Adultery Life of an Engineer(adultery+romance+action) (Completed)

[Malik-18]

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[Guffy]

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[Raj142]

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[Malik-18]

 

[Lone survivor]

bhai maine ye nahi kaha ki muzhe story mein kuch pasand nahi aaya (theme se related) .. theme wali baat isliye kahi kyon ki story mein bahut he jyaada seriousness si aa gayi hai .. pichle 1-2 update padh kar aisa feel nahi ho raha ki ye engineering college ke students ki story hai .. aur ye Daksh ki bhi self assessment wali baat kuch jyaada he over the top lag rahi hai .. jaise ki kayi baar story mein repeat kiya hai Daksh ne ki wo kitna khatarnaak hai .. aur wo kisi ko nuksaan nahi pahuchana chahta hai .. lets say KIRAN ko lekar ye constantly uspar focus banaye hue hai .. ek baar to kehta hai ki Kiran ko muzhse khatra hai .. aur usko door rehna chahiye .. aur even Arjun aur friends ko bhi hint de chuka hai ki they might get affected or hurt by all his deeds .. that he is planning to commmit .. agar isko itni hi chinta hai .. to khud ko isolate kyo nahi kar leta .. from the entire group ...

ye kuch loose points hai story mein .. that's entirely my personal assessment and perspective ...

aur ek story writing style se related .. wo theme change wali baat ye thi .. jaise ki aapne update ke last para mein khud he kuch question put-up kiya hai .. so ye positive outlook laga story writing se related

Lekin abhi bhi aapne ye nahi bataya ki Jaat ka kaise laga aapko?
And that's why I asked everyone to write review lekin sab mujhe hi gyan dene lag jate hai
Chalo aapke points par aatein hai
Point 1- pichle do updates serious ho gaye and yes main manta hu lekin last ke 40 updates to engineering ke hi the aur puri bakchodi bhi dikhae hai
Point 2- self assessment wali baat ko main agree karta hu aur jitna baar bola gaya hai usko justify karne ke scene aapko aage milenge jisse aapko ye clear ho jaega ki ye jo abhi aapko over the top lag raha hai ye actual me nahi tha
Abhi ke liye aap es point pe sahi ho
Point 3- Kiran ki importance bahut jada hai sayad Arjun se bhi jada aur saanvi se bhi jada to uspar focus karna banta hai
Point 4- isolate karne ka bola aapne
Do you really think that it is possible even after you had spent one and half year with the same group
Aapko ye lagta hai ki bina kuch bole sabse alag ho jaega aur koe kuch nahi bolega
Questions to uthenge na aur uska jawab kya dega?
Agar usse pehle hi Kiran ke bare me pata hota to sayad ye situation hi nahi aati na
I hope ab aapko sab clear ho gaya hoga
Ye engineering par story thi aur engineering par hi khatam hogi
Thank you for letting me know about your perspective
I will try to improve in the upcoming updates

 

[Lone survivor]

Update-47

Daksh chauhan aur uske group ke sath pee raha tha aur bakchodi to jaise chalti hi hai jab ye sab sath hote hai

Chauhan- Daksh yaar kasol jane ka plan cancel ho gaya tha bahut bura laga yaar
Ritesh- meri badua lagi bc

Daksh- koe nahi
Fir chal lenge sala etni tension kyu le raha hai
Chauhan- aise banane se agar hum kabhi humari trip successful hoti to bc aaj hum bhi chand par pahuch jate hai

Daksh- Bhai Chand walo ko Chand par hi rahne de
Hum yahi ka plan karte hai kuch
Ritesh- mujhe pata hai ye abhi kya bolega

Daksh- ki abhi kasol jana hai
Mujhe pata hai gand na marao
Chauhan- abhi chalte hai
Abhi nahi gaye to fir kabhi nahi ja paenge

Daksh- semester ke bich me nahi ja sakte
Upar se end sem bhi aa rahe hai
Ritesh- Daksh sahi bol raha hai
Exam ke baad chalte hai

Chauhan- abhi jana hai matlab abhi jana hai
Daksh- nasha ho gaya hai esse

Chauhan- bc Bhai ki baat nahi manega ab
Daksh- reality me aaja bhai
Bich me nahi ja sakte
Attendance vaise hi short chal rahi hai
Gand maar jaegi bhai

Chauhan- Bhai samjhta hai to chalega
Daksh- esse koe ruchi ki dilao bc

Ritesh- Bhai sala relationship me nahi hota na to pakka baja chuka hota usse
Chauhan- kya maal hai bc
Kal hi hilaya tha

Daksh- bas aur koe kaam to bacha nahi hai
Sale first year aae hai pata le kisi ko
Chauhan- sakal dekh meri
Bhai daru aur ganjhe se health ki bhi maa chod li
Sala kon pategi mujhse

Daksh- paise to hai na
Bas paat jaegi try to kar
Chauhan- meri sidhi shadi hoga bhai
Aur vo bhi arrange

Daksh- Maine to suna tha yaha kuch scene chal raha hai tera
Chauhan- vo to aise hi masti kar rahe the
Lekin bc scene to tere chal rahe hai aajkal

Daksh- mere kya chal rahe hai
Chauhan- thoda underground rah
Tere jaise bando ko etna khule me nahi gumna chahiye

Daksh- kya hua hai
Serious look deke
Ritesh- kisi seniors ke sath pange hue the tere?

Daksh- ha lekin kafi time ki baat hogaye
Serious kuch nahi tha
Ritesh- beta serious yehi tha ki vo seniors the aur tu juniors

Daksh- hua kya ye batega
Chauhan- tera naam misuse kar rahe hai
Parso hume pata chala to do teeno ko achi tarah maara
Lekin Bhai mamla serious hai

Daksh- lavde marni jaruri thi?
Aur mujhe kyu nahi bataya?
Ritesh- marni jaruri thi kyuki vo afvah faila rahe the ki Daksh college me ladkiyo ka mms banata hai
Aur tujhe batana tha lekin tera phone off tha

Daksh- aur bc mujhe ye abhi tak pata bhi nahi chala
Chauhan- tu unki tension mat le
Unhe ache se samjha diya hai
Lekin tu ye mat bhul ki tu hai kon aur yaha kis makshad se aaya hai
Jitna limelight se door rahega utna acha hai

Daksh- are maine kuch kiya thode hi tha
Aur sala us incident ko bhi 6 mahine ho gaye
Ritesh- senior hai etni aasani se nahi chhodenge

Daksh- kitni maari?
Ritesh- jada nahi
Bas 8-10 thapad

Daksh- ab vo seniors nahi rah gaye bc
Chauhan- super senior se pitvaya hai

Daksh- lekin mc tum log to the na vaha
Ajeeb gandu ho yaar
Ritesh- yaha rah ke sirf bhai log hi banaye hai
Tu unki tension mat le bas khuda dhayan rakh

Fir kuch der yaha vaha ki baat karte rahe aur uske baad Daksh apne flat ki taraf chala gaya

Raste me Daksh sochta ja raha tha
Madarchod marenge sale mere hathon behanchod
Logo ko apni life se pyaar hi nahi hai

Aur sala khud ek ladki se takra gaya

Ladki- dekh ke nahi chal sakte kya?
Etni peene ki kya jarurat thi ki thik se chal bhi na pao
Bina Daksh ko dekhe Priya ye sab bol gaye aur apna samaan uthane lagi

Daksh vahi khada raha aur koe reaction nahi diya jab Priya ne dekha ki bc abhi tak sorry bhi nahi bola to gusse me upar dekha aur samne Daksh ko khada dekh ke bilkul chhup ho gaye

Daksh- kuch bol rahi thi tum?
Priya- kam piya karo

Daksh- kya?
Priya- saraab aur kya?

Daksh- Maine socha doodh peene ka bol rahi ho lekin kya karu taza milta hi nahi hai
Priya- bahut cheap hai ye aur bahut purana bhi
Vo apna samaan utha ke Daksh ke sath sath chalne lag gaye

Daksh- etne raat ko akele?
Mujhse dar nahi lagta?
Priya- humara kaam hi yehi hai na darna
Kyu humesha ladkiya hi dare aur tu jaise saand banke kabhi bhi kahi bhi gum sako

Daksh- boyfriend se ladke aae hai kya?
Priya- tumse kya?

Daksh- main to bas dekh raha tha ki if their is a window
Priya- us din to badi badi baatein kar rahe the ki baad me dekh lena mera mood kare ya na kare
Ab kya hua?

Daksh- tu sach me ladke aae hai na
Ya fir breakup karke
Ab mujhe kandha dena padega
Priya- koe jarurat nahi hai
Samjhe
Kamjor nahi hu main

Daksh- tu ja re bc kisi ka gussa kisi pe utar rahi hai
Priya- to tujhe kisne kaha hai baat karne ka

Daksh kuch nahi bolta aur aage aage chalne lagta hai aur Priya gusse me uske piche

Kuch der baad
Priya- I'm sorry
Daksh- fuck off

Priya- sorry bol rahi hu na
Kyu etna attitude dikha rahi hai
Daksh- nahi chahiye teri sorry
Kahi aur jake gand macha

Priya- kuch aur chahiye to?
Naughty style me
Daksh- nahi tere se to kuch nahi chahiye

Priya- soch le
Ab kuch bhi mangega to mana nahi karungi
Daksh ruk gaya piche mud ke Priya ko dekhne laga jo usse hi dekh rahi thi aur uske dekhne se hi pata chal raha tha ki ye sach me aaj mana nahi karegi

Daksh- kuch nahi chahiye
Suna tune?
Kuch nahi chahiye
Ab nikal yaha se
Aur gusse me vaha se chala gaya aur Priya muh banate hue apne raste nikal gaye

Daksh sabse pehle seema ke pass gaya aur usko bataya ki usse kya kya bolna hai
Bc kya halaat kar rakhi thi Daksh ne uski
Aisa lag raha tha jaise pichle kuch dino se sirf ro hi rahi hai

Usko bata ke apne flat par chala gaya jaha sab hall me bathe football ka match dekh rahe the

Arjun- aaj city food degi
Pawan- match khatam hone de
Aaj fir roega tu

Arjun- vo to beta waqt hi batega
Daksh- beer khatam ho gaye kya

Karan- room me padi hai
Daksh- to fridge kya gand me dalne ke liye hai

Hritik- nahi teri gand jamane ke liye
Daksh- sahi hai beta
Sikh gaya tu bhi hath ke sath sath jaban chalana

Arjun- Daksh koe ladki aae thi tere se milne
Daksh- kon
Beer kholte hue bolta hai

Arjun- pehle kabhi dekha nahi
Daksh- naam to bataya hoga?

Arjun- saanvi tha sayad
Daksh- sun lo sab ke sab
Us Ladki ke aas pass nahi dekhne chahiye mujhe koe bhi
Na tum sab aur na koe aur ladka

Karan- pyaar vyaar to nahi ho gaya tujhe
Daksh- uske aas pass dikha to bataunga kya hua hai

Karan- gussa Kyu kar raha hai
Main to usse janta bhi nahi
Teri kasam aaj se pehle dekha bhi nahi usse
Daksh- aise hi rahna

Pawan- Daksh tu bc badal gaya hai
Daksh- sale maine kya kiya ab?

Arjun- kahi nahi badla bhai
Pehle bhi kuch nahi batata tha aur abhi bhi kuch nahi batata

Daksh- exam aa rahe hai
Padhae kar lete hai
Karan- dekha ab ye padhne ki bhi baat karne laga hai
Mujhe to lagta hai espar kisi bhoot pareet ki aatma aagaye hai
Jo esko chutiya bana rahi hai

Daksh- kyu gand maar rahe ho bc
Hritik- sahi to bol rahe hai
Bc kab kya karta hai kyu karta hai lavda kisi ko kuch pata nahi rahta

Daksh- abse sab bataunga thik
Es baar maaf kardo bas

Us raat aise hi thodi bahut aur bakchodi hue aur fir sab so gaye

Next day class me surprise test le liya teacher ne aur sabki gand faat gaye
Daksh to bhag ke bc Nidhi ke side me bath gaya kyuki ek vohi thi Jo gand bacha sakti thi
Aur actual me bachae bhi
Pura ka Pura paper dikhaya usne Daksh ko

Lekin baki sabki to galat hi gand faati
Aur yaha surprise test ke marks final me add hote the esliye sab ro alag rahe the

Test ke baad
Karan- yaar ye bc surprise test tha ya shocking test
Aisa kon karta hai yaar bhole bhale bacho ke sath

Hritik- lode lag gaye
Aaj se padhae start
Sala 6 6 gante padhunga aaj
Daksh- to pehle se padhna chahiye tha na ya fir mujhse hi padh leta
Dekhna full marks aaenge

Pawan- main eska muh tod dunga
Arjun- main sath hu tere
Tood de

Pawan- tu kya bol raha hai bc
Pass to ho hi jaega
Arjun- marks ke piche nahi excellence ke piche bhago

Hritik- bc dialog to dhang se bol le
Arjun- tu samjh gaya na?
Bahut hai etna

Daksh- aajo kuch kha ke aatein hai
Karan- ha chalo
Vaise bhi bahut dimag kha chuke ho

Ye sab vaha se canteen chale gaye jaha Kiran aur saanvi ek sath pehle se hi bathe the

Daksh ne ignore kiya kyuki koe scene nahi create karna chahta tha aur ek alag table par bath jate hai

Daksh- le aao Bhai same order mere liye
Pawan- tere nakuar lag rahe hai

Daksh- ha
Nahi hai?
Arjun- sale tera breakup ho gaya kya
Anjali dikhti nahi?

Pawan- first base chal raha hai
Third me dikhne lag jaegi
Karan- batao kaise din aagaye hai
Eske bhi base chalne lag gaye hai

Hritik- kya kami hai mere Bhai me
Mana ki sakal se chutiya dikhta hai
Lekin etna to chalta hai
Ha thodi akal kaam hai
Lekin usse kya hota hai
Maal bhi jada fukta hai
Lekin usse kya hota hai bas khada hona hi to band hoga
Maa......

Pawan- bas bas ho gaya tera
Chhup rah aab
Saanvi- kya hum aap logo ko join kar sakte hai

Daksh aur uske dosto ko to pehle hi pata chal gaya tha saanvi ke bare me aur Daksh ne jo bola tha vo bhi sabko yaad hi tha esliye

Karan- sorry jagah nahi hai
Saanvi chair side se khichte hue
Ab

Hritik- tum vahi bath sakti ho na
Yaha uncomfortable hogi
Saanvi- nahi main bilkul comfortable hu
Aur Kiran ko leke unke sath bath gaye

Sab Daksh ko dekhne lage lekin usne koe reaction nahi diya aur uth ke khane ko lene chala gaya

***** Daksh ek room me batha hua tha jaha aur koe nahi tha aur uske hatho me bandage lagi hue thi
Sayad punishment mili thi aur kisi ka wait kar raha tha lekin subah se shyam ho gaye thi lekin abhi tak koe aaya nahi tha

Ek school ka chhota sa bacha subah se bina khaye peeye bas kisi ke intezaar me tha ki sayad koe aaega aur uski situation samjhega

Lekin aisa abhi tak to hua nahi tha aur na hone ke koe aasar lag rahe the

Tabhi ek teacher aaya
Teacher- tumhre mom dad nahi aa sakte unhe kuch urgent kaam hai
Daksh ko jaise eska andesha pehle hi hogya tha esliye usne kuch respond nahi diya

Teacher- unhone maafi mangi hai aur bola hai agar aage aisi galti hue to tumhe saza de
Daksh- Sir maine galti ki hai aur main saza ke liye tayar hu
Unhone jo karna tha unhone vo kiya aur maine jo karna tha vo maine kiya
Ab aap school ke inyaam ke ansur mujhe jo punishment doge mujhe manjur hai

Teacher- us ladke ka hath tod diya tumne
Kya tumhe pata hai eski saja Kya hogi
Daksh- aapne kaha ha ki meri galti thi to meri galti thi
Esliye aap jo bologe mujhe manjur hoga

Teacher- Daksh aakhir kis baat ka gussa hai tumhe?
Kyu apne jindagi barbaad karne ki thane bathe ho
Daksh- jindagi hai hi kaha Ma'am
Aur jo hai vo bhi sayad meri nahi hai

Teacher- tumne aisa kiya kyu?
Ye to bata sakte ho na
Daksh- koe mujhe kuch bole main bardast kar leta lekin ek aisa bhi hai meri jindagi me jiska agar naam tak kisi ki jubaan par aajaye to main uski jubaan khich lunga
Us ladke ne to bahut kuch bol diya tha
Kaise chhod deta

Teacher- aur vo kon hai jiski vajah se ye sab kiya
Daksh- sayad koe naata nahi hai mera uske sath ya fir ek bahut gehra naata ho sakta hai
Mujhe nahi pata
Lekin she is everything for me
EVERYTHING......

 

[Rahul]

Lekin abhi bhi aapne ye nahi bataya ki Jaat ka kaise laga aapko?
And that's why I asked everyone to write review lekin sab mujhe hi gyan dene lag jate hai
Chalo aapke points par aatein hai
Point 1- pichle do updates serious ho gaye and yes main manta hu lekin last ke 40 updates to engineering ke hi the aur puri bakchodi bhi dikhae hai
Point 2- self assessment wali baat ko main agree karta hu aur jitna baar bola gaya hai usko justify karne ke scene aapko aage milenge jisse aapko ye clear ho jaega ki ye jo abhi aapko over the top lag raha hai ye actual me nahi tha
Abhi ke liye aap es point pe sahi ho
Point 3- Kiran ki importance bahut jada hai sayad Arjun se bhi jada aur saanvi se bhi jada to uspar focus karna banta hai
Point 4- isolate karne ka bola aapne
Do you really think that it is possible even after you had spent one and half year with the same group
Aapko ye lagta hai ki bina kuch bole sabse alag ho jaega aur koe kuch nahi bolega
Questions to uthenge na aur uska jawab kya dega?
Agar usse pehle hi Kiran ke bare me pata hota to sayad ye situation hi nahi aati na
I hope ab aapko sab clear ho gaya hoga
Ye engineering par story thi aur engineering par hi khatam hogi
Thank you for letting me know about your perspective
I will try to improve in the upcoming updates

bhai ji pichle do update really shandaar the hamko bakchodi se jada story ke point achche lagte lekin aap jaise bhi likho hum sath hain

 

[Malik-18]

UPDATE IS ​

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LAGTA HAI SENIORS ITNI ASANI SE DAKSH KA PICHA CHORNE K ​

MOOD MEIN NAHI HAIN...AUR UPER SE CHAUHAN NE BHI LAPHRA KAR​

LIYA TO LAGTA HAI AB SCENE TO ZROOR HO GA...AUR JO DAKSH​

LAPHRON SE BACH RHA THA IS LAPHRE MEIN A JAYE...JIS TARAH​

CHAUHAN DAKSH SE BAAT KR RHA HAI US HISAAB SE TO LAGTA HAI​

K WO DAKSH K PAST K BAARE MEIN JANTA HAI...​

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(AUR HAN AP NE PICHY KISI UPADTE MEIN DAKSH K KISI BACHPAN​

K DOST KA ZIKAR KIYA THA...AUR US NE DAKSH K PAAS ANA BHI THA​

BUT US KA KOI SCENE AYA NAHI SAMNY ABHI TAK)​

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DAKSH KA GUSSA CONTROL SE BAHIR HONA START HO GEYA HAI...SAANVI​

WALI BAAT PE BHI DOSTON PE GUSSA HO GEYA...WESE NORMAL WAY MEIN ​

DAKSH KEH SAKTA THA UHNE SAANVI SE DUR REHNE K LIYE...​

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IDHAR SAANVI NE BHI APNA MISSION START KAR DIYA HAI...DAKSH​

KI GANG MEIN INVOLVE HONE KI KOSHISH KAR RHI HAI...SAANVI KIRAN​

K SATH BETHI THI MUJHY TO LAGA THA K ARJUN WAGERA KIRAN K PAAS​

HI JA KAR BEHTEIN GE BUT IDHAR TO ULTA HI HO GEYA BC...​

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BHAI AB STORY CONFUSE KARNE LAG GAI HAI...TO BEHTAR HO GA​

K KUCH POINTS REVEAL KRO...BAKI JO AP KO BEHTAR LAGY...​

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[Rahul]

awesome update aur last me ye kaun hai daksh ne jiski baat kiya aur uske mom dad bahut busy hai life me apne

 

[Malik-18]

UPDATE K LAST MEIN AP KI POETRY MISS HO RI IS BAAR​