Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[big king]

Bahot jabardast update the dost. You are awesome writer bhai. Next update jaldi dena dost

 

[Lone survivor]

UPDATE-278


Lucifer eda guruji aur arjun teeno ek line me khade hue the. Hatho me apne hathiyaar ki pakad tej kar li thi unhone aur ab aakhiri khel khelne ka waqt aa gaya tha

Eda- lucifer mujhe lagta hai humne en chhote mote kido se ladne me waqt jaya nahi karna chahiye. Sidha dark lord ko pakdo aur khatam kar do use vohi theek rahega nahi to ye aate rahenge aur hum enme uljhe rahenge

Arjun- haseena theek kah rahi hai. Sidhe us kutte ki hi puch sidhi kar dete hai

Guruji- us se pehle hume es chakravyu ko nast karna hi padega tabhi hum dark lord tak pahuch sakte hai. Vo sabse beech me khada hai. Hum sidha vaha nahi ja sakte

Eda- hum aur aap rasta banate hai lucifer tum sidhe dark lord ki taraf badho

Arjun- main bhi haseena ki madad karta hu. Mokka hath se jana nahi chahiye

Guruji- theek hai aisa hi karte hai

Lucifer jo abhi tak chhup khada tha vo abhi bhi kuch nahi bola

Eda- lucifer?? Theek hai?

Lucifer muda guruji ki taraf sunya sa dekhne laga

Lucifer- ab waqt aa gaya hai sach batane ka guruji. Kya chhupa rahe ho aap mujhse? Aur es baar juth nahi bol paoge aap kyuki puchne wala lucifer nahi the fucking devil hai
Lucifer ne behad commanding tone me guruji se kaha jiske karan sabka dhayan ab guruji ki taraf ho gaya

Lekin vo fir bhi kuch nahi bole

Lucifer- guruji???
Ek baar fir lucifer ne unko pukara lekin tabhi bahut tej raftaar wale arrows unki taraf ud kar aane lage

Unki raftaar dekh kar sab guruji ko chhod kar defence mode me aa gaye lekin lucifer jaisa khada tha bilkul vaise hi khada raha

Jaise hi arrows unke pass pahuchne wale the lucifer apne ab tak ke sabse khatarnaak roop me aa chuka tha

Uske pure sareer se aag nikalne lagi thi, mathe par sing nikal aaye the aur pura sareer laal khoon jaisa ho gaya tha. Uski height bhi pahle ke mukable bahut jada ho chuki thi

Lucifer ke sareer se nikalne wali aag ki lapto ne un arrows ko apne ander samet liya tha aur fir bina kisi ka intezaar kiye lucifer aage badhne laga

Vo aisa najara tha ki uske samne khade uske dusmano ki pant sirf lucifer ko dekhne matar se gilli ho chuki thi

Etna khaunaak manjar sayad hi unhone kabhi dekha hoga

Bahut adheek matar me apne aas pass ke vatavaran ko prabhavit kar raha tha lucifer aur jo kam takatvar the vo to sirf aag ki taap se hi maar rahe the

Door bathe dark lord ke bhi chehre par ek sikan utar aaye thi. Vo lucifer ke bare me janta to sab tha lekin usne kabhi uska ye roop nahi dekha tha aur jaisi tabhai vo bina kisi ko chhuye hi macha raha tha usko dekh kar kisi ka bhi kaleja muh me aa jata

Dekha to eda aur guruji ne bhi pehli hi baar tha lekin vo unki side tha esliye thoda shant the vahi arjun un sab se thoda piche lad raha tha

Vo jada garmi sahan nahi kar pa raha tha jo uske chehre se hi dikh raha tha

Dark lord ko bhi majburi me uthna hi pad gaya tha kyuki uske mayajal ko guruji ne tod diya tha jiski vajah se vo vaha se bhag nahi sakta tha

Ab ladne ke sivay uske pass koe aur rasta nahi tha aur ab baari thi uske apne asli roop me aane ki

Vo khada hua aur apne sareer par jo kapda lapet rakha tha usko nikal kar fek diya aur hatho ko hava me faila diya

Jiske turant baad uske sareer me badlaav hone lag gaye. Thodi hi der me pura sareer kale rang me badal gaya aur kad bhi lucifer ke barabar hi ho gaya tha uska

Ek taraf jaha lucifer laal rang me nahaya hua tha vahi dusri taraf dark lord kaale rang ko apne sath chamka raha tha

Do ati shaktishali davano ko dekh kar prithvi ko to chhodo hi swarg lok tak kaap gaya tha. Aasman me sare devi devta es bhayankar manjar ko dekhne ke liye utar aaye the. Vo to kisi se prey bhi nahi kar sakte the ko esko roka jaye kyuki ye karna to kisi ke bas me hi nahi tha

Baki ki bheed en dono ke asli roop ko dekh kar apne aap chhat gaye thi aur ab bache the to sirf lucifer aur dark lord ek dusre ke aamne samne khade

Eda ke sath sath guruji bhi piche hat chuke the kyuki ab beech me jana bevkufi hi mani jati

Dhadaaaaammmmm

Jamin hila dene wala dhamaka hua jab lucifer aur dark lord ke hathiyaar ek dusre se takraye aur unka antim yudh suru ho chuka tha

Jaha dark lord khud ko lucifer ke hamlo se bacha bhi raha tha aur us par hamla kar bhi raha tha vahi lucifer sirf hamla kar raha tha

Khud ko bachane ki koe kosis nahi ho rahi thi uski taraf se. Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo nauta de raha ho dark lord ko hi agar hai himmat to maar ke dikha mujhe

Jab jab unki talware takra rahi thi tab tab bhukamp jaisa feel ho raha tha dharti par aur ye drashay bahut bhayanak ban gaya tha

Vahi ek sharp talwar ke attack se lucifer ke sareer ko halka sa katne me kamyab ho gaya tha dark lord jis se uski khushi ka koe thikana hi nahi raha lekin us khushi ne uska dhayan bhi bhatka diya jiska fayda ek bade cut se lucifer ne uthaya

Halanki dono ko jada kuch feel hua nahi lekin sareer tak pahuch chuke the dono ek dusre ke

Dark lord- you cant kill me lucifer
Dark lord hasa aur fire attack karne laga lucifer par

Jo khud aag ho us par aag kya hi asar karegi? Yehi lucifer ke sath hua. Jo fire attack kar raha tha dark lord vo lucifer ke sareer me samate chale gaya aur vaha garmi aur jada badh gaye

Lucifer- tujhe marunga nahi kha jaunga main aaj
Lucifer garja aur etni tej flying kick maari dark lord par ki vo teen kadam piche jake gira

Ladae me jo pehle niche girta hai uska vapas khade hone me bahut mahnat lagti hai

Jaha vo gira vaha ki jamin ke kafi tukde hawa me udte hue dikhae diye jo es drasay ki khaufnaak drasha rahe the

Lucifer ne bhi bina koe waqt gavaye ek ke baad ek teer jaise weapon dark lord par chalane suru kar diye jo aage se bahut pane the aur speed etni tej thi ki sirf dark lord hi use dekh pa raha tha

Halanki vo mostly attack se bach gaya tha lekin fir bhi ek do to uske sareer ko paar karne me kamyaab ho gaye the

Gusse aur frustration se vo khada hua aur apne charo taraf kale badalo ka ghera bana liya jo lucifer ke sare attacks ko uske pass pahuchne se pehle hi rok de raha tha

Dark lord- mujhe marne ke liye tujhe khud ko marna padega lucifer aur sath me apne guru ko bhi
Dark lord garja aur lucifer ke upar light se hamla karne laga

Jaise hi roshini lucifer ke upar girne lagi uska dark side kamjor hone lagi aur esi ka fayda utha kar dark lord ne apni behad shaktishali talwar lucifer ke pairo ke aar paar kar di

Khoon ki dhaar kisi fuvaare ki tarah lucifer ke sareer se nikalne lagi

“Lucifffeerr”””

Eda door se hi chhilaye lekin guruji ne use aage badhne se rook liya

Lucifer sidha khada hota us se pehle hi dark lord ne apne bhaale se uske sar par piche se war kiya jiski vajah se lucifer piche ke bal ja gira

Dard feel to hua use lekin uska reason uska khoon nikalna ya chot lagna nahi tha balki dark lord ka roshini se hamla karna tha

Vo devil roop me tha esliye roshini usko pareshan kar rahi thi aur vo kisi bhi reason ke devil roop chhodna nahi chah raha tha kyuki fir sayad usme thode bahut emotions aa jate jo abhi vo nahi chahta tha

Lucifer par aur hamle hote es se pehle eda ne apni kaali shaktiyo ka jadu dikhana suru kiya aur mosam hi badal diya

Jaha abhi roshini charo taraf chahal kadmi kar rahi thi ab andere ne apni pakad majbut karni suru kar di thi

Dark lord ko ye dekh kar gussa aane laga aur usne eda par attack kar diya

Lucifer ek taraf tha dusri taraf eda aur beech me dark lord jo apni full potential me aa chuka tha

Dark lord me ek hath se energy beam nikal ke lucifer par attack suru kiya aur dusre se eda par vahi vo guruji ki taraf kuch nahi kar raha tha

Unse jo hamle ho rahe the us se bas khud ko defend hi kar raha tha vo unpar koe attack nahi

Vahi arjun en sab me kuch nahi kar sakta tha vo jo dark lord ki army thi unse ladne me busy ho chuka tha

Dark lord teen taraf se ho rahe hamlo se khud ko bahut ache se bacha bhi raha tha aur un par hamla kar bhi raha tha

Abhi tak jo hua uske samne ab jo ho raha tha usme jamin asman ka fark tha

Aisa lag raha tha jaise pehle dark lord sirf khel khel raha tha aur ab vo unse khilwad kar raha ho

Lucifer jo jhakmi ho chuka tha use khade hone me thodi dikkat mahsus hone lag gaye thi aur uski jagah eda full form me dark lord ke samne khadi thi

Uske kadam dheere dheere aage badhne suru ho gaye the aur kuch der ki masakat ke baad vo dark lord ke bahut pass bhi pahuch chuki thi

Jaise hi dark lord ko eda ki chal samjh aaye usne lucifer aur guruji par dhayan hata kar ek bahut bhayank attack kiya eda par etna khatarnaak attack tha vo ki agar eda ko lag jata to uska bachna namumkeen ho jata

Lekin eda eske liye tayar thi aur hawa me uchal kar vo bach gaye lekin attack kharab thodi hi jata hai?

Dark lord ki khud ki aadhi army uske attack ki chapet me aa chuki thi jiska usse ek percent bhi afsos nahi hua

Use pata tha agar eda uski chal me kamyab ho jati to vo use kitna jada hurt kar sakti thi

En sab me kuch hi seconds me uska dhayan lucifer se hata tha aur esi ka fayda uthate hue lucifer ne apne bhale se dark lord ke ek hath me ched kar diya aur eda ne bina samay gavaye apni talwar se us hath ko uske sareer se alag kar diya

“Ahhhhhhhh” ek bahut dardnaak chhikh gunji dark lord ki vaha par lekin uske turant baad usne apne aap ko sambhal liya kyuki lucifer yehi haal uske dusre hath ka bhi karne wala tha lekin vo bach gaya

Dark lord- tu mujhe maar nahi sakta lucifer. Tu mujhe maar nahi sakta. Pata hai kyu? Kyuki MERI SOUL KA EK HISSA MERE ANDER HAI EK HISSA GURUJI KE ENDER AUR EK TERE ANDER. ESLIYE MUJHE MARNE KE LIYE TUJHE TERE PYAARE GURU KO MARNA PADEGA AUR KHUD BHI MARNA PADEGA

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAAHHA

 

[Lone survivor]

SORRY FOR THE DELAY.
No excuses just mera likhne ka ya kuch bhi karne ka man hi nahi karta aaj kal. Its like i am living a life which i had lived 5 years ago. Thoda loss bhi hua hai kaam me enhi karano ke vajah se. I think i need to go out and explore the real thing instead of living in an imaginary life.

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[Tri2010]

UPDATE-278


Lucifer eda guruji aur arjun teeno ek line me khade hue the. Hatho me apne hathiyaar ki pakad tej kar li thi unhone aur ab aakhiri khel khelne ka waqt aa gaya tha

Eda- lucifer mujhe lagta hai humne en chhote mote kido se ladne me waqt jaya nahi karna chahiye. Sidha dark lord ko pakdo aur khatam kar do use vohi theek rahega nahi to ye aate rahenge aur hum enme uljhe rahenge

Arjun- haseena theek kah rahi hai. Sidhe us kutte ki hi puch sidhi kar dete hai

Guruji- us se pehle hume es chakravyu ko nast karna hi padega tabhi hum dark lord tak pahuch sakte hai. Vo sabse beech me khada hai. Hum sidha vaha nahi ja sakte

Eda- hum aur aap rasta banate hai lucifer tum sidhe dark lord ki taraf badho

Arjun- main bhi haseena ki madad karta hu. Mokka hath se jana nahi chahiye

Guruji- theek hai aisa hi karte hai

Lucifer jo abhi tak chhup khada tha vo abhi bhi kuch nahi bola

Eda- lucifer?? Theek hai?

Lucifer muda guruji ki taraf sunya sa dekhne laga

Lucifer- ab waqt aa gaya hai sach batane ka guruji. Kya chhupa rahe ho aap mujhse? Aur es baar juth nahi bol paoge aap kyuki puchne wala lucifer nahi the fucking devil hai
Lucifer ne behad commanding tone me guruji se kaha jiske karan sabka dhayan ab guruji ki taraf ho gaya

Lekin vo fir bhi kuch nahi bole

Lucifer- guruji???
Ek baar fir lucifer ne unko pukara lekin tabhi bahut tej raftaar wale arrows unki taraf ud kar aane lage

Unki raftaar dekh kar sab guruji ko chhod kar defence mode me aa gaye lekin lucifer jaisa khada tha bilkul vaise hi khada raha

Jaise hi arrows unke pass pahuchne wale the lucifer apne ab tak ke sabse khatarnaak roop me aa chuka tha

Uske pure sareer se aag nikalne lagi thi, mathe par sing nikal aaye the aur pura sareer laal khoon jaisa ho gaya tha. Uski height bhi pahle ke mukable bahut jada ho chuki thi

Lucifer ke sareer se nikalne wali aag ki lapto ne un arrows ko apne ander samet liya tha aur fir bina kisi ka intezaar kiye lucifer aage badhne laga

Vo aisa najara tha ki uske samne khade uske dusmano ki pant sirf lucifer ko dekhne matar se gilli ho chuki thi

Etna khaunaak manjar sayad hi unhone kabhi dekha hoga

Bahut adheek matar me apne aas pass ke vatavaran ko prabhavit kar raha tha lucifer aur jo kam takatvar the vo to sirf aag ki taap se hi maar rahe the

Door bathe dark lord ke bhi chehre par ek sikan utar aaye thi. Vo lucifer ke bare me janta to sab tha lekin usne kabhi uska ye roop nahi dekha tha aur jaisi tabhai vo bina kisi ko chhuye hi macha raha tha usko dekh kar kisi ka bhi kaleja muh me aa jata

Dekha to eda aur guruji ne bhi pehli hi baar tha lekin vo unki side tha esliye thoda shant the vahi arjun un sab se thoda piche lad raha tha

Vo jada garmi sahan nahi kar pa raha tha jo uske chehre se hi dikh raha tha

Dark lord ko bhi majburi me uthna hi pad gaya tha kyuki uske mayajal ko guruji ne tod diya tha jiski vajah se vo vaha se bhag nahi sakta tha

Ab ladne ke sivay uske pass koe aur rasta nahi tha aur ab baari thi uske apne asli roop me aane ki

Vo khada hua aur apne sareer par jo kapda lapet rakha tha usko nikal kar fek diya aur hatho ko hava me faila diya

Jiske turant baad uske sareer me badlaav hone lag gaye. Thodi hi der me pura sareer kale rang me badal gaya aur kad bhi lucifer ke barabar hi ho gaya tha uska

Ek taraf jaha lucifer laal rang me nahaya hua tha vahi dusri taraf dark lord kaale rang ko apne sath chamka raha tha

Do ati shaktishali davano ko dekh kar prithvi ko to chhodo hi swarg lok tak kaap gaya tha. Aasman me sare devi devta es bhayankar manjar ko dekhne ke liye utar aaye the. Vo to kisi se prey bhi nahi kar sakte the ko esko roka jaye kyuki ye karna to kisi ke bas me hi nahi tha

Baki ki bheed en dono ke asli roop ko dekh kar apne aap chhat gaye thi aur ab bache the to sirf lucifer aur dark lord ek dusre ke aamne samne khade

Eda ke sath sath guruji bhi piche hat chuke the kyuki ab beech me jana bevkufi hi mani jati

Dhadaaaaammmmm

Jamin hila dene wala dhamaka hua jab lucifer aur dark lord ke hathiyaar ek dusre se takraye aur unka antim yudh suru ho chuka tha

Jaha dark lord khud ko lucifer ke hamlo se bacha bhi raha tha aur us par hamla kar bhi raha tha vahi lucifer sirf hamla kar raha tha

Khud ko bachane ki koe kosis nahi ho rahi thi uski taraf se. Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo nauta de raha ho dark lord ko hi agar hai himmat to maar ke dikha mujhe

Jab jab unki talware takra rahi thi tab tab bhukamp jaisa feel ho raha tha dharti par aur ye drashay bahut bhayanak ban gaya tha

Vahi ek sharp talwar ke attack se lucifer ke sareer ko halka sa katne me kamyab ho gaya tha dark lord jis se uski khushi ka koe thikana hi nahi raha lekin us khushi ne uska dhayan bhi bhatka diya jiska fayda ek bade cut se lucifer ne uthaya

Halanki dono ko jada kuch feel hua nahi lekin sareer tak pahuch chuke the dono ek dusre ke

Dark lord- you cant kill me lucifer
Dark lord hasa aur fire attack karne laga lucifer par

Jo khud aag ho us par aag kya hi asar karegi? Yehi lucifer ke sath hua. Jo fire attack kar raha tha dark lord vo lucifer ke sareer me samate chale gaya aur vaha garmi aur jada badh gaye

Lucifer- tujhe marunga nahi kha jaunga main aaj
Lucifer garja aur etni tej flying kick maari dark lord par ki vo teen kadam piche jake gira

Ladae me jo pehle niche girta hai uska vapas khade hone me bahut mahnat lagti hai

Jaha vo gira vaha ki jamin ke kafi tukde hawa me udte hue dikhae diye jo es drasay ki khaufnaak drasha rahe the

Lucifer ne bhi bina koe waqt gavaye ek ke baad ek teer jaise weapon dark lord par chalane suru kar diye jo aage se bahut pane the aur speed etni tej thi ki sirf dark lord hi use dekh pa raha tha

Halanki vo mostly attack se bach gaya tha lekin fir bhi ek do to uske sareer ko paar karne me kamyaab ho gaye the

Gusse aur frustration se vo khada hua aur apne charo taraf kale badalo ka ghera bana liya jo lucifer ke sare attacks ko uske pass pahuchne se pehle hi rok de raha tha

Dark lord- mujhe marne ke liye tujhe khud ko marna padega lucifer aur sath me apne guru ko bhi
Dark lord garja aur lucifer ke upar light se hamla karne laga

Jaise hi roshini lucifer ke upar girne lagi uska dark side kamjor hone lagi aur esi ka fayda utha kar dark lord ne apni behad shaktishali talwar lucifer ke pairo ke aar paar kar di

Khoon ki dhaar kisi fuvaare ki tarah lucifer ke sareer se nikalne lagi

“Lucifffeerr”””

Eda door se hi chhilaye lekin guruji ne use aage badhne se rook liya

Lucifer sidha khada hota us se pehle hi dark lord ne apne bhaale se uske sar par piche se war kiya jiski vajah se lucifer piche ke bal ja gira

Dard feel to hua use lekin uska reason uska khoon nikalna ya chot lagna nahi tha balki dark lord ka roshini se hamla karna tha

Vo devil roop me tha esliye roshini usko pareshan kar rahi thi aur vo kisi bhi reason ke devil roop chhodna nahi chah raha tha kyuki fir sayad usme thode bahut emotions aa jate jo abhi vo nahi chahta tha

Lucifer par aur hamle hote es se pehle eda ne apni kaali shaktiyo ka jadu dikhana suru kiya aur mosam hi badal diya

Jaha abhi roshini charo taraf chahal kadmi kar rahi thi ab andere ne apni pakad majbut karni suru kar di thi

Dark lord ko ye dekh kar gussa aane laga aur usne eda par attack kar diya

Lucifer ek taraf tha dusri taraf eda aur beech me dark lord jo apni full potential me aa chuka tha

Dark lord me ek hath se energy beam nikal ke lucifer par attack suru kiya aur dusre se eda par vahi vo guruji ki taraf kuch nahi kar raha tha

Unse jo hamle ho rahe the us se bas khud ko defend hi kar raha tha vo unpar koe attack nahi

Vahi arjun en sab me kuch nahi kar sakta tha vo jo dark lord ki army thi unse ladne me busy ho chuka tha

Dark lord teen taraf se ho rahe hamlo se khud ko bahut ache se bacha bhi raha tha aur un par hamla kar bhi raha tha

Abhi tak jo hua uske samne ab jo ho raha tha usme jamin asman ka fark tha

Aisa lag raha tha jaise pehle dark lord sirf khel khel raha tha aur ab vo unse khilwad kar raha ho

Lucifer jo jhakmi ho chuka tha use khade hone me thodi dikkat mahsus hone lag gaye thi aur uski jagah eda full form me dark lord ke samne khadi thi

Uske kadam dheere dheere aage badhne suru ho gaye the aur kuch der ki masakat ke baad vo dark lord ke bahut pass bhi pahuch chuki thi

Jaise hi dark lord ko eda ki chal samjh aaye usne lucifer aur guruji par dhayan hata kar ek bahut bhayank attack kiya eda par etna khatarnaak attack tha vo ki agar eda ko lag jata to uska bachna namumkeen ho jata

Lekin eda eske liye tayar thi aur hawa me uchal kar vo bach gaye lekin attack kharab thodi hi jata hai?

Dark lord ki khud ki aadhi army uske attack ki chapet me aa chuki thi jiska usse ek percent bhi afsos nahi hua

Use pata tha agar eda uski chal me kamyab ho jati to vo use kitna jada hurt kar sakti thi

En sab me kuch hi seconds me uska dhayan lucifer se hata tha aur esi ka fayda uthate hue lucifer ne apne bhale se dark lord ke ek hath me ched kar diya aur eda ne bina samay gavaye apni talwar se us hath ko uske sareer se alag kar diya

“Ahhhhhhhh” ek bahut dardnaak chhikh gunji dark lord ki vaha par lekin uske turant baad usne apne aap ko sambhal liya kyuki lucifer yehi haal uske dusre hath ka bhi karne wala tha lekin vo bach gaya

Dark lord- tu mujhe maar nahi sakta lucifer. Tu mujhe maar nahi sakta. Pata hai kyu? Kyuki MERI SOUL KA EK HISSA MERE ANDER HAI EK HISSA GURUJI KE ENDER AUR EK TERE ANDER. ESLIYE MUJHE MARNE KE LIYE TUJHE TERE PYAARE GURU KO MARNA PADEGA AUR KHUD BHI MARNA PADEGA

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAAHHA

Excellent update and good action scene update

 

[sorbobhuk]

SORRY FOR THE DELAY.
No excuses just mera likhne ka ya kuch bhi karne ka man hi nahi karta aaj kal. Its like i am living a life which i had lived 5 years ago. Thoda loss bhi hua hai kaam me enhi karano ke vajah se. I think i need to go out and explore the real thing instead of living in an imaginary life.

Koi baad nhi.....story khatam karne ke baad ghum aao

 

[Herry]

Next update please

 

[Yamraaj]

SORRY FOR THE DELAY.
No excuses just mera likhne ka ya kuch bhi karne ka man hi nahi karta aaj kal. Its like i am living a life which i had lived 5 years ago. Thoda loss bhi hua hai kaam me enhi karano ke vajah se. I think i need to go out and explore the real thing instead of living in an imaginary life.

Kuch jyada hi late ho gya tha is baar update....

Story aise mod pe h jaha Kai sare raaj khulenge.....

Last time Raj ladne aaya tha dark lord ki taraf se mughe yaad nhi AA Raha uska kya hua .....

Khair shayad last update padhan padega use jannae ke liye....


Aasha yahi h ki next update jald aayega ...



Mughe lagta h Ashmita ka kidnap ho chuka h....

Kripya agla update jald dena bhai.....

 

[parkas]

SORRY FOR THE DELAY.
No excuses just mera likhne ka ya kuch bhi karne ka man hi nahi karta aaj kal. Its like i am living a life which i had lived 5 years ago. Thoda loss bhi hua hai kaam me enhi karano ke vajah se. I think i need to go out and explore the real thing instead of living in an imaginary life.

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai...
Nice and beautiful update.....

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro