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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Avinashraj

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UPDATE-152
Lucifer, anika aur naag teeno shekhar ke samne khade the aur shekhar ki faat ke laal ho rahi thi sirf unhe dekh kar

Naag- bhai kya karna hai ab eska?
Lucifer- pucho bhai madam se kya socha hai usne

Anika- eske hath pair kaat dete hai
Shekhar- main tumhre pair padta hu mujhe jane do
Mere se galti ho gaye mujhe maaf kar do

Anika- maafi nahi milti yaha
Aise koe chhij ka humare pass koe option nahi hai
Shekhar- mujhe tadpa kar kya milega tum logo ko?

Anika- tu soch bhi nahi sakta kitni santusthi milegi hume
Lucifer- es se kya baat karni?
Karna kya hai vo bata na

Anika- bata to diya
Hath pair kaat dete hai
Lucifer- ek hath ek pair kaat do fir

Anika- hmm ye sahi rahega
Right hand aur left leg
Lucifer- naag bete start ho ja

Anika- main hi katungi
Mujhe chhura lake do
Lucifer- chhure se kaat degi?

Anika- kaat dungi
Lucifer- naag bandh esko aur lake de madam ko ek badiya sa chhura

Shekhar- mujhe jane do
Mera bahut bada network hai vo kaise na kaise karke mujhe dund hi lenge aur uske baad acha nahi hoga
Lucifer- tere network ko kabar me dafna kar aaya hu main
Uski tension mat le tu
Naag bandh na esse waqt nahi hai etna mere pass

Anika- eska aujaar bhi kaat dete hai
Lucifer- jo karna hai kar main to tamasha dekhne batha hu

Naag ne shekhar ko pakda aur ek poll par band diya

Lucifer- ek chaku lake de esko
Naag- la raha hu bhai
Aur naag andar chala gaya

Lucifer- kaat degi tu?
Behosh to nahi hogi na?
Anika- tumne abhi jana hi kaha hai mujhe?

Lucifer- mokka to de janane ka
Anika- samjhdaar hoga to aaj sab samjh me aa jayega

Lucifer- samjhdar to main nahi hu bilkul bhi
Anika- dikh raha hai vo to
Batane ki jarurat thodi hai ye?

Lucifer- ye ladki bahut roast karti hai sala
Naag- es se kaam chal jayega?
Naag ek bahut bada chaku leke aaya jisse dekh kar lucifer khud shocked ho gaya ki bc etna bada chaku ka ye karta kya hai yaha?

Lucifer- pehle mujhe ye bata tu eska karta kya hai yaha?
Sale tu chiken ke naam par oot to nahi khila raha hai na?
Naag- rakha hua tha bhai pehle ka

Lucifer- rakha hua tha?
Kyu rakha hua tha?
Naag- are bhai kaam to nikal hi jata hai
Rakha rahne do

Lucifer- ye baat bhi hai
De de esse
Naag- pakad legi ye?

Anika- pakad bhi lungi aur tujhe kaat bhi dungi es se
Tension mat le tu bilkul bhi
Lucifer- tu kaam start kar yaar
Mera yaha entertainment nahi ho raha aur tu hai ki start hi nahi kar rahi

Anika ne ek ganda sa look lucifer ko diya aur us se bhi ganda naag ko aur fir chaku leke shekhar ki taraf badhne lagi

Uski to unki baaton se hi fat gaye thi aur jo abhi hone wala tha vo soch kar hi vo nark jaisa feel karne laga tha

Anika dheere dheere uski taraf badh rahi thi aur piche naag aur lucifer tange faila kar bath gaye aur aane wale scene ko enjoy karne lage

Naag- bhai bet lagaoge?
Lucifer- vo pura nahi kaat payegi bet hai meri

Naag- bhai poora?
Vo bich me hi behosh ho jayegi dekh lena
Lucifer- uske pass power hai

Naag- ek idea hai mere pass
Lucifer- tere pass bhi idea hone lage kya?

Naag- vo aag bana sakti hai na?
Kyu na pehle uske hath pair kate aur fir aag se unhe jod de?
Dobara enjoy karne ko mil jayega
Lucifer- idea to tera ach hai lekin abhi to tune bet lagaye ki vo behosh ho jayegi?

Naag- jitna bhi kaate utne ko hi vapas judva dete hai
Ek baar me hi sab kaat diya to fir kya maja?
Lucifer- teri baaton me sense hone lag gaya naag

Naag- bolo fir aap hi
Main nahi bolne wala kuch esse
Lucifer- kyu?
Gand faat rahi hai teri?

Naag- kuch bhi maan lo
Lucifer- anika???

Anika- kya hai?
Lucifer- pehle eska aujaar kaat de
Hath pair pure mat kaatna
Aadhe kaat kar apne bacho wale jadoo se jod dena fir jab ye vapas theek ho jayega tab vapas kaat denge

Anika ne ek second ka pause liya fir usse bhi lucifer ki baat sahi lagi aur "theek hai" boli****

Mazikeen- tumhra kaam souls ko pakadna hai unhe tadpana nahi vo humara kaam hai
Roshini- to fir aaj se sabke kaam change

Mazikeen- lucifer order deta hai tum nahi
Roshini- abhi to main de rahi hu

Mazikeen- tumhe pata hai kitna bada ego hai tumhra?
Roshini- ha pata hai

Mazikeen- lekin tumhe ye nahi pata ki lucifer kya chhij hai esliye apne ego ko thoda sambhal lo aur jo kaam mila hai usse karo
Roshini- etna darte kyu ho tum log lucifer se?

Mazikeen- jis din usse jaan logi to pata chal jayega
Roshini- jaan rakha hai maine
Tum logo ne usko pahad par chadha rakha hai bas

Mazikeen- insaan ko apni awkaat nahi bhulni chahiye baad me dikkat ho jati hai
Roshini- mujhe yaad hai meri aukaat
Aur lucifer jaise se to achi hi hai

Mazikeen- tum jo bolti ho vo tumhre dimag me jata hai kya?
Vo hell lord hai
Samjh rahi ho tum?
Hell lord hai vo
He is the most powerful being in the whole universe
Roshini- sayad kisi sahi insaan se takkar nahi hue uski abhi tak

Mazikeen- tumhe samjh me aayega ek din jarur samjh me aaega
Roshini- dekhenge us din

Mazikeen- tab tak meri aatmao se door raho
Ye meri hai
Enhe saja dene ka hak mera hai
Agar aaj ke baad maine tumhe enhe kisi bhi parkaar se pareshan karte dekha to lucifer se pehle mazikeen ko jaan jaogi tum
Roshini- hahaha kids these days
Theek hai karo jo karna hai
Lekin jinko main pakad kar laungi unke sath main raste me kuch bhi kar sakti hu kyuki bahar wala area mera hai

Mazikeen- mujhe matlab nahi us se
Hell ki souls meri hai
Bahar tum kya karti ho vo tum jano
Roshini- pata nahi yaha sab etna gusse me kyu rahte hai
Samjh gaye main
Ab ja sakti hu kya?

Mazikeen bina kuch bole vaha se chali gaye vahi roshini wild smile ke sath vahi bath gaye
Jaise vo yaha enko bas poke karne hi aaye ho aur kuch kaam hi na ho uske pass****

Maa- kis chhij ka dar hai sabse jada aapko?
Kya koe aisa khatra jiski mujhe jankari honi chahiye?
Guruji- mata khatra to nahi hai lekin ek chhij ka bahut dar hai mujhe

Maa- aur vo kya hai?
Guruji- aapko to pata hi hai lucifer ki jindagi me bahut sari premika aayengi

Maa- ha pata hai
Guruji- mujhe essi baat ka dar hai

Maa- vo sab usse thode waqt ke liye shant karne hi aayengi guruji
Bina premika ke lucifer aatank macha sakta hai
Guruji- main janta hu maate
Maine hi usse sikhaya hai

Maa- to fir kis chhij ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Guruji- un dono ki

Maa- un dono ki kya?
Guruji- mata abhi to sab alag alag waqt par aa rahi hai esliye koe pareshani ki baat nahi hai lekin ek waqt aisa bhi aayega jab sab ek jagah ek sath hongi

Maa- ha mujhe maloom hai
Guruji- us waqt vo dono bhi vapas me milengi

Maa- ha milegi
Guruji- mata mujhe es baat ka hi dar hai ki jab vo dono apas me milegi to kuch anarth na ho jaye
Vo dono hi jiddi hai, kathor hai aur lucifer ko apni jaan se jada pyaar karti hai

Maa- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai vo dono mil kar lucifer ke liye ek shield ban kar kaam kare?
Guruji- bahut muskil hai maate
Vo dono apas me sath kaam kare eske aasar bahut kam lag rahe hai

Maa- to aap kya kahna chahte ho?
Guruji- baki sab ke pass dil hai maate
Lekin un dono ke pass nahi
Unke pass sirf aur sirf ek chhij hai aur vo hai lucifer

Maa- ye to achi baat hai na?
Esme darne wali kya baat hai?
Guruji- aap meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho
Jab dono samne aayengi aur lucifer par hak jamana suru karegi tab kya hoga?
Mujhe pata hai baki sab ko koe problem nahi hogi lekin un dono ko?
Vo dono apas me na ladne lag jaye

Maa- lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- lucifer ek ko hi sambhal sakta hai un dono me se dusri ko nahi

Maa- fir waqt sambhal lega
Waqt se bada kya hai
Guruji- aur jab unko unke bare me pata chalna suru hoga tab kya?

Maa- aadhi sambhal jayegi aadhi ko lucifer sambhal lega
Guruji- aur agar lucifer ko lucifer hone ke pata chalne se pehle unme se kisi ko khud ki sachae pata chal gaye to?

Maa- etne aage ki kyu soch rahe ho?
Guruji- kyuki ab mujhe aur khoon nahi bahana
Main ye sab khatam karna chahta hu

Maa- abhi to pariksha aaye bhi nahi aur aap bhagne ki tayari karne lage?
Guruji- maine bahut pariksha de li maate
Ab aur sahan nahi hota
Mujhe bhi mukti chahiye

Maa- jab tak lucifer hai aapko bhi rahna padega guruji
Ek aap hi to ho jo usse sambhal sakte ho
Guruji- hum dono hi ladne lag jate hai maate
Kayamat se pehle to ye yudh khatam hoga nahi fir jab khatam hoga tab hum dono ke sath sath dunia bhi khatam ho jayegi

Maa- aur esme kitna khoon bahega?
Guruji- ye to baad ki baat hai
Agar aisa ho jaye to kitna masoom khoon bachega vo bhi to sochiye

Maa- abhi aa nahi ja sakte
Ek baar padegi aapki jarurat lucifer ko aur aapko vaha hona padega us din
Guruji- dunia ke do laachar ek dusre ke sath khade honge fir to us din....
Beautiful 😍 update bhai
 

Lone survivor

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Nice update Lone survivor bhai.
Thank you bhai
Is Update ko dekh kar ab to mujhe ye lagne laga hai Lucifer, Sekhar ko as a toy use kr raha hai anika ke liye. Wo shekhar ke jariye Anika ka gussa khtam karwana
Ho sakta hai
cahata hai . Aur agar Anika bich me hi weak pad gayi tb to apna Lucifer hai hi. Lakin ye baat bhi manana padega ki apna naag bhi ab bahut kuch Lucifer ke sath rahne ke karan sikh chuka hai. Ye is Update se bahut saaf pata chalta hai.
Sangat ka asar hai bhai
Aur Roshni to such me female devil hai.
Vo to hai hi
But ye guru ji kin dono ki baat kar rahe the.
Socho
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Stay tuned
 

Lone survivor

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Ye teen hatele, Lucii, Anika aur Naag mil kar Shekhar ki achche se band bajane mein lage hai, baar uski fad dete hai fir silwa dete hai aur fir se fad dete hai. Ab ye naya kaand aur aa gaya hai ki kaato jodo kaato, iss sab se pahle Shekhar heart attack se hi naa mar jaaye.
Usse marne to nahi denge ye dono
Ye Guruji aur Maa Anika aur Asmita ki baat kar rahe the shaayad kyon ki dono hi hateli hai Asmita ko Lucii ki ahmiyat pata chal chuki hai apni zindgi mein, Anika ko bhi pata chalene hi waali hai.
Chalne hi wali hai?
Asmita to itni possessive nahi magar Anika to poori lagti hai.
Abhi to vo bhi nahi hai
Beautiful update Lone survivor bro.
Thank you so much bhai
 
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