Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Ab kiyahi kahe aap ko.
Khud samajh dar hoke
Nadano jesa kaam karte ho.
Mana koi sath nehi
Fir kiu khud ka sath chhorte ho.
Agar koi sath chhor ke jata he
To wo kabhi aapna nehi hota
Fir kiu jane wale ke gamme rote ho.

Jea bhai, mujhe bohot achha laga, jo aapne aapna hal bataya. Bohot log aap ko giyan denge par me koi giyan nehi dunga. Jindegi aap ki he kese jina he yea aap tey karo. Bhai Mey bas itana kahunga, I love you or ha no homo

Thank you so much mere bhai
Life is good no complaints
Jaldi milenge dobara

 

[Lone survivor]

Mind blowing update nice ending
Bhai aapne ek jabardast kahani hum sobko diya hain iskey liye aapko bhaut bhaut dhanyawad
Asha karta hu ki aapke saath bahut jald phirse mulakat hogi .
Jaldi aana Lone survivor bhai

Thank you so much bhai
Next jaldi hi aaegi

 

[Lone survivor]

Story t end ho gyi but bahut kuch chhut gaya....

Humesha hi kuch na kuch chhut hi jata hai

 

[Lone survivor]

Aajib chutiya he yea darklord Lucifer marnese piche nehi hatega or nahi guruji ko marnese khud ko rokega infact guruji to khud hi aapni jan lesakta he fir kiya soch kar dark lord ne aapne atmaka do hissa in donome dala kher dark lord ne aapni tabahi aapne land se likh hi liya heto koi kiya hi kare.
Awesome update bhai
Please keep writing
Waiting for next

Ab jaisa bhi tha chala gaya. Vaise sabko yehi lagta tha ki lucifer mar nahi sakta aur bahut kam log aise the jo guruji ko hara sakte the. Esliye unhe trap karke ek time loop me fasane ka socha tha usne but fail ho gaya

 

[Lone survivor]

Aaj na jaane kitne din baad forum khola aur anjaane mein Fantasy section mein chala aaya. Khair saubhagya se aapki story udhar dikhi aur uske aage "completed" likha dekhkar khudko muskurane se nahi rok paya. Tha ek samay jab kaafi free time tha apne paas bhi, jaane kitni hi stories padh daali is forum par, lekin ab naa ke barabar bhi waqt nahi mil paata. Par achha lagta hai dekhkar ki ek kahani, kisi ke liye kitni zaroori ho sakti hai?? Aur khushi hoti hai sochkar ki main bhi is kahani ke Caravan ka ek hissa ban paaya tha kabhi.. beshaq beech mein hi saath chhoot gaya tha par kabhi na kabhi to is kahani se ek alag sa judaav ban hi gaya tha.

Aapka sath kabhi chhuta hi nahi bhai. Aapke reviews ne ek naye disha di hai mujhe sochne aur samjhne ki. Besak kaam ki vajah se aap story par nahi aa paye lekin mere to aap humesha se yehi the.

You're one of those rare people I came across on any online platform, and without any special interaction I knew that what this platform and these stories mean to you.. khair kehna yahi chahta hun ki main maanta hun ki aap khud hi boht samajhdar hain aur us se bhi zaruri ki aap hi ofc apni zindagi ke baare mein jaante hain sabhi se kahin zyada.. par fir bhi kahunga ki jaaiye ek baar rehab mein koshish kijiye apne andar ke ek alag roop ko dhundiye aur fir dekhiye.. waise to do hi line mein likh diya maine par jaanta hun ki kisi pahaad chadhne sa kaam hai ye.. lekin wo kaam hi kya jo mushkil na ho?

Tried actually but couldn’t stay there for long. Kaam me bahut problems hone lag gaye thi. I think ab bahar interactions badhana hi jada better option hoga also soch raha hu family se rishte better karu. Us se acha kya hi hoga

Aur haan, ek baar real world ko dobara mauka dekar dekhiye, i can absolutely understand that imaginary world is so fucking good and beautiful but real world is our necessity.. don't just cut yourself off...

Yeah trying. Kafi chhijo par control karne ki kosis jari hai. Ek dam se to hoga nahi but i know dheere dheere i can do that.

To sum up this review (lol good old days), give it your best try, just once, if it works you'll fall in love with yourself and if it doesn't, trust me it won't be over even then. My best wishes to one of those rare writers (actually one of the three I've ever come across) whose content made me look at myself in the mirror. Much love man!

Thank you so much bhai. Always comes up with some beautiful words. Much love to you too brother. Hope we will meet soon

 

[Lone survivor]

Thank you Bhai humara liye time nikal ke itni achi achi story likhne ke liye you are great brother pura to apko situation ko nahi samajh sakta hu per 50% zaroor samjh sakta hu mai bhi yaha sirf issiliye aaya kyu breakup ke baad kuch tha nahi karne ko to masha suru kar kiya phir mujhe ye platform mila aab jo chij Real life nahi kar saka wo yaha kar raha hu story ke madhyam se kuch sahi to kuch galat per yahi to life hai sabki alag alag hoti hai kuch achi to kuch ki bhuri or aap sach main bahot ache writer ho soo ho sake to zaroor wapas aaiyega new story ke sath

Bas aisa hi kuch yaha hua. Dhayan rakhiye apna aur apno ka and stay away from drugs they can cause a hell lot of damage. Baki milenge jaldi hi vapas

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update bhai and very very congratulations for competing a wonderful story and thank you to the memorable journey. I found a very good friend with a lovely story. I will miss you badly. Please come back soon as possible. I will waiting for you Jea bhai. I love you.

Thank you so much bhai.
Next story jaldi hi aayegi
Much love

 

[BP high]

Thank you so much bhai.
Next story jaldi hi aayegi
Much love

I'm waiting brother

 

[parkas]

Thank you so much bhai.
Next story jaldi hi aayegi
Much love

Besabari se intezaar rahega new story ka Lone survivor bhai.....

 

[big king]

thank you so so much bhai for the love
Next aayegi jaldi hi aayegi but agar aapne kisi ek bhi update par likes aur comment nahi kiye to main chhod ke bhag jaunga. Haha
Much love to you bhai

Nahi bare bhai ham to aapke story ke diwane hain. Ham aapke story ke har update me apna pyaar aur ijjat aapko baksenge. Bare bhai no fear i am always here To main baat iye hain ki story kal aa rahi hain lagta hain ham khush hain . Hamari manokaamna new story ke liye puri kar di aapne dhanya ho aap dev intajaar rahegaa new story kaa