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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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UPDATE-152
Lucifer, anika aur naag teeno shekhar ke samne khade the aur shekhar ki faat ke laal ho rahi thi sirf unhe dekh kar

Naag- bhai kya karna hai ab eska?
Lucifer- pucho bhai madam se kya socha hai usne

Anika- eske hath pair kaat dete hai
Shekhar- main tumhre pair padta hu mujhe jane do
Mere se galti ho gaye mujhe maaf kar do

Anika- maafi nahi milti yaha
Aise koe chhij ka humare pass koe option nahi hai
Shekhar- mujhe tadpa kar kya milega tum logo ko?

Anika- tu soch bhi nahi sakta kitni santusthi milegi hume
Lucifer- es se kya baat karni?
Karna kya hai vo bata na

Anika- bata to diya
Hath pair kaat dete hai
Lucifer- ek hath ek pair kaat do fir

Anika- hmm ye sahi rahega
Right hand aur left leg
Lucifer- naag bete start ho ja

Anika- main hi katungi
Mujhe chhura lake do
Lucifer- chhure se kaat degi?

Anika- kaat dungi
Lucifer- naag bandh esko aur lake de madam ko ek badiya sa chhura

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mera bahut bada network hai vo kaise na kaise karke mujhe dund hi lenge aur uske baad acha nahi hoga
Lucifer- tere network ko kabar me dafna kar aaya hu main
Uski tension mat le tu
Naag bandh na esse waqt nahi hai etna mere pass

Anika- eska aujaar bhi kaat dete hai
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar main to tamasha dekhne batha hu

Naag ne shekhar ko pakda aur ek poll par band diya

Lucifer- ek chaku lake de esko
Naag- la raha hu bhai
Aur naag andar chala gaya

Lucifer- kaat degi tu?
Behosh to nahi hogi na?
Anika- tumne abhi jana hi kaha hai mujhe?

Lucifer- mokka to de janane ka
Anika- samjhdaar hoga to aaj sab samjh me aa jayega

Lucifer- samjhdar to main nahi hu bilkul bhi
Anika- dikh raha hai vo to
Batane ki jarurat thodi hai ye?

Lucifer- ye ladki bahut roast karti hai sala
Naag- es se kaam chal jayega?
Naag ek bahut bada chaku leke aaya jisse dekh kar lucifer khud shocked ho gaya ki bc etna bada chaku ka ye karta kya hai yaha?

Lucifer- pehle mujhe ye bata tu eska karta kya hai yaha?
Sale tu chiken ke naam par oot to nahi khila raha hai na?
Naag- rakha hua tha bhai pehle ka

Lucifer- rakha hua tha?
Kyu rakha hua tha?
Naag- are bhai kaam to nikal hi jata hai
Rakha rahne do

Lucifer- ye baat bhi hai
De de esse
Naag- pakad legi ye?

Anika- pakad bhi lungi aur tujhe kaat bhi dungi es se
Tension mat le tu bilkul bhi
Lucifer- tu kaam start kar yaar
Mera yaha entertainment nahi ho raha aur tu hai ki start hi nahi kar rahi

Anika ne ek ganda sa look lucifer ko diya aur us se bhi ganda naag ko aur fir chaku leke shekhar ki taraf badhne lagi

Uski to unki baaton se hi fat gaye thi aur jo abhi hone wala tha vo soch kar hi vo nark jaisa feel karne laga tha

Anika dheere dheere uski taraf badh rahi thi aur piche naag aur lucifer tange faila kar bath gaye aur aane wale scene ko enjoy karne lage

Naag- bhai bet lagaoge?
Lucifer- vo pura nahi kaat payegi bet hai meri

Naag- bhai poora?
Vo bich me hi behosh ho jayegi dekh lena
Lucifer- uske pass power hai

Naag- ek idea hai mere pass
Lucifer- tere pass bhi idea hone lage kya?

Naag- vo aag bana sakti hai na?
Kyu na pehle uske hath pair kate aur fir aag se unhe jod de?
Dobara enjoy karne ko mil jayega
Lucifer- idea to tera ach hai lekin abhi to tune bet lagaye ki vo behosh ho jayegi?

Naag- jitna bhi kaate utne ko hi vapas judva dete hai
Ek baar me hi sab kaat diya to fir kya maja?
Lucifer- teri baaton me sense hone lag gaya naag

Naag- bolo fir aap hi
Main nahi bolne wala kuch esse
Lucifer- kyu?
Gand faat rahi hai teri?

Naag- kuch bhi maan lo
Lucifer- anika???

Anika- kya hai?
Lucifer- pehle eska aujaar kaat de
Hath pair pure mat kaatna
Aadhe kaat kar apne bacho wale jadoo se jod dena fir jab ye vapas theek ho jayega tab vapas kaat denge

Anika ne ek second ka pause liya fir usse bhi lucifer ki baat sahi lagi aur "theek hai" boli****

Mazikeen- tumhra kaam souls ko pakadna hai unhe tadpana nahi vo humara kaam hai
Roshini- to fir aaj se sabke kaam change

Mazikeen- lucifer order deta hai tum nahi
Roshini- abhi to main de rahi hu

Mazikeen- tumhe pata hai kitna bada ego hai tumhra?
Roshini- ha pata hai

Mazikeen- lekin tumhe ye nahi pata ki lucifer kya chhij hai esliye apne ego ko thoda sambhal lo aur jo kaam mila hai usse karo
Roshini- etna darte kyu ho tum log lucifer se?

Mazikeen- jis din usse jaan logi to pata chal jayega
Roshini- jaan rakha hai maine
Tum logo ne usko pahad par chadha rakha hai bas

Mazikeen- insaan ko apni awkaat nahi bhulni chahiye baad me dikkat ho jati hai
Roshini- mujhe yaad hai meri aukaat
Aur lucifer jaise se to achi hi hai

Mazikeen- tum jo bolti ho vo tumhre dimag me jata hai kya?
Vo hell lord hai
Samjh rahi ho tum?
Hell lord hai vo
He is the most powerful being in the whole universe
Roshini- sayad kisi sahi insaan se takkar nahi hue uski abhi tak

Mazikeen- tumhe samjh me aayega ek din jarur samjh me aaega
Roshini- dekhenge us din

Mazikeen- tab tak meri aatmao se door raho
Ye meri hai
Enhe saja dene ka hak mera hai
Agar aaj ke baad maine tumhe enhe kisi bhi parkaar se pareshan karte dekha to lucifer se pehle mazikeen ko jaan jaogi tum
Roshini- hahaha kids these days
Theek hai karo jo karna hai
Lekin jinko main pakad kar laungi unke sath main raste me kuch bhi kar sakti hu kyuki bahar wala area mera hai

Mazikeen- mujhe matlab nahi us se
Hell ki souls meri hai
Bahar tum kya karti ho vo tum jano
Roshini- pata nahi yaha sab etna gusse me kyu rahte hai
Samjh gaye main
Ab ja sakti hu kya?

Mazikeen bina kuch bole vaha se chali gaye vahi roshini wild smile ke sath vahi bath gaye
Jaise vo yaha enko bas poke karne hi aaye ho aur kuch kaam hi na ho uske pass****

Maa- kis chhij ka dar hai sabse jada aapko?
Kya koe aisa khatra jiski mujhe jankari honi chahiye?
Guruji- mata khatra to nahi hai lekin ek chhij ka bahut dar hai mujhe

Maa- aur vo kya hai?
Guruji- aapko to pata hi hai lucifer ki jindagi me bahut sari premika aayengi

Maa- ha pata hai
Guruji- mujhe essi baat ka dar hai

Maa- vo sab usse thode waqt ke liye shant karne hi aayengi guruji
Bina premika ke lucifer aatank macha sakta hai
Guruji- main janta hu maate
Maine hi usse sikhaya hai

Maa- to fir kis chhij ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Guruji- un dono ki

Maa- un dono ki kya?
Guruji- mata abhi to sab alag alag waqt par aa rahi hai esliye koe pareshani ki baat nahi hai lekin ek waqt aisa bhi aayega jab sab ek jagah ek sath hongi

Maa- ha mujhe maloom hai
Guruji- us waqt vo dono bhi vapas me milengi

Maa- ha milegi
Guruji- mata mujhe es baat ka hi dar hai ki jab vo dono apas me milegi to kuch anarth na ho jaye
Vo dono hi jiddi hai, kathor hai aur lucifer ko apni jaan se jada pyaar karti hai

Maa- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai vo dono mil kar lucifer ke liye ek shield ban kar kaam kare?
Guruji- bahut muskil hai maate
Vo dono apas me sath kaam kare eske aasar bahut kam lag rahe hai

Maa- to aap kya kahna chahte ho?
Guruji- baki sab ke pass dil hai maate
Lekin un dono ke pass nahi
Unke pass sirf aur sirf ek chhij hai aur vo hai lucifer

Maa- ye to achi baat hai na?
Esme darne wali kya baat hai?
Guruji- aap meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho
Jab dono samne aayengi aur lucifer par hak jamana suru karegi tab kya hoga?
Mujhe pata hai baki sab ko koe problem nahi hogi lekin un dono ko?
Vo dono apas me na ladne lag jaye

Maa- lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- lucifer ek ko hi sambhal sakta hai un dono me se dusri ko nahi

Maa- fir waqt sambhal lega
Waqt se bada kya hai
Guruji- aur jab unko unke bare me pata chalna suru hoga tab kya?

Maa- aadhi sambhal jayegi aadhi ko lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- aur agar lucifer ko lucifer hone ke pata chalne se pehle unme se kisi ko khud ki sachae pata chal gaye to?

Maa- etne aage ki kyu soch rahe ho?
Guruji- kyuki ab mujhe aur khoon nahi bahana
Main ye sab khatam karna chahta hu

Maa- abhi to pariksha aaye bhi nahi aur aap bhagne ki tayari karne lage?
Guruji- maine bahut pariksha de li maate
Ab aur sahan nahi hota
Mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Maa- jab tak lucifer hai aapko bhi rahna padega guruji
Ek aap hi to ho jo usse sambhal sakte ho
Guruji- hum dono hi ladne lag jate hai maate
Kayamat se pehle to ye yudh khatam hoga nahi fir jab khatam hoga tab hum dono ke sath sath dunia bhi khatam ho jayegi

Maa- aur esme kitna khoon bahega?
Guruji- ye to baad ki baat hai
Agar aisa ho jaye to kitna masoom khoon bachega vo bhi to sochiye

Maa- abhi aa nahi ja sakte
Ek baar padegi aapki jarurat lucifer ko aur aapko vaha hona padega us din
Guruji- dunia ke do laachar ek dusre ke sath khade honge fir to us din....
Awesome update bhai.. 💥💥
 

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UPDATE-152
Lucifer, anika aur naag teeno shekhar ke samne khade the aur shekhar ki faat ke laal ho rahi thi sirf unhe dekh kar

Naag- bhai kya karna hai ab eska?
Lucifer- pucho bhai madam se kya socha hai usne

Anika- eske hath pair kaat dete hai
Shekhar- main tumhre pair padta hu mujhe jane do
Mere se galti ho gaye mujhe maaf kar do

Anika- maafi nahi milti yaha
Aise koe chhij ka humare pass koe option nahi hai
Shekhar- mujhe tadpa kar kya milega tum logo ko?

Anika- tu soch bhi nahi sakta kitni santusthi milegi hume
Lucifer- es se kya baat karni?
Karna kya hai vo bata na

Anika- bata to diya
Hath pair kaat dete hai
Lucifer- ek hath ek pair kaat do fir

Anika- hmm ye sahi rahega
Right hand aur left leg
Lucifer- naag bete start ho ja

Anika- main hi katungi
Mujhe chhura lake do
Lucifer- chhure se kaat degi?

Anika- kaat dungi
Lucifer- naag bandh esko aur lake de madam ko ek badiya sa chhura

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mera bahut bada network hai vo kaise na kaise karke mujhe dund hi lenge aur uske baad acha nahi hoga
Lucifer- tere network ko kabar me dafna kar aaya hu main
Uski tension mat le tu
Naag bandh na esse waqt nahi hai etna mere pass

Anika- eska aujaar bhi kaat dete hai
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar main to tamasha dekhne batha hu

Naag ne shekhar ko pakda aur ek poll par band diya

Lucifer- ek chaku lake de esko
Naag- la raha hu bhai
Aur naag andar chala gaya

Lucifer- kaat degi tu?
Behosh to nahi hogi na?
Anika- tumne abhi jana hi kaha hai mujhe?

Lucifer- mokka to de janane ka
Anika- samjhdaar hoga to aaj sab samjh me aa jayega

Lucifer- samjhdar to main nahi hu bilkul bhi
Anika- dikh raha hai vo to
Batane ki jarurat thodi hai ye?

Lucifer- ye ladki bahut roast karti hai sala
Naag- es se kaam chal jayega?
Naag ek bahut bada chaku leke aaya jisse dekh kar lucifer khud shocked ho gaya ki bc etna bada chaku ka ye karta kya hai yaha?

Lucifer- pehle mujhe ye bata tu eska karta kya hai yaha?
Sale tu chiken ke naam par oot to nahi khila raha hai na?
Naag- rakha hua tha bhai pehle ka

Lucifer- rakha hua tha?
Kyu rakha hua tha?
Naag- are bhai kaam to nikal hi jata hai
Rakha rahne do

Lucifer- ye baat bhi hai
De de esse
Naag- pakad legi ye?

Anika- pakad bhi lungi aur tujhe kaat bhi dungi es se
Tension mat le tu bilkul bhi
Lucifer- tu kaam start kar yaar
Mera yaha entertainment nahi ho raha aur tu hai ki start hi nahi kar rahi

Anika ne ek ganda sa look lucifer ko diya aur us se bhi ganda naag ko aur fir chaku leke shekhar ki taraf badhne lagi

Uski to unki baaton se hi fat gaye thi aur jo abhi hone wala tha vo soch kar hi vo nark jaisa feel karne laga tha

Anika dheere dheere uski taraf badh rahi thi aur piche naag aur lucifer tange faila kar bath gaye aur aane wale scene ko enjoy karne lage

Naag- bhai bet lagaoge?
Lucifer- vo pura nahi kaat payegi bet hai meri

Naag- bhai poora?
Vo bich me hi behosh ho jayegi dekh lena
Lucifer- uske pass power hai

Naag- ek idea hai mere pass
Lucifer- tere pass bhi idea hone lage kya?

Naag- vo aag bana sakti hai na?
Kyu na pehle uske hath pair kate aur fir aag se unhe jod de?
Dobara enjoy karne ko mil jayega
Lucifer- idea to tera ach hai lekin abhi to tune bet lagaye ki vo behosh ho jayegi?

Naag- jitna bhi kaate utne ko hi vapas judva dete hai
Ek baar me hi sab kaat diya to fir kya maja?
Lucifer- teri baaton me sense hone lag gaya naag

Naag- bolo fir aap hi
Main nahi bolne wala kuch esse
Lucifer- kyu?
Gand faat rahi hai teri?

Naag- kuch bhi maan lo
Lucifer- anika???

Anika- kya hai?
Lucifer- pehle eska aujaar kaat de
Hath pair pure mat kaatna
Aadhe kaat kar apne bacho wale jadoo se jod dena fir jab ye vapas theek ho jayega tab vapas kaat denge

Anika ne ek second ka pause liya fir usse bhi lucifer ki baat sahi lagi aur "theek hai" boli****

Mazikeen- tumhra kaam souls ko pakadna hai unhe tadpana nahi vo humara kaam hai
Roshini- to fir aaj se sabke kaam change

Mazikeen- lucifer order deta hai tum nahi
Roshini- abhi to main de rahi hu

Mazikeen- tumhe pata hai kitna bada ego hai tumhra?
Roshini- ha pata hai

Mazikeen- lekin tumhe ye nahi pata ki lucifer kya chhij hai esliye apne ego ko thoda sambhal lo aur jo kaam mila hai usse karo
Roshini- etna darte kyu ho tum log lucifer se?

Mazikeen- jis din usse jaan logi to pata chal jayega
Roshini- jaan rakha hai maine
Tum logo ne usko pahad par chadha rakha hai bas

Mazikeen- insaan ko apni awkaat nahi bhulni chahiye baad me dikkat ho jati hai
Roshini- mujhe yaad hai meri aukaat
Aur lucifer jaise se to achi hi hai

Mazikeen- tum jo bolti ho vo tumhre dimag me jata hai kya?
Vo hell lord hai
Samjh rahi ho tum?
Hell lord hai vo
He is the most powerful being in the whole universe
Roshini- sayad kisi sahi insaan se takkar nahi hue uski abhi tak

Mazikeen- tumhe samjh me aayega ek din jarur samjh me aaega
Roshini- dekhenge us din

Mazikeen- tab tak meri aatmao se door raho
Ye meri hai
Enhe saja dene ka hak mera hai
Agar aaj ke baad maine tumhe enhe kisi bhi parkaar se pareshan karte dekha to lucifer se pehle mazikeen ko jaan jaogi tum
Roshini- hahaha kids these days
Theek hai karo jo karna hai
Lekin jinko main pakad kar laungi unke sath main raste me kuch bhi kar sakti hu kyuki bahar wala area mera hai

Mazikeen- mujhe matlab nahi us se
Hell ki souls meri hai
Bahar tum kya karti ho vo tum jano
Roshini- pata nahi yaha sab etna gusse me kyu rahte hai
Samjh gaye main
Ab ja sakti hu kya?

Mazikeen bina kuch bole vaha se chali gaye vahi roshini wild smile ke sath vahi bath gaye
Jaise vo yaha enko bas poke karne hi aaye ho aur kuch kaam hi na ho uske pass****

Maa- kis chhij ka dar hai sabse jada aapko?
Kya koe aisa khatra jiski mujhe jankari honi chahiye?
Guruji- mata khatra to nahi hai lekin ek chhij ka bahut dar hai mujhe

Maa- aur vo kya hai?
Guruji- aapko to pata hi hai lucifer ki jindagi me bahut sari premika aayengi

Maa- ha pata hai
Guruji- mujhe essi baat ka dar hai

Maa- vo sab usse thode waqt ke liye shant karne hi aayengi guruji
Bina premika ke lucifer aatank macha sakta hai
Guruji- main janta hu maate
Maine hi usse sikhaya hai

Maa- to fir kis chhij ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Guruji- un dono ki

Maa- un dono ki kya?
Guruji- mata abhi to sab alag alag waqt par aa rahi hai esliye koe pareshani ki baat nahi hai lekin ek waqt aisa bhi aayega jab sab ek jagah ek sath hongi

Maa- ha mujhe maloom hai
Guruji- us waqt vo dono bhi vapas me milengi

Maa- ha milegi
Guruji- mata mujhe es baat ka hi dar hai ki jab vo dono apas me milegi to kuch anarth na ho jaye
Vo dono hi jiddi hai, kathor hai aur lucifer ko apni jaan se jada pyaar karti hai

Maa- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai vo dono mil kar lucifer ke liye ek shield ban kar kaam kare?
Guruji- bahut muskil hai maate
Vo dono apas me sath kaam kare eske aasar bahut kam lag rahe hai

Maa- to aap kya kahna chahte ho?
Guruji- baki sab ke pass dil hai maate
Lekin un dono ke pass nahi
Unke pass sirf aur sirf ek chhij hai aur vo hai lucifer

Maa- ye to achi baat hai na?
Esme darne wali kya baat hai?
Guruji- aap meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho
Jab dono samne aayengi aur lucifer par hak jamana suru karegi tab kya hoga?
Mujhe pata hai baki sab ko koe problem nahi hogi lekin un dono ko?
Vo dono apas me na ladne lag jaye

Maa- lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- lucifer ek ko hi sambhal sakta hai un dono me se dusri ko nahi

Maa- fir waqt sambhal lega
Waqt se bada kya hai
Guruji- aur jab unko unke bare me pata chalna suru hoga tab kya?

Maa- aadhi sambhal jayegi aadhi ko lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- aur agar lucifer ko lucifer hone ke pata chalne se pehle unme se kisi ko khud ki sachae pata chal gaye to?

Maa- etne aage ki kyu soch rahe ho?
Guruji- kyuki ab mujhe aur khoon nahi bahana
Main ye sab khatam karna chahta hu

Maa- abhi to pariksha aaye bhi nahi aur aap bhagne ki tayari karne lage?
Guruji- maine bahut pariksha de li maate
Ab aur sahan nahi hota
Mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Maa- jab tak lucifer hai aapko bhi rahna padega guruji
Ek aap hi to ho jo usse sambhal sakte ho
Guruji- hum dono hi ladne lag jate hai maate
Kayamat se pehle to ye yudh khatam hoga nahi fir jab khatam hoga tab hum dono ke sath sath dunia bhi khatam ho jayegi

Maa- aur esme kitna khoon bahega?
Guruji- ye to baad ki baat hai
Agar aisa ho jaye to kitna masoom khoon bachega vo bhi to sochiye

Maa- abhi aa nahi ja sakte
Ek baar padegi aapki jarurat lucifer ko aur aapko vaha hona padega us din
Guruji- dunia ke do laachar ek dusre ke sath khade honge fir to us din....
Nice update Lone survivor bhai.
Is Update ko dekh kar ab to mujhe ye lagne laga hai Lucifer, Sekhar ko as a toy use kr raha hai anika ke liye. Wo shekhar ke jariye Anika ka gussa khtam karwana
cahata hai . Aur agar Anika bich me hi weak pad gayi tb to apna Lucifer hai hi. Lakin ye baat bhi manana padega ki apna naag bhi ab bahut kuch Lucifer ke sath rahne ke karan sikh chuka hai. Ye is Update se bahut saaf pata chalta hai. Aur Roshni to such me female devil hai.
But ye guru ji kin dono ki baat kar rahe the.
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
 

Lib am

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UPDATE-152
Lucifer, anika aur naag teeno shekhar ke samne khade the aur shekhar ki faat ke laal ho rahi thi sirf unhe dekh kar

Naag- bhai kya karna hai ab eska?
Lucifer- pucho bhai madam se kya socha hai usne

Anika- eske hath pair kaat dete hai
Shekhar- main tumhre pair padta hu mujhe jane do
Mere se galti ho gaye mujhe maaf kar do

Anika- maafi nahi milti yaha
Aise koe chhij ka humare pass koe option nahi hai
Shekhar- mujhe tadpa kar kya milega tum logo ko?

Anika- tu soch bhi nahi sakta kitni santusthi milegi hume
Lucifer- es se kya baat karni?
Karna kya hai vo bata na

Anika- bata to diya
Hath pair kaat dete hai
Lucifer- ek hath ek pair kaat do fir

Anika- hmm ye sahi rahega
Right hand aur left leg
Lucifer- naag bete start ho ja

Anika- main hi katungi
Mujhe chhura lake do
Lucifer- chhure se kaat degi?

Anika- kaat dungi
Lucifer- naag bandh esko aur lake de madam ko ek badiya sa chhura

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mera bahut bada network hai vo kaise na kaise karke mujhe dund hi lenge aur uske baad acha nahi hoga
Lucifer- tere network ko kabar me dafna kar aaya hu main
Uski tension mat le tu
Naag bandh na esse waqt nahi hai etna mere pass

Anika- eska aujaar bhi kaat dete hai
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar main to tamasha dekhne batha hu

Naag ne shekhar ko pakda aur ek poll par band diya

Lucifer- ek chaku lake de esko
Naag- la raha hu bhai
Aur naag andar chala gaya

Lucifer- kaat degi tu?
Behosh to nahi hogi na?
Anika- tumne abhi jana hi kaha hai mujhe?

Lucifer- mokka to de janane ka
Anika- samjhdaar hoga to aaj sab samjh me aa jayega

Lucifer- samjhdar to main nahi hu bilkul bhi
Anika- dikh raha hai vo to
Batane ki jarurat thodi hai ye?

Lucifer- ye ladki bahut roast karti hai sala
Naag- es se kaam chal jayega?
Naag ek bahut bada chaku leke aaya jisse dekh kar lucifer khud shocked ho gaya ki bc etna bada chaku ka ye karta kya hai yaha?

Lucifer- pehle mujhe ye bata tu eska karta kya hai yaha?
Sale tu chiken ke naam par oot to nahi khila raha hai na?
Naag- rakha hua tha bhai pehle ka

Lucifer- rakha hua tha?
Kyu rakha hua tha?
Naag- are bhai kaam to nikal hi jata hai
Rakha rahne do

Lucifer- ye baat bhi hai
De de esse
Naag- pakad legi ye?

Anika- pakad bhi lungi aur tujhe kaat bhi dungi es se
Tension mat le tu bilkul bhi
Lucifer- tu kaam start kar yaar
Mera yaha entertainment nahi ho raha aur tu hai ki start hi nahi kar rahi

Anika ne ek ganda sa look lucifer ko diya aur us se bhi ganda naag ko aur fir chaku leke shekhar ki taraf badhne lagi

Uski to unki baaton se hi fat gaye thi aur jo abhi hone wala tha vo soch kar hi vo nark jaisa feel karne laga tha

Anika dheere dheere uski taraf badh rahi thi aur piche naag aur lucifer tange faila kar bath gaye aur aane wale scene ko enjoy karne lage

Naag- bhai bet lagaoge?
Lucifer- vo pura nahi kaat payegi bet hai meri

Naag- bhai poora?
Vo bich me hi behosh ho jayegi dekh lena
Lucifer- uske pass power hai

Naag- ek idea hai mere pass
Lucifer- tere pass bhi idea hone lage kya?

Naag- vo aag bana sakti hai na?
Kyu na pehle uske hath pair kate aur fir aag se unhe jod de?
Dobara enjoy karne ko mil jayega
Lucifer- idea to tera ach hai lekin abhi to tune bet lagaye ki vo behosh ho jayegi?

Naag- jitna bhi kaate utne ko hi vapas judva dete hai
Ek baar me hi sab kaat diya to fir kya maja?
Lucifer- teri baaton me sense hone lag gaya naag

Naag- bolo fir aap hi
Main nahi bolne wala kuch esse
Lucifer- kyu?
Gand faat rahi hai teri?

Naag- kuch bhi maan lo
Lucifer- anika???

Anika- kya hai?
Lucifer- pehle eska aujaar kaat de
Hath pair pure mat kaatna
Aadhe kaat kar apne bacho wale jadoo se jod dena fir jab ye vapas theek ho jayega tab vapas kaat denge

Anika ne ek second ka pause liya fir usse bhi lucifer ki baat sahi lagi aur "theek hai" boli****

Mazikeen- tumhra kaam souls ko pakadna hai unhe tadpana nahi vo humara kaam hai
Roshini- to fir aaj se sabke kaam change

Mazikeen- lucifer order deta hai tum nahi
Roshini- abhi to main de rahi hu

Mazikeen- tumhe pata hai kitna bada ego hai tumhra?
Roshini- ha pata hai

Mazikeen- lekin tumhe ye nahi pata ki lucifer kya chhij hai esliye apne ego ko thoda sambhal lo aur jo kaam mila hai usse karo
Roshini- etna darte kyu ho tum log lucifer se?

Mazikeen- jis din usse jaan logi to pata chal jayega
Roshini- jaan rakha hai maine
Tum logo ne usko pahad par chadha rakha hai bas

Mazikeen- insaan ko apni awkaat nahi bhulni chahiye baad me dikkat ho jati hai
Roshini- mujhe yaad hai meri aukaat
Aur lucifer jaise se to achi hi hai

Mazikeen- tum jo bolti ho vo tumhre dimag me jata hai kya?
Vo hell lord hai
Samjh rahi ho tum?
Hell lord hai vo
He is the most powerful being in the whole universe
Roshini- sayad kisi sahi insaan se takkar nahi hue uski abhi tak

Mazikeen- tumhe samjh me aayega ek din jarur samjh me aaega
Roshini- dekhenge us din

Mazikeen- tab tak meri aatmao se door raho
Ye meri hai
Enhe saja dene ka hak mera hai
Agar aaj ke baad maine tumhe enhe kisi bhi parkaar se pareshan karte dekha to lucifer se pehle mazikeen ko jaan jaogi tum
Roshini- hahaha kids these days
Theek hai karo jo karna hai
Lekin jinko main pakad kar laungi unke sath main raste me kuch bhi kar sakti hu kyuki bahar wala area mera hai

Mazikeen- mujhe matlab nahi us se
Hell ki souls meri hai
Bahar tum kya karti ho vo tum jano
Roshini- pata nahi yaha sab etna gusse me kyu rahte hai
Samjh gaye main
Ab ja sakti hu kya?

Mazikeen bina kuch bole vaha se chali gaye vahi roshini wild smile ke sath vahi bath gaye
Jaise vo yaha enko bas poke karne hi aaye ho aur kuch kaam hi na ho uske pass****

Maa- kis chhij ka dar hai sabse jada aapko?
Kya koe aisa khatra jiski mujhe jankari honi chahiye?
Guruji- mata khatra to nahi hai lekin ek chhij ka bahut dar hai mujhe

Maa- aur vo kya hai?
Guruji- aapko to pata hi hai lucifer ki jindagi me bahut sari premika aayengi

Maa- ha pata hai
Guruji- mujhe essi baat ka dar hai

Maa- vo sab usse thode waqt ke liye shant karne hi aayengi guruji
Bina premika ke lucifer aatank macha sakta hai
Guruji- main janta hu maate
Maine hi usse sikhaya hai

Maa- to fir kis chhij ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Guruji- un dono ki

Maa- un dono ki kya?
Guruji- mata abhi to sab alag alag waqt par aa rahi hai esliye koe pareshani ki baat nahi hai lekin ek waqt aisa bhi aayega jab sab ek jagah ek sath hongi

Maa- ha mujhe maloom hai
Guruji- us waqt vo dono bhi vapas me milengi

Maa- ha milegi
Guruji- mata mujhe es baat ka hi dar hai ki jab vo dono apas me milegi to kuch anarth na ho jaye
Vo dono hi jiddi hai, kathor hai aur lucifer ko apni jaan se jada pyaar karti hai

Maa- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai vo dono mil kar lucifer ke liye ek shield ban kar kaam kare?
Guruji- bahut muskil hai maate
Vo dono apas me sath kaam kare eske aasar bahut kam lag rahe hai

Maa- to aap kya kahna chahte ho?
Guruji- baki sab ke pass dil hai maate
Lekin un dono ke pass nahi
Unke pass sirf aur sirf ek chhij hai aur vo hai lucifer

Maa- ye to achi baat hai na?
Esme darne wali kya baat hai?
Guruji- aap meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho
Jab dono samne aayengi aur lucifer par hak jamana suru karegi tab kya hoga?
Mujhe pata hai baki sab ko koe problem nahi hogi lekin un dono ko?
Vo dono apas me na ladne lag jaye

Maa- lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- lucifer ek ko hi sambhal sakta hai un dono me se dusri ko nahi

Maa- fir waqt sambhal lega
Waqt se bada kya hai
Guruji- aur jab unko unke bare me pata chalna suru hoga tab kya?

Maa- aadhi sambhal jayegi aadhi ko lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- aur agar lucifer ko lucifer hone ke pata chalne se pehle unme se kisi ko khud ki sachae pata chal gaye to?

Maa- etne aage ki kyu soch rahe ho?
Guruji- kyuki ab mujhe aur khoon nahi bahana
Main ye sab khatam karna chahta hu

Maa- abhi to pariksha aaye bhi nahi aur aap bhagne ki tayari karne lage?
Guruji- maine bahut pariksha de li maate
Ab aur sahan nahi hota
Mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Maa- jab tak lucifer hai aapko bhi rahna padega guruji
Ek aap hi to ho jo usse sambhal sakte ho
Guruji- hum dono hi ladne lag jate hai maate
Kayamat se pehle to ye yudh khatam hoga nahi fir jab khatam hoga tab hum dono ke sath sath dunia bhi khatam ho jayegi

Maa- aur esme kitna khoon bahega?
Guruji- ye to baad ki baat hai
Agar aisa ho jaye to kitna masoom khoon bachega vo bhi to sochiye

Maa- abhi aa nahi ja sakte
Ek baar padegi aapki jarurat lucifer ko aur aapko vaha hona padega us din
Guruji- dunia ke do laachar ek dusre ke sath khade honge fir to us din....
Ye teen hatele, Lucii, Anika aur Naag mil kar Shekhar ki achche se band bajane mein lage hai, baar uski fad dete hai fir silwa dete hai aur fir se fad dete hai. Ab ye naya kaand aur aa gaya hai ki kaato jodo kaato, iss sab se pahle Shekhar heart attack se hi naa mar jaaye.

Ye Guruji aur Maa Anika aur Asmita ki baat kar rahe the shaayad kyon ki dono hi hateli hai Asmita ko Lucii ki ahmiyat pata chal chuki hai apni zindgi mein, Anika ko bhi pata chalene hi waali hai. Asmita to itni possessive nahi magar Anika to poori lagti hai.

Beautiful update Lone survivor bro.
 

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Lucifer, anika aur naag teeno shekhar ke samne khade the aur shekhar ki faat ke laal ho rahi thi sirf unhe dekh kar

Naag- bhai kya karna hai ab eska?
Lucifer- pucho bhai madam se kya socha hai usne

Anika- eske hath pair kaat dete hai
Shekhar- main tumhre pair padta hu mujhe jane do
Mere se galti ho gaye mujhe maaf kar do

Anika- maafi nahi milti yaha
Aise koe chhij ka humare pass koe option nahi hai
Shekhar- mujhe tadpa kar kya milega tum logo ko?

Anika- tu soch bhi nahi sakta kitni santusthi milegi hume
Lucifer- es se kya baat karni?
Karna kya hai vo bata na

Anika- bata to diya
Hath pair kaat dete hai
Lucifer- ek hath ek pair kaat do fir

Anika- hmm ye sahi rahega
Right hand aur left leg
Lucifer- naag bete start ho ja

Anika- main hi katungi
Mujhe chhura lake do
Lucifer- chhure se kaat degi?

Anika- kaat dungi
Lucifer- naag bandh esko aur lake de madam ko ek badiya sa chhura

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mera bahut bada network hai vo kaise na kaise karke mujhe dund hi lenge aur uske baad acha nahi hoga
Lucifer- tere network ko kabar me dafna kar aaya hu main
Uski tension mat le tu
Naag bandh na esse waqt nahi hai etna mere pass

Anika- eska aujaar bhi kaat dete hai
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar main to tamasha dekhne batha hu

Naag ne shekhar ko pakda aur ek poll par band diya

Lucifer- ek chaku lake de esko
Naag- la raha hu bhai
Aur naag andar chala gaya

Lucifer- kaat degi tu?
Behosh to nahi hogi na?
Anika- tumne abhi jana hi kaha hai mujhe?

Lucifer- mokka to de janane ka
Anika- samjhdaar hoga to aaj sab samjh me aa jayega

Lucifer- samjhdar to main nahi hu bilkul bhi
Anika- dikh raha hai vo to
Batane ki jarurat thodi hai ye?

Lucifer- ye ladki bahut roast karti hai sala
Naag- es se kaam chal jayega?
Naag ek bahut bada chaku leke aaya jisse dekh kar lucifer khud shocked ho gaya ki bc etna bada chaku ka ye karta kya hai yaha?

Lucifer- pehle mujhe ye bata tu eska karta kya hai yaha?
Sale tu chiken ke naam par oot to nahi khila raha hai na?
Naag- rakha hua tha bhai pehle ka

Lucifer- rakha hua tha?
Kyu rakha hua tha?
Naag- are bhai kaam to nikal hi jata hai
Rakha rahne do

Lucifer- ye baat bhi hai
De de esse
Naag- pakad legi ye?

Anika- pakad bhi lungi aur tujhe kaat bhi dungi es se
Tension mat le tu bilkul bhi
Lucifer- tu kaam start kar yaar
Mera yaha entertainment nahi ho raha aur tu hai ki start hi nahi kar rahi

Anika ne ek ganda sa look lucifer ko diya aur us se bhi ganda naag ko aur fir chaku leke shekhar ki taraf badhne lagi

Uski to unki baaton se hi fat gaye thi aur jo abhi hone wala tha vo soch kar hi vo nark jaisa feel karne laga tha

Anika dheere dheere uski taraf badh rahi thi aur piche naag aur lucifer tange faila kar bath gaye aur aane wale scene ko enjoy karne lage

Naag- bhai bet lagaoge?
Lucifer- vo pura nahi kaat payegi bet hai meri

Naag- bhai poora?
Vo bich me hi behosh ho jayegi dekh lena
Lucifer- uske pass power hai

Naag- ek idea hai mere pass
Lucifer- tere pass bhi idea hone lage kya?

Naag- vo aag bana sakti hai na?
Kyu na pehle uske hath pair kate aur fir aag se unhe jod de?
Dobara enjoy karne ko mil jayega
Lucifer- idea to tera ach hai lekin abhi to tune bet lagaye ki vo behosh ho jayegi?

Naag- jitna bhi kaate utne ko hi vapas judva dete hai
Ek baar me hi sab kaat diya to fir kya maja?
Lucifer- teri baaton me sense hone lag gaya naag

Naag- bolo fir aap hi
Main nahi bolne wala kuch esse
Lucifer- kyu?
Gand faat rahi hai teri?

Naag- kuch bhi maan lo
Lucifer- anika???

Anika- kya hai?
Lucifer- pehle eska aujaar kaat de
Hath pair pure mat kaatna
Aadhe kaat kar apne bacho wale jadoo se jod dena fir jab ye vapas theek ho jayega tab vapas kaat denge

Anika ne ek second ka pause liya fir usse bhi lucifer ki baat sahi lagi aur "theek hai" boli****

Mazikeen- tumhra kaam souls ko pakadna hai unhe tadpana nahi vo humara kaam hai
Roshini- to fir aaj se sabke kaam change

Mazikeen- lucifer order deta hai tum nahi
Roshini- abhi to main de rahi hu

Mazikeen- tumhe pata hai kitna bada ego hai tumhra?
Roshini- ha pata hai

Mazikeen- lekin tumhe ye nahi pata ki lucifer kya chhij hai esliye apne ego ko thoda sambhal lo aur jo kaam mila hai usse karo
Roshini- etna darte kyu ho tum log lucifer se?

Mazikeen- jis din usse jaan logi to pata chal jayega
Roshini- jaan rakha hai maine
Tum logo ne usko pahad par chadha rakha hai bas

Mazikeen- insaan ko apni awkaat nahi bhulni chahiye baad me dikkat ho jati hai
Roshini- mujhe yaad hai meri aukaat
Aur lucifer jaise se to achi hi hai

Mazikeen- tum jo bolti ho vo tumhre dimag me jata hai kya?
Vo hell lord hai
Samjh rahi ho tum?
Hell lord hai vo
He is the most powerful being in the whole universe
Roshini- sayad kisi sahi insaan se takkar nahi hue uski abhi tak

Mazikeen- tumhe samjh me aayega ek din jarur samjh me aaega
Roshini- dekhenge us din

Mazikeen- tab tak meri aatmao se door raho
Ye meri hai
Enhe saja dene ka hak mera hai
Agar aaj ke baad maine tumhe enhe kisi bhi parkaar se pareshan karte dekha to lucifer se pehle mazikeen ko jaan jaogi tum
Roshini- hahaha kids these days
Theek hai karo jo karna hai
Lekin jinko main pakad kar laungi unke sath main raste me kuch bhi kar sakti hu kyuki bahar wala area mera hai

Mazikeen- mujhe matlab nahi us se
Hell ki souls meri hai
Bahar tum kya karti ho vo tum jano
Roshini- pata nahi yaha sab etna gusse me kyu rahte hai
Samjh gaye main
Ab ja sakti hu kya?

Mazikeen bina kuch bole vaha se chali gaye vahi roshini wild smile ke sath vahi bath gaye
Jaise vo yaha enko bas poke karne hi aaye ho aur kuch kaam hi na ho uske pass****

Maa- kis chhij ka dar hai sabse jada aapko?
Kya koe aisa khatra jiski mujhe jankari honi chahiye?
Guruji- mata khatra to nahi hai lekin ek chhij ka bahut dar hai mujhe

Maa- aur vo kya hai?
Guruji- aapko to pata hi hai lucifer ki jindagi me bahut sari premika aayengi

Maa- ha pata hai
Guruji- mujhe essi baat ka dar hai

Maa- vo sab usse thode waqt ke liye shant karne hi aayengi guruji
Bina premika ke lucifer aatank macha sakta hai
Guruji- main janta hu maate
Maine hi usse sikhaya hai

Maa- to fir kis chhij ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Guruji- un dono ki

Maa- un dono ki kya?
Guruji- mata abhi to sab alag alag waqt par aa rahi hai esliye koe pareshani ki baat nahi hai lekin ek waqt aisa bhi aayega jab sab ek jagah ek sath hongi

Maa- ha mujhe maloom hai
Guruji- us waqt vo dono bhi vapas me milengi

Maa- ha milegi
Guruji- mata mujhe es baat ka hi dar hai ki jab vo dono apas me milegi to kuch anarth na ho jaye
Vo dono hi jiddi hai, kathor hai aur lucifer ko apni jaan se jada pyaar karti hai

Maa- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai vo dono mil kar lucifer ke liye ek shield ban kar kaam kare?
Guruji- bahut muskil hai maate
Vo dono apas me sath kaam kare eske aasar bahut kam lag rahe hai

Maa- to aap kya kahna chahte ho?
Guruji- baki sab ke pass dil hai maate
Lekin un dono ke pass nahi
Unke pass sirf aur sirf ek chhij hai aur vo hai lucifer

Maa- ye to achi baat hai na?
Esme darne wali kya baat hai?
Guruji- aap meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho
Jab dono samne aayengi aur lucifer par hak jamana suru karegi tab kya hoga?
Mujhe pata hai baki sab ko koe problem nahi hogi lekin un dono ko?
Vo dono apas me na ladne lag jaye

Maa- lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- lucifer ek ko hi sambhal sakta hai un dono me se dusri ko nahi

Maa- fir waqt sambhal lega
Waqt se bada kya hai
Guruji- aur jab unko unke bare me pata chalna suru hoga tab kya?

Maa- aadhi sambhal jayegi aadhi ko lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- aur agar lucifer ko lucifer hone ke pata chalne se pehle unme se kisi ko khud ki sachae pata chal gaye to?

Maa- etne aage ki kyu soch rahe ho?
Guruji- kyuki ab mujhe aur khoon nahi bahana
Main ye sab khatam karna chahta hu

Maa- abhi to pariksha aaye bhi nahi aur aap bhagne ki tayari karne lage?
Guruji- maine bahut pariksha de li maate
Ab aur sahan nahi hota
Mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Maa- jab tak lucifer hai aapko bhi rahna padega guruji
Ek aap hi to ho jo usse sambhal sakte ho
Guruji- hum dono hi ladne lag jate hai maate
Kayamat se pehle to ye yudh khatam hoga nahi fir jab khatam hoga tab hum dono ke sath sath dunia bhi khatam ho jayegi

Maa- aur esme kitna khoon bahega?
Guruji- ye to baad ki baat hai
Agar aisa ho jaye to kitna masoom khoon bachega vo bhi to sochiye

Maa- abhi aa nahi ja sakte
Ek baar padegi aapki jarurat lucifer ko aur aapko vaha hona padega us din
Guruji- dunia ke do laachar ek dusre ke sath khade honge fir to us din....
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

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Shekhar- main kaha hu?
Naag- tu mar chuke ho aur ab jahanum me aagaye ho
Abhi tel garam ho raha hai uske baad tumhe usme tala jayega
Hahahahaha 😈

Shekhar- nahiiiii main nahi mar sakta
Naag- ab to tum mar chuke ho
Kuch hi der me devil bhi aane wala hai aur fir vo tumhe tumhre papo ki saja dega

Shekhar- main tumhe janta hu
Tum vohi ho na jo mujhe pakad kar laye ho?
Naag- main devil ka partner hu
Hum mil kar tumhri bund me aangare bharenge

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mere pass bahut paisa hai
Naag- devil ko paise se matlab nahi hota
Usse to saja deni hoti hai aur vo ussi me khush rahta hai

Shekhar- tumhe kya chahiye?
Ladkiya?
Nashe?
Paise?
Mere pass sab hai
Etna dunga ki jindagi me kabhi khatam nahi hoga
Naag- hmm shit bro
Ye sab to mere pass bhi hai
Tune acha offer dena chahiye tha

Shekhar- mujhe yaha se nikal de aur tu jo bolega main vo de dunga tujhe
Naag- vafadari hi meri pahchan hai
Thodi der aur aaram kar le maut ka tandaav fir tujhe moka nahi dega

Aur naag usse chhod kar bahar aagya
Usne shekhar ke sath kuch nahi kiya
Kyu?
Sayad vo lucifer se puche bina kuch nahi karna chahta tha
Ya fir usse pata tha ki jo shekhar ke sath hone wala hai uske baad ye chhoti motti saja ke liye kuch matlab hi nahi bachega

Naag ne bahar se shekhar ke room ka gate band kar diya aur usne lucifer ko call karke bata diya
Anika to vahi thi bas abhi vo so rahi thi to usse pata nahi chala aur naag to usse batane se raha

Vahi lucifer apne room par ek badiya se peg bana raha tha ki usse gate khulne ki aawaz aaye

Sidha sa matlab tha ki madhuri to nahi hai gate ke bahar kyuki vo to bechari knock hi karti rahti hai aur inaaya bhi nahi hogi kyuki vo thodi der pehle hi vaha se nikali thi

Aise me kon ho sakti hai?
Ashmita

Jee ha ashmita hi thi jo gate band karke lucifer ke side me bath gaye aur uska banaya hua peg uske hi glass se peene lagi

Lucifer- to hogaye apne behan se baat?
Ashmita- hmm

Lucifer- kaisi lagi?
Ashmita- she is too stubborn just like me and you

Lucifer- mujh jaise sareef admi ko kyu ghaseet rahi hai?
Main to har kisi ki baat sun leta hu maan leta hu, tu har roj daat ke chali jati hai
Masoom hu main bahut
Ashmita- etna masoom kyu hai tu?

Lucifer- kya karu ban gaya
Dar lagta hai tere se
Ashmita- usne bahut kuch saha hai lucifer

Lucifer- sabne hi saha hai yaha kon hai jiski life normal tarike se beet gaye ho?
Ashmita- humari family me hi aisa kyu hai?

Lucifer- har jagah achi buri chhije sath me hoti hai na
Ashmita- achi chhije batana jara yaha?

Lucifer- tara
Ashmita- aur?

Lucifer- main aur mera
Ashmita- tujhe ye baat karni hai mere sath?
Sure hai kya tu?

Lucifer- nahi karni galti hogaye
Ashmita- main usse mana kar rahungi

Lucifer- aur kaise karegi tu ye?
Ashmita- jaisa vo chahti hai vaise hi life jeene dungi usse
Main kabhi humare rishte ka burden nahi dalungi us par
Jabardasti ka rishta kabhi tikta thodi hai

Lucifer- ha mujhe bhi maja nahi aata jabardasti me
Ashmita- vo apna legi mujhe ek na ek din

Lucifer- tara se baat hue tumhri?
Ashmita- abhi nahi

Lucifer- kyu?
Usse pata hona chahiye
Ashmita- aaj karungi

Lucifer- aaj to main tujhe jane hi nahi dunga
Mere sath soegi aaj to tu
Ashmita- kal baat kar lungi

Lucifer- tu, teri chhoti behan, teri badi behan sab mere par fida hai
Foursome ho jayega ab to
Ashmita- didi to tujhe ek percent pasand nahi karti

Lucifer- vaham hai tera
Tu apni behan ko samjh hi nahi pa rahi
Ashmita- kuch bhi mat bol

Lucifer - tara se apni kasam khilva kar puchna pata lag jayega
Ashmita- mujhe unhe kasam deni ki jarurat nahi hai

Lucifer- to fir ek baar puch kar dekhna
Agar unhone baat ghumae to samjh jana
Ashmita- tu sach bol raha hai?

Lucifer- tujhe nahi karna apne behano ke sath foursome?
Ashmita- mere samne to teri fati padi rahti hai
Bada aaya foursome karne wala

Lucifer- anisha virgin hai
Ashmita- main tera muh tod dungi agar uske bare me faltu baat kari to

Lucifer- tu bhi to virgin hai
Ashmita- tere liye bacha kar jo rakhi hai maine

Lucifer- aaj kar du tere dil ki muraad puri?
Ashmita- kar de

Lucifer- tu chhidti kyu nahi hai meri baaton se?
Ashmita- kyuki janti hu main tujhe

Lucifer- tara se baat karna aur usse samjhna bhi
Vo teri tarah nahi hai
Ashmita- pata hai mujhe
Meri behan hai ache se janti hu usse

Lucifer- ha bade ache se janti hai na tu tere ko ye tak to pata nahi tha ki teri behan ki feelings hai mere liye
Ashmita- tujhe peetna hai kya aaj?

Lucifer- tu skirt kyu nahi pahnti aaj kal?
Ashmita- tujhe achi lagti hai?

Lucifer- tu bomb lagti hai usme
Ashmita- pahan lungi tere samne

Lucifer- mere samne to tu kuch bhi na pahne to bhi acha hai
Ashmita- nahi pahungi fir

Lucifer- inaaya ke bare me kya socha?
Ashmita- kya sochna hai?

Lucifer- i mean ab to sab sort ho gaya na?
Ashmita- sab pehle se hi sort tha lucifer
Bas mere baap ne uske aur uske parivaar ke sath bura kiya to mujhe usme pisna hi tha
Koe badi baat nahi hai aur uska mujhse naraaj hona bhi lajmi hi tha

Lucifer- fir us din kyu gussa kar rahi thi?
Ashmita- vo to aise hi aa gaya tha bas

Lucifer- mujhe bahut pehle se hi lag raha tha ki tum dono ka kuch na kuch to jarur hai
Ashmita- ha ha jod de esse bhi apni us gandi si list me

Lucifer- ashu
Ashmita- bahut pyaara lagta hai jab tu mujhe aise bulata hai

Lucifer- gujar kar dekh ek raat mere sath aahhshhuu karti nahi thakegi
Ashmita- kya khila raha hai?

Lucifer- jo man kare bana le
Ashmita- banane se acha mangva hi na lu?

Lucifer- mangva le
Ashmita- kya khaega?

Lucifer- jo tera man kare mangva le
Ashmita- theek hai
Vaise anisha ne bahut tasty khana khilaya mujhe

Lucifer- khaunga usko bhi ek din
Ashmita- dekh lena tu teri maut mere hi hatho likhi hai kutte kahi ke****

Past

Simran- ek din mar jaungi ya maar dungi main tere liye kisi ko bhi
Lucifer- tu apne gusse par control rakha kar

Simran- jab chhije tere bare me hoti hai na to nahi rakh pati main control tu samjhne ki kosis kar
Lucifer- main samjh raha hu sab kuch

Simran- esliye main tujhse bol rahi hu ki simran aur lucifer ke bich me kabhi daraar aaye to us daraar ko main hi bharungi lekin bharungi khoon se hi
Lucifer- kisne kya kaha hai tujhse?
Kyu etna gussa ho rahi hai?

Simran- koe tere bare me kuch bol de marna hai kya unko?
Lucifer- to shant rah na
Tera gussa dekh kar meri gand faat jati hai

Simran- main tujhe bahut baar bol chuki hu lucifer aur aaj fir bol rahi hu tu mera sab kuch hai aur sab kuch se mera matlab sab kuch se hi hai esliye dhayan rakha kar
Agar tere par baat aaye to main dekhungi nahi samne wala kon hai aur kya hai
Lucifer- main samjh gaya meri jaan lekin ab ye to bata ki hua kya hai?

Simran- kuch nahi hua
Lucifer- bataegi ya sirf baatein hi chhodti rahegi?

Simran- mujhe bahut gussa aa raha hai
Lucifer- dikh raha hai vo to lekin kyu?

Simran- mujhe kisi ko marne ka man kar raha hai
Lucifer- mujhe maar de lekin kyu?

Simran- vo mujhe bol raha tha ki lucifer to har ladkiyo ke sath aisa hi rahta hai
Usse to bas sex se matlab hai
Nahi mere lucifer ko sirf sex se matlab nahi hai
Mujh se pucho kaisa hai mera lucifer
Lucifer- kon bol raha tha tujhe?

Simran- hell me mil lena us se
Lucifer- tune maar diya usse?

Simran- abhi nahi
Lucifer- mujhe bata fir kon hai main kar deta hu adhura kaam pura

Simran- tere aur mere bich me koe aaya to main khud nahi chhodungi usse
Tu mera sirf pyaar nahi hai lucifer
Sirf pyaar nahi hai tu mera
Lucifer- main sala kalkasur ko bhi mara hai lekin meri tab bhi jara si nahi fati lekin tujhe aisa dekh kar gand ka chabutra ban gaya hai bc

Simran- tu mat dar main hu na
Teri jindagi me agar main khushiya nahi leke aaye to laanat hai meri aisi jindagi ka
Lucifer- mat bol aisa please
Tu janti bhi nahi hai ache se ki kya kya hona baki hai aage

Simran- mujhe koe lena dena nahi hai us se
Teri khushiya main leke aaungi ye tu dekh lena
Lucifer- tu hi meri khushiya hai

Simran- aur tujhe tere sraapo se bhi main hi tujhe mukti dilaungi
Lucifer- tujhe pata bhi nahi hai tu gusse me kitna kuch bol gaye hai simran
Meri mukti ka matlab tu samjh hi nahi paa rahi hai

Simran- main sab samjh rahi hu
Aise pyaar ka fayda hi kya jab vo apne pyaar ke liye kurbaani na de sake
Lucifer- aaja tujhe achi jagah ghuma kar laata hu
Tera mood meri bunde chhodi kar raha hai
Chal mood fresh kar aur thoda smile kar vaise hi achi dikhati hai tu....
जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann khubhsurat

Yaha to luci ki bhi fati 😁😁 par apne pyar ke age sab ki phatati hey 😀😀😀😀
 

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Lucifer, anika aur naag teeno shekhar ke samne khade the aur shekhar ki faat ke laal ho rahi thi sirf unhe dekh kar

Naag- bhai kya karna hai ab eska?
Lucifer- pucho bhai madam se kya socha hai usne

Anika- eske hath pair kaat dete hai
Shekhar- main tumhre pair padta hu mujhe jane do
Mere se galti ho gaye mujhe maaf kar do

Anika- maafi nahi milti yaha
Aise koe chhij ka humare pass koe option nahi hai
Shekhar- mujhe tadpa kar kya milega tum logo ko?

Anika- tu soch bhi nahi sakta kitni santusthi milegi hume
Lucifer- es se kya baat karni?
Karna kya hai vo bata na

Anika- bata to diya
Hath pair kaat dete hai
Lucifer- ek hath ek pair kaat do fir

Anika- hmm ye sahi rahega
Right hand aur left leg
Lucifer- naag bete start ho ja

Anika- main hi katungi
Mujhe chhura lake do
Lucifer- chhure se kaat degi?

Anika- kaat dungi
Lucifer- naag bandh esko aur lake de madam ko ek badiya sa chhura

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mera bahut bada network hai vo kaise na kaise karke mujhe dund hi lenge aur uske baad acha nahi hoga
Lucifer- tere network ko kabar me dafna kar aaya hu main
Uski tension mat le tu
Naag bandh na esse waqt nahi hai etna mere pass

Anika- eska aujaar bhi kaat dete hai
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar main to tamasha dekhne batha hu

Naag ne shekhar ko pakda aur ek poll par band diya

Lucifer- ek chaku lake de esko
Naag- la raha hu bhai
Aur naag andar chala gaya

Lucifer- kaat degi tu?
Behosh to nahi hogi na?
Anika- tumne abhi jana hi kaha hai mujhe?

Lucifer- mokka to de janane ka
Anika- samjhdaar hoga to aaj sab samjh me aa jayega

Lucifer- samjhdar to main nahi hu bilkul bhi
Anika- dikh raha hai vo to
Batane ki jarurat thodi hai ye?

Lucifer- ye ladki bahut roast karti hai sala
Naag- es se kaam chal jayega?
Naag ek bahut bada chaku leke aaya jisse dekh kar lucifer khud shocked ho gaya ki bc etna bada chaku ka ye karta kya hai yaha?

Lucifer- pehle mujhe ye bata tu eska karta kya hai yaha?
Sale tu chiken ke naam par oot to nahi khila raha hai na?
Naag- rakha hua tha bhai pehle ka

Lucifer- rakha hua tha?
Kyu rakha hua tha?
Naag- are bhai kaam to nikal hi jata hai
Rakha rahne do

Lucifer- ye baat bhi hai
De de esse
Naag- pakad legi ye?

Anika- pakad bhi lungi aur tujhe kaat bhi dungi es se
Tension mat le tu bilkul bhi
Lucifer- tu kaam start kar yaar
Mera yaha entertainment nahi ho raha aur tu hai ki start hi nahi kar rahi

Anika ne ek ganda sa look lucifer ko diya aur us se bhi ganda naag ko aur fir chaku leke shekhar ki taraf badhne lagi

Uski to unki baaton se hi fat gaye thi aur jo abhi hone wala tha vo soch kar hi vo nark jaisa feel karne laga tha

Anika dheere dheere uski taraf badh rahi thi aur piche naag aur lucifer tange faila kar bath gaye aur aane wale scene ko enjoy karne lage

Naag- bhai bet lagaoge?
Lucifer- vo pura nahi kaat payegi bet hai meri

Naag- bhai poora?
Vo bich me hi behosh ho jayegi dekh lena
Lucifer- uske pass power hai

Naag- ek idea hai mere pass
Lucifer- tere pass bhi idea hone lage kya?

Naag- vo aag bana sakti hai na?
Kyu na pehle uske hath pair kate aur fir aag se unhe jod de?
Dobara enjoy karne ko mil jayega
Lucifer- idea to tera ach hai lekin abhi to tune bet lagaye ki vo behosh ho jayegi?

Naag- jitna bhi kaate utne ko hi vapas judva dete hai
Ek baar me hi sab kaat diya to fir kya maja?
Lucifer- teri baaton me sense hone lag gaya naag

Naag- bolo fir aap hi
Main nahi bolne wala kuch esse
Lucifer- kyu?
Gand faat rahi hai teri?

Naag- kuch bhi maan lo
Lucifer- anika???

Anika- kya hai?
Lucifer- pehle eska aujaar kaat de
Hath pair pure mat kaatna
Aadhe kaat kar apne bacho wale jadoo se jod dena fir jab ye vapas theek ho jayega tab vapas kaat denge

Anika ne ek second ka pause liya fir usse bhi lucifer ki baat sahi lagi aur "theek hai" boli****

Mazikeen- tumhra kaam souls ko pakadna hai unhe tadpana nahi vo humara kaam hai
Roshini- to fir aaj se sabke kaam change

Mazikeen- lucifer order deta hai tum nahi
Roshini- abhi to main de rahi hu

Mazikeen- tumhe pata hai kitna bada ego hai tumhra?
Roshini- ha pata hai

Mazikeen- lekin tumhe ye nahi pata ki lucifer kya chhij hai esliye apne ego ko thoda sambhal lo aur jo kaam mila hai usse karo
Roshini- etna darte kyu ho tum log lucifer se?

Mazikeen- jis din usse jaan logi to pata chal jayega
Roshini- jaan rakha hai maine
Tum logo ne usko pahad par chadha rakha hai bas

Mazikeen- insaan ko apni awkaat nahi bhulni chahiye baad me dikkat ho jati hai
Roshini- mujhe yaad hai meri aukaat
Aur lucifer jaise se to achi hi hai

Mazikeen- tum jo bolti ho vo tumhre dimag me jata hai kya?
Vo hell lord hai
Samjh rahi ho tum?
Hell lord hai vo
He is the most powerful being in the whole universe
Roshini- sayad kisi sahi insaan se takkar nahi hue uski abhi tak

Mazikeen- tumhe samjh me aayega ek din jarur samjh me aaega
Roshini- dekhenge us din

Mazikeen- tab tak meri aatmao se door raho
Ye meri hai
Enhe saja dene ka hak mera hai
Agar aaj ke baad maine tumhe enhe kisi bhi parkaar se pareshan karte dekha to lucifer se pehle mazikeen ko jaan jaogi tum
Roshini- hahaha kids these days
Theek hai karo jo karna hai
Lekin jinko main pakad kar laungi unke sath main raste me kuch bhi kar sakti hu kyuki bahar wala area mera hai

Mazikeen- mujhe matlab nahi us se
Hell ki souls meri hai
Bahar tum kya karti ho vo tum jano
Roshini- pata nahi yaha sab etna gusse me kyu rahte hai
Samjh gaye main
Ab ja sakti hu kya?

Mazikeen bina kuch bole vaha se chali gaye vahi roshini wild smile ke sath vahi bath gaye
Jaise vo yaha enko bas poke karne hi aaye ho aur kuch kaam hi na ho uske pass****

Maa- kis chhij ka dar hai sabse jada aapko?
Kya koe aisa khatra jiski mujhe jankari honi chahiye?
Guruji- mata khatra to nahi hai lekin ek chhij ka bahut dar hai mujhe

Maa- aur vo kya hai?
Guruji- aapko to pata hi hai lucifer ki jindagi me bahut sari premika aayengi

Maa- ha pata hai
Guruji- mujhe essi baat ka dar hai

Maa- vo sab usse thode waqt ke liye shant karne hi aayengi guruji
Bina premika ke lucifer aatank macha sakta hai
Guruji- main janta hu maate
Maine hi usse sikhaya hai

Maa- to fir kis chhij ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Guruji- un dono ki

Maa- un dono ki kya?
Guruji- mata abhi to sab alag alag waqt par aa rahi hai esliye koe pareshani ki baat nahi hai lekin ek waqt aisa bhi aayega jab sab ek jagah ek sath hongi

Maa- ha mujhe maloom hai
Guruji- us waqt vo dono bhi vapas me milengi

Maa- ha milegi
Guruji- mata mujhe es baat ka hi dar hai ki jab vo dono apas me milegi to kuch anarth na ho jaye
Vo dono hi jiddi hai, kathor hai aur lucifer ko apni jaan se jada pyaar karti hai

Maa- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai vo dono mil kar lucifer ke liye ek shield ban kar kaam kare?
Guruji- bahut muskil hai maate
Vo dono apas me sath kaam kare eske aasar bahut kam lag rahe hai

Maa- to aap kya kahna chahte ho?
Guruji- baki sab ke pass dil hai maate
Lekin un dono ke pass nahi
Unke pass sirf aur sirf ek chhij hai aur vo hai lucifer

Maa- ye to achi baat hai na?
Esme darne wali kya baat hai?
Guruji- aap meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho
Jab dono samne aayengi aur lucifer par hak jamana suru karegi tab kya hoga?
Mujhe pata hai baki sab ko koe problem nahi hogi lekin un dono ko?
Vo dono apas me na ladne lag jaye

Maa- lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- lucifer ek ko hi sambhal sakta hai un dono me se dusri ko nahi

Maa- fir waqt sambhal lega
Waqt se bada kya hai
Guruji- aur jab unko unke bare me pata chalna suru hoga tab kya?

Maa- aadhi sambhal jayegi aadhi ko lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- aur agar lucifer ko lucifer hone ke pata chalne se pehle unme se kisi ko khud ki sachae pata chal gaye to?

Maa- etne aage ki kyu soch rahe ho?
Guruji- kyuki ab mujhe aur khoon nahi bahana
Main ye sab khatam karna chahta hu

Maa- abhi to pariksha aaye bhi nahi aur aap bhagne ki tayari karne lage?
Guruji- maine bahut pariksha de li maate
Ab aur sahan nahi hota
Mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Maa- jab tak lucifer hai aapko bhi rahna padega guruji
Ek aap hi to ho jo usse sambhal sakte ho
Guruji- hum dono hi ladne lag jate hai maate
Kayamat se pehle to ye yudh khatam hoga nahi fir jab khatam hoga tab hum dono ke sath sath dunia bhi khatam ho jayegi

Maa- aur esme kitna khoon bahega?
Guruji- ye to baad ki baat hai
Agar aisa ho jaye to kitna masoom khoon bachega vo bhi to sochiye

Maa- abhi aa nahi ja sakte
Ek baar padegi aapki jarurat lucifer ko aur aapko vaha hona padega us din
Guruji- dunia ke do laachar ek dusre ke sath khade honge fir to us din....
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Death Kiñg

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Ashmita ka character baaki sabhi females se kaafi zyada strong hai... Haan, Saanvi yaani Inaaya wo pehli ladki thi jisne Lucifer jaise ek Devil ko nafrat ke alawa kisi aur emotion ke darshan karwaye, Saanvi ne hi wo neev rakhi thi jiske oopar baakiyon ne milkar ek aisa structure khada kiya jis se aaj Lucifer jaisa praani sudharne ki raah par badh chuka hai... Par fir bhi Ashmita yaani Simran, ek alag hi aura hai uska is kahani mein... Iska ek kaaran definitely ye hai ki wahi iklauti hai jo Lucifer ko bhi dara kar rakhne ki kaabiliyat rakhti hai,par us se badi baat use bas Lucifer chahiye... Ye clear hai ki Saanvi ek narm dil ladki thi jo khoon kharaba bilkul bhi pasand nahi karti thi, par doosri aur Simran, ek aisi ladki jo Lucifer ke liye itna khoon baha sakti hai jo shayad Lucifer tak ne naa bahaya ho...

(Btw. I feel ki Inaaya kahani mein kahin kho si gayi hai. Don't know why, but the kind of character Saanvi has been portrayed as in the past scenes, Inaaya use present mein justify nahi kar paa rahi).

Simran ke past scene mein jhalak thi us ghatna ki jiska zikra ek baar Supreme ne kiya tha... Now I really want to know ki asal mein Simran ne kise kaata tha, jiski wajah se baaki ladkiyon ki tarah wo bhi Lucifer se door ho gayi... Aur yahaan par wo kis vyakti ki baat kar rahi thi, itni himmat kismein aa gayi ki wo Lucifer ki buraayi kar sake..? Khair, present time mein, Ashmita ab kaafi hadh tak sambhal chuki hai, especially Anisha se baat karne ke baad... Lucifer was actually right, Ashmita is indeed a strong girl... Dekhne waali baat ye hai ki in naye rishton ke beech, Inaaya aur Ashmita ka wo purana rishta zinda ho paayega, jo Raichand ki wajah se kho gaya tha..?

Anisha ne wahi faisla liya jiski expectations thi, par yahaan ab sawaal khada ho chuka hai ki achanak se hi Anisha ka mann kaise badal gaya? Ya fir wo shuru se hi itna hi chahti thi ki kewal Raichand ki hakeekat Ashmita aur Tara ke saamne aa jaaye? Jo kuchh usne kuchh updates pehle Priyanka se kaha tha ki wo ab pichhe nahi hatt sakti, means jiske pichhe wo itne saalon se lagi hai, use haasil karke rahegi, kya wo kewal Raichand ki asliyat uski betiyon ke saamne laana tha..? Mujhe nahi lagta, zaroor kuchh to hua hai Anisha ke saath jo saamne aana baaki hai... Btw. waiting for the next conversation between Lucifer & Anisha!

Khair, Anisha ka faisla yahi hai ki wo jaise zindagi bita rahi hai, usmein wo koyi badlav nahi chahti... Priyanka se jo baat usne kahi thi uska matlab ab saaf ho chuka hai... But dekhna ye hai ki in dono ziddi behno ki zidd mein aakhir kar jeet kiski hogi? Ashmita apne aap ko Anisha ke oopar impose to karegi nahi, we'll have to see ki Tara ka kya reaction hoga sab jaan ne par, definitely wo bhi milna chahegi Anisha se, interesting rahega dekhna ki Anisha ke liye Priyanka kya decide karti hai... Because at the end of the day, jis kaam ke liye Priyanka reluctant hogi, chaahe Anisha ka kitna bhi mann ho, wo karne nahi waali...

Idhar Shekhar saahab ke saath achha – khaasa time pass ho raha hai teeno ka... Abhi to kewal Annika hi use dhone mein lagi hai, I'm thinking ki jab Lucifer shuru hoga tab kya hoga... Btw. we can see similarities in Roshini & Annika already, dono ko hi Lucifer se ek baar fight karne ka gazab shouk chadha hua hai, I don't think ki Roshini ko ye mauka mila hoga (ya mila tha?), but Annika might get this beautiful chance to fulfil her wish... Khair,vab dekhna ye hai ki Annika Shekhar ko aur Shekhar ke purzon ko kaatne ke alawa aur kya karti hai, dekhte hain aur kya chaalu hai uski zindagi mein...

At last Guruji aur Maa (Lucifer ki?) Ka past scene... Jin do ladkiyon ki ye baat lar rahe the shayad wo Ashmita aur Annika hi hongi, baaki to aage pata chal hi jaayega...

All the three updates were really good bhai! Anisha aur Ashmita ka scene was the real highlight... You're a master in writing dialogues & conversations, haven't seen many writing dialogues so well!

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 
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