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Bhai Ruhi ke purse me aisa kya tha Jo wo rone ko ho gayi thi
Kya ukse pas Daksh se judi hui koi chiz hai?
Aur Daksh ab kya karega jab sanvi uske aas paas har waqt rahegi?
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Aur Daksh ab kya karega jab sanvi uske aas paas har waqt rahegi?
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Daksh lake par batha maal fuk raha tha aur jo ho raha hai usse kaise nipta jaye uske bare me soch raha tha
Arjun- akele akele kabse suru kar diya tune?
Piche se aawaz aae
Daksh- bas man kar raha tha
Bina piche mude bola
Arjun uske side me jake bath gaya aur usse joint leke khud fukne laga
Arjun- thik hai tu?
Daksh- ha
Arjun- reason nahi puchunga
Lekin tu apna control kho raha hai bhai
Daksh- abhi tu hai sath mere lekin jaldi hi tu bhi nahi rahega
Arjun- matlab?
Daksh- tu mujhse nafarat karne lagega
Etni ki mujhe dekhne bhar se tujhe gin aane lagegi
Arjun- aisa kabhi nahi hoga
Daksh- tu mujhe janta nahi hai
Esliye bol raha hai
Bas ek baat yaad rakhna Bhai tujhe kabhi bhi lage na ki maine galat kiya hai kuch to ye soch ke bhul jana ki Daksh ki jindagi ka makasad hi aisa tha ki usse sahi galat sochne ka time hi nahi mila
Arjun- kyu nashe ki Maa chod raha hai
Hum hai na sath
Sab dekh lenge
Daksh- jaldi hi bomb fatega yaha
Tujhse pehle hi maafi maang raha hu
Arjun- aur maine tujhe maaf kardiya
Ab aur bakchodi nahi
Uske baad koe kuch nahi bola
Arjun kuch der baad
Kya scene aaj ka
Daksh- Kya hai aaj?
Arjun- kuch nahi hai
Kal to pee nahi tune to aaj peelete hai
Daksh- aur kon hai?
Arjun- koe Ladki nahi hai
Sayad ruhi ho sakti hai lekin Kiran nahi hai
Daksh- thik hai fir karte hai
Arjun- chal fir flat hi chalte hai ab
Daksh- tu chal
Mujhe thoda me time chahiye
Arjun- pakka thik hai na tu?
Daksh- ha koe bhasad nahi hogi promise
Arjun- chal thik
Jaldi aajana
Aur Arjun vaha se chala gaya aur Daksh sochne laga ki Kya kare kya kare
Uske kuch samjh me to aa nahi aa raha tha
Lekin Kiran ko door karne ka idea to uske dimag me bahut ache se aagaye tha
Uske consequences bahut the lekin Kiran usse door ho jaegi
Saanvi ko leke usse tension thi kyuki vo Kiran se bilkul alag thi
Usne Kiran se jada dunia dekhi hai
Aur Kiran se bahut jada ache tarike se Daksh ko janti hai
Uske liye kuch bahut bada plan banana padega
Daksh yehi sochta raha ki shyam ho gaye
Usse abhi flat nahi jana tha kyuki abhi dimag center par nahi tha aur dimag center par kon leke aa sakti hai
NIDHI
Daksh ne phone nikala aur Nidhi ke number dial kar diye
Nidhi- hello
Daksh- kaha ho?
Nidhi- room pe
Kya hua?
Daksh- free ho to aajao lake pe
Nidhi- kyu?
Daksh- aise hi
Free nahi ho to rahne do
Sorry bye
Aur Daksh phone kaat deta hai
Nidhi man me ye alag hi psycho hai bc
Daksh kuch der batha raha fir uth ke jane laga to usse Nidhi aati dikh gaye
Nidhi- pura mahka rakha hai lake
Daksh- tumhre liye mahool bana raha tha
Nidhi- to batao kya hua?
Daksh- matlab?
Nidhi- tum khud se kisi ko call nahi karte
Agar kiya hai matlab kuch to hua hai
Daksh- maine to aise hi kar diya tha
Tumhe aise lagta hai to nahi karunga aage se
Nidhi- kya hua?
Ye batao
Acting mat karo
Daksh- kisi Ladki ko apne se door karna hai
Kya kya option hai door karne ke
Nidhi- girlfriend hai to aise jata ke ki cheat kar rahe ho lekin karna nahi hai
Friend hai to usko importance na deke
Aur stranger hai to stranger hi banke
Nidhi vaise kisko door karna hai?
Mere liye etni planning ki jarurat nahi hai
Daksh- tumhe to ek second me laat maar ke bhaga dunga
Nidhi- so rude
Laat marke uhh
Daksh- vo treat ka main mazak kar raha tha
Bhul jana usse
Nidhi- kyu
Daksh- kyu ka kya matlab hai
Nahi chahiye to nahi chahiye
Nidhi- tumhe ye lag raha hai ki mere pass paise nahi hai?
Bahut rich hu main samjhe
Daksh- fir to tumhe fasa leta hu aur baad me purani filmo ki tarah tumhre baap se blank cheque lunga
Nidhi- hahahaha very funny
Hum weekend par chal rahe hai
Daksh- ajeeb pareshani hai
Nidhi- ab jo hai vo hai
Daksh- thik hai thik hai
Baad me mujhse mat bolna kuch
Aise hi kuch der aur ye dono baat karte rahe uske baad uth ke chale gaye
Dusri taraf Mrs. Raichand saanvi ko shift kara ke vaha se ja chuki thi aur saanvi Kiran ke room ki taraf ja rahi thi
Knock knock knock knock
Kiran ne gate khola aur samne saanvi ko dekh ke buri tarah surprise to gaye
Saanvi- etna surprise hone ki jarurat nahi hai
Aapki Junior ban gaye main
Kiran ko to abhi tak yakeen nahi hua tha aur esliye hi vo gate se bhi nahi hati thi
Saanvi khud hi uska hath hata ke ander guss gaye
Kuch der baad Kiran normal hue aur usne pucha
Kiran- saanvi what you are doing here?
Saanvi- mujhe laga aap akele Daksh ko nahi sambhal paoge esliye main help karne aagaye
Kiran- Daksh to mujhse baat bhi nahi karta
Aur tum kaise help kar sakti ho meri?
Saanvi- mujhe pata hai vo aapse baat nahi karta aur mujhe nahi lagta etni aasani se karne lagega bhi
Kiran- lekin kyu?
Maine to kuch galat bhi nahi Kiya uske sath
Saanvi- es kyu ka answer main nahi bata sakti
Kiran- pata nahi hai ya batana nahi hai
Saanvi- batana nahi hai
Daksh ka secret uske muh se hi khulna chahiye
Lekin main ye bata sakti hu ki tum kaise usse dobara baat kar sakti ho
Kiran- kaise?
Saanvi- do teen words bolne hai aur vo apne aap tumse baat karne lag jaega
Kiran- aur uske baad bhi baat nahi ki to?
Saanvi- fir Daksh ko Bhul jana
Agar vo bolne ke baad bhi Daksh ne reply nahi kiya to ye samjh lena jis Daksh ko tum janti ho vo fake hai aur jisse main janti thi vo mar chuka hai
Kiran- usse ek dam se ho kya gaya?
Saanvi- bataya to tha maine
Roy aur raichands do aise naam hai jinse usse sabse jada chhid hai
Kiran- lekin mera naam to pehle bhi janta tha vo
Tab to aisa nahi kiya
Saanvi- ab kar raha hai na to abki socho aur suno
Jaha tak main usse janti hu vo aisa karega jisse tum usse bahut door to jaoge
Lekin tumhe dimag se kaam lena hai us time kyuki dil baar baar bolega ki Daksh galat hai aur vo galat ho bhi sakta hai esme koe doubt nahi hai mujhe
Lekin if you really want ki vo sahi raste aur aajaye aur tumhri dosti bani rahe to you have to use your brain and do things according
Kiran- lekin kyu?
Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai
Saanvi- jaldi hi aaega sab samjh
Usse pehle Daksh se baat karne ki kosis karte rahna lekin akele me
Kyuki vo kuch bhi bol sakta tha baki kisi ko acha na lage
Kiran- thik hai
Bahut mayush hoke boli
Saanvi- be strong then only you can face him
Kuch der baad dono me thodi bahut edar udar ki baatein hue aur fir apne apne room me sone chali gaye
Roy mansion
Aditya - kaha tha na maine vo nahi manega
Uske liye tumhri importance ab khatam ho chuki hai aur jitna jaldi ho sake tumhe ye samjhna padega
Mohini- vo galat nahi hai
Bas halaat ne aisa bana diya hai
Aditya- esse kuch fark padega ab?
Nahi na
Vo raichands ke piche hai
Mohini Aditya ko bich me hi rok ke
Mohini- exactly my point
Vo raichand ke piche hai to agar hum uske raste me hi na jaye to hume kuch nahi hoga
Aditya- Mohini tum samjh nahi rahi hi
Raichands ka sabse bada weapon raha hu main
Aur agar koe raichand ke piche to matlab vo roy ke piche
Mohini- mujhe waqt chahiye kuch sochne ka
Aditya- tum waqt lete raho aur vo sab kuch tabha karta rahega
Mohini- to kya karu main?
Tum hi batao kya karu main
Main usko hurt nahi kar sakti
Mere bete jaisa tha vo
Aditya- tha
Ab nahi hai
Ab vo kisi ke kuch bhi jaisa nahi hai
Usse raste se hatana hi sabse sahi rasta hai
Mohini- aur agar vo firse Bach gaya aur Kiran ko nuksan pahucha diya to?
Tumhe pata hai na kitni pass rahte hai dono
Mohini ne Aditya ko abhi tak ye nahi bataya tha ki Daksh ki demand kya hai
Aditya- uske liye bhi kuch sochna padega
Ab aisa plan banana padega jo chuke na aur hum bina kisi problem ke apni life enjoy kar sake
Mohini- tumhe jo karna hai vo tum karo
Mujhe jo karna hoga vo main karungi
Tum mujhe nahi rokoge aur main tumhe
Thik hai?
Aditya- thik hai
Mohini ne apne dimag me to decide kar liya tha ki usse karna kya hai
Aur vo karne se pata chal jaega ki jis Daksh ko vo janti thi vo abhi kahi jinda bhi hai ya nahi
Lekin problem ye thi ki uska dil to ye bol raha tha ki Daksh abhi bhi jinda hai lekin ek dar sata raha tha ki agar aisa nahi hua to kya karegi vo
Uska sab kuch khatam ho jaega uske baad
Na Daksh bachega aur na kiran
Aur Daksh kiran ke baad vo karegi kya?
Bahut sari khayal aa rahe the uske dimag me aur bahut sari moments loop me uske aankhon ke samne se gujar rahi thi
Aisa lag raha tha ki waqt ke sath sath Daksh pehle se badatar hota ja raha hai
Ek Daksh tha jo bahut innocent tha
Usse sirf pyaar chahiye tha
Fir jo Daksh aaya vo ek gusse wala aaya jo bas logo ko marta tha taki uska pain kam dikhe bakiyo ke comparison me
Tisre number ka Daksh tha nashe me lipta hua jo bas apne aapko khatam karna chahta tha
Lekin es sabme ek chhij common thi
Daksh ne na kabhi kisi bache ke sath galat kiya aur na kisi ladki ke sath
Uski hit list me kuch naam the aur bas vahi tak simit thi
Vo kabhi apne makasd ko pura karne ke liye kisi ki family ko use nahi karta tha
Jo bhi karna hai khud se karna hai aur aankhon ke samne karna hai
Lekin jo ab Daksh dikh raha hai vo kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hai
Jo line vo maintain karke rakhta tha sayad vo toot chuki hai aur esliye hi vo ab pehle se bahut jada khatarnaak ho gaya hai
Aur essi chhij ka dar mohini ko tha ki agar Daksh ne Kiran ke bare me jo kuch bola agar vo sach hai aur Daksh aisa sach me chahta hai to fir usse aisa karne se koe nahi rok sakta
Daksh ne pyaar ke alava jo bhi chaha hai usne vo paya hai aur uske liye vo koe bhi kimat dene se piche nahi hatata
Edar mohini ye sab soch rahi thi ki
Daksh ne to soch hi rakha hai sare plan a plan b plan c.....plan z
Kiran Daksh aur uske aise behavior ke bare me soch rahi thi
Saanvi ko bas Daksh chahiye tha aur kuch nahi
Arjun apne Dost ko es chungul se nikal ke ek normal insaan ki tarah dekhna chahta tha
Ruhi Daksh me kisko dekhti thi vo to sayad abhi vohi janti hai
Nidhi ke liye Daksh important ho gaya hai
Raichands Daksh ko hurt nahi karna chahte
Aur jo baki bach gaye unhe idea bhi nahi hai ki unke aas pass chal kya raha hai aur unka kya haal hoga en sabke bich
Ab kon kon apne sapno me kamyab ho patein hai ye to waqt hi bataega.....
Daksh lake par batha maal fuk raha tha aur jo ho raha hai usse kaise nipta jaye uske bare me soch raha tha
Arjun- akele akele kabse suru kar diya tune?
Piche se aawaz aae
Daksh- bas man kar raha tha
Bina piche mude bola
Arjun uske side me jake bath gaya aur usse joint leke khud fukne laga
Arjun- thik hai tu?
Daksh- ha
Arjun- reason nahi puchunga
Lekin tu apna control kho raha hai bhai
Daksh- abhi tu hai sath mere lekin jaldi hi tu bhi nahi rahega
Arjun- matlab?
Daksh- tu mujhse nafarat karne lagega
Etni ki mujhe dekhne bhar se tujhe gin aane lagegi
Arjun- aisa kabhi nahi hoga
Daksh- tu mujhe janta nahi hai
Esliye bol raha hai
Bas ek baat yaad rakhna Bhai tujhe kabhi bhi lage na ki maine galat kiya hai kuch to ye soch ke bhul jana ki Daksh ki jindagi ka makasad hi aisa tha ki usse sahi galat sochne ka time hi nahi mila
Arjun- kyu nashe ki Maa chod raha hai
Hum hai na sath
Sab dekh lenge
Daksh- jaldi hi bomb fatega yaha
Tujhse pehle hi maafi maang raha hu
Arjun- aur maine tujhe maaf kardiya
Ab aur bakchodi nahi
Uske baad koe kuch nahi bola
Arjun kuch der baad
Kya scene aaj ka
Daksh- Kya hai aaj?
Arjun- kuch nahi hai
Kal to pee nahi tune to aaj peelete hai
Daksh- aur kon hai?
Arjun- koe Ladki nahi hai
Sayad ruhi ho sakti hai lekin Kiran nahi hai
Daksh- thik hai fir karte hai
Arjun- chal fir flat hi chalte hai ab
Daksh- tu chal
Mujhe thoda me time chahiye
Arjun- pakka thik hai na tu?
Daksh- ha koe bhasad nahi hogi promise
Arjun- chal thik
Jaldi aajana
Aur Arjun vaha se chala gaya aur Daksh sochne laga ki Kya kare kya kare
Uske kuch samjh me to aa nahi aa raha tha
Lekin Kiran ko door karne ka idea to uske dimag me bahut ache se aagaye tha
Uske consequences bahut the lekin Kiran usse door ho jaegi
Saanvi ko leke usse tension thi kyuki vo Kiran se bilkul alag thi
Usne Kiran se jada dunia dekhi hai
Aur Kiran se bahut jada ache tarike se Daksh ko janti hai
Uske liye kuch bahut bada plan banana padega
Daksh yehi sochta raha ki shyam ho gaye
Usse abhi flat nahi jana tha kyuki abhi dimag center par nahi tha aur dimag center par kon leke aa sakti hai
NIDHI
Daksh ne phone nikala aur Nidhi ke number dial kar diye
Nidhi- hello
Daksh- kaha ho?
Nidhi- room pe
Kya hua?
Daksh- free ho to aajao lake pe
Nidhi- kyu?
Daksh- aise hi
Free nahi ho to rahne do
Sorry bye
Aur Daksh phone kaat deta hai
Nidhi man me ye alag hi psycho hai bc
Daksh kuch der batha raha fir uth ke jane laga to usse Nidhi aati dikh gaye
Nidhi- pura mahka rakha hai lake
Daksh- tumhre liye mahool bana raha tha
Nidhi- to batao kya hua?
Daksh- matlab?
Nidhi- tum khud se kisi ko call nahi karte
Agar kiya hai matlab kuch to hua hai
Daksh- maine to aise hi kar diya tha
Tumhe aise lagta hai to nahi karunga aage se
Nidhi- kya hua?
Ye batao
Acting mat karo
Daksh- kisi Ladki ko apne se door karna hai
Kya kya option hai door karne ke
Nidhi- girlfriend hai to aise jata ke ki cheat kar rahe ho lekin karna nahi hai
Friend hai to usko importance na deke
Aur stranger hai to stranger hi banke
Nidhi vaise kisko door karna hai?
Mere liye etni planning ki jarurat nahi hai
Daksh- tumhe to ek second me laat maar ke bhaga dunga
Nidhi- so rude
Laat marke uhh
Daksh- vo treat ka main mazak kar raha tha
Bhul jana usse
Nidhi- kyu
Daksh- kyu ka kya matlab hai
Nahi chahiye to nahi chahiye
Nidhi- tumhe ye lag raha hai ki mere pass paise nahi hai?
Bahut rich hu main samjhe
Daksh- fir to tumhe fasa leta hu aur baad me purani filmo ki tarah tumhre baap se blank cheque lunga
Nidhi- hahahaha very funny
Hum weekend par chal rahe hai
Daksh- ajeeb pareshani hai
Nidhi- ab jo hai vo hai
Daksh- thik hai thik hai
Baad me mujhse mat bolna kuch
Aise hi kuch der aur ye dono baat karte rahe uske baad uth ke chale gaye
Dusri taraf Mrs. Raichand saanvi ko shift kara ke vaha se ja chuki thi aur saanvi Kiran ke room ki taraf ja rahi thi
Knock knock knock knock
Kiran ne gate khola aur samne saanvi ko dekh ke buri tarah surprise to gaye
Saanvi- etna surprise hone ki jarurat nahi hai
Aapki Junior ban gaye main
Kiran ko to abhi tak yakeen nahi hua tha aur esliye hi vo gate se bhi nahi hati thi
Saanvi khud hi uska hath hata ke ander guss gaye
Kuch der baad Kiran normal hue aur usne pucha
Kiran- saanvi what you are doing here?
Saanvi- mujhe laga aap akele Daksh ko nahi sambhal paoge esliye main help karne aagaye
Kiran- Daksh to mujhse baat bhi nahi karta
Aur tum kaise help kar sakti ho meri?
Saanvi- mujhe pata hai vo aapse baat nahi karta aur mujhe nahi lagta etni aasani se karne lagega bhi
Kiran- lekin kyu?
Maine to kuch galat bhi nahi Kiya uske sath
Saanvi- es kyu ka answer main nahi bata sakti
Kiran- pata nahi hai ya batana nahi hai
Saanvi- batana nahi hai
Daksh ka secret uske muh se hi khulna chahiye
Lekin main ye bata sakti hu ki tum kaise usse dobara baat kar sakti ho
Kiran- kaise?
Saanvi- do teen words bolne hai aur vo apne aap tumse baat karne lag jaega
Kiran- aur uske baad bhi baat nahi ki to?
Saanvi- fir Daksh ko Bhul jana
Agar vo bolne ke baad bhi Daksh ne reply nahi kiya to ye samjh lena jis Daksh ko tum janti ho vo fake hai aur jisse main janti thi vo mar chuka hai
Kiran- usse ek dam se ho kya gaya?
Saanvi- bataya to tha maine
Roy aur raichands do aise naam hai jinse usse sabse jada chhid hai
Kiran- lekin mera naam to pehle bhi janta tha vo
Tab to aisa nahi kiya
Saanvi- ab kar raha hai na to abki socho aur suno
Jaha tak main usse janti hu vo aisa karega jisse tum usse bahut door to jaoge
Lekin tumhe dimag se kaam lena hai us time kyuki dil baar baar bolega ki Daksh galat hai aur vo galat ho bhi sakta hai esme koe doubt nahi hai mujhe
Lekin if you really want ki vo sahi raste aur aajaye aur tumhri dosti bani rahe to you have to use your brain and do things according
Kiran- lekin kyu?
Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai
Saanvi- jaldi hi aaega sab samjh
Usse pehle Daksh se baat karne ki kosis karte rahna lekin akele me
Kyuki vo kuch bhi bol sakta tha baki kisi ko acha na lage
Kiran- thik hai
Bahut mayush hoke boli
Saanvi- be strong then only you can face him
Kuch der baad dono me thodi bahut edar udar ki baatein hue aur fir apne apne room me sone chali gaye
Roy mansion
Aditya - kaha tha na maine vo nahi manega
Uske liye tumhri importance ab khatam ho chuki hai aur jitna jaldi ho sake tumhe ye samjhna padega
Mohini- vo galat nahi hai
Bas halaat ne aisa bana diya hai
Aditya- esse kuch fark padega ab?
Nahi na
Vo raichands ke piche hai
Mohini Aditya ko bich me hi rok ke
Mohini- exactly my point
Vo raichand ke piche hai to agar hum uske raste me hi na jaye to hume kuch nahi hoga
Aditya- Mohini tum samjh nahi rahi hi
Raichands ka sabse bada weapon raha hu main
Aur agar koe raichand ke piche to matlab vo roy ke piche
Mohini- mujhe waqt chahiye kuch sochne ka
Aditya- tum waqt lete raho aur vo sab kuch tabha karta rahega
Mohini- to kya karu main?
Tum hi batao kya karu main
Main usko hurt nahi kar sakti
Mere bete jaisa tha vo
Aditya- tha
Ab nahi hai
Ab vo kisi ke kuch bhi jaisa nahi hai
Usse raste se hatana hi sabse sahi rasta hai
Mohini- aur agar vo firse Bach gaya aur Kiran ko nuksan pahucha diya to?
Tumhe pata hai na kitni pass rahte hai dono
Mohini ne Aditya ko abhi tak ye nahi bataya tha ki Daksh ki demand kya hai
Aditya- uske liye bhi kuch sochna padega
Ab aisa plan banana padega jo chuke na aur hum bina kisi problem ke apni life enjoy kar sake
Mohini- tumhe jo karna hai vo tum karo
Mujhe jo karna hoga vo main karungi
Tum mujhe nahi rokoge aur main tumhe
Thik hai?
Aditya- thik hai
Mohini ne apne dimag me to decide kar liya tha ki usse karna kya hai
Aur vo karne se pata chal jaega ki jis Daksh ko vo janti thi vo abhi kahi jinda bhi hai ya nahi
Lekin problem ye thi ki uska dil to ye bol raha tha ki Daksh abhi bhi jinda hai lekin ek dar sata raha tha ki agar aisa nahi hua to kya karegi vo
Uska sab kuch khatam ho jaega uske baad
Na Daksh bachega aur na kiran
Aur Daksh kiran ke baad vo karegi kya?
Bahut sari khayal aa rahe the uske dimag me aur bahut sari moments loop me uske aankhon ke samne se gujar rahi thi
Aisa lag raha tha ki waqt ke sath sath Daksh pehle se badatar hota ja raha hai
Ek Daksh tha jo bahut innocent tha
Usse sirf pyaar chahiye tha
Fir jo Daksh aaya vo ek gusse wala aaya jo bas logo ko marta tha taki uska pain kam dikhe bakiyo ke comparison me
Tisre number ka Daksh tha nashe me lipta hua jo bas apne aapko khatam karna chahta tha
Lekin es sabme ek chhij common thi
Daksh ne na kabhi kisi bache ke sath galat kiya aur na kisi ladki ke sath
Uski hit list me kuch naam the aur bas vahi tak simit thi
Vo kabhi apne makasd ko pura karne ke liye kisi ki family ko use nahi karta tha
Jo bhi karna hai khud se karna hai aur aankhon ke samne karna hai
Lekin jo ab Daksh dikh raha hai vo kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hai
Jo line vo maintain karke rakhta tha sayad vo toot chuki hai aur esliye hi vo ab pehle se bahut jada khatarnaak ho gaya hai
Aur essi chhij ka dar mohini ko tha ki agar Daksh ne Kiran ke bare me jo kuch bola agar vo sach hai aur Daksh aisa sach me chahta hai to fir usse aisa karne se koe nahi rok sakta
Daksh ne pyaar ke alava jo bhi chaha hai usne vo paya hai aur uske liye vo koe bhi kimat dene se piche nahi hatata
Edar mohini ye sab soch rahi thi ki
Daksh ne to soch hi rakha hai sare plan a plan b plan c.....plan z
Kiran Daksh aur uske aise behavior ke bare me soch rahi thi
Saanvi ko bas Daksh chahiye tha aur kuch nahi
Arjun apne Dost ko es chungul se nikal ke ek normal insaan ki tarah dekhna chahta tha
Ruhi Daksh me kisko dekhti thi vo to sayad abhi vohi janti hai
Nidhi ke liye Daksh important ho gaya hai
Raichands Daksh ko hurt nahi karna chahte
Aur jo baki bach gaye unhe idea bhi nahi hai ki unke aas pass chal kya raha hai aur unka kya haal hoga en sabke bich
Ab kon kon apne sapno me kamyab ho patein hai ye to waqt hi bataega.....
badhiya update diya hai lekin mai sonch raha akhir daksh ko sabse itni jada nafrat hui kyun akhir wajah kya hai aur daksh ko normal life me wapas kyun nahi laya ja sakta jabki use bhi pyar ki jarurat hai
ye kahani ek jaat bhai dwara likhi ja rahi hai .. to jyaada dimag na chalao ki kuch bhi kya aur kyon ho raha hai .. waise bhi jaato mein mood swings bahut hote hai .. so kahani ki theme kab badal jaaye kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta .. ab Daksh ka Raichands aur Roys se kya connection hai .. ye to ye 3 partiya hi bata sakti hai .. magar meri samajh mein AAditya roy ki bakchodi samajh nahi aa rahi .. ki wo kyon bina baat ke apni marwane mein laga pada hai .. ab dekho Kiran akeli nahi hai uske saath Saanvi bhi rehne ke liye aa gayi hai .. agle update mein Daksh ka kya reaction hota hai Saanvi ko college mein dekh kar .. iska intezaar rahega...
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Aapko kyu lag raha hai ye jaat ke dwara likhi ja rahi hai
Aur Bhai theme to same hai kuch change nahi hua
Aapko kya pasand nahi aaya jo aapne aise bola please mujhe bataye
bhai maine ye nahi kaha ki muzhe story mein kuch pasand nahi aaya (theme se related) .. theme wali baat isliye kahi kyon ki story mein bahut he jyaada seriousness si aa gayi hai .. pichle 1-2 update padh kar aisa feel nahi ho raha ki ye engineering college ke students ki story hai .. aur ye Daksh ki bhi self assessment wali baat kuch jyaada he over the top lag rahi hai .. jaise ki kayi baar story mein repeat kiya hai Daksh ne ki wo kitna khatarnaak hai .. aur wo kisi ko nuksaan nahi pahuchana chahta hai .. lets say KIRAN ko lekar ye constantly uspar focus banaye hue hai .. ek baar to kehta hai ki Kiran ko muzhse khatra hai .. aur usko door rehna chahiye .. aur even Arjun aur friends ko bhi hint de chuka hai ki they might get affected or hurt by all his deeds .. that he is planning to commmit .. agar isko itni hi chinta hai .. to khud ko isolate kyo nahi kar leta .. from the entire group ...
ye kuch loose points hai story mein .. that's entirely my personal assessment and perspective ...
aur ek story writing style se related .. wo theme change wali baat ye thi .. jaise ki aapne update ke last para mein khud he kuch question put-up kiya hai .. so ye positive outlook laga story writing se related
RAJIV SHAW
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Bhai me apke story me comment bale chota line rahta hai lekin me apke har story ka har update phadta hu
Super update hai bhai
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