Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Nadan Dill]

Nice ending

 

[BP high]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Ab kiyahi kahe aap ko.
Khud samajh dar hoke
Nadano jesa kaam karte ho.
Mana koi sath nehi
Fir kiu khud ka sath chhorte ho.
Agar koi sath chhor ke jata he
To wo kabhi aapna nehi hota
Fir kiu jane wale ke gamme rote ho.

Jea bhai, mujhe bohot achha laga, jo aapne aapna hal bataya. Bohot log aap ko giyan denge par me koi giyan nehi dunga. Jindegi aap ki he kese jina he yea aap tey karo. Bhai Mey bas itana kahunga, I love you or ha no homo

 

[Tripuri chakraborty]

Mind blowing update nice ending
Bhai aapne ek jabardast kahani hum sobko diya hain iskey liye aapko bhaut bhaut dhanyawad
Asha karta hu ki aapke saath bahut jald phirse mulakat hogi .
Jaldi aana Lone survivor bhai

 

[Yamraaj]

Story t end ho gyi but bahut kuch chhut gaya....

 

[BP high]

UPDATE-278


Lucifer eda guruji aur arjun teeno ek line me khade hue the. Hatho me apne hathiyaar ki pakad tej kar li thi unhone aur ab aakhiri khel khelne ka waqt aa gaya tha

Eda- lucifer mujhe lagta hai humne en chhote mote kido se ladne me waqt jaya nahi karna chahiye. Sidha dark lord ko pakdo aur khatam kar do use vohi theek rahega nahi to ye aate rahenge aur hum enme uljhe rahenge

Arjun- haseena theek kah rahi hai. Sidhe us kutte ki hi puch sidhi kar dete hai

Guruji- us se pehle hume es chakravyu ko nast karna hi padega tabhi hum dark lord tak pahuch sakte hai. Vo sabse beech me khada hai. Hum sidha vaha nahi ja sakte

Eda- hum aur aap rasta banate hai lucifer tum sidhe dark lord ki taraf badho

Arjun- main bhi haseena ki madad karta hu. Mokka hath se jana nahi chahiye

Guruji- theek hai aisa hi karte hai

Lucifer jo abhi tak chhup khada tha vo abhi bhi kuch nahi bola

Eda- lucifer?? Theek hai?

Lucifer muda guruji ki taraf sunya sa dekhne laga

Lucifer- ab waqt aa gaya hai sach batane ka guruji. Kya chhupa rahe ho aap mujhse? Aur es baar juth nahi bol paoge aap kyuki puchne wala lucifer nahi the fucking devil hai
Lucifer ne behad commanding tone me guruji se kaha jiske karan sabka dhayan ab guruji ki taraf ho gaya

Lekin vo fir bhi kuch nahi bole

Lucifer- guruji???
Ek baar fir lucifer ne unko pukara lekin tabhi bahut tej raftaar wale arrows unki taraf ud kar aane lage

Unki raftaar dekh kar sab guruji ko chhod kar defence mode me aa gaye lekin lucifer jaisa khada tha bilkul vaise hi khada raha

Jaise hi arrows unke pass pahuchne wale the lucifer apne ab tak ke sabse khatarnaak roop me aa chuka tha

Uske pure sareer se aag nikalne lagi thi, mathe par sing nikal aaye the aur pura sareer laal khoon jaisa ho gaya tha. Uski height bhi pahle ke mukable bahut jada ho chuki thi

Lucifer ke sareer se nikalne wali aag ki lapto ne un arrows ko apne ander samet liya tha aur fir bina kisi ka intezaar kiye lucifer aage badhne laga

Vo aisa najara tha ki uske samne khade uske dusmano ki pant sirf lucifer ko dekhne matar se gilli ho chuki thi

Etna khaunaak manjar sayad hi unhone kabhi dekha hoga

Bahut adheek matar me apne aas pass ke vatavaran ko prabhavit kar raha tha lucifer aur jo kam takatvar the vo to sirf aag ki taap se hi maar rahe the

Door bathe dark lord ke bhi chehre par ek sikan utar aaye thi. Vo lucifer ke bare me janta to sab tha lekin usne kabhi uska ye roop nahi dekha tha aur jaisi tabhai vo bina kisi ko chhuye hi macha raha tha usko dekh kar kisi ka bhi kaleja muh me aa jata

Dekha to eda aur guruji ne bhi pehli hi baar tha lekin vo unki side tha esliye thoda shant the vahi arjun un sab se thoda piche lad raha tha

Vo jada garmi sahan nahi kar pa raha tha jo uske chehre se hi dikh raha tha

Dark lord ko bhi majburi me uthna hi pad gaya tha kyuki uske mayajal ko guruji ne tod diya tha jiski vajah se vo vaha se bhag nahi sakta tha

Ab ladne ke sivay uske pass koe aur rasta nahi tha aur ab baari thi uske apne asli roop me aane ki

Vo khada hua aur apne sareer par jo kapda lapet rakha tha usko nikal kar fek diya aur hatho ko hava me faila diya

Jiske turant baad uske sareer me badlaav hone lag gaye. Thodi hi der me pura sareer kale rang me badal gaya aur kad bhi lucifer ke barabar hi ho gaya tha uska

Ek taraf jaha lucifer laal rang me nahaya hua tha vahi dusri taraf dark lord kaale rang ko apne sath chamka raha tha

Do ati shaktishali davano ko dekh kar prithvi ko to chhodo hi swarg lok tak kaap gaya tha. Aasman me sare devi devta es bhayankar manjar ko dekhne ke liye utar aaye the. Vo to kisi se prey bhi nahi kar sakte the ko esko roka jaye kyuki ye karna to kisi ke bas me hi nahi tha

Baki ki bheed en dono ke asli roop ko dekh kar apne aap chhat gaye thi aur ab bache the to sirf lucifer aur dark lord ek dusre ke aamne samne khade

Eda ke sath sath guruji bhi piche hat chuke the kyuki ab beech me jana bevkufi hi mani jati

Dhadaaaaammmmm

Jamin hila dene wala dhamaka hua jab lucifer aur dark lord ke hathiyaar ek dusre se takraye aur unka antim yudh suru ho chuka tha

Jaha dark lord khud ko lucifer ke hamlo se bacha bhi raha tha aur us par hamla kar bhi raha tha vahi lucifer sirf hamla kar raha tha

Khud ko bachane ki koe kosis nahi ho rahi thi uski taraf se. Aisa lag raha tha jaise vo nauta de raha ho dark lord ko hi agar hai himmat to maar ke dikha mujhe

Jab jab unki talware takra rahi thi tab tab bhukamp jaisa feel ho raha tha dharti par aur ye drashay bahut bhayanak ban gaya tha

Vahi ek sharp talwar ke attack se lucifer ke sareer ko halka sa katne me kamyab ho gaya tha dark lord jis se uski khushi ka koe thikana hi nahi raha lekin us khushi ne uska dhayan bhi bhatka diya jiska fayda ek bade cut se lucifer ne uthaya

Halanki dono ko jada kuch feel hua nahi lekin sareer tak pahuch chuke the dono ek dusre ke

Dark lord- you cant kill me lucifer
Dark lord hasa aur fire attack karne laga lucifer par

Jo khud aag ho us par aag kya hi asar karegi? Yehi lucifer ke sath hua. Jo fire attack kar raha tha dark lord vo lucifer ke sareer me samate chale gaya aur vaha garmi aur jada badh gaye

Lucifer- tujhe marunga nahi kha jaunga main aaj
Lucifer garja aur etni tej flying kick maari dark lord par ki vo teen kadam piche jake gira

Ladae me jo pehle niche girta hai uska vapas khade hone me bahut mahnat lagti hai

Jaha vo gira vaha ki jamin ke kafi tukde hawa me udte hue dikhae diye jo es drasay ki khaufnaak drasha rahe the

Lucifer ne bhi bina koe waqt gavaye ek ke baad ek teer jaise weapon dark lord par chalane suru kar diye jo aage se bahut pane the aur speed etni tej thi ki sirf dark lord hi use dekh pa raha tha

Halanki vo mostly attack se bach gaya tha lekin fir bhi ek do to uske sareer ko paar karne me kamyaab ho gaye the

Gusse aur frustration se vo khada hua aur apne charo taraf kale badalo ka ghera bana liya jo lucifer ke sare attacks ko uske pass pahuchne se pehle hi rok de raha tha

Dark lord- mujhe marne ke liye tujhe khud ko marna padega lucifer aur sath me apne guru ko bhi
Dark lord garja aur lucifer ke upar light se hamla karne laga

Jaise hi roshini lucifer ke upar girne lagi uska dark side kamjor hone lagi aur esi ka fayda utha kar dark lord ne apni behad shaktishali talwar lucifer ke pairo ke aar paar kar di

Khoon ki dhaar kisi fuvaare ki tarah lucifer ke sareer se nikalne lagi

“Lucifffeerr”””

Eda door se hi chhilaye lekin guruji ne use aage badhne se rook liya

Lucifer sidha khada hota us se pehle hi dark lord ne apne bhaale se uske sar par piche se war kiya jiski vajah se lucifer piche ke bal ja gira

Dard feel to hua use lekin uska reason uska khoon nikalna ya chot lagna nahi tha balki dark lord ka roshini se hamla karna tha

Vo devil roop me tha esliye roshini usko pareshan kar rahi thi aur vo kisi bhi reason ke devil roop chhodna nahi chah raha tha kyuki fir sayad usme thode bahut emotions aa jate jo abhi vo nahi chahta tha

Lucifer par aur hamle hote es se pehle eda ne apni kaali shaktiyo ka jadu dikhana suru kiya aur mosam hi badal diya

Jaha abhi roshini charo taraf chahal kadmi kar rahi thi ab andere ne apni pakad majbut karni suru kar di thi

Dark lord ko ye dekh kar gussa aane laga aur usne eda par attack kar diya

Lucifer ek taraf tha dusri taraf eda aur beech me dark lord jo apni full potential me aa chuka tha

Dark lord me ek hath se energy beam nikal ke lucifer par attack suru kiya aur dusre se eda par vahi vo guruji ki taraf kuch nahi kar raha tha

Unse jo hamle ho rahe the us se bas khud ko defend hi kar raha tha vo unpar koe attack nahi

Vahi arjun en sab me kuch nahi kar sakta tha vo jo dark lord ki army thi unse ladne me busy ho chuka tha

Dark lord teen taraf se ho rahe hamlo se khud ko bahut ache se bacha bhi raha tha aur un par hamla kar bhi raha tha

Abhi tak jo hua uske samne ab jo ho raha tha usme jamin asman ka fark tha

Aisa lag raha tha jaise pehle dark lord sirf khel khel raha tha aur ab vo unse khilwad kar raha ho

Lucifer jo jhakmi ho chuka tha use khade hone me thodi dikkat mahsus hone lag gaye thi aur uski jagah eda full form me dark lord ke samne khadi thi

Uske kadam dheere dheere aage badhne suru ho gaye the aur kuch der ki masakat ke baad vo dark lord ke bahut pass bhi pahuch chuki thi

Jaise hi dark lord ko eda ki chal samjh aaye usne lucifer aur guruji par dhayan hata kar ek bahut bhayank attack kiya eda par etna khatarnaak attack tha vo ki agar eda ko lag jata to uska bachna namumkeen ho jata

Lekin eda eske liye tayar thi aur hawa me uchal kar vo bach gaye lekin attack kharab thodi hi jata hai?

Dark lord ki khud ki aadhi army uske attack ki chapet me aa chuki thi jiska usse ek percent bhi afsos nahi hua

Use pata tha agar eda uski chal me kamyab ho jati to vo use kitna jada hurt kar sakti thi

En sab me kuch hi seconds me uska dhayan lucifer se hata tha aur esi ka fayda uthate hue lucifer ne apne bhale se dark lord ke ek hath me ched kar diya aur eda ne bina samay gavaye apni talwar se us hath ko uske sareer se alag kar diya

“Ahhhhhhhh” ek bahut dardnaak chhikh gunji dark lord ki vaha par lekin uske turant baad usne apne aap ko sambhal liya kyuki lucifer yehi haal uske dusre hath ka bhi karne wala tha lekin vo bach gaya

Dark lord- tu mujhe maar nahi sakta lucifer. Tu mujhe maar nahi sakta. Pata hai kyu? Kyuki MERI SOUL KA EK HISSA MERE ANDER HAI EK HISSA GURUJI KE ENDER AUR EK TERE ANDER. ESLIYE MUJHE MARNE KE LIYE TUJHE TERE PYAARE GURU KO MARNA PADEGA AUR KHUD BHI MARNA PADEGA

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAAHHA

Aajib chutiya he yea darklord Lucifer marnese piche nehi hatega or nahi guruji ko marnese khud ko rokega infact guruji to khud hi aapni jan lesakta he fir kiya soch kar dark lord ne aapne atmaka do hissa in donome dala kher dark lord ne aapni tabahi aapne land se likh hi liya heto koi kiya hi kare.
Awesome update bhai
Please keep writing
Waiting for next

 

[Death Kiñg]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Aaj na jaane kitne din baad forum khola aur anjaane mein Fantasy section mein chala aaya. Khair saubhagya se aapki story udhar dikhi aur uske aage "completed" likha dekhkar khudko muskurane se nahi rok paya. Tha ek samay jab kaafi free time tha apne paas bhi, jaane kitni hi stories padh daali is forum par, lekin ab naa ke barabar bhi waqt nahi mil paata. Par achha lagta hai dekhkar ki ek kahani, kisi ke liye kitni zaroori ho sakti hai?? Aur khushi hoti hai sochkar ki main bhi is kahani ke Caravan ka ek hissa ban paaya tha kabhi.. beshaq beech mein hi saath chhoot gaya tha par kabhi na kabhi to is kahani se ek alag sa judaav ban hi gaya tha.

You're one of those rare people I came across on any online platform, and without any special interaction I knew that what this platform and these stories mean to you.. khair kehna yahi chahta hun ki main maanta hun ki aap khud hi boht samajhdar hain aur us se bhi zaruri ki aap hi ofc apni zindagi ke baare mein jaante hain sabhi se kahin zyada.. par fir bhi kahunga ki jaaiye ek baar rehab mein koshish kijiye apne andar ke ek alag roop ko dhundiye aur fir dekhiye.. waise to do hi line mein likh diya maine par jaanta hun ki kisi pahaad chadhne sa kaam hai ye.. lekin wo kaam hi kya jo mushkil na ho?

Aur haan, ek baar real world ko dobara mauka dekar dekhiye, i can absolutely understand that imaginary world is so fucking good and beautiful but real world is our necessity.. don't just cut yourself off...

To sum up this review (lol good old days), give it your best try, just once, if it works you'll fall in love with yourself and if it doesn't, trust me it won't be over even then. My best wishes to one of those rare writers (actually one of the three I've ever come across) whose content made me look at myself in the mirror. Much love man!

 

[rocket league]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

Thank you Bhai humara liye time nikal ke itni achi achi story likhne ke liye you are great brother pura to apko situation ko nahi samajh sakta hu per 50% zaroor samjh sakta hu mai bhi yaha sirf issiliye aaya kyu breakup ke baad kuch tha nahi karne ko to masha suru kar kiya phir mujhe ye platform mila aab jo chij Real life nahi kar saka wo yaha kar raha hu story ke madhyam se kuch sahi to kuch galat per yahi to life hai sabki alag alag hoti hai kuch achi to kuch ki bhuri or aap sach main bahot ache writer ho soo ho sake to zaroor wapas aaiyega new story ke sath

 

[BP high]

UPDATE-279


Lucifer guruji ki taraf dekh raha tha jaise ab uske samne puri picture hi clear ho gaye ho. Etne waqt se yehi raaj to puchna chahta tha vo guruji se aur yehi guruji us se chhipaye hue the

Unhe dar tha ki agar lucifer ko ye waqt se pehle pata chal gaya to vo pata nahi kaise react karega? Use roka bhi ja payega ya nahi? Yehi sab ke karan guruji use kuch bata nahi rahe the

Lucifer ko ek bada jhatka laga tha abhi ye jaan kar aur aaj use pehli baar samjh me nahi aaya ki vo kare to kare kya?

Dark lord ko jinda nahi chhod sakte aur use marne ke liye apne guruji ko maarna padega sath me khud bhi marna padega

Duvidha me tha londa apna bahut badi duvidha me

Essi beech dark lord apne aapko sambhalne me laga hua tha uska ek hath uske sareer se alag pada tha. Vaise to vo use jod sakta tha lekin abhi etna waqt nahi tha uske pass ki vo try bhi kare

Use ye to pata tha ki lucifer bechain ho jayega lekin es baat ko bhi nahi nakara tha usne ki lucifer apne sabse rodar roop me aa jaye esliye apne aapko tayar rakhna bahut jaruri tha

Vo sambhal raha tha lekin eda uski chal samjh gaye aur us par hamla kar diya

Lucifer ki bhi nind tooti aur vo gusse me dark lord ki taraf palta. Vo bhi samjh gaya ki ye dusre wala lucifer hai lekin uske samjhne se pehle hi lucifer us par toot pada

Laat guse se jo maar suru hue vo kab talwar par aa gaye aur dark lord ke sareer ko katne lagi use bhi samjh nahi aaya

Badi muskil se vo apne aap ko lucifer se bacha paya aur ek shield bana kar lucifer se bachne laga

Lekin aaj kuch kaam nahi aane wala tha kyuki lucifer hurt hua tha aaj aur aaj vo sab khatam karke hi manega

Do teen war bhi nahi jhel paye lucifer ke vo shield aur toot kar chakna choor ho gaye

Dark lord ne firse shield bana li lekin uska bhi yehi asar hua jiska sidha sidha yehi matlab tha ki defesive approach se kuch nahi hone wala

Aur dark lord ne angel knife hawa me barsane suru kiye vo lucifer ke sareer ko chhute us se pehle hi

Ghal ghap ghap ghap ghap

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Do alag alag jagah se do alag alag aawaze gunji

Ek thi guruji ki jo kab un chakuo ke beech me aa gaye kisi ko dikhae hi nahi diya aur ek thi dark lord ki jiski ek soul aaj finally uska sath chhod kar ja chuki thi

Lucifer ne jab guruji ko apne gutno par dekha to uski aankhen dard se chhilane lagi

Sirf guruji ki aatma hi earth nahi chhod rahi thi uske sath sath lucifer ki achaya bhi ja rahi thi

Vahi eda ki aankhon me bhi aashu bhar aaye the unki gaud me guruji ka sareer marat pada hua tha aur vo dard se kaap rahi thi

Lucifer ek jagah still khada hua bina koe react kiye kisi putle ki tarah khada hi rah gaya

Vahi dark lord ko pehle ek hath aur ab ek soul ka tukda kho chuka tha uski halaat kuch jada theek nahi thi

Vo esliye hi guruji par attack nahi kar raha tha ki agar unhe kuch hua to vo kamjor pad sakta hai. Pehle jab dono ki bhidat hue thi tab dark lord ne socha tha ki agar unhe guruji ke ander ki sari information mil jaye to ek soul ke tukde ki kurbaani de sakta hai lekin ab unhe kuch nahi mila

Na to koe jankari mili aur na apne soul ko bacha saka
Use ab apna ant najdeek dikh raha tha

Etna sab kuch kiya usne aur ant me mila kya use? Kuch bhi nahi

Puri jindagi laga di sadiya beet gaye andera failate failate aur aakhir me ab vo us andere me hi leen hone wala tha

Fir bhi kisi tarah usne apne aapko sambhala khada hua aur ek aakiri kosis karne laga lucifer ko maat dene ki

Vaise to vo samjh gaya tha ki uski puri planning hi andhuri thi aur abhi usko lucifer ke samne aana hi nahi chahiye tha

Bahut sari chhije thi jo use chhut gaye thi aur ab usko uska khamyaja bhugatna pad raha tha

Lekin ab vo kuch bhi nahi kar sakta tha. Ek to tarika tha ki vo vapas bhaag jaye aur fir tayari karke aaye kyuki vo lucifer se pehle to mar nahi sakta

Aur dusra tarika tha ki abhi ladte ladte apni vo halaat kara le ki uske baad us se kuch bhi nahi ho paye

Lekin dimag ne apna kaam karna band kar diya tha esliye to vo dusre raste ki taraf badh gaya

Sayad ego ko thesh pahuch gaye thi uski aur usne vapas angel knife ki baarish karni suru ki lekin es baar lucifer apni jagah se hila bhi nahi

Jaise jaise angel knife uske najdeek aa rahe the sabki saase tham rahi thi aur lucifer ki aisi halaat dekh kar eda ne hi kamaan sambhalne ki sochi aur vo dark lord ke attack ko katne ki kosis karne ko uthi lekin tabhi pure vatavaran me garmi bhadne lagi

Etni jada garmi badh gaye palak jhapakte hi ki eda jaise shaktishali angel ki bhi halaat kharab hone lagi

Ye garmi lucifer ke sareer se nikal rahi thi aur vo pure jagah failne lagi

Jo log apne apne gharo me chhipe bathe the unki chhilane ki aawaze gunjane lagi

Yaha tak ki dark lord ke bhi pasine chhut gaye

Charo taraf aag jalne lagi. Ghar jalne lagi, buildings jalne lagi, un buildings ke ander log jalne lagi

Lucifer ke pure sareer ko aag ki lapto ne gher liya tha aur uske sareer hi aag nikal kar charo taraf fail rahi thi

Minutes bhi nahi lagi vaha khohram machne me.

Har taraf hahakar mach gaya log zinda jalne lage, buildings, ghar raakh hone lage

Kisi ko kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha ki ab kya kare kaise roke esko

Sare devi devta supreme aur mata ke pass pahuch gaye aur unse guhaar karne lage ki ab es musibat ke waqt me vohi kuch kar sakte hai

“Mate madad kijiye, rokiye lucifer ko agar vo nahi ruka to sab raakh ho jayega” heaven ke bahar khade hokar sabne ek sath guhaar lagaye

To mata aur supreme dono apne kaksh se bahar aa gaye

Sabne jhuk kar unko pranaam kiya aur fir unse sahayata mangne lage

Mata- ye niyati me likha hua hai mere bacho. Esko rokna uchit nahi hota

Dev- mata aise to puri prithvi khatam ho jayegi

Mata- nahi. Aisa nahi hoga. Kalyug me log apna sthaan bhul gaye the. Ye vinaash unhe unke ashitatav ke bare me jagaega

Dev- mate aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki eske baad vo aur jada andhere me chale jaye? Vinaash sirf dukh dard hi deta hai aur kuch nahi

Mata- ye vinaash ek naye subah leke aayega. Aap sab chinta nahi kijiye es kali raat ke baad ek bahut sunhari subah hogi

Dev- kya hum aise hi hath par hath dhare apne logo ko marte hue dekhte rahe mata?

Supreme- ek maye yug ke liye purane ka khatam hona behad jaruri hota hai. Ye vinaash to bas naam matar ka vinaash hai eske baad jab agla waqt aayega tab asli matlab samjh me aaega eska. Esliye aap sab abhi se aane wale waqt ke liye tayar rahe. Kuch dasak tak ab shanti rahegi fir jab kalyug apni charam par hoga tab vapas lucifer aayega vapas tabhai machegi aur ye vinaash uske samne kuch nahi lagega aapko.

Eske baad mata aur supreme vaha se chale jate hai aur baki sab niraash vapas lot jate hai

Vahi lucifer ki sari premika ke tv connection kharab ho chuka tha. Unhe ab ye bhi nahi pata chal raha tha ki vaha kya ho raha hai. Garmi ka satar unke pass bhi behad adhik ho gaya tha lekin unko jada fark nahi pad raha tha jaise lucifer se kuch door khadi ashmita ko nahi pad raha tha

Uske charo taraf sirf vinaash hi vinaash dikhae de raha tha aur chhikhane chhilane ko aawaze uske kaano me gunj rahi thi

Dheere dheere uske kadam lucifer ko taraf badhne lage. Ek dam blank dimag se vo lucifer ki taraf badhne lagi thi

Kya chahti thi vo ye to use khud bhi nahi pata tha lekin vo dekh pa rahi thi ki lucifer kitne dard me hai

Uska pura sareer jamin se thoda upar utha hua tha aur pure sareer me se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi

Jaise jaise vo lucifer ke pass pahuch rahi thi vaise vaise halki aag ki lapto ka asar us par hona suru ho gaya tha

Eda kisi taraf khud ko bachane ki kosis kar rahi thi to vahi dark lord apne kale jadu se khud ko thanda karne ki kosis me laga hua tha

Aur

Ghaappppp

Lucifer ke sareer me lucifer ka toota hua kanjhar jo usne arjun se cheena tha vo ashmita ne ghoop diya tha

Dhadaam se lucifer jamin par ashmita ki gaud me gira

“I LOVE YOU LUCIFER” aur fir ashmita ne khanjar ka dabaav lucifer ki chhati me kar diya

Dono ki aankhon me ek sath ashu ki ek bund nikali aur fir lucifer ke chehre par ek aakhiri muskaan ubhar aaye

Jaise hi mahool normal hone laga dark lord eda ko marne ko koda kyuki ab sirf ek matar vohi bachi thi jo uske raste me khadi thi lekin us se pehle hi eda ne uska sar uske sareer se alag kar diya aur bhagte hue lucifer ke pass pahuch gaye

Lekin lucifer ja chuka tha. Vo aakhiri waqt me bhi lucifer ko apne dil ka haal nahi bata paye aur na lucifer ka jaan paye

Aankhon se ashu bahane lage aur bade pyaar se bas ek baar vo lucifer ke chehre par apne hath fira paye kyuki dusri baar ki himmat nahi bachi thi usme


Thoda waqt gujra aur sab vaha pahuch chuke the. Sabki aankhon me aashu the dil me dard tha lekin ab koe kuch nahi kar sakta tha

Inaaya ko to bahut pehle se ye sab pata tha esliye apne aapko tayar karne ki kosis karti rahti thi lekin baki sab ko sambhalna bahut muskil ho gaya tha

Kaashvi bhi aa gaye thi vaha aur ek vohi thi jo sabko sambhal rahi thi sath me arjun bhi thodi bahut madad kar raha tha

Bahut ache tarike se lucifer ka antim sankaar kiya gaya jisme agni sabne ek sath mil kar hi di aur dheere dheere waqt gujarta gaya

Do mahino baad hi ashmita ka pet saaf dikhane lag gaya tha aur ab sabko pata chal gaya tha ki vo pregnant hai

Aur fir kuch aur mahino baad usne ek ladke ko janam diya jo hubhuhu lucifer ki copy tha

Lucifer jaisa hi tej uski aankhon me tha aur lucifer jaisa hi shataan bhi tha vo

Us ek bacho ko sabne apni jindagi bana liya aur use hi lucifer samjh kar jeene lage.


“Mujhe nahi chahiye kuch bhi aap se. Main yahi theek hu” eda ne boli ye baat behad gusse me kyuki uske samne mata aur supreme khade the

Mata- mujhe pata hai mere bache tum bahut dard me ho lekin humare baad humari jagah sirf tum le sakti ho aur koe nahi

Eda- lucifer ka hell hai ye aur main lucifer ki hu esliye mujhse mere lucifer ki aakhiri nishani mat chhino. Main aapse gujarish karti hu
Halka aashu tapak gaye uske gulabi gaalo se

Mata- heaven ab tumhra hua beta. Ab tum supreme aur tum hi mata ho. Lucifer tumhre ander hai aur use koe tumse nahi chhen sakta. Lucifer bhi kabhi ye nahi chahta hoga ki tum hell me apna jeevan gujar do. Esliye jo lucifer nahi kar paya vo tum karo. Heaven ko fir se hara bara kar do. Khushiya bhikher do us dunia me bhi aur esme bhi. Maine kaha tha ma tumhra janam bahut jaruri kaam ke liye hua? Aur koe karan tha jiski vajah se tum lucifer ki kabhi nahi ho paye? To vo yehi kaaran tha tumhe heaven ki gaddi sambhalni thi. Ab waqt aa gaya hai utho aur baato khushiya

Eda ke sar par hath rakh kar mata muskuraye to eda ne jhuk kar un dono ke pair chhu kar unse aashurvaad liya

Aur teeno vaha se gayab ho gaye

Eda to heaven pahuch gaye lekin mata aur supreme kaha gaye ye kisi ko nahi pata chala

Dasak beet gaye lucifer ko gaye aur uske jane ke baad uski sari premikao ne hell sambhal liya aur lucifer ke bete ko hell ka lord banaya gaya

Lekin usme etne sanskaar diye gaye the ki vo torcher ki jagah unhe sahi raste par lane ki kosis karta tha. Sachar aur light ka prateek tha vo

Heaven ko eda ne sambhal liya tha aur hell ko lucifer ki premikao aur uske bete ne

Charo taraf ek baar firse ujala bikhar gaya tha aur sab hasi khushi rahne lage

THE END​

Awesome update bhai and very very congratulations for competing a wonderful story and thank you to the memorable journey. I found a very good friend with a lovely story. I will miss you badly. Please come back soon as possible. I will waiting for you Jea bhai. I love you.

 

[BP high]

Aaj na jaane kitne din baad forum khola aur anjaane mein Fantasy section mein chala aaya. Khair saubhagya se aapki story udhar dikhi aur uske aage "completed" likha dekhkar khudko muskurane se nahi rok paya. Tha ek samay jab kaafi free time tha apne paas bhi, jaane kitni hi stories padh daali is forum par, lekin ab naa ke barabar bhi waqt nahi mil paata. Par achha lagta hai dekhkar ki ek kahani, kisi ke liye kitni zaroori ho sakti hai?? Aur khushi hoti hai sochkar ki main bhi is kahani ke Caravan ka ek hissa ban paaya tha kabhi.. beshaq beech mein hi saath chhoot gaya tha par kabhi na kabhi to is kahani se ek alag sa judaav ban hi gaya tha.

You're one of those rare people I came across on any online platform, and without any special interaction I knew that what this platform and these stories mean to you.. khair kehna yahi chahta hun ki main maanta hun ki aap khud hi boht samajhdar hain aur us se bhi zaruri ki aap hi ofc apni zindagi ke baare mein jaante hain sabhi se kahin zyada.. par fir bhi kahunga ki jaaiye ek baar rehab mein koshish kijiye apne andar ke ek alag roop ko dhundiye aur fir dekhiye.. waise to do hi line mein likh diya maine par jaanta hun ki kisi pahaad chadhne sa kaam hai ye.. lekin wo kaam hi kya jo mushkil na ho?

Aur haan, ek baar real world ko dobara mauka dekar dekhiye, i can absolutely understand that imaginary world is so fucking good and beautiful but real world is our necessity.. don't just cut yourself off...

To sum up this review (lol good old days), give it your best try, just once, if it works you'll fall in love with yourself and if it doesn't, trust me it won't be over even then. My best wishes to one of those rare writers (actually one of the three I've ever come across) whose content made me look at myself in the mirror. Much love man!

I'm totally agree with you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Fantastic update and good closure

Thank you bhai