Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[krish1152]

nice update

 

[Mucchad]

At the end life will be back
Nice update and superb story
Thanks for the story

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Tri2010]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Thanks brother for lucifer story

 

[Tri2010]

UPDATE-279


Lucifer guruji ki taraf dekh raha tha jaise ab uske samne puri picture hi clear ho gaye ho. Etne waqt se yehi raaj to puchna chahta tha vo guruji se aur yehi guruji us se chhipaye hue the

Unhe dar tha ki agar lucifer ko ye waqt se pehle pata chal gaya to vo pata nahi kaise react karega? Use roka bhi ja payega ya nahi? Yehi sab ke karan guruji use kuch bata nahi rahe the

Lucifer ko ek bada jhatka laga tha abhi ye jaan kar aur aaj use pehli baar samjh me nahi aaya ki vo kare to kare kya?

Dark lord ko jinda nahi chhod sakte aur use marne ke liye apne guruji ko maarna padega sath me khud bhi marna padega

Duvidha me tha londa apna bahut badi duvidha me

Essi beech dark lord apne aapko sambhalne me laga hua tha uska ek hath uske sareer se alag pada tha. Vaise to vo use jod sakta tha lekin abhi etna waqt nahi tha uske pass ki vo try bhi kare

Use ye to pata tha ki lucifer bechain ho jayega lekin es baat ko bhi nahi nakara tha usne ki lucifer apne sabse rodar roop me aa jaye esliye apne aapko tayar rakhna bahut jaruri tha

Vo sambhal raha tha lekin eda uski chal samjh gaye aur us par hamla kar diya

Lucifer ki bhi nind tooti aur vo gusse me dark lord ki taraf palta. Vo bhi samjh gaya ki ye dusre wala lucifer hai lekin uske samjhne se pehle hi lucifer us par toot pada

Laat guse se jo maar suru hue vo kab talwar par aa gaye aur dark lord ke sareer ko katne lagi use bhi samjh nahi aaya

Badi muskil se vo apne aap ko lucifer se bacha paya aur ek shield bana kar lucifer se bachne laga

Lekin aaj kuch kaam nahi aane wala tha kyuki lucifer hurt hua tha aaj aur aaj vo sab khatam karke hi manega

Do teen war bhi nahi jhel paye lucifer ke vo shield aur toot kar chakna choor ho gaye

Dark lord ne firse shield bana li lekin uska bhi yehi asar hua jiska sidha sidha yehi matlab tha ki defesive approach se kuch nahi hone wala

Aur dark lord ne angel knife hawa me barsane suru kiye vo lucifer ke sareer ko chhute us se pehle hi

Ghal ghap ghap ghap ghap

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Do alag alag jagah se do alag alag aawaze gunji

Ek thi guruji ki jo kab un chakuo ke beech me aa gaye kisi ko dikhae hi nahi diya aur ek thi dark lord ki jiski ek soul aaj finally uska sath chhod kar ja chuki thi

Lucifer ne jab guruji ko apne gutno par dekha to uski aankhen dard se chhilane lagi

Sirf guruji ki aatma hi earth nahi chhod rahi thi uske sath sath lucifer ki achaya bhi ja rahi thi

Vahi eda ki aankhon me bhi aashu bhar aaye the unki gaud me guruji ka sareer marat pada hua tha aur vo dard se kaap rahi thi

Lucifer ek jagah still khada hua bina koe react kiye kisi putle ki tarah khada hi rah gaya

Vahi dark lord ko pehle ek hath aur ab ek soul ka tukda kho chuka tha uski halaat kuch jada theek nahi thi

Vo esliye hi guruji par attack nahi kar raha tha ki agar unhe kuch hua to vo kamjor pad sakta hai. Pehle jab dono ki bhidat hue thi tab dark lord ne socha tha ki agar unhe guruji ke ander ki sari information mil jaye to ek soul ke tukde ki kurbaani de sakta hai lekin ab unhe kuch nahi mila

Na to koe jankari mili aur na apne soul ko bacha saka
Use ab apna ant najdeek dikh raha tha

Etna sab kuch kiya usne aur ant me mila kya use? Kuch bhi nahi

Puri jindagi laga di sadiya beet gaye andera failate failate aur aakhir me ab vo us andere me hi leen hone wala tha

Fir bhi kisi tarah usne apne aapko sambhala khada hua aur ek aakiri kosis karne laga lucifer ko maat dene ki

Vaise to vo samjh gaya tha ki uski puri planning hi andhuri thi aur abhi usko lucifer ke samne aana hi nahi chahiye tha

Bahut sari chhije thi jo use chhut gaye thi aur ab usko uska khamyaja bhugatna pad raha tha

Lekin ab vo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ek to tarika tha ki vo vapas bhaag jaye aur fir tayari karke aaye kyuki vo lucifer se pehle to mar nahi sakta

Aur dusra tarika tha ki abhi ladte ladte apni vo halaat kara le ki uske baad us se kuch bhi nahi ho paye

Lekin dimag ne apna kaam karna band kar diya tha esliye to vo dusre raste ki taraf badh gaya

Sayad ego ko thesh pahuch gaye thi uski aur usne vapas angel knife ki baarish karni suru ki lekin es baar lucifer apni jagah se hila bhi nahi

Jaise jaise angel knife uske najdeek aa rahe the sabki saase tham rahi thi aur lucifer ki aisi halaat dekh kar eda ne hi kamaan sambhalne ki sochi aur vo dark lord ke attack ko katne ki kosis karne ko uthi lekin tabhi pure vatavaran me garmi bhadne lagi

Etni jada garmi badh gaye palak jhapakte hi ki eda jaise shaktishali angel ki bhi halaat kharab hone lagi

Ye garmi lucifer ke sareer se nikal rahi thi aur vo pure jagah failne lagi

Jo log apne apne gharo me chhipe bathe the unki chhilane ki aawaze gunjane lagi

Yaha tak ki dark lord ke bhi pasine chhut gaye

Charo taraf aag jalne lagi. Ghar jalne lagi, buildings jalne lagi, un buildings ke ander log jalne lagi

Lucifer ke pure sareer ko aag ki lapto ne gher liya tha aur uske sareer hi aag nikal kar charo taraf fail rahi thi

Minutes bhi nahi lagi vaha khohram machne me.

Har taraf hahakar mach gaya log zinda jalne lage, buildings, ghar raakh hone lage

Kisi ko kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki ab kya kare kaise roke esko

Sare devi devta supreme aur mata ke pass pahuch gaye aur unse guhaar karne lage ki ab es musibat ke waqt me vohi kuch kar sakte hai

“Mate madad kijiye, rokiye lucifer ko agar vo nahi ruka to sab raakh ho jayega” heaven ke bahar khade hokar sabne ek sath guhaar lagaye

To mata aur supreme dono apne kaksh se bahar aa gaye

Sabne jhuk kar unko pranaam kiya aur fir unse sahayata mangne lage

Mata- ye niyati me likha hua hai mere bacho. Esko rokna uchit nahi hota

Dev- mata aise to puri prithvi khatam ho jayegi

Mata- nahi. Aisa nahi hoga. Kalyug me log apna sthaan bhul gaye the. Ye vinaash unhe unke ashitatav ke bare me jagaega

Dev- mate aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki eske baad vo aur jada andhere me chale jaye? Vinaash sirf dukh dard hi deta hai aur kuch nahi

Mata- ye vinaash ek naye subah leke aayega. Aap sab chinta nahi kijiye es kali raat ke baad ek bahut sunhari subah hogi

Dev- kya hum aise hi hath par hath dhare apne logo ko marte hue dekhte rahe mata?

Supreme- ek maye yug ke liye purane ka khatam hona behad jaruri hota hai. Ye vinaash to bas naam matar ka vinaash hai eske baad jab agla waqt aayega tab asli matlab samjh me aaega eska. Esliye aap sab abhi se aane wale waqt ke liye tayar rahe. Kuch dasak tak ab shanti rahegi fir jab kalyug apni charam par hoga tab vapas lucifer aayega vapas tabhai machegi aur ye vinaash uske samne kuch nahi lagega aapko.

Eske baad mata aur supreme vaha se chale jate hai aur baki sab niraash vapas lot jate hai

Vahi lucifer ki sari premika ke tv connection kharab ho chuka tha. Unhe ab ye bhi nahi pata chal raha tha ki vaha kya ho raha hai. Garmi ka satar unke pass bhi behad adhik ho gaya tha lekin unko jada fark nahi pad raha tha jaise lucifer se kuch door khadi ashmita ko nahi pad raha tha

Uske charo taraf sirf vinaash hi vinaash dikhae de raha tha aur chhikhane chhilane ko aawaze uske kaano me gunj rahi thi

Dheere dheere uske kadam lucifer ko taraf badhne lage. Ek dam blank dimag se vo lucifer ki taraf badhne lagi thi

Kya chahti thi vo ye to use khud bhi nahi pata tha lekin vo dekh pa rahi thi ki lucifer kitne dard me hai

Uska pura sareer jamin se thoda upar utha hua tha aur pure sareer me se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi

Jaise jaise vo lucifer ke pass pahuch rahi thi vaise vaise halki aag ki lapto ka asar us par hona suru ho gaya tha

Eda kisi taraf khud ko bachane ki kosis kar rahi thi to vahi dark lord apne kale jadu se khud ko thanda karne ki kosis me laga hua tha

Aur

Ghaappppp

Lucifer ke sareer me lucifer ka toota hua kanjhar jo usne arjun se cheena tha vo ashmita ne ghoop diya tha

Dhadaam se lucifer jamin par ashmita ki gaud me gira

“I LOVE YOU LUCIFER” aur fir ashmita ne khanjar ka dabaav lucifer ki chhati me kar diya

Dono ki aankhon me ek sath ashu ki ek bund nikali aur fir lucifer ke chehre par ek aakhiri muskaan ubhar aaye

Jaise hi mahool normal hone laga dark lord eda ko marne ko koda kyuki ab sirf ek matar vohi bachi thi jo uske raste me khadi thi lekin us se pehle hi eda ne uska sar uske sareer se alag kar diya aur bhagte hue lucifer ke pass pahuch gaye

Lekin lucifer ja chuka tha. Vo aakhiri waqt me bhi lucifer ko apne dil ka haal nahi bata paye aur na lucifer ka jaan paye

Aankhon se ashu bahane lage aur bade pyaar se bas ek baar vo lucifer ke chehre par apne hath fira paye kyuki dusri baar ki himmat nahi bachi thi usme


Thoda waqt gujra aur sab vaha pahuch chuke the. Sabki aankhon me aashu the dil me dard tha lekin ab koe kuch nahi kar sakta tha

Inaaya ko to bahut pehle se ye sab pata tha esliye apne aapko tayar karne ki kosis karti rahti thi lekin baki sab ko sambhalna bahut muskil ho gaya tha

Kaashvi bhi aa gaye thi vaha aur ek vohi thi jo sabko sambhal rahi thi sath me arjun bhi thodi bahut madad kar raha tha

Bahut ache tarike se lucifer ka antim sankaar kiya gaya jisme agni sabne ek sath mil kar hi di aur dheere dheere waqt gujarta gaya

Do mahino baad hi ashmita ka pet saaf dikhane lag gaya tha aur ab sabko pata chal gaya tha ki vo pregnant hai

Aur fir kuch aur mahino baad usne ek ladke ko janam diya jo hubhuhu lucifer ki copy tha

Lucifer jaisa hi tej uski aankhon me tha aur lucifer jaisa hi shataan bhi tha vo

Us ek bacho ko sabne apni jindagi bana liya aur use hi lucifer samjh kar jeene lage.


“Mujhe nahi chahiye kuch bhi aap se. Main yahi theek hu” eda ne boli ye baat behad gusse me kyuki uske samne mata aur supreme khade the

Mata- mujhe pata hai mere bache tum bahut dard me ho lekin humare baad humari jagah sirf tum le sakti ho aur koe nahi

Eda- lucifer ka hell hai ye aur main lucifer ki hu esliye mujhse mere lucifer ki aakhiri nishani mat chhino. Main aapse gujarish karti hu
Halka aashu tapak gaye uske gulabi gaalo se

Mata- heaven ab tumhra hua beta. Ab tum supreme aur tum hi mata ho. Lucifer tumhre ander hai aur use koe tumse nahi chhen sakta. Lucifer bhi kabhi ye nahi chahta hoga ki tum hell me apna jeevan gujar do. Esliye jo lucifer nahi kar paya vo tum karo. Heaven ko fir se hara bara kar do. Khushiya bhikher do us dunia me bhi aur esme bhi. Maine kaha tha ma tumhra janam bahut jaruri kaam ke liye hua? Aur koe karan tha jiski vajah se tum lucifer ki kabhi nahi ho paye? To vo yehi kaaran tha tumhe heaven ki gaddi sambhalni thi. Ab waqt aa gaya hai utho aur baato khushiya

Eda ke sar par hath rakh kar mata muskuraye to eda ne jhuk kar un dono ke pair chhu kar unse aashurvaad liya

Aur teeno vaha se gayab ho gaye

Eda to heaven pahuch gaye lekin mata aur supreme kaha gaye ye kisi ko nahi pata chala

Dasak beet gaye lucifer ko gaye aur uske jane ke baad uski sari premikao ne hell sambhal liya aur lucifer ke bete ko hell ka lord banaya gaya

Lekin usme etne sanskaar diye gaye the ki vo torcher ki jagah unhe sahi raste par lane ki kosis karta tha. Sachar aur light ka prateek tha vo

Heaven ko eda ne sambhal liya tha aur hell ko lucifer ki premikao aur uske bete ne

Charo taraf ek baar firse ujala bikhar gaya tha aur sab hasi khushi rahne lage

THE END​

Outstanding update and lovely story

 

[sorbobhuk]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Thanks for the beautiful story,.......
Waiting for next update

 

[Dragon master]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Love you bro ek trh Sy yhn bhi ap ki family Hy we all are with you
And waiting for next master piece

 

[big king]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Bhai esa nahi bolte ham sab readers bhi to aapki family hain chhota hi sahi . Bhai jaldi aana bhai naya story leke jaldi aana. Intajaar rahegaa aapke story ka. Wada raha bhai har update me har ek update me likes aur comments bharpur denge. Please jada din ham sabko wait mat karana bhai. Ham hain bhai ham sab hain. Please come back as soon as possible with your story bhai. We all readers really want to read your next story bhai . Jaldi laut aana bhai please

 

[riya singh]

UPDATE-279


Lucifer guruji ki taraf dekh raha tha jaise ab uske samne puri picture hi clear ho gaye ho. Etne waqt se yehi raaj to puchna chahta tha vo guruji se aur yehi guruji us se chhipaye hue the

Unhe dar tha ki agar lucifer ko ye waqt se pehle pata chal gaya to vo pata nahi kaise react karega? Use roka bhi ja payega ya nahi? Yehi sab ke karan guruji use kuch bata nahi rahe the

Lucifer ko ek bada jhatka laga tha abhi ye jaan kar aur aaj use pehli baar samjh me nahi aaya ki vo kare to kare kya?

Dark lord ko jinda nahi chhod sakte aur use marne ke liye apne guruji ko maarna padega sath me khud bhi marna padega

Duvidha me tha londa apna bahut badi duvidha me

Essi beech dark lord apne aapko sambhalne me laga hua tha uska ek hath uske sareer se alag pada tha. Vaise to vo use jod sakta tha lekin abhi etna waqt nahi tha uske pass ki vo try bhi kare

Use ye to pata tha ki lucifer bechain ho jayega lekin es baat ko bhi nahi nakara tha usne ki lucifer apne sabse rodar roop me aa jaye esliye apne aapko tayar rakhna bahut jaruri tha

Vo sambhal raha tha lekin eda uski chal samjh gaye aur us par hamla kar diya

Lucifer ki bhi nind tooti aur vo gusse me dark lord ki taraf palta. Vo bhi samjh gaya ki ye dusre wala lucifer hai lekin uske samjhne se pehle hi lucifer us par toot pada

Laat guse se jo maar suru hue vo kab talwar par aa gaye aur dark lord ke sareer ko katne lagi use bhi samjh nahi aaya

Badi muskil se vo apne aap ko lucifer se bacha paya aur ek shield bana kar lucifer se bachne laga

Lekin aaj kuch kaam nahi aane wala tha kyuki lucifer hurt hua tha aaj aur aaj vo sab khatam karke hi manega

Do teen war bhi nahi jhel paye lucifer ke vo shield aur toot kar chakna choor ho gaye

Dark lord ne firse shield bana li lekin uska bhi yehi asar hua jiska sidha sidha yehi matlab tha ki defesive approach se kuch nahi hone wala

Aur dark lord ne angel knife hawa me barsane suru kiye vo lucifer ke sareer ko chhute us se pehle hi

Ghal ghap ghap ghap ghap

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Do alag alag jagah se do alag alag aawaze gunji

Ek thi guruji ki jo kab un chakuo ke beech me aa gaye kisi ko dikhae hi nahi diya aur ek thi dark lord ki jiski ek soul aaj finally uska sath chhod kar ja chuki thi

Lucifer ne jab guruji ko apne gutno par dekha to uski aankhen dard se chhilane lagi

Sirf guruji ki aatma hi earth nahi chhod rahi thi uske sath sath lucifer ki achaya bhi ja rahi thi

Vahi eda ki aankhon me bhi aashu bhar aaye the unki gaud me guruji ka sareer marat pada hua tha aur vo dard se kaap rahi thi

Lucifer ek jagah still khada hua bina koe react kiye kisi putle ki tarah khada hi rah gaya

Vahi dark lord ko pehle ek hath aur ab ek soul ka tukda kho chuka tha uski halaat kuch jada theek nahi thi

Vo esliye hi guruji par attack nahi kar raha tha ki agar unhe kuch hua to vo kamjor pad sakta hai. Pehle jab dono ki bhidat hue thi tab dark lord ne socha tha ki agar unhe guruji ke ander ki sari information mil jaye to ek soul ke tukde ki kurbaani de sakta hai lekin ab unhe kuch nahi mila

Na to koe jankari mili aur na apne soul ko bacha saka
Use ab apna ant najdeek dikh raha tha

Etna sab kuch kiya usne aur ant me mila kya use? Kuch bhi nahi

Puri jindagi laga di sadiya beet gaye andera failate failate aur aakhir me ab vo us andere me hi leen hone wala tha

Fir bhi kisi tarah usne apne aapko sambhala khada hua aur ek aakiri kosis karne laga lucifer ko maat dene ki

Vaise to vo samjh gaya tha ki uski puri planning hi andhuri thi aur abhi usko lucifer ke samne aana hi nahi chahiye tha

Bahut sari chhije thi jo use chhut gaye thi aur ab usko uska khamyaja bhugatna pad raha tha

Lekin ab vo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ek to tarika tha ki vo vapas bhaag jaye aur fir tayari karke aaye kyuki vo lucifer se pehle to mar nahi sakta

Aur dusra tarika tha ki abhi ladte ladte apni vo halaat kara le ki uske baad us se kuch bhi nahi ho paye

Lekin dimag ne apna kaam karna band kar diya tha esliye to vo dusre raste ki taraf badh gaya

Sayad ego ko thesh pahuch gaye thi uski aur usne vapas angel knife ki baarish karni suru ki lekin es baar lucifer apni jagah se hila bhi nahi

Jaise jaise angel knife uske najdeek aa rahe the sabki saase tham rahi thi aur lucifer ki aisi halaat dekh kar eda ne hi kamaan sambhalne ki sochi aur vo dark lord ke attack ko katne ki kosis karne ko uthi lekin tabhi pure vatavaran me garmi bhadne lagi

Etni jada garmi badh gaye palak jhapakte hi ki eda jaise shaktishali angel ki bhi halaat kharab hone lagi

Ye garmi lucifer ke sareer se nikal rahi thi aur vo pure jagah failne lagi

Jo log apne apne gharo me chhipe bathe the unki chhilane ki aawaze gunjane lagi

Yaha tak ki dark lord ke bhi pasine chhut gaye

Charo taraf aag jalne lagi. Ghar jalne lagi, buildings jalne lagi, un buildings ke ander log jalne lagi

Lucifer ke pure sareer ko aag ki lapto ne gher liya tha aur uske sareer hi aag nikal kar charo taraf fail rahi thi

Minutes bhi nahi lagi vaha khohram machne me.

Har taraf hahakar mach gaya log zinda jalne lage, buildings, ghar raakh hone lage

Kisi ko kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki ab kya kare kaise roke esko

Sare devi devta supreme aur mata ke pass pahuch gaye aur unse guhaar karne lage ki ab es musibat ke waqt me vohi kuch kar sakte hai

“Mate madad kijiye, rokiye lucifer ko agar vo nahi ruka to sab raakh ho jayega” heaven ke bahar khade hokar sabne ek sath guhaar lagaye

To mata aur supreme dono apne kaksh se bahar aa gaye

Sabne jhuk kar unko pranaam kiya aur fir unse sahayata mangne lage

Mata- ye niyati me likha hua hai mere bacho. Esko rokna uchit nahi hota

Dev- mata aise to puri prithvi khatam ho jayegi

Mata- nahi. Aisa nahi hoga. Kalyug me log apna sthaan bhul gaye the. Ye vinaash unhe unke ashitatav ke bare me jagaega

Dev- mate aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki eske baad vo aur jada andhere me chale jaye? Vinaash sirf dukh dard hi deta hai aur kuch nahi

Mata- ye vinaash ek naye subah leke aayega. Aap sab chinta nahi kijiye es kali raat ke baad ek bahut sunhari subah hogi

Dev- kya hum aise hi hath par hath dhare apne logo ko marte hue dekhte rahe mata?

Supreme- ek maye yug ke liye purane ka khatam hona behad jaruri hota hai. Ye vinaash to bas naam matar ka vinaash hai eske baad jab agla waqt aayega tab asli matlab samjh me aaega eska. Esliye aap sab abhi se aane wale waqt ke liye tayar rahe. Kuch dasak tak ab shanti rahegi fir jab kalyug apni charam par hoga tab vapas lucifer aayega vapas tabhai machegi aur ye vinaash uske samne kuch nahi lagega aapko.

Eske baad mata aur supreme vaha se chale jate hai aur baki sab niraash vapas lot jate hai

Vahi lucifer ki sari premika ke tv connection kharab ho chuka tha. Unhe ab ye bhi nahi pata chal raha tha ki vaha kya ho raha hai. Garmi ka satar unke pass bhi behad adhik ho gaya tha lekin unko jada fark nahi pad raha tha jaise lucifer se kuch door khadi ashmita ko nahi pad raha tha

Uske charo taraf sirf vinaash hi vinaash dikhae de raha tha aur chhikhane chhilane ko aawaze uske kaano me gunj rahi thi

Dheere dheere uske kadam lucifer ko taraf badhne lage. Ek dam blank dimag se vo lucifer ki taraf badhne lagi thi

Kya chahti thi vo ye to use khud bhi nahi pata tha lekin vo dekh pa rahi thi ki lucifer kitne dard me hai

Uska pura sareer jamin se thoda upar utha hua tha aur pure sareer me se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi

Jaise jaise vo lucifer ke pass pahuch rahi thi vaise vaise halki aag ki lapto ka asar us par hona suru ho gaya tha

Eda kisi taraf khud ko bachane ki kosis kar rahi thi to vahi dark lord apne kale jadu se khud ko thanda karne ki kosis me laga hua tha

Aur

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Lucifer ke sareer me lucifer ka toota hua kanjhar jo usne arjun se cheena tha vo ashmita ne ghoop diya tha

Dhadaam se lucifer jamin par ashmita ki gaud me gira

“I LOVE YOU LUCIFER” aur fir ashmita ne khanjar ka dabaav lucifer ki chhati me kar diya

Dono ki aankhon me ek sath ashu ki ek bund nikali aur fir lucifer ke chehre par ek aakhiri muskaan ubhar aaye

Jaise hi mahool normal hone laga dark lord eda ko marne ko koda kyuki ab sirf ek matar vohi bachi thi jo uske raste me khadi thi lekin us se pehle hi eda ne uska sar uske sareer se alag kar diya aur bhagte hue lucifer ke pass pahuch gaye

Lekin lucifer ja chuka tha. Vo aakhiri waqt me bhi lucifer ko apne dil ka haal nahi bata paye aur na lucifer ka jaan paye

Aankhon se ashu bahane lage aur bade pyaar se bas ek baar vo lucifer ke chehre par apne hath fira paye kyuki dusri baar ki himmat nahi bachi thi usme


Thoda waqt gujra aur sab vaha pahuch chuke the. Sabki aankhon me aashu the dil me dard tha lekin ab koe kuch nahi kar sakta tha

Inaaya ko to bahut pehle se ye sab pata tha esliye apne aapko tayar karne ki kosis karti rahti thi lekin baki sab ko sambhalna bahut muskil ho gaya tha

Kaashvi bhi aa gaye thi vaha aur ek vohi thi jo sabko sambhal rahi thi sath me arjun bhi thodi bahut madad kar raha tha

Bahut ache tarike se lucifer ka antim sankaar kiya gaya jisme agni sabne ek sath mil kar hi di aur dheere dheere waqt gujarta gaya

Do mahino baad hi ashmita ka pet saaf dikhane lag gaya tha aur ab sabko pata chal gaya tha ki vo pregnant hai

Aur fir kuch aur mahino baad usne ek ladke ko janam diya jo hubhuhu lucifer ki copy tha

Lucifer jaisa hi tej uski aankhon me tha aur lucifer jaisa hi shataan bhi tha vo

Us ek bacho ko sabne apni jindagi bana liya aur use hi lucifer samjh kar jeene lage.


“Mujhe nahi chahiye kuch bhi aap se. Main yahi theek hu” eda ne boli ye baat behad gusse me kyuki uske samne mata aur supreme khade the

Mata- mujhe pata hai mere bache tum bahut dard me ho lekin humare baad humari jagah sirf tum le sakti ho aur koe nahi

Eda- lucifer ka hell hai ye aur main lucifer ki hu esliye mujhse mere lucifer ki aakhiri nishani mat chhino. Main aapse gujarish karti hu
Halka aashu tapak gaye uske gulabi gaalo se

Mata- heaven ab tumhra hua beta. Ab tum supreme aur tum hi mata ho. Lucifer tumhre ander hai aur use koe tumse nahi chhen sakta. Lucifer bhi kabhi ye nahi chahta hoga ki tum hell me apna jeevan gujar do. Esliye jo lucifer nahi kar paya vo tum karo. Heaven ko fir se hara bara kar do. Khushiya bhikher do us dunia me bhi aur esme bhi. Maine kaha tha ma tumhra janam bahut jaruri kaam ke liye hua? Aur koe karan tha jiski vajah se tum lucifer ki kabhi nahi ho paye? To vo yehi kaaran tha tumhe heaven ki gaddi sambhalni thi. Ab waqt aa gaya hai utho aur baato khushiya

Eda ke sar par hath rakh kar mata muskuraye to eda ne jhuk kar un dono ke pair chhu kar unse aashurvaad liya

Aur teeno vaha se gayab ho gaye

Eda to heaven pahuch gaye lekin mata aur supreme kaha gaye ye kisi ko nahi pata chala

Dasak beet gaye lucifer ko gaye aur uske jane ke baad uski sari premikao ne hell sambhal liya aur lucifer ke bete ko hell ka lord banaya gaya

Lekin usme etne sanskaar diye gaye the ki vo torcher ki jagah unhe sahi raste par lane ki kosis karta tha. Sachar aur light ka prateek tha vo

Heaven ko eda ne sambhal liya tha aur hell ko lucifer ki premikao aur uske bete ne

Charo taraf ek baar firse ujala bikhar gaya tha aur sab hasi khushi rahne lage

THE END​

Bahut achhi aur jabrdast story thi aur closing bahut hi badhiya
Bahut achhi story likhte ho aap aapki agali story ka wait karungi

 

[Shanu]

Fantastic update Bhai and good closure....