Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update bro

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update Lone survivor bhai.
Ashmita ne tara ko bhi bata diya. Aur tara ko to phle yakin hi nahi hua isiliye usne kai baar wahi baat puchi aur check Krna chaha. Aur baat bhi sahi hai itni badi baat aise pata chle to yakin kaha aata hai.

Ye to hai hi koe etni aasani se kaise yakeen kar le?

Khir wo baat hui uske baad baat ka topic chla gaya as usual hmare Lucifer par aur Lucifer ki jitni bhi gf hai wo dure gf ko dekhte hi ek second me hi bata skti hai ki Lucifer ko le karke uski kya feeling hai. Wahi haal yaha tara ka bhi hai.

Kya pata vo sab ek dusre ke janti hai esliye idea lag jata ho?

Anika ne to such me band baja di shekher ki aur dono ke soch ko hi chota kar diya ab dekhte hai waha aage kya hota hai.

Aage bahut kuch hona hai

Wahi Inayaa Hmesa ki tarah Lucifer ko smjha rahi hai ki ye khoon khraba band kar do. Lakin Lucifer ka bhi kahna bilkul such hai ki wo fake Lucifer cahti hai to wo ban jayega

Vo bhi nahi chahti ye to

Ab asmita ne bataya hai aur jin baat such hai to tara kaise anisha se mile bina rah sakti thi. Aur suru meri usne such me Anisa ko test hi kiya tha. Lakin apni anisha kaha kisi se kam hai. Aur yaha bhi baat ka mudda last me Lucifer ban gaya aur ye dono ko hi pata chal gaya ki wo dono Lucifer ko pyar karti hai. Mujhe to ab Lucifer aur anisha ka ek sath scene dekhna hai bhai.

Aayega jaldi hi aaega

Aur payal aur Lucifer ke bich abhi tak bas achi bate hi hui hai. Kya unke bich kabhi kuch bura bhi ho skta hai jaise tutu mai mai. Aur ab Lucifer wapas payal ko date par le jane wala hai dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai.

Unke bich bahut kuch ho sakta hai bhai

Dono hi Update bahut ache the Lone survivor bhai.

Thank you so much bhaj

 

[Lone survivor]

Ashmita ne Tara ko Anisha ke baare mein aur apne baap ke baare mein sab kuchh bata diya hai... Tara ne sab jaan ne ke baad ek samajhdar aur shaant ladki ki tarah react kiya joki mere liye hairaan karne waala tha... Parantu, ab lagta hai ki Tara ke do character hain, ek samajhdari bhara jo sabhi ke liye hai aur doosra badbola, joki kewal Lucifer ke liye hai...

Aisa ho sakta hai kyuki lucifer ke alava Tara mostly shant hi rahti hai

Tara ne bhi Ashmita ki hi tarah Anisha ko convince karne ki koshish ki, taaki Anisha un dono ko at least behen ka darza hi de de, yadi wo unke saath nahi bhi rehna chahti to, par Anisha ab bhi apne faisle par kaayam hai...

Kyuki vo sahi hai

Tara ne jo kuchh kaha, Anisha se, about observing her behaviour, aur uske baad Anisha ke jawaab... Saaf ho chuka hai ki kuchh to hua hai Anisha ke saath jiske kaaran uski soch aur dimaag ek dum se badal sa gaya hai... Kya Priyanka ne kuchh kaha hai us se? Par jab last baar Priyanka ne Anisha se kaha tha ki wo sab rok de, tab Anisha ka jawaab yahi tha ki usne saari zindagi jis manzil ke liye lagayi hai, uske kareeb aakar wo use nahi chhod sakti, ro to aise achanak hi uski soch mein itna badlav... Sach mein, Lucifer se jude log kab kya kar den, koyi nahin jaanta...

Kya pata yehi uski mazil ho?

Par abhi ke liye itna to confirm hai ki Anisha ki zidd ke aage ye dono behne to kam se kam kuchh nahi kar sakti, haan shayad Lucifer se baat karne ke baad hi Anisha ke is faisle ke pichhe ki asli wajah saamne aaye, par uske alawa to kisi ke bas ka nahi hai ye kaam...

Lucifer baat karega kya es bare me enme se kisi se bhi?

Saath hi Ashmita ne Tara se Lucifer ke baare mein bhi baar kar li hai, Anisha aur Tara, bhale hi chidhkar kaha ho dono ne, par hakeekat dono ki hi zubaan par aa chuki hai, ki Lucifer naamak is praani ke prakop se ye dono ladkiyan bhi bach nahi paayi hain...

Lucifer se koe nahi bach sakta

Btw. Tara aur Lucifer ki baatein ek hi jaisi lagi mujhe, similar thoughts I mean...

Kaha lage bhai aisa aapko?

Idhar, Inaaya Ashmita ke kiye gaye us khulase se chinta mein hai... Inaaya ko pehle se hi maaloom hai ki Lucifer hamesha ke liye uske paas nahi rehne waala, par shayad Ashmita ke munh se achanak hi ye sunkar wo pareshaan ho gayi... Par yahaan Lucifer ki baat bhi sahi hai, Lucifer yadi ab badal bhi jaaye, to bhi kya? Koyi guarantee nahi hai ki Lucifer tab ek achhi zindagi guzaar paayega... Ya kahun ki confirm hi hai ki Lucifer ki maut honi hi hai, aur wo bhi Ashmita ke hi haathon... Aakhir Supreme ko ek achha example bhi to dena hai duniya ko... Khair, Lucifer ne bhi bohot intezaar kiya hai apni mukti ka, aur shayad ab wo ek lambi chhuti aur kabhi na khatam hone waala aaram, deserve bhi karta hai... Dekhte hain Inaaya aage kis tarah react karegi...

Lucifer bilkul apni mukti deserve karta hai lekin kya usse vo etni aasani se milegi?
Abhi to bahut suffer karna hai usse

Idhar Payal ke saath bhi Lucifer ne apne patent karaye huye mood mein hi baat ki, I don't think ki kabhi isne kisi baat ko seriously liya hoga... Aur liya bhi ho, to kisi ke saamne dikhaya nahi hoga ki abhi ye serious hai... Payal aur Lucifer ki mulakat mein kya hoga, definitely ye dekhna rochak rehne waala hai... Especially, ki Lucifer ki approach kya rahegi Payal ki taraf...

Mujhe to yehi lagta hai ki uski approach kabhi change nahi hone wali

Wahin Shekhar ki kaat peet achhe se chaalu hi hai Annika ke haathon, she's definitely cruel.. very very cruel!

Indeed she is

Both the updates were really good bhai... Kahani ab shayad kuchh speed pakadne waali hai...

Ab character build ho gaya to story ko chalate hai

Kyonki Anisha ka matter ab khul hi chuka hai sabhi ke saamne to shayad ab Ashmita aur Tara ki koshish chalti hi rahegi use convince karne ki, but dekhna hoga ki is sabmein Lucifer ka kya role hoga... I don't think ki wo teeno behno ke beech mein interfere karega, bistar par kare to kare, uske alawa kahin aur to karne se raha...

Usse bolna bhi nahi chahiye unke bich me
Let them handle this

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you so much bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Gajab update bhaya

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nyc update bhai

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Gajab update bhaya

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Kya hi masti chal rahi hai, ek choti bahan ne dono badi bahano ko pareshaan karne ki kasam kha li hai aur ab dono badi bahane us choti bahan ko manane mein lagi hai. Ziddi teeno hi hai.

Chhoti humesha jada hoti hai

Udhar Lucii Payal ke saath full masti kar raha hai aur wo bechari Lucii ki baato mein fans bhi chuki hai. Ab dekhna hai hi kya hota hai. Beautiful update

Abhi bahut kuch hoga

 

[Lone survivor]

Beautiful update bhai

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Hello aawaz aarhi h kya
Good update

Hello mujhe to aa rahi hai
Thank you bhai