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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Nice start, characters ka introduction nahi hua hai to abhi to sab kuch rahasya mein hi hai. Magar ye jo saksh pakda gaya hai, ye hai to kuch unchi cheez. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Welcome and thank you bhai
 
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Lucifer hai ye magar ye kis dunia ya lok mein hai? Wo kon log the Jo ise marna chahte the? Kya ye wahi Lucifer hai, son of GOD and king of underworld? Ye Guruji Shukracharye hain kya jo isko dharti par bhej rahe hai? Bahut se sawal hai.
Bhai vo underworld se nahi hell se tha
 
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So, as expected Lucifer ki poori tarah dhajjiyan uda di Aghor ne... Sabse pehle to is waqt Aghor ko bulane ka faisla hi galat tha Lucifer ka, uske paas uski poori shaktiyan hain nahi, uske oopar Aghor pehle se bohot adhik shaktishali ho chuka hai, aise mein fight mein upper hand hamesha Aghor ka hi hona tha
Bhai options nahi the uske pass
Agar nahi bulata to na vo inaaya se door rah pata aur na vo esse aur fir kaand ho jata
... But chalo bulaya to bulaya, uske baad bhi fight ke samay is praani ko bakchodi soojh rahi hai... I don't think ke 24 ghanton mein se ek bhi second aisa hota hoga jab Lucifer sex ke baare mein na sochta ho... Yahaan, Aghor se uski ladayi chal rahi hai aur wo kewal sex ke hi baare mein soche jaa raha hai...
Vohi to sabse important hai
Insaan ko apne makshad se nahi bhatkna chahiye
Khair, apni isi galti aur overconfidence ke chalte wo Aghor ko kuchh palon ke liye ignore kar baitha aur wo waqt kaafi tha Aghor ke liye palatkar vaar karne hetu... Par jo baat dekhne yogya thi wo ye ki, Lucifer ne apni shaktiyon ki kami mein bhi ek baar ke liye Aghor ka hara hi diya tha... We can only imagine what he can do with his full strength and powers...
You can't even imagine that bro
Aghor bhi bhali bhaanti jaanta hai ki wo Lucifer ko maar nahi sakta, par wo Lucifer ki aisi haalat kar gaya hai jiske baad uska repair hona mushkil hi laga raha hai...
Namumkin hi lagta hai
Because yahaan sabse important sawaal yahi hai ke Lucifer ke shareer ko jo tukde Aghor ne kiye hain use waapis theek kaun karega? Supreme aur Guru ji, do hi aise shakhs nazar aate hain jo ye kar sakte hain... Maybe, Eda too!!
What about... nahi nahi nahi bataunga
Idhar ant mein Lucifer ne Aghor ko chetawani bhi de di hai jiska kendra shayad Supreme hi the... Let's see ke Lucifer ke kahe anusaar Supreme Aghor ko uske karm ka fal denge ya abhi uske kuchh din bache hain... I think abhi wo nahi marne waala, kyonki Mitika ki bhavishyavani ke mutabik abhi Lucifer ko ek gehra ghaav dena baaki hai...
Galat kar de fir aapko?
Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Thank you bhai
 
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UPDATE-97
Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
 

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UPDATE-97
Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
Awesome update.. Bhai.. 💥💥
 

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Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai...
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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