul gayi ke tera bhai ab bhi......
Iske aage wo kuch bolta ke Sakshi ne turant call kaat diya, or jab usne number check kiya to waha koi number nahi show ho raha tha. Uski ek line se hi Sakshi samajh gayi ke ye call Qaatil ka he. Sakshi ne jaldi se apna phone switch off kar diya. Waha Aksh ne firse Sakshi ko call karne ki try ki lekin uska phone band tha, darasal usne phone par kapda laga diya tha jis se Sakshi uski awaz na pehchan paye. Lekin ab uska phone band hone se Aksh ko kuch samajh nahi aya. Usne kayi baar Sakshi ko call kiya lekin natija wahi.

Lekin Sakshi ne kuch soch samajh kar call kata tha.

Sakshi: ye zarur us Qaatil ka hi call hoga.... Iska Matlab wo aadmi zarur uske hi the.... jesa mera plan tha chize to usi hisab se ho rahi he. Mujhe abhi Office jana hoga, tabtak phone band hi rakh lungi.... Qaatil firse mujhe call zarur karega... Or fir me..... Ha..... Lekin agar usne Aksh ko kuch..... Nahi, nahi.... Aisa kuch nahi hoga.... Mujhe bass apni soch par kabu pana hoga, tabhi me Aksh ko firse dekh paungi.....

Ab yaha Sakshi ka plan ye tha ke wo kisi bhi tarah Qaatil ko ek baar nuksan zarur pahochayegi, jis se Qaatil Sakshi ko contact karne ko majbur ho jaye. Lekin yaha to Qaatil ne khud apne pero par khulhadi maar kar Sakshi ko call kar diya. Sakshi itni raat ko firse CBI Office nikal jati he. Waha to din raat kaam chalta tha, Sakshi sabse pehle Control Room me agayi, or usne kuch der ke liye yaha ke sare phones ko band karwane ka order de diya. Darasal wo janti thi ke Qaatil ka call track karna asan nahi hoga. Kyu ke ye bina number wala call tha. Isliye Sakshi ne uske radio signals catch karne ke liye yaha ke baki sare phones ke signal band karwa diye. Or fir apna mobile on kar ke use system me connect kar liya. Kafi der takk call ka intezar karne ke baad wo ghadi agayi. Sakshi ke mobile par firse bina number call agaya. Sakshi ne Control Room head ke ishare par call pick kar liya.

Qaatil: chal kya raha he tera? Shayad apne bhai ki parwah nahi he tujhe.....
Sakshi: k... Kya Matlab....
Qaatil: mere admiyo ko maar diya..... Iska Matlab nahi samajhti? Tujhe andaza bhi he tere bhai ke saath me.....
Sakshi: Aakh tere paas nahi he..... He to saboot.....
Qaatil: mere saath ye saboot wala khel galati se bhi matt khelna, kyu ke agli baar mere khilaf ayi to saboot ke taur par tere bhai ki laash ghar bhej dunga....
Wo gusse me Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he, or bina kuch sune call disconnect kar deta he. Aksh ke bare me aisa kuch sunkar Sakshi ek pal ke liye ghabra gayi. Lekin agle hi pal usne apne mann ko samjha liya. Waha us call ko track karne ki koshish ho rahi thi, lekin ye koi aam call nahi tha. Kafi der ki mashakkat ke baad akhir kaar unhe signal ko track kar hi liya.

Neel: Sakshi, Signal to track ho gaye.... Lekin is se hume uski Exact location nahi pata chal payegi... Signals to us area se kayi dur bhi ja sakte he....
Sakshi: me janti hu, lekin mujhe bass aisa koi Area bhi mil jaye to me aage ki planning kar lungi.....
Neel: Okay.... I think tumhe ab jana chahiye, kafi der ho gayi he....
Uski baat par Sakshi bhi ghar laut ayi. Uske plan ka pehla padav paar ho chuka tha, ab aage ki tayari Sakshi ko bahot savdhani se karni thi.

Agle din subah subah Sakshi us jagah pahoch gayi kaha se Signals aye the. Darasal ye jagah Aksh ke thikane se kafi dur thi, lekin ye ek outside area hone se Sakshi ko ye jagah sahi lagg rahi thi. Is waqt Sakshi or Sana field par thi.

Sakshi: Sana.... Aap please ek Van ka intezam kar sakti ho, jisme humare Signal Tracking Devices bhi asake?
Sana: ha... Lekin tum kya karna chahti ho?
Sakshi: darasal kal raat humne Qaatil ke phone ki Radio Frequencies ko track kar liya tha, me chahti hu ke humari ek Team is jagah 24/7 rahe, usi Frequency ko catch karne ke liye. Agar us Qaatil ne firse kisi se call par baat ki, to hum shayad uski batchit sunn sakte he....
Sana: very Brilliant Sakshi.... Me abhi sab kuch arrange kar deti hu....
Or fir Sana ne ek Van waha bula li, jiske andar wo log satellite images ke zariye is area ki chan bin kar rahe the, or saath hi saath Qaatil ki call ko track karne ki koshish bhi. Pura din nikal gaya, lekin aaj Sakshi ke haath kuch bhi nahi laga. Der raat wo or Sana ghar jane ke liye nikal gaye, or baki raat me Neel Field par rehne wala tha.

Yu hi kuch din nikal gaye, lekin Sakshi ko nirasha ke siwaye kuch haath nahi laga. Ab use apne plan me firse badlav karne the, usne soch liya ke aaj raat agar use koi saboot nahi mila to wo is plan ko abort kar degi. Lekin tabhi system ne Qaatil ke phone ki Radio Frequencies ko catch kar liya. Sakshi jaldi se Headphones pehen kar us call ko track karne me lagg jati he, or wo call ko track karne me kamyab rahi. Darasal is waqt Abdul ne Aksh ko call kiya tha. Lekin dikkat ye thi ke Sakshi ko kuch bhi clear Sunayi nahi de raha tha, awaz kafi kharab thi, or wo baar baar cut rahi thi.

Abdul: dekho parso raat **** factory me chale jana.... Waha kareeb 5-6 crores ka cash araha he.... Un sabko uda le jana.....
Aksh: or waha kitne logo ke hone ki sambhavna he?
Abdul: bass 4-5 log.... Uski chinta matt karna.... Bass parso raat waha pahoch jana.....
Aksh: thik he......
Or fir wo call kaat deta he. Waha Sakshi ko bass kuch words sunayi diye the. Lekin wo kuch bhi samajh payi. Usne firse call recording ko suna, or 3-4 baar us audio ko sunne ke baad Sakshi ko Factory ka naam, or samay pata chal gaya. Ab Sakshi bahot zyada khush thi, usne ye baat Sana or Neel ko bhi bata di. Ab unhe parso raat waha jaal bichana tha. Or aaj ke kaam se Sakshi kafi khush thi.

Khair, dusre din Sakshi ko bahot se kaam the, uska pura din apne kaam nipta ne me chala gaya. Lekin use sab khatam kar ke kuch jach padtal karne us Factory me bhi jana tha. Use apna kaam niptane me kareeb 10 baj gaye the, Sakshi waha se sidha us Factory me jane ke liye nikal jati he. Or wo jagah yaha se kafi dur thi.


Wahi dusri taraf Aksh apne workout karne ne laga tha ke tabhi waha Shahid ajata he.

Shahid: Aksh hume abhi nikalna hoga.....
Aksh: kaha par?
Shahid: factory me....
Aksh: waha to kal jana tha.....
Shahid: darasal mamu ka call aya tha, tumhara phone band tha. Unhone kaha ke maal ki delivery aaj hi ho rahi he.... Shayad abtak ho bhi gayi hogi. Hume aaj hi wo maal waha se udana hoga.....
Aksh: thik he... Jaldi sabko tayar rehne ko bol do....
Fir wo sab tayar ho jate he, Abdul ne jesa kaha tha ke waha zyada log nahi he to Aksh Shahid or Steph ye tino hi aaj ka kaam karne ke liye jane wale the.

Tino apni gadi me bethkar Factory jane ke liye rawana ho gaye. Ab dikkat ye thi ke is waqt Sakshi bhi wahi ja rahi thi, or Aksh bhi.

Kuch der baad ab zoro se barish ane lagi, Sakshi ne apni gadi ki raftar slow kar di thi, or tabhi ek kale rang ki jeep tezi se use overtake karti he, lekin is bich Sakshi ki nazar us jeep ke shishe par padd gayi, or us shishe me koi aadmi apne chehre par kapda bandhe drive kar raha tha, jis se Sakshi ka dimag me Qaatil ki chabi trigger ho gayi or tabhi use us Security Guard ki baat yaad ajati he, ke usne us raat ek Truck or ek Jeep dekhi thi. Ye dekh kar Sakshi ne apni car ki speed tez kar li, usne car ka number dekha, or ek haath se use type kar ke Control Room me bhej diya. Waha se turant reply aya ke ye number nakli he. Ab Sakshi yakeen ho gaya ke ye zarur Qaatil hoga. Is bich Aksh ne apni gadi ko tezi se bhaga diya tha, jis se ab Sakshi ko bhi apni speed badhani padi, Sakshi ne Sana or Neel ko is bare me inform karna chaha, lekin tabhi raste me ek gaddha agaya jis se Sakshi ka mobile khidki se bahar gir gaya. Speed zyada hone se wo janti thi ke ab wo ruk gayi to Qaatil uske haatho se nikal jayega. Isliye wo akeli Qaatil ka picha karne lagi.

Kuch der baad Aksh or baki sab Factory pahoch gaye. Sablog utar kar apne apne haatho me Gun liye aage badhne lage. Sakshi ne kuch dur pehle hi apni Car rok di, or wo bhi chup chup ke aage badhne lagi.

Aksh: andar jate hi Trigger daba dena..... Jabtak waha mojud sare log marr nahi jate, Goliya chalni rukni nahi chahiye.....
Jese hi wo log Factory ke gate par aye, to samne kuch log apna kaam karne me lage the, Aksh or baki sabne andha dhund firing karna shuru kar di, bass kuch seconds me hi waha mojud sare log maut ke ghat utar chuke the. Sakshi ne ye sab dekh liya. Wo ab bhi factory ke gate par chupi hui thi.

Aksh: maal kaha he?
Shahid: mamu ne kaha tha maal andar ke office me rakha hoga.....
Aksh: thik he.... Tum dono jao andar, maal jama kar lena... Me is factory ko tabah karne ki tayari karta hu....
Uski baat par Shahid or Steph andar chale jate he, or Aksh factory ke ek electric room ki taraf badh jata he. Sakshi ne Qaatil ki gardan dekh kar pehchan liya tha, or wo akela ek taraf jane laga ye dekh kar Sakshi ko moke ka fayda uthana sahi laga. Wo bhi chup kar Qaatil ke piche jane lagi. Qaatil is waqt Electric Room me tha, Sakshi uske piche se hi uspar jhapat padi, or Qaatil ka sar diwar par de mara, Qaatil ne bina piche dekhe apni kohni se Sakshi ko mar kar niche gira diya. Wo jese hi piche mudkar Sakshi par Gun point karta he to uske hosh udd gaye, uski ungli trigger se turant hatt gayi, Sakshi ne ek nazar Qaatil ki aakho me dekha, or wo bhi pal bhar ke liye bass tham si gayi, lekin agle hi pal usne Qaatil ki wo AR Gun pakad kar use niche khich liya, or us se Qaatil ludak kar Darwaza se bahar gir gaya. Sakshi ne uthkar us AR gun ka pichla hissa zor se Qaatil ke sar par de mara, Sakshi ko Qaatil zinda halat me chahiye tha. Or uske vaar se Aksh ke sar se khun behne laga. Lekin wo apne aap ko sambhal kar furti se uthkar khada ho gaya, Sakshi ne firse Gun ka pichla hissa Qaatil ke sar me marna chaha lekin is baar Qaatil jhuk kar uske vaar se bach gaya, or usne aage akar Sakshi ke kamar ko pakad kar use zor se diwar par dhakel diya, jis se Sakshi ke haath se Gun gir gayi, Qaatil ne jaldi se Gun utha li, or use ada kar ke Sakshi ke gale par dabane laga, lekin tabhi Sakshi ne apne haatho se use rok liya, is waqt Qaatil pura zor laga kar Gun ko Sakshi par daba raha tha, or Sakshi bhi puri takat se use roke hue thi, lekin tabhi Sakshi bayi taraf hatt gayi, jis se Qaatil diwar se aa laga, Sakshi ne piche se Qaatil ko pakda or use zor se kich kar sidhiyo se niche gira diya. Qaatil ludakta hua sidhiyo se niche ja gira, jis se use kafi chot lagg gayi thi. Sakshi bhagte hue niche agayai, lekin Tabtak Qaatil aage bhagne laga lekin Sakshi ne use pakad liya, Qaatil ne Sakshi ko haath se pakad kar uthakar pith ke bal zameen par gira diya, or khud waha se bhagne ki koshish me lagg gaya, lekin Sakshi ne apne dono haatho se uske per pakad liye jis se wo muh ke bal gir gaya, ab uska pura chehra khun se sann chuka tha, Sakshi furti se uske upar agayi, or piche se uska gala zor se chok kar diya. Qaatil saas lene ke liye chatpata raha tha, lekin Sakshi ki pakad or bhi zyada mazbut ho rahi thi, pehle hi Aksh ka itna khun beh chuka tha, or ab uska gala itna zor se dabne ki wajah se use behoshi sa mehsus hone laga.

Sakshi: akhir kaar agaya na tu mere haath me..... Bata.... Bata kaha Aksh.... Warna..... Bata......
Wo bahot hi gusse me Qaatil ka gala zoro se badaye ja rahi thi, lekin ab Qaatil dhila padne laga, Sakshi ne piche se hi Qaatil ke chehre ka kapda khich kar nikal diya, lekin tabhi Sakshi par koi akar tut pada, darasal wo Shahid tha. Usne zor se dur se hi Sakshi ke upar chalang laga di, jis se Sakshi Qaatil se dur ja giri. Steph ne sabse pehle Aksh ko uthaya or bhagne laga, Shahid firse Sakshi ke upar jhapat pada, usne zor se Sakshi ke chehre par apna ghutna de mara, or use pakad kar samne rakhe table par fek diya. Sakshi bina control ke table par se niche gir gayi, Shahid bhi jaldi se waha se bhaag nikal ne laga. Lekin Sakshi ko bass Qaatil zinda chahiye tha na ki koi or, isliye usne apni Gun nikal kar Shahid par goli chala di, wo goli Shahid ke pith par lagg gayi, or Shahid jagah par hi gir pada, Sakshi uske paas ane lagi lekin tabhi Steph gadi lekar factory ke andar agaya, or usne sidha gadi se Sakshi ko thok diya, jis se Sakshi dur ja giri. Sakshi ko ab kafi chot agayi thi. Or uski gun to kayi dur jakar gir gayi. Tabtak Steph niche utar kar Shahid ko gadi me le aya, or Gadi ko tezi se bahar dauda diya Sakshi me ab uthne ki himmat nahi thi, wo bass waise hi dard me karhate hue padi rahi.

Usne dekha ke us table se landline bhi niche gir gaya he, Sakshi khdko ghasit te hue aage badh rahi thi, or usne landline se apni halat ki kabar CBI takk pahocha di. Or Ab Sakshi bhi apna hosh khone lagi thi.

Sakshi: Ak.... Aksh.... Me.... Me.... Tujhe kuch.... Kuch nahi hone dungi.... Kuch bhi nahi.....

Or bass itna kehkar Sakshi behosh ho gayi.


To Be Continued......

To dosto ye tha aaj ka Update, maal karna kal hi post karne wala tha, lekin kal ghar laut te waqt bike se gir gaya, chot koi nahi lagi bass handle chest me lagg gaya tha. Or jab raat me Update post karne ke liye edit kar raha tha to zyada pain hone laga. Anyways, agla Update jald hi post hoga.

agar update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. agla update jald hi ayega till then stay tuned and keep smiling

Akhir kar aksh aur sakshi ka samna ho hi gaya par dono ghayal v ho gae idhar shahid ko holi v lagi bahot hi rochak upadte tha

 

[Sanju]

Intazar rahega bhai update ka

 

[Qaatil]

Chapter 3 - Qaatil

Update 7

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Word Count: 4420
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Aaj mosam kafi kharab hua pada tha, tez barasti barish ki bunde, har jagah kadakti bijliya or ghana chaya andhera. Raat ke kareeb 10 baje hue the, Sakshi ghar ke darwaze par khadi Aksh ka intezar kar rahi thi.

Sakshi: pata nahi kab ayega ye ladka...... Yaha meri jaan nikli ja rahi he, or wo laat sahab ek call kar ke bata bhi nahi sakte..... huhhh....

Yaha Sakshi gusse me aag babula hue ja rahi thi, ke tabhi gate se Aksh apni gadi me agaya. Use dekh kar Sakshi ka gussa or zyada badh gaya. Aksh gadi se utar kar daud te hue ghar ke darwaze par ajata he, lekin Sakshi ke chehre ke hav bhav dekh kar wo samajh gaya ke aaj uski khair nahi he.

Aksh: k..... Kya hua Sakshi.... Tu... Tu aise kyu khadi he?
Sakshi: accha? Jese tu kuch janta hi nahi na? Subah se gayab he tu, mosam itna kharab ho rakha he, lekin ye nahi ke ghar par apni behen ko ek baar bata du.... Parwah hi nahi he koi tujhe, yaha teri chinta kar kar ke me marr hi jau, tujhe us se kya?
Wo bahot hi gusse me apne dono haath kamar par rakhte hue kehti he. Aksh bechara chup chap uska bhashan sunne lagta he.
Sakshi: ab batayega bhi ke call kar ke mujhe khabar karne ka kasht kyu nahi kiya tune?
Aksh: yaar aaj pure din network ka issue tha, or me to kab ka ghar ajata, lekin kuch zaruri kaam tha to....
Sakshi: zaruri kaam..... Ye Har baar ka bahana he Aksh tera....
Aksh: baba ab maaf bhi kar de.... Or ghar me ane de mujhe....
Wo apne kaan pakadkar Sakshi se maafi mangte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: kya kar lega agar nahi ane diya tujhe ghar me to?
Wo bade ho gusse me Aksh ke bilkul samne akar aakh dikhate hue kehti he. Uski baat par Aksh muskurate hue use barish me khich leta he.
Sakshi: aye Bavlat.... Ye kya.... Kya kar raha he tu?
Aksh: Sakshi tera dimag bahot garam ho chuka he, shayad kuch der barish me khade hokar thoda thanda ho jayega....
Uski baat par Sakshi ki bhi hasi chutt jati he.
Sakshi: Bavlat Kuthla (Pagal Kahi ka)..... Aksh mosam kitna bura tha aaj, tu ek baar mujhe bata deta ke tu thik he.... Me kab se yaha teri chinta ke mare mari ja rahi thi or tu.....
Aksh: Sakshi please itni fikar matt kiya kar meri.... Mujhe is baat ka humesha darr laga rehta he ke kal ko mere saath pata nahi kuch bura ho jaye to, kyu ke me janta hu mujhe kuch hua to sabse zyada dard to tujhe hi hoga... Or me kese tujhe kisi tarah ka dard de du?
Wo Sakshi ki baat bich me kaat te hue uska chehra apne haatho me thamkar kehta he.
Sakshi to bass Aksh ki aakho me is duniya se koso dur ja kar kho si gayi thi. Use apne aas paas ka jese koi ehsas hi nahi raha tha.

"Sakshi...... Sakshi.... Apni Aakhe kholo.... Sakshi"
Dhire dhire Sakshi apni aakhe khol rahi thi, or jese bi sune apni aakhe kholi, to usne apne aap ko Hospital bed par paya.
Sakshi: me.... Me yaha... Kese......
Sana: Sakshi tum us Factory me behosh padi thi.....
Uski baat sunkar Sakshi ko wo sara nazara samne ane lagta he, khas kar Qaatil ki aakhe. Jo sab yaad karte hue wo chup si ho jati he.
Anant: Sakshi.... Kya soch rahi ho?
Sakshi ko itni gehri soch me duba dekh kar Anant use puchta he.
Sakshi: n.... Nahi.... Kuch nahi.....
Anant: Sakshi mana ke tum is mission ko lead kar rahi ho, lekin koi bhi kadam uthane se pehle tumhe ek baar apni Team se bhi raay leni chahiye thi....
Sakshi: I'm Sorry sir.... Darasal mujhe kisi ko inform karne ka koi moka nahi mila, or mene socha ke me kese apne haath aya moka jane du....
Anant: thik he... Lekin agli baar is baat ka dhyan rakhna....
Sakshi: yes sir....

Uske baad Sakshi ko ek hi soch daraye ja rahi thi, or wo tha ke kahi uske uthaye is kadam se Qaatil Aksh ko nuksan na pahocha de. Ab Sakshi nahi janti thi, ke uske is kadam ki bharpayi kese hogi, wo to bass bhagwaan se gid gida kar Aksh ki Salamati maang rahi thi.

Wahi dusri taraf Aksh or Shahid dono hi is waqt behosh the, lekin Shahid ki halat bahot hi zyada critical thi, lekin sahi waqt par use ilaj milne se wo Abtak saase le pa raha tha, ek taraf Aksh ko hosh agaya or tabb use pata chala ke Sakshi ne uska chehra nahi dekha, lekin Shahid ki halat ke bare me jankar use kafi chinta ho rahi thi, is waqt Abdul bhi wahi mojud tha.

Abdul: ab samjhe Aksh Sakshi ko Anant ne CBI me kyu joda? Wo janta he ke tum kabhi Sakshi ko nuksan nahi pohcha paoge.... Or isi me uska jo bhi kaam hoga, usko wo aram se nikal sakta he.....
Aksh: lekin isme hum kya kar sakte he? Kis tarah roke un logo ko?
Jack: hum ek kaam kar sakte he, kyu na hum ek lawaris lash ko Aksh ki lash bata kar, uske bure se bure haal kar ke Sakshi takk pahocha de.....
Aksh: nahi, Sakshi CBI me kaam kar rahi he, wo log foran Forensic Results se pata karwa lenge ke ye meri laash nahi he.....
Abdul: sahi kaha..... Mujhe lagta he Aksh tumhe apne tarike se Anant ko samjhane ki zarurat he....
Wo Aksh ki aakho me dekhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: samajh gaya..... use ab mere tarike se hi samjhana hoga.....


Yaha Aksh ne mann hi mann Anant ko samjhane ka plan bana liya tha, or waha Sakshi bass pal pal bhagwaan se minnate kare ja rahi thi, ke Aksh sahi salamat ho.

Khair, kuch din yu hi bina kisi halchal ke nikal gaye, sabkuch bilkul shant tha, maan sakte the ke ye kisi andhi ke ane se pehle ki shanti he. Lekin waha Rana ki zindagi me bhi alag hi badlav achuka tha, Aksh ko dhund ne ki laakh koshish karne ke bawajud wo haar raha tha, or kahi na kahi ye baat uske ehenkar ko thes pahocha rahi thi. Wahi Aksh to jese din ba din or bhi zyada takatvar hota ja raha tha.

Ab Shahid ki tabiyat bhi thik ho chuki thi, aaj sab log milkar Rana ko sabse badi chot pahochane ke plan par kaam kar rahe the. Unka he plan kuch din baad ka tha. lekin us se pehle Aksh ko ek or kaam karna tha, or wo kaam tha Anant ke hosh thikane lana.

Waha Anant dopehar ke waqt apne ghar kuch kaam se laut raha tha, lekin raste me hi ek gadi tezi se uske dayi taraf se akar use takkar maar deti he. Anant ne car ka santulan kho kar use raste ke kinare par mojud ped se thok diya, or ye takkar kafi zor se hui thi. Anant jabtak apne aap ko sambhalta, Tabtak kisi ne car ka door open kar ke Anant ke gale me rassi ko dalkar use zor se daboch diya, or use ghasit kar gadi ke bahar khich kar niche gira diya. Anant ki nazar jese hi us insaan par gayi to uske hosh hi udd gaye.

Anant: Aksh.......
Aksh: Aksh nahi..... Qaatil
Uski baat sunkar Anant apni Gun nikalne laga, lekin tabhi Aksh ne chaku se ek gehra ghav Anant ke haath par kar diya jis se Anant dard ke mare karhane laga. Aksh ne niche jhuk kar chaku Anant ke gale par daba diya, or bade gusse se use dekhne laga.

Aksh: Aksh ko mare hue to bahot waqt ho gaya.... Jo tumhare samne khada he, wo Qaatil he.... jise na hi kisi par taras ata he, or na hi koi rehem.... To behtar yahi hoga ke mere raste me tum log taang na adao....
Anant: m..... Me... Me nahi, S.... Sakshi kar rahi he ye sab...... kya use bhi....
Wo Aksh ki aakho me aakhe dalkar muskurate hue kehta he.
Aksh: firse yaad diladu ke me Aksh nahi hu, Qaatil hu.... Mere liye sirf mera maksad mayne rakhta he, or us maksad ko pura karne ke liye me kisi bhi hadd takk gir sakta hu..... Dekhna chahoge?
Wo gusse me apne daat piste hue Anant ke gale par chaku ka dabav badhate hue kehta he. Or use chhod kar apni gadi ka door open kar ke ek laash ko Anant ke samne fek deta he. Us laash ke chehre par kapda bandha hua tha, Anant ko kuch samajh nahi raha tha, tabhi Aksh use kapda hatane ke liye kehta he, jese hi Anant ne us laash ke chehre par se kapda hataya, to uske hosh hi udd gaye, Kyu ke ye laash Neel ki thi.

Aksh: agar mera maksad pure hone ke bich koi aya to use zinda nahi chhodunga.... Or ek baar apne pariwar ke bare me bhi sochna.... Kahi aisa na ho, ke apna farz nibhate nibhate tum apne pariwar ko hi kho do.....

Wo aage badhkar apni gadi me beth te hue kehta he, of apni gadi ko ghuma kar waha se chala jata he. Yaha Anant ke hosh Neel ki laash dekh kar udd gaye the, lekin jate jate Aksh ne use pariwar ki dhamki de kar charo khane chitt kar diya tha.


Waha Sakshi or baki Team ko bhi Neel ke marne ki khabar mil chuki thi, jis se sabse zyada jhatka Sakshi ko laga. Wo in sabka zimmedar khudko maan rahi thi. Lekin is sab se uske mann me Qaatil ke liye nafrat or bhi zyada badh rahi thi. Anant ne Sakshi or Team ko Qaatil ke khilaf pakke plan ke siwa koi bhi action lene se mana kar diya.

Kuch din beet chuke the, aaj tha Aksh ki zindagi ka ek bahot hi ehem din. Kyu ke aaj Aksh Rana ki reed ki haddi todne ki firak me tha.

Abdul: Aksh, pehle jis jagah ko Virani Industries ke naam se jana jata tha, aaj waha India ki sabse badi Drug Smuggling ko anjam Rana ke dwara diya ja raha he..... Waha aaj hazaro kilo ka Drugs araha he, jiski kimat 900 crores ke aas paas he, or uska sara paisa Rana ne chukaya he, saath saath Factory me 100 crores ka cash bhi he.... Us cash ko apne paas rakh lena or.....
Aksh: janta hu, sab janta hu mujhe kya karna he.... Rana ko uske kiye ki saza deni he....
Wo Abdul ki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he. Fir Abdul kuch der baad waha se chala gaya, yaha sab log raat ki tayari me lagg gaye.


Waha Sakshi ki aaj chutti thi, wo ghar ke sare kaam khatam kar ke Backyard me bethe kuch soch rahi thi.

Sakshi (mann me): me kya karu? Kabtak Aksh se dur rahungi? Mujhe Aksh ko kisi bhi kimat par us Qaatil ke changul se chhudana he.... Lekin Anant sir ne us incident ke baad koi bhi action lene se pehle unki raay lene ke liye kaha he..... Lagta he ab ye kaam mujhe akele hi karna hoga, lekin me akele kese kuch kar paungi? Uske saath to kuch log bhi he, me akele kese..... Nahi, mujhe ladna hoga... Apne liye nahi, Aksh ke liye..... Aksh, dekhna ab bass kuch hi waqt me tu mere paas hoga... Tu bass mujhe mil ja, me apna pyaar bhi bhul jaungi, me sabkuch bhul jaungi.... hum firse pehle ki tarah hi rahenge.... Me ab apni zidd chhod dungi.... Kyu ke mujhe ab sirf mera pyaar nahi, mera bhai chahiye..... Please bhagwaan mujhe Aksh se milwa do please......

Yaha Sakshi Aksh ko yaad kar roye ja rahi thi, or waha Aksh or baki sab bilkul tayar the aaj raat ke liye.

Raat ke kareeb 12 baje hue the, Aksh or uske sathi ek khali Raste par Trucks ka intezar kar rahe the. Or kuch hi der me unhe samne se 3 trucks ate dikhayi diye. Jankari ke mutabik ye wahi truck the jinme kareeb 900 crores ke Drugs mojud the. Shahid ne apni gadi on kar di, or Trucks ke piche piche le jane laga, sabse pehle Aksh chalti gadi ki window se bahar nikal kar roof par agaya, Shahid ne gadi Truck ke back door ke bilkul paas le aya. Aksh roof se hatkar gadi ke bonnet par agaya or waha se chalang markar Truck ke darwaze se ja latka. Usne ek haath se apne aap ko girne se roka hu tha, or dusre haath se door open karne me laga tha, Door open hote hi Aksh Truck ke andar ja betha, or door ko band kar diya, jis se door automatically lock ho gaya. Yahi chiz Steph or Jack bhi dohra dete he, ab tino truck me Aksh, Steph or Jack mojud the. Shahid or Karl apni gadi ko Trucks se thoda dur hatakar chalane lagte he. Kuch der baad ye sab Factory ke paas agaye the, Shahid ne apni gadi kuch dur hi rok di, lekin wo sab Bluetooth se connected the. Tino truck Factory ke andar dakhil ho chuke the. Waha par sirf 15-20 log hi the, wo sab alag alag truck ke piche akar khade ho gaye or har truck ka darwaza lagbhag saath me hi khul chuka tha, lekin jese hi Truck ka darwaza khula, andar se andha dhund goliya barasne lagi, waha khada koi bhi shaks is is situation ke liye bilkul tayar nahi tha, isliye truck ke paas khade sare log ek saath maut ke ghat utar gaye. Lekin goliya chalne ki awaz se Gate par khade kuch log andar ja kar Trucks par Goliya chalane lage. Ab Aksh, Steph or Jack truck ke andar hi apne aap ko Goliyo se bachaye chupe the, or yahi moke ke intezar me Shahid or Karl the. Shahid ne tezi se gadi factory ke andar bhaga di, or baki Goliya chalane ka kaam Karl ne kar diya. Ab waha sirf 5 log zinda the or wo the Aksh or uske sathi.

Shahid: very Good boys... Aksh, chalo hum dono jakar is factory me Bomb laga dete he... Or tum tino andar se sara cash apni gadi me bhar lo.
All: thik he....
Fir sab plan ke mutabik hone lagta he, waha tino sara cash apni gadi me bharne lage, or yaha Shahid or Aksh Factory me jagah jagah Bomb fit karne lage.

Shahid: Aksh, chalo.... We are done.....
Aksh: ha... Tum jao or gadi tayar rakho, me ye 2 bomb laga kar ata hu.....
Shahid: thik he.....
Fir Shahid niche jakar gadi ko gate ke bahar le ata he. Aksh ne bhi sare bomb plant kar diye the. Wo factory ke bahar akar gate par bhi ek akhri bomb laga deta he. Lekin jese hi Aksh gadi me bethne laga, tabhi Bomb ka remote niche gir gaya. Ab kisi bhi pal yaha dhamaka ho sakta tha.
Aksh: Shahid gadi bhaga do.......
Wo zor se chillakar kar kehta he. Uski baat par Shahid full speed par gadi bhaga deta he. Kuch hi Seconds me waha ek bada sa dhamaka ho gaya. Aksh or baki sab waha se dur to agaye the, lekin us dhamake ki shockwaves ne unki gadi palta di. Gadi 2 gulati kha kar ruk gayi. Aksh or baki sab kisi tarah gadi se bahar nikal aye, sabko bass halki fulki chott lagi hui thi. Unhone jaldi se gadi ko sidha kiya, or use dhakelte hue aage le aye. Ek khali raste par unhone gadi ko chalu hone ke layak thik kar diya or apne adde par akar sara paisa nikal kar andar rakh diya.

Waha Rana ko is hadse ki khabar mil gayi thi. Wo yaha akar apne nuksan ko apni aakho ke samne aag ki lapto me jalta hua dekh raha tha. Zindagi me pehli baar Rana ko itna bada nuksan hua tha. Kuch hi der me ye factory jal kar khak ho gayi thi. Rana akela hi apni gadi lekar kahi nikal gaya. Abdul janta tha ke wo kaha gaya he, or usne is baat ki khabar Aksh ko bhi de di.

Rana apne usi ghar me agaya, jaga uska baap apni jaan gava chuka tha. Andar akar Rana sidha diwar par lage us calendar par ek or cross kar deta he. Waha par usne Aksh ke Maa Baap ko marne ke baad uske pariwar ki puri tasveer lagayi thi, or usme Radha or Santosh ke chehre par cross bana tha.

Rana: or kuch waqt..... Uske baad.... Uske baad is photo ke sab logo par cross bana hoga.... Tabb jakar mera badla pura hoga....
Wo bahot hi gusse me apni num aakho ke saath kehta he.

"Or agar wo waqt ane se pehle hi me tujhe maut ke ghat utar du to?"

Piche se ayi awaz sunkar Rana piche mudkar dekhta he, lekin wah Aksh ko betha hua dekh kar uski aakho me to jese khun behne laga. Usne tezi se Aksh ki taraf badhkar use collar se pakad kar use samne ki diwar par de mara, Aksh ne apne bachav ke liye Rana ke haath pakad liye, lekin Rana ki takat Aksh par bhar padd rahi thi, Rana ne Aksh ka sar apne daye taraf rakhe shishe me de mara, jis se Aksh ke sar se khun nikalne laga. Rana ne Aksh ka gala zor se daba rakha tha.

Rana: chuhe ki tarah chup chup kar mera nuksan karta raha tu..... Or ye soch liya ke tu zinda bachega......
Aksh: A..... Aksh.... Aksh ko to tune kabka... Kabka maar diya.... Me to Qaatil hu, jiska..... Jiska ek hi maksad he..... Rana ki maut......
Wo Rana ki aakho me aakhe dalkar kehta he. Jis se Rana or zyada gussa ho gaya. Usne ek haath se tuta kaach ka tukda utha kar Aksh ki taraf badha diya, lekin Aksh ne uska wo haath pakad kar use zor se piche dhakel diya. Rana firse Aksh par dhava bolne laga, lekin is baar Aksh ne zordar mukka Rana ke chehre par maar diya, jis se Rana ke naak se khun nikal aya. Rana apne naak se aye khun ko haatho me laga kar dekhne lagta he.

Aksh: kyu..... Abtak kisi ki himmat nahi hui thi na tujhe chott pahochane ki?
Uski baat par Rana ne tezi se Aksh ko pakad kar niche gira diya, or uske chehre par kuch mukke maar diye. Or niche pada lakdi ka tukda utha kar Aksh ke sar me de mara, wo firse Aksh ke sar me us lakdi ke tukde ko marne lagta he ke tabhi Aksh us lakdi ko pakad kar Rana ko apne upar se hata deta he. Rana jabtak apne aap ko sambhalta, tabtak Aksh ne wahi lakdi ke tukde se Rana ke sar par vaar kar diya. Jis se Rana muh ke bal niche gir gaya. Aksh uski pith par akar piche se us lakdi ke tukde ke bich Rana ka gala daboch leta he.

Aksh: bahot maza araha tha na tujhe mere Aai Baba, Mansi or uske parents ka marne me? Ha..... Bahot maza araha tha na tujhe..... Bata..... bol.....

Ab Aksh ka gussa apni Charam sima paar kar chuka tha, wo chillate hue Rana ka gala jitni ho sake utni takat se daba raha tha, uski aakho me gussa, badla, or apne pariwar ko khone ka dukh saaf saaf dikhayi de raha tha. Rana tadapte hue apne gale se wo lakdi ka tukda hatane ki koshish me tha, lekin tabhi Aksh hi use azad kar deta he. Rana diwar se tek laga kar lambi lambi saase lene laga. Aksh uske samne jhuk kar uske baal pakad leta he.

Aksh: bol..... Kya kiya tha mere Aai Baba ne.... Mansi ki kya galati thi? Bol.....

Lekin is se aage Aksh kuch karta, ke tabhi Rana ne kanch ke tute tukde se Aksh ke kamar me dhasa diya, Aksh is se piche ja kar gira, Rana uthkar firse uspar vaar karne wala hota he ke tabhi Aksh ne apne dono pero se uska haath jakad liya, or apne haath me mojud lakdi se Rana ke sar me zor se maar diya, Rana ki position is waqt bahot buri thi, Aksh ne uska haath itni zor se jakda hua tha ke Rana dard ke mare chillane laga, Aksh ne use ghutno par ane ke liye majbur kar diya tha, or wo Rana ka haath or zor se jakde ja raha tha, Aksh ne jaldi se uska wahi haath apne haatho me pakad liya, or ek hi jhatke me use mod diya. Is se Rana ki bahot dard bhari chikh nikal gayi, lekin Aksh ab bhi nahi mana, usne Rana ko pakad kar diwar ke kone me uska sar 2-3 baar patak diya. Ab Rana ki bhi halat kharab ho rahi thi. Lekin wo bhi haar maan ne walo me se nahi tha, usne Aksh ki kamar par lagi chot me ungli dhasa di, jis se Aksh ka Rana par se pura control chala gaya. Ab Rana ne ek haath se Aksh ke baal pakad kar uska sar diwar par maar diya. Rana ka ek hi haath kaam kar pa raha tha, jis wajah se wo Aksh par zyada der control nahi kar paya. Aksh ne is baar Rana ke per ko nishana banaya, or uske per ko bhi buri tarah se chot pahocha di. Ab Rana ne to jese haar maan ni shuru kar di thi. Lekin Aksh ne tabhi waha lage TV ko sidhe Rana ke chehre par de mara, Rana ka pura chehra khun se sann chuka tha, or ab to usme takat bhi nahi bachi thi. Uski Gun bhi bahar gadi me thi, Rana ghar ke ek kone me ghayal pada tha tabhi Aksh ne Gun nikal kar Rana par point kar di. Ye dekh kar Rana muskurane laga or sidha hokar kone me tek laga kar apni aakhe band kar di. Lekin jab Aksh ne uspar goli nahi chalayi to Rana ne apni aakhe khol li, tabb Aksh diwar par lage us calendar or tasveero ke paas khada tha.

Aksh: itni asan maut thodi na dunga tujhe..... Ab ye calendar mere paas hoga, jis din tujhe apna badla pura karna he, usi din tujhe itni battar maut dunga ke tu soch bhi nahi payega.....

Wo Calendar or tasveero ko lekar Rana ke paas ake uske chehre ke bilkul nazdeek jakar kehta he. Rana bhi bass use gusse se dekh raha tha, tabhi Aksh ne Gun ko Rana ke kandhe par rakh kar fire kar diya. Rana dard me karhate hue zameen par gir gaya.

Aksh: jitna mujhe tadpaya he, us se kayi zyada tadpaunga tujhe..... Or waqt ayega..... Teri maut ka....
Itna kehkar Aksh waha se nikal jata he. Lekin waha Rana ki aakho me se aasu ane lage the.

Rana (mann me): a.... asli tadap..... Asli Tadap mene.... Mene dekhi he Aksh..... Or mujhe.... Mujhe zinda chhodkar.... Tu.... Tu galati kar raha he....


Waha Rana kafi der takk apna atit yaad kar ke asu baha raha tha, or kafi der baad usne Abdul ko phone kar waha bula liya tha. Abdul use le ja kar uska ilaj karwa deta he.

Or wahi Aksh apne adde par akar us calendar or apne Aai Baba ki tasveer ko diwar par laga deta he. Lekin uske saath ek or photo thi, jisme bahot se logo ki tasveere thi, lekin Aksh ko jhatka tabb laga jab usne apne Dadaji ki tasveer bhi usme dekhi. Tabhi use Aman ki kahi kuch aakhri baate yaad ane lagi.


Flashback:

Surat me jis din Aksh ke Aai Baba Mansi ke parents se mile the, us raat waha sabki lashe mojud thi, Aksh ghar ke bicho bich apne ghutno ke bal bethe ye sab nazara dekh kar roye ja raha tha ke tabhi use Aman ki awaz sunayi di. Wo jaldi se uthkar ghayal pade Aman ke paas chala gaya.

Aksh: uncle.... Uncle aap.....
Aman: A..... Aksh..... Aksh.... Meri baat..... Meri baat suno..... Ye sab.... Ye sab..... Ahhhhhh..... Joshi Kaka..... Matlab.... Matlab tumhare dadaji se.... Unse... Unse shuru hua tha..... Aksh, tumhe..... Tumhe Rishi ki asli maa... Rukh.... Rukhsar ke pati.... Pati ke Qaatil ko dhund na hoga..... sari sacchayi.... Sari sacchayi tabhi samne ayegi...... or Rana..... Rana...... Ahhhhhhhh....
Wo aage kuch bolta ke bhagwaan ne use is duniya se wapis apne paas bula liya. Pehle hi apne pure pariwar ko marta dekh Aksh kuch bhi sochne samajhne ki takat kho chuka tha, usme Aman ki Adhi adhuri baat Aksh ke palle nahi padi.

Present:

Aksh (mann me): to kya Dadaji ko Rana ke Baap ne mara hoga? Or ye silsila ab bhi jari he.... Lekin Abdul se baat kar chuka hu me, na hi wo Rukhsar naam ki aurat ko janta he, na hi Kriti ko.... Lekin Abdul ne to mujhe Rana ke atit ke bare me bhi nahi bataya.... Agar Abdul Rana ka itna khas admi he, to use in sabki jankari honi chahiye thi.....

Ab yaha Aksh sari baato ko kahi na kahi jodne ki koshish me tha, lekin ye baat or bhi zyada ulajh rahi thi. Aksh ne ye to maan liya tha ke Abdul ko Rana ke atit ke bare me kuch pata nahi he. Darasal jab Aksh ne Abdul se uska saath dene ki wajah puchi to Abdul ne ye kaha tha ke Rana ne uske pariwar ko bhi mara tha. Or usi ka badla lene ke liye wo Rana se juda he.

Khair, aage ki baate sochne ke liye Aksh me takat nahi thi, uski chot ka ilaj karwane ke baad wo gehri nind me chala jata he.

Wahi dusri taraf Rana bhi apne kamre me Haatho me saline lagaye tha.

To ye tha aaj ka Update, kafi sare sawal ek baar fir se uth chuke he. Ke akhir aisi konsi baat thi jo Abdul ne Aksh ko ye nahi bataya ke Rukhsar uski hi behen he. Or Aman ki wo baat, ke sacchayi tabhi samne ayegi, jab Aksh Rukhsar ke Pati ke Qaatil ko dhundega. Akhir kon he wo asli Qaatil? Akhir is khel me kon jeet raha he, or kon haar raha he? Kayi sari baate waqt ane takk aise hi raaz bani rahegi. Tabtak ke liye bane rehna.


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Ye storie main ne bookmark me save ki thi parhne ke liye jab ye shuru huwi thi lekin phir yaad he nahi raha aj bookmarks khole to saamne ye storie aa gayi sach me kabile tareef storie hai parhte parhte main ne socha ke iss ko pehle kiu nahi parha lekin ab lag raha hai is ko abhi parh ker galti ker di ab intezar he jan le ga iss ke ek update parhne ke baad dusra update kholne me jitna time lag raha tha wo waqt he mujhe zehar lag raha tha Ab to samjho intezar ho ga he nahi Main itna acha review de nahi sakta jitne ki ye storie haqdar hai bus ye kahu ga speechless har kirdar bohat ache tareeke se paish kia hai ap ne har feeling ubhar ke saamne ayi hai ek ek scene dil ko chune wala tha bohat arse baad aisi storie parhne ko mili hai sab updates parh liye hai iss liye hai ye ek naya reader jur gaya hai ab ap ke saath jaldi jaldi update do waiting for next update

Waiting Qaatil sir

Ok bhai

Nice update

Waiting

Mast update hai

Nice introduction.......

Jhakaasssss

Super

Next update Qaatil sir aap kab de rho ho

Awesome update

lajwaab update bro

Fantastic update. There seems to be only love between the siblings. Agar lust bhi hota toh aur bhi maza aata.







But please continue as per your story.







I am enjoying it. Thanks

Next part

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

sure @Qatil99 bhai aapki story hi itni interesting hai ke banda khud ba khud juda rehta hai...keep writing bro...we readers will definitely support you.

Super update







Ye turning update h







Keep posting

Very good starting and nice script







Full paisa wasool performance.







Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Atulniya Update sirji























Most beautiful scene of this Update ❤

N







Nice start bro

Super se bhi uper update

shandar update

𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐢















𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠















𝐛𝐫𝐨

Lajawab update

Nice

Superb Starting bro keep it up

Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya

Awesome update

Super

Bahut badhiya update bhai

Good name of story.

Me janta hu ke me bht late hu but Congratulations for the story, or kasam se bht hi shandar likh rhe ho, agle update ka intezar he.

Superb update bhai......

Fantastic update..bhai

nice update .waise santosh ne zabardasti science me daal diya aksh ko ..







aur teacher to wakai me ghatiya type tha ,pehle hi din hausla badhane ki jagah taane maarne laga aur maa baap se complain bhi kar di ..







ab aksh class change karna chahta hai isse sakshi naraj ho gayi par aksh ko ghar aane se bura kyu lagta hai .

Bdiya update bhai ji















Update padte padte kab khtm ho jata h pta nhi chalta















Bhai mere hisab se do updates ikathe diya karo to story padne me bhi dilchaspi rhegi chahe do din ke baad update do















Age apki marzi

Nice update..

Aksh does not want to study but he wants to be a successful man, that's a good thing. I have said this before and now I am saying here again that there is no fault of anyone, just need to understand each other and it is not good to have controversy again and again. Sakshi is intelligent and good, taking everyone along and caring. Send that teacher to me, I teach him. If someone says something wrong to Aksh, Sakshi does not like it, reflect her love in anger.







As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.







Thank You...

Shandar Dumdar UpdateAksh Kahin per Bhi galat nahi hai, maa baap ko apne faisle kuch had tak apne baccho per thopna kam kar dene chayiye unhe apne baccho ko moivate karna chayiye saath dene chayiye agar bacche bhatag bhi jaye tho unhe sahi raaste mein lane ka kartawya bhi maa baap ka hai jo ki santosh aur radha mein nahi dekha de rahi hai aur ek taraf yeh zalim zamana to kisis ko bhi chain se zene nahi dete aksar school life mein college life mein, humhe demotivate karna aam baath hogayi log puchthe unhi ko hai zo intelegent, smart, hota hai. Aksh ke saath bhi wahi ho raha hai.







Dekthe hai Aksh ke behaviour mein kya changes aate hai....







Kya aksh apni manzil per pouch payega ya fir yunhi batag tha rahe ga.???







dekthe aage kya hota.....







Waiting for next.....

Shandar Bhai

Khubsurat Update Qaatil bhai ❤







Pyar, dard, kuch karne ka junun sabka kamal combination tha, Next Update ka intezar rahega bhai ❤

For completed 25k views on your story thread.....

hum mera manna hai baap login ko bete ki bhi sunni chahiye wo kya chahta hai kuch usko uske hisaab se bhi aage badhne dena chahiye jabardasti har baat thopna nai chahiye uspar lekin kuch mamle me jaise study me wo kya chahta hai karna kaam kya pasand usko koi bhi subject chota nai hota ok..ab aate hain nibbi par to nibbi na wo chutiya hota hai sayad

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.







Bahut khoob superb

Waiting bro

Intazar rahega bhai







Or kya chapter 2 me inke pyar ki Shuruwat hogi?

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Tu hi hai meri jeene ki ummid ,







tujhse judi hai dil ki preet.







Tu hasen to bahare gulzar ho,







Aur roye to jeena hi duswar ho.















Ho sakta hai bhavishya me akash ko kafi muskilo ka samna karna pade lekin jab tak sakshi ka hath sath fir darne ki kya baat hai.







jaise kahani ka title hai us hisab se akash aur sakshi ka rishta aage kya karwat lega ye to bhavishya ki gart me chhupa hai.















Ab kahta hu ek bhai ke point of view se ki bachpan se abtak ke jeevan ke safar me sakshi ne akas ke liye ek bahan se badhakar maa aur best friend ka hak ada kiya hai.







vaise dono bhai bahan ka prem hai adbhut.







Hum kahani aur lekhak mahodaya ke achchhe bhavishya ki kamna karte hai.







Love you dear brother







Waiting for the next update.

Superb update bro

Fabulous update bro

Good story

Bohot hi badiya update bhai muje laga sakshi Akash se apne pyar ka Izhaar kar degi par nahi kia ab age dekhte h kya hota h

Waiting bro

नमस्कार सर जी।







कहानी का पहला भाग आज पढ़ा।















कहानी की शुरुआत देखकर लगता है कि आकाश और साक्षी के माता पिता राधा और संतोष की किसी ने हत्या कर दी है।















अच्छा साक्षी और आकाश के जन्म में बस एक मिनट का अंतर है और दोनों बड़े शरारती है।







पूरा घर सिर पर उठा रखा है दोनों ने।















लेकिन दोनों भाई बहन में बहुत प्यार भी है।।















कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत अच्छी है।







बहुत जल्द पूरी कहानी पढूंगी।

behatrin story bro....................















mene aapki 1st story read ki thi....kafi acchi story thi















but iss story ka to level hi alag h 1st story se kafi improvement kiya h aapne............















hero k emotions uski feelings or life ke sangharsh ke sath sath uski apne sapne ko pura krne ki lalak ko kafi acche se describe kiya h aapne............















sat hi villen ki darindgi or samaj m jahar gholte drugs k bare m kafi acche se likha h .................















whi ek successful businessman ke roop m aman ko bhut acche se prastut kiya h jisme uska ground se juda hona bhi dikhaya h .......















sath hi apni 1st deal pura nhi hone jo ese ldke ne mna kiya tha jiska ye startup tha usse hone wali becheni or life k prati uski najariya ko bdlne wale pal bhi kafi khubsurat the.......................















overall outstanding story till continued update................















next update ka intzar rahega bro.....................

Bhai next update kab ayega?

Waiting for the update qaatil bhaai please post the next update soon.....

Waiting

Zabardast update bht hi kamal ki story writing. Mansi or Sakshi twins hain or dono aksh ki sisters hain agr ye twist hay to bhai bht bara dhamaka honay wala hay, eagerly waiting for next update bhai keep up the fantabolous work

Baught hi shaandaar update h







❤

Umda

Romance is oozing in this story.

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the story maker

Nice story keep it bhai

Waiting for update....

Bhai thoda fast update do na...waiting nahi ho raha...bahat hi interesting story hai bhai

Qaatil sir apke 25-30 minutes pure ho gye ab to update de do abhi tak ankhe bhi nhi nichi ja rhi jaldi kro bhai

Haha! Thanks a lot bhai!

Aap bas aise hi likhte raho aur readers ko entertain karte raho.

Wishing you good luck!

Story is very good with emotional touches but mansi should be alive

 

[Qaatil]

bahot hi shandar update Rana ke gold ko aksh ne behatreen tarike se churaya hai aur rana ko tagda jhatka diya action se bharpur shakshi CBI officer ban hi gai aur qaatil ko pakdna hi apna maksad bana liya hai jab shakshi ko pata chalega ki aksh hi qaatil hai tab kya hoga ye dekhna hai

Pahle yo aksh ab sakshi v rana ki band baja rahi hai anjane mein hi sahi lekin aksh ne wo pendrive kyo chhoda aur iska asar sakshi par kya hoga ye dekhna hai great upadte bro

Akhir kar aksh aur sakshi ka samna ho hi gaya par dono ghayal v ho gae idhar shahid ko holi v lagi bahot hi rochak upadte tha

Thank You So Much Bhai For Your Precious Reviews
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