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Lajawab update
Nice
Jabardast update..❤bhai
behetareen update ..sakshi 94% percent se pass ho gayi aur aksh 38% se ..chalo ek baat sahi huyi ki aksh fail nahi hua .. santosh ka thappad maarna koi galat nahi tha ..
aksh ab garage ka kaam sikh raha hai ..aur uske sapne alag hi hai ..
lagta hai neha aksh se pyar karti hai isliye uske saath shadi ke sapne dekh rahi hai ..
aksh ka padhai naa karke dusri kitabo ko padhna ..
aksh apne jeevan me kuch alag karna chahta hai jisse wo amir ban sake aisa lagta hai ..
waise jab marathi shabdo ka istemaal hota hai waha ek real feeling aati hai ..
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Baalman par chhiti chhoti baton ka kaisa prabhav hota h , ye aapne bakhubi darshaya h.
Kadachit , kahani ka aadhar ban chuka h....
Good update sakshi`s unconditional love for his brother is a treat to watch overall an impact full update. Aksh`s attitude(masumiyath) has totally been destroyed at a tender age let's see what more too happen.
And one more thing, I felt aksh emotions in this update for sakshi was quite a normal it was not so strong as that of sakshi so please do take care of it as these things also matters.
Waiting for next....
Good one bhai......
Gajab update bhai ji
Sakshi ke 94% se jyada charche to aksh ke 38% ke h
Ab dekha jaye to baat dono shi h padhai se hi sab kuch h bhi aur nhi bhi
ye sakshi neha ki aksh se shadi ki baat se gussa ho gyi,matlab khi pyaar ki shuruaat sakshi ki traf se hi to nhi hogi
awesome update
Nice update yeh kehna galat nahi hoga ke aaj ke zamana k padayi srif kitab tak hi seemit rah gayi hai aur alsi duniya mein iska koi mol nahi hota hai..
Ek taraf aksh aur uski soch hai aur dusre taraf ek maa baap aur unki soch dekthe hai yeh kahani aage kya rang lati hai dekthe hai....
Superb Starting bro keep it up
Bhai ap ki nai story besabri se intjar tha jo ab poora hua.
bahut badhiya updates hai bhai is story ke bhi bilkul dil ko choo lene wale
Aksh is right, but it would be wrong to say these things completely, because with bookish knowledge, external knowledge is also very important. Though it is natural to change thinking with age, but parents should always be respected. Aksh is standing at a halt, has two paths and has to choose one path but one wrong decision can ruin his life. It is not the fault of Aksh and his father, it is important to understand the things.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
Thank You So Much Dosto aap sab ke Comments ke liye.... And Sorry 2 din se kafi busy tha, online araha tha lekin reply nahi de paya.Waiting for next
Ohhh sirf poster be hi mera lund kada kiya
Update Ready he, bas 30 minutes me Post kar dunga, Stay Tuned
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36 minute ho gye
Update Ready he, bas 30 minutes me Post kar dunga, Stay Tuned
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