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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

kingkhankar

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UPDATE-97
Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
Wonderful update.
I was wondering how will Lucifer come back. Devil has finally helped himself to comeback and punish the evil....

Very good writing effort.
 

Aryanv

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jitne potential se Aghor aaya tha laga tha kuch bada karega , lekin ye to bas aate hi nikal liya .....:))
nice update
 

Itachi_Uchiha

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UPDATE-97
Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
Wahhh aakhir hell king samne aa hi gaya aur aate hi sare hell heaven nd deamon ki faad ki rakh di. Kya hi maja aaya dekhne me. Aur fir aaj ke din ka past bhi dikhaya gaya wahhh. Kya baat hai. Phle sb ho gaya then past dikha bahut khub Lone survivor bhai.
 

Surya_021

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Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
Nice update
 

Naik

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UPDATE-96
Lucifer aur aghor ek dusre ke taraf bhagte hue hawa me ude aur aghor ke spare se lucifer ki talwar mili aur vo milte hi etne jor ki aawaz hue ki sayad city tak sunae di hogi

Aur us se etni power nikali ki lucifer aur aghor dono vapas ulti side me door jake gira

Lekin khade hone me bhi ek second nahi lagaye aur vapas ek dusre ki taraf bhage
Lucifer ne apna bhala se aghor ke bhagle ko roka aur talwar se uspar war karne ki kosis karne laga
Lekin aghor ke pass bahut raftaar thi vo bahut aasani se lucifer ki talwar se bach raha tha aur fir apne pura jor laga kar lucifer ko dhakka diya aur lucifer piche ki side me ja gira

Aghor- you can't beat me lucifer aur Hava me udte hue apna bhala lucifer ki taraf karte hue bahut tej niche aaya lekin lucifer last second me hat gaya nahi to abhi dharti me gad jata vo

Aghor bahut tej speed se aaya tha esliye uski bhala jamin me ghus gaya aur vo nikalne wala hi tha ki lucifer ne ek jump mara kar usse upar se kich mari to vo pura jamin me chala gaya aur fir agli kick aghor ko padi aur vo lucifer se kafi door jake gira

Lucifer- bc yaadadast nahi hai to kamjor samjha hai kya?
Aghor- sala ek galti hogaye
Dophar me aana tha
Lekin ye andhera bhi tujhe nahi bacha sakta

Lucifer- ye mera andhera hai aghor
Sath nahi chodega mera
Aur lucifer ke aas pass bahut tej tej kala tufan udne laga
Aur lucifer ne apne ek hath se us kale tufaan ko aghor ki taraf feka aur khud uske piche bhagne laga

Vo etna tej Tufan tha ki aghor na dekh pa raha tha aur na hathiyar utha pa raha tha

Tabhi andhere me se ek dam se lucifer apni talwar ghumate hue nikla aur sidha aghor ki taraf gumae
Agar ye war aghor par lag jata to vo vahi dher ho jata lekin vo kismat se bach gaya
Bas ek chhoti si karoch hi aa paye uske hatho par

Aghor ne moke ka fayda uthaya aur bhag par apna bhaala utha liya aur fir mantra pad kar us tufan ko shant kar diya

Aghor- dhoke se war?
Lucifer ko suit nahi karta
Aur apne bhale ko pakad kar kuch mantra padta hai aur usme aag lag jati hai
Same to same lucifer bhi karta hai

Aur vaha aghor aur lucifer ke hathiyaar aag se tapne lagi
Lucifer ne vapas aghor par attack karne laga lekin es baar aghor bahut easily bach raha tha jaise koe majak ho ye sab uske liye aur fir lucifer ki talwar ko apne bhale se rok kar door fek deta hai aur uske dusre bhale ko apne bhale se tood deta hai

Aghor- maine kaha tha na tu mujhe rok nahi sakta
Aghor etna bolta hai ki lucifer ki talwar apne aap ud kar uske pass aa jati hai aur ek naya bhala bhi uske hatho me aajata hai

Aghor- manega nahi na tu?
Lucifer man me he is so fast
So fucking fast
Agar main eske pass hi nahi pahuch paya to dikkat ho jayegi
Ye bahut aasani se mujhe jhamki kar sakta hai

Lekin ab sayad aghor ka patience level khatam hone lag gaya tha aur vo bina ruke ek ke baad ek hamla kiya ja raha tha lekin abhi tak Lucifer ko kuch hua nahi tha

Abhi tak to aghor ko hi kharoch aae thi lucifer bilkul theek tha lekin sayad ab bahut ho gaya tha kyuki aghor ka bhala sidha lucifer ke par me ja ghusa

Lekin aghor ke bhala nikalne se pehle lucifer ne bhi uska pair apni talwar se chheer dala

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh karke ek bahut tej chikh aghor ke muh se

Aur jab lucifer ke pair me se uska bhala vapas nikla to ek bund bhi khoon nahi nikla vaha se vahi aghor jaha khada tha vo jagah uske hi khoon se puri laal ho gaye thi

Besak khoon nahi nikal raha tha lucifer ke pair se lekin dard usse pura ho raha tha

Vo aghor ke mukable jada langda raha tha kyuki uske pair me se to bhala pura aar Paar ho gaya tha vahi aghor ka sirf kata tha

Lekin vo apne ek hath se kuch magic nikalta hai aur uske jhakam bharne lagte hai

Lucifer ye dekh kar
To tune bhi bech diya apne aap ko?
Aghor- next Supreme banane ke liye kuch bhi

Lucifer- tujhe lagta hai ki etna sab ho jane ke baad vo tujhe Supreme banane dega?
Tujhe kisi cheeti ki tarah masal dega vo
Aghor- jab sabko pata chalega ki maine mara hai lucifer ko to koe himmat nahi karega mere samne khada hone ki

Lucifer- sabko pata hai mere pass na meri shaktiya hai aur na yaadadast
Aise me mujhe harana bahut aasan hai
Tu kuch nahi kar payega

Aghor ko lucifer ki baatein sun kar gussa aane laga aur ab tak uska pair pura heal ho chuka tha

Vo vapas full strength ke sath lucifer par toot pada

Lucifer pehle se to bahut kada slow ho gaya tha ab to aisa lag raha tha jaise uski sword khud lad rahi hai aghor se

Aghor- aaj ke baad tu apni gand bhi kisi aur se dulvaega lucifer
Lucifer- sala rajao wali jindagi

Aghor- maut kayaro wali hi milegi
Lucifer- fir vohi chutiya wali baat
Jab main mar hi nahi sakta to kyu gand mara raha hai?

Aghor ne apna bhala bahut tej ghumate hue lucifer ki taraf mara jisko lucifer ne apne dono hathiyaro se rok liya lekin vo etni takat se mara gaya tha ki lucifer door jake gira

Aur girte hi aghor uspar vapas se laat mukke barsane lag gaye

Lucifer ne jaise hi apna hath uthane ki kosis ki aghor ne apni kali shaktiyo se uske hath vahi band diye aur bahut buri tarah usko marne laga

Khoon nahi dikh raha tha lekin ye saaf pata chal raha tha ki lucifer ko bahut chot aa rahi hai

Aur lucifer hath bhi nahi utha pa raha tha, upar se aghor puri takaat se lucifer ko maar raha tha

Jab usne socha ki hatho se kuch nahi hone wala apna bhala hi uthana padega to lucifer ke upar se khada hua aur apne bhale ke pass pahuch gaya

Etne me lucifer ko time mil gaya aur usne apni sari taakat se apne aapko free chudva liya

Aur lucifer ne apni talwar feki aghor ki taraf jo aghor se ruk nahi paye aur sidhe uski chhati me ghus gaye

Bina koe dusra moka diye lucifer ne apna bhala bhi fek diya aur vo aghor ki chest se ghusa aur dusre side se nikal kar jamin me ja dasa

Ab aghor ki body jhul rahi thi bich me

Lucifer langdate hue uske pass gaya aur apni talwar uske chhati se nikali aur vaha se khoon ki nadi bahne lagi aur vapas jaha pehle mari thi uske side me ghusa diya fir vaha se nikali aur uske side me ghusa di

Aise hi 5 6 baar aur kiya lucifer ne
Aghor ki halaat bahut kharab ho gaye thi lekin lucifer ne vo nahi kiya jo usse kar dena chahiye tha
Uske sar uske sareer se alag nahi kiya

Lucifer usko jhulta chhod ke thoda piche hat gaya aur jamin par bath gaya kyuki khade rahne ki himmat to usme bhi nahi bachi thi

Lucifer- aise hi buildup kar raha tha behanchod
Ek minute bhi nahi lagi mujhe
Main pata nahi kya kya soch raha tha pata nahi vapas kabhi sex kar paunga bhi ya nahi
Kabhi Lund bhi hila paunga ya nahi
Kaise jinda rahunga en sab ke bina
Pata hai bc kitni tension ho gaye thi mujhe
Sala ye ek baar bhi nahi socha ki main thara devil 😈
Ye atu jhatu ke log aakar mujhe maar sakte hai kya?
Gandu sala
Pata nahi kyu aa jate hai mere samne marne ke liye
Sale teri vajah se mera pyaar mujhse naraj hai
Uski aankhon me aashu aaye teri vajah se
Tujhe main marunga nahi
Teri vo halaat karunga ki hell, heaven aur baki sabki ruh kaap jayegi
Dobara koe lucifer ke samne khade hone ki himmat nahi karega

Edhar lucifer baat kar raha tha udhar aghor apne aapko theek kar raha tha lekin lucifer ka sala uski taraf dhayan hi nahi tha

Lucifer- aaj tujhe yaha ulta latka kar teri gand khujli wale kutte se marva kar
Main pyaar karungi meri janeman se
Hoga humara adhbut milan
Afsos main tujhe en sab se vanchit rakhunga
Dukh to mujhe bahut ho raha hai lekin kuch kar nahi sakta main sivay tujhe marne ke alava

Lucifer- ek din mujhe sab yaad aa jayega aur us din dekhna kaise main dunia ko apne laude par nac.......
Lucifer etna hi bol paya ki jis bhale se lucifer ne aghor ko gada tha vohi ab lucifer ki chest me ghus chuka tha

Mud kar dekha to aghor bilkul sahi salamat uske samne khada tha aur agle hi second usne lucifer ke dono hath uske sareer se alag kar diye

Aghor- kya kaha tha?
Gand dhone layak bhi nahi chhodunga
Bola tha na maine?
Tu mar nahi sakta to mujhe bhi nahi maar sakta
Tu jhakmi ho sakta hai lekin khud se heal nahi ho sakta
Main jhakmi ho sakta hu lekin khud se heal bhi ho sakta
Main soch raha hu kaisa lagega jab hath ke sath sath tere pair bhi tera sath chhod de to?

Aghor ne ek aur war kiya aur lucifer ka aadha pair tak gus gaya uska bhala

Lucifer chhilaya nahi aur na koe khoon nikla lekin uski halaat dekh kar aisa lag raha tha ki agar usse curse nahi mila hota to abhi ke abhi apne jaan chhod deta
Lekin abhi to pata nahi kitne aur kaise kaise dard aur sahne the usse

Aghor- chhikh bhi niklegi lucifer aur khoon bhi
Lekin jaan nahi nikalne dunga

Ye ladae etne der se chal rahi thi ki andhera bahut jada ho chuka tha devil sir par khada hokar nachne ko tayar tha

Lucifer sirf ek pair aur ek bhala jo uske sareer me aar paar ho raha tha uske sahare jamin ke upar hi khada tha abhi tak

Lekin jaldi hi vo jamin par dhul chatne wala tha

Lucifer- still you can't kill me
You can never be the Supreme
Vo sab dekh rahe hai
Sab dekh rahe hai
Mere pass bhale hi koe shaktiya nahi hai
Chahe main abhi kamjor hu
Lekin unke pass sab hai
Vo kisi chhij ki saram nahi karenge
You will gonna die for this
Mark my word brother
You will gonna die for this
Die for this

Aghor- usse dekhne ke liye tu jinda nahi bachega
Aur aghor ne apna bhala uthaya aur lucifer ke sar me ghusa dala.....
Yeh tow sab tod ker rakh dia aghor n Lucifer ka or yeh bhai sahab dialog marne m laga huwe thai ager sir thad se alag ker deta tab shayad kuch ho sakta tha baherhal dekhte h yeh sab hone k baad shakti jagti h Lucifer ki ya nahi
Khaternaak update bhai
 
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Aghor ne bhala lucifer ke sar me gusane ki kosis ki lekin ek dam se bahut tej tej hawae chalne lagi aur lucifer ke sareer ke aas pass laal kaala dua mandrane laga

Jise dekh kar lucifer ka to pata nahi lekin aghor ke fat ke 64 jarur ho gaye kyuki lucifer ka chehra badalne laga aur jo insaani handsome lucifer tha vo ab dheere dheere the devil me badalne laga

Uski gori skin ab laal hone lag gaye jisse bahar se dekhne par aisa lag raha tha jaise har jagah se jalaye gaye ho
Aisa jab kisi rubber ko jalate hai aur fir vo thanda ho kar tight ho jata hai bilkul vaisi lag rahi thi lucifer ki skin

Ab uska face bhi change hone laga aur bas aankhon ko chhod kar baki sab laal pad gaya
Aankhen kaali aur laal ka mixture thi

Aghor ki to bund fat gaye jab vo lucifer ko us avatar me badalte dekhne laga

Dheere dheere lucifer ke hath vapas aane lag gaye aur jab dono hath vapas aa gaye to usne apne sareer me ghusa hua bhala ek second me nikal kar side me fek diya jaisa koe kagach ka tukda ho

Aur jab vo pura transform ho gaya to usne aghor ki taraf dekha jiski halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi

Usne bas suna tha ki lucifer hell lord hai aka the devil lekin kabhi usne uska ye roop nahi dekha tha
Ye roop dekh kar koe jinda bach bhi kaise sakta tha ha agar simran ya saanvi ho to alag baat hai

Aghor ke kadam apne aap piche hatne lage aur lucifer ke kadam uske taraf bhadne lage

Jab do angels me kali shaktiya milti hai to kitni tabhae mach sakti hai vo abhi witness hone wali thi

Aghor- mu...mujhe ma..mmaafff kaarr ddooo luucififferrr
Mujhse galti ho gaye
Mujhe maaf kar do
Vo dar se kapte hue bol raha tha

Lekin usne ye nahi socha ki aaj tak lucifer ne kabhi kisi ko maaf nahi kiya to jo uske samne abhi khada hai vo kaise kar sakta hai?
Devil ne bhi kisi ko maaf kiya hai kya?

Devil(deep voice me) tum ne apni aatma ko gandi kar liya hai
Ek angel ko ek angel hi bana rahna chahiye tha usse kabhi dark lord ke pass nahi jana chahiye tha
Nahi jana chahiye tha
Main aaj tumhe mukti dene ke liye yaha aaya hu aur tumhri mukti ke sath hi heaven me ye pagaam jayega ki bhale hi lucifer mujhe control karne lag gaya hai lekin vo tab tak hi mujhe control kar sakta hai jab tak koe apni aatma ko maila na kar de

Aaj aur abhi se main Satan sare jagat ke nivasiyo ko warn karta hu ki dark lord se hath na milaya jaye
Agar kisi ne bhi dark lord se hath milaya to uske sareer ko koe agni dene wala bhi nahi milega
Kyuki vo Satan ke hatho bhasam ho jayega
Usse kabhi mukti nahi milegi
Kabhi mukti nahi milegi

Etna sab bolte bolte lucifer bilkul aghor ke pass pahuch gaya aur apne ek hath se usse jamin se Hava me utha liya
Ab vo lucifer ke face ke samne latak raha tha aur uska chehra dheere dheere jalna suru ho gaya tha

Aur uske jalne se jo uski chhikhen nikalna suru hue usne sare demons ki tatti nikal diya kyuki unke samne aaj fir vohi khada tha jisne barso pehle unki race ko almost khatam kar diya tha

Lekin jaise ki vo pehle kuch nahi kar paye the tamasha dekhne ke alava vaise hi aaj bhi kuch nahi kar sakte tamasha dekhne ke alava

Sab aankhen faade sirf aur sirf lucifer ko dekh rahe the
Chache vo hell ho chahe heaven ho ya fir demons world
Sab apne samne ek aisa monster khada dekh rahe the jiska koe tod nahi hai
Jisko chedne ka matlab sirf aur sirf maut hai aur kuch nahi

Dheere dheere aghor ka pura sareer vahi rakh ho gaya aur ab vaha sirf sanaata chha gaya

Lucifer bilkul uski raakh ke pass bath gaya aur mediate karne laga
Usse laga tha mediate karne se vo apne real face me aa jayega lekin vo galat tha

Raat se subah ho gaye lekin lucifer vaisa ka vaisa raha
Aur jaise jaise doop hone lagi uska sareer tapne laga aur vo dard se pagal hone laga

Usse dard to aghor se maar kha kar bhi nahi ho raha tha jitna usse ab doop ho raha tha

Vo yaha vaha bhagte hue chhupne ki jagah doond raha tha lekin afsos en kheto me usse kuch bhi nahi mil raha tha

Bahut door tak bhagne par usse ek chhota sa room bana dikha jo sayad kheto me tubewell ke pass kisan banate the vaisa tha

Vo vahi jakar chhup gaya

Gate ko band karke vo us chhote se kamre me aisi jagah dundne laga jaha andhera ho lekin us kamre me do bahut badi badi window thi sala 4*4 ke room me ek gate aur do windows pata nahi banaye wale ne kya fook kar banaye thi

Kamre me puri tarah se roshini thi lekin bahar se thoda theek tha

Usse dard abhi bhi ho raha tha bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi lekin bahar ke mukable ye vo sahan kar sakta tha

Vahi ek kone me vo dara sahma bath gaya aur kapne laga****

Eda- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Lucifer piche mud kar eda ki taraf dekh kar ye to main tumse bhi puch sakta hu?

Eda- main to tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- ohh really?
Aaj se pehle aisa kyu nahi hua?

Eda- kya maine yaha aakar galti kar di?
Lucifer- tumne late hokar galti kar di

Eda- tum mujhse door bhagte the main nahi
Lucifer- main tumse esliye door bhagta tha kyuki tum sab mera majak udate the

Eda- tumhra mazak koe kyu udayega?
Lucifer- Eda sach tumhe pata hai
Aaj tum pehli baar mere samne aae ho akele
Jarur kuch baat hai jiske vajah se tum aae ho

Eda- main sirf tumhe dekhne aaye hu
Lucifer- dekh liya?
Jinda hu main

Eda- kya jinda ho tum?
Lucifer- tumhre liye?
Kabhi tha nahi nahi sayad tumhre liye jinda to main

Eda- sayad tumne kabhi mere bare me janene ki kosis hi nahi ki
Lucifer- sayad tumne kabhi apne bare me batana jaruri nahi samjha

Eda- tum mujhe humesha galat samjhte ho lucifer
Lucifer- main to hu hi galat
Sab ko galat main hi to samjhta hu
Sala sari galti hi meri hai

Eda- kya ek naye suruvaat nahi kar sakte?
Lucifer- kisi chhij se tum pareshan ho to mujhe bata do main usse theek kar dunga lekin mere sath khel mat khelo

Eda- main tumhre sath koe khel nahi khel rahi hu
Main bas tumhe dekhne aaye thi tum hi baat badha rahe ho
Lucifer- main baat khatam kar deta hu
Dekh liya tumne to ab chali jao

Eda- main humesha tumhre sath hu lucifer
Lucifer- ek ladki jisse humesha ye lagta hai ki agar lucifer nahi hota to vo dunia ki sabse shaktisali pari hoti vo bol rahi hai Main humesha lucifer ke sath hu?
Eda tumne apni puri jindagi mujhse jalan me gava di aur jo bachi hai mujhe dar hai vo bhi aise hi na nikal jaye

Eda- kya padhne ka shok sirf tumhe hai?
Kya hum nahi padh sakte?
Aur jisne bhi padha hai vo sab tumse darte hai lucifer
Lucifer- to tum bhi mujhse darti ho?
Maine kya galat kiya hai tumhre sath?

Eda- galat karne se hi sab ho jata to kya hi baat thi?
Lucifer- tumhri es line ka koe matlab nahi nikal raha

Eda- main tumse kuch mangane aae thi
Lucifer- maine to pehle hi bola tha
Maan le jo maangna hai aur chali ja

Eda- mujhe Supreme se ek permission chahiue
Lucifer- bahut pyaar karte hai vo tumse
Unse maang lo vo de denge

Eda- vo nahi denge
Lucifer- to fir main kuch nahi kar sakta

Eda- main aaj pehli baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu
Tum mujhe vo bhi nahi doge?
Lucifer- nahi main nahi dunga
Tum meri kya lagti ho jo main tumhe kuch du?

Eda- mujhe sab dekhna hai lucifer
Mujhe na marna hai aur na door jana hai
Mujhe sab apni aankhon se dekhna hai
Lucifer- Eda ko kon maar sakta hai?
Main?
Ha main maar sakta hu lekin main vada karta hu main tumhe nahi marunga

Eda- ye vada nahi chahiye mujhe
Vada karo main kabhi tumhri vajah se nahi marungi
Lucifer- mere pass tumhe ye dene ki shakti nahi hai

Eda- lucifer ka deal hi lucifer ke liye sab kuch hai
Lucifer- main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- kyu nahi de sakte?
Lucifer- kyuki main hazaro lakho chhijo ka karan banuga
Tumne to padha hi hai mere bare
Aur ha maine nahi padha
To main tumhe ye nahi de sakta

Eda- ye bhi adhura rah jayega
Lucifer- khubsurat hoga agar adhura raha to

Eda- mujhe pura karna hai
Lucifer- raaj intezaar kar raha hai
Ja sakti ho tum yaha se

Eda- mujhe jo chahiye vo main le kar rahungi lucifer
Lucifer- Supreme se koe favor kyu nahi jeet leti tum?
Tum to vaise bhi favorite ho tumhri baat nahi talenge vo

Eda- mujhe tumse chahiye
Ek din aisa aayega lucifer jab tumhre apne tumhre khilaf khade honge
Lucifer- har roj vohi din hai mere liye

Eda- aur tumhe unhe marna padega
Lucifer- for better good

Eda- tumhe us din apni full potential use karni padegi
Etni ki jinhe dekh kar khud Supreme ghabra jaye
Lucifer- why you're telling me all this

Eda- kyuki main chahe tumse jealous hu, chahe main aur jada power chahti hu lekin main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karungi lekin tumhre apne?
Tumhre apne tumhre sath kuch bhi karenge Supreme banane ke liye
Lucifer- what you want to do?
Slay all my brothers and sisters?
Well mujhe nahi banana Supreme
Jisko jo karna hai kare main hathiyaar tabhi uthaunga jab mere pyaar ki baat aayegi uske alava to chahe samsaan bana de es jagah ko koe mujhe fark nahi padta

Eda- aghor?
Kya vo samsan nahi bana dega?
Lucifer- bhai hai mera
Aaj nahi to kal samjh hi jayega

Eda- lagta nahi hai vo samjh jayega
Tumhe mujhse etni nafrat hai lekin uske tum defend kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- main defend nahi kar raha hu
Bacha hai vo
Waqt sab sikha dega

Eda- vo tumhe marna chahta hai
Lucifer- maar nahi payega
Main amar hu
Mujhe koe nahi maar sakta

Eda- soul trading suna hai tumne?
Lucifer- us se bhi kuch nahi hoga
Mere pass har chhij ka tod hai

Eda- main tumhre sath nahi thi lekin maine kabhi tumhra bura bhi nahi chaha
Vo kabhi tumhre sath nahi the aur humesha tumhra bura chahta hai fir bhi...
Lucifer- tum mujhe mere bhaiyo ke bare me bhadkane aae ho?
Agar aghor ne limit cross ki to uska anjaam koe alag nahi hoga

Eda- main sirf tumhe aagha kar rahi hu
Lucifer- uski koe jarurat nahi hai
Main careless hi theek hu

Eda- aghor ko lagta hai ki sab tumhe jada attention dete hai aur usse koe pyaar nahi karta
Esliye vo kuch bhi kar sakta hai
Lucifer- hume same jagah se sikhsha li
Vo royal house me rahta hai aur main yaha kaid me
Uske pass mata hai jinhone sabse jada waqt sayad aghor ke sath bitaya hai
Royal Court me ek bahut badi position hold karta hai jaha main sirf ek killing machine hu
Aur vo bol raha hai mujhe jada attention mili?
Log mujhe bulate hai kyuki unhe kisi chhij se dar lagta hai
Esliye nahi ki vo log mujhe pyaar dete hai

Eda- maine jo bolna tha vo main bol chuki
Baki tumhri marji
Lucifer- guruji doond rahe honge mujhe
Kaash tum aaj mujhe dekhne hi aaye hoti eda to mujhe acha lagta
Good bye

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi Eda gusse me sirf lucifer ko dekhti rah jati hai...
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update
Aghor ka kaam tamam huwa lekin yeh Lucifer wapas apne insani roop kyon nahi aa paa raha h dekhte h yeh kia chakker ho gaya ab Lucifer ke saath
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
 
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Bhai vo underworld se nahi hell se tha
Bhai as par Britannica.com

the term hell refers to the underworld, a deep pit or distant land of shadows where the dead are gathered. From the underworld come dreams, ghosts, and demons, and in its most terrible precincts sinners pay—some say eternally—the penalty for their crimes.
 
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** ghane janglo me aadhi raat ke waqt bahut sare rakshasho ke bich me lucifer khada hua tha
Uski aankhen aur aankhon ke aas pass ka pura area kala ho rakha tha aur aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj ye raat apne sath kayamat laye hai kyuki jaise hi ek rakshash lucifer ki taraf bhada lucifer ne ek behad khatarnaak punch mara uske pet me aur dusre hath se uske sareer ko pakde rakha taki vo door jake na geere aur agle hi pal uske sari aatandiya(intestine) lucifer uske pet se bahar nikaal laya
Usse door fekte hue apni talvaar nikali aur buri tarah unko kaatne lag gaya
Uski raftaar aisi ho rakhi thi ki aam insaan to usse dekh hi na paye aur kuch hi minutes me vaha sirf lashe bach gaye aur unke upar batha hua tha lucifer***

Next day vo utha aur kuch soch ke ek jagah khada ho gaya aur kisi chhij ka intezaar karne laga
Ye ek t point tha aur agar kisi ko left mudna ho to usse dikhega nahi ki samne koe hai ya nahi

Vahi khada khada lucifer intezaar karne laga kisi ka aur usse intezaar bhi jada der karna nahi pada

Kyuki vahi kali car usse door se aate dikhae di aur lucifer vahi side me khada hogya aur jaise hi usne turn liya ek dum se uske samne aagaya

Car bahut speed me thi esliye lucifer udta hu door jake geera aur usme bathe ladkiyo ko din me taare dikhne lage

Vo dono jaldi se car ke bahar aaye aur lucifer ki taraf bhage jo uthne ki kosis kar raha tha
Morning ka time tha esliye usse thoda pain ho raha tha abhi lekin fir bhi vo uth khada hua aur apne kapde theek karne laga

Bahut sundar ladki- tumhe dikhae nahi deta kya?
Ya fir marne ka shauk chada hai aur agar chada hai to kahi aur jake kyu nahi marte?
Meri hi ghadi mili thi kya marne ke liye?
Usse kaam sunder ladki- tum theek ho?
Kahi chot to nahi aaye?

Bahut sundar ladki- aise log jaan bhuj ke humari gadiyo ke niche aate hai taki paise mil sake
Usse Kam sunder ladki- hospital leke chale kya tumhe?

Bahut sundar ladki- apne purse se paise nikalte hue
Ye lo aur niklo yaha se
Lucifer ki taraf ek notes ki gaadi karte hue boli

Lucifer jo abhi tak kuch nahi bola tha uski taraf dekha, hatho se paise liye aur
Lucifer- kal yahi par milenge aur paise pure laana aur ye bol Kar vaha se chala gaya

Ye dono ladkiya bas usse dekhti rah gaye ki sala abhi hua kya?

"Ashmita aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha tumhe" kam sunder wali boli
Ashmita- didi aise logo ke sath aisa hi karna chahiye
Aur dekha nahi aapne kaise paise leke chala gaya
Tara- tumne bola hi aise usse
Aur dekha nahi chala bhi nahi ja raha tha vo to acha hua usne case nahi Kiya

Ashmita- kar deta to bhi kya ho jata
Chalo college vaise bhi late kara diya es pagal ne
Aur fir dono college ke liye nikal gaye

Lucifer vahi park me jake bath gaya lekin aaj aisi jagah ki kisi ko vo dikhae na de aur aise hi waqt gujar gaya aur aagaya agli morning

Lucifer aaj fir usse jagah khada hua tha lekin aaj ashmita ne usse dekh liya aur apna muh banate hue uske side se nikal gaye

Vo bhi muskurata hua college ki taraf chal diya aur parking me hi ashmita ko rok liya

Ashmita gusse me- what you want?
Lucifer- mere paise

Ashmita- what?
Konse paise?
Lucifer- main Kab se vaha khada hua tha ki koe ameer ghadi mujhe thokegi aur main mar jaunga fir jo paise milege usse aish karunga

Ashmita- tum pagal ho?
Lucifer- mujhe mere paise de do aur main chala jaunga

Ashmita- main kyu du paise?
Aaj thodi thoka hai maine?
Lucifer- ye tumhri galti hai
Main to vahi khada tha
Tumne nahi thoka to esme main kya karunga
Mujhe mere paise de do main bahut gareeb hu mere family bhuki mar jayegi

Ashmita- dekho mujhe irritate mat karo nahi to dad se bol kar haddi pasli ek kara dungi
Lucifer- vo bhi try kar lena
Lekin abhi meri mahnat ki kamae de do
Nahi to pure college ke samne izzat kharab kar dunga

Ashmita ko ab gussa aane laga tha aur vo irritate bhi ho gaye thi lekin esse pehle ki vo kuch karti

Tara- ye lo tumhre paise aur jao yaha se aur aage se humare ghadi ke aage mat aana
Ashmita- didi...
Tara ne usse bich me hi rok diya aur uska hath pakad ke ander le jane lagi

Lucifer paise leke muda to uske just piche madhuri ma'am khadi thi

Ma'am- kya ho raha tha yaha?
Lucifer- ma'am ye ameer log kaam kara lete hai fir paiso ke time par aanakani karte hai

Ma'am- aisa kya kaam karaya enhone tumse?
Lucifer- vo nahi bata sakta
Aap mujhe phone use karna sikha sakte ho?

Ma'am- tumhe nahi aata?
Lucifer- tabhi to puch raha hu

Ma'am- mujhe kya milega?
Lucifer- guru daksina

Ma'am- thank you lekin mujhe nahi chahiye
Aur college me kisi student ko pareshan nahi karoge
Lucifer- main kis ko pareshan kar raha hu?

Ma'am- vo koe aam ladkiya nahi hai esliye bol rahi hu door raho unse
Aurr fir Ma'am bina lucifer ka jawab sune vaha se chali gaye

Uske baad vo bhi vaha se chala gaya
Paise bhi bahut mil gaye the ab to esliye shopping karne ki sochi aur pahuch gaya ek mall me

Usse yaha ka vaise koe idea to nahi tha aur na hi brands vagra ke bare me usse pata tha
Bas aise hi edhar udhar ghumta raha fir kuch kale kapde liye aur ek iPhone leke vapas college chala gaya

Late to ho hi gaya tha esliye college off chuka tha aur sab vaha se ja chuke the

Lucifer ne ek baar ashmita ke ghar ke bahar check Kiya sab okay tha fir vahi chhup ke bath gaya aur phone chalana sikhne laga
Vaise usse jada waqt nahi laga expert banane me
Abhi bhi ek problem thi aur vo thi sim ki
Sim kaise le?
Koe I'd to thi nahi uske pass

Abhi vo phone me ghusa hi hua tha ki usse door kahi kuch aadmi khade dikhe aur unko dekh ke ye to pata chal raha tha ki ache aadmi to ye bilkul nahi lag rahe

Lucifer ne phone vapas pant me dala aur unki harkato par najar rakhne laga

Vo sab baar baar ashmita ke ghar ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir apne charo taraf
Unko dekh ke ye to pata chal raha tha ki unki gand fati hue thi lekin sayad kisi ne gand me sariya kiya hoga esliye yaha tak aagaye honge

Thodi der baad vo vaha se chale gaye aur lucifer vahi batha rah gaya

Fir kuch soch ke crossed leg bath gaya aur aankhen band karke dhayan lagane laga aur man me bolne laga ashmita raichand ashimta raichand ashmita raichand
Aur uski aankhon ke samne kuch dhundla dhundla dikhne laga lekin usse kuch bhi saaf nahi dikh raha tha ya fir yu bole ki kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha thi bas bahut tej tej aawaz sunae de rahi thi aur aisi aawaz lucifer bahut ache se pahchanta tha
Uska sareer pasino se bhig chuka tha aur hath kapne lag rahe the ausa lag raha tha ki agar vo kuch der aur es mantra ke bahar nahi aaya to uska sareer uska sath chhod dega aur esliye hi majburi me uski aankhen khul gaye ya kisi ne khol di aur lucifer buri tarah hafne laga

Uska pura sareer pasine me nahaya hua tha aur vo sochne par majbur hogya ki aisa kya hai es ladki me ki vo eske bare me jaan nahi paya
Kuch baatein to hai jo guruji ne usse bataye nahi thi lekin ab usse janni thi

Guruji to batayenge nahi esliye usse aisi jagah se pata karna tha jaha se usse information bhi mil jaye aur koe jada sawal jawab bhi na kare
Lekin aisi jagah milegi kaha ye bahut bada sawal tha jiska jawab lucifer ke pass abhi ke waqt to nahi tha...
Kahan ek taraf king of hell aur kahan doosri taraf logo ki gaadi se takkar kha kar paise kamane waala. Sahi contrasting life mili hai Lucifer ko. Ye Asmita ka bhi koi bada raaj lagta hai. Sahi suspense ban raha hai.
 
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