Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[spritemathews]

Come on bro story is really good which is running between past and present. Lucifer past is hidden which is suspicious

 

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[Rajesh]

UPDATE-104
Lucifer- ab theek ho tum?
Inaaya- ha abhi theek hu

Lucifer- kaha ja rahi ho?
Inaaya- office
Bahut kaam pending pada hoga

Lucifer- hmm theek hai
Inaaya- tum kya karoge?

Lucifer- main bhi office chala jata hu
Inaaya- tum ne bataya nahi ki kya kiya suresh uncle ke sath tum ne?

Lucifer- have a nice day
Inaaya- jaan ke to main rahungi hi
Aur lucifer ko ek kiss karke vo office nikal jati hai

Lucifer bhi ashmita ke office pahuch jata hai jaha aaj bhi ashmita nahi aaye thi

Usse pata tha Ashmita kyu nahi aa rahi hai esliye es bare me jada nahi socha aur anisha ki help se sare kaam time se karane laga

Lunch time me payal ki call aagaye to anisha ko bol kar vaha se payal ke pass chala gaya

Lucifer- kya chal raha hai?
Hue kuch sells?
Payal- Starting ke hisab se to theek hi hai

Lucifer- batao fir kya karna hai?
Payal- kuch nahi

Lucifer- to fir bulaya kyu?
Payal- aapne etne help ki to thank you bolne ke liye

Lucifer- ye to tum phone par bhi bol sakti thi?
Payal- I'm sorry
Mujhe laga free ho aap

Lucifer- free to main humesha rahta hu sunder ladkiyo ke liye
Payal- humare sath dinner karoge?

Lucifer- humare?
Payal- ha humare
Mere mom dad to hai nahi to orphanage ke old age log hi mera parivaar hai
Vo chahte the ki aap unke sath dinner karo

Lucifer- badle me mujhe kya milega?
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- soch kar bataunga lekin baad me tum mana nahi kar sakti
Agar mana karna hai to abhi kar do
Payal- nahi karungi mana

Lucifer- then dinner it is
Kis time?
Payal- abhi chalte hai
Pahuchte Pahuchte time ho jayega

Lucifer- ye to mere nashe karne ka time hai
Es time kon dinner karta hai?
Payal- hum karte hai
Actually bahut old people hai esliye sab kuch time se kar lete hai

Lucifer- theek hai fir
Ek din sah lunga thoda sa
Payal- life gyan milta hai un se

Lucifer- tumhe lagta hai mujhe aise gyan ki jarurat hai?
Payal- jarurat to sab ko hi hoti hai
Kya pata aapko jo chahiye vo bhi mil jaye vaha

Lucifer- mujhe jo chahiye vo kahi nahi mil sakta
Payal- kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- mukti
Payal- kis chijj se?

Lucifer- tum nahi samjhogi
Chalo chalte hai
Aur lucifer bahar ki taraf ho liya aur payal uske piche piche

Payal- dard bhi chupa lo hasta chehra dikha kar
Lucifer- dard nahi hai
Bas dukh hai ki jo ho raha hai uska karan nahi jaan pa raha hu

Payal- hume sab chhije ke jawab pata hota hai lucifer
Bas apne ander jhakne ki jarurat hoti hai
Lucifer- pata nahi kitni baar aur kitno se same chhij sun chuka hu
Ab main pareshan ho gaya hu en sab se

Payal- kya pata tumne theek se dekha nahi ho
Lucifer- to tum bata do kaise dekhu?
Na na tum batao hi mujhe?
Main na pagal huve ja raha hu
Mera mujh par control nahi raha ab bilkul
Mera sar aisa rahta hai jaise abhi ke abhi fat jayega
Aur agar aisa hua na to vo najara dekhne ko milega jo tum ne apne sabse bure sapne me bhi nahi dekha hoga
Mera janwar jaag gaya hai aur ab vo kisi ko nahi chodega
Esliye mujhe faltu ka gyan mat diya karo
Mera dimag kharab rahta hai aajkal
Kuch bhi ho jayega Mere hatho aur tum saanvi nahi ho ki main tumhre samne shant ho jau
Esliye agar main kuch nahi bol raha to chhup raho
Lucifer etne gusse me bola ki payal bahut buri tarah ghabra gaye
Vo to bechari bas lucifer ki help karne ki soch rahi thi aur yaha to lucifer ne uski hi class laga di

Vaise dekha jaye to yaha na payal ki galti thi aur na lucifer ki
Payal ek nekdil ladki jo sabki help karna hi sab kuch samjhti thi vo Lucifer ki bhi bas help hi karna chahti thi vahi lucifer pichle kuch dino se vaise hi pareshan chal raha tha
Vo inaaya ke samne to besak apne aapko control kar leta tha lekin bahar uska dimag phatne ko tayar rahta tha
Uska sar dard bhadta hi ja raha tha aur uska chehra kabhi bhi badal jata tha

En sab chhijo se vo alag pareshan tha aur ashmita
Ashmita ke sath chahe usne kuch bhi kiya ho lekin lucifer ko us chhij ka effect bahut bura pada tha
Vo uske bare me kisi se baat nahi karta tha lekin humesha sochta jarur rahta tha

Aur usse kuch yaad ho ya na ho vo apne experience se etna to samjh hi chuka tha ki ab kuch bahut bada aur bahut bura hone wala hai
Esliye us chhij ka alag stress tha usse

Payal- I'm sorry
Mera maksad tumhe dukh pahuchane ka nahi tha
Lucifer apna sar pakad ke behanchod
I'm not good payal aur esliye main bahut gussa karne laga hu
Sala kuch samjh to aa nahi raha bas kabhi yaha bhago kabhi vaha aur jawab kuch milta nahi hai
Esliye pareshan hu
Hope you will not mind

Payal- I won't
Agar tum theek nahi ho to ghar chale jao thoda relax kar lena
Dinner fir kabhi kar lenge
Lucifer- nahi nahi chalte hai
Future me chhije bas bigdegi hi aur kuch nahi

Aur dono vaha se chale gaye

Vo jab payal ke orphanage home pahuche to vaha arohi aur baki sab ne sab kuch pehle se hi ready kar rakha tha
Vo bas un dono ka hi wait kar rahe the
Aur unhe dekh kar bade pyaar se sab ne lucifer ka welcome kiya
Lucifer vaise to etne pyaar ka aadi nahi tha lekin fir bhi usne vaha kisi ko offend nahi kiya
Vo theek tarike se hi mila vaha sab se

Fir sab khana khane ke liye bath gaye

Aunty- beta tumhra bahut sukriya humari madad karne ke liye
Aap jaiso ki vajah se hi hume rahne aur khane ki kabhi kami nahi padi
Lucifer- amma maine kuch nahi kiya
Sab kuch aapke aur payal ki mahnat hai
Samne wala to bas rasta dikha sakta hai chalna to khud ko hi hota hai

Uncle- ye baat to tumhri sahi hai lekin aajkal ke waqt me rasta dikhata bhi to koe nahi hai na beta
Lucifer- chinta mat karo uncle payal jaise insaan abhi mojud hai

Aunty- aur tumhre jaise bhi
Lucifer- Mera jaisa koe nahi hai aur dua karo koe aisa aae bhi na
Ussi me dunia ki bhalae hai

Aunty- yaad maine kaha tha sab theek ho jayega?
Kabhi apne aap se haar mat manana?
Lucifer- yaad hai amma

Aunty- to sab theek ho jayega beta
Vo sab theek kar dega
Lucifer- VO SAB THEEK KAR DEGA?
Sahi kaha aapne vo sab theek kar hi denge

Uncle- nasteek ho beta?
Lucifer- kuch bhi samjh lo Uncle

Aunty- kisi par yakeen rakho ya nahi lekin kabhi khud par se viswas mat tootne dena
Aakhir tak tumhre sath jo khada hoga vo tum hi honge beta
Lucifer- sahi kah rahe ho amma

Arohi- bas karo maa ab unko khana bhi kha lene do
Kahi vo dobara yaha aaye hi na?
Aunty- tum bachi hai tu nahi samjhegi

Arohi- main badi ho gaye hu ab
Ab koe kuch nahi bolega aur khana khayega
Ha agar kisi ko khane ki tareef karni hai to bejhijak kar sakta hai

Payal- tu bhi chhup hoja drama queen
Arohi- aapko kaisa laga khana?

Lucifer- kisne banaya hai?
Arohi- maine banaya hai

Lucifer- theek hai
Arohi- bas theek??

Lucifer- I mean theek hi hai
Namak thoda jada hai lekin theek hai
Greavy thodi pani jaisi hai lekin theek hai
Roti thodi tight hai lekin theek hai
Aur sabji thodi jali hue hai lekin theek hai

Lucifer ke aise bolne se arohi ne muh bana liya aur baki sab has diye
Aise hi unhone khana khaya aur fir lucifer vaha se nikal gaya***

Past

Lucifer chhilam hath me lekar yaha vaha bhatak raha tha aur bahut nashe me bhi tha ki vo kisi se takra gaya samne dekha to Shreya tha

Lucifer- Haye re meri kismat
Shreya- dekh ke to tum se chala nahi jata aur kya pata sunder ladki dekh kar janbujh kar andha hone ki acting karta hai

Lucifer- ha sunder ladki dekh kar karta to aisa hi hu lekin yaha sunder ladki hai kaha?
Shreya- mujhe tumhre muh lagna hi nahi hai

Lucifer- aur main to jaise mara hi ja raha hu tumhre muh lagne ke liye?
Mujhe gande naale me muh marne ka koe shok nahi hai
Shreya- you.....

Lucifer- you you you mat kiya kar mere samne
Ek to takra jao sareef insaan se aur fir us par hi chaddae kar do
Shreya- sareef insaan?
Tum?
My foot

Lucifer- tere ghar me koe problem chal rahi hai kya?
Kyu humesha ladti rahti hai mere sath?
Shreya- kyu aate ho tum mere samne?

Lucifer- ladki pyaar ho jayega Mere se nahi to door raha karo
Shreya- pyaar?
Tum se?
Etni buri kismat nahi hai meri

Lucifer- mujh se mil li na tum
Ab kismat buri honi suru ho gaye hai
Shreya- agar kabhi maine tumhe bol diya ki main tumse pyaar karti hu to tumhra jo man kare vo kar dena mere sath main tumhe bilkul nahi rokungi

Lucifer- matlab ladoo futne suru ho gaye abhi se?
Shreya- ladoo tumhre naam se?
Lucifer agar jindagi me devil aur tum me se choose karna pada to main bina soche samjhe devil choose kar lungi

Lucifer- hahahahaha
Shreya- kyu has rahe ho?

Lucifer- main hi devil hu
Shreya- mera matlab kahavat se tha

Lucifer- matlab maine nikal liya hai tum mujhe pasand karti ho aur ab bas taange failane ki deri hai
Shreya- fuck off

Lucifer- fuck you
Shreya- huuu aur Shreya muh banate hue chali gaye vaha se****

Lucifer hell me batha hua tha aur bahut jada nashe kar rakhe the ki samne ka gate khula aur Maya nikal ke aaye

Lucifer ek aankh khol kar
Are tum gaye nahi abhi tak?
Chali jao na yaha se mujhe acha lagega
Maya- jab tak tumhe theek raste par na la du tab tak main nahi jaungi

Lucifer- matlab kabhi nahi jaoge?
Aisa mat karo yaar?
Dekho yaha sab demons hai aur tum angel aur vo bhi bahut sunder wali
Kahi aisa na ho ki main kuch uch nich kar du
Aakhir ek insaan kab tak apne aap ko control me rakh payega?
Maya- mujhe tumhri yehi thinking to change karni hai

Lucifer- mujhe change karte karte khud change mat ho jana
Vaisa humari Jodi etni buri bhi nahi lagegi
Maya- mujhe jo souls aa rahi hai unhe padhane ki permission chahiye

Lucifer- vo to nahi mil sakti
Maya- kyu nahi mil sakti?

Lucifer- kyuki Mazikeen unhe bahut ache tarike se padha rahi hai aur kisi teacher ki jarurat nahi hume
Maya- unhe tourcher karke sahi nahi kiya ja sakta, sahi rasta dikha kar hi kiya ja sakta hai

Lucifer- apni philosophy apne pass kyu nahi rakhte?
Unhe kaise theek karna hai vo mujhe pata hai
Mera bistar khali hai usse garam karna ho to batao nahi to ja sakti ho

Maya- main Supreme se permission leke aaungi fir
Lucifer- le aao
Main usse bhi reject kar dunga
Yaha mera raaj hai
Jo main chahunga vo hi hoga fir samne tum khadi ho ya fir Supreme
Ab agar bistar par chalna hai to chalo nahi to dafa ho jao meri najro ke samne se....

nice update bro

 

[Rajesh]

UPDATE-105
Lucifer ashmita ke cabin me batha batha sabko kaam samjha raha tha ki cabin ka gate khula aur ashmita under enter hue

Black one piece dress me vo bahut katilnayak lag rahi thi aur aaj uske chehre par vohi gussa tha jo lucifer ke milne se pehle rahta tha

Vo jaise hi ander aaye sab sidhe khade ho kar usse morning wish karne lage aur lucifer jaha tha vahi batha raha
Usne kuch bhi karne ki koe kosis nahi ki

Ashmita- anisha where is that design?
Tum ne bejha clients ko?
Anisha- sorry Ma'am kal time nahi mila
Abhi bejh deti hu

Ashmita- kal kaha pahad tood rahi thi tum?
Office me hi thi ya office time me apne boyfriend se milne chali gaye thi?
Anisha- I'm sorry Ma'am

Ashmita- Roy 4 din tumse ek ppt tayar nahi hue abhi tak?
Roy- Ma'am kuch issue aa rahe the
Main kafi baar try kar chuka hu

Ashmita- mujhe excuse nahi sun ne hai kaam dekhna hai
Aur tum vo project file ka kya hua?
Ladka- Ma'am vo...

Ashmita- hua ya nahi ye batao bas
Ladka- nahi Ma'am

Ashmita- agar aaj shayam tak mujhe sare kaam complete nahi mile to koe aur job doond lena apne liye
I'm sure tum me se kuch ne to pehle hi doond li hogi( anisha ko dekh kar)

Ashmita- ab mera muh kya dekh rahe ho?
Get the hell out of my office
Aur sab vaha se bhag gaye

Lucifer- you looking hot
Ashmita- lucifer tum bhi ja sakte ho

Lucifer- main kaha jau?
Main to yahi rahta tha na
Ashmita- ab se nahi rahoge

Lucifer- tujhe apna promise yaad nahi hai kya?
Ashmita- sab kuch yaad hai esliye hi laat maar kar nahi bhaga rahi hi

Lucifer- tu bhaga sakti hai
Main chala jaunga bina kuch bole
Ashmita- chala ja fir

Lucifer- theek hai
Aur lucifer apni chair se khada hua aur bahar ki taraf chala gaya

Uske jate hi ashmita ke jo aashu usko dekh kar aaye the vo girne lage aur vo rote hue bathroom me bhag gaye

Bahut der tak vo vaha roti rahi aur jab aashu aane band ho gaye to apna face saaf karke pehle wale attitude me hi aakar vapas apna kaam karne lagi

Lucifer vaha se nikal fir kuch yaad aaya to vapas ashmita ke cabin me chala gaya

Agar vo jaldi aajata to ashmita ko rote hue bhi dekh leta thoda time laga diya usse aane me

Ashmita- ab kya?
Lucifer- tumhri car ki keys dene aaya tha
Ab kya hi matlab enhe apne pass rakhne ka

Ashmita ke baap ke sath usne chahe kuch bhi kiya ho lekin ashmita pyaar us se abhi bhi utna hi karti thi aur jaise hi lucifer ne keys ashmita ke samne wali table par rakhi uska dil fir se rone laga aur ab vo vapas lucifer ke Jane ka wait karne lagi

Lucifer- Rone se problem theek nahi hoti
Vo hume aur kamjor bana dete hai esliye strong ban ki mere jaise 1000 bhi aakar chale jaye to tujhe fark na pade
Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur ashmita vapas se rone lag gaye

Uske baap ne sab chhod diya tha
Usse laga tha ki lucifer ki vajah se sayad inaaya bhi us se thodi bahut bolne lag jaye ya fir kabhi kabhi mulakat to ho hi jayegi lekin ab aisa kuch nahi ho sakta

Lucifer bhi bahut door chala gaya tha aur inaaya bhi
Ab vo firse akeli ho gaye thi jaise lucifer humesha raha tha bilkul vaise hi bas Tara thi uske pass aur kuch nahi

Lucifer office se bahar nikla aur naag ke farmhouse chala gaya
Vaha aaj sirf naag hi tha aur koe nahi

Lucifer- baki sab kaha gaye?
Naag- maine pure sehar me laga diye

Lucifer- kyu?
Naag- bhai abhi suresh ko pela aur vo malik bhi bacha hua hai aur pata nahi kab konsi musibat aajaye
Esliye pehle se prepare hona better hai na

Lucifer- aur koe ander se tujhe pel ke chala gaya to?
Naag- uske liye aap ho to?
Aapne hi bola tha trade kar loge meri life ko aap

Lucifer- aisi chhije bahut yaad rahti hai tujhe?
Aur behanchod main etne dino se bol raha hu arjun ke bare me pata kar de vo tujhe yaad nahi hogi?
Hai na?
Naag- bhai uske bare me kuch nahi pata chal paya
Maine gand tak ka jor laga liya

Lucifer- jor hi lagaya hai na?
Gand marae to nahi na
Naag- mara bhi lenge agar kuch pata chale to

Lucifer- mara lenge nahi mara lega tu
Bc mujhe kyu lapet raha hai?
Naag- aaj aap din me hi aagaye?

Lucifer- tujhe koe dikkat hai?
Naag- mujhe kya dikkat hogi?

Lucifer- to fir puch kyu raha hai?
Madhuri ma'am yaad hai tujhe?
Naag- ha hai na bhai

Lucifer- unke pati ke bare me pata kar
Dekh kaha rahta hai aur kya karta hai
Uski kamjori kya hai aur kitni bhasad machae hue hai usne
Sab mujhe proof ke sath chahiye
Naag- kya naam hai uska?

Lucifer- yaad nahi hai
Tu dund le
Naag- thokna bhi hai kya?

Lucifer- abhi nahi
Pehle ma'am ko unka beta mile fir thokenge aur vo bhi tarike se
Naag- main karta hu pata

Lucifer- jaldi karna
Mansi kaha hai?
Naag- uske ghar

Lucifer- vaha kya kar rahi hai?
Naag- bhai ghar hai uska

Lucifer- to?
Tu kya tab tak muthiya marega?
Naag- har chhij sex thodi hoti hai bhai

Lucifer- sab kuch sex hi hota hai
Naag- uske mumma papa aagaye the to vo vapas chali gaye

Lucifer- theek hai
Main chalta hu ab
Naag- ruk jao bhai
Saraab peete hai

Lucifer- kyu tere baap ki shadi hai?
Naag- aap peene ke liye reason dund rahe ho?

Lucifer- mujhe bahut kaam hai
Tu bhi apna kaam kar aur ab mujhe jaldi jaldi result chahiye nahi to teri gand ke sath bahut bura wala khelunga main
Naag- jee bhai****

Past

Guruji- hum kyu kar rahe hai aisa?
Supreme- kyuki unhe apno se bhichdane ka dard maloom hona chahiye

Guruji- us se koe fayda to hoga nahi
Supreme- hoga fayda jarur hoga

Guruji- kaise?
Supreme- vo maine soch liya hai

Guruji- kya kare fir?
Supreme- dikhao reality aur kya?
Kuch bhi over nahi hona chahiye jindagi me
Sab kuch ek limit me karo

Guruji- main samjha nahi
Supreme- samjhoge bhi nahi

Guruji- hum ne lucifer ke sath pehle hi bahut galat kiya hai aur ab ye sab?
Supreme- yehi chahti thi simran
Maine usko bola tha anjaam lekin vo mani nahi

Guruji- lekin ab kyu kar rahe hai?
Supreme- middle phase chhota rakhna hai mujhe
Vaise bhi logo ko lucifer ke bare me pata to chal hi gaya hai

Guruji- vo enough nahi hai
Uske pass abhi bhi bahut sympathy hai
Supreme- kyuki uske jaise log bhi dunia me banaye gaye hai esliye
Lekin masses me vo sab pahuch gaya hai jo hume pahuchana tha
Esliye ab aur der nahi karni chahiye

Guruji- aur vo khooni holi?
Uska kya?
Supreme- jisko jo milna chahiye vohi milega
Esme main ya aap koe kuch nahi kar sakte

Guruji- aapko nahi lagta ye sab bachhiya hi hai?
Supreme- humare hisab se to sab bachiya hi hai
Aap us bare me mat sochiye
Main dekh lunga unko

Guruji- mujhe unka dar nahi hai
Dar hai lucifer ka
Usse jab sab pata chalega to usse rokna na mumkeen ho jayega aur hum sab jante hai vo kya halaat karega uske baad
Agar usse sab yaad aagya to fir dunia ko nast karne se bhi piche nahi hatega vo

Supreme- mujhe pata hai
Esliye abhi uske bare me kuch nahi karna
Jo waqt bacha hua hai uske sath khelne dijiye usse
Fir sab theek ho jayega
Guruji- mujhe to aisa lagta hai ki jo waqt bacha hai usme vo humare sath khelega

Supreme- lucifer muskile to paida karega esme koe doubt nahi hai
Lekin esme hum kuch kar bhi nahi sakte
Jis daldal me vo hai usme vo karega hi
Esliye eske bare me jada mat socho
Guruji- kitni masoom jane jayegi?

Supreme- jaisa ki maine pehle bhi bola hai jiske sath jo hona hai vo ho kar rahega
Guruji- matlab hum hath par hath rakhe bathe rahe?

Supreme- maine sab soch rakha hai
Abhi usko bejh do
Guruji- jaisi aapki marji***

Eda- kavish lucifer kaha hai?
Kavish- mujhe kya pata
Aur tumhe kya matlab?

Eda- kuch kaam tha
Kavish- ha ha kuch kaam hi hoga
Tum konsa usse pyaar karti ho jo bina kaam ke uske pass jaogi?

Eda- tum mujhse aise kyu baat kar rahe ho?
Kavish- kyuki yaha par bas eda hai aur lucifer
Baki koe hai kya yaha?
Agar hai bhi to koe importance hai uski?
Mujhe to nahi lagta
Tumhe aisa lagta hai kya?

Eda- tum kya soch rahe ho?
Maine to lucifer se jada tumhre sath time gujara hai na?
Kavish- are ha main to bhul hi gaya tha
Hum dono ne to bahut acha time spend kiya hai na?

Eda- tumhe ho kya gaya hai kavish?
Kavish- aakhiri baar tum kab aaye thi mujhse milne?

Eda- hum bade ho gaye hai ab
Bahut sare kaam hote hai life me
Kavish- sahi kaha bahut sare kaam hote hai
Karo tum apna kaam aur main apna karta hu

Eda- tum kuch galat karne ki to nahi soch rahe ho na?
Kavish- kiya to tum aur lucifer ho hi mujhe marne ke liye
Dunia ke do sabse shaktishali angels

Eda- maine koe galti ki hai kya?
Mujhe tumhra aisa behavior acha nahi lag raha
Kavish- tum kab hi galti kar sakti ho?
Tum to sabse samjhdar ho

Eda- mujhe nahi pata tumhe kya ho gaya hai lekin agar tumhe kabhi kuch bhi baat karni ho to yaad rakhna main hu tumhre liye
Kavish- mujhe meri maut par milna eda

Eda- tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?
Kavish- mujhse ek wada karoge?

Eda- pehle mujhe batao tumhe hua kya hai?
Kavish- pehle mujhse ek vada karo

Eda- nahi pehle tum mujhe batao
Kavish- rahne do fir

Eda- theek hai main vada karti hu
Ab batao
Kavish- meri maut ke baad yaad rakhna ki kavish naam ka bhi koe tha tumhri life me

Eda- main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Mujhe batao kya problem hai?
Kavish- koe problem nahi hai
Main lucifer ke hatho nahi marna chahta esliye jab kabhi aisi naubat aaye to mujhe lucifer se pehle tum maar dena
Ye vada chahta hu main tumse

Eda- tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- jo ho gaya vo ho gaya
Kya tum apna vada nibhaogi?

Eda- main lucifer se baat karungi please mujhe batao tumne kya kiya?
Kavish- lucifer se baat karne ka koe matlab nahi banta
Vo kisi ki baat sunta hai kya?
Aur tumhri to bilkul nahi sunega

Eda- main Supreme se baat karungi
Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi
Please mujhe batao kavish tumne kya kiya
Kavish- vada kar rahi ho ya nahi tum?

Eda- jab tak tum mujhe sach nahi bata dete main tumse koe vada nahi karungi
Kavish- theek hai fir tum apni aankhon se dekhna kaise marta hu main ek dardnaak maut lucifer ke hatho....

Super update bro

 

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[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Lone survivor]

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[Sexy@123456]

Are nhi bhai

 

[Froog]

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Lone survivor भाई आपका यह कहना गलत है कि कोई रीडर नहीं है​

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[Mana6262]

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