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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Wahhh abhi to devil ka suru bhi nahi hua aur bas anika ke kodo se hi Sekhar behosh ho gaya. Lakin ye baat bhi note karne wali hai ki usne Bhi kuch kam torcher nahi kiya shekhar ko. Aur mujhe aisa kyu lagta hai wo gost rider roshni hi anika hai. Aur yaha Lucifer to Anika ko samjha bhi raha hai jisase wo uske jaisi galti na kare. Ab wo to wakt hi batayega ki kya hota hai aage.
Lucifer kabhi samjha hai jo koe uske samjhane se samjhe?
Yaha Mitika ko jarur dark lord ke bare me kuch aisa pata chla hoga jo Lucifer ke future ke liye bahut hi bura hoga. Ab dekhte hai wo hoga kab. Aur Lucifer ne Inayaa ko bhi ab ashmita ke bare me sub bata diya ab dekhte hai wo log kb asmita se is bare me baat karte hai aur tab kon sa naya bawandar start hota hai.
Hogaye baat bhai
Aur is Update se ye bhi clear hota hai ki asmita hi Lucifer ko mukti de skti hai. Lakin wo hoga kaise ye bhi dekhne wali baat hogi. Abhi bhi bahut se sawal hai jinke jawab aage hi pata chenge.
Sawal hi to bache hai bas bhai
Cho km se kam itne bade raj ka aaj khulasa ho hi gaya. Sala Raichand ki to bahut buri lagegi aisa kyu lag raha hai mujhe ki wo bahut jald sadak par aane wala hai. Dekhte hai kya karta hai Lucifer uska aur kya isme Ashmita uska sath degi. Ya nahi.
Etni jaldi to nahi aaega vo
Chlo apni do main heroine to ek ho gayi. Ab asmita aur inaaya ek ho gayi. Sath me yaha ashmita ne ek chij aur show kr di ki Lucifer ko isase jyada koi nahi samjhti hai. Tabhi to usne inaaya ke upar itna bada boom fod diya.
Ashmita aise hi bomb fodti rahegi
Ab dekhte hai usne kya karne ka socha hai.aur ye priyanka ka hath mujhe Anisha ke maa ya Asmita ke maa ke murder me kyu lag raha hai. Ab ye to aage hi pata chlega lakin itna to fix hai jo bhi hai bahut hi bada kaand kiya hai priyanka ne bhi.
Ye to waqt hi batega bhai
 

Lone survivor

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Past

Lucifer ek gufa me ja raha tha, hatho me uski favorite talwaar thi hi aur chehre par humesha ki tarah koe bhaav nahi dikh raha tha

Usse bahut dheere dheere chalna pad raha tha kyuki rasta bahut chhota tha aur lucifer muskilo se yaha vaha se nikal kar aage badh raha tha

Bahut der baad vo us guffa ke ant me pahuch gaya aur vaha ek baba meditate kar rahe the

Lucifer ne unko dekha to unki aankhen band thi

Vaise to lucifer yaha unka dhayan bhang karvane hi aaya tha lekin abhi unhe meditate karte dekh ek pass ke pathar ke upar bath gaya

Thode time baad us baba ko bhi lucifer feel ho gaya to unhone apne aankhen khol li

Ek alag hi tej tha unki aankhon me aur lucifer ko dekh kar chehre par ek muskaan bhi aagaye

Baba- main tumhra hi intezaar kar raha tha
Lucifer- kyu?
Mujhe bhi mere bare me batana hai kya?

Baba- aisa kya hai jo tumhe nahi pata?
Lucifer- aap hi batate rahte ho mere bare me
Aapko hi maloom hoga kya nahi pata mujhe

Baba- main jisse batata hu usse nahi pata lekin tumhe to sari jankari hai
Lucifer- nahi mujhe to bilkul nahi hai
Roshini daliye mere bhavisya par

Baba- roshini daale?
Beta tum vo andhere ho jiske upar koe roshini kaam nahi karengi
Lucifer- bol to sahi rahe ho aap

Baba- vo ladki bahut prem karti hai tumse
Lucifer- ye to mujhe pata hai
Lekin ye nahi pata ki aapko mere bare me jankariya mil kaha se rahi hai?

Baba- main to fakir hu
Jo dikhae deta hai bol deta hu
Lucifer- mujhe bhi to batao kuch

Baba- kya janana hai tumhe?
Lucifer- kya dikh raha hai aapko?

Baba- takleef, peeda
Lucifer- naya batao ye to mujhe pata hai

Baba- tum yaha se jane wale ho
Lucifer- aur kaha jaunga main?

Baba- jaha tumhe mukti milegi
Lucifer- acha?
Mujhe mukti bhi mil sakti hai?
Pata hi nahi tha ye to

Baba- mukti sabko milti hai
Lucifer- sabko?
Kya main sab me aata hu?

Baba- tumhe pyaar karne wale bahut jiddi hai
Vo tumhe mukti dilayenge
Lucifer- kab aaega vo haseen din?

Baba- abhi to bahut waqt hai
Bahut kaam karne hai tumhe
Lucifer- kitni laashe?

Baba- jitni tumne aaj tak bichae hai unki ginti ki koe mahtavta nahi rahegi etni
Lucifer- maja aaega fir to

Baba- nahi aaega
Lucifer- bahut maja aaega baba

Baba- tum badloge lucifer
Tumhe badlne wale log aayenge
Lucifer- mera baap hi mujhe nahi badal paaya
Aur kisi se to kya hi umeed kare

Baba- tumhre pitaji ne to tumhe banaya hai
Badlne wale bhi to vohi banayenge
Lucifer- ek baat bataye

Baba- yehi puchna chahte ho na ki kyu banaya tumhe aisa?
Lucifer- antaryami ho aap to

Baba- burae par achae ki jeet dikhane ke liye
Lucifer- jeetunga to main hi fir achae kaise dikh jayegi?

Baba- sab pata chal jayega sahi waqt aane do
Lucifer- mitika ko to sab bata dete ho
Mere samne paheliya bhujha rahe ho

Baba- vo dil se janana chahti hai aur tum mera test le rahe ho
Lucifer- test main nahi meri talwar leti hai baba

Baba- kara lo fir test
Uthao apni talwar
Lucifer- abhi to aisi naubat nahi aae hai
Aur dua karta hu aaye bhi nahi

Baba- tum khush rahna sikho
Ab khushi ke din aane wale hai
Lucifer- hahaha
Khushi ke din Lucifer ki jindagi me?
Acha majak tha baba

Baba- aayega
Sabko apne hisse ki khushi milti hai
Lucifer- dekhte hai
Lekin ab mere bare me bhavisyavani karni band kar do
Agar koe puchne bhi aaye to kuch mat bolna

Baba- sache dil se aane wale ke liye yaha manae nahi hoti
Agar koe puchega to main mana nahi kar paunga
Lucifer- fir mujhe bhi apni talwar ka test karana padega
Main nahi chahta ki vo aur jada pareshan ho mere bhavisay ko lekar esliye aapse bol raha hu
Umeed karta hu aap samjhoge meri es baat ko

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar bahar aa jata hai****

Aaj office me ashmita nahi aaye thi aur anisha baar baar ashmita ke cabin ki taraf dekh rahi thi
Usse pata nahi kyu lekin ghabraht ho rahi thi

Aisa dil kar raha tha ki ek baar ashmita usse dikh jaye, thoda daate usse aur fir chali jaye
Etna hi kafi thi anisha ke liye

Usne ek baar lucifer ko bhi call karne ki kosis ki lekin usne bhi phone attend nahi kiya

Bechari na to ache se kaam kar pa rahi thi aur usse ashmita ki daat sunae de rahi thi

Kya kare aisi situation me koe?
Jab kisi ke na hone se aapko etna fark padne lag jaye to samjh jana ki mamla bahut gambhir ho gaya hai

Anisha aise hi pareshan hote hue apna kaam karne lagi aur din dhaal gaya***

Naag ke farmhouse par

Anika- uth gaya kya vo?
Naag- doctor ne kaha hai ki usko sadma laga hai

Anika- vo sab nahi pata mujhe
Vo kab uthega ye batao
Naag- kuch bataya nahi doctor ne
Bola uthne ko to abhi uth jaye aur na uthe to pure week na uthe

Anika- etna time nahi hai mere pass
Usse jaldi se uthna hoga
Sahan nahi ho raha uska aaram se sona
Naag- ye to usko marne se pehle sochna chahiye tha
Chot us jagah deni chahiye jis jagah dard bahut ho lekin nisaan na pade

Anika- mujhe mat sikhao ye sab
Agar vo jaldi se nahi utha to jinda jala dalungi use
Naag- jala dalo mujhe us se kya
Bhai se jawab de dena khud

Anika- tumhra bhai mera boss hai kya?
Mujhe kisi ko bhi jawab dene ki jarurat nahi hai
Naag- paida hai vo behosh
Maar do fir jake
Kya pata gussa shant ho jaye aapka

Anika- tum mujhse aise kyu baat karte ho?
Naag- i respect those whose deserves to be respected

Anika- fir to lucifer ko bhi nahi karte honge
Naag- bahut kaam hai mujhe
Aur aap apne ghar ja sakti ho agar esse hosh aaya to main khabar pahucha dunga

Anika- mere yaha rahne se koe problem hai tumhe?
Naag- ha meri girlfriend aati hai yaha

Anika- to main kya usse leke bhag jaungi?
Etni jagah hai main kahi bhi adjust kar lungi
Naag- theek hai kar lo fir
Aur naag vaha se bahar aa jata hai

Kahi na kahi vo anika se impress nahi tha aur yehi vajah thi ki vo es tarah se baat karta tha us se
Nahi to baki sab se naag ki baat karne ka tarika bahut acha rahta hai
Sayad anika ne usko almost maut ke darshan kara diye the esliye vo usse pasand nahi karta tha aur fir koe reason tha

Sabki jindagi me etni bhasad paida karke lucifer shanti se inaaya ki bahoo me leta hua tha

Inaaya- kya lagta hai tumhe?
Lucifer- I'm always ready for an another round

Inaaya- main ashu ke bare me baat kar rahi hu
Lucifer- vo handle kar legi
She is strong girl

Inaaya- mujhe kyu tension ho rahi hai?
Lucifer- mujhe kaise pata hoga?
Tum vaise bhi har chhij ki tension leti rahti ho

Inaaya- ha main pagal jo hu
Lucifer- vo to tum ho hi

Inaaya- phone karke pucho na usse kya chal raha hai?
Lucifer- usko jeene do yaar
Sambhalne ka mokka do usse
Dekhna vo pehle se better hoke aayegi vapas

Inaaya- i hope you
Kya anisha se baat karegi vo?
Lucifer- meri probability ke hisaab se pehle apne baap se baat karegi

Inaaya- us se kya baat karni?
Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Un dono ka personal matter hai
Main kya bata sakta hu

Inaaya- hum chale uske ghar milne?
Lucifer- nahi
Usko apni taraf se chhije handle karne do
Jab humari jarurat padegi tab usse hum sabse aage khade milenge lekin abhi usko sambhalne do

Inaaya- as you wish
Lucifer- aise hi meri baat manti rahna aur ek achi girlfriend banna....
 

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UPDATE-148
Past

Lucifer ek gufa me ja raha tha, hatho me uski favorite talwaar thi hi aur chehre par humesha ki tarah koe bhaav nahi dikh raha tha

Usse bahut dheere dheere chalna pad raha tha kyuki rasta bahut chhota tha aur lucifer muskilo se yaha vaha se nikal kar aage badh raha tha

Bahut der baad vo us guffa ke ant me pahuch gaya aur vaha ek baba meditate kar rahe the

Lucifer ne unko dekha to unki aankhen band thi

Vaise to lucifer yaha unka dhayan bhang karvane hi aaya tha lekin abhi unhe meditate karte dekh ek pass ke pathar ke upar bath gaya

Thode time baad us baba ko bhi lucifer feel ho gaya to unhone apne aankhen khol li

Ek alag hi tej tha unki aankhon me aur lucifer ko dekh kar chehre par ek muskaan bhi aagaye

Baba- main tumhra hi intezaar kar raha tha
Lucifer- kyu?
Mujhe bhi mere bare me batana hai kya?

Baba- aisa kya hai jo tumhe nahi pata?
Lucifer- aap hi batate rahte ho mere bare me
Aapko hi maloom hoga kya nahi pata mujhe

Baba- main jisse batata hu usse nahi pata lekin tumhe to sari jankari hai
Lucifer- nahi mujhe to bilkul nahi hai
Roshini daliye mere bhavisya par

Baba- roshini daale?
Beta tum vo andhere ho jiske upar koe roshini kaam nahi karengi
Lucifer- bol to sahi rahe ho aap

Baba- vo ladki bahut prem karti hai tumse
Lucifer- ye to mujhe pata hai
Lekin ye nahi pata ki aapko mere bare me jankariya mil kaha se rahi hai?

Baba- main to fakir hu
Jo dikhae deta hai bol deta hu
Lucifer- mujhe bhi to batao kuch

Baba- kya janana hai tumhe?
Lucifer- kya dikh raha hai aapko?

Baba- takleef, peeda
Lucifer- naya batao ye to mujhe pata hai

Baba- tum yaha se jane wale ho
Lucifer- aur kaha jaunga main?

Baba- jaha tumhe mukti milegi
Lucifer- acha?
Mujhe mukti bhi mil sakti hai?
Pata hi nahi tha ye to

Baba- mukti sabko milti hai
Lucifer- sabko?
Kya main sab me aata hu?

Baba- tumhe pyaar karne wale bahut jiddi hai
Vo tumhe mukti dilayenge
Lucifer- kab aaega vo haseen din?

Baba- abhi to bahut waqt hai
Bahut kaam karne hai tumhe
Lucifer- kitni laashe?

Baba- jitni tumne aaj tak bichae hai unki ginti ki koe mahtavta nahi rahegi etni
Lucifer- maja aaega fir to

Baba- nahi aaega
Lucifer- bahut maja aaega baba

Baba- tum badloge lucifer
Tumhe badlne wale log aayenge
Lucifer- mera baap hi mujhe nahi badal paaya
Aur kisi se to kya hi umeed kare

Baba- tumhre pitaji ne to tumhe banaya hai
Badlne wale bhi to vohi banayenge
Lucifer- ek baat bataye

Baba- yehi puchna chahte ho na ki kyu banaya tumhe aisa?
Lucifer- antaryami ho aap to

Baba- burae par achae ki jeet dikhane ke liye
Lucifer- jeetunga to main hi fir achae kaise dikh jayegi?

Baba- sab pata chal jayega sahi waqt aane do
Lucifer- mitika ko to sab bata dete ho
Mere samne paheliya bhujha rahe ho

Baba- vo dil se janana chahti hai aur tum mera test le rahe ho
Lucifer- test main nahi meri talwar leti hai baba

Baba- kara lo fir test
Uthao apni talwar
Lucifer- abhi to aisi naubat nahi aae hai
Aur dua karta hu aaye bhi nahi

Baba- tum khush rahna sikho
Ab khushi ke din aane wale hai
Lucifer- hahaha
Khushi ke din Lucifer ki jindagi me?
Acha majak tha baba

Baba- aayega
Sabko apne hisse ki khushi milti hai
Lucifer- dekhte hai
Lekin ab mere bare me bhavisyavani karni band kar do
Agar koe puchne bhi aaye to kuch mat bolna

Baba- sache dil se aane wale ke liye yaha manae nahi hoti
Agar koe puchega to main mana nahi kar paunga
Lucifer- fir mujhe bhi apni talwar ka test karana padega
Main nahi chahta ki vo aur jada pareshan ho mere bhavisay ko lekar esliye aapse bol raha hu
Umeed karta hu aap samjhoge meri es baat ko

Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar bahar aa jata hai****

Aaj office me ashmita nahi aaye thi aur anisha baar baar ashmita ke cabin ki taraf dekh rahi thi
Usse pata nahi kyu lekin ghabraht ho rahi thi

Aisa dil kar raha tha ki ek baar ashmita usse dikh jaye, thoda daate usse aur fir chali jaye
Etna hi kafi thi anisha ke liye

Usne ek baar lucifer ko bhi call karne ki kosis ki lekin usne bhi phone attend nahi kiya

Bechari na to ache se kaam kar pa rahi thi aur usse ashmita ki daat sunae de rahi thi

Kya kare aisi situation me koe?
Jab kisi ke na hone se aapko etna fark padne lag jaye to samjh jana ki mamla bahut gambhir ho gaya hai

Anisha aise hi pareshan hote hue apna kaam karne lagi aur din dhaal gaya***

Naag ke farmhouse par

Anika- uth gaya kya vo?
Naag- doctor ne kaha hai ki usko sadma laga hai

Anika- vo sab nahi pata mujhe
Vo kab uthega ye batao
Naag- kuch bataya nahi doctor ne
Bola uthne ko to abhi uth jaye aur na uthe to pure week na uthe

Anika- etna time nahi hai mere pass
Usse jaldi se uthna hoga
Sahan nahi ho raha uska aaram se sona
Naag- ye to usko marne se pehle sochna chahiye tha
Chot us jagah deni chahiye jis jagah dard bahut ho lekin nisaan na pade

Anika- mujhe mat sikhao ye sab
Agar vo jaldi se nahi utha to jinda jala dalungi use
Naag- jala dalo mujhe us se kya
Bhai se jawab de dena khud

Anika- tumhra bhai mera boss hai kya?
Mujhe kisi ko bhi jawab dene ki jarurat nahi hai
Naag- paida hai vo behosh
Maar do fir jake
Kya pata gussa shant ho jaye aapka

Anika- tum mujhse aise kyu baat karte ho?
Naag- i respect those whose deserves to be respected

Anika- fir to lucifer ko bhi nahi karte honge
Naag- bahut kaam hai mujhe
Aur aap apne ghar ja sakti ho agar esse hosh aaya to main khabar pahucha dunga

Anika- mere yaha rahne se koe problem hai tumhe?
Naag- ha meri girlfriend aati hai yaha

Anika- to main kya usse leke bhag jaungi?
Etni jagah hai main kahi bhi adjust kar lungi
Naag- theek hai kar lo fir
Aur naag vaha se bahar aa jata hai

Kahi na kahi vo anika se impress nahi tha aur yehi vajah thi ki vo es tarah se baat karta tha us se
Nahi to baki sab se naag ki baat karne ka tarika bahut acha rahta hai
Sayad anika ne usko almost maut ke darshan kara diye the esliye vo usse pasand nahi karta tha aur fir koe reason tha

Sabki jindagi me etni bhasad paida karke lucifer shanti se inaaya ki bahoo me leta hua tha

Inaaya- kya lagta hai tumhe?
Lucifer- I'm always ready for an another round

Inaaya- main ashu ke bare me baat kar rahi hu
Lucifer- vo handle kar legi
She is strong girl

Inaaya- mujhe kyu tension ho rahi hai?
Lucifer- mujhe kaise pata hoga?
Tum vaise bhi har chhij ki tension leti rahti ho

Inaaya- ha main pagal jo hu
Lucifer- vo to tum ho hi

Inaaya- phone karke pucho na usse kya chal raha hai?
Lucifer- usko jeene do yaar
Sambhalne ka mokka do usse
Dekhna vo pehle se better hoke aayegi vapas

Inaaya- i hope you
Kya anisha se baat karegi vo?
Lucifer- meri probability ke hisaab se pehle apne baap se baat karegi

Inaaya- us se kya baat karni?
Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Un dono ka personal matter hai
Main kya bata sakta hu

Inaaya- hum chale uske ghar milne?
Lucifer- nahi
Usko apni taraf se chhije handle karne do
Jab humari jarurat padegi tab usse hum sabse aage khade milenge lekin abhi usko sambhalne do

Inaaya- as you wish
Lucifer- aise hi meri baat manti rahna aur ek achi girlfriend banna....
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