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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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UPDATE-155
Lucifer 7 baje apne ghar se nikla payal ke ghar ki taraf,vo 7 baje apne ghar se nikla aur usne 7 baje payal ko pick karne ka bola tha
Ab koe usse kya hi kah sakta hai?
Yaha payal 4 baje se tayar hona start kar chuki thi aur abhi tak to puri ready hokar bathi lucifer ka intezaar kar rahi thi

Pata nahi kyu lekin uski dil ki dhakane bahut tej ho rakhi thi sayad kuch badal raha tha
Vo baar baar apne aap ko mirror me dekh rahi thi ki kahi kuch gadbad to nahi ho gaye hai aur jab sab same lagta to ghadi me time dekhne lagti

Kaha usne socha tha lucifer time se pehle aa jayega aur yaha time se pehle ki to baat hi chhodo vo time par bhi nahi aaya

Payal ka bahut man kar raha tha ki lucifer se puche ki vo kitni der me aa raha hai ya vo aa bhi raha hai ya nahi lekin uska hath phone par ja hi nahi raha tha

Kafi nervous lag rahi thi aur aaj arohi bhi to nahi thi uske pass jo usse normal kar sake

Abhi ke liye to vo sirf intezaar kar sakti thi aur kuch nahi aur vo intezaar hi kar rahi thi

Kabhi khud ko mirror me dekh kar niharti to kabhi window se bahar ki taraf dekhti
Time tha ki beetne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha aur na lucifer aane ka naam le raha tha

Aise ek masoom ladki ko intezaar karana kahi se bhi theek baat nahi hai lekin lucifer kab koe theek baat karta hai?

Lagbhag ek ghanta beet gaya aur ab payal se intezaar karna bahut muskil ho raha tha to usne puri himmat laga kar phone uthaya aur lucifer ka number dial kar diya

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hello

Lucifer- yaar main kitne der se tumhre ghar ke niche khada hu
Tumhe waqt ka koe andaja hai ya nahi? Aur upar se tumhra phone bhi nahi lag raha
Payal- kaha khade ho?

Lucifer- tumhre ghar ke niche
Aajao yaar kyu late kara rahi ho?
Payal window se niche dekhne lagti hai to usse ek ghadi khadi dikh jati hai jo thodi der pehle vaha nahi thi to vo samjh jati hai ki lucifer aa gaya hai

Usne jaldi se phone kaata apne aap ko ek baar aur mirror me dekha aur fir niche ki taraf chal di

Dil etni joro se dhadak raha tha uska ki kya hi bole sath me thodi ghabrahat bhi ho rahi rhe usse

Bilkul dheeme dheeme kadam niche ki aur ja rahe the uske aur ant me vo niche pahuch hi gaye aur us ghadi ke pass khadi hokar lucifer ko dekhne lagi kyuuki usse lucifer dikhae nahi de raha tha

Payal edhar udhar dekh rahi thi ki lucifer piche se nikal kar payal ko apni bahoo me bhar leta hai

Achanak se hue hamle se payal ki to fat ke hath me aagaye thi lekin jab usne touch masoom kiya to vo samjh gaye ki lucifer hi hai to thoda shant hue

Lucifer- you looking greaaat
Aur usko dheela chhod diya
Payal thoda edhar udhar dekhte hue thank you boli

Lucifer- vaise main samne se galle lagane wala tha lekin tum baar baar mud rahi thi esliye piche se laga liya hope you didn't feel anything
Lucifer muskurate hue bola lekin payal ne koe jawab nahi diya sayad abhi jo hua usko realize karne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer- chale ya yahi blush karte rahne ka irada hai?
Payal vaise hi sarm se gaddi ja rahi thi lucifer ke aise bolne se to vo puri laal pad gaye

Bina kuch bole chhup chhap apni muskurahat chhupate hue vo car me bath gaye
Lucifer bhi batha aur chal diye vo dono apni manjil ki taraf

Lucifer- tum par etna makeup suit nahi karta
Payal- hai?
Payal ne pehli baar apni najar utha kar lucifer ki taraf dekha

Lucifer- tumhri khubsurati tumhri saadgi me hi hai
Payal- maine halka sa hi kiya tha
Vo thoda udas hote hue boli

Lucifer- saadgi me tum cute lagti ho aur makeup me hot
Kahi main jal na jau aaj
Lucifer ne firse laal kar diya payal ko aur vo vapas blush karne lagi

Lucifer- vaise tum me change bahut aa gaya hai
First time mile tab kuch nahi boli second time me bhi kuch nahi boli third fourth time me khub ladi aur ab dekho kaise blush kiye ja rahi ho
Payal- bas bhi karo

Lucifer- kitni gulabi ho yaar tum
Payal ko normally aise baatein bilkul achi nahi lagti thi lekin lucifer ke muh se sun kar vo pani pani hue ja rahi thi

Lucifer- aaj tumhri sari sarm door kar dunga main
Pain killer bhi laya hu main
Payal- kyu?

Lucifer- dard me hi to maja hai
Kya pata kabhi tumhe jarurat pad jaye?
Payal- aapke date ka ye matlab hota hai kya?

Lucifer- ye date maine nahi tumne rakhi thi to eska jo matlab nikal raha hai vo bhi tumhre liye hi nikal raha hai
Payal- baatein ghumana to koe aapse sikhe

Lucifer- kaha chalna hai?
Payal- leke to aap hi chal rahe ho?

Lucifer- main to hotel leke jana chahta hu
Payal- hotel hi sahi fir

Lucifer- are waw ladki etni jaldi line par aagaye?
Payal- main samjhne lag gaye hu tumhe esliye dar nahi ab

Lucifer- ek jhatke me aap se tum par aagaye tum to?
Payal- aap bol deti hu

Lucifer- apna bol lo
Vo jada acha rahega
Payal- jada jaldi nahi hai tumhe?

Lucifer- bahut jaldi hai mujhe
Waqt ki bahut shortage chal rahi hai
Payal- acha kyu?

Lucifer- bahut kaam karna hai aur time bahut kam
Payal- bahut time hai abhi

Lucifer- time hi to nahi hai
Vaise tumhe lubricant pasand hai ya sukha sukha?
Payal- sukha sukha

Lucifer- dard hoga fir
Payal- vo dard dard nahi

Lucifer- jamane ke samne etni sarafat aur mere samne sukha sukha?
Waw re kalyug aur kya dikhayega mujhe?
Payal- aapko aise language achi lagti hai to aise language me to aise hi baat ki jati hai

Lucifer- meri language bhi sikh li?
Etna fast bhi nahi hona chahiye tha
Payal- abhi to bola time kam hai to fir hume bhi speed badha deni chahiye

Lucifer- ladki samjhdar ho gaye hai
Payal- hona padta hai

Lucifer- lo aa gaye humari manjil
Payal lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki vo aas pass dhayan dena hi bhul gaye

Jab lucifer ne manjil ke bare me bola tab jake usse yaad aaya aur bahar dekhne lagi

Vaha ek mela laga hua tha jisse dekhte hi payal ke chehre par ek alag hi nikhaar aa gaya jo lucifer ke milne ke time aaya tha us se bhi kahi badh kar

Payal- wowww melllllaaaa
Maine kabhi nahi dekha
Lucifer- aaj main dikha deta hu
Aur lucifer me car side me park ki aur dono bahar aagaye

Payal to mele ko dekh kar hi ek chhoti bachhi ban gaye thi vo kabhi edhar ghumti to kabhi udhar

Sayad bachpan acha nahi ghujra hoga uska esliye aisa ho raha ho, kabhi usse mela dikhane wala hi nahi mila ho?

Vo bahut khush thi usne lucifer ka hath pakda aur usse lagbhag khechte hue ander ki taraf le jane lagi

Lucifer bhi uske piche piche khicha chala gaya
Payal na kuch khareed rahi thi na kuch kha pee rahi thi vo bas chhije dekh dekh kar khush ho rahi thi

Kuch jada hi simple ladki thi vo ya fir vo ye janti thi ki yaha chahe chhije sasti mile, chache uska kaam theek chalne lag gaya hai lekin uske upar bahut jada responsibilities hai aur vo ye sab chhije afford nahi kar payegi

Vo bina khaye peeye aise hi chhije dekh dekh kar khush ho rahi thi aur lucifer na chahte hue bhi uski taraf bahut jada attract hone laga

Lucifer- kuch khana nahi hai kya?
Payal- khate to har roj hai ghar par
Vo dekho na kitna cute bacha dance kar raha hai vaha?
Aur vaha vo chhote chhote bache kitne khush hai na apni mummy papa ke sath
Aur vo jhulo ko dekha kaise log khushi se chhila rahe hai
Aur kitne sundar sundar toys hai
Vo bachi ko dekho kaise un khilone ki taraf dekh rahi hai jaise vohi uski life ho
Aur uska to alag hi chal raha hai vo to aaj sare golgappe kha kar hi ghar jayega yaha se
Kitna sundar hai na ye sab?
Sab kitne khush lag rahe hai

Lucifer payal ki baaton me kahi kho hi gaya tha ab usse bas uska muskurata hua chehra dikh raha tha lekin sun kuch bhi nahi raha tha

Payal- Lucifer????
Are kaha kho gaye?
Main bol rahi hu ki vaha bahut bheed lag rahi hai chalo chalke dekhte hai kya hai vaha?
Payal lucifer ko apni taraf aise dekhte hue usse hilate hue bolti hai to lucifer bhi nind se jaag jata hai

Lucifer- ha kya kya bol rahi ho?
Payal- kaha kho gaye tum?

Lucifer- tum me
Payal- main bol rahi thi vaha bahut bheed hai chalo na dekhte hai kya hai vaha
Aur payal vapas lucifer ka hath pakadte hue uska reply sune bina usse khichte hue us side me leke jane lagi

Lucifer abhi payal me nahi khoya tha vo apne bachpan me kho gaya tha
Kyuki na to payal ne apna bachpan jeeya aur na lucifer ne

Payal ka to usse pata nahi tha ki kaisa raha vo bas imagine kar raha tha ki acha nahi raha hoga aur apne ke bare me to vo soche na to hi acha hai
Khelne khudne ki umar me uske hatho me hathiyaar jo thama diye gaye the

Lucifer baar baar apne bachpan me ghusa ja raha tha aur fir payal usse apni muskaan se vapas reality me la rahi thi

Jaisa ki abhi hua kyuki payal ko vaha kuch handmade garments dikhe jo vo khud banati thi jisse dekh kar usse bahut acha feel hua

Usse laga ki ab log es tarah ki chhijo ke liye bhi dhayan dene lage hai

Esliye vo bheed ko chhirte hue samne aagaye aur samne dekhte hi uski aankhen chhodi ho gaye kyuki samne arohi thi aur uske sath uske orphans ke bahut sare uncle aur vo sab vaha apne handmade chhije bech rahe the

Arohi ko dekhte hi payal buri tarah shocked ho gaye kyuki payal ya kisi ne usse es bare me to kuch bataya hi nahi tha

Payal- arohiiiiii??????
Arohi jo bahut busy thi payal ko dekh kar
Arohi- aapko kya chahiye madam?
Hum bargain nahi karte sab kuch handmade hai aur bahut achi quality ke hai esliye aap kuch bhi khareeb sakti ho lekin no bargain please

Payal- bargain ki bachhi
Tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi aur pyaar se uski gaal kheechne lagi

Arohi- mujhe kyu daat rahi ho?
Mujhe to jiju ne bola tha yaha aane ko aur aapko na batane ko
Payal- aur tu apne jiju ki chamchi ho gaye jo apni didi se baat chhupane lag gaye?

Lucifer- oye didi uski?
Usko apna kaam karne de aur chal yaha se
Hum date par aaye hai business karne nahi
Arohi- jao jao jiju bula rahe hai
Mujhe apna kaam karne do

Payal- tu ghar chal tujhe to ghar chal kar dekhungi main
Arohi- abhi jiju ko dekh lo kahi aur chura na le kitne dashing lag rahe hai

Payal usse aankh dikhate hue vaha se chali gaye vahi arohi vapas apne kaam me lag gaye
Vo bahut khush thi kyuki usne payal ko khush jo dekh liya tha aur chahiye hi kya tha usko

Payal- to ye sab tumne kiya?
Lucifer- maine to bas usse ek rasta dikhaya tha
Aur dekho result kitni bheed thi vaha
Acha business ho jayega

Payal- thank you lucifer
Thank you for everything and sorry for being rude
Lucifer- aaja tujhe ride karata hu aaj

Payal- mujhe dar lagta hai
Lucifer- dard nahi hota maja aata hai chal to
Fir jaha abhi tak payal lucifer ko apne sath kheech rahi thi abhi lucifer usse khechte hue sabse uche wale jhule par le gaya

Payal ko actually me bahut dar lag raha tha esliye usne lucifer ko bahut jor se pakad rakha tha vahi lucifer aur dar to sath sath jate hi nahi hai to uske bare me to baat hi kya karna

Jab jhule ne raftaar pakdi tab to payal ki halaat aur kharab hone lagi aur vo puri lucifer me sama gaye
Lucifer ne bhi us waqt koe faltu ki harkat nahi ki aur ab moment ko enjoy karne laga

Uske baad unhone vahi kuch halka fulka khaya aur fir vapas aa gaye....
 

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UPDATE-155
Lucifer 7 baje apne ghar se nikla payal ke ghar ki taraf,vo 7 baje apne ghar se nikla aur usne 7 baje payal ko pick karne ka bola tha
Ab koe usse kya hi kah sakta hai?
Yaha payal 4 baje se tayar hona start kar chuki thi aur abhi tak to puri ready hokar bathi lucifer ka intezaar kar rahi thi

Pata nahi kyu lekin uski dil ki dhakane bahut tej ho rakhi thi sayad kuch badal raha tha
Vo baar baar apne aap ko mirror me dekh rahi thi ki kahi kuch gadbad to nahi ho gaye hai aur jab sab same lagta to ghadi me time dekhne lagti

Kaha usne socha tha lucifer time se pehle aa jayega aur yaha time se pehle ki to baat hi chhodo vo time par bhi nahi aaya

Payal ka bahut man kar raha tha ki lucifer se puche ki vo kitni der me aa raha hai ya vo aa bhi raha hai ya nahi lekin uska hath phone par ja hi nahi raha tha

Kafi nervous lag rahi thi aur aaj arohi bhi to nahi thi uske pass jo usse normal kar sake

Abhi ke liye to vo sirf intezaar kar sakti thi aur kuch nahi aur vo intezaar hi kar rahi thi

Kabhi khud ko mirror me dekh kar niharti to kabhi window se bahar ki taraf dekhti
Time tha ki beetne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha aur na lucifer aane ka naam le raha tha

Aise ek masoom ladki ko intezaar karana kahi se bhi theek baat nahi hai lekin lucifer kab koe theek baat karta hai?

Lagbhag ek ghanta beet gaya aur ab payal se intezaar karna bahut muskil ho raha tha to usne puri himmat laga kar phone uthaya aur lucifer ka number dial kar diya

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hello

Lucifer- yaar main kitne der se tumhre ghar ke niche khada hu
Tumhe waqt ka koe andaja hai ya nahi? Aur upar se tumhra phone bhi nahi lag raha
Payal- kaha khade ho?

Lucifer- tumhre ghar ke niche
Aajao yaar kyu late kara rahi ho?
Payal window se niche dekhne lagti hai to usse ek ghadi khadi dikh jati hai jo thodi der pehle vaha nahi thi to vo samjh jati hai ki lucifer aa gaya hai

Usne jaldi se phone kaata apne aap ko ek baar aur mirror me dekha aur fir niche ki taraf chal di

Dil etni joro se dhadak raha tha uska ki kya hi bole sath me thodi ghabrahat bhi ho rahi rhe usse

Bilkul dheeme dheeme kadam niche ki aur ja rahe the uske aur ant me vo niche pahuch hi gaye aur us ghadi ke pass khadi hokar lucifer ko dekhne lagi kyuuki usse lucifer dikhae nahi de raha tha

Payal edhar udhar dekh rahi thi ki lucifer piche se nikal kar payal ko apni bahoo me bhar leta hai

Achanak se hue hamle se payal ki to fat ke hath me aagaye thi lekin jab usne touch masoom kiya to vo samjh gaye ki lucifer hi hai to thoda shant hue

Lucifer- you looking greaaat
Aur usko dheela chhod diya
Payal thoda edhar udhar dekhte hue thank you boli

Lucifer- vaise main samne se galle lagane wala tha lekin tum baar baar mud rahi thi esliye piche se laga liya hope you didn't feel anything
Lucifer muskurate hue bola lekin payal ne koe jawab nahi diya sayad abhi jo hua usko realize karne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer- chale ya yahi blush karte rahne ka irada hai?
Payal vaise hi sarm se gaddi ja rahi thi lucifer ke aise bolne se to vo puri laal pad gaye

Bina kuch bole chhup chhap apni muskurahat chhupate hue vo car me bath gaye
Lucifer bhi batha aur chal diye vo dono apni manjil ki taraf

Lucifer- tum par etna makeup suit nahi karta
Payal- hai?
Payal ne pehli baar apni najar utha kar lucifer ki taraf dekha

Lucifer- tumhri khubsurati tumhri saadgi me hi hai
Payal- maine halka sa hi kiya tha
Vo thoda udas hote hue boli

Lucifer- saadgi me tum cute lagti ho aur makeup me hot
Kahi main jal na jau aaj
Lucifer ne firse laal kar diya payal ko aur vo vapas blush karne lagi

Lucifer- vaise tum me change bahut aa gaya hai
First time mile tab kuch nahi boli second time me bhi kuch nahi boli third fourth time me khub ladi aur ab dekho kaise blush kiye ja rahi ho
Payal- bas bhi karo

Lucifer- kitni gulabi ho yaar tum
Payal ko normally aise baatein bilkul achi nahi lagti thi lekin lucifer ke muh se sun kar vo pani pani hue ja rahi thi

Lucifer- aaj tumhri sari sarm door kar dunga main
Pain killer bhi laya hu main
Payal- kyu?

Lucifer- dard me hi to maja hai
Kya pata kabhi tumhe jarurat pad jaye?
Payal- aapke date ka ye matlab hota hai kya?

Lucifer- ye date maine nahi tumne rakhi thi to eska jo matlab nikal raha hai vo bhi tumhre liye hi nikal raha hai
Payal- baatein ghumana to koe aapse sikhe

Lucifer- kaha chalna hai?
Payal- leke to aap hi chal rahe ho?

Lucifer- main to hotel leke jana chahta hu
Payal- hotel hi sahi fir

Lucifer- are waw ladki etni jaldi line par aagaye?
Payal- main samjhne lag gaye hu tumhe esliye dar nahi ab

Lucifer- ek jhatke me aap se tum par aagaye tum to?
Payal- aap bol deti hu

Lucifer- apna bol lo
Vo jada acha rahega
Payal- jada jaldi nahi hai tumhe?

Lucifer- bahut jaldi hai mujhe
Waqt ki bahut shortage chal rahi hai
Payal- acha kyu?

Lucifer- bahut kaam karna hai aur time bahut kam
Payal- bahut time hai abhi

Lucifer- time hi to nahi hai
Vaise tumhe lubricant pasand hai ya sukha sukha?
Payal- sukha sukha

Lucifer- dard hoga fir
Payal- vo dard dard nahi

Lucifer- jamane ke samne etni sarafat aur mere samne sukha sukha?
Waw re kalyug aur kya dikhayega mujhe?
Payal- aapko aise language achi lagti hai to aise language me to aise hi baat ki jati hai

Lucifer- meri language bhi sikh li?
Etna fast bhi nahi hona chahiye tha
Payal- abhi to bola time kam hai to fir hume bhi speed badha deni chahiye

Lucifer- ladki samjhdar ho gaye hai
Payal- hona padta hai

Lucifer- lo aa gaye humari manjil
Payal lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki vo aas pass dhayan dena hi bhul gaye

Jab lucifer ne manjil ke bare me bola tab jake usse yaad aaya aur bahar dekhne lagi

Vaha ek mela laga hua tha jisse dekhte hi payal ke chehre par ek alag hi nikhaar aa gaya jo lucifer ke milne ke time aaya tha us se bhi kahi badh kar

Payal- wowww melllllaaaa
Maine kabhi nahi dekha
Lucifer- aaj main dikha deta hu
Aur lucifer me car side me park ki aur dono bahar aagaye

Payal to mele ko dekh kar hi ek chhoti bachhi ban gaye thi vo kabhi edhar ghumti to kabhi udhar

Sayad bachpan acha nahi ghujra hoga uska esliye aisa ho raha ho, kabhi usse mela dikhane wala hi nahi mila ho?

Vo bahut khush thi usne lucifer ka hath pakda aur usse lagbhag khechte hue ander ki taraf le jane lagi

Lucifer bhi uske piche piche khicha chala gaya
Payal na kuch khareed rahi thi na kuch kha pee rahi thi vo bas chhije dekh dekh kar khush ho rahi thi

Kuch jada hi simple ladki thi vo ya fir vo ye janti thi ki yaha chahe chhije sasti mile, chache uska kaam theek chalne lag gaya hai lekin uske upar bahut jada responsibilities hai aur vo ye sab chhije afford nahi kar payegi

Vo bina khaye peeye aise hi chhije dekh dekh kar khush ho rahi thi aur lucifer na chahte hue bhi uski taraf bahut jada attract hone laga

Lucifer- kuch khana nahi hai kya?
Payal- khate to har roj hai ghar par
Vo dekho na kitna cute bacha dance kar raha hai vaha?
Aur vaha vo chhote chhote bache kitne khush hai na apni mummy papa ke sath
Aur vo jhulo ko dekha kaise log khushi se chhila rahe hai
Aur kitne sundar sundar toys hai
Vo bachi ko dekho kaise un khilone ki taraf dekh rahi hai jaise vohi uski life ho
Aur uska to alag hi chal raha hai vo to aaj sare golgappe kha kar hi ghar jayega yaha se
Kitna sundar hai na ye sab?
Sab kitne khush lag rahe hai

Lucifer payal ki baaton me kahi kho hi gaya tha ab usse bas uska muskurata hua chehra dikh raha tha lekin sun kuch bhi nahi raha tha

Payal- Lucifer????
Are kaha kho gaye?
Main bol rahi hu ki vaha bahut bheed lag rahi hai chalo chalke dekhte hai kya hai vaha?
Payal lucifer ko apni taraf aise dekhte hue usse hilate hue bolti hai to lucifer bhi nind se jaag jata hai

Lucifer- ha kya kya bol rahi ho?
Payal- kaha kho gaye tum?

Lucifer- tum me
Payal- main bol rahi thi vaha bahut bheed hai chalo na dekhte hai kya hai vaha
Aur payal vapas lucifer ka hath pakadte hue uska reply sune bina usse khichte hue us side me leke jane lagi

Lucifer abhi payal me nahi khoya tha vo apne bachpan me kho gaya tha
Kyuki na to payal ne apna bachpan jeeya aur na lucifer ne

Payal ka to usse pata nahi tha ki kaisa raha vo bas imagine kar raha tha ki acha nahi raha hoga aur apne ke bare me to vo soche na to hi acha hai
Khelne khudne ki umar me uske hatho me hathiyaar jo thama diye gaye the

Lucifer baar baar apne bachpan me ghusa ja raha tha aur fir payal usse apni muskaan se vapas reality me la rahi thi

Jaisa ki abhi hua kyuki payal ko vaha kuch handmade garments dikhe jo vo khud banati thi jisse dekh kar usse bahut acha feel hua

Usse laga ki ab log es tarah ki chhijo ke liye bhi dhayan dene lage hai

Esliye vo bheed ko chhirte hue samne aagaye aur samne dekhte hi uski aankhen chhodi ho gaye kyuki samne arohi thi aur uske sath uske orphans ke bahut sare uncle aur vo sab vaha apne handmade chhije bech rahe the

Arohi ko dekhte hi payal buri tarah shocked ho gaye kyuki payal ya kisi ne usse es bare me to kuch bataya hi nahi tha

Payal- arohiiiiii??????
Arohi jo bahut busy thi payal ko dekh kar
Arohi- aapko kya chahiye madam?
Hum bargain nahi karte sab kuch handmade hai aur bahut achi quality ke hai esliye aap kuch bhi khareeb sakti ho lekin no bargain please

Payal- bargain ki bachhi
Tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi aur pyaar se uski gaal kheechne lagi

Arohi- mujhe kyu daat rahi ho?
Mujhe to jiju ne bola tha yaha aane ko aur aapko na batane ko
Payal- aur tu apne jiju ki chamchi ho gaye jo apni didi se baat chhupane lag gaye?

Lucifer- oye didi uski?
Usko apna kaam karne de aur chal yaha se
Hum date par aaye hai business karne nahi
Arohi- jao jao jiju bula rahe hai
Mujhe apna kaam karne do

Payal- tu ghar chal tujhe to ghar chal kar dekhungi main
Arohi- abhi jiju ko dekh lo kahi aur chura na le kitne dashing lag rahe hai

Payal usse aankh dikhate hue vaha se chali gaye vahi arohi vapas apne kaam me lag gaye
Vo bahut khush thi kyuki usne payal ko khush jo dekh liya tha aur chahiye hi kya tha usko

Payal- to ye sab tumne kiya?
Lucifer- maine to bas usse ek rasta dikhaya tha
Aur dekho result kitni bheed thi vaha
Acha business ho jayega

Payal- thank you lucifer
Thank you for everything and sorry for being rude
Lucifer- aaja tujhe ride karata hu aaj

Payal- mujhe dar lagta hai
Lucifer- dard nahi hota maja aata hai chal to
Fir jaha abhi tak payal lucifer ko apne sath kheech rahi thi abhi lucifer usse khechte hue sabse uche wale jhule par le gaya

Payal ko actually me bahut dar lag raha tha esliye usne lucifer ko bahut jor se pakad rakha tha vahi lucifer aur dar to sath sath jate hi nahi hai to uske bare me to baat hi kya karna

Jab jhule ne raftaar pakdi tab to payal ki halaat aur kharab hone lagi aur vo puri lucifer me sama gaye
Lucifer ne bhi us waqt koe faltu ki harkat nahi ki aur ab moment ko enjoy karne laga

Uske baad unhone vahi kuch halka fulka khaya aur fir vapas aa gaye....
Such me ek real date to aisi hi honi cahiye.
Jaha aapka partner kabhi na gaya ho. Lakin uski jane ki dili iccha ho. Jaha use bas happiness hi mile. Sath me kuch shocked bhi ache wale. Aur apna Lucifer in mamlo me kuch jyada hi acha hai bas uska mood hona chiye. Aur yaha Lucifer time se nahi aaya to ye baat to payal ke alawa baki sbko pata hai, Readers, writer sub ko hi. Aur ye Payal to such me Lucifer ko dil se chahane lagi hai aur wo ye baat accept bhi kar rahi hai. Aur usne apne Lucifer ke nature ko jo ki abhi tak usne dekha hai use kafi ache se smjh liya hai. Aur Lucifer ne jab ye kaha ki time bhut kam hai to uska matlb uske life se tha. Aur payal bechari ye smjha hi nahi payi. Apne Lucifer ne ab ye idea diya ya kahi se liya but idea acha tha aur handmade items ki kafi sell bhi ho rahi hai. Aur sahi kaha Lucifer ke bachpan ki baat na hi kare to hi acha hai. Ab to Lucifer, Payal ke dil me aur bhi gahrayiyo me utar jayega.
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai. Bahut khub Lone survivor bhai.
 

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Lucifer 7 baje apne ghar se nikla payal ke ghar ki taraf,vo 7 baje apne ghar se nikla aur usne 7 baje payal ko pick karne ka bola tha
Ab koe usse kya hi kah sakta hai?
Yaha payal 4 baje se tayar hona start kar chuki thi aur abhi tak to puri ready hokar bathi lucifer ka intezaar kar rahi thi

Pata nahi kyu lekin uski dil ki dhakane bahut tej ho rakhi thi sayad kuch badal raha tha
Vo baar baar apne aap ko mirror me dekh rahi thi ki kahi kuch gadbad to nahi ho gaye hai aur jab sab same lagta to ghadi me time dekhne lagti

Kaha usne socha tha lucifer time se pehle aa jayega aur yaha time se pehle ki to baat hi chhodo vo time par bhi nahi aaya

Payal ka bahut man kar raha tha ki lucifer se puche ki vo kitni der me aa raha hai ya vo aa bhi raha hai ya nahi lekin uska hath phone par ja hi nahi raha tha

Kafi nervous lag rahi thi aur aaj arohi bhi to nahi thi uske pass jo usse normal kar sake

Abhi ke liye to vo sirf intezaar kar sakti thi aur kuch nahi aur vo intezaar hi kar rahi thi

Kabhi khud ko mirror me dekh kar niharti to kabhi window se bahar ki taraf dekhti
Time tha ki beetne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha aur na lucifer aane ka naam le raha tha

Aise ek masoom ladki ko intezaar karana kahi se bhi theek baat nahi hai lekin lucifer kab koe theek baat karta hai?

Lagbhag ek ghanta beet gaya aur ab payal se intezaar karna bahut muskil ho raha tha to usne puri himmat laga kar phone uthaya aur lucifer ka number dial kar diya

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hello

Lucifer- yaar main kitne der se tumhre ghar ke niche khada hu
Tumhe waqt ka koe andaja hai ya nahi? Aur upar se tumhra phone bhi nahi lag raha
Payal- kaha khade ho?

Lucifer- tumhre ghar ke niche
Aajao yaar kyu late kara rahi ho?
Payal window se niche dekhne lagti hai to usse ek ghadi khadi dikh jati hai jo thodi der pehle vaha nahi thi to vo samjh jati hai ki lucifer aa gaya hai

Usne jaldi se phone kaata apne aap ko ek baar aur mirror me dekha aur fir niche ki taraf chal di

Dil etni joro se dhadak raha tha uska ki kya hi bole sath me thodi ghabrahat bhi ho rahi rhe usse

Bilkul dheeme dheeme kadam niche ki aur ja rahe the uske aur ant me vo niche pahuch hi gaye aur us ghadi ke pass khadi hokar lucifer ko dekhne lagi kyuuki usse lucifer dikhae nahi de raha tha

Payal edhar udhar dekh rahi thi ki lucifer piche se nikal kar payal ko apni bahoo me bhar leta hai

Achanak se hue hamle se payal ki to fat ke hath me aagaye thi lekin jab usne touch masoom kiya to vo samjh gaye ki lucifer hi hai to thoda shant hue

Lucifer- you looking greaaat
Aur usko dheela chhod diya
Payal thoda edhar udhar dekhte hue thank you boli

Lucifer- vaise main samne se galle lagane wala tha lekin tum baar baar mud rahi thi esliye piche se laga liya hope you didn't feel anything
Lucifer muskurate hue bola lekin payal ne koe jawab nahi diya sayad abhi jo hua usko realize karne ki kosis kar rahi thi

Lucifer- chale ya yahi blush karte rahne ka irada hai?
Payal vaise hi sarm se gaddi ja rahi thi lucifer ke aise bolne se to vo puri laal pad gaye

Bina kuch bole chhup chhap apni muskurahat chhupate hue vo car me bath gaye
Lucifer bhi batha aur chal diye vo dono apni manjil ki taraf

Lucifer- tum par etna makeup suit nahi karta
Payal- hai?
Payal ne pehli baar apni najar utha kar lucifer ki taraf dekha

Lucifer- tumhri khubsurati tumhri saadgi me hi hai
Payal- maine halka sa hi kiya tha
Vo thoda udas hote hue boli

Lucifer- saadgi me tum cute lagti ho aur makeup me hot
Kahi main jal na jau aaj
Lucifer ne firse laal kar diya payal ko aur vo vapas blush karne lagi

Lucifer- vaise tum me change bahut aa gaya hai
First time mile tab kuch nahi boli second time me bhi kuch nahi boli third fourth time me khub ladi aur ab dekho kaise blush kiye ja rahi ho
Payal- bas bhi karo

Lucifer- kitni gulabi ho yaar tum
Payal ko normally aise baatein bilkul achi nahi lagti thi lekin lucifer ke muh se sun kar vo pani pani hue ja rahi thi

Lucifer- aaj tumhri sari sarm door kar dunga main
Pain killer bhi laya hu main
Payal- kyu?

Lucifer- dard me hi to maja hai
Kya pata kabhi tumhe jarurat pad jaye?
Payal- aapke date ka ye matlab hota hai kya?

Lucifer- ye date maine nahi tumne rakhi thi to eska jo matlab nikal raha hai vo bhi tumhre liye hi nikal raha hai
Payal- baatein ghumana to koe aapse sikhe

Lucifer- kaha chalna hai?
Payal- leke to aap hi chal rahe ho?

Lucifer- main to hotel leke jana chahta hu
Payal- hotel hi sahi fir

Lucifer- are waw ladki etni jaldi line par aagaye?
Payal- main samjhne lag gaye hu tumhe esliye dar nahi ab

Lucifer- ek jhatke me aap se tum par aagaye tum to?
Payal- aap bol deti hu

Lucifer- apna bol lo
Vo jada acha rahega
Payal- jada jaldi nahi hai tumhe?

Lucifer- bahut jaldi hai mujhe
Waqt ki bahut shortage chal rahi hai
Payal- acha kyu?

Lucifer- bahut kaam karna hai aur time bahut kam
Payal- bahut time hai abhi

Lucifer- time hi to nahi hai
Vaise tumhe lubricant pasand hai ya sukha sukha?
Payal- sukha sukha

Lucifer- dard hoga fir
Payal- vo dard dard nahi

Lucifer- jamane ke samne etni sarafat aur mere samne sukha sukha?
Waw re kalyug aur kya dikhayega mujhe?
Payal- aapko aise language achi lagti hai to aise language me to aise hi baat ki jati hai

Lucifer- meri language bhi sikh li?
Etna fast bhi nahi hona chahiye tha
Payal- abhi to bola time kam hai to fir hume bhi speed badha deni chahiye

Lucifer- ladki samjhdar ho gaye hai
Payal- hona padta hai

Lucifer- lo aa gaye humari manjil
Payal lucifer me etna kho gaye thi ki vo aas pass dhayan dena hi bhul gaye

Jab lucifer ne manjil ke bare me bola tab jake usse yaad aaya aur bahar dekhne lagi

Vaha ek mela laga hua tha jisse dekhte hi payal ke chehre par ek alag hi nikhaar aa gaya jo lucifer ke milne ke time aaya tha us se bhi kahi badh kar

Payal- wowww melllllaaaa
Maine kabhi nahi dekha
Lucifer- aaj main dikha deta hu
Aur lucifer me car side me park ki aur dono bahar aagaye

Payal to mele ko dekh kar hi ek chhoti bachhi ban gaye thi vo kabhi edhar ghumti to kabhi udhar

Sayad bachpan acha nahi ghujra hoga uska esliye aisa ho raha ho, kabhi usse mela dikhane wala hi nahi mila ho?

Vo bahut khush thi usne lucifer ka hath pakda aur usse lagbhag khechte hue ander ki taraf le jane lagi

Lucifer bhi uske piche piche khicha chala gaya
Payal na kuch khareed rahi thi na kuch kha pee rahi thi vo bas chhije dekh dekh kar khush ho rahi thi

Kuch jada hi simple ladki thi vo ya fir vo ye janti thi ki yaha chahe chhije sasti mile, chache uska kaam theek chalne lag gaya hai lekin uske upar bahut jada responsibilities hai aur vo ye sab chhije afford nahi kar payegi

Vo bina khaye peeye aise hi chhije dekh dekh kar khush ho rahi thi aur lucifer na chahte hue bhi uski taraf bahut jada attract hone laga

Lucifer- kuch khana nahi hai kya?
Payal- khate to har roj hai ghar par
Vo dekho na kitna cute bacha dance kar raha hai vaha?
Aur vaha vo chhote chhote bache kitne khush hai na apni mummy papa ke sath
Aur vo jhulo ko dekha kaise log khushi se chhila rahe hai
Aur kitne sundar sundar toys hai
Vo bachi ko dekho kaise un khilone ki taraf dekh rahi hai jaise vohi uski life ho
Aur uska to alag hi chal raha hai vo to aaj sare golgappe kha kar hi ghar jayega yaha se
Kitna sundar hai na ye sab?
Sab kitne khush lag rahe hai

Lucifer payal ki baaton me kahi kho hi gaya tha ab usse bas uska muskurata hua chehra dikh raha tha lekin sun kuch bhi nahi raha tha

Payal- Lucifer????
Are kaha kho gaye?
Main bol rahi hu ki vaha bahut bheed lag rahi hai chalo chalke dekhte hai kya hai vaha?
Payal lucifer ko apni taraf aise dekhte hue usse hilate hue bolti hai to lucifer bhi nind se jaag jata hai

Lucifer- ha kya kya bol rahi ho?
Payal- kaha kho gaye tum?

Lucifer- tum me
Payal- main bol rahi thi vaha bahut bheed hai chalo na dekhte hai kya hai vaha
Aur payal vapas lucifer ka hath pakadte hue uska reply sune bina usse khichte hue us side me leke jane lagi

Lucifer abhi payal me nahi khoya tha vo apne bachpan me kho gaya tha
Kyuki na to payal ne apna bachpan jeeya aur na lucifer ne

Payal ka to usse pata nahi tha ki kaisa raha vo bas imagine kar raha tha ki acha nahi raha hoga aur apne ke bare me to vo soche na to hi acha hai
Khelne khudne ki umar me uske hatho me hathiyaar jo thama diye gaye the

Lucifer baar baar apne bachpan me ghusa ja raha tha aur fir payal usse apni muskaan se vapas reality me la rahi thi

Jaisa ki abhi hua kyuki payal ko vaha kuch handmade garments dikhe jo vo khud banati thi jisse dekh kar usse bahut acha feel hua

Usse laga ki ab log es tarah ki chhijo ke liye bhi dhayan dene lage hai

Esliye vo bheed ko chhirte hue samne aagaye aur samne dekhte hi uski aankhen chhodi ho gaye kyuki samne arohi thi aur uske sath uske orphans ke bahut sare uncle aur vo sab vaha apne handmade chhije bech rahe the

Arohi ko dekhte hi payal buri tarah shocked ho gaye kyuki payal ya kisi ne usse es bare me to kuch bataya hi nahi tha

Payal- arohiiiiii??????
Arohi jo bahut busy thi payal ko dekh kar
Arohi- aapko kya chahiye madam?
Hum bargain nahi karte sab kuch handmade hai aur bahut achi quality ke hai esliye aap kuch bhi khareeb sakti ho lekin no bargain please

Payal- bargain ki bachhi
Tune mujhe bataya bhi nahi aur pyaar se uski gaal kheechne lagi

Arohi- mujhe kyu daat rahi ho?
Mujhe to jiju ne bola tha yaha aane ko aur aapko na batane ko
Payal- aur tu apne jiju ki chamchi ho gaye jo apni didi se baat chhupane lag gaye?

Lucifer- oye didi uski?
Usko apna kaam karne de aur chal yaha se
Hum date par aaye hai business karne nahi
Arohi- jao jao jiju bula rahe hai
Mujhe apna kaam karne do

Payal- tu ghar chal tujhe to ghar chal kar dekhungi main
Arohi- abhi jiju ko dekh lo kahi aur chura na le kitne dashing lag rahe hai

Payal usse aankh dikhate hue vaha se chali gaye vahi arohi vapas apne kaam me lag gaye
Vo bahut khush thi kyuki usne payal ko khush jo dekh liya tha aur chahiye hi kya tha usko

Payal- to ye sab tumne kiya?
Lucifer- maine to bas usse ek rasta dikhaya tha
Aur dekho result kitni bheed thi vaha
Acha business ho jayega

Payal- thank you lucifer
Thank you for everything and sorry for being rude
Lucifer- aaja tujhe ride karata hu aaj

Payal- mujhe dar lagta hai
Lucifer- dard nahi hota maja aata hai chal to
Fir jaha abhi tak payal lucifer ko apne sath kheech rahi thi abhi lucifer usse khechte hue sabse uche wale jhule par le gaya

Payal ko actually me bahut dar lag raha tha esliye usne lucifer ko bahut jor se pakad rakha tha vahi lucifer aur dar to sath sath jate hi nahi hai to uske bare me to baat hi kya karna

Jab jhule ne raftaar pakdi tab to payal ki halaat aur kharab hone lagi aur vo puri lucifer me sama gaye
Lucifer ne bhi us waqt koe faltu ki harkat nahi ki aur ab moment ko enjoy karne laga

Uske baad unhone vahi kuch halka fulka khaya aur fir vapas aa gaye....
Wow beautiful update bhai
 
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