Adultery Life of an Engineer(adultery+romance+action) (Completed)

[Lone survivor]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update bhai..Kiran ko use Kya Kiya Daksh ne says future Mai PTA clega..dekha Jaye to Kiran Thora distract Hui hai...sanvi ke mom ko PTA cl gya hoga.sanvi use double cross KR rhi hai dekhte hai sanvi kaise apni mom ko bottle Mai utarti hai..mohini Kon SA game khel rhi hai..Roy apni beti ka use kaise kiya sayd Kiran ko Daksh ke pass bhejakr use kamjor krna chah rhi hogi..
Poonam ka chapter phir open hogya ...no comments

thank you bhai
Poonam to vapas aaegi are jindagi me nahi story me
Roy kamina hai kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Baki bhi pata chal jaega dheere dhere

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesomeupdate update waitingbro

thank you bhai
Ek din me Ek mega aur Ek normal update diya Hai bhai
Ab kya bache ki jaan loge

 

[Lone survivor]

JABRDUST UPDATE BHAI

thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Behtareen update,
Hamesha ki tarah kuchh samajh nahi aa raha hai, kya chal raha hai. Per fir bhi Achchha lag raha hai.

bas yehi hona chahiye
Samjh aaye na aaye acha lage

 

[Lone survivor]

Pyar karti hu yahi aaya tha story mai doosra kuch tho kese malum padega....

aap to ek baat pakad ke hi bath gaye

 

[Lone survivor]

Wait rahega aise dhandhar updates kaa....

bas sath bane raho
Aate rahenge updates to

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

BRO BAAT SAR SE PAUN TAK KI NAHI HAI...STORY MENI SUSPENSE RHE THK HAI
IS SE KOI MASLA NAHI PAR SUSPENSE K CHAKAR MEIN READERS IRRITATE NAH HONE
LAG JAYE...MAIN SAMJHTA HUN START SE AP KI STORIES READ KR RHA HUN AP K
WRITTING STYLE SE KAFI HAD TAK WAKIF HUN...JAB THIRD SAMESTER KA ZIKAR HUA
TO MUJHY LAGA K STORY SHYD LAST STAGE PE HAI APNI TO ISI LIYE KAHA K THORA
CLEAR KARO...MAZA ATA HAI AP KI STORY PARHNE MEIN JIS MEIN KHUD GUESS MARNE
PARTE HAIN PAR JAB KOI HINT NAH MILY TO THORI IRRITATION HOTI HAI K SALA HINT
TAK NAH MILA PURE UPDATE MEIN...YE LAST UPDATE KA TO MAIN NAHI KEH SAKTA COZ
COZ MAINE WO JALDI JALDI MEIN READ KIYA TO SHYD KUCH POINT MISS KAR GEYA HUN
GA...MERA YE MATLB NAHI THA K AP KI STORIES KI ENDING ACHI NAHI THI...PAR JAB BOHAT
SE POINT AUR SUSPENSE LAST PE KHUL KAR ATE HAIN TO SMJHNE MEIN TIME LAGTA HAI AUR
ISI CHAKAR MEIN KUCH POINTS MISS HO JATE HAIN K BC YE KESE HUA AUR KYUN...HAN YE MAIN
KEHTA HUN K AP KI LAST STORY KI ENDING MUJHY PASAND NAHI AAI THI(GALTI SE GULAM LIKH DIYA THA)
PAR BAKI DHASU THI...AUR RAHI IS STORY KI BAAT TO IS MEIN AP KI WRITTING MEIN BOHAT
IMPROVEMENT NAZAR A RHI HAI...

AUR EK BAAT AP KA HAR EK CHARACTER APNE MEIN HI EK MISTRY BANA HUA HAI...JESE RUHI KA LAG
RHA THA K SHYD US KA DAKSH SE KUCH RISHTA HAI PAR AB GAIB AUR AB LAGTA HAI K BAS WO
EK DOST TAK HI HAI...KIRAN EK TIME LAGTA HAI K WO DAKSH KO SAFE RAKHNA CHAHTI HAI
EK TARAF LAGTA HAI K WO DAKSH K AGAINST PLAN KAR RHI HAI...AUR AB LAG RHA AHI K SHYD
WO DAKSH K SATH HO GI...KARAN KA BHI KUCH PATA NAHI HAI...WO HAI KYA CHEEZ KYA KARTA
KYA NAHI KARTA...MERE KEHNE KA MATLAB HAI K IS TIME SITUATION ESI BANI HUI HAI K HAR
CHARCTER KO HAR EK UPDATE MEIN SAMJHNA PAR RHA HAI US KI BAAAT BC YAHAN TAK K US
KI BODY LANGUAGE TAK JUDGE KAR PAR RAHI HAI TO ISI LIYE KABHI KABHI IRRITATIO HO JATI
HAI K SALA YE CHAL KYA RHA HAI AUR ISI K CHALTE KABHI KABHI REVIEW MEIN BAKWAS LIKHI
JATI HAI JESE K ABHI LIKH RHA HUN KUCH PATA NAHI KYA KYA LIKHI JA RHA LAGTA GARHE MURDE
UKHAR RHA

BRO AGAR KUCH GALAT BOL GEYA HUN TO MAAFI CHAHUN GA AP MERE FAV WRITER HO TO AP KI
STORY K SATH CONNECT HO KR READ KRTA HUN TO AGAR READER K SATH KHELO GE TO MERI TARAF
SE TO ZRUR ESE HI REACTION MELY GI​

First of all sorry bolne ka to koe scene hi nahi hai bhai
Aapka pura hak hai jaisa aapko lage likhne ka

Ab clear kar deta hu ki story half bachi hue hai
Sab kuch clear karke jaunga
Hint bhi mili hai updates me lekin aap log confuse hogaye ho
Pata hai kyu?
Kyuki aap aapne kuch character ko over think kar liya hai
Jisse sTory aur jada complex hogaye hai aapke liye

Har kisi ke piche story nahi hoti bhai
Main hi chutiya tha jisne everyone has a story likhi thi but Bhai Har kisi ki story nahi hoti

Main kisi bhi new characters ko lata hu aap usme secrets dundne lag jate ho, vaise main hi majbur karta hu vo alag baat hai
Lekin Sab ke piche story nahi hai

Ek bahut bada hint diya hai aapko
Ache se use karna

Baki abse simple likhne ki kosis karunga

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice one bro♥?

thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

wonderfull update cha gaye aap bhai sorry mai chutti par tha ishiliye reply na de paya bahut badhiya shaandaar update sanvi ka to diwana ho gaya mai

Bhai aajkal sabhi chhutiyo pe hai
Vaise maine notice kar liya tha kyuki aapne nice updates likhne ki jagah pura review likhna suru kar diya tha
Ab vapas chhutiyo pe mat jana bhai
Saanvi ka diwana mat bano bhai
Daksh maar dega