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Raat mein saare revo clear...
Adultery LLL- Love , Life & Luck (tragedy of life)
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Naina
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Pehle daily ek update diya kijiye....
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Bhai sahab agar hum pad nhi rhe hote to na to aapke post pe itna comment hota waiting ka na hi itne views jate 
Bnao jyada romanchk bhai tbhi jada maja aega
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Shukriya dost
Kahani aapki bahut achhi hai aur update thode jaldi dene ki koshish kiya kijiyega
V jaishe pichhli kahani aapne jaldi puri ki ishe mat karna bhai abhi
Mitr jaishe aapne ish kahani ki ruperekha taiyaar ki hai vaishe chalaye
Romanch suspens aur thodi comedy v darde mohabat
Baaki jo aapko behter lage kahani ki maang ke anushaar bhai
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Kal raat ko dung
The king
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Jesa aap chaho par maja dugna hona chahiye
jitutripathi00
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Aisi jabarjast story ko band karne ki aap sochna bhi nahi bhai, apki ye story to pichle story se bhi shandaar hai. Aur mujhe intzaar rahta hai aapke update ka.
Naina
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writer sahab ki soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpanao ko shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya har ek pehlu aur mod ..
kahani mein ek romance, family drama, farz, apno ke liye pyar aur samarpan, action, suspense ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye dilo dimag pe
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..
Update sadharan si dincharya ho ya sadharan si ghatana.. The Thinker saheb usko apni kalam ke jaadu se jaan daal dete hai... itna manoram aur manoranjanmay kar dete hai ki sadharan baatein bhi apne apme aasadhaaran ho jaati hai... ...
Kahani ke sakaratmak kirdaar halaat ya paristithi dekhke nahi badlte balki woh atut rahte hai, lead characters kaise har muskil ko paar karke manjil paa lete hai, kaise kathin se kathin paristithi par bhi tut nahi ... iski udaharan The Thinker saheb ki kahani ka mul mantra hai...
Hero woh hota hai joh khud se pehle dusro ke bade mein soche . aur The Thinker saheb ki kahani ke lead characters sach mein ek nayak ki soch rakhta hai.. aur un kirdaaro ki is soch ko ek Salam...
writer sahab romance ho ya phir tanavpurn situation ho ya khushi ka mahol ho ya phir koi dukhad ghatana in sabhi topic ko kayi baar soch vichar kar lete hai ki kis tarah se pesh ki jaye taaki readers us topic ko padhte waqt unko aisa lage ki ghat rahi ghatanaye jaise saamne ghat rahi ho ...acceptable ho... aur padhne mein maza bhi aaye... aur entertaining bhi ho...
Realistic feeling which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in a film - but you are a master at this.. by taking every aspect into consideration, you are moving the story forward. Along with romance, there is a unique confluence of drama and a little suspense in the story. Which is completely original.
bole to
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills The Thinker sahab
Intezaar agle update ke liye
kahani mein ek romance, family drama, farz, apno ke liye pyar aur samarpan, action, suspense ke sath sath ek manmahok mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt kahani ki prati dilchaspi badhti jaye dilo dimag pe
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..
Update sadharan si dincharya ho ya sadharan si ghatana.. The Thinker saheb usko apni kalam ke jaadu se jaan daal dete hai... itna manoram aur manoranjanmay kar dete hai ki sadharan baatein bhi apne apme aasadhaaran ho jaati hai... ...
Kahani ke sakaratmak kirdaar halaat ya paristithi dekhke nahi badlte balki woh atut rahte hai, lead characters kaise har muskil ko paar karke manjil paa lete hai, kaise kathin se kathin paristithi par bhi tut nahi ... iski udaharan The Thinker saheb ki kahani ka mul mantra hai...
Hero woh hota hai joh khud se pehle dusro ke bade mein soche . aur The Thinker saheb ki kahani ke lead characters sach mein ek nayak ki soch rakhta hai.. aur un kirdaaro ki is soch ko ek Salam...
writer sahab romance ho ya phir tanavpurn situation ho ya khushi ka mahol ho ya phir koi dukhad ghatana in sabhi topic ko kayi baar soch vichar kar lete hai ki kis tarah se pesh ki jaye taaki readers us topic ko padhte waqt unko aisa lage ki ghat rahi ghatanaye jaise saamne ghat rahi ho ...acceptable ho... aur padhne mein maza bhi aaye... aur entertaining bhi ho...
Realistic feeling which is a very difficult subject - whether in writing or acting in a film - but you are a master at this.. by taking every aspect into consideration, you are moving the story forward. Along with romance, there is a unique confluence of drama and a little suspense in the story. Which is completely original.
bole to
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills The Thinker sahab
Intezaar agle update ke liye