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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Super fantastic update bhai
 

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UPDATE-33
* ab yehi tumhri sachae hai, tumhe raaj karna tha na to diya tumhe raaj karne ko...HELL... ab se tum hell ke raja hoge...tumhe yaha se kahi jane ki anumati nahi hai...kayamat aajane tak tum hell me hi rahoge aur yaha aaye aatma ko unke kiye ki saja doge...tumhe saja dene ka bahut shok hai na to tumhra ye shok aaj pura ho raha hai... tum hell se band gaye ho lucifer aur ab yehi tumhra aaj aur yehi tumhra kal hai...tum kabhi vapas heaven nahi ja paoge... aaj se tum ek fallen angel kahloge aur jab jab koe apni shaktiyo ka galat istemaal karega to usse tumhri misaal deke samjhaya jayega ki galat raste par chalne ka anjaam kya hota hai***

*** kitna suhaana mosam hai na bilkul tumhri tarah...mera man karta hai ki hum dono yaha hi bas jaye aur hume dekhne wala koe nahi ho(lucifer bol raha hai)..... acha aur humare apno ka kya hoga? Vo ek na ek din to hume dundte hue yaha aa hi jayenge aur jaha tak mujhe pata hai tumhe dundna bilkul muskil nahi hoga?(ladki)

Main bas es moment ko jee bhar ke jeena chahta hu... mujhe pata nahi aage kya hoga lekin mujhe ye bahut ache se pata hai ki mera ant acha nahi hoga aur us ant se pehle main tumhre sath jee bhar ke jeena chahta hu(lucifer)
Tum befajul me etna sab sochte ho, kuch nahi hoga tumhre sath... tum dunia ke sabse shaktiyali person ho...tumhe kabhi kuch ho hi nahi sakta(ladki)
Agar main mar gaya to main vada karta hu vapas jarur aaunga tumhre pass...kya tum mera intezaar karogi(lucifer)
Har ek din, har ek mahine, har ek saal, har ek jeevan me main tumhra aur bas tumhra intezaar karungi lucifer(ladki)****

Aaj lucifer ki aankhen bilkul aaram se khuli kyuki ab sayad usko bhi en sab chhijo ki aadat ho gaye thi
Vo utha apna muh doya aur har roj ki tarah balcony me aakar bath gaye aur subah hone ka intezaar karne laga

Dusri taraf

Tara- maine mana kiya tha na ki tum us se door rahogi aur sirf kaam se related baat karogi?
Ashmita- didi usse chot aae thi main bas as a partner uski thodi help ki

Tara- ashu mujhe sab dikh raha hai
Aur vo tumhra partner nahi hai
Ashmita- vo pure time mere sath rahta hai to eska matlab kuch to hai hi na vo
Aur kuch galat intention nahi hai meri

Tara- tumhri nahi hai ye pata hai mujhe lekin uski?
Kya uski koe galat intentions nahi hai?
Aur kya tum es baare me 100% sure ho?
Ashmita- I think he just trying to help didi

Tara- ashu tumhe us se pyaar to nahi hogya na?
Ashmita- kaisi baat kar rahi ho?
Hum to dost bhi nahi hai pyaar to bahut door ki baat hai

Tara- mujhe us se ab achi feelings nahi aati
Ashmita- vo mujhe hurt nahi karega aap bilkul tension mat lo

Tara- aur tumhe kaise pata?
Kya usse tumse pyaar hogya?
Ashmita- aapko lagta hai lucifer jaise bande ko kisi se pyaar hoga?

Tara- ha ye baat bhi hai lekin tum usse door rahogi samjhi?
Ashmita- didi office ke time ke baad main usse milungi bhi nahi okay?

Tara- ha ye sahi rahega
Jab se vo aaya hai life me sab kuch ulta pulta ho raha hai
Ashmita- sab theek ho jayega didi
Bhagwan par bharosa rakho

Tara- chal theek hai
Meri ek meeting hai main aati hu
Ashmita- etni late?

Tara- beta jab client free hota hai tabhi meeting ho jati hai
Humare hath me nahi rahta kuch
Ashmita- acha aur kon hai ye client?* ankh maarte hue*

Tara- 60 saal ka buddha hai
Apna dimag mat chalo
Ashmita- okay okay didi
Jao

Uske baad Tara chali jati hai aur ashmita hall me TV chala ke bath jati hai
Do minute baad hi door bell baji aur ashmita ko pata nahi kyu laga ki lucifer hai
Vo bhagte hue gate ki taraf gaye aur bina dekhe
Maine tumse bola tha na rest karne ke liye? Tumhe samjh me nahi aata kya?
Aur yaha kya karne...... bas etna hi bol paye kyuki uski najar samne khadi inaaya par chali gaye

Inaaya ko dekhte hi ashmita ka galla hi sukh gaya, ek to inaaya ashmita se nafrat karti hai dusra vo usse apne office tak rukne nahi deti to yaha ghar par kaise aagaye?
Aur tisra koe bhi reason ho acha reason to hoga nahi

Ashmita- inaaya??
Inaaya- andar aajau?

Ashmita- ohh shit I'm sorry
Please come
Aur ashmita side se hat gaye

Inaaya aaye aur soffe par bath gaye
Ashmita- tea coffee?

Inaaya- nahi
Kaam tha kuch
Ashmita bhi uske samne bath gaye aur boli ha bolo?
Kuch problem hai?

Inaaya- ye project lucifer ne mujhe dilaya tha, galat tarike se
Tumhe milna chahiye tha esliye maine clients se baat karli hai aur apna naam vapas le liya hai
Ashmita- lekin kyu?
Ab jab tumhe mil hi gaya tha To tum kar lo mujhe koe issue nahi hai

Inaaya- main fair tarike se khelti hu
Unfair tarika bahut logo ne use kiya hai aur mujhe apno se door kar diya main nahi chahti jo ek do log mere pass bache hai vo bhi mujhse door chale jaye
Ashmita- I'm sorry inaaya
I'm really really sorry

Inaaya- main tumhri sorry sunane nahi aae, mujhe bas tumhe ye dena tha
Ye sare papers hai maine sign kar diya hai aur clients ne bhi kar diya hai bas tumhre baki hai
Ye kar dena aur project tumhra
Ashmita- main ye nahi kar sakti

Inaaya- tumhe karna ho to karo aur nahi karna to mat karo
Mera kaam tha sach sach batana aur maine bata diya
Ashmita- lucifer ne pehle hi mujhe bata diya tha ye

Inaaya- ha jarur bataya hoga koe na koe fayda jo hoga uska esme
Ashmita- kya matlab?

Inaaya- koe matlab nahi hai
Mera tumse ya lucifer se koe lena dena nahi hai
Jo tumhra man kare vo tum karo aur usko to bolu hi kya?
Ab main chalti hu aur ho sake to ye sign kar dena, mera naam aur kharab ho jayega nahi to
Aur inaaya khadi hoke jane lagi
Ashmita- inaaya?
Coffee to pee lo
Tumhe bahut pasand hai

Inaaya- meri pasand napasand en saalo me bahut change ho gaye hai
Good bye
Aur inaaya vaha se chali gaye
Ashmita vahi khadi rah gaye

Usse pata tha ki lucifer ne kuch na kuch to kiya hai jiski vajah se inaaya etni sad hai aur lucifer se puchne ka fayda nahi hai kyuki vo kuch batayega nahi aur inaaya kuch sunegi nahi esliye ashmita ne bina soche samjhe vo paper sign kar diya aur TV band karke apne room me chali gaye

Usse pata nahi kyu lekin lucifer par bahut gussa aa raha tha... sayad esliye ki lucifer ki vajah se inaaya usse aur door chali gaye ho?
Ya fir koe aur reason bhi ho sakta hai vo to dekhna hi padega

Suresh- rathore ke bare me pata kiya?
Vo jarur kuch na kuch karne aaya hai yaha
Aadmi- jada kuch pata nahi chala
Vo mostly ek aurat ke sath rahta hai aur pura ka pura business uski beti hi sambhal rahi hai

Suresh- inaaya?
Aadmi- ha

Suresh- vo aurat kon hai?
Kya rista hai rathore ka us se?
Adhmi- premika hai rathore ki

Suresh- uske bare me bhi pata karo
Aur ye bhi pata karne ki kosis karo ki rathore yaha kon konse business me involve hona chahta hai?
Aadmi- automobile sector me to hi gaya hai, eske baad textile aur entertainment industry ke bare me bhi sunane me aaya hai

Suresh- Sala hume nanga karne hi aaya hai vo yaha
Aadmi- hum bahut pehle se hai yaha
Kuch nahi bigad aayega humara

Suresh- vo jitna ek saal me kamata hau utni meri net worth hai to ye sochne ki galti bilkul mat karna ki vo kuch bigad nahi paega
He has unlimited supply of money
Vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Aadmi- lekin vo empire to inaaya chala rahi hai

Suresh- naam to rathore ka hai na
Chalaye chahe koe bhi
Ek kaam karo unki koe kamjori pata karo aur koe inside information de sake usko bhi dundo jis par hum trust kar sakte hai
Koe na koe to game jarur chal raha hai hume jaldi se jaldi pata karna padega nahi to nange hoke sadak par bhikh mangni padegi
Aadmi- main karta hu kuch

Suresh- theek hai jao
Main kuch dino tak nahi aaunga mujhe bahut jaruri kaam hai
Esliye jab main vapas lotu to mujhe achi khabar milni chahiye
Aadmi- aap kaha ja rahe ho?

Suresh- ye tumhe nahi sochna chahiye
Apne kaam par dhayan do
Aadmi- sorry sir
Suresh- ab tum ja sakte ho

Kavish- guruji lucifer mujhse bahut sawal puch raha hai
Main usse kya jawab du?
Guruji- abhi usse kuch jawab dene ki jarurat nahi hai
Waqt aane par sab kuch apne aap pata chal jayega usse

Kavish- vo waqt se pehle hi kayamat le aayega guruji
Guruji- us kayamat ko rokne ki takaat hai usme, esliye jada mat socho aur jitna main bol raha hu utna karo

Kavish- aur KAAL ka kya?
Agar vo safal hogya to?
Guruji- KAAL ka anjaam pehle se tay hai, thoda bahut khelna hai use khelne do, etna to hak banta hai uska

Kavish- kahi vo lucifer ko nuksan na pahuch de
Agar ashmita ko kuch kar diya to lucifer pagal ho jayega
Guruji- maine sab soch rakha hai
Tum apna muh band rakho aur jo ho raha hai usse hone do
Har chhij waqt par hi hoti hai aur abhi sahi waqt nahi aaya hai

Kavish- aap lucifer se aakhir chahte kya ho?
Guruji- main usse kuch nahi chahta main to usse khush dekhna chahta hu

Kavish- aapko pata hai na vo khush nahi rah sakta fir aap use kaise khush dekh paoge?
Guruji- jaisa maine kaha ki maine sab soch rakha hai bas abhi waqt sahi nahi aaya hai to abhi waqt sahi nahi aaya hai aur waqt sahi aane ka intezaar karo
Mujhe baar baar bula kar mera samay kharab na karo
Kavish- maafi chahta hu guruji
Guruji- yaad rahe lucifer ko kisi bare me kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye
Kavish- jee guruji


Eda- KAAL ne jhakmi kar hi diya lucifer ko, kahi vo...nahi nahi lucifer to mar nahi sakta na?
Raaj- KAAL ne jhakmi kiya mara nahi kyuki vo maar nahi sakta aur jhakam to bhar hi jate hai

Eda- lucifer ko khoon aaya tha
Raaj- hmm maine dekha aur usse dard bhi to hua tha

Eda- kahi ashmita.....
Raaj- nahi ye nahi ho sakta
Aisa kabhi nahi hoga

Eda- fir kya vajah ho sakti hai?
Raaj- mujhe lagta hai prithvi lok par jane ki vajah se uski shaktiya kam ho rahi hai

Eda- ha ye ho sakta hai
Lekin aise to vo bahut kamjor pad jayega aur kisi ka mukabala hi nahi kar payega?
Raaj- ab es baare me to main kya hi bata sakta hu?
Jab ye khel khilane wale hi chhup bathe hai to hum kha kar sakte hai?

Eda- ye khel bahut lamba chalega raaj
Raaj- lucifer ko jis din yaad aaya ussi din khatam ho jayega sab

Eda- lekin usse yaad aayegi?
Mujhe nahi lagta usse kabhi kisi chhij ki yaad aaegi
Raaj- aaegi eda aaegi
Usse halki fulki aane lag bhi gaye
Aur bahut jaldi usse sab yaad aajayega aur fir usse koe nahi rok payega

Eda- saanvi?
Raaj- saanvi ab nahi rahi eda
Tum janti to hum sab kuch?

Eda- lekin lucifer ko jab uski yaad aaegi to kya hoga?
Raaj- bahut sara khoon bahega aur kya hoga?
Bas yehi hoga
Hume us waqt lucifer se doori bana ke rakhni hai

Eda- kaas sab theek ho
Raaj- theek to nahi hoga
Ab se chhije bigadne lagegi aur bahut jada bigadti chali jayegi

Eda- hume lucifer par najar rakhni hogi
Raaj- agar hum lucifer ko vo sab karte dekhenge to hum kab karenge?
Ha?
Aur usse pata chal gaya to?

Eda- tum bhi na
Kahi ki baat kahi pahucha dete ho
Raaj- are meri jaan tum ho hi aisi chhij
Main kya karu

Eda- ab suru mat ho jana
Mera bilkul man nahi hai
Raaj- to man bana deta hu
Kitni hi der lagti hai meri jaan ka man banane me?

Aur ye dono rasleela me kho jate hai..
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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UPDATE-33
* ab yehi tumhri sachae hai, tumhe raaj karna tha na to diya tumhe raaj karne ko...HELL... ab se tum hell ke raja hoge...tumhe yaha se kahi jane ki anumati nahi hai...kayamat aajane tak tum hell me hi rahoge aur yaha aaye aatma ko unke kiye ki saja doge...tumhe saja dene ka bahut shok hai na to tumhra ye shok aaj pura ho raha hai... tum hell se band gaye ho lucifer aur ab yehi tumhra aaj aur yehi tumhra kal hai...tum kabhi vapas heaven nahi ja paoge... aaj se tum ek fallen angel kahloge aur jab jab koe apni shaktiyo ka galat istemaal karega to usse tumhri misaal deke samjhaya jayega ki galat raste par chalne ka anjaam kya hota hai***

*** kitna suhaana mosam hai na bilkul tumhri tarah...mera man karta hai ki hum dono yaha hi bas jaye aur hume dekhne wala koe nahi ho(lucifer bol raha hai)..... acha aur humare apno ka kya hoga? Vo ek na ek din to hume dundte hue yaha aa hi jayenge aur jaha tak mujhe pata hai tumhe dundna bilkul muskil nahi hoga?(ladki)

Main bas es moment ko jee bhar ke jeena chahta hu... mujhe pata nahi aage kya hoga lekin mujhe ye bahut ache se pata hai ki mera ant acha nahi hoga aur us ant se pehle main tumhre sath jee bhar ke jeena chahta hu(lucifer)
Tum befajul me etna sab sochte ho, kuch nahi hoga tumhre sath... tum dunia ke sabse shaktiyali person ho...tumhe kabhi kuch ho hi nahi sakta(ladki)
Agar main mar gaya to main vada karta hu vapas jarur aaunga tumhre pass...kya tum mera intezaar karogi(lucifer)
Har ek din, har ek mahine, har ek saal, har ek jeevan me main tumhra aur bas tumhra intezaar karungi lucifer(ladki)****

Aaj lucifer ki aankhen bilkul aaram se khuli kyuki ab sayad usko bhi en sab chhijo ki aadat ho gaye thi
Vo utha apna muh doya aur har roj ki tarah balcony me aakar bath gaye aur subah hone ka intezaar karne laga

Dusri taraf

Tara- maine mana kiya tha na ki tum us se door rahogi aur sirf kaam se related baat karogi?
Ashmita- didi usse chot aae thi main bas as a partner uski thodi help ki

Tara- ashu mujhe sab dikh raha hai
Aur vo tumhra partner nahi hai
Ashmita- vo pure time mere sath rahta hai to eska matlab kuch to hai hi na vo
Aur kuch galat intention nahi hai meri

Tara- tumhri nahi hai ye pata hai mujhe lekin uski?
Kya uski koe galat intentions nahi hai?
Aur kya tum es baare me 100% sure ho?
Ashmita- I think he just trying to help didi

Tara- ashu tumhe us se pyaar to nahi hogya na?
Ashmita- kaisi baat kar rahi ho?
Hum to dost bhi nahi hai pyaar to bahut door ki baat hai

Tara- mujhe us se ab achi feelings nahi aati
Ashmita- vo mujhe hurt nahi karega aap bilkul tension mat lo

Tara- aur tumhe kaise pata?
Kya usse tumse pyaar hogya?
Ashmita- aapko lagta hai lucifer jaise bande ko kisi se pyaar hoga?

Tara- ha ye baat bhi hai lekin tum usse door rahogi samjhi?
Ashmita- didi office ke time ke baad main usse milungi bhi nahi okay?

Tara- ha ye sahi rahega
Jab se vo aaya hai life me sab kuch ulta pulta ho raha hai
Ashmita- sab theek ho jayega didi
Bhagwan par bharosa rakho

Tara- chal theek hai
Meri ek meeting hai main aati hu
Ashmita- etni late?

Tara- beta jab client free hota hai tabhi meeting ho jati hai
Humare hath me nahi rahta kuch
Ashmita- acha aur kon hai ye client?* ankh maarte hue*

Tara- 60 saal ka buddha hai
Apna dimag mat chalo
Ashmita- okay okay didi
Jao

Uske baad Tara chali jati hai aur ashmita hall me TV chala ke bath jati hai
Do minute baad hi door bell baji aur ashmita ko pata nahi kyu laga ki lucifer hai
Vo bhagte hue gate ki taraf gaye aur bina dekhe
Maine tumse bola tha na rest karne ke liye? Tumhe samjh me nahi aata kya?
Aur yaha kya karne...... bas etna hi bol paye kyuki uski najar samne khadi inaaya par chali gaye

Inaaya ko dekhte hi ashmita ka galla hi sukh gaya, ek to inaaya ashmita se nafrat karti hai dusra vo usse apne office tak rukne nahi deti to yaha ghar par kaise aagaye?
Aur tisra koe bhi reason ho acha reason to hoga nahi

Ashmita- inaaya??
Inaaya- andar aajau?

Ashmita- ohh shit I'm sorry
Please come
Aur ashmita side se hat gaye

Inaaya aaye aur soffe par bath gaye
Ashmita- tea coffee?

Inaaya- nahi
Kaam tha kuch
Ashmita bhi uske samne bath gaye aur boli ha bolo?
Kuch problem hai?

Inaaya- ye project lucifer ne mujhe dilaya tha, galat tarike se
Tumhe milna chahiye tha esliye maine clients se baat karli hai aur apna naam vapas le liya hai
Ashmita- lekin kyu?
Ab jab tumhe mil hi gaya tha To tum kar lo mujhe koe issue nahi hai

Inaaya- main fair tarike se khelti hu
Unfair tarika bahut logo ne use kiya hai aur mujhe apno se door kar diya main nahi chahti jo ek do log mere pass bache hai vo bhi mujhse door chale jaye
Ashmita- I'm sorry inaaya
I'm really really sorry

Inaaya- main tumhri sorry sunane nahi aae, mujhe bas tumhe ye dena tha
Ye sare papers hai maine sign kar diya hai aur clients ne bhi kar diya hai bas tumhre baki hai
Ye kar dena aur project tumhra
Ashmita- main ye nahi kar sakti

Inaaya- tumhe karna ho to karo aur nahi karna to mat karo
Mera kaam tha sach sach batana aur maine bata diya
Ashmita- lucifer ne pehle hi mujhe bata diya tha ye

Inaaya- ha jarur bataya hoga koe na koe fayda jo hoga uska esme
Ashmita- kya matlab?

Inaaya- koe matlab nahi hai
Mera tumse ya lucifer se koe lena dena nahi hai
Jo tumhra man kare vo tum karo aur usko to bolu hi kya?
Ab main chalti hu aur ho sake to ye sign kar dena, mera naam aur kharab ho jayega nahi to
Aur inaaya khadi hoke jane lagi
Ashmita- inaaya?
Coffee to pee lo
Tumhe bahut pasand hai

Inaaya- meri pasand napasand en saalo me bahut change ho gaye hai
Good bye
Aur inaaya vaha se chali gaye
Ashmita vahi khadi rah gaye

Usse pata tha ki lucifer ne kuch na kuch to kiya hai jiski vajah se inaaya etni sad hai aur lucifer se puchne ka fayda nahi hai kyuki vo kuch batayega nahi aur inaaya kuch sunegi nahi esliye ashmita ne bina soche samjhe vo paper sign kar diya aur TV band karke apne room me chali gaye

Usse pata nahi kyu lekin lucifer par bahut gussa aa raha tha... sayad esliye ki lucifer ki vajah se inaaya usse aur door chali gaye ho?
Ya fir koe aur reason bhi ho sakta hai vo to dekhna hi padega

Suresh- rathore ke bare me pata kiya?
Vo jarur kuch na kuch karne aaya hai yaha
Aadmi- jada kuch pata nahi chala
Vo mostly ek aurat ke sath rahta hai aur pura ka pura business uski beti hi sambhal rahi hai

Suresh- inaaya?
Aadmi- ha

Suresh- vo aurat kon hai?
Kya rista hai rathore ka us se?
Adhmi- premika hai rathore ki

Suresh- uske bare me bhi pata karo
Aur ye bhi pata karne ki kosis karo ki rathore yaha kon konse business me involve hona chahta hai?
Aadmi- automobile sector me to hi gaya hai, eske baad textile aur entertainment industry ke bare me bhi sunane me aaya hai

Suresh- Sala hume nanga karne hi aaya hai vo yaha
Aadmi- hum bahut pehle se hai yaha
Kuch nahi bigad aayega humara

Suresh- vo jitna ek saal me kamata hau utni meri net worth hai to ye sochne ki galti bilkul mat karna ki vo kuch bigad nahi paega
He has unlimited supply of money
Vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Aadmi- lekin vo empire to inaaya chala rahi hai

Suresh- naam to rathore ka hai na
Chalaye chahe koe bhi
Ek kaam karo unki koe kamjori pata karo aur koe inside information de sake usko bhi dundo jis par hum trust kar sakte hai
Koe na koe to game jarur chal raha hai hume jaldi se jaldi pata karna padega nahi to nange hoke sadak par bhikh mangni padegi
Aadmi- main karta hu kuch

Suresh- theek hai jao
Main kuch dino tak nahi aaunga mujhe bahut jaruri kaam hai
Esliye jab main vapas lotu to mujhe achi khabar milni chahiye
Aadmi- aap kaha ja rahe ho?

Suresh- ye tumhe nahi sochna chahiye
Apne kaam par dhayan do
Aadmi- sorry sir
Suresh- ab tum ja sakte ho

Kavish- guruji lucifer mujhse bahut sawal puch raha hai
Main usse kya jawab du?
Guruji- abhi usse kuch jawab dene ki jarurat nahi hai
Waqt aane par sab kuch apne aap pata chal jayega usse

Kavish- vo waqt se pehle hi kayamat le aayega guruji
Guruji- us kayamat ko rokne ki takaat hai usme, esliye jada mat socho aur jitna main bol raha hu utna karo

Kavish- aur KAAL ka kya?
Agar vo safal hogya to?
Guruji- KAAL ka anjaam pehle se tay hai, thoda bahut khelna hai use khelne do, etna to hak banta hai uska

Kavish- kahi vo lucifer ko nuksan na pahuch de
Agar ashmita ko kuch kar diya to lucifer pagal ho jayega
Guruji- maine sab soch rakha hai
Tum apna muh band rakho aur jo ho raha hai usse hone do
Har chhij waqt par hi hoti hai aur abhi sahi waqt nahi aaya hai

Kavish- aap lucifer se aakhir chahte kya ho?
Guruji- main usse kuch nahi chahta main to usse khush dekhna chahta hu

Kavish- aapko pata hai na vo khush nahi rah sakta fir aap use kaise khush dekh paoge?
Guruji- jaisa maine kaha ki maine sab soch rakha hai bas abhi waqt sahi nahi aaya hai to abhi waqt sahi nahi aaya hai aur waqt sahi aane ka intezaar karo
Mujhe baar baar bula kar mera samay kharab na karo
Kavish- maafi chahta hu guruji
Guruji- yaad rahe lucifer ko kisi bare me kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye
Kavish- jee guruji


Eda- KAAL ne jhakmi kar hi diya lucifer ko, kahi vo...nahi nahi lucifer to mar nahi sakta na?
Raaj- KAAL ne jhakmi kiya mara nahi kyuki vo maar nahi sakta aur jhakam to bhar hi jate hai

Eda- lucifer ko khoon aaya tha
Raaj- hmm maine dekha aur usse dard bhi to hua tha

Eda- kahi ashmita.....
Raaj- nahi ye nahi ho sakta
Aisa kabhi nahi hoga

Eda- fir kya vajah ho sakti hai?
Raaj- mujhe lagta hai prithvi lok par jane ki vajah se uski shaktiya kam ho rahi hai

Eda- ha ye ho sakta hai
Lekin aise to vo bahut kamjor pad jayega aur kisi ka mukabala hi nahi kar payega?
Raaj- ab es baare me to main kya hi bata sakta hu?
Jab ye khel khilane wale hi chhup bathe hai to hum kha kar sakte hai?

Eda- ye khel bahut lamba chalega raaj
Raaj- lucifer ko jis din yaad aaya ussi din khatam ho jayega sab

Eda- lekin usse yaad aayegi?
Mujhe nahi lagta usse kabhi kisi chhij ki yaad aaegi
Raaj- aaegi eda aaegi
Usse halki fulki aane lag bhi gaye
Aur bahut jaldi usse sab yaad aajayega aur fir usse koe nahi rok payega

Eda- saanvi?
Raaj- saanvi ab nahi rahi eda
Tum janti to hum sab kuch?

Eda- lekin lucifer ko jab uski yaad aaegi to kya hoga?
Raaj- bahut sara khoon bahega aur kya hoga?
Bas yehi hoga
Hume us waqt lucifer se doori bana ke rakhni hai

Eda- kaas sab theek ho
Raaj- theek to nahi hoga
Ab se chhije bigadne lagegi aur bahut jada bigadti chali jayegi

Eda- hume lucifer par najar rakhni hogi
Raaj- agar hum lucifer ko vo sab karte dekhenge to hum kab karenge?
Ha?
Aur usse pata chal gaya to?

Eda- tum bhi na
Kahi ki baat kahi pahucha dete ho
Raaj- are meri jaan tum ho hi aisi chhij
Main kya karu

Eda- ab suru mat ho jana
Mera bilkul man nahi hai
Raaj- to man bana deta hu
Kitni hi der lagti hai meri jaan ka man banane me?

Aur ye dono rasleela me kho jate hai..
Batao yanha inki alag he chal raha h raaj aur eda mai
Lucifer ki life ki chodne mai inka bi chota role toh hoga he koyi din sabka ata h...
 
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Bahut hi achhi story...aur usse bhi badi baat ki itne jaldi updts aana...aapko alag hi level pr le jati he writer ji
Bhai update to regular hi hai lekin support hi nahi dikhti
100 pages ho gaye aur 33 update fir bhi comments aae sirf 6
Aise likhne ka interest kam ho jata hai
 
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