Incest LAAL ISHQ - SAFAR BHAI BEHEN KA [INCEST, ROMANCE, ACTION, THRILLER](Completed)

[Jamesleon]

Story Line

Word Count - 1133

To dosto sidha aate he story par, to Laal Ishq me aapko Incest, Action, Thriller or Romance ka ek tagda Rectangle milega jispe Emotions ka ek zhonk bhi padega, ye kahani he Mumbai ke rehne wale Ek bhai behen ki, dosto Inka pariwar koi amir background se nahi he, kehte he na insan ko survive karne ke liye 3 chize chahiye hoti he "Roti, Kapda or Makan" or ye tino chize inke paas thi, or jesa ke hume pata he, Zyadatar middle class family apne baccho ko bas padhana likhana chahte he, use bas ek 9-5 job ke liye prepare karwate he. Is pariwar me bhi kuch aisa hi mahol tha. Maa baap apne bete beti ko acchese padha likha na chahte the. Lekin Character to apne dil o dimag me kuch or hi sapne lekar betha hua tha.

Ab Aap sochiye, Ek tuta dil, khali jeb or bade sapne milkar kya kar sakte he? Ye sab milkar puri zindagi me tufan la sakte he. To bas is tufan me shamil ho jayiye, or dekhte he ye tufan kesa keher dhata he. Jab ye tufan thamega tab uska after impact kya hota he?

CHARACTERS INTRODUCTION: ​

1) Aksh Joshi(Main Character):
Aksh is story ka pehla ehem kirdar he..... Aksh dikhne me koi hero to nahi he, lekin smart zarur he. To hum Aksh ke bare me kuch bate jaan lete he. Aksh ki soch ek middle class ladke se kuch alag he. Usne 12th ke baad apni padhayi rok di thi, kyu ke use padhai me bilkul intereste nahi tha. Uske marks humesha se hi kam rahe the, use bas kisi tarah ek safal business man bann na he, lekin ye itna asaan to katayi nahi tha. Or is wajah se uske parents uske is decision se bilkul khush nahi the. Lekin sirf ek hi insaan tha is pariwar me jo Aksh ko har mamlo me support karta. Wo insaan or koi nahi Aksh ki behen thi. Usne Aksh ko har mamle me support kiya tha. Aksh ek introvert ladka he, use kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi he, wo bas apne me hi khoya rehta. Lekin ye apni behen ko apni sar aakho par bitha ta he, hala ke wo Aksh se thoda darr ke rehti he.

2) Sakshi Joshi(Main Character):
to ye he Aksh ki ek lauti behen Sakshi. Or is kahani ki sabse ehem kirdar. Iska janm Aksh ke kuch der baad hi hua tha. Ye dikhne me bahot pyaari or masum he. Sakshi Abhi Second Year B.cs kar rahi he, Sakshi padhai me kafi hoshiyaar he, humesha se school me top karte ayi thi or ab college me bhi top karti he. Sakshi ke bas kuch gine chune dost he, Sakshi ladko se kam hi baat karti he. Ye Aksh ko humesha har baat me Support karti ayi he. Sakshi ke liye apne pariwar se badh kar kuch bhi nahi he. Waise to Aksh or Sakshi ki acchi jamti he, lekin Aksh me jo badlav aye the use dekh kar to kabhi kabhi to Sakshi bhi darr jati thi.

3) Radha Joshi:
Ye he Aksh or Sakshi ki maa Radha, ye koi padhi likhi aurat nahi he, lekin Radha bas chahti he ke is samaj me uske dono baccho ka naam ho, lekin Radha Aksh ke liye bahot pareshan rehti he. Radha chahti he ke Aksh padhai kar ke ek acchi si naukri kare. Lekin Aksh to iske ulta hi soch kar betha he, jis wajah se Aksh or uske parents ke bich ek tanav bana rehta he.

4) Santosh Joshi:
ye he Aksh or Sakshi ke Pita... Ye ek mehnati or imandar insaan he, ye ek company me chote se level ka kaam karte he. inhone bhi apna bachpan is Middle class soch me hi guzara he, or ye bhi chahte he ke Aksh padh likh kar ek accha insaan bane. Or inka bhi Aksh ke saath tanav bana hi rehta he.



5) Mansi Virani(Main Character):
Mansi dikhne me bahot hi Khubsurat ladki he, apne maa baap ki ek lauti santaan. Mansi apne family ke saath Surat me rehti he. Mansi kafi shararati ladki he, masti mazak karna Mansi ki fitrat he. Lekin ye dil ki bahot hi saaf ladki he. Mansi First Year B.ba kar rahi he ise apne Papa ka Business sambhalne me kafi dilchaspi he. Or aage ja kar Mansi ko hi Uske Papa ka Business sambhalna he.

6) Aman Virani:
Surat ke safal business man, Virani Industries ke malik. ye apni fitness par bahot dhyan dete he. India ke shayad har naamchin logo se inki pehchan he, Apni ek lauti beti se jaan se zyada pyaar karte he. Inki or Mansi ki kafi jamti he. Doni humesha ek dost ki tarah rehte he.

7) Kiran Virani:
ye Mansi ki Maa he, Kiran ek khule mijaz ki Aurat he, sabse ghul mil kar baat karti he. Kiran Mansi ke liye humesha se overprotective Rahi he, or Kiran ek Housewife he.

8) D.G.P. Abhinav Roy:
Abhinav 50 Saal ke ek hatte katte or tandarust Officer he, jab baat dimag se kaam lene ki ho to inke samne shayad hi koi tik sakta he, or inka Intro mene is liye diya kyu ke story me inka bhi ek ehem role hone wala he.


To dosto ye the kuch characters jinke aspas ye kahani chalegi, or kuch bahot hi interesting characters he jo aapko aage kahani me pata chal hi jayenge. Agar intro accha laga ho to like karna or Comment kar ke batana ke Intro kesa laga.

Dusri baat, dosto mujhe yaha story likh kar koi sona chandi to nahi milta, or wo mujhe nahi chahiye, me bas aap sab se ek hi chiz mangta hu, or apne pure dil se mangta he, or wo he aapke comments… please dosto har Update me apna review zarur diya kijiye, me ye nahi keh raha hu ke sirf tarifo ke phool bandhiye, jo aapko lagta he wo mere saath zarur share kare, ke is Update me ye accha laga, is update me ye kami thi… ise is tarah se sudhara ja sakta tha etc…. jis se me apne aap ko or zyada correct kar pau, Or ha.... Is Story ka pehla Update 2nd December 12 P.M. ko Post ho jayega. Or dosto me week me 3-4 Update dunga… i know ye zyada nahi he, lekin kya karu, ab sab kuch back to normal life achuka he, apne kaam waam bhi dekhna hota he, jese hi time milta he likhne beth jata hu, or har Update 2500-4000 words ka hoga, agar me update kam de raha hu to har Update ki Length to acchi khasi rakh hi sakta hu na to bas Stay Tuned And Keep Supporting ❤❤

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𝐰𝐞𝐥𝐜𝐨𝐦𝐞 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤 𝐛𝐡𝐚𝐢

𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐧𝐢𝐜𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠

𝐛𝐫𝐨

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[Jamesleon]

Chapter 1 - The Early Life


Update 1
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Word Count - 3885
Estimated Reading Time: 00:18:00

Kaali andheri raat, khaufnaam Mosam or jungle ke bicho bich bana ek lauta ghar jisme Aksh dard ke mare niche beth kar karah raha tha, or Sakshi use dekh kar apne asu rok nahi paati or Aksh ko sahara dete hue niche beth kar use sambhal leti he.
Sakshi: Aksh hum ek dusre ko humesha se jante hai, mene tujhe Hasta hua dekha hai, khush dekha hai, Tujhe Rota dekha Hai, Akela dekha hai…. Lekin…. Lekin ye sab……ye sab kya hai Aksh?
Wo rote hue Aksh ka chehra apne haatho me thamkar puchti he. Lekin Aksh bina Sakshi se nazre milaye koi jawab nahi deta.
Sakshi: chup kyu ho mujhe jawab do Aksh….. warna…. Warna..
Ye kehte hue Sakshi niche padi Gun ko utha leti he or apne mathe par point kar deti hai. Usne trigger par apni ungli hi rakhi thi ke Aksh apni dayi taraf ki diwar ko dekhne lagta he, Sakshi uski nazro ka picha karte hue us diwar ko dekhti he lekin jese hi Sakshi ki nazar us diwar par gayi to uske hosh ud gaye the. Uski wajah thi ke diwar pe bahot se logo ki tasveer lagi hui thi lekin center me Aksh, Sakshi, Santosh or Radha ki tasveer thi. Santosh, Radha or bahot si tasveero par red marker se cross bana hua tha.
Sakshi sawalo se bhari nazro se Aksh ko dekh rahi thi, Aksh dhire dhire apne pero par khada ho jata he or jese jese Aksh Sakshi ko apni baat bata raha tha waise waise Sakshi ki akho se Aansu tez behne lage the, Sakshi ke haath se Gun niche gir gayi thi. Lekin suddenly waha Goliya chalne lagti he, or is bich Sakshi ki chink nikalti he jise dekh kar Aksh ki dhadkane ruk si gayi thi.

Aksh: Sakshi………

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Hospital ke bed par ek Aurat bade hi dard me thi, lekin use is dard ki koi parwah nahi thi kyu ke us dard ki wajah thi ke wo kisi nanhi si jaan ko janm dene wali thi, kuch hi der me us Aurat ne ek ladke ko janm diya, or uske kuch hi der baad ek pyaari si ladki ko.... Us Aurat ki halat kafi kharab ho chuki thi, Doctor ne dono baccho ko ek towel me lapet kar Aurat ke samne kar diya, un rote hue baccho ko dekh kar Aurat ka sara dard ek pal me hawa ho jata he, uske aakho se asu behne lage the, un baccho ki awaaz to jese uske kaano me shehed si ghul rahi thi, kehte he ke koi maa apne baccho ko rota nahi dekh sakti lekin aise waqt pe un baccho ka rona dekh kar ek maa ke liye wo to jese puri duniya ki kushi hoti he, usne bade hi pyaar se dono baccho ko chuma. Doctor waha se bahar ajati he jaha Aurat ka pati bahot hi bechain halat me yaha se waha chakkar laga raha tha, doctor ko dekh kar wo aadmi uski taraf ajata he.

Aadmi: Doctor.... K...kya hua... Radha....Radha thik he na?
Wo kafi Ghabrahat bhari awaaz me puchta he.
Abtak to aap samaj gaye honge ke, wo aadmi Santosh or wo Aurat Radha thi.
Doctor: dekhiye sab kuch thik he, aapki patni bhi Normal he or unhone do baccho ko janm diya he....
Wo Santosh ke kandhe par haath rakh kar kehti he, uski baat se Santosh ko to mano puri duniya ki khushi mil gayi thi.
Santosh: kya? Th...thank you... Thank You Doctor.. kya me use mil sakta hu?
Doctor: ji zarur....

Doctor ki permission milte hi Santosh andar dod patda he, samne Radha bed par apne baccho ko liye leti thi, Santosh ko dekh kar Radha ke chehre par ek bahot hi pyaari hasi ajati he, Santosh uske nazdeek ata he or apne baccho ka chehra dekh uska rona ruk nahi pata. Wo pehle Radha ke sar pe haath ferta he or uske mathe ko chum kar dono baccho ko apne haath me le leta he. Is waqt is puri duniya ki khushi Santosh ke haatho me thi, use dekh kar Santosh ki aakhe bhar ati he.

Ek din baad Radha ko discharge kiya jata he, Santosh or Radha apne baccho ko le kar apne ghar ajate he. Ghar akar Santosh Radha ko Aaram se bed par lita deta he, or khud uske paas beth jata he apne baccho ke saath. Ab inka ghar koi alishan mehel nahi tha, lekin jitni mehnat se Santosh ne ise banaya tha uske or Radha ke liye to is ghar ke samne alishan mehel bhi fika lage, or is ghar me 3 average size ke bedroom the, ek hall or us se hi juda kitchen tha, or upar bas chatt bani hui thi jaha ane jane ke liye andar se hi sidhi banayi hui thi.

Santosh: aaj sahi mayno me ye ghar khushnuma ho gaya, aaj humara pariwar ban gaya Radha....
Wo muskurate hue Radha se kehta he.
Radha: Sahi kaha aapne... Deva(bhagwaan) bas aise hi humari zindagi me khushi bani rahe.....
Usne haath jodkar bhagwaan se prarthana karte hue kaha.
Radha: waise inka naam waise hi rakhna he na jo humne socha tha?
Santosh: are ha.... Wahi jo humne tay kiya tha, ke ladki hui to Sakshi or ladka hua to Aksh... lekin dekho to Bhagwaan ne dono hi de diye hume....
Wo apne Baccho par pyaar bhari nazar dalkar kehta he. Dono pati patni bas in baccho me hi khoye hue the.

Aise hi din nikalte gaye, dono baccho ka naamkaran bhi ho gaya tha, dono pati patni apne baccho ke saath apni zindagi bahot hi khushi se ji rahe the. Santosh ko to apne job par jane ka bhi dil nahi karta tha, wo to apna mann marke chala jata, lekin waha ja kar wo bas suraj dhalne ka intezar karta ke jab ye suraj dube or me apne baccho se milu. Santosh or Radha ne apne dono baccho ko ek tarike ka hi pyaar diya, dono bacche bhi humesha haste rehte the.

Din par din, or saal par saal kis tarah guzar gaye kisi ko pata hi nahi chala, ab dono bhai behen bade ho gaye the or ab wo 5th class me chale gaye the, wo dono ek saath apne school jate the. Aksh or Sakshi ki jodi pure school me famous thi, Wajah unki pyaar bhari nok jhok thi.



Subah ke 7 baje hue the, Sakshi nind se uth kar apni aakhe mal rahi thi, usne apne side me dekha to Aksh gehri nind me soya hua tha. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko ek shararat sujhti he or uske chehre par hasi ajati he.

Sakshi jaldi se uthkar kamre se bahar jhakti he to Radha kitchen me kaam kar rahi thi, Sakshi dabe paav ghar ke bahar baramde me jati he jaha kapde sukh rahe the Sakshi ne waha rakhe stool par khade ho ke kapde sukhane ke liye jo clip lagate he wo nikal li or jaldi se andar apne kamre me agayi. Sakshi ne us clip ko Aksh ke naak par laga diya, ab Aksh saas lene ke liye apna muh khol leta he, uska muh pura khula hua tha jise dekh kar Sakshi ke chehre par hasi ajati he or wo apni hasi dabaye Aksh ko dekh rahi thi, ab Aksh ko muh se saas lene me dikkat ho rahi thi uski nind tut chuki thi, wo apni naak se clip hata deta he or dekhta he ke samne Sakshi zor zor se uspar has rahi thi.

Aksh: Sakhsi tu bahot pitegi mujhse aaj.... Rukja....
Wo bed se uth kar Sakshi ko marne ke liye aage badhta he lekin tabtak Sakshi kamre se nikal kar apni Maa ke paas bhag jati he.

Sakshi: Aai(Maa) bachao... Ye dekho Aksh mujhe bina wajah tang kar raha he.
Wo Radha ke piche chup kar kehti he.
Aksh: Jhuti..... Jhuti..... Khud mujhe pareshan karti he ye.... Aai tum hatt jao, me aaj is chipkali ko nahi chhodunga....
Wo Radha ke piche chupi Sakshi ko pakadne ki koshish karte hue kehta he.
Radha: Deva(Bhagwaan)...... Pareshan ho gayi hu me tum dono se.... Roz kutte billi ki tarah shuru ho jate ho, din accha nahi guzarta kya tumhara lade bina?
Radha dono ke kaan pakad kar puchti he.
Aksh: ahhh…. Aai, me so raha tha, ye chipkali ne mere naak pe clip laga di thi....
Uski baat se Radha Aksh ka kaan azaad karti he or Sakshi ko halka sa thappad mar deti he.
Radha: kyu karti rehti ho aise harkate? Ha bolo?
Uski halki si thappad se hi Sakshi ki aakho me asu agaye the, tabhi Santosh hall me akar beth jata he.
Santosh: kya hua meri beti ko kisne rulaya subah subah?
Wo roti hui Sakshi ko dekh kar puchta he, Santosh ko dekh kar Sakshi tezi se bhag kar uske gale lag rona shuru kar deti he.

Sakshi: Baba(Papa)..... Aai ne mara..... Mujhe Thappad mara.....
Wo apna gaal sehlate hue sisak kar rote hue kehti he.
Santosh: accha? Abhi Aai ki khabar leta hu me ruko....
Ye kehkar wo Radha ko pukarta he.
Santosh: kyu mara tumne Radha meri beti ko?.
Radha: aapki beti din ba din badmash hoti ja rahi he, or marungi use me.....
Wo kitchen se hi unchi awaaz me jawab deti he, jise sun kar Aksh Sakshi ke samne akar zor zor se hasne lagte he. Use dekh kar Sakshi ko bahot hi zyada gussa ajata he.

Sakshi: bandar..... Aaj ke baad kabhi baat mat karna....
Wo chillakar Aksh se kehti he or apne kamre me bhaag jati he. Uske jane ke baad Santosh Aksh ka kaan pakad leta he.
Santosh: tu kyu pareshan karta rehta he use? Ha?
Aksh: ahh... Baba mene kuch nahi kiya tha, wo chipkali roz roz mujhe nind se jagane ke naye tarike dhund ti rehti he...
Wo apna kaan ko azaad karne ki koshish me kehta he.
Santosh: ab jaldi se tayar ho jao, school jana he...
Wo Aksh ka kaan chhod kar kehta he. Aksh chala jata he tayar hone Aksh or Sakshi ek hi room me the, Radha ne bhi Sakshi ko tayar kar diya tha or wo dono ke liye nashta banane chali gayi, Sakshi ko ab apne jute ki lace bandh ni thi jo use nahi ata tha, Radha to apne kaam me lag chuki thi or yaha sirf Aksh ko hi jute ki lace bandh na ata tha, Aksh apna school bag check kar raha tha, Sakshi uske piche khadi thi.

Sakshi: Aksh......
Uski awaaz sunkar Aksh ansuna kar deta he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Sunn na....
Is baar Aksh uski taraf mudkar dekhta he.
Sakshi: meri jute ki lace bandh do na please......
Wo bade hi pyaar se apne bhai ko kehti he.
Aksh: kyu tu to mujhse baat nahi karne wali thi na?
Wo Sakshi ko kuch der pehle ki baad yaad dilate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: h... Wo....me to....
Aksh: chal ab pehle sorry bol mujhe.... Tabhi help karunga Teri....
Sakshi: sorry dada(bhai).......
Wo apne kaan pakad kar bahot hi pyaar se kehti he. Fir Aksh uske lace bandh ne ke liye tayar ho jata he. Sakshi bed par beth jati he or Aksh apne chote chote ungliyo se lace pakad kar bandhne lagta he, Sakshi Aksh ko dekh kar has rahi thi.
Aksh: ho gaya....
Sakshi: thank You Aksh..... Kutta..... Kutta.... Kutta.....
Pehle wo pyaar se Aksh ko bolti he or use dhakka de kar kutta bol ke apna school bag utha kar bhaag jati he.
Aksh: chipkali..... Chipkali... Tu..... Ab fir kabhi madat nahi karunga teri....
Fir wo bhi apna bag utha kar ghar ke bahar ajata he, jaha Sakshi Santosh ki bike par aage tanki ke paas bethi hui thi, wo Aksh ko ata dekh kar use chidane lagti he. Aksh to use Santosh ke samne kuch nahi kar sakta tha, isliye usne ishare se hi use kaha ki badme dekh lunga. Or wo akar bike ke piche ki seat par beth jata he, darasal Sakshi humesha aage beth kar tez chalti hawao ke maze leti thi.

Radha: aaj tum dono ko me pehle hi bata de rahi hu, School se sidha ghar ana, warna bahot pitoge dono....
Wo dono ko ungli dikhate hue kehti he.
Sakshi: Aai, me to is bandar ko kehti hu ghar chal to ye humesha apne dost ke ghar se ho kar hi jata he.
Aksh: jhuti chipkali..... Aai... Baba hume jate hue jo paise dete he na ye chipkali school chutne ke baad uska gola khane ke liye mujhe bhi apne saath le jati he.
Sakshi: to tum bhi to khate ho na.... Bandar.....
Dono bas ek dusre par galati dal rahe the, dono humesha aise hi ladte rehte the.
Santosh: are bas karo..... Ghar me to kabhi shant nahi rehte, bahar jate waqt to chup raha karo....
Uski baat se dono apna muh fulaye chup ho jate he.
Santosh: thik he Radha, me chalta hu.... Shaam ko ajaunga.
Radha: sambhal kar jana....
Wo muskurate hue Santosh se kehti he, Santosh dono ko school drop karne ke liye nikal jata he.

Radha andar akar apne kaamo me lag jati he, wahi Santosh dono ke school pahoch jata he, unka school dur nahi tha, Santosh apne kaam par jate hue dono ko drop kar deta, or wo dono school ki chutti ke baad saath ghar jate the.

Dono bike se utar jate he, or Sakshi Santosh ko ek tak dekhe ja rahi thi. Aksh bhi wahi ruk gaya.

Santosh: kya hua? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho?
Ispar Sakshi bas apna haath aage badha deti he. Santosh us se tali bajata he. Jis se Sakshi ka muh ful jata he.
Sakshi: tali nahi.... Paise do....
Santosh: ohhhh... To ye baat he, nahi.... Aaj to me tum dono ko pese nahi dunga, tum dono school se late jate ho na ghar? Ab sidha ghar pe jana... Shaam ko milta hu...
Or itna kehkar Santosh aage badh jata he, lekin Sakshi or Aksh ka chehra udas ho gaya tha.

Sakshi: sab teri wajah se hua, bandar kahi ka....
Wo gusse me Aksh ko apne nazuk se hatho se marte hue kehti he.
Aksh: mene kya kiya? Mujhe bhi kaha pese mile?
Sakshi: kya zarurat thi Aai ko batane ki school ke baad gola khane jate he?
Aksh: to fir tune kyu mera naam liya tha?
Ab wo dono school ke gate par hi jhagad ne lage the. Tabhi Sakshi ki dost Neha waha ajati he. Or wo dono ko andar le jati he, Aksh waise zyada kisi se baat nahi karta tha, siwaye Sakshi ke. Recess ke waqt Aksh uthkar apne dost ke saath beth jata he, Sakshi ko is se bura laga. Aksh or uska dost tiffin nikal kar khane lagte he, Neha piche ke bench se uthkar Sakshi ke paas ajati he. Wo dono bhi apna tiffin open kar ke khana shuru kar dete he. Aaj Sakshi ke tiffin me ek chocolate bhi thi, Radha dono ko kabhi kabhi hi chocolate deti thi, Sakshi wo chocolate dekh kar khush ho jati he, ek chocolate hone ki wajah se wo aadhi chocolate Neha ko bhi de deti he. Lekin use or chocolate kahni thi, Aksh ko ye baat pata thi to usne apne hisse ki chocolate bacha kar rakh di. Jab sab logo ka khana ho jata he to Neha apne bench par chali jati he, Aksh akar Sakshi ke saath beth jata he.

Aksh: oye chipkali...... Ye le.....
Wo Sakshi ko apni chocolate dete hue kehta he.
Sakshi: tune kyu nahi khayi?
Aksh: mujhe teri tarah apne daat nahi kharab karne he.... Ye le....
Fir Sakshi us se chocolate chin leti he or khushi khushi kha leti he. Aise hi kuch ghanto baad school ki chutti ho jati he, dono saath me ghar jane ke liye nikalte he. Raste me Sakshi ka chehra us gole wale ko dekh kar utar jata he. Kyu ke aaj to Santosh ne un dono ko paise diye hi nahi the. Aksh ne uska udas chehra dekh liya tha.

Aksh: oye chipkali.... Gola khana he tujhe?
Wo apna chalte chalte ruk kar kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba ne paise kaha diye he?
Wo narazgi se apna muh fula kar kehti he.
Aksh: mere paas thode paise he na... Me tere jese sare pese kharch nahi karta samjhi chipkali....
Sakshi: sacchi?
Wo kafi khush ho kar kehti he. Fir Aksh 1 gola le leta he kyu ke uske paas ek gole ke pese hi the, usne Gola sirf Sakshi ke liye liya tha lekin Sakshi use bhi khane ko kehti he, dono ek gola hi apas me share kar ke kha lete he or jaldi se ghar ki taraf badhte he. Aaj bhi dono ko ghar pahoch ne me late ho gaya tha. Radha ghar ke darwaze par hi ruki hui thi, dono dur se hi Radha ko dekh lete he, dono samajh gaye ke aaj to unki kher nahi. Dono ghar ke paas ajate he or jese hi wo darwaze ke paas aye to wo dono apna muh niche kiye ruke the.

Radha: kitni baar kaha he tum dono se ke school se sidha ghar ajaya karo, ha?
Dono hi chup chaap apna muh niche kiye ruke the.
Radha: bolo...
Wo unchi awaaz me kehti he.
Aksh: Sorry Aai.... Wo.....
Radha: tum dono aise nahi manoge na? Thik he aaj khana khane ke baad tum dono shaam tak padhai karte rahoge, Shaam tak TV bhi nahi dekhoge or agar padhai nahi ki to dono ko maar padegi....
Ye saza sunkar dono ka chehra udas ho jata he. Wo dono andar ajate he or kapde badal kar khana kha lete he or ja kar padhai karne lagte he.

Sakshi: aye Aksh....
Kuch der padhai karne ke baad Sakshi use awaaz deti he.
Aksh: bol?
Sakshi: Aksh koi rasta dhund na, kese hum roz Gola bhi kha sake or ghar ane me late bhi na ho....
Aksh: me to roz kehta hu na, chalte hue gola khaya kar, tu kaha manti he.
Sakshi: are buddhu... Agar itni dhup me chalte hue gola khaye to wo pighal jata he, mujhe waha ped ke niche beth kar gola khane me hi maza ata he.
Aksh: ab ye gola khana bhul ja, me roz roz itni der nahi padh sakta....
Sakshi: ha... Hum Kal se school me se jaldi hi nikal jayenge, fir aram se gola kha kar ghar waqt par aya karenge....
Aksh: akele hi kar tu, me nahi karne wala ye sab.....
Sakshi: are lekin.....
Aksh: mujhe nahi karna bas.....
Sakshi: thik he, mat kar.... Huhhhh...
Or wo gusse se firse apni padhai me lag jati he.

Shaam ko Unki padhai ho gayi tab wo log hall me akar cartoon dekhne lage, kuch der baad Santosh ghar ajata he, lekin uske haath me ek bag bhi thi.
Sakshi: Baba.... Ye kya laye ho?
Wo bahot utsukta ke saath bhaag kar darwaze par ja kar Santosh ke haath se wo bag le leti he.
Santosh: tum dono ke liye hi laya hu, khud dekho...
Aksh or Sakshi kafi khush the, wo dono dekhte he ke bag me kaala khatta or kuch syrups ki bottle thi.
Santosh: roz tum raste me ruk kar hi gola khate ho na? Ab se ghar time se aao or jitna marzi utna kha lo….
Wo andar sofe pe beth kar kehta he, Radha uske liye pani le kar ati he. Sakshi or Aksh dono Santosh ko gale laga lete he, kyu ke unhe ye gift kafi pasand aya.
Aksh: thank You Baba....
Sakshi: ha Baba thank you, ab hum time se ghar ajayenge.
Wo Santosh ke galo par kiss karte hue kehti he.

Radha: aap bhi na.... Ab ye roz roz barf khayenge to bimar pad jayenge...
Wo Santosh ke bagal me beth te hue kehti he, Aksh or Sakshi to bas khushi se apne me hi lage the.
Santosh: are koi baat nahi Radha.... Kuch nahi hoga.....

Fir aise hi din nikal jata he, Raat ko charo milkar niche zameen par beth kar khana kha rahe the, lekin Aksh or Sakshi kafi tezi se khana kha rahe the.

Radha: itni kya ghayi he tum dono ko? Aram se khao...
Sakshi: hmm..... Aai..... hume Gola bhi khana he na...
Wo apne chote se muh me bada sa niwala bharte hue apne fule gaalo se kehti he.
Santosh: nahi.... Raat ko nahi, sirf tum school se aaoge tab hi Milega... Or ha Radha, agar ye dono late aye to Gola bana kar mat dena inhe...
Radha: gola nahi dungi, saza dungi... Pata he na saza?
Ispar dono thoda udas ho jate he. Khane ke baad Aksh or Sakshi Cartoon dekh rahe the, kafi der baad Radha ne dono ko sone ke liye bhej diya.

Sakshi bed par let te hi so gayi, Aksh use dekh kar subah ka badla lene ka plan banata he.

Aksh: chipkali.... Mujhe satati he na? Ab dekh kese rulata hu tujhe....
Or itna kehkar wo uthkar apne parents ke kamre me chala jata he, uske jane ke kuch hi minutes baad Sakshi ki aakh khulti he or wo apne aap ko kamre me akela pa kar ghabra jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh.... Aai..... Baba.....
Wo zor zor se chillate hue rone lagti he, or kamre se bahar ajati he. Darasal Sakshi ko raat me akele sone se dar lagta tha, isliye Aksh or wo ek saath sote the. Uski awaaz sunkar Aksh or uske Parents bahar ajate he.

Radha: Sakshi chup ho ja... Me hu na yahi...
Wo Sakshi ko apne sine se laga kar chup karane lagti he.
Sakshi: bandar.... Kutta.... Janbujh ke gaye na room se?
Wo rote hue gusse se Aksh ko puchti he. Lekin Aksh ko uspar hasi arahi thi, tab Santosh uska kaan pakad kar use daant deta he, ab Sakshi or Aksh wapis apne kamre me agaye the.

Sakshi: bahot ganda he tu.... Kutta....
Wo andar ake Aksh ko gusse me kehti he.
Aksh: thik he, so tu fir yaha akeli...
Or ye kehkar wo bahar jane lagta he, lekin Sakshi use piche se pakad leti he.
Sakshi: sone do na mujhe....
Wo roni si shakal banate hue kehti he.
Aksh: to bol, mujhe nahi satayegi ab se...
Sakshi: nahi sataungi... Please mat jao....
Wo apni bhigi palko ke saath kehti he.
Aksh: thik he so ja....
Or wo dono bed par akar let jate he, Sakshi Aksh ka haath zor se pakadkar kar leti hui thi ke kahi Aksh fir se use akela chhod kar na chala jaye.

Fir dono apni gehri nind me chale jate he or is tarah inka aaj ka din nikal jata he. Thodi si masti, dher sara pyaar or ane wale kal ki khabar liye bina ye sab apni zindagi hasi khushi bita rahe the. Lekin ye sab kabtak chalna tha? Iska jawab to aage mil hi jayega.

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Chapter 1 - The Early Life


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Aaj thi Sunday ki subah, sab log aaj aram se so rahe the, kyu ke aaj hi wo din tha jiska intezar baccho se le kar bade bhi karte he.


Yaha Aksh or Sakshi besudh se soye hue the, or waha Santosh bhi apne kamre me nischint sa so raha tha, lekin Radha to ghar ki aurat he or uske liye Sunday koi mayne nahi rakhta tha, wo to hafte ke saato din bas ghar ko sambhalne me hi lagi rehti thi. W uthkar pure ghar ka kaam karne me jut jati he.

Subah ke 9 baje hue the, Santosh fresh ho kar hall me akar beth jata he.

Santosh: Are Radha.... Ye dono so rahe he abtak?
Wo kitchen me kaam karti Radha se puch leta he.
Radha: ha bas abhi ja hi rahi thi me un dono ko jagane....
Santosh: tum rehne do, me jaga deta hu dono ko...
Itna kehkar wo Aksh or Sakshi ke kamre me chala jata he, jaha Aksh or Sakshi bahot hi gehri nind me, apne haath per ek dusre ke upar dale soye the. Santosh aage akar dono ko awaaz lagata he lekin dono par koi farak nahi padta, dono to ghode bech kar soye hue the.


Santosh: Aksh.... Sakshi.... Utho jaldi..... Aaj me tum dono ko bahar ghumane le jane wala hu....
Uski baat sun kar Sakshi jhat se uth kar beth jati he.
Sakshi: Sach me Baba?
Wo apni adhi khuli ya aisa bhi kehna galat nahi hoga ke aadhi band aakhe le kar puchti he.
Santosh: are me sach keh raha hu.... pehle Jaag jao nind se...
Wo Sakshi ke sar me halke se marte hue kehta he. Lekin Aksh to ab bhi sapno ki duniya me hi tha.
Santosh: Aksh.... Jaldi uthja beta....
Wo Aksh ko hila kar uthane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin wo nakamyab raha.
Sakshi: Baba ye bandar aise nahi jagega... Ek minute....
Or Ye kehkar wo ulte soye hue Aksh ki pith par beth jati he, or zor zor se uske baal khinch ne lagte he.

Santosh: Sakshi.... Ye kya kar rahi he.... hatt ja.....
Wo Sakshi ko Aksh ke upar se hata deta he, lekin tabtak Sakshi ne to Aksh ki nind bigad di thi, Aksh bechara aadhi nind me uth kar beth jata he. Use pata hi nahi tha ke abhi abhi hua kya. Wo to bas apna sar sehla raha tha. Sakshi uski halat par apni hasi daba rahi thi.

Santosh: Chalo ab jaldi se tayar ho jao, fir hum bahar ghumne jayenge.....

Or fir wo kamre ke bahar chala jata he, Sakshi or Aksh bhi jaldi jaldi tayar ho jate he. Puri family milkar breakfast kar rahe the.


Sakshi: Baba.... Aap kaha le kar jaoge hume?
Wo aaj ghumne jane ki baat se bahot khush thi.
Santosh: hmmm... to hum aaj circus dekhne jayenge.... Yaha kuch duri par hi ek circus shuru hua he....
Circus ka naam sunte hi Sakshi or Aksh bahot khush ho jate he.
Sakshi: kya? Circus.... To Chalo na jaldi se....
Wo adha khana chhod kar hi uth jati he. or Santosh ka haath pakad kar use uthane ki koshish karne lagti he.
Radha: pehle pura khatam kar lo... Abhi jane me waqt he.....
Sakshi: mera ho gaya, aap sab jaldi chaliye na....
Wo circus jane ke liye bahot hi utsuk thi.
Santosh: beta pehle pura khatam karo fir hi jayenge warna circus jana cancel....
Sakshi: nahi... Nahi...... Me abhi khati hu.....
Or wo jaldi se niche beth kar apna breakfast khatam karne lagi.

Kuch der baad sab log circus jane ke liye nikal gaye. Pure Raste Sakshi or Aksh kafi khush nazar arahe the. Thodi der me wo log circus pahoch gaye andar kafi khel hue jise dekh Sakshi bahot khush thi tabhi waha ek Aadmi Bandar ka show dikhane ke liye ajata he.


Sakshi: Aai Baba, wo Dekho Aksh waha kya kar raha he? Aksh...... Aksh......
Wo us bandar ki taraf dekh kar Aksh ka naam pukar rahi thi jis se Santosh or Radha ki bhi hasi chutt gayi.
Aksh: chup kar chipkali..... Bhagwaan ne insaan banane ke chakkar me Bandariya bana di.... Huhhh
Sakshi: ha khud to Jese hero hi he na? Bandar.....
Radha: Deva...... Tum dono kabhi nahi sudhruge.... Bilkul Chup... Warna ghar chale jayenge yahi se...
Wo dono ko chup karate hue kehti he. Fir dono hi chup ho jate he or circus dekhne lagte he.

Circus khatam hone ke baad wo log bahar ajate he or waha se market me tehelte hue jane lagte he. Sakshi Santosh ka haath pakde hue chal rahi thi or uske bagal me Aksh ka haath Radha thame chal rahi thi. Aise hi chalte hue Sakshi ki nazar ek gift shop me rakhi Doll set par padti he, use dekh kar Sakshi ke Chehre par ek muskurahat ajati he, lekin Aksh ne ye sab dekh liya tha.


Sakshi: Baba... Mujhe wo.......
Wo Santosh se us Doll set ko lene ki baat karna chahti thi lekin uske bich me hi Aksh uska haath zor se jakad leta he or use gardan hila kar mana kar deta he. Sakshi ko bhi kal ki baat yaad ajati he or wo Doll na mangne ka faisla karti he.

Santosh: Kya hua?
Sakshi: n...nahi kuch nahi.....
Santosh: are.... Abhi kuch kehne wali thi na tum?
Sakshi: nahi to.... Me to kuch bhi nahi keh rahi thi....

Wo kisi tarah baat ko sambhal leti he. Fir wo sab aage badh jate he lekin Sakshi bahot udas ho chuki thi. Aksh ne use Udaas dekh liya tha lekin wo bhi kya kar sakta tha, aaj pura din ghumne firne ke baad wo log ghar ajate he. Ab raat dhal chuki thi or wo sab khana bhi kha kar aye the to sab apne kamre me chale jate he.


Sakshi or Aksh bed par lete hue the Sakshi ab bhi kuch udas si lagg rahi thi.


Aksh: Kya hua Sakshi?
Wo Sakshi ko udas sa dekh kar puch leta he. Lekin Sakshi bas Naa me gardan hilati he.
Aksh: Mujhe pata he, tujhe wo Doll set chahiye tha na?
Sakshi: ha.....
Aksh: Sorry Sakshi, Meri wajah se tu....
Sakshi: nahi.. nahi.. teri wajah se kuch nahi hua, me samajh gayi hu ke paise kamane ke liye bahot mehnat karni padti he, or Baba bhi bahot mehnat karte he, to me bhi abse Baba ke paas faltu ki zidd nahi karungi....
Aksh: dekhna Sakshi, jab me paise kamane lagunga na, to tujhe waisi 100 Doll set la kar dunga.....
Wo uthkar beth te hue Sakshi ka haath thamkar kehta he, jis se Sakshi ke Chehre se udasi hawa ho jati he, fir dono kuch baate karte hue so jate he.

Aise hi ek ke baad ek din nikalte ja rahe the, Aksh roz Santosh ne diye paise bina kharch kiya gullak me daal diya karta tha, wahi Sakshi bhi use bina pata chale apne paise Aksh ke Gullak me daal ti thi, use bahot mann karta tha ke wo un paiso se apne liye chocolate, toffee kharide lekin wo har roz apna mann maar kar paise Aksh ke gullak me daal diya karti thi, or pata nahi kyu lekin Sakshi ko aisa karne se bahot hi khushi ho rahi thi.


Lekin Dusri taraf Aksh din ba din gehri soch me duba ja raha tha, uska behavior bhi kafi change ho chuka tha, Aksh ab padhai me bhi piche padne laga, jis se uske parents ne use kafi danta bhi, lekin Aksh to is dal dal me fase hi ja raha tha.


Aise hi Kuch mahine nikal gaye, ab 2 din baad Raksha Bamdhan tha, raat ke kareeb 11 baje hue the Sakshi to gehri nind me thi lekin Aksh ko nind nahi arahi thi, wo uthkar beth jata he or uske dimag me pata nahi kya agaya, or wo uthkar apna Gullak haath me le leta he. Gullak ab kafi wazan daar ho chuka tha jis se Aksh ko kafi khushi hoti he.

Aksh(man me): isme to kafi paise jama ho gaye he.... lekin ab bhi itne paise nahi he ke me is se cycle le saku...
Wo nirasha se apne mann me soch raha tha.
Aksh(mann me): kya me Gullak ko khol kar dekh lu kitne paise jama ho gaye he? Ha chalo dekh hi leta hu.

Or wo Gullak ko kholne ka faisla karta he, jese hi usne niche se gullak khola to usme kafi paise jama ho gaye the, Aksh ek ek karke sare paise gin leta he lekin ginti khatam hote hi use herani ho jati he. Kyu ke paise uske ummid se zyada the.

Aksh(mann me): ye kya? Ye to zyada he, jabse mene Gullak me paise dalna shuru kiya he tabse to isme itne paise nahi hone chahiye the....
Wo Gullak me zyada paise pane par thoda chonk gaya tha.
Aksh(mann me): ye kese......
Wo kuch soch hi raha tha ke uski nazar Sakshi par padti he. Or use kuch waqt pehle ki baat yaad ajati he. Jab Aksh Sakshi se puchta he kya uske paas toffee lane ke liye paise he, to Sakshi mana kar deti he or kehti he ke usne to aaj un paise se Chocolate kharid li, lekin Sakshi school se ane ke baad pure din ghar se bahar gayi hi nahi thi, jis se Aksh ko kuch ajib laga lekin tab usne is baat par zyada dhyaan nahi diya tha. Lekin ab Aksh ko kuch gadbad lag rahi thi.

Aksh(mann me): kahi ye Sakshi bhi to mere Gullak me paise nahi dalti? Kya me use abhi puch lu? Nahi kal subah puch leta hu....

Or wo itna sochte hue sare paise Gullak me wapis daal deta he or apni soch me duba gehri nind me chala jata he.


Dusri din Aksh school jane se pehle apne kamre me Sakshi se is bare me puchta he.

Aksh: Sakshi.... Kya tu tere paise bhi is Gullak me dalti he?
Uske sidhe sawal se Sakshi thoda hadbada jati he.
Sakshi: n...nahi..... M..me kyu Tere Gullak me paise dalu.... Cycle to tujhe leni he na?
Aksh: Lekin.....
Sakshi: ab jaldi chal.... Baba ruke he bahar.....
Aksh aage kuch kehta Ke Sakshi itna bol ke apna school bag utha kar bahar bhag jati he.

Ab Aksh tehra ek chota baccha use kuch samajh nahi aya or usne bhi is baat ko chhod diya.


Sakshi: Baba, Kal Raksha Bandhan he na, to aap is bandar ki taraf se mujhe kya tofa dene wale ho?
School jate waqt Bike par aage bethi Sakshi Santosh se puch ti he.
Santosh: are ye kya baat hui bhala? Tofa aise batate thodi na he....
Sakshi: batao na Baba....
Santosh: bilkul nahi bataunga..... Kal hi dekh lena...
Or aise hi bate karte hue wo school pahoch jate he. Apni class me bethe hue Aksh kuch soch raha tha.

Aksh(mann me): humesha Raksha Bandhan par Baba hi Sakshi ko Gift dete he.... Is baar to mere paas kafi paise he.... Kya me hi Sakshi ko Gift de du? Haa.... Ye thik hoga, lekin use kya du me? Are haa... Sakshi ko ek baar wo Doll set pasand aya tha na... Wahi le kar de deta hu use.... Ha ye thik he...
Ye sab sochte hue uske chehre par hasi ajati he, Sakshi use is Tarah hasta dekh leti he.
Sakshi: Aye Bandar..... Kyu has raha he?
Wo Aksh ko kohni se marte hue puchti he.
Aksh: n....nahi kuch nahi.....
Wo hadbadate hue jawab deta he tabhi class teacher andar ajati he.

School se ghar jane ke baad Sab khana kha lete he, aaj bhi Sakshi ne chupke se Aksh ke Gullak me Paise Daal diye. Aaj Aksh Santosh ka besabri se intezar kar raha tha. Sham ke 5 baje Santosh ghar ajata he Aksh ko us se baat karni thi lekin Sakshi bhi wahi thi to wo kuch baat nahi kar paya, kuch der baad Radha or Santosh apne kamre me chale gaye, Sakshi TV dekhne me gum thi, Aksh ne moke ka fayda uthaya or chupke se Santosh ke paas chala gaya.


Aksh: Baba..... Baba.... Chaliye jaldi.....
Wo tezi se kamre me akar Santosh ka haath pakad kar use khichte hue kehta he.
Santosh: are kya baat hui? Batao to sahi....
Aksh: Baba kal Raksha Bandhan he to Sakshi ke liye Gift lene chalte he na....
Santosh: ha wo me le aunga..... Kuch der baad tumhare Mama ko lene ke liye ja raha hu na station tab ate hue le aunga Sakshi or Anu (Mama ki Beti) ke liye gift....
Aksh: nahi Baba.... Aap nahi laoge me launga...
Radha: kya matlab tum laoge?
Wo dono Aksh ki baat ko samajh nahi pate.
Aksh: wo Baba mene na Gullak me paise jama kare he, to me un paiso se hi Sakshi ke liye gift lunga.... Or aap Sakshi ko mat batana....
Uski baat sunke Dono heran ho jate he, wo dono hi apne bete par naaz kar rahe the.
Radha: bada samjhdar ho gaya mera beta to....
Wo Aksh ka matha chumkar kehti he. Fir Aksh Santosh ke saath market chala jata he or jaha Sakshi ko wo Doll set pasand aya tha usi shop se Doll set kharid leta he. Uske paas ab bhi kuch paise bache hue the, jis se wo Anu ke liye bhi ek Gift le leta he. Fir wo dono ghar ajate he, Santosh ne uska Gift apne kamre me rakh diya tha, thodi der baad wo Aksh ke Mama or Mami ko lene station chala jata he. Jab Santosh unko le kar ghar aya to sab bahot khush ho gaye.


Sakshi: Mama.... Mami......
Wo Dono ko darwaze par dekhte hi unki taraf dod padi or ja kar unke gale lag gayi. Aksh bhi jaldi se unke paas ajate he.
Rohan: are meri jaan..... kese ho tum dono?
Wo dono ka sar sehla te hue kehta he.
Sakshi: aap kabhi ate kyu nahi ho mama humse milne?
Wo apna muh fula kar puchti he.
Rohan: are sorry beta.... lekin ab agaya hu na, or kuch din hum yahi rehne wale he.
Wo Sakshi ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he. Jise sunkar Sakshi or Aksh kafi khush ho jate he.

Fir sablog milkar khana kha lete he, khana hote hi Anu, Sakshi Or Aksh khelne lagte he.

Radha: chalo baccho ab sone jao..... Bahot der ho chuki he....
Sakshi: Aai... Khelne do na thodi der....
Anu: Ha Bua khelne dijiye na..... Please...
Radha: are tum ab kuch din yahi ho na to aram se khelna... Itni raat ho gayi he ab jao, Subah jaldi uthna he sabko...

Or wo tino ko andar Sone ke liye bhej deti he. Aksh, Sakshi or Anu ek kamre me soye the, ya ye kehna galat nahi hoga ke kamre me dhum macha rahe the. Kafi der khel kud karne ke baad tino so hi jate he.

aaj Raksha Bandhan ka din tha, subah subah pure ghar me in tino baccho ka hi shor macha hua tha, tino ek saath khel rahe the.

Radha: Anu, Sakshi..... Ab Raakhi Bandhogi bhi ya pura din bas khelna hi he?
Anu: Bua Aksh kaha bhaga ja raha he, khelne do na....
Radha: tum logo ka khelna to kabhi khatam hi nahi hoga... Chalo jaldi pehle Raakhi bandho fir khel lena....

Or fir wo sab hall me ikhatta ho jate he. Radha apne bhai ko raakhi bandh ti he, Anu or Sakshi Aksh ko Raakhi bandh dete he.

Sakshi: Baba.... Mera Gift...
Santosh: beta me to Gift laya hi nahi....
Uska jawab sun kar Sakshi ka chehra hi utar jata he. Uske aakho se bas Asu ana reh gaya tha.
Sakshi: Kyu nahi laye?
Santosh: are mene to tumhare liye gift lane wala tha, lekin Aksh ne mujhe mana kar diya....
Ab Sakshi Aksh ko kha jane wali nazro se dekhne lagti he.
Santosh: Are Are.... Aise mat dekho use, mera matlab he ke Tumhare liye Gift me nahi laya, lekin Aksh ne khud tumhare liye Gift liya he.

Is baat par Sakshi thoda heran si reh jati he, Tabhi Radha us Doll set ko Aksh ke paas de deti he.

Aksh: Ye le tera Gift...
Wo Gift Sakshi ke haath me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi nasamjhi ki halat me hi us se Gift le leti he or use kholne lagti he, jese hi Wo Doll set Sakshi ke samne aya to uske hosh ud jate he. Doll set dekh kar Uske chehre par bahot hi pyaari Muskurahat ajati he. Wo jaldi se us Box ko open kar ke Dolls apne haatho me le leti he. Or ye Doll set pane ki khushi me wo ye bhul jati he ke akhir ye Gift Aksh kese laya. Anu apne Gift ke liye Aksh ko thank you kehti he or fir Santosh or Radha ko.

Radha: beta hume Thank You mat kaho, ye Gift Aksh apne paiso se laya he.
Ab ye baat Sunkar Sakshi thoda alert si ho jati he.
Rohan: matlab?
Radha: are Aksh khud paise bacha kar use jama karta gaya, or kal usne khud Sakshi or Anu ke liye Gifts kharide.

Sacchayi samne ate hi Sakshi ka dil to jese tut sa jata he. Uski Akho me Aansu ajate he. Or wo Doll set ko wahi niche Dalkar Aksh ki taraf badhti he or use khinch kar thappad marti he. Sakshi ki is harkat par sab heran se reh gaye the, Aksh apna gaal par haath rakh ke Sakshi ko dekhe ja raha tha.


Aksh: Kitna bura he Aksh tu..... In paiso se to apne liye cycle lene wala tha na? Fir kyu kharch kiye tune apne paise?
Wo rote hue bahot hi Chillakar Aksh se puch rahi thi, Aksh ke paas is sawal ka koi jawab nahi tha.

Radha: Sakshi ye kya tarika he….
Wo Sakshi ko piche khinch te hue kehti he. Lekin Sakshi to bas roye ja rahi thi.
Sakshi: mujhe nahi chahiye koi Gift…. Le jao ise yaha se…
Wo chillate hue kehti he or us bikhre doll set ko laat maar ke bhag kar apne kamre me chali jati he. Radha or baki sab use chup karane ke liye andar chale jate he, bahar Aksh akela khada tha, wo aage badh kar us Doll set ko uthata he, us box me se Sari Dolls or baki sab niche gir gaya tha. Aksh sabkuch samet kar Box me daal deta he, or Box ko apne Parents ke kamre me rakh deta he, or khud ghar se bahar chala jata he.


Yaha ghar me sabne Sakshi ka rona band karwa diya tha.

Radha: beta aise gussa hona acchi baat nahi he, Aksh ne itne pyaar se tunhare liye gift layi wo bhi apne paise bacha kar.. or tum ne aisa kiya, use kitna bura laga hoga ab.

Wo Sakshi ke bagal me beth kar uske sar pe haath ferte hue Sakshi ko samjha rahi thi. Sakshi ko bhi ab realize ho gaya ke usne galat kiya.

Sakshi: Sorry Aai……
Wo apne kaan pakad kar Radha se mafi mangti he.
Radha: mujhse nahi, Aksh se maafi mango… or itne pyaare tofe ke liye use Thank You bhi kaho….
Sakshi: thik he Aai… me abhi Aksh se Sorry bol deti hu…
Or ye kehkar wo bahar Hall me ajati he, lekin Aksh to waha tha hi nahi, sablog bhi uske piche piche hi hall me agaye the.

Sakshi: Aksh….. Aksh…..
Wo kabse Aksh ko pukarti he lekin Aksh to ghar ne hi nahi tha.
Radha: kaha chala gaya ye ladka? Aap dekhiye na jaldi se bahar use..
Wo ghabrayi si Santosh se kehti he.
Santosh: are tum ghabrao mat… me dekhta hua use….

Fir Santosh or Rohan Aksh ko dekhne ke liye bahar ajate he. Sakshi ko ab darr lag raha tha ke Aksh kaha chala gaya.


Dusri taraf Aksh ghar se nikal kar bas Raste se guzar raha tha.


Aksh(mann me): yaar mene to socha Sakshi wo Gift dekh kar khush ho jayegi… lekin usne to mujhe hi thappad maar diya…. Pagal ladki he ek number ki….. huhhh….. koi baat nahi uska gussa shant hone ke baad us se baat karunga….

Wo bas aise hi sochte hue chal raha tha or chalte chalte wo main Road par agaya, tabhi waha ek Supercar ajati he, Aksh to us car ko bas dekhta hi reh gaya. Tabhi wo car samne ke Car Showroom me ruk jati he. Aksh jaldi se waha chala jata he. Waha ja kar wo gate se hi us car ko dekhne lagta he, us car ko dekhte waqt Aksh ke chehre par kafi khushi nazar arahi thi. Lekin tabhi piche se 2 log guzarte he wo Aksh ko dekh rahe the.

Aadm: are ye ladke ko to dekh…. Aise gaadi ko dekh raha he jese ke ye car wo kharidne wala he hahahah….
Wo apne saath chal rahe aadmi se kehta he or dono hi Aksh par Hasne lagte he. Aksh ka dil to is se tut sa jata he. Fir wo us jagah se nikal jata he or apne Ghar ke raste chal padta he. Aadhe Raste me Santosh or Rohan use dikhte he. wo dono jaldi se Aksh ke paas ajate he.


Santosh: Aksh…. Kaha chala gaya tha beta?
Wo Aksh ke sar pe haath ferte hue puchta he.
Aksh: Baba me to wo apne Dost Soham ke paas gaya tha lekin wo to ghar pe nahi tha…
Santosh: kam se kam bata kar jana chahiye tha na beta…
Wo Akah ka chehra apne hatho me thamkar kehta he.
Aksh: Sorry Baba….
Wo apni nazre jhuka kar kehta he.
Rohan: ab chalo jaldi ghar…. Wo sab chinta kar rahe honge….
Fir wo dono Aksh ko le kar ghar ajate he.

Ghar pe Sakshi to apni nazre darwaze par hi tikaye ruki thi. Jese hi Aksh use ata dikhayi deta he to wo Dod kar Aksh ke paas jati he or uske Gale lag jati he.


Sakshi: Sorry Dada…… Sorry….. lo tum bhi mujhe maro…..
Wo rote hue Aksh se alag hoti he or uska haath pakad kar apne gaal par marne lagti he.
Aksh: are ye kya kar rahi he tu?
Wo Sakshi se apne haath chuddate hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Sorry Aksh…. Tum gussa to nahi ho na mujhpar?
Aksh: Nahi to…. Me kyu gussa honga….. or ek minute ruk yahi….
Itna kehkar wo apne parents ke kamre me chala jata he or us Doll set ko le kar bahar Sakshi ke samne aake khada ho jata he.


Aksh: hmm… ye le… ab firse fekna mat ise….
Wo Doll set ko Sakshi ke hatho me dete hue kehta he. Sakshi us se Doll set le leti he, or wo kafi khush bhi lag rai thi.
Sakshi: Thank You Dada….
Wo Aksh ko gale laga kar kehti he.

Fir sab kuch pehle jesa Normal ho jata he. Sakshi or Anu to Aksh ne di Doll set ke saath khelte thak hi nahi rahe the.

Raat ko Sablog so rahe the. Lekin Aksh ko nind hi nahi arahi thi, uske dimag me bas us Aadmi ki hi baate ghum rahi thi. Aksh ko us baat se hurt bhi hua tha, wo bas soch raha tha ke use bhi waise hi car leni he. Kafi der tak karwate badalne ke baad uski aakh lag hi jati he.


Or is tarah se inka din nikal jata he. jaha Aksh ke dimag se pehle wali chiz gayi bhi nahi thi ke ab us aadmi ki baat bhi Aksh ke dil o dimag me chap si gayi thi. Kuch samay baad jab Aksh ka birthday tha, tab Santosh ne use Cycle gift lar di, lekin pehli baar Aksh ko Santosh ne diya gift pasand nahi aya. Kuch mahino baad dono ka result tha, Aksh ke grades kafi kam ho chuke the, jis se Santosh or Radha ne use danta bhi lekin ye sil sila kuch saalo tak jari raha, har saal Aksh ke grades kam ate, har Saal Sakshi padhayme hoshiyaar ho rahi thi. Aksh ab kafi chup chup sa hone laga tha, ab Aksh or Sakshi 10th me chale gaye, or ab unka results tha. Dekhte he inka results aage kya mod lata he.


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Chapter 1 - The Early Life

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Aaj ka din har students ke liye bahot hi bhari din hota he, kyu ke aaj 10th ke results ane the, Sakshi or Aksh ke bhi aaj haal bura tha, Ek Taraf Sakshi soch rahi thi ke use kitne percentage milenge, wahi Aksh to soch raha tha ke wo pass bhi hoga ya nahi....

Sakshi or Aksh is waqt Aksh ke kamre me the.
Sakshi: mujhe bahot hi darr lag raha he Aksh.... Kitne percentage milenge mujhe?
Wo kamre me yaha se waha chakkar lagate hue Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: ye sahi he..... tujhe percentage ki chinta ho rahi he, yaha pe mere pass hone ke Chance nahi he....
Sakshi: pura saal to kehti rahi na me tujhse padh le padh le... Lekin nahi... Baat kaha manega tu?
Wo Aksh ke samne gusse me apne kamar pe dono haath rakh kar kehti he.
Aksh: ab chhod bhi ye baat.... Or waise bhi mene soch liya he ke me ab aage padhai nahi karne wala...
Or wo uthkar samne ki table ki taraf chala jata he or table par rakhi bahot si books me se ek book nikal kar use padhne lagta he. Ab yaha Aksh ko padhai me bilkul mann nahi lagta tha, lekin use Self Development, Inspirational, Spiritual Books padhna pasand tha.

Uski baat sunkar Sakshi heran si reh jati he.

Sakshi: mere samne bol diya tune wo thik he, galati se Aai Baba ke samne mat bol dena.. bewajah pitt jayega nahi to tu...
Aksh: to usme konsi badi baat he.... Zindagi to waise bhi pitt hi rahi he, Aai Baba bhi haath saaf kar lenge....
Wo ek Sarcastic hasi ke saath kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh tu kyu aisi baate karta rehta he?
Wo aage badhkar Aksh ke kandhe par haath rakh kar kehti he.
Aksh: yaar mera bilkul mann nahi karta padhai karne ka.... Ghutan si hoti he mujhe school ki kitabe padhne se....
Wo apne haath me jo book thi use table par rakh kar badi hi frustration me akar kehta he.
Sakshi: accha? To ye kitabe to kitni shok se padhta he tu....
Aksh: in dono kitabo me zameen asmaan ka fark he Sakshi.... Teri wali kitabe sirf or sirf padhai tak hi simit he, lekin ye... Ye wali kitabe zindagi ke daav pej sikhati he....
Sakshi: Deva.... Tu or teri baate....
Wo apne mathe par haath marte hue kehti he.
Sakshi: ab ye sab chhod or college me to acche se padhai kar lena...
Aksh: dekhte he....

Or aise hi kuch der tak dono wahi bethe rahe, kuch der baad Results ka time ho gaya tha, sab log bahar hall me jama the, Sakshi apni sari details daal kar page load hone ka intezar apne haath jodkar kar rahi thi, jese hi page load hua, to sabke chehre par khushi ajati he, wajah sirf ye nahi thi ke wo pass ho gati, balki use 94% mile the. Aksh bhi uske liye bahot khush tha lekin ab baari Aksh ki hi thi, jese hi Page load hota he to sabke chehre par jo khushi thi wo ek pal me hawa ho jati he or sab kafi nirash se khade the. Darasal Aksh pass to ho gaya tha lekin use sirf 38% mile hue the.

Santosh: Are.... Tum sab udaas kyu ho gaye? Bhai sahab ne passing mark se pure 3% zyada number laye he...
Wo Aksh ko taana marte hue kehta he.
Sakshi: Baba....
Santosh: Bolu De Mala (Mujhe bolne Do)
Wo Sakshi ko haath dikhate hue kehta he. Jis se Sakshi bhi chup ho jati he. Aksh to bas apna sar jhukaye khada tha, or Santosh uske paas ajata he.

Santosh: Pata nahi konsi konsi kitabe padhta rehta he din bhar.... Beta agar thodi si padhai kar li hoti to kam se kam muh dikhane layak number to ajate tere.....
Aksh: Baba ye School wali kitabe to bas insaan ko khacchar bann na sikhati he, bas ye sikhati he ke ek accha khacchar kese bane... Me jo kitabe padhta hu na wo ye samjhati he ke in khaccharo ki race se alag kese ho...
Wo Santosh ki akho me akhe dale bina dare apni baat samne rakhta he.
Santosh: jin logo ki kitabe padhta he na tu... Wo bass kahaniya he, asli Zindagi nahi....
Aksh: sahi kaha aapne... Or wahi log ye bhi batate he ke apni khud ki kahani kese likhe....
Santosh: beta is kahani ko chalaye rakhne ke liye society ke saath chalna hota he.... Warna use log Pagal ghoshit kar dete he.
Aksh: huhhh... Society.... Baba jab me is society par nazar dalta hu na, to mujhe apne charo taraf jhut dikhta he, sab nakli he, sablog acting karte he, ek natak chal raha he, ek script he jo kayi saal pehle koi likh kar chala gaya, wo darr ki script, wo maze marne ki script, sirf paise ke piche bhagne ki script... Or jab me unki script ke hisab se nahi chalta to ye log mujhe Pagal kehte he, me inki script ke hisab ss nahi chalunga, meri kahani, meri script me khud likhunga....
Santosh: huhh.... Pagal ho gaya he tu....
Wo apni gardan ko hilate hue kehta he.
Aksh: haha.... Ek junoon he, ek sukoon he, ek Ishq he, ek Muhabbat he... Jise aap sab pagalpan keh rahe ho, or sirf aap hi nahi agar ye puri duniya ke 700crore log akar bhi mujhe kahenge na ke tu pagal ho gaya he, me fir bhi apne Pagal pan ko khatam nahi hone dunga...
Is baar Santosh ko bahot gussa ajata he, lekin Aksh us se ek or aisi baat karne wala tha jis se Shayad Santosh apna aapa kho bethe...
Aksh: or waise bhi mene soch liya he ke mujhe ab padhai nahi karni.....
Uski baat sunte hi Santosh use kas kar thappad laga deta he, aaj pehli baar ye din agaya tha jab Santosh ko apne baccho par haath uthana pada.

Uske thappad marte hi Radha aage akar Santosh ko rok deti he or use thoda piche karti he, Aksh apna sar jhukaye khada tha Sakshi uske paas akar Aksh ka haath tham leti he.

Santosh: Suna..... Suna kya keh raha he ye? Padhai nahi karni? To kya karna he tujhe? Bata?
Wo bahot hi gusse me unchi awaz me Aksh se puchta he.
Radha: aap shant ho jayiye....
Santosh: are kese shant ho jau? Kese? Aye din ye ladka bigadne laga he....
Radha: aap chup ho jayiye me samjhati hu use.... Aap chaliye andar...
Fir Wo Santosh ko andar kamre me le jati he.

Sakshi: Aksh tujhe kaha tha na mene Aai Baba ke samne ye baat mat kar fir kyu tune meri baat nahi suni?
Aksh: jane bhi de na Sakshi.... Thappad hi to khaya he..
Wo ek Sarcastic hasi ke saath kehta he.
Sakshi: Aksh meri.....
Radha: Sakshi zara Pani le kar ana.....
Wo andar se hi Sakshi ko awaaz lagati he.
Sakshi: tu ja andar kamre me... Me bas abhi ayi....
Or wo kitchen se pani ka glass le kar Apne parents ke kamre me chali jati he. Lekin tabhi Aksh ghar ke bahar chala jata he.


Sakshi or Radha ne Santosh ko shant kar diya tha, fir Sakshi Aksh se baat karne ka sochti he, or kamre se bahar ajati he, lekin Aksh waha nahi tha to Sakshi uske kamre me dekhti he to Aksh waha bhi nahi tha. Ab Sakshi ke paas uska wait karne ke siwaye koi rasta nahi tha.

Yaha Aksh apne ghar se nikal kar Soham ke ghar chala jata he, waha Soham ki mummy ne door open kiya.

S. Mummy: are Aksh.... Aao andar ajao....
Wo Aksh ko ghar me bulate hue kehti he.
S. Mummy: to kitne percentage mile tumhe?
Aksh: kya Aunty aap bhi.... Ye puchna chahiye ke paas bhi hua ya fail... Aap to percentage par agayi....
Wo andar sofe par beth te hue kehta he.
S. Mummy: are aise kese.... Mera beta bahot hoshiyar he...
Wo Aksh ke sar se haath ferte hue kehti he, tabhi Soham apne kamre se bahar ajata he.
Soham: or bata bhai.... Fail ho gaya?
Wo piche se akar Aksh ke khande par thapki marte hue puchta he.
Aksh: dekha Aunty... Ye hota he tarika puchne ka....
S. Mummy: bakwas mat kar... Kitne percentage mile wo bata...
Aksh: pure 38%
S. Mummy: ohhh... Koi baat nahi ab College me Dil laga kar padhai karna, thik he?
Aksh: dekhte he....
S. Mummy: tum betho me dono ke liye sharbat le kar ati hu.....
Or wo Kitchen me dono ke liye sharbat banane chali jati he.
Soham: yaar chal tension na le.... Games khelte he...
Aksh: me kyu tension lunga... Chal...
Or wo dono beth kar Games khelne lagte he.

Ghar pe sab log khana khane ke liye Aksh ka intezar kar rahe the. Lekin uska koi ata pata hi nahi tha.

Radha: Pata nahi kaha chala gaya ab ye ladka?
Sakshi: Aai, wo zarur Soham ke ghar gaya hoga... Tum call kar ke pucho na...
Radha: Sahi kaha.... Kabhi bata kar to jata nahi he ladka...
Wo kafi pareshani se kehti he, or Soham ke ghar pe call kar deti he.

Is waqt Soham ki Mummy kitchen me khana banane me lagi thi or Soham, Aksh hall me games khel rahe the, tabhi Soham dekhta he ke Radha ka call aya he.

Soham: Oye... Teri Aai ka call aya he.....
Aksh: are yaar..... Tu bolde ki me ghar ane ke liye nikal gaya hu...
Soham: me jhut kyu bolu bhai?
Aksh: accha?
Or itna kehkar Aksh ghar se bahar chala jata he.
Aksh: ab bata dena sach....
Soham: Are Aksh.... Abe sunn to....
Wo darwaze par ja kar Aksh ko awaaz lagate hue bolta he, lekin tabtak to Aksh dur nikal gaya tha. Soham call pick kar ke Radha ko bata deta he ke Aksh ghar chala gaya.

Yaha Aksh ghar jane ki bajaye dusre raste chal padta he, kuch der me hi wo ek Garage par pahoch jata he, jaha Ek aadmi car ki marammat kar raha tha.

Aksh: Salam Karim chcha.....
Karim: are Aksh.... Salam.. Salam.... Aja andar....
Wo piche Aksh ki taraf mudkar kehta he.
Karim: are aaj to tere Results the na? Kya hua?
Aksh: kya hona tha, pass ho gaya or Gift ke rup me Baba ka Thappad bhi mil gaya....
Wo andar akar ek car ke bonnet par beth the hue kehta he.
Karim: Thappad? Or wo kis liye?
Aksh: wo mene pure 38% marks laye is liye....
Karim: hmm... To tu Santosh se naraz ho kar ghar se chala aya?
Wo Aksh me paas akar uske kandhe par haath rakhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: n... Nahi... To... Me kyu naraz hounga....
Wo Karim ke sawal ka hadbadate hue jawab deta he.
Karim: wahh... Dekh Aksh bhale hi humara koi khun ka rishta nahi he, lekin tereko bachpan se janta hu me...... Dekh Aksh... Santosh ki isme koi galati nahi he, are me janta hu na yaar usne kitni mehnat ki he bachpan se... Are wo to chahta he ke tu or Sakshi ek sukoon bhari zindagi jiyo.... Is liye wo kabhi kabhi Sakth ho jata he....
Aksh: Chacha me Baba se naraz nahi hu, me to apne aap se naraz hu, samajh hi nahi ata kya hoga aage... Apne sapno par kaam karu, lekin dusri taraf dekhta hu to ye duniya to kisi alag hi disha me dod rahi he....
Uski baat par Karim use halke se sar pe marta he.
Karim: abe tu itna bhi bada nahi hua he jo duniya or iski baate kare...
Aksh: kya chacha aap bhi... Kuch saal or nahi karunga is duniya ki baate, lekin parents to bachpan me hi apne baccho ko is chuho ki daud me daal dete he na.... Yahi se to Shuruwat hoti he in sab ki....
Wo Karim ki Akho me akhe daal kar kehta he.
Karim: yaar tu itni badi badi baate kar kese leta he be?
Wo Aksh ke paas se uthkar thoda aage ki taraf khade hote hue puchta he. Jis par Aksh halka sa muskura deta he.

Karim: dekh beta.... Padhai likhayi par dhyan de, or ek accha insaan bann...
Aksh: kyu chacha... Jo log padhe likhe nahi hote kya wo acche insaan nahi he.... Aap hi dekh lo.... Aapne kaha padhai ki he, lekin aap to kitne acche insaan ho....
Karim: are bhai tu rehne de.... Tere saath kabhi behes nahi kar sakta me mere baap....
Wo piche mudkar Aksh ke samne haath jodte hue kehta he. Or firse apne kaam me lagg jata he.
Aksh: waise ek baat puchu chacha?
Kuch der baad Aksh ke dimag koi baat ajati he jise wo Karim se puchna tha.
Karim: ha puch na....
Wo apna kaam jaari rakhte hue kehta he.
Aksh: kya aap mujhe apne paas kaam par rakhoge?
Uska sawal sun kar Karim apna kaam rok deta he or Aksh ki taraf dekhne lagta he.
Karim: ab ye kya naya natak he tera?
Aksh: natak? Nahi.. nahi... Me to sach me ye kaam sikhna chahta hu....
Karim: are tereko to business karna he na to ye kya he?
Aksh: Aap please bataye na.... Kya mujhe aap yaha kaam par rakhoge?
Karim: are Aksh... Ye tera hi garage he or apne hi garage me koi nokri karta he kya?
Aksh: thik he... To aap nokri par mat rakhna... Lekin please aap mujhe ye kaam to sikha hi sakte ho na...
Karim: beta....
Aksh: please chacha.....
Karim: chal thik he.... Sikha dunga tujhe ye kaam...
Uska jawab sunkar Aksh bahot hi zyada khush ho jata he.
Karim: waise tune khana khaya ya nahi?
Aksh: ahhh... Ha... Ha mene kha liya...
Wo haklate hue Jawab deta he.
Karim: huhh... Jhut bhi bolne laga tu to? Chal ab... Ghar ja kar khana kha lete he... Teri chachi ne Biryani banayi he aaj.... Pasand he na tujhe?
Wo Aksh ke nazdeek akar uske sar pe haath ferte hue kehta he. Fir wo dono Karim ke ghar jane ke liye nikal jate he, Karim ne Santosh ko call kar ke bata diya tha ke Aksh uske saath hi he, or wo khana kha kar ayega.

Suraj ab dhire dhire dhalne laga tha, Aksh Karim ke saath khana kha kar Garage par kaam sikh raha tha, Dusri taraf ghar pe Sakshi or uski dost Neha apne ghar ki chatt par bethi hui thi.


Neha: yaar Sakshi.... College me ja kar kitna maza ayega na?
Wo bahot hi utsukta ke saath Sakshi se kehti he.
Sakshi: hmmm... Sahi kaha.. waha ab school se alag hi mahol hoga...
Neha: wahi to.... School me to kitne strict rules hote he... Lekin ab College me aisa kuch nahi hoga... Na kisi ki rok tok... Ab jab chahe class bunk karenge or....
Sakshi: kya kaha? Class bunk... Huhh.. wo tu akeli hi karna... Me nahi karne wali koi class bunk wunk...
Wo Neha ki baat ko bich me kaat te hue kehti he.
Neha: yaar kya Sakshi tu bhi... Kitni boaring he tu...
Wo apna muh fulakar Sakshi ko dhakka dete hue kehti he.
Sakshi: are... Isme boaring ki kya baat he? College me padhai karne jate he, na ke class bunk karne...
Wo Halke se Neha ke sar me thapki marte hue kehti he.
Neha: yaar Sakshi masti karne ke yahi to lamhe hote he.... Ek baar bade ho gaye to sab matang me badal jata he...
Sakshi: accha? Or wo kese?
Neha: are baba.... Bade ho jane ke baad fir job karo.... Uske baad shadi... Or....
Sakshi: ek.. ek... Minute... Tu itni dur shadi tak kaha chali gayi.... Wapis aa... Pagal...
Neha: kya dur.... Dekhna jese hi padhai khatam hogi na to gharwale shadi ke piche pad jayenge.... Huhhh...
Wo apna muh fulate hue kehti he.
Neha: Waise Sakshi tujhe kesa husband chahiye?
Uske sawal par Sakshi bahot sharma jati he.
Sakshi: ye...ye kya baate le kar beth gayi tu... Chup kar...
Wo Gusse se Neha ko aakhe dikhate hue kehti he.
Neha: bata bhi de na yaar Sakshi....
Wo Sakshi ko kohni marte hue kehti he. Ispar Sakshi apne chehre par bikhre balo ko apni ungliyo se kaan ke piche le jati he. Or wo kafi sharma gayi thi.
Sakshi: m...mujhe nahi pata....
Neha: hayee... Dekho to kese sharma rahi he...
Wo Sakshi ko dhakka marte hue kehti he jis par Sakshi ke chehre par hasi ajati he.
Neha: waise mujhe na.... Mujhe na..... Aksh husband ke roop me chahiye.....
Wo khudko hi apni baho me bharte hue kehti he. Lekin is se Sakshi Gussa ho jati he.
Sakshi: chup.... Ye kya keh rahi he tu?
Wo gusse me Neha se puchti he.
Neha: tu gussa kyu ho rahi he?
Sakshi: kuch nahi... Bas chup kar tu....
Wo narazgi se kehti he.
Neha: accha sorry baba.... Kyu gussa hoti he... Has bhi de jaldi se....
Or wo Sakshi ki kamar me gudgudi karne lagti he, jis se Naraz bethi Sakshi khil khila kar hasne lagti he.

Neha: waise Sakshi... Kya me itni buri hu jo Aksh ki wife nahi ban sakti?
Kuch der baad wo Sakshi se puchti he.
Sakshi: are pagal.... tu buri nahi he... Wo ladka hi alag he.. use samajh pana har kisi ke bass ki nahi he... Pata nahi kab kya kar de...
Neha: aisa nahi he.. Aksh bahot accha ladka he...
Sakshi: to mene kab kaha ke wo bura he... In fact us se accha insan to mene apni zindagi me nahi dekha... Bas tu use kabhi samajh nahi payegi...
Neha: accha? To Aksh ko samajhne wali kabhi milegi bhi?
Sakshi: zarur milegi... Zarur milegi......
Wo bahot hi gehri soch me akar kehti he. Kuch der dono chup si wahi bethi rehti he. Tabhi Radha un dono ko niche bula leti he, niche kuch nashta karne ke baad Neha apne ghar chali jati he.

Is waqt raat ke khane ka waqt ho raha tha, waha Karim pure din Karim ki zidd karte hue bhi Aksh ghar nahi gaya, ab Karim Garage band hone ka waqt tha, Karim use apne saath khane ke liye kehta he lekin Aksh mana kar deta he or apne ghar ke raste chal padta he. Or yaha Ghar pe sab uska intezar kar rahe the, Santosh ab uspe thoda gussa ho gaya tha, Sakshi darwaze par ruk kar Aksh ki raah dekh rahi thi, wo janti thi ke Santosh Aksh par gussa karne wala he to wo mahol ko sambhalne ke liye tayar thi, tabhi use Raste se Aksh ata dikhayi deta he. Aksh baramde me agaya tha Sakshi use gusse se dekh rahi thi.

Aksh: aise kyu dekh rahi he?
Wo ghar ke darwaze ke bahar hi baramde me ruk kar puchta he.
Sakshi: ye kya waqt he Aksh ghar ane ka? Firse Baba ko gussa dila diya na?
Wo bahot hi dhimi awaaz me Aksh se kehti he.
Aksh: Baba ka mujhpar gussa karna koi nayi baat thode na he.... Ab hatt samne se....
Wo Sakshi ko Darwaze se hatate hue kehta he or ghar ke andar ajata he.

Santosh: bahot jaldi agaye laat sahab aap to?
Lekin Aksh bas uski baat khatam hone tak waha rukta he or sidha apne kamre me chala jata he.
Santosh: dekha.... He koi sharm... Jawab diye bina hi chala gaya....
Wo gusse me Radha se kehta he.
Radha: aap jane dijiye na.... Wo pehle se pareshan he or aap he ki...
Wo Santosh ko shant karate hue kehti he.
Radha: Sakshi ja use khane ke liye bula la....
Sakshi: ha abhi bulati hu....
Or ye kehkar wo Aksh ke kamre me chali jati he jaha Aksh bed par leta hua tha.

Sakshi: oh hero... Kaha ghum raha tha din bhar tu?
Wo andar akar Aksh ke bagal me beth te hue Aksh se puchti he.
Aksh: Karim chacha ke yaha tha pata nahi kya tujhe?
Sakshi: accha? Pura din kya kar raha tha waha?
Aksh: kuch nahi... Bas aise hi time pass kar raha tha...
Sakshi: tu itna thaka hua kyu lag raha he?
Aksh: thodi thakan to lagg rahi he....
Sakshi: chal pehle khana kha le... Badme me tere haath per daba dungi....
Aksh; are nahi mujhe bhuk nahi he tum log kha lo....
Ispar Sakshi Aksh ka haath pakad leti he or use sidha bitha deti he.
Sakshi: Aksh.... Kabtak Baba se naraz rahega tu? Wo tera bura thodi na chahte he...
Aksh: are yaar tu na.... Mujhe sachme bhuk nahi lagi he... Mene Karim chacha ke ghar pe hi Biryani kha li thi... Ye ghas pus tu kha.... or tujhe pata he na mujhe non veg khane se firse bhuk nahi lagti...
Sakshi: sach keh raha he na?
Aksh: to jhut kyu bolunga... Puchle chacha ko call kar ke...
Sakshi: chal ab tu keh raha he to maan leti hu.
Or fir Sakshi bahar akar Radha or Santosh ko ye baat bata deti he fir tino milkar khana kha lete he, khane ke baad Sakshi Radha ke kaam me haath bata rahi thi, kaam khatam hone ke baad wo Aksh ke kamre me us se kuch baat karne ajati he lekin dekhti he ke Aksh to kafi gehri nind me tha. To Sakshi apne kamre me ja kar so jati he.

Or is tarah inka ye din nikal jata he, jaha Aksh or Santosh ke bich kafi gehma gehmi ho gayi thi, aaj humne dekh ke Aksh kis tarah se apni baate bina dare samne rakhta he, lekin ab uski ye adat bakiyo ke liye kesi hogi ye to ane wala kal hi batayega.


Agar Update accha laga ho to like zarur karna or Comment kar ke apna view mere saath zarur share karna. Agla Update jald hi ayega till then Stay Tuned And Keep Smiling

 

[parkas]

Nice update...

 

[Qaatil]

For staring new story thread...

Congratulations for new story..bhai

Congratulations bro waiting for update
For new story

Congratulations for new story Qaatil bro

Jabardast introduction.bhai❤

For Starting New Story Thread

...for new story ...

Nice intro waiting for update

Bhai comments bharpoor milega...tum agla update post karo

Welcome back Qaatil bhai.........

Introduction padke hi aisa lagta hai story bahut hi faadu hone wali hai......

Update ka intezar mein.....

Fantasy me story dali h

Koi magic vagic aisi h kya story bhai

Congratulations for new thread

Fir thik h
Kyuki magic wali story apne matlab ki nhi

Nice introduction..

Sabse pehle new story ke liye apko bdhai aur apka shukriya hume ek aur khani dene ke liye



Gajab intro to bdiya rha
Is bar matlab story me teen character h lead role, triangle
Aksh, sakshi, mansi


Dar ke rehti h, aise kya badlaav aa gye aksh me interesting

Waiting for first update

Qaatil bta to dety laga di hy shuru atory

nice update

Kya hi baat bhai isme love triangle dikh raha he, or love triangle me to dard milna hi he dekhte he ab ye dard kise milta he, waiting for 1st Update.

nice intro

Bahut khub Qaatil Bhai, the intro ekdum dhasu he, mumbai se Surat ye kya soch rahe ho bhai? Eagerly waiting for updates

for the new story. I am sure this will much better than earlier story.

Congratulations for new thread Bhai & waiting for first update.

Congratulations bro for new story

Intro is fantastic

Keep writing we always with you

Ek nayi kahani shuru karne ke liye bahut bahut dhanyawad bhai aapka.
Ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunche iske liye anant shubhkamnaye....

Baat introduction ki....
Aapne hero ka naam sabse hatkar rakha h अक्ष waah or jo do main character h unke nam bhi lajawab h साक्षी और मानसी .
Anoothe naam.
Behtareen raha introduction.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Congratulations bro

Congratulations Qaatil bro for new story, ab ayega maza bhai ki new story Updates ka besabri se intzar rahega.

This time I liked your writing better than before. This story is about brother and sister. I liked the way you introduced us to the characters in the story. Now I eagerly await the first update of the story.
Thank You...

Bohot achha update bhai Waiting for next update ♥

lovely update

first update shandaar hai lekin aapne update ke suruaat me hi sad ending ki jalak dikhai hai ab kya kahun samjh na aa raha

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Update ki shuruaat badi hi khatarnaak tarike se hui.
or fir bachpan se.
Aksh or sakshi ki badmashiyon ko aapne bahut hi sundar tarike se dikhaya h .
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah

"
Ghayal Kar Ke Mujhe Usne Poochha,
Karoge Kya Phir Mohabbat Mujhse,
Lahoo-Lahoo Tha Dil Mera Magar
Honthon Ne Kaha Beintha-Beintha....
"
Lazavab Shurvath....Congratulation for the story

Bang on nice start, Characters Introduction well narrated, roles wisely chosen, jo kami (Narration ki) apke pehle story me thi, wo apne is story bahuth bakubi cover up kiya hai umeed hai aage bhi aise hi updates ayenge. Aur story ke pehle update se hi apna hero lime light me aachuka hai is ki waja uska character hai. Dekthe yeh story kya rang dikhati hai.....
Aur ek baath, ek chota sa suggestion personally i hate tragedy stories, movies etc., aur agar aap is story ko tragedic bannane ka soch rahe ho tho please meri request hai ki is story ko tragedy mat bannana.
Jab bhi mein kio stories ya fir koi movies dekhtha hun tho mein us story ke character ko apne aap se jod detha hun pata nahi yeh meri buri addat hai ya fir kuch aur but mein aise karne se apne aap ko rokh nahi saktha aur is ka natiza yeh hota hai ki jab koi tragedy scene ya fir story ko dektha ya fir padtha hun tho mujhe bahuth zada dard hota hai isliye mein aap se sirf request kar saktha hun kyun ki aapne is story pe bahuth mehanat kar ke likha hai aur changes shayad is story ki destiny badal sakthi jo shayad is story ke liye accha na ho so.
aur keep it up.....
Wating for the update

are Qaatil Bhai aapne to qatl kar diya
mind-blowing Start, yaar apne na middle class family ki ek baat bahut hi acche dhang se dikhayi he, ke ek middle class parents apne baccho ke liye koi taj mehel to nahi banwa sakte lekin unki choti si icchao ko pure dil se pura karte he jese yaha par Santosh ne apne baccho keliye jo gola banane ke liye Syrups laye.... Ye dikhata he the beauty of a Middle class Parents ❤
aise hi likhte rehna bhai, waiting for next Update

Nice update bro...

Just superb

Awesome update

Aise Update dete rehna bro Story bich me mat chhod dena bas

Aaj start Kiya h read Kar ke review deta hu

Gajab update bhai ji, pyara update tha
aksh ke rone ne to emotional kar diya

Middle class family ki life,pareshani,tangi bdiya tarike se describe ki h apne

Update jaldi khtm ho gya


Bache kya jane ab is bare me , agle mahine bol diya lekin aksh ko aaj hi chaiye

Lekin isiliye to unhe bache kehte h


Yha se hi aksh business man banne ka sochega


Jo ye conversation h na aksh aur sakshi ki, bas kya khu mujhe bhut jyada pyari lagti h
Meri story padne ki ye khas vjah h
Aise updates padkar jo sakoon milta h, pucho mat

Eagerly waiting for next update

Bhut shandar update biradar. Story track par aa rhi ha

Fabulous start
Keep posting

Childhood is very good and sweet, I miss my childhood while reading the story, we have no worries, playing and having fun all day long. From now on, Aksh and Sakshi are supporting each other, will have more fun later. I have also eaten a lot of ice balls during my school time and still eat occasionally. I liked the thinking of Aksh and some things are understood at the right time.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Yaar Qaatil bhai kya hi likh rahe ho aap
Aapki writing pehle se zyada imrove hui he, keep it up bhai

Or aaj ke Update ki baat kare to kamal update tha, dono ka kisi ladke ko milkar marna
Sakshi ka itni buri halat me bhi gole ke liye pyaar ❤
Or wahi Aksh ke saaf dil par is pesa jesi khichad ki bunde lagg jana, ye bahut galat hua, dekhte he ab age kya hoga, eagerly waiting bhai.

Pyaara Update maza aya padhkar, or jo dono ne milkar us ladke ko mara bahut sahi kiya sare moments bahut hi pyare the, or ab aksh ke andar ye sawal agaya he, pata nahi kya hota he aagey waiting for next Update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aksh or sakshi ka milkar apne se bade ladke ko pitna or ghar me ma ki dant sunkar bachpan ke din yaad aa gye.
Aap itna kamal ka update likhte ho ki main khud se jod leta hoon use.
Mzaaaa aa gaya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Lovely update ek bahuth hi masumiyat see bara update or ek bahuth gheri baat bi pata chalti hai is update se ki maa baap ka pyaar tyag, samarpan, ki tulna kisi bhi cheez se nahi ho sakthi.. Aur kya is mamsum see ladke k man mein umad rahe swalon ka jawab melega ya nahi dekthe hai aage kya hot hai
Good waiting for next

Nice update bro

waiting for next update

Bahut hi pyara or masumiyat bhara Update

Awesome update

aapke update ka intzaar rahega bhai...aap sach mein ek behatrin writer ho...aapki likhne ki shaili bahut achhi hai...waiting for your next update

Achcha update hai koi baat hoti hai jo life me sab badal deti hai yahan paise ki baat aa gayi matlab bachpan gaya inka dekhte kya hota

Very good starting and nice script
Full paisa wasool performance.
Waiting for the next update.

Nice update waiting for next

Behad hi shandar Update

N
Nice start bro

I think base of the story ends here.

Now it will be interesting to see what happens next....

Good one Qaatil bhai......

Super se bhi uper update

Awesome update

Beautiful Update bhai ❤ pyar se bhara hua Update tha, ab us admi ne kahi baat ka bhi asar hoga Aksh par, dekhte he kya hoga age, eagerly waiting for next update.

nice aur lovely update ..
sakshi ko doll set maangne se mana karta hai aksh aur uske paise se raksha bandhan ke din uske liye wo doll set kharidta hai ..tohfa dene ke liye aksh ne apne cycle ke paise kharch kar diye aur jab ye baat sakshi ko pata chali to wo naraj ho gayi aur aksh ko thappad bhi maara ...

par isse dono ke bich kitna pyar hai ye dikhta hai .

ab car ko dekhkar usko kharidne ki sochna aur un do aadmi ki baate yaa taana aksh ke dimaag me fit ho gayi hai ..
par paise kamane ke liye padhai jaruri hai ye usko koi batayega ? uski problem to kisiko pata hi nahi ..

Suoerb just supers

Nice and superb update..

shandar update

There is a lot of fun in the circus, I have also gone, Aksh refuses Sakshi to take toys, meas he has taken the money thing seriously but it is very important to study because that is why he will move forward, here Aksh is making a mistake. You are trying to explain the importance of money in the story. Well according to me Aksh should concentrate on studies from now on and after being successful everything is his own. get angry and persuade, This will always go on.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Lovely update..bhai❤

Bdiya update bhai ji



Last me to update kya likha tha yaar bas shabd nhi h

Nice update...

Abtak ka sabse beautiful Update bhai, kya likha he. Aksh ka apne bachaye peso se sakshi ke liye gift lena, sakahi ka sacchayi pata chalne par rona.. ye sab dil ko chu gaya bhai. Ab inki bachpan ki bate miss karenge.. but koi ni, story ko ab track par lana he very exited to see what will be the results do.... Eagerly Waiting bhai.

Waiting

Ek dam shandar or jandar update
Sorry for the late coments Qaatil bro

Bohot sahi update bhai lahe rho

Waiting.....

Pyara update bhai ji, shayad ab story thodi intense hoti jayegi future Updates ka besabri se intezar he... ❤

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