Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[The king]

UPDATE-149
Raichand- ho gaya meri beti ka gussa shant?
Ashmita- konsi beti ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Meri?
Didi ki?
Ya fir uski jisko aap bich raste me chhod kar aa gaye the

Raichand- kya bol rahi ho tum?
Ashmita- jo aap sun rahe ho
Aisa kaise kar sakte ho aap humare sath?

Raichand- mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Tum kya bol rahi ho?
Ashmita- aapne etne bure kaam kiye hai apni life me ki ab aapko aadhe to yaad bhi nahi aate

Raichand- ha maine galat kaam kiye hai lekin ab main unki vajah se pahchta raha hu
Main unhe theek karna chahta hu
Ashmita- acha?
Ek baar bhi kosis ki kya aapne?
Aur kosis to chhodiye abhi jo inaaya ke sath kiya kya vo aapke pachtatap hai?

Raichand- dekho main inaaya aur suresh ke sath bura kiya hai
Main manta hu
Main aur bhi kae zindagiya tabhah ki hai lekin main unki vajah se apni family nahi tod sakta
Tum jo bologi vo main karunga lekin mujhe chhod ke mat jana

Ashmita- aapne mere liye raste hi nahi chhode
Priyanka naam ki kisi aurat ko jante ho aap?
Raichand ne priyanka naam suna aur khamosh ho gaya
Jaise sabad uske muh me aate aate rah gaye

Ashmita- boliye
Bolte kyu nahi?
Raichand- ha janta hu

Ashmita- uski ek beti bhi hai
Jante ho aap?
Raichand- maine dekha nahi usse

Ashmita- dekhoge kaise jab janam se pehle hi bhag aaye the to
Raichand- ashu meri jaan meri baat suno

Ashmita- door raho mujhse
Kuch nahi sunana mujhe
Raichand- please ek baar meri baat to suno

Ashmita- vo aapki hi beti hai na?
Meri hi behan hai na?
Raichand- ha

Ashmita- aap kaise kar sakte ho ye?
Kaise aapne humari taraf, mom ki taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha?
Kaise?
Raichand- tumhri mom ke jane ke baad main toot sa gaya tha aur mujhe sahare ki jarurt thi
Meri halaat samjhne ki kosis karo

Ashmita- meri mom tab jinda thi
Ye sab aapke college time ki baat hai aur us time tak mom jinda thi
Mujhe bevkoof banane ki kosis mat karo
Raichand- mujhse galti ho gaye beta

Ashmita- har ek galti ki ek saja hoti hai na?
Aapne hi sikhaya hai mujhe
Raichand- mujhe har saja manjur hai

Ashmita- meri najro ke samne mat aana kabhi jaan le lungi main aapki
Aur ashmita mud kar vaha se vapas chali gaye

Piche se raichand ne bahut kosis ki lekin vo bhi ashmita ke gusse se bahut ache se vakif tha

Usse pata tha es waqt ashmita ko rokna namumkeen hai
Ya to vo khud hurt ho jayegi ya fir dusre log hurt honge aur dusre logo ke hurt hone ke chances bahut jada dikh rahe the

Ashmita gusse me bahar aaye aur apni car leke vaha se chali gaye****

Anisha- hello
Lucifer- ha bolo

Anisha- main kab se call kar rahi hu
Ek baar utha kar batana to chahiye ki busy hu?
Lucifer- jab insaan ko uske phone par call aane ka pata hi na chale to vo kaise bataye?

Anisha- vo ashmita ma'am nahi aaye aaj office
Lucifer- to?

Anisha- aapne kuch bataya tha kya unhe?
Lucifer- ha bahut kuch

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- vo humari andar ki baat hai
Tumhe nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mere bare me baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya hue thi?
Lucifer- ashmita bol rahi thi ki anisha ko apni sundarta par ghamand hai

Anisha- please lucifer batao na
Lucifer- bata to raha hu
Usse lagta hai main tumhe jada attention de raha hu
Esliye sayad jal rahi thi vo

Anisha- aur koe baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- usko lagta hai humare bich kuch chal raha hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi hai

Anisha- main ye sab nahi puch rahi
Humari jo baat hue thi uske bare me bataya kya aapne?
Lucifer- are etni baat hue fir vo naraj ho gaye
Boli main jada hot hu anisha se to maine bol diya ki prove karke dikhao to fir to dance vagra karne lag gaye aur main horny ho gaya
Uske baad ki story nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mat hi batao
Main yaha pareshan hu aapko majak suj raha hai
Lucifer- ab kya koe sach bhi nahi bol sakta?

Anisha- mujhe sirf etna batao mere bare me kuch baat hue thi ya nahi?
Lucifer- tumhre bare me hi to sari baat thi
Main yubi badnaam ho raha hu
Kara kuch nahi aur naam kharab ho raha vo alag

Anisha- kisi ne mana kiya hai kuch na karne ko?
Lucifer- hai?
Kya boli?

Anisha- ok bye
Nahi baat hue to
Aur anisha jaldi se phone kaat deti hai vahi lucifer apne chhote se dimag me abhi jo hua usko pachane aur samjhne ki kosis karne lagta hai****

Jaise hi anisha ka phone katata hai vaise hi lucifer ka phone vapas bajne lagta hai aur es baar call payal ki thi

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- main badiya
Tum batao
Payal- main bhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaise yaad kiya?
Payal- aap to karte nahi hai to mujhe hi karna pad gaya

Lucifer- main yaad karne lag gaya to fir tumhe dikkat hone lag jayegi
Payal- aur vo kaise?

Lucifer- karne lagu yaad?
Fir pata chal jayega
Payal- koe dikkat nahi hogi

Lucifer- dekhte hai fir
Payal- vo kaam acha chal gaya hai

Lucifer- achi baat hai ye to
Payal- sab aapki vajah se hua hai

Lucifer- bada dil hai mera
Payal- vo to hai hi

Lucifer- aur kya chal raha hai?
Payal- bas vohi sab

Lucifer- to fir mujhe mera reward kab milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- bata du?
Payal- ulta hi bologe

Lucifer- vo to depend karta hai samne wale par vo kaise leta hai
Payal- ye baat bhi hai

Lucifer- kuch kaam tha kya tumhe?
Payal- nahi
Main to bas thank you bolne ke liye kiya tha

Lucifer- aur kuch nahi?
Payal- aur kya?

Lucifer- tum batao aur to
Payal- khana khane chaloge bahar mere sath?

Lucifer- date par?
Payal- ha

Lucifer- chalo fir khana kya khana
Achi jagah leke chalta hu tumhe
Payal- kaha?

Lucifer- achi jagah?
Payal- ye konsi jagah hai?

Lucifer- ye ek jannat hai jaha par tum mere upar bath kar pahuch sakti ho
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- mera matlab sirf mere sath hi chal sakti ho
Main hi dikha sakta hu tumhe vo jannat
Payal- theek hai dekhte hai aapki jannat

Lucifer- okay
Main bata dungi jab free hounga
Payal- theek hai
Dhayan rakhna apna

Lucifer- tum bhi***

Lucifer- are kaisi ho meri shreya?
Yaad aa rahi thi kya meri?
Shreya- sakal dekh apni yaad aane wale ki

Lucifer- bahut sundar hai
Pata hai mujhe
Shreya- kisi ko tum jaiso ki yaad na hi aaye to better hai

Lucifer- tumhri aankhen to kuch aur hi bata rahi hai
Shreya- tumhe bahut aankhen padhna aata hai jaise

Lucifer- bahut kuch aata hai mujhe to
Shreya- sab pata hai mujhe

Lucifer- rapist ki jaan bachane wali mujhe to gyaan na hi de to acha hai
Shreya- tumne khud se story banae thi vo
Sab samjh gaye main

Lucifer- acha to ye batao aaj yaha kyu aaye?
Etna to bahut ache se samjh raha hu main ki tumhe yaha koe kaam to hoga nahi
Shreya- tahalne aae thi main to
Aur tumhe kya main kuch bhi karu kahi bhi karu

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya
Karo jo karna hai
Ek aur ladki gaye
Shreya- jada imagination world me nahi rahte tum?

Lucifer- ja na tu yaha se
Lad kisi aur se
Main tujhse duriya rakhe hue hu
Shreya- mujhe bhi koe shauk nahi hai ladne k

Lucifer- to mat lado
Bas mujhe thoda duri banaye rakh
Shreya- meri life main kisi ke bhi pass jau kisi ke bhi door jau

Lucifer- main hi chala jata hu fir
Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi shreya usse gusse bhari najaro se dekhne lagti hai....

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[krish1152]

Nice update

 

[Death Kiñg]

Ashmita ki manodasha samjhi jaa sakti hai... Uski zindagi mein khushiyan shayad kabhi thehri hi nahi hain... Pehle Inaaya, fir Arjun, aur ab Anisha.. Lucifer bhi kabhi na kabhi chala hi jaayega, is baat ko bhi Ashmita achhe se jaanti hai... Aur dekha jaaye to Lucifer ke alawa baaki sab cheezon ka zimmedar sirf aur sirf Ashmita ka apna hi baap hai, Lucifer se bhi jo itne din door rahi wo, uska kaaran bhi Raichand hi tha... Kabhi na kabhi to Ashmita ka gussa baahar aana hi tha & I think ki Anisha waali baat sach mein bohot badi thi, jise bardaasht kar paane mein Ashmita saksham nahi thi... Aur isiliye finally uska gussa foota hai Raichand par, and I think ki future mein Ashmita ko aur bhi mauke milne waale hain aisa karne ke...

Raichand ne rona dhona to kiya hai... Kahin na kahin shuruat se laga bhi hai ki aur kuchh nahi to kam se kam Ashmita aur Tara se to pyaar karta hi hai Raichand, especially Ashmita se... Is update ko bhi padhkar aisa hi laga parantu jaisa insaan Raichand hai, koyi shanka nahi is baat mein ki aage chalkar wo Ashmita ko bhi darkinar kar sakta hai, jaise baaki sabhi ko karte aaya hai... Parantu dekhna ye hai ki, kya Lucifer is baar bhi koyi saza dega Raichand ko..? Anisha kya chahti hai ye sabse important hai, Ashmita aur Tara ke saamne sab sach aan ahi Anisha ke liye kaafi hai, ya fir Raichand ki tudaayi ek baar fir honi hai..?

Beharhal, ek aur baat saamne aa gayi ki Anisha cares for Ashmita... Dekhkar achha laga ki Ashmita ki absence mein Anisha kis tarah pareshan ho gayi... Usne Lucifer se baat ki parantu Lucifer ne use kuchh bhi nahi bataya, I think he wants Ashmita to talk with Anisha... Wo nahi chahta ki wo apni kisi bhi tarah ki input dono behno ke beech mein de, and this is the correct thing to do here... Ashmita apne baap ko prasad dene ke baad ab Anisha se hi milegi par jaisa ki maine kaha, sabse important sawaal yahi hai ki Anisha kya chahti hai, beshak wo Ashmita ki parvah karti hai, but I'm doubtful whether she'll stay with Ashmita or not...

Idhar, Inaaya bhi pareshan hai Ashmita ke liye, waise Ashmita ne jo Lucifer ke jaane ke baare mein kaha, wo bhi jhatka raha hoga Inaaya ke liye... Uski situation bhi koyi bohot achhi nahi hai, wo achhe se jaanti hai ki kabhi bhi uski khushiyon par grahan lag sakta hai, let's see how she'll handle herself after Lucifer dies... Well, yahi sabse interesting question hai kahani ka, Lucifer to mukt ho jaayega mrityu paakar, par uske pichhe in sabka kya? Maadhuri aur Lucifer mein yadi kuchh hota hai, aage chalkar, to bhi shayad Maadhuri Lucifer ke jaane ke baad sambhal jaaye, kyonki uske paas ek maksad hai apne bachon ke roop mein... Lekin Ashmita, Inaaya, Anisha (she has feelings for Lucifer,no?), Payal, and possibly Annika & Tara too, a mass – suicide in the making..?

Payal ne saamne se date par jaane ko kaha hai Lucifer ko, I think jaldi hi dono ke beech feelings ki baadh aane waali hai, jismein Payal ka beh jaana tay ho chuka hai... Wahin Anisha ne bhi jo dwiarthi baat kahi, wo bhi kisi aur hi taraf ishaara karti hai... Saar yahi hai in do updates ka ki do aur maasoom ladkiyan Lucifer ke moh jaal mein fanskar apni zindagi dukhon ke naam kar chuki hain... Well, waiting for Payal & Lucifer's next meeting...

Idhar past scenes mein pehla usi Baba ka tha jo Mitika ko Lucifer ke bhavishya ke baare mein bataya karte the... Unse milne gaya tha Lucifer, aur unki baatein shayad isi taraf ishaara kar rahi thi jo aaj present mein ho raha hai... Jaisa ki unhone kaha hi tha, bilkul waise hi Lucifer mein changes aa rahe hain... Parantu, unki doosri baat par agar dhyan diya jaaye to shayad abhi aur bhi bohot si laashein bichhani hongi Lucifer ko... Dekhte hain ye silsila kahaan jaakar rukega! Wahin doosre scene mein Shreya aur Lucifer ki nok – jhonk thi, saaf hai ki kis tarah ladayi ke bahaane hi wo Lucifer se baat karne ki koshish karti hogi...

Both the Updates were quite enthralling... Abhi emotional scenes ki bahaar aayi huyi hai kahani mein joki shayad kuchh aur updates tak chalne waali hai... Btw. kahin na kahin aisa lag raha hai ki Lucifer par jald hi koyi khatra mandrane waala hai, bohot samay se koyi potent danger to nahi hi aaya hai Lucifer par, itne din tak uski life normal rahe, aakhir ye possible kaise hai..?

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[Lib am]

UPDATE-149
Raichand- ho gaya meri beti ka gussa shant?
Ashmita- konsi beti ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Meri?
Didi ki?
Ya fir uski jisko aap bich raste me chhod kar aa gaye the

Raichand- kya bol rahi ho tum?
Ashmita- jo aap sun rahe ho
Aisa kaise kar sakte ho aap humare sath?

Raichand- mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Tum kya bol rahi ho?
Ashmita- aapne etne bure kaam kiye hai apni life me ki ab aapko aadhe to yaad bhi nahi aate

Raichand- ha maine galat kaam kiye hai lekin ab main unki vajah se pahchta raha hu
Main unhe theek karna chahta hu
Ashmita- acha?
Ek baar bhi kosis ki kya aapne?
Aur kosis to chhodiye abhi jo inaaya ke sath kiya kya vo aapke pachtatap hai?

Raichand- dekho main inaaya aur suresh ke sath bura kiya hai
Main manta hu
Main aur bhi kae zindagiya tabhah ki hai lekin main unki vajah se apni family nahi tod sakta
Tum jo bologi vo main karunga lekin mujhe chhod ke mat jana

Ashmita- aapne mere liye raste hi nahi chhode
Priyanka naam ki kisi aurat ko jante ho aap?
Raichand ne priyanka naam suna aur khamosh ho gaya
Jaise sabad uske muh me aate aate rah gaye

Ashmita- boliye
Bolte kyu nahi?
Raichand- ha janta hu

Ashmita- uski ek beti bhi hai
Jante ho aap?
Raichand- maine dekha nahi usse

Ashmita- dekhoge kaise jab janam se pehle hi bhag aaye the to
Raichand- ashu meri jaan meri baat suno

Ashmita- door raho mujhse
Kuch nahi sunana mujhe
Raichand- please ek baar meri baat to suno

Ashmita- vo aapki hi beti hai na?
Meri hi behan hai na?
Raichand- ha

Ashmita- aap kaise kar sakte ho ye?
Kaise aapne humari taraf, mom ki taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha?
Kaise?
Raichand- tumhri mom ke jane ke baad main toot sa gaya tha aur mujhe sahare ki jarurt thi
Meri halaat samjhne ki kosis karo

Ashmita- meri mom tab jinda thi
Ye sab aapke college time ki baat hai aur us time tak mom jinda thi
Mujhe bevkoof banane ki kosis mat karo
Raichand- mujhse galti ho gaye beta

Ashmita- har ek galti ki ek saja hoti hai na?
Aapne hi sikhaya hai mujhe
Raichand- mujhe har saja manjur hai

Ashmita- meri najro ke samne mat aana kabhi jaan le lungi main aapki
Aur ashmita mud kar vaha se vapas chali gaye

Piche se raichand ne bahut kosis ki lekin vo bhi ashmita ke gusse se bahut ache se vakif tha

Usse pata tha es waqt ashmita ko rokna namumkeen hai
Ya to vo khud hurt ho jayegi ya fir dusre log hurt honge aur dusre logo ke hurt hone ke chances bahut jada dikh rahe the

Ashmita gusse me bahar aaye aur apni car leke vaha se chali gaye****

Anisha- hello
Lucifer- ha bolo

Anisha- main kab se call kar rahi hu
Ek baar utha kar batana to chahiye ki busy hu?
Lucifer- jab insaan ko uske phone par call aane ka pata hi na chale to vo kaise bataye?

Anisha- vo ashmita ma'am nahi aaye aaj office
Lucifer- to?

Anisha- aapne kuch bataya tha kya unhe?
Lucifer- ha bahut kuch

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- vo humari andar ki baat hai
Tumhe nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mere bare me baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya hue thi?
Lucifer- ashmita bol rahi thi ki anisha ko apni sundarta par ghamand hai

Anisha- please lucifer batao na
Lucifer- bata to raha hu
Usse lagta hai main tumhe jada attention de raha hu
Esliye sayad jal rahi thi vo

Anisha- aur koe baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- usko lagta hai humare bich kuch chal raha hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi hai

Anisha- main ye sab nahi puch rahi
Humari jo baat hue thi uske bare me bataya kya aapne?
Lucifer- are etni baat hue fir vo naraj ho gaye
Boli main jada hot hu anisha se to maine bol diya ki prove karke dikhao to fir to dance vagra karne lag gaye aur main horny ho gaya
Uske baad ki story nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mat hi batao
Main yaha pareshan hu aapko majak suj raha hai
Lucifer- ab kya koe sach bhi nahi bol sakta?

Anisha- mujhe sirf etna batao mere bare me kuch baat hue thi ya nahi?
Lucifer- tumhre bare me hi to sari baat thi
Main yubi badnaam ho raha hu
Kara kuch nahi aur naam kharab ho raha vo alag

Anisha- kisi ne mana kiya hai kuch na karne ko?
Lucifer- hai?
Kya boli?

Anisha- ok bye
Nahi baat hue to
Aur anisha jaldi se phone kaat deti hai vahi lucifer apne chhote se dimag me abhi jo hua usko pachane aur samjhne ki kosis karne lagta hai****

Jaise hi anisha ka phone katata hai vaise hi lucifer ka phone vapas bajne lagta hai aur es baar call payal ki thi

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- main badiya
Tum batao
Payal- main bhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaise yaad kiya?
Payal- aap to karte nahi hai to mujhe hi karna pad gaya

Lucifer- main yaad karne lag gaya to fir tumhe dikkat hone lag jayegi
Payal- aur vo kaise?

Lucifer- karne lagu yaad?
Fir pata chal jayega
Payal- koe dikkat nahi hogi

Lucifer- dekhte hai fir
Payal- vo kaam acha chal gaya hai

Lucifer- achi baat hai ye to
Payal- sab aapki vajah se hua hai

Lucifer- bada dil hai mera
Payal- vo to hai hi

Lucifer- aur kya chal raha hai?
Payal- bas vohi sab

Lucifer- to fir mujhe mera reward kab milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- bata du?
Payal- ulta hi bologe

Lucifer- vo to depend karta hai samne wale par vo kaise leta hai
Payal- ye baat bhi hai

Lucifer- kuch kaam tha kya tumhe?
Payal- nahi
Main to bas thank you bolne ke liye kiya tha

Lucifer- aur kuch nahi?
Payal- aur kya?

Lucifer- tum batao aur to
Payal- khana khane chaloge bahar mere sath?

Lucifer- date par?
Payal- ha

Lucifer- chalo fir khana kya khana
Achi jagah leke chalta hu tumhe
Payal- kaha?

Lucifer- achi jagah?
Payal- ye konsi jagah hai?

Lucifer- ye ek jannat hai jaha par tum mere upar bath kar pahuch sakti ho
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- mera matlab sirf mere sath hi chal sakti ho
Main hi dikha sakta hu tumhe vo jannat
Payal- theek hai dekhte hai aapki jannat

Lucifer- okay
Main bata dungi jab free hounga
Payal- theek hai
Dhayan rakhna apna

Lucifer- tum bhi***

Lucifer- are kaisi ho meri shreya?
Yaad aa rahi thi kya meri?
Shreya- sakal dekh apni yaad aane wale ki

Lucifer- bahut sundar hai
Pata hai mujhe
Shreya- kisi ko tum jaiso ki yaad na hi aaye to better hai

Lucifer- tumhri aankhen to kuch aur hi bata rahi hai
Shreya- tumhe bahut aankhen padhna aata hai jaise

Lucifer- bahut kuch aata hai mujhe to
Shreya- sab pata hai mujhe

Lucifer- rapist ki jaan bachane wali mujhe to gyaan na hi de to acha hai
Shreya- tumne khud se story banae thi vo
Sab samjh gaye main

Lucifer- acha to ye batao aaj yaha kyu aaye?
Etna to bahut ache se samjh raha hu main ki tumhe yaha koe kaam to hoga nahi
Shreya- tahalne aae thi main to
Aur tumhe kya main kuch bhi karu kahi bhi karu

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya
Karo jo karna hai
Ek aur ladki gaye
Shreya- jada imagination world me nahi rahte tum?

Lucifer- ja na tu yaha se
Lad kisi aur se
Main tujhse duriya rakhe hue hu
Shreya- mujhe bhi koe shauk nahi hai ladne k

Lucifer- to mat lado
Bas mujhe thoda duri banaye rakh
Shreya- meri life main kisi ke bhi pass jau kisi ke bhi door jau

Lucifer- main hi chala jata hu fir
Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi shreya usse gusse bhari najaro se dekhne lagti hai....

To finally Asmita ne apne baap ko uski aukaat dikha hi di hai ab dekhte hai Raichand sudharta hai ya fir se apna kameenapan dikhata hai? Bas Asmita gusse mein kuch ka na baithe?

Udhar Anisha bechari ek taraf Asmita ko lekar pareshaan hai aur upper se ye Lucii ka chutiyapa band nahi hota hai magar aaj Anisha ke munh se kuch aisa lokal gaya hai jo aage jaa kar sabke rishte mein bhoochal laa sakta hai.

Bechari Payal bhi ab fansti jaa rahi hai Lucii ke jaal mein, magar kya hi kar sakte hai bhale dimaag se paidal hai aur jubaan se sirf gobar hi nikalta hai magar hai to dil ka saf aur Jin logo ko pasand karta hai Lucii unke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai to, isiliye ye sab ladkiya uske liye Fida ho jaati hai bhale hai rishta sabka uske saath alag hai.

Beautiful update.

 

[devil@07]

aaj update aayega?

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE-149
Raichand- ho gaya meri beti ka gussa shant?
Ashmita- konsi beti ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Meri?
Didi ki?
Ya fir uski jisko aap bich raste me chhod kar aa gaye the

Raichand- kya bol rahi ho tum?
Ashmita- jo aap sun rahe ho
Aisa kaise kar sakte ho aap humare sath?

Raichand- mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Tum kya bol rahi ho?
Ashmita- aapne etne bure kaam kiye hai apni life me ki ab aapko aadhe to yaad bhi nahi aate

Raichand- ha maine galat kaam kiye hai lekin ab main unki vajah se pahchta raha hu
Main unhe theek karna chahta hu
Ashmita- acha?
Ek baar bhi kosis ki kya aapne?
Aur kosis to chhodiye abhi jo inaaya ke sath kiya kya vo aapke pachtatap hai?

Raichand- dekho main inaaya aur suresh ke sath bura kiya hai
Main manta hu
Main aur bhi kae zindagiya tabhah ki hai lekin main unki vajah se apni family nahi tod sakta
Tum jo bologi vo main karunga lekin mujhe chhod ke mat jana

Ashmita- aapne mere liye raste hi nahi chhode
Priyanka naam ki kisi aurat ko jante ho aap?
Raichand ne priyanka naam suna aur khamosh ho gaya
Jaise sabad uske muh me aate aate rah gaye

Ashmita- boliye
Bolte kyu nahi?
Raichand- ha janta hu

Ashmita- uski ek beti bhi hai
Jante ho aap?
Raichand- maine dekha nahi usse

Ashmita- dekhoge kaise jab janam se pehle hi bhag aaye the to
Raichand- ashu meri jaan meri baat suno

Ashmita- door raho mujhse
Kuch nahi sunana mujhe
Raichand- please ek baar meri baat to suno

Ashmita- vo aapki hi beti hai na?
Meri hi behan hai na?
Raichand- ha

Ashmita- aap kaise kar sakte ho ye?
Kaise aapne humari taraf, mom ki taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha?
Kaise?
Raichand- tumhri mom ke jane ke baad main toot sa gaya tha aur mujhe sahare ki jarurt thi
Meri halaat samjhne ki kosis karo

Ashmita- meri mom tab jinda thi
Ye sab aapke college time ki baat hai aur us time tak mom jinda thi
Mujhe bevkoof banane ki kosis mat karo
Raichand- mujhse galti ho gaye beta

Ashmita- har ek galti ki ek saja hoti hai na?
Aapne hi sikhaya hai mujhe
Raichand- mujhe har saja manjur hai

Ashmita- meri najro ke samne mat aana kabhi jaan le lungi main aapki
Aur ashmita mud kar vaha se vapas chali gaye

Piche se raichand ne bahut kosis ki lekin vo bhi ashmita ke gusse se bahut ache se vakif tha

Usse pata tha es waqt ashmita ko rokna namumkeen hai
Ya to vo khud hurt ho jayegi ya fir dusre log hurt honge aur dusre logo ke hurt hone ke chances bahut jada dikh rahe the

Ashmita gusse me bahar aaye aur apni car leke vaha se chali gaye****

Anisha- hello
Lucifer- ha bolo

Anisha- main kab se call kar rahi hu
Ek baar utha kar batana to chahiye ki busy hu?
Lucifer- jab insaan ko uske phone par call aane ka pata hi na chale to vo kaise bataye?

Anisha- vo ashmita ma'am nahi aaye aaj office
Lucifer- to?

Anisha- aapne kuch bataya tha kya unhe?
Lucifer- ha bahut kuch

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- vo humari andar ki baat hai
Tumhe nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mere bare me baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya hue thi?
Lucifer- ashmita bol rahi thi ki anisha ko apni sundarta par ghamand hai

Anisha- please lucifer batao na
Lucifer- bata to raha hu
Usse lagta hai main tumhe jada attention de raha hu
Esliye sayad jal rahi thi vo

Anisha- aur koe baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- usko lagta hai humare bich kuch chal raha hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi hai

Anisha- main ye sab nahi puch rahi
Humari jo baat hue thi uske bare me bataya kya aapne?
Lucifer- are etni baat hue fir vo naraj ho gaye
Boli main jada hot hu anisha se to maine bol diya ki prove karke dikhao to fir to dance vagra karne lag gaye aur main horny ho gaya
Uske baad ki story nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mat hi batao
Main yaha pareshan hu aapko majak suj raha hai
Lucifer- ab kya koe sach bhi nahi bol sakta?

Anisha- mujhe sirf etna batao mere bare me kuch baat hue thi ya nahi?
Lucifer- tumhre bare me hi to sari baat thi
Main yubi badnaam ho raha hu
Kara kuch nahi aur naam kharab ho raha vo alag

Anisha- kisi ne mana kiya hai kuch na karne ko?
Lucifer- hai?
Kya boli?

Anisha- ok bye
Nahi baat hue to
Aur anisha jaldi se phone kaat deti hai vahi lucifer apne chhote se dimag me abhi jo hua usko pachane aur samjhne ki kosis karne lagta hai****

Jaise hi anisha ka phone katata hai vaise hi lucifer ka phone vapas bajne lagta hai aur es baar call payal ki thi

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- main badiya
Tum batao
Payal- main bhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaise yaad kiya?
Payal- aap to karte nahi hai to mujhe hi karna pad gaya

Lucifer- main yaad karne lag gaya to fir tumhe dikkat hone lag jayegi
Payal- aur vo kaise?

Lucifer- karne lagu yaad?
Fir pata chal jayega
Payal- koe dikkat nahi hogi

Lucifer- dekhte hai fir
Payal- vo kaam acha chal gaya hai

Lucifer- achi baat hai ye to
Payal- sab aapki vajah se hua hai

Lucifer- bada dil hai mera
Payal- vo to hai hi

Lucifer- aur kya chal raha hai?
Payal- bas vohi sab

Lucifer- to fir mujhe mera reward kab milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- bata du?
Payal- ulta hi bologe

Lucifer- vo to depend karta hai samne wale par vo kaise leta hai
Payal- ye baat bhi hai

Lucifer- kuch kaam tha kya tumhe?
Payal- nahi
Main to bas thank you bolne ke liye kiya tha

Lucifer- aur kuch nahi?
Payal- aur kya?

Lucifer- tum batao aur to
Payal- khana khane chaloge bahar mere sath?

Lucifer- date par?
Payal- ha

Lucifer- chalo fir khana kya khana
Achi jagah leke chalta hu tumhe
Payal- kaha?

Lucifer- achi jagah?
Payal- ye konsi jagah hai?

Lucifer- ye ek jannat hai jaha par tum mere upar bath kar pahuch sakti ho
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- mera matlab sirf mere sath hi chal sakti ho
Main hi dikha sakta hu tumhe vo jannat
Payal- theek hai dekhte hai aapki jannat

Lucifer- okay
Main bata dungi jab free hounga
Payal- theek hai
Dhayan rakhna apna

Lucifer- tum bhi***

Lucifer- are kaisi ho meri shreya?
Yaad aa rahi thi kya meri?
Shreya- sakal dekh apni yaad aane wale ki

Lucifer- bahut sundar hai
Pata hai mujhe
Shreya- kisi ko tum jaiso ki yaad na hi aaye to better hai

Lucifer- tumhri aankhen to kuch aur hi bata rahi hai
Shreya- tumhe bahut aankhen padhna aata hai jaise

Lucifer- bahut kuch aata hai mujhe to
Shreya- sab pata hai mujhe

Lucifer- rapist ki jaan bachane wali mujhe to gyaan na hi de to acha hai
Shreya- tumne khud se story banae thi vo
Sab samjh gaye main

Lucifer- acha to ye batao aaj yaha kyu aaye?
Etna to bahut ache se samjh raha hu main ki tumhe yaha koe kaam to hoga nahi
Shreya- tahalne aae thi main to
Aur tumhe kya main kuch bhi karu kahi bhi karu

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya
Karo jo karna hai
Ek aur ladki gaye
Shreya- jada imagination world me nahi rahte tum?

Lucifer- ja na tu yaha se
Lad kisi aur se
Main tujhse duriya rakhe hue hu
Shreya- mujhe bhi koe shauk nahi hai ladne k

Lucifer- to mat lado
Bas mujhe thoda duri banaye rakh
Shreya- meri life main kisi ke bhi pass jau kisi ke bhi door jau

Lucifer- main hi chala jata hu fir
Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi shreya usse gusse bhari najaro se dekhne lagti hai....

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai....
Waiting for next update

 

[Black soul]

UPDATE-149
Raichand- ho gaya meri beti ka gussa shant?
Ashmita- konsi beti ki baat kar rahe ho aap?
Meri?
Didi ki?
Ya fir uski jisko aap bich raste me chhod kar aa gaye the

Raichand- kya bol rahi ho tum?
Ashmita- jo aap sun rahe ho
Aisa kaise kar sakte ho aap humare sath?

Raichand- mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Tum kya bol rahi ho?
Ashmita- aapne etne bure kaam kiye hai apni life me ki ab aapko aadhe to yaad bhi nahi aate

Raichand- ha maine galat kaam kiye hai lekin ab main unki vajah se pahchta raha hu
Main unhe theek karna chahta hu
Ashmita- acha?
Ek baar bhi kosis ki kya aapne?
Aur kosis to chhodiye abhi jo inaaya ke sath kiya kya vo aapke pachtatap hai?

Raichand- dekho main inaaya aur suresh ke sath bura kiya hai
Main manta hu
Main aur bhi kae zindagiya tabhah ki hai lekin main unki vajah se apni family nahi tod sakta
Tum jo bologi vo main karunga lekin mujhe chhod ke mat jana

Ashmita- aapne mere liye raste hi nahi chhode
Priyanka naam ki kisi aurat ko jante ho aap?
Raichand ne priyanka naam suna aur khamosh ho gaya
Jaise sabad uske muh me aate aate rah gaye

Ashmita- boliye
Bolte kyu nahi?
Raichand- ha janta hu

Ashmita- uski ek beti bhi hai
Jante ho aap?
Raichand- maine dekha nahi usse

Ashmita- dekhoge kaise jab janam se pehle hi bhag aaye the to
Raichand- ashu meri jaan meri baat suno

Ashmita- door raho mujhse
Kuch nahi sunana mujhe
Raichand- please ek baar meri baat to suno

Ashmita- vo aapki hi beti hai na?
Meri hi behan hai na?
Raichand- ha

Ashmita- aap kaise kar sakte ho ye?
Kaise aapne humari taraf, mom ki taraf ek baar bhi nahi dekha?
Kaise?
Raichand- tumhri mom ke jane ke baad main toot sa gaya tha aur mujhe sahare ki jarurt thi
Meri halaat samjhne ki kosis karo

Ashmita- meri mom tab jinda thi
Ye sab aapke college time ki baat hai aur us time tak mom jinda thi
Mujhe bevkoof banane ki kosis mat karo
Raichand- mujhse galti ho gaye beta

Ashmita- har ek galti ki ek saja hoti hai na?
Aapne hi sikhaya hai mujhe
Raichand- mujhe har saja manjur hai

Ashmita- meri najro ke samne mat aana kabhi jaan le lungi main aapki
Aur ashmita mud kar vaha se vapas chali gaye

Piche se raichand ne bahut kosis ki lekin vo bhi ashmita ke gusse se bahut ache se vakif tha

Usse pata tha es waqt ashmita ko rokna namumkeen hai
Ya to vo khud hurt ho jayegi ya fir dusre log hurt honge aur dusre logo ke hurt hone ke chances bahut jada dikh rahe the

Ashmita gusse me bahar aaye aur apni car leke vaha se chali gaye****

Anisha- hello
Lucifer- ha bolo

Anisha- main kab se call kar rahi hu
Ek baar utha kar batana to chahiye ki busy hu?
Lucifer- jab insaan ko uske phone par call aane ka pata hi na chale to vo kaise bataye?

Anisha- vo ashmita ma'am nahi aaye aaj office
Lucifer- to?

Anisha- aapne kuch bataya tha kya unhe?
Lucifer- ha bahut kuch

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- vo humari andar ki baat hai
Tumhe nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mere bare me baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya hue thi?
Lucifer- ashmita bol rahi thi ki anisha ko apni sundarta par ghamand hai

Anisha- please lucifer batao na
Lucifer- bata to raha hu
Usse lagta hai main tumhe jada attention de raha hu
Esliye sayad jal rahi thi vo

Anisha- aur koe baat hue thi kya?
Lucifer- ha

Anisha- kya?
Lucifer- usko lagta hai humare bich kuch chal raha hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi hai

Anisha- main ye sab nahi puch rahi
Humari jo baat hue thi uske bare me bataya kya aapne?
Lucifer- are etni baat hue fir vo naraj ho gaye
Boli main jada hot hu anisha se to maine bol diya ki prove karke dikhao to fir to dance vagra karne lag gaye aur main horny ho gaya
Uske baad ki story nahi bata sakta

Anisha- mat hi batao
Main yaha pareshan hu aapko majak suj raha hai
Lucifer- ab kya koe sach bhi nahi bol sakta?

Anisha- mujhe sirf etna batao mere bare me kuch baat hue thi ya nahi?
Lucifer- tumhre bare me hi to sari baat thi
Main yubi badnaam ho raha hu
Kara kuch nahi aur naam kharab ho raha vo alag

Anisha- kisi ne mana kiya hai kuch na karne ko?
Lucifer- hai?
Kya boli?

Anisha- ok bye
Nahi baat hue to
Aur anisha jaldi se phone kaat deti hai vahi lucifer apne chhote se dimag me abhi jo hua usko pachane aur samjhne ki kosis karne lagta hai****

Jaise hi anisha ka phone katata hai vaise hi lucifer ka phone vapas bajne lagta hai aur es baar call payal ki thi

Lucifer- hello
Payal- hie
Kaise ho?

Lucifer- main badiya
Tum batao
Payal- main bhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaise yaad kiya?
Payal- aap to karte nahi hai to mujhe hi karna pad gaya

Lucifer- main yaad karne lag gaya to fir tumhe dikkat hone lag jayegi
Payal- aur vo kaise?

Lucifer- karne lagu yaad?
Fir pata chal jayega
Payal- koe dikkat nahi hogi

Lucifer- dekhte hai fir
Payal- vo kaam acha chal gaya hai

Lucifer- achi baat hai ye to
Payal- sab aapki vajah se hua hai

Lucifer- bada dil hai mera
Payal- vo to hai hi

Lucifer- aur kya chal raha hai?
Payal- bas vohi sab

Lucifer- to fir mujhe mera reward kab milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- bata du?
Payal- ulta hi bologe

Lucifer- vo to depend karta hai samne wale par vo kaise leta hai
Payal- ye baat bhi hai

Lucifer- kuch kaam tha kya tumhe?
Payal- nahi
Main to bas thank you bolne ke liye kiya tha

Lucifer- aur kuch nahi?
Payal- aur kya?

Lucifer- tum batao aur to
Payal- khana khane chaloge bahar mere sath?

Lucifer- date par?
Payal- ha

Lucifer- chalo fir khana kya khana
Achi jagah leke chalta hu tumhe
Payal- kaha?

Lucifer- achi jagah?
Payal- ye konsi jagah hai?

Lucifer- ye ek jannat hai jaha par tum mere upar bath kar pahuch sakti ho
Payal- kya?

Lucifer- mera matlab sirf mere sath hi chal sakti ho
Main hi dikha sakta hu tumhe vo jannat
Payal- theek hai dekhte hai aapki jannat

Lucifer- okay
Main bata dungi jab free hounga
Payal- theek hai
Dhayan rakhna apna

Lucifer- tum bhi***

Lucifer- are kaisi ho meri shreya?
Yaad aa rahi thi kya meri?
Shreya- sakal dekh apni yaad aane wale ki

Lucifer- bahut sundar hai
Pata hai mujhe
Shreya- kisi ko tum jaiso ki yaad na hi aaye to better hai

Lucifer- tumhri aankhen to kuch aur hi bata rahi hai
Shreya- tumhe bahut aankhen padhna aata hai jaise

Lucifer- bahut kuch aata hai mujhe to
Shreya- sab pata hai mujhe

Lucifer- rapist ki jaan bachane wali mujhe to gyaan na hi de to acha hai
Shreya- tumne khud se story banae thi vo
Sab samjh gaye main

Lucifer- acha to ye batao aaj yaha kyu aaye?
Etna to bahut ache se samjh raha hu main ki tumhe yaha koe kaam to hoga nahi
Shreya- tahalne aae thi main to
Aur tumhe kya main kuch bhi karu kahi bhi karu

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya
Karo jo karna hai
Ek aur ladki gaye
Shreya- jada imagination world me nahi rahte tum?

Lucifer- ja na tu yaha se
Lad kisi aur se
Main tujhse duriya rakhe hue hu
Shreya- mujhe bhi koe shauk nahi hai ladne k

Lucifer- to mat lado
Bas mujhe thoda duri banaye rakh
Shreya- meri life main kisi ke bhi pass jau kisi ke bhi door jau

Lucifer- main hi chala jata hu fir
Aur lucifer vaha se uth kar chala jata hai vahi shreya usse gusse bhari najaro se dekhne lagti hai....

Gajab update bhaya

 

[Black soul]

Ashmita ki manodasha samjhi jaa sakti hai... Uski zindagi mein khushiyan shayad kabhi thehri hi nahi hain... Pehle Inaaya, fir Arjun, aur ab Anisha.. Lucifer bhi kabhi na kabhi chala hi jaayega, is baat ko bhi Ashmita achhe se jaanti hai... Aur dekha jaaye to Lucifer ke alawa baaki sab cheezon ka zimmedar sirf aur sirf Ashmita ka apna hi baap hai, Lucifer se bhi jo itne din door rahi wo, uska kaaran bhi Raichand hi tha... Kabhi na kabhi to Ashmita ka gussa baahar aana hi tha & I think ki Anisha waali baat sach mein bohot badi thi, jise bardaasht kar paane mein Ashmita saksham nahi thi... Aur isiliye finally uska gussa foota hai Raichand par, and I think ki future mein Ashmita ko aur bhi mauke milne waale hain aisa karne ke...

Raichand ne rona dhona to kiya hai... Kahin na kahin shuruat se laga bhi hai ki aur kuchh nahi to kam se kam Ashmita aur Tara se to pyaar karta hi hai Raichand, especially Ashmita se... Is update ko bhi padhkar aisa hi laga parantu jaisa insaan Raichand hai, koyi shanka nahi is baat mein ki aage chalkar wo Ashmita ko bhi darkinar kar sakta hai, jaise baaki sabhi ko karte aaya hai... Parantu dekhna ye hai ki, kya Lucifer is baar bhi koyi saza dega Raichand ko..? Anisha kya chahti hai ye sabse important hai, Ashmita aur Tara ke saamne sab sach aan ahi Anisha ke liye kaafi hai, ya fir Raichand ki tudaayi ek baar fir honi hai..?

Beharhal, ek aur baat saamne aa gayi ki Anisha cares for Ashmita... Dekhkar achha laga ki Ashmita ki absence mein Anisha kis tarah pareshan ho gayi... Usne Lucifer se baat ki parantu Lucifer ne use kuchh bhi nahi bataya, I think he wants Ashmita to talk with Anisha... Wo nahi chahta ki wo apni kisi bhi tarah ki input dono behno ke beech mein de, and this is the correct thing to do here... Ashmita apne baap ko prasad dene ke baad ab Anisha se hi milegi par jaisa ki maine kaha, sabse important sawaal yahi hai ki Anisha kya chahti hai, beshak wo Ashmita ki parvah karti hai, but I'm doubtful whether she'll stay with Ashmita or not...

Idhar, Inaaya bhi pareshan hai Ashmita ke liye, waise Ashmita ne jo Lucifer ke jaane ke baare mein kaha, wo bhi jhatka raha hoga Inaaya ke liye... Uski situation bhi koyi bohot achhi nahi hai, wo achhe se jaanti hai ki kabhi bhi uski khushiyon par grahan lag sakta hai, let's see how she'll handle herself after Lucifer dies... Well, yahi sabse interesting question hai kahani ka, Lucifer to mukt ho jaayega mrityu paakar, par uske pichhe in sabka kya? Maadhuri aur Lucifer mein yadi kuchh hota hai, aage chalkar, to bhi shayad Maadhuri Lucifer ke jaane ke baad sambhal jaaye, kyonki uske paas ek maksad hai apne bachon ke roop mein... Lekin Ashmita, Inaaya, Anisha (she has feelings for Lucifer,no?), Payal, and possibly Annika & Tara too, a mass – suicide in the making..?

Payal ne saamne se date par jaane ko kaha hai Lucifer ko, I think jaldi hi dono ke beech feelings ki baadh aane waali hai, jismein Payal ka beh jaana tay ho chuka hai... Wahin Anisha ne bhi jo dwiarthi baat kahi, wo bhi kisi aur hi taraf ishaara karti hai... Saar yahi hai in do updates ka ki do aur maasoom ladkiyan Lucifer ke moh jaal mein fanskar apni zindagi dukhon ke naam kar chuki hain... Well, waiting for Payal & Lucifer's next meeting...

Idhar past scenes mein pehla usi Baba ka tha jo Mitika ko Lucifer ke bhavishya ke baare mein bataya karte the... Unse milne gaya tha Lucifer, aur unki baatein shayad isi taraf ishaara kar rahi thi jo aaj present mein ho raha hai... Jaisa ki unhone kaha hi tha, bilkul waise hi Lucifer mein changes aa rahe hain... Parantu, unki doosri baat par agar dhyan diya jaaye to shayad abhi aur bhi bohot si laashein bichhani hongi Lucifer ko... Dekhte hain ye silsila kahaan jaakar rukega! Wahin doosre scene mein Shreya aur Lucifer ki nok – jhonk thi, saaf hai ki kis tarah ladayi ke bahaane hi wo Lucifer se baat karne ki koshish karti hogi...

Both the Updates were quite enthralling... Abhi emotional scenes ki bahaar aayi huyi hai kahani mein joki shayad kuchh aur updates tak chalne waali hai... Btw. kahin na kahin aisa lag raha hai ki Lucifer par jald hi koyi khatra mandrane waala hai, bohot samay se koyi potent danger to nahi hi aaya hai Lucifer par, itne din tak uski life normal rahe, aakhir ye possible kaise hai..?

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Yaha par kya 2-2 stories chal Rahi hai Kya bhaya

 

[Black soul]

Waiting for next